Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Closure (Tristan Robert Lange)
The grief can be equal to the loss of a close human friend.
Take care,...
May 29th, 2025 17:12 - But I Won, You Know. (Cheeky Missy)
That that is is that that is not is not that so?
I\'m still burping...
May 29th, 2025 16:50 - Success Of Lies. (Poetic Licence)
An oblique view of the state the world is in. Lies and cons...
May 29th, 2025 09:14 - Dance with the wind (Sorenbarrett)
Yeh - a lot like...
May 29th, 2025 09:02 - Big Bank Holiday (Tom Dylan)
Atmospheric conditions can play havoc with one\'s schedule, can it not,...
May 29th, 2025 08:53 - Just old (Sorenbarrett)
Yeh - a little bit like...
May 29th, 2025 08:39 - Life Lessons (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
On a wall somewhere (I\'m not about to open up old sores) was written: ...
May 28th, 2025 01:53 - My River Flows With Love Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
You are a master at the sonnet game, Andy. Shakespeare would have...
May 28th, 2025 01:45 - I\'m Back from the Dead (Thomas W Case)
Nail that to the mast and sail - you are on your way .
May 27th, 2025 17:02 - The Birthing Fuck (Tristan Robert Lange)
If It were always as complicated as that, It might save many unnecessary...
May 27th, 2025 16:20 - Tuesday to Thursday (MendedFences27)
There\'s a kind of inevitable logic there that tickled me and dragged me...
May 27th, 2025 02:56 - Biting My Tongue (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Family - what can I add?
Neat write, mate.
May 27th, 2025 02:43 - what we\'ll always be (Arqios)
I can\'t grasp the \'always\', the moment felt sufficient for me.
May 27th, 2025 02:38 - Finding Tomorrow (Orchidee)
Haiku, hey? You have such creative urges orchi, that I believe you would...
May 27th, 2025 02:31 - Blade In My Hand. (Poetic Licence)
There\'s a lot of it about. Not only knives, it\'s machetes, bloody great...
May 27th, 2025 02:20 - The Body Bazaar (Gray0328)
Them lips....glad I\'m past the kissing stage.....
Quite possible to...
May 24th, 2025 20:00 - Harry Brags. (Poetic Licence)
Memories of teenage Lotharios while I kept my mouth firmly closed..... and...
May 24th, 2025 06:59 - Stepping Stones. (Goldfinch60)
I am in fact lumbered with a couple o those stepping stones on my back,...
May 23rd, 2025 08:22 - Just Because. (Poetic Licence)
This is the kind of truth which I hold dear and thanks for expressing it...
May 23rd, 2025 07:32 - Demise of a poem (Sorenbarrett)
Don\'t you ever stop or at least slow down Soren? I remain unsure as to...
May 23rd, 2025 07:23 - Thank you and goodnight (Tom Dylan)
Somehow there I\'m assured it will be a great success, Tom. Best wishes.
May 22nd, 2025 07:50 - Love Dies When You Are Betrayed (Spring Sugar Bunny)
Oh no! Did someone upset you then?
May 22nd, 2025 00:45 - Or \"Yo, Ho Ho, and a Bottle of Rum\" eh?! (Cheeky Missy)
A piratess in pink...who\'d have thought? Never the less, concept...
May 21st, 2025 22:49 - This can\'t go on! (Orchidee)
The level of abstraction is amazing.... how you managed to complete that...
May 20th, 2025 19:29 - Lusting For Love (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
I really don\'t want to think about this - except to say that both you and...
May 20th, 2025 08:52 - Thredbo (Winter 2025) (Arqios)
Well when you put it like that, It\'s beautiful. Full marks for the...
May 20th, 2025 02:41 - Night Funeral in My Barrio (Rrodriguez)
Not really into funerals, so I\'m not sure why I opted into this one.......
May 17th, 2025 20:55 - I\'m busy (Maplespal)
In this, many of your other ‘brain dumps’ (maybe all – I haven’t...
May 17th, 2025 20:25 - A check up! (Orchidee)
Codswollop it may be, but I cannot shake off the feeling that you may be...
May 16th, 2025 22:31 - Rant (2781)
Having troubles getting here too?
May 16th, 2025 18:02 - Damnatio memoriae read or we die (Sorenbarrett)
Go on - you will end up offending someone, despite wrapping it up in your...
May 16th, 2025 06:58 - The Golden Trio (NafisaSB)
Yes - please ignore them all! Dismiss them and just live.....
May 16th, 2025 06:43 - Not Later Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Go for it, Andy - I feel that you could quite conceivably be right.👍
May 16th, 2025 06:36 - Would You Call Me God?. (Poetic Licence)
Don\'t mind taking it to \'em do ya!
