Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- The Time Travellers Tragedy (TommyDingo)
But what is the point? Someone here writes something which interests, so I...
September 18th, 2025 07:22 - Made of Wood (Orchidee)
You are far too young to have endured the Archers and PC49...
September 18th, 2025 06:28 - Robert Redford Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Definitely got that one right, Andy.
September 18th, 2025 06:23 - Bins (Paul Bell)
Keep \'em coming Paul, particularly if the topic is as serious as...
September 17th, 2025 19:15 - Orchi\'s Own (Tristan Robert Lange)
Who?...Oh him!.. He\'s already headed for the hills...but will come back...
September 17th, 2025 15:10 - Pompous....F (Rebellion_in_sanity)
With \"Expository\", etc and of course the complaint of \"\"No ambiguity...
September 17th, 2025 08:48 - The Unheard Spoken Word (Tom Dylan)
A real experience of other\'s preoccupations, Tom. A phenomenon...
September 17th, 2025 08:28 - My own writing (NinjaGirl)
Poetry utilised very clearly as therapy... Has it worked?
For my money...
September 17th, 2025 00:12 - wolly mammoth (NinjaGirl)
Question well put.. though why it should be put at all is puzzling....must...
September 17th, 2025 00:00 - Counting Calories (NinjaGirl)
I feel wanting to be skinny ain\'t the way to go - to be healthy the...
September 16th, 2025 23:34 - Illness Ill Advised. (NinjaGirl)
I\'d emigrate, change my name and take up Holy Orders with you on my...
September 16th, 2025 17:42 - Flutterby Mind. (Goldfinch60)
Please rename this lovingly crafted piece of realism The Desperate...
September 16th, 2025 08:43 - Fighting Myself (NinjaGirl)
Try as I might, I\'m unable to get my head around assonance - can\'t teach...
September 16th, 2025 08:30 - homestead knights (Arqios)
Charming and for me complete view of one kind of a childhood world,...
September 16th, 2025 08:18 - Give Us Ya Dough (Orchidee)
Stick it under yer mattress, mate - save it for YER roof. Only don\'t let...
September 16th, 2025 08:09 - The Harder Way (Tristan Robert Lange)
Don\'t know about that, Tristan - The murder was wrong, but now that he is...
September 16th, 2025 07:51 - This\'ll Cheer Ya Up - Not! (Orchidee)
Riffing a little off of Tristan\'s poetic masterpiece above, I\'d say you...
September 15th, 2025 19:43 - Devilishly Dreadful: Resting Place (Tristan Robert Lange)
Wotcher Tristan. I was born not far away - a hop step and a jump from the...
September 15th, 2025 19:17 - TV Dinner with Chilled Beer (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Real connection is a rare thing, I feel . Most struggle on, make do, try...
September 15th, 2025 18:51 - Incoming Destructive Design (EvenwheniLie)
It\'s the comet, I find when I sussed it out - you\'re way ahead of me. ...
September 15th, 2025 18:37 - Confusion (Dan Williams)
Stream of consciousness, I\'d say. Dreams are like that (mine are anyway).
September 15th, 2025 02:58 - \"Everything happens for a reason\" Yeah, right. (NinjaGirl)
Ok - let\'s be clear. I\'m not a stalker. Just after our recent exchanges...
September 15th, 2025 02:40 - Do not give advice.. (NafisaSB)
Bless your cotton socks for giving me a good laugh, Nafisa👍☺️
September 15th, 2025 01:18 - Haiku (Priya Tomar)
You sprinkle a rich nature loving environment over us with your haikus....
September 14th, 2025 17:52 - \"weekend headline remix\" (happy poems weekend suite) (Arqios)
Personal immediacy trumps all else...
I\'ll go with the latte and...
September 14th, 2025 17:47 - Give Pause to Reflect (Bella Shepard)
Better had, Bella - any other way leads to madness.
September 14th, 2025 17:40 - Overlooked Because Of My Opinions (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You have the spirit, but you pay too much attention to \"Rappers, Singers,...
September 14th, 2025 05:50 - Hate\'s Finality (Tristan Robert Lange)
Really liked your commentary, Tristan. Below does not contradict your very...
September 14th, 2025 03:05 - The Games Some People Play… (Doggerel Dave)
Many thanks for the fave, Priya🙏
September 13th, 2025 23:11 - Bye-Bye Time (Thomas W Case)
\'Time hurts\'- sometimes, yes.
September 13th, 2025 20:12 - And now a joke - argh! (Orchidee)
If you tickled Aphorical could you cope with her response, do you...
September 13th, 2025 17:07 - Exsanguination Nation (Tristan Robert Lange)
It\'s yer full on metaphor which I, with even me broken training wheels...
