Comments on community poems by smallest_stars
- The Girl (DeviLove)
I love this poem. The tension of it is palpable and quite relatable too....
February 7th, 2020 09:54
- Thoughts & Dreams (Markziff)
You can really feel the emptiness by the last stanza. Good job evoking...
February 4th, 2020 16:24
- smile back draft 5 (Noah Malice)
\"The beacon of light
flashed from his face,
fragmenting the...
February 4th, 2020 14:19
- A Big Hallucination (Noah Malice)
I like this part best..
\"I see you hide as well in her
Clever...
January 6th, 2019 12:44
- Glass Heart (Noah Malice)
I hope the glass heart drops in good answers. Loved this heart felt poem.
August 13th, 2018 13:00
- peace (Dusk arising)
What a lovely and moving poem.
August 1st, 2018 07:32
- His Letter To Her (Usedinkpoetry)
I love this poem. Partly because I relate to the \"You\" in this and also...
June 26th, 2018 16:00
- The Picture I Can\'t Paint (Edthepoet)
I enjoyed this poem. It was thought provoking, especially the last stanza....
June 21st, 2018 20:09
- Ice Cream With Alice (Noah Malice)
What a delightful and charming little poem you\'ve written here, Noah....
June 19th, 2018 12:13
- Written In The Stars (Noah Malice)
I just read your comment. Haha Very funny.
I love the meter in this...
June 17th, 2018 18:14
- Played like a Violin(edited) (CuriousSoul)
I approve this lol.
It was a good poem to begin with. I especially...
June 16th, 2018 22:44
- is there anybody out there (Willyweed)
I enjoy this poem or maybe it\'s more of a prayer. It\'s encouraging. By...
June 15th, 2018 10:31
- Depression and Fidelity (PACollin)
At first I thought it was a literal story about a plane crash, but got to...
June 15th, 2018 08:07
- Nobody (Frogspoetry)
Such a relatable piece, with that head down to life kind of attitude. I...
June 13th, 2018 08:50
- Dear Charlotte Mae (Noah Malice)
It\'s a sweet poem. Thanks for caring about my poetry and about me as...
June 12th, 2018 23:57
- Never smile again (Jo Middleton)
Just a beautiful way to describe pain from love and I love this...
April 8th, 2018 18:59
- Boundless. (AudreyB)
What a lovely poem. It’s hard to read knowing what comes later.
“I...
April 6th, 2018 08:46
- Father (Mol)
To what Briansodes said, there is a beautiful rhythm to your poem which...
April 5th, 2018 21:20
- And one year later. (AudreyB)
Wow. What an intense poem. I’ve been there but I couldn’t express like...
April 5th, 2018 20:19
- Keep On Praising (ForeverJesus7)
All things work for good for those that love Him.
April 5th, 2018 17:17
- My reflection (Lottierose)
I think it\'s a fine poem. It could use some editing.
My favorite line...
April 5th, 2018 17:04
- Do you know how? (Marlenawood)
I love your thought-provoking poetry. There is depth here that I wish I...
April 5th, 2018 16:46
- Simple Words (Lasergraph)
What a sweet poem! I really enjoyed the rhythm and rhyming of it. They...
April 5th, 2018 11:23
- Today (Karoline)
“The sun kisses me gently”
I love, love that line!
A lot there...
April 5th, 2018 10:08
- In All She Does. (Kevin browne)
I love the rhythm and rhyming of the poem. So sweet. Awesome job!
April 4th, 2018 14:32
- The Sound of You (Lorna)
You created a beautiful little gem that speaks to me and many others! A...
March 10th, 2018 11:01
- I Remember (\"Carter Wills\")
What a lovely poem. The rhythm of it was still good and as was the...
March 5th, 2018 18:44
- Spring (SarahLouise)
I like this. There is a quietness to the imagery. It gives me peace....
March 5th, 2018 10:00
- Change (Lyssa19)
What a beautiful poem and I can totally relate to the fear of showing...
March 4th, 2018 14:53
- Immature (Leisa Niamh)
What a charming poem! I love these lines..
\"I want to wait for the ice...
March 4th, 2018 10:18