I really find it hard to add to...
May 16th, 2025 06:22 - The Return of Mrs Muse (Tom Dylan)
Come on Tom - more insights and observations of life and folks please....
May 16th, 2025 06:07 - Give and take (Sorenbarrett)
Wish I had rhythm like that. A fresh tilt at what seems an inexhaustible...
May 15th, 2025 21:44 - The Mirror of our Madness (Gray0328)
Who me? I\'m perfect in every...
May 15th, 2025 21:24 - The Great War? (Tony Grannell)
I\'ve had a number of goes at this: you have topped the lot, Tony.
May 14th, 2025 22:11 - Being Alive Again. (Goldfinch60)
The essence of existence, Andy.
May 14th, 2025 19:23 - Not Sure I\'m Human! (Orchidee)
You ask a serious question - never mind the other prevaricating poets...
May 14th, 2025 18:52 - What (Sorenbarrett)
Can\'t as usual work out what your metaphor is this time Soren, but I tell...
May 13th, 2025 09:34 - The Lone Apostle (Tony Grannell)
The rhythms of a hard day, the underlying loss all woven into reward for...
May 13th, 2025 09:20 - Chet. (Goldfinch60)
Best personification of smack I\'ve ever come across.
May 13th, 2025 02:20 - And .... I Seek (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Now a search for God (and please no offence) has always seemed to me to be...
May 12th, 2025 08:00 - It’s a Cliché (M.E.M.)
Answer: \"We live in the best country in the world.\" No more tatty cliche...
May 10th, 2025 20:41 - Love\'s Lost and Found (MendedFences27)
Love? A cliff hanger of a yarn with a bun rather than bouquet as reward....
May 10th, 2025 20:37 - Of Friends and Porter (Tony Grannell)
I cannot add to Tristan\'s and Soren\'s comments above, so - Bottoms up!...
May 9th, 2025 16:50 - Sebastian Crier: The Habitual Liar (Kevin Hulme)
Ads are the best when entertaining and become part of the culture. Alas...
May 7th, 2025 22:16 - I thought I knew (Sorenbarrett)
Great rhymes and rhythm there, Soren.
Moral: Don\'t look back -...
May 7th, 2025 19:18 - Love People Tanka. (Goldfinch60)
\"If\" the operative word, Andy.
May 5th, 2025 19:40 - What If? (Tristan Robert Lange)
Given all the options, I\'ll vote for yours, Tristan. Hear Hear.
May 5th, 2025 19:32 - To the coming death (Ksey_Gan)
I do hope it is quick and clean - good one.
May 5th, 2025 07:45 - Flags Are Always in Demand (Gray0328)
Flags - patriotism - this one is deep, and I\'m not going to attempt to...
May 5th, 2025 07:39 - LIMERICK 142 (Michael Edwards)
Now caravans are for travelling in
And to move around in one ain’t no...
May 4th, 2025 09:02 - A Little Mad (Tristan Robert Lange)
As per (most of) the conversation above, madness is a relative concept....
May 3rd, 2025 21:17 - Of Paul Bunyan Lamps and Sundries (Cheeky Missy)
Watching several \'Alone\' series where various adventurers try to survive...
May 2nd, 2025 18:00 - Help! lol. (Orchidee)
So long as you can still lol.
May 1st, 2025 22:13 - A Rustling (Tony Grannell)
Just so - storms everywhere, and now a very real one here.
May 1st, 2025 22:08 - A Tall Story (Kevin Hulme)
Everything got out of hand there, didn’t it? I feel you are a...
May 1st, 2025 21:50 - Bubba (Thomas W Case)
Captured a feeling, something, the essence of a rough life. Ending cracked...
May 1st, 2025 01:17 - To Jimmy (Jarcher54)
And fitting epitaph it feels. The words may have come streaming out; they...
May 1st, 2025 01:10 - Good taste (Sorenbarrett)
Famous Last Words there for all to digest. The rhyme the seasoning.
April 28th, 2025 00:04 - . (Sorenbarrett)
Wot can one do with that? Only response is to endeavour to be as short as...
April 27th, 2025 06:21 - Half Empty (Gray0328)
You are in all probability dead right. however, when all is going...
April 27th, 2025 06:08 - Tail Between My Dreams (Tristan Robert Lange)
Oh what motivated ye, o poor impoverished one? Fear of total loneliness?...
April 26th, 2025 17:32 - War is No Solution (Nor Was It Ever Just) (Mottakeenur Rehman)
A rich write. Any solutions?
April 26th, 2025 17:23 - Too long and too short (Jerry Reynolds)
I love dandelions - they were a delight as a kid blowing the seeds, and if...
