Comments on community poems by jarcher54
- Letter to God (Mik@el)
I adore that the speaker seeks to move from certainty to doubt, so ...
August 4th, 2020 21:45 - Homeless (Aa Harvey)
The modern world is relentlessly hard for anyone who falls out of line,...
August 3rd, 2020 09:05 - Guilt Trip. (Goldfinch60)
Reminded me of William Carlos Williams\' plums, but maybe the real analogy...
August 3rd, 2020 01:06 - 2020 THAT WAS THE YEAR .. ! ~ YEAR OF COVID 19 ! (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Yikes... thinking of Halloween and Covid-19... Will the grim reaper be...
August 3rd, 2020 00:50 - Some Day (DesertWords)
Some day we hope. We aren\'t doing a very good job of it right now, we...
August 3rd, 2020 00:44 - Why Me? (KayDied)
Being ignored, being cancelled, hurts like nothing else. Besides hoping...
August 3rd, 2020 00:36 - Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60)
How quickly the future becomes the past... So many way to say Carpe...
July 27th, 2020 02:56 - I\'m Fine (Ariel Perez)
Bitter sweet, almost painful the way you capture all those insecurities...
July 27th, 2020 02:49 - Old One Eye (Neville)
Love the flowing short lines, like a clear stream bubbling images as you...
July 27th, 2020 02:43 - For Once Say No (Ariel Perez)
Brave indeed! Compelling expression of the compulsion of love... you...
July 27th, 2020 02:29 - still warm sands (rewrite) (Dusk arising)
Nice reminder of those almost silly, almost trivial times that ultimately...
July 27th, 2020 02:25 - Dewdrop (A Boy With Roses)
X, Quite a vivid account of your journey that day. From start to finish,...
July 27th, 2020 02:13 - Snow Flurries (Satishverma)
Lovely and painful... I felt like I knew where you were going from the...
July 15th, 2020 23:16 - F*ck You (Benevolentbluebabe)
I once read about a serious linguistic study of the use of the f-word in...
July 15th, 2020 13:00 - Altering. (Fay Slimm.)
Your verbal journey reminds me of Smetana\'s symphonic poem Die Moldau,...
July 14th, 2020 08:27
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