Comments on community poems by jarcher54
- The Dent on my Pillow (Dove)
Very touching... we\'ve pretty much all known that dent on the pillow. ...
October 17th, 2020 11:40 - My Dreams (Sadia Risa Anika)
I\'m nearer the end of my dream journey than the beginning. Your...
October 17th, 2020 11:35 - My Memoir in honor of Taliesin (Trenz Pruca)
As Goldfinch suggests, you\'ll be remembered as much as the greatest lords...
October 17th, 2020 11:15 - Pascal\'s Wager (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
An interesting pairing of poems. While I find Pascal\'s wager to be a bit...
October 17th, 2020 02:36 - of november fallen (Dusk arising)
One continuous compelling sentence. As clever as it is touching.
October 17th, 2020 02:26 - Waving at Dolphins (Neville)
Yes, they do curtsy, what insight!
October 17th, 2020 02:22 - Revitalize. (Fay Slimm.)
Being a nonconformist in most every respect myself, I\'ll diverge from the...
October 17th, 2020 02:16 - in fields of green (Dusk arising)
A sadness always overcomes me when I reflect how those calling for peace...
October 17th, 2020 01:56 - I Have Tried to Write an Epic (Steve Unruh)
I fantasized a number of epics as a teen poet. They are still in the back...
October 11th, 2020 23:50 - Addiction. (Fay Slimm.)
You are clearly addicted to singing your passions!
October 11th, 2020 23:35 - Chemicals (John McChord)
John, you are observant beyond your years. I won\'t say wise for who is...
September 26th, 2020 00:11 - Year Six (John McChord)
A well-crafted example of that paradox. It\'s not exactly an ethical...
September 25th, 2020 23:58 - Before I fall asleep (Trenz Pruca)
Oh my. You nailed it.
The night that does not end
Bearing fast...
September 25th, 2020 00:26 - old crow grog (Queer-with-a-pen)
My dad had four boys so of course he drank. I\'m sorry yours didn\'t...
September 25th, 2020 00:23 - I, an Algorithm (Quemis)
This piece is extremely moving from both an intellectual and an aesthetic...
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