April 26th, 2025 17:09 - Respect All. (Goldfinch60)
Not incumbent upon me to treat they who treated me badly with...
April 25th, 2025 18:35 - Ypres, lest we forget (Arqios)
LEST WE FORGET all subsequent wars, the casualties on all sides, (both...
April 25th, 2025 03:54 - Overdone romance sonnet (Sorenbarrett)
Hear Hear.....
April 22nd, 2025 22:00 - The Stained Silk Dress (Tony Grannell)
Thoroughly enjoyed that excursion into high tea and taste. Now please...
April 22nd, 2025 21:11 - The Rover\'s Song (Tony Grannell)
I\'m a readin\' great verse an rhyme there, faved for future savourin\'
April 22nd, 2025 20:43 - Patience and Chimney (Jerry Reynolds)
You held my attention for the length of your tale, Jerry. A great...
April 22nd, 2025 20:15 - The Right Honourable Gentleman (Kevin Hulme)
Funny you should mention that; Election here in two weeks - I must vote...
April 21st, 2025 19:51 - A Better Person Today. (Goldfinch60)
Dunno about that......!
April 20th, 2025 20:51 - Emmaus Enlightening (Orchidee)
Wot a coincidence - my supermarket is 7 i/2 miles away. Provides me with...
April 20th, 2025 20:47 - Release (NafisaSB)
Nah - can\'t be doing that, I\'m a man!!😊😂
April 20th, 2025 09:06 - Ahem, Don\'t Look At Me (Cheeky Missy)
\'I think. At least my head....\" yeh when on the very rare occasion I...
April 19th, 2025 00:25 - The Eve Of Easter (Orchidee)
Three days after the Community Maintenance meeting and things haven\'t...
April 19th, 2025 00:15 - The Good Of Golgotha (Orchidee)
It woz Thursday just gone (yesterday) we had our community management...
April 17th, 2025 23:22 - A trip to London (Chris Duffy)
Me geography ain\'t good, but yer come from somewhere north of Watford...
April 16th, 2025 23:22 - Pilate\'s Perturbations (Orchidee)
Feels like one of our community management meetings where I live........
April 15th, 2025 18:36 - Tip Toe In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Through the tulips, Andy?😊
April 13th, 2025 19:31 - The Spire (Tristan Robert Lange)
Appreciate I’m swimming against the tide here, Tristan; I see no phallic...
April 12th, 2025 19:45 - Croquet Fever. (Goldfinch60)
Hi Ho, Hi Ho It\'s off to Croquet We Go - better \'n Work yer reckon?
April 9th, 2025 17:52 - You will argue (Sorenbarrett)
Agreed. Now where?
Well writ. Soren.
April 8th, 2025 16:38 - Passwords (Chris Duffy)
Entertaining as ever, Chris - Thanks
April 8th, 2025 00:01 - Science in a Nazarene\'s hair (Sorenbarrett)
Your ‘just a poem’ has provoked many detailed and complex responses,...
April 5th, 2025 19:06 - Help or Not? (Orchidee)
Good write.
April 1st, 2025 05:18 - The Voices Have Gone (Poetic Licence)
Feels/sounds like a psychosis - so where (many folks end up in...
April 1st, 2025 05:13 - Uncomposed. (Goldfinch60)
Full Marx (Oops - he wasn\'t a music composer woz he? I\'m toddling back...
March 31st, 2025 16:59 - History according to the administration (Sorenbarrett)
A poetic newscast which has filled in some detail I missed because the...
March 26th, 2025 22:05 - Riding the Canyons (FredPeyer)
You\'ve been away a long time, Fred. Good to know you are still around....
March 24th, 2025 17:15 - A Cautionary Tale (Kevin Hulme)
I know Lewisham and especially Notting Hill very well - many of...
March 24th, 2025 16:58 - Is The Window Open In Moscow. (Poetic Licence)
Defenestration a very local solution but certainly worth a try if the...
March 24th, 2025 16:35 - The circle (Sorenbarrett)
Yer working class hoop snake got a promotion........ No?..... sorry I...
March 19th, 2025 17:42 - KP she says..... (Orchidee)
Wot about a Marriage Counsellor?
March 18th, 2025 17:37 - Strange things happen at sea (Tallisman)
You are sorely missed, Mate - please get back on board.
March 15th, 2025 20:10 - Now lookie here, humans (Orchidee)
Stop Press: You don\'t exist. Inhabited my nightmares for years...........
March 15th, 2025 19:22 - The Weight of Enlightenment (Neville)
I confirm I\'ve considered, Neville. Thanks for the chance to do that.
March 13th, 2025 15:48
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