Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Pantoum of Doom (Tristan Robert Lange) Levels of alienation and anomie certainly feel higher in me than they did...
  October 15th, 2025 02:42
• Servitude (Doggerel Dave) Broaden the argument: Why import skilled workers from overseas? Get the...
  October 14th, 2025 18:52
• Opposites attract (Sorenbarrett) Element of truths there. However the generalisations a worry. There are,...
  October 14th, 2025 17:21
• Goldie And Orchi At Hastings. (Goldfinch60) \"From that day Orchi and context Have never been the same\" At last! the...
  October 14th, 2025 16:09
• Critical thinking (2781) Satisfying, complete here. Enjoyed. Critical thinking is a tool...
  October 14th, 2025 15:43
• A Sonnet For Alex. (Goldfinch60) Both partner and friends would find much comfort in your sonnet I\'m sure,...
  October 13th, 2025 17:57
• A Few of My Favourite Juxtapositions (Neville) Connotations mean a lot.......... cor, fergit poetry, that could almost be...
  October 13th, 2025 17:02
• Fresh First Fruits (Orchidee) Nah - it woz always called Harvest Sunday and occurred in October when I...
  October 13th, 2025 00:07
• The Shape of Why (Tristan Robert Lange) There\'s cryptic and there\'s cryptic and there\'s Tristan Robert...
  October 12th, 2025 23:54
• The Peregrine (Tony Grannell) Smooth and fast matches the speed of this most graceful but lethal...
  October 12th, 2025 17:20
• The Hill (Paul Bell) Humanity abandoned for war - you\'re right on the money there. Well writ.
  October 12th, 2025 17:03
• Another Birth Passage Conquered (Rebellion_in_sanity) Cannot fault your revulsion to rape in all the forms you’ve listed here...
  October 12th, 2025 16:54
• UNHOLY FOR ALL RIGHT REASONS.... (REBELLIOUS SOUL) You certainly know how to tear away societal constrictions in powerful...
  October 12th, 2025 16:23
• Genocide (NafisaSB) You\'ve really got up close and personal to the state of the world and...
  October 11th, 2025 16:25
• thoughts on world homeless day (October 10) (Arqios) The above have beaten me to the draw. Experienced (past tense) both...
  October 11th, 2025 16:08
• imbued illumination (Tristan Robert Lange) A little like my dreams - after they\'ve been extended, distorted, they...
  October 11th, 2025 15:57
• Wise Man Say (27) (Poetic Licence) I\'ll vote for your final, although I\'ve found that a manageable life is...
  October 11th, 2025 15:43
• The Planets (Paul Bell) Wot happened next?......or weren\'t the planets ever correctly aligned...
  October 11th, 2025 09:12
• Tulsa (EllieOxford513) Thanks for the introduction to The Ten Point Plan. A rich write.
  October 11th, 2025 08:52
• Tulsa (EllieOxford513) Thanks for an introduction to the...
  October 11th, 2025 08:50
• Milky Way ( Fun) (Poetic Licence) Seems a Marathon bar is now a little elusive.... though deep in Prof...
  October 11th, 2025 01:48
• HELLROARING HANK (David Welch) Galloped through that one, entertained to the hilt. Enjoyed every line....
  October 10th, 2025 18:45
• My tools speak to me. (Friendship) I stopped by.
  October 10th, 2025 17:33
• The house (Winona44) Well paced piece with great little person portraits. I enjoyed.
  October 9th, 2025 22:34
• Sweet Maria (Kevin Michael Bloor) Twas ever thus in my life too!!!
  October 9th, 2025 17:16
• Bed of My Beloved (Tristan Robert Lange) Tristan -when I first looked, I misread ‘ghazal form’ as ‘ghastly...
  October 9th, 2025 17:09
• BЯΣΛƬΉ ƬΛKΣЯ (MisKylie) Can\'t ask for a fairer warning than that.....
  October 9th, 2025 16:50
• NO FIXED ABODE (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Situation perfectly described there - cannot be repeated too often. Good...
  October 9th, 2025 16:40
• Sometimes She Just Cries (Neville) Happily well in the past Neville, your quick poetic sketch reminded me too...
  October 9th, 2025 16:29
• Rejection Reflection (NinjaGirl) Hard to compartmentalise when crap falls on you at different times.. Tend...
  October 8th, 2025 21:27
• I couldn’t save you. (Friendship) Stopped by and read it.
  October 8th, 2025 15:56
• A Scientific Riddle, or Why the Aborigines Ate Cook by Vladimir Visotski (Ksey_Gan) Racist and wrong.
  October 8th, 2025 15:50
• When will I catch a win? (NinjaGirl) Who??? Good to see you back, NG.😊👍
  October 8th, 2025 00:46
• AND YET... (David Welch) History provides the explanation, but often doesn\'t instil enough...
