Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Duo Ballet. (Fay Slimm.)
Form - craft - imagery - how long did it take to construct your butterfly...
November 16th, 2020 04:21 - A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville)
\'Welcome - though you didn\'t really need a contribution from an intruder...
November 16th, 2020 03:43 - A Hard Lesson Learned (Neville)
Copious use of stops....I\'d endorse that - it\'s something I use...
November 16th, 2020 03:28 - Keys Lost. (Goldfinch60)
Nicely paced Andy.
The gut wrench I experienced between lines \'Keys...
November 16th, 2020 03:14 - my dreams light (Dusk arising)
I\'m truly glad you can still find the same wonder in old moon that I once...
November 15th, 2020 19:29 - AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hi you lot:
DAVE here!
PANTOUM easier than ...
November 15th, 2020 18:05 - A PATRIOT I (or A DOUBLE WHAMMY) (Michael Edwards)
Right on, Michael.
Regards Dave
PS I\'m old school - can you do me a...
November 15th, 2020 05:43 - Here We Go!! (Goldfinch60)
Andy - Like flash mobs do you? Here\'s an oldie that I hope you and...
November 15th, 2020 05:29 - AS TIME GOES BY ~ A CLASSIC PANTOUM (ANGELA & BRIAN)
Hi A & B & S the C:
The \'70\'s merging into the 80\'s definitely - just...
November 15th, 2020 05:11 - love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st)
Hey mate (lvvv1 )
I want to get something sorted here.
Let me just...
November 15th, 2020 04:48 - love is a pose of power (Lucifer very very very 1st)
Wasted your time and energy, didn\'t you orchidee?
November 14th, 2020 16:53 - Poetry to Pass the Time (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Yes you cracked that one. I\'m left with rhythm, rhyme and in the end,...
November 14th, 2020 16:34 - LIFETIME (Dove)
Both deeply affecting and erotic.........aah......
Many thanks for that...
November 14th, 2020 16:27 - Such a Good Start. (Goldfinch60)
For pities sake - since joining MPS it has taken over my life. I spend...
November 14th, 2020 04:26 - It\'s over then? (Doggerel Dave)
Absolutely Andy.
I had two (serially monogamous) relationships in the
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November 14th, 2020 03:16
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