Comments on community poems by jarcher54



  • Letter to God (Mik@el) I adore that the speaker seeks to move from certainty to doubt, so ...
    August 4th, 2020 21:45
  • Homeless (Aa Harvey) The modern world is relentlessly hard for anyone who falls out of line,...
    August 3rd, 2020 09:05
  • Guilt Trip. (Goldfinch60) Reminded me of William Carlos Williams\' plums, but maybe the real analogy...
    August 3rd, 2020 01:06
  • 2020 THAT WAS THE YEAR .. ! ~ YEAR OF COVID 19 ! (ANGELA & BRIAN) Yikes... thinking of Halloween and Covid-19... Will the grim reaper be...
    August 3rd, 2020 00:50
  • Some Day (DesertWords) Some day we hope. We aren\'t doing a very good job of it right now, we...
    August 3rd, 2020 00:44
  • Why Me? (KayDied) Being ignored, being cancelled, hurts like nothing else. Besides hoping...
    August 3rd, 2020 00:36
  • Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60) How quickly the future becomes the past... So many way to say Carpe...
    July 27th, 2020 02:56
  • I\'m Fine (Ariel Perez) Bitter sweet, almost painful the way you capture all those insecurities...
    July 27th, 2020 02:49
  • Old One Eye (Neville) Love the flowing short lines, like a clear stream bubbling images as you...
    July 27th, 2020 02:43
  • For Once Say No (Ariel Perez) Brave indeed! Compelling expression of the compulsion of love... you...
    July 27th, 2020 02:29
  • still warm sands (rewrite) (Dusk arising) Nice reminder of those almost silly, almost trivial times that ultimately...
    July 27th, 2020 02:25
  • Dewdrop (A Boy With Roses) X, Quite a vivid account of your journey that day. From start to finish,...
    July 27th, 2020 02:13
  • Snow Flurries (Satishverma) Lovely and painful... I felt like I knew where you were going from the...
    July 15th, 2020 23:16
  • F*ck You (Benevolentbluebabe) I once read about a serious linguistic study of the use of the f-word in...
    July 15th, 2020 13:00
  • Altering. (Fay Slimm.) Your verbal journey reminds me of Smetana\'s symphonic poem Die Moldau,...
    July 14th, 2020 08:27


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