  October 8th, 2025 00:34
• Never Put Food Near the Cat Named Knight(A kids short poem) (KC) SEVEN You say??? Well you got the cat right anyway.
  October 6th, 2025 19:04
• I\'m So Sorry (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) \'Got the feeling you are going to get there - you certainly have the...
  October 6th, 2025 18:59
• High bar low (2781) Can\'t see there\'s anything to excuse at all. The expectations of...
  October 6th, 2025 18:52
• Devilishly Dreadful: God Save the Jack (Tristan Robert Lange) Brilliant write I more than enjoyed, Tristan. With you on your commentary...
  October 6th, 2025 18:37
• Thankyou for understanding. (Friendship) If you need a \"loyal, true, unwavering friend.\" that involves a...
  October 6th, 2025 18:25
• Prayer Petitions (Orchidee) \'Tis the season for a return to orchi form again...KP a distant memory?
  October 6th, 2025 18:13
• THE LEGEND OF SCREAMIN\' BILL WILCOX (David Welch) A great easy read in good form with a story to tell, Keep \'em coming...
  October 6th, 2025 18:07
• Unsecure power (Maplespal) \'Love it when the fridge gets warm and the food deteriorates. Need a...
  October 6th, 2025 00:21
• Cateel Surf Girl (Gary Edward Geraci) Would have very much liked the drawing, I think. Good to know you are...
  October 6th, 2025 00:17
• The Cage of Truth (William Hromada) Truth at all costs... I really \'got\' this one. Many thanks.
  October 5th, 2025 17:34
• Storm Amy (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Happening now? Didn\'t know. Thanks for the update. We all in our...
  October 5th, 2025 17:26
• Where Words End. (Goldfinch60) Come off the grass - music isn\'t everything. There\'s croquet...Mary ...
  October 5th, 2025 17:16
• Grounded (NafisaSB) A set of ideas well rounded in great poetic form. I like both the...
  October 5th, 2025 17:09
• The Church of depopulation, (Friendship) So far your central proposition has not been addressed by anyone above...
  October 5th, 2025 17:04
• Grande Gauleiter of Grotesquery (Tristan Robert Lange) Somewhere actually, between extremely little and none. Wish with all my...
  October 5th, 2025 08:14
• Breakfast in Krakow (Neville) The essence in a woman that many share.....I know... More than glad to...
  October 5th, 2025 07:54
• You bounder, you cad, you....! (Orchidee) Stap me vitals - I\'m done for the rest of the day after that.....
  October 4th, 2025 18:51
• Tainted Rose (Tristan Robert Lange) Going to interpret this as I find it, Tristan: a glorious rose caught by...
  October 4th, 2025 18:42
• MISSING PERSON\'S REPORT: DETECTIVE DEADROSE (DeadRose) Definitely keep honing your skills in this genre. Keep at it.
  October 4th, 2025 18:32
• Wise Man Say (26) (Poetic Licence) Absolute truth, Tobani. That Wise Man knows a thing or two... or three......
  October 4th, 2025 17:24
• Marie (Paul Bell) Head and shoulders above many portraits of tortured relationships. I...
  October 4th, 2025 09:56
• Without Poets (Sami Mulaj) Grass without poets grows strong and even - come off. lol
  October 3rd, 2025 20:43
• Sister mediator (EvenwheniLie) Standing, arm out at ninety degrees, hand up and open, attempt to keep...
  October 3rd, 2025 20:25
• Middle Leg ( Fun ) (Poetic Licence) Happy return, Tobani. You have been missed. Now you are back, don\'t leave...
  October 3rd, 2025 17:44
• Feast Your Eyes (Tristan Robert Lange) I must continue to honour your creativity and talent, Tristan - as here....
  October 3rd, 2025 17:37
• I Remained Unplugged  (Rebellion_in_sanity) They were doing the best they could...... I suppose.....
  October 3rd, 2025 17:23
• The Fridge (Paul Bell) Proof positive that the usurpation of power can always be a real...
  October 3rd, 2025 17:17
• My body (Natavia Hobert) Doctor\'s visit yet?
  October 3rd, 2025 17:06
• a slow alarm (Arqios) Increasing attempts to beat into submission by the rogue elements fire and...
  October 3rd, 2025 16:58
• What Is Up With People Rant. (Goldfinch60) You know the old saying; \"There\'s nowt as queer (update: \'strange\') as...
  October 3rd, 2025 03:16
• Housing Crisis (Doggerel Dave) Thanks Michael. (Have you blocked me? Very subtly done!🙃)
  October 3rd, 2025 01:30
• Words define your actions. (Friendship) Still not absolutely sure who you are or how you do it - but you can turn...