September 13th, 2025 16:51 - MISSING PHOTOS (Michael Edwards)
Rarely seen - but I know where they are when I need them.
Great to see...
September 13th, 2025 05:55 - Nine Eleven (Doggerel Dave)
Debate has moved to Political Violence.... Could now do with a new pin....
September 13th, 2025 00:37 - Monkey See, Monkey Do (NinjaGirl)
Justified as escapism, but from what is being escaped? Rationality too...
September 12th, 2025 20:56 - Nine Eleven (Doggerel Dave)
I don\'t normally delete a contribution to a thread under one of my pins...
September 12th, 2025 18:27 - God Save The Gammon (Syd)
Great stuff, Syd. Far too much of it still around . Once upon a time all...
September 12th, 2025 17:40 - The Open Window (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Depends what is meant by reality, I think: the world observed by Our...
September 12th, 2025 08:37 - Truth lives on (Natalie Heisey)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charlie_Kirk
All that makes sense and is...
September 12th, 2025 06:01 - Argh! No More Poems Yet (Orchidee)
Absoolute empathy here, mate. Every strategy tried. \'Tell ya even a click...
September 12th, 2025 05:40 - Looking Out To Sea. (Goldfinch60)
Well I was almost there with you, Andy, but I think just possibly three\'s...
September 12th, 2025 01:31 - A day of violence (NinjaGirl)
Perhaps the gun should not have been available for someone to pick...
September 11th, 2025 18:44 - Lay Down Your Tools My Darling (Tony Grannell)
Rich detail embroidered into what I personally see as the central theme...
September 11th, 2025 17:44 - Come down (2781)
\'Wonder to whom that might refer......
September 11th, 2025 17:29 - Of Mongol Blood an\' Kublai Khan (Tony Grannell)
Rip roaring ride and encounter there Tony. Found it hard to slow down....
September 10th, 2025 16:46 - HISTORY (Isa)
That History is quite possibly the most contestable of the social...
September 9th, 2025 20:46 - How is it....? (Orchidee)
Only a month? When Aussi Culture has been so successfully exported and...
September 9th, 2025 16:56 - Thar She Blows (Tony Grannell)
Bugger the poetry (which apart from the actual subject matter, is great)....
September 9th, 2025 16:48 - The Broken Mirror (Rebellion_in_sanity)
The pain of loss, the present pain. acceptance of blame and the hope for...
September 9th, 2025 16:40 - Weathered Face (Shahla Latifi)
A revelatory pin which in the context of your commentary nevertheless...
September 9th, 2025 07:11 - Walking My Own Path (Tom Dylan)
Sometimes potentially agreeable companions may have to be distanced from...
September 9th, 2025 06:47 - Automation (Keeter C)
Humans may not be as clean and tidy, but still my preference
Any...
September 9th, 2025 06:41 - Hello Dad. (Goldfinch60)
An In Memoriam your Dad would be proud to hear Andy.
September 9th, 2025 01:39 - The Good Times (Lorna)
\"Recollected in tranquility\" - Can\'t be summed up better than that....
September 8th, 2025 10:17 - Out they go (Hzugman)
Bristol Stool Scale has a comprehensive numeric grading and colour by...
September 7th, 2025 18:44 - “south of the equator” (Arqios)
Lawson? Banjo? Do I have to guess? Never mind - there are enough images I...
September 7th, 2025 17:36 - The Boogie Woogie Lovers (Tony Grannell)
As good a life as any other filled with its own rich detail recounted in...
September 7th, 2025 17:28 - Fear of Word Blindness (Neville)
Thanks Neville. I feel a rich picture has been described here, but I...
September 7th, 2025 01:31 - People Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
Cannot please everyone.........If it\'s your desire to make everyone...
September 6th, 2025 16:43 - german shepard (Jim56)
At a time when rottweilers and others such as pit bulls have such bad...
September 6th, 2025 05:44 - If (Anthony Hanible)
I won\'t then....
September 5th, 2025 16:08 - The Call of The Calling (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Some calls...... I find it hard to be specific, because for me the call...
September 5th, 2025 15:46 - My Old Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
You can afford to ignore the inevitable when your joy in what you have is...
September 5th, 2025 07:22 - Iambic Wotsit (Orchidee)
The \'Bluffers Guide to Poetic Form\' - an indispensable guide required...
September 5th, 2025 07:03 - “Lovin’ where I live” (Arqios)
The call of our sometimes richly beautiful sometimes scary land. Time we...
September 4th, 2025 18:43 - Devil’s Medical Plan (Rebellion_in_sanity)
I may have to abandon my stance as agnostic..... this could easily be....