  October 2nd, 2025 23:19
• Breakdown to breakthrough (Poetic Dan) A very together insightful write, Dan. In terms of vision, I feel one or...
  October 2nd, 2025 23:11
• Playing The Clarinet. (Goldfinch60) Growth - you\'ve avoided a rut, Andy, and you have my fullest admiration...
  October 2nd, 2025 18:29
• New Pages. (Goldfinch60) Wait for the next edition, Andy - there could be an update.
  October 1st, 2025 21:25
• Dystopian Rap (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Nobody can say they weren\'t warned.... well warned, Sir! Neatly put,...
  October 1st, 2025 21:22
• KINTSUGI (Michael Edwards) A feast today, Michael - a rhyming haiku (a worthy new form I hope takes...
  October 1st, 2025 21:12
• Strange Horizon (Tristan Robert Lange) Up top there the term \'tone\' is examined, and for me that very much sums...
  October 1st, 2025 20:52
• Forgive me (2781) For the most part you captured a thought process I both recognize and am...
  October 1st, 2025 20:38
• Save The Fish (Shahla Latifi) I certainly felt the cold the darkness and your winter\'s depressive...
  October 1st, 2025 20:15
• Sober Rhymes (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) A marker describing precisely where you are at now? Interesting to see...
  September 30th, 2025 18:03
• Saint Sinner (Tristan Robert Lange) Almost got the acrostic and then my eyes went squiffy just before the end....
  September 30th, 2025 17:47
• Tea And Coffee. (Goldfinch60) Very tantalizing write as no specifics. Afraid you might get shafted for...
  September 30th, 2025 03:04
• Bloody Foreigners… (Doggerel Dave) Final stanza rewritten - for all to marvel....LOL!
  September 29th, 2025 22:55
• Devilishly Dreadful: Vesuvian Vampire (Tristan Robert Lange) I have to confess, without prejudice (or some such nonsense) Tristan, that...
  September 29th, 2025 18:30
• not to offend the imbeciles (Gray0328) Inclusiveness and conformity soundly thrashed.👍
  September 29th, 2025 18:11
• Streets Of Rage (TommyDingo) Great write. Could feel it Glad it\'s classified as fiction; can\'t...
  September 29th, 2025 18:03
• Solace (TommyDingo) Not sure I got solace out of this; certainly involved and... Did the...
  September 29th, 2025 17:57
• When will you............? (Orchidee) Please ask him to sort those who categorise their work as 18 + for...
  September 29th, 2025 07:55
• The Answer Machine (Paul Bell) Not all the messages on my phone are like that......... Now back in the...
  September 29th, 2025 07:50
• Digital ID For All (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Since 1945 this issue has a grand history of attempted introduction and...
  September 28th, 2025 18:57
• Into Another Place. (Goldfinch60) Continue to advocate for the book, please Andy - I understand it is going...
  September 28th, 2025 18:37
• The Slow Burn (Gray0328) The search for truth and enlightenment can be (is) a hard slog, clearly...
  September 28th, 2025 18:29
• The Multiverse in Truth (Tristan Robert Lange) Pleased to know I am relieved of the responsibility to know everything,...
  September 28th, 2025 18:21
• Honeytrap (Paul Bell) Not a Mickey Finn, was it Gaffer (I mean Gov\'nor)? Smooth ride to bump...
  September 28th, 2025 17:48
• Awww, no invite! (Orchidee) I can see where this is going - as I await with playful (prayerful?)...
  September 28th, 2025 17:30
• A fatal mistake - or con-fusion? (Orchidee) You must at least attempt to establish a sense of self worth, orchi -...
  September 27th, 2025 17:47
• Shadows Walk Again (Tristan Robert Lange) Song itself has to stay with the words on page - A complete atmospheric...
  September 26th, 2025 09:44
• On the level (2781) There\'s something just slightly.. almost.. there.. but slightly out of...
  September 26th, 2025 07:20
• The Vultures Dance (Paul Bell) Visceral, Paul - Where did that come from?
  September 26th, 2025 06:57
• Bad Week Breakdown (Tom Dylan) Mud wrestling?😜
  September 26th, 2025 06:49
• The Madness of Civil Tongues (Gray0328) Spot on (Though unsure of the title - irony?).
  September 25th, 2025 08:32
• The Sky (Tristan Robert Lange) It\'s being so cheerful wot keeps you going😂 Got that kind of raw...
  September 25th, 2025 08:27
• Cold and Raw (Thomas W Case) Alienation personified, \"cold and raw\"
  September 25th, 2025 08:09
• rusted edges, burning gears (Arqios) Loss of control - nothing meshes properly - yet some metaphorical (!?)...
  September 24th, 2025 21:24
• Queen Selene (Tristan Robert Lange) Impossible not to pay attention to, or as through the ages revere, the...
  September 24th, 2025 18:14