September 4th, 2025 16:18 - Plastic legacy (Sorenbarrett)
Despite your justified aesthetic objections, plastic has it\'s place in...
September 3rd, 2025 12:52 - This has to stop (Orchidee)
If Fido is not making any more bones, what about all the other hounds in...
September 3rd, 2025 12:28 - On This Special Day (Tom Dylan)
This relationship with your father definitely deserved the malt.
September 3rd, 2025 02:21 - Sovereign Citizen (Doggerel Dave)
\'Welcome Soren. Note the effort and the edginess of your response. Or as...
September 2nd, 2025 22:00 - Well said. (Aa Harvey)
So it is your wish to always speak in metaphor? Why? Because reality is...
September 2nd, 2025 17:12 - My Advice (M.E.M.)
This comes from direct experience, doesn\'t it? Very real.
September 2nd, 2025 17:07 - the quill\'s nocturne (Arqios)
Far too metaphysical (rather than metaphorical) for me, but I like it...
September 2nd, 2025 05:47 - I love women (Sukanya Bhattacharya)
Are there many of you in this world? Far too many are conformist, as are...
September 2nd, 2025 05:39 - Driving Offence (Tom Dylan)
Do they still do those parachute jumping courses which provided much...
September 2nd, 2025 05:23 - what else is there to say? (NinjaGirl)
Heard it all before, but never like that - might have changed my mind if I...
September 1st, 2025 18:07 - Oh go on......! (Orchidee)
Jest tole a porky, din\'t yer......
September 1st, 2025 17:53 - And The Sun Rises. (Goldfinch60)
Why, where are you going to? Can I come too?
September 1st, 2025 10:53 - The Universal Root (Gray0328)
Homage to the spud 👍It\'s earned it.
September 1st, 2025 10:49 - Fear of Falling (Neville)
Well if you don\'t want it, send it down here....
(I have a terrible...
September 1st, 2025 10:33 - And then it rained (Tom Dylan)
There you go, been away, and on your return, look (above) at the welcome...
September 1st, 2025 10:29 - A not so Grand dad (Kevin Hulme)
Never mind the relationship - glass bottles with silver top managed to...
August 31st, 2025 20:18 - Choose (NafisaSB)
The crucial, fundamental choice: stay with family or go.
Let\'s hope both...
August 31st, 2025 18:45 - What Actually Holds Sway (Tristan Robert Lange)
..... and they died for that...
Your context clarifies it all, Tristan.
August 31st, 2025 18:35 - Swarms Around Me. (Goldfinch60)
So wot\'s rong with that?
Please elucidate.
August 31st, 2025 07:10 - Be Present (Bella Shepard)
I do try - as much for trip prevention as your rich appreciation, Bella....
August 30th, 2025 21:00 - Holy People\'s Town (Tristan Robert Lange)
Oh that old time religion....... I really don\'t know what to pray.... no...
August 30th, 2025 20:50 - the dam is breached (Arqios)
The frustration takes a back seat as realisation takes command...that door...
August 30th, 2025 09:43 - pleasing piece (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Pleasing\'s right. Very neat.
August 30th, 2025 09:36 - Father\'s day (2781)
Confusion mounts...coulda been any one of \'em by the sounds of it....
August 30th, 2025 09:29 - The Beauty Of Music Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s better - you are back on track, Andy.
August 30th, 2025 03:12 - ....and The Monkey Laughed (Rebellion_in_sanity)
No way I can add to that - it is its own justification.
August 29th, 2025 07:30 - Live For Today Again. (Goldfinch60)
Can\'t fault this advice today...
August 29th, 2025 07:03 - Beauty and thorns (Sorenbarrett)
Don\'t know how, but even I can get the metaphor...
Well scribed, Sir.
August 29th, 2025 07:00 - Too Long (Lorna)
Oh come on \"regrets I\'ve had a few\" but there\'s no point in wallowing...
August 29th, 2025 06:48 - A Poem of Very little Consequence (Kevin Hulme)
I have no cause to be disillusioned here, in fact I ended up with more...
August 28th, 2025 18:53 - The stories we tell ourselves (Hzugman)
Well said (versified), H - so very true sometimes.
August 28th, 2025 07:06 - On the Loss of Foss – (Edward Lear’s Cat) (Susannah)
Welcome to MPS. You will eventually accustom yourself to some of the...
August 28th, 2025 06:59 - Our Life. (Goldfinch60)
Please Andy - go back to humour, you do that so well sometimes...
August 28th, 2025 06:53 - Mummy (Paul Bell)
The family - Society\'s primary unit of socialisation...........
August 27th, 2025 15:52
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