Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- Haiku (Priya Tomar)
You sprinkle a rich nature loving environment over us with your haikus....
September 14th, 2025 17:52 - \"weekend headline remix\" (happy poems weekend suite) (Arqios)
Personal immediacy trumps all else...
I\'ll go with the latte and...
September 14th, 2025 17:47 - Give Pause to Reflect (Bella Shepard)
Better had, Bella - any other way leads to madness.
September 14th, 2025 17:40 - Overlooked Because Of My Opinions (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
You have the spirit, but you pay too much attention to \"Rappers, Singers,...
September 14th, 2025 05:50 - Hate\'s Finality (Tristan Robert Lange)
Really liked your commentary, Tristan. Below does not contradict your very...
September 14th, 2025 03:05 - The Games Some People Play… (Doggerel Dave)
Many thanks for the fave, Priya🙏
September 13th, 2025 23:11 - Bye-Bye Time (Thomas W Case)
\'Time hurts\'- sometimes, yes.
September 13th, 2025 20:12 - And now a joke - argh! (Orchidee)
If you tickled Aphorical could you cope with her response, do you...
September 13th, 2025 17:07 - Exsanguination Nation (Tristan Robert Lange)
It\'s yer full on metaphor which I, with even me broken training wheels...
September 13th, 2025 16:51 - MISSING PHOTOS (Michael Edwards)
Rarely seen - but I know where they are when I need them.
Great to see...
September 13th, 2025 05:55 - Nine Eleven (Doggerel Dave)
Debate has moved to Political Violence.... Could now do with a new pin....
September 13th, 2025 00:37 - Monkey See, Monkey Do (NinjaGirl)
Justified as escapism, but from what is being escaped? Rationality too...
September 12th, 2025 20:56 - Nine Eleven (Doggerel Dave)
I don\'t normally delete a contribution to a thread under one of my pins...
September 12th, 2025 18:27 - God Save The Gammon (Syd)
Great stuff, Syd. Far too much of it still around . Once upon a time all...
September 12th, 2025 17:40 - The Open Window (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Depends what is meant by reality, I think: the world observed by Our...
September 12th, 2025 08:37 - Truth lives on (Natalie Heisey)
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charlie_Kirk
All that makes sense and is...
September 12th, 2025 06:01 - Argh! No More Poems Yet (Orchidee)
Absoolute empathy here, mate. Every strategy tried. \'Tell ya even a click...
September 12th, 2025 05:40 - Looking Out To Sea. (Goldfinch60)
Well I was almost there with you, Andy, but I think just possibly three\'s...
September 12th, 2025 01:31 - A day of violence (NinjaGirl)
Perhaps the gun should not have been available for someone to pick...
September 11th, 2025 18:44 - Lay Down Your Tools My Darling (Tony Grannell)
Rich detail embroidered into what I personally see as the central theme...
September 11th, 2025 17:44 - Come down (2781)
\'Wonder to whom that might refer......
September 11th, 2025 17:29 - Of Mongol Blood an\' Kublai Khan (Tony Grannell)
Rip roaring ride and encounter there Tony. Found it hard to slow down....
September 10th, 2025 16:46 - HISTORY (Isa)
That History is quite possibly the most contestable of the social...
September 9th, 2025 20:46 - How is it....? (Orchidee)
Only a month? When Aussi Culture has been so successfully exported and...
September 9th, 2025 16:56 - Thar She Blows (Tony Grannell)
Bugger the poetry (which apart from the actual subject matter, is great)....
September 9th, 2025 16:48 - The Broken Mirror (Rebellion_in_sanity)
The pain of loss, the present pain. acceptance of blame and the hope for...
September 9th, 2025 16:40 - Weathered Face (Shahla Latifi)
A revelatory pin which in the context of your commentary nevertheless...
September 9th, 2025 07:11 - Walking My Own Path (Tom Dylan)
Sometimes potentially agreeable companions may have to be distanced from...
September 9th, 2025 06:47 - Automation (Keeter C)
Humans may not be as clean and tidy, but still my preference
Any...
September 9th, 2025 06:41 - Hello Dad. (Goldfinch60)
An In Memoriam your Dad would be proud to hear Andy.
September 9th, 2025 01:39 - The Good Times (Lorna)
\"Recollected in tranquility\" - Can\'t be summed up better than that....
September 8th, 2025 10:17 - Out they go (Hzugman)
Bristol Stool Scale has a comprehensive numeric grading and colour by...
September 7th, 2025 18:44 - “south of the equator” (Arqios)
Lawson? Banjo? Do I have to guess? Never mind - there are enough images I...
September 7th, 2025 17:36 - The Boogie Woogie Lovers (Tony Grannell)
As good a life as any other filled with its own rich detail recounted in...
September 7th, 2025 17:28 - Fear of Word Blindness (Neville)
Thanks Neville. I feel a rich picture has been described here, but I...
September 7th, 2025 01:31 - People Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
Cannot please everyone.........If it\'s your desire to make everyone...
September 6th, 2025 16:43 - german shepard (Jim56)
At a time when rottweilers and others such as pit bulls have such bad...
September 6th, 2025 05:44 - If (Anthony Hanible)
I won\'t then....
September 5th, 2025 16:08 - The Call of The Calling (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Some calls...... I find it hard to be specific, because for me the call...
September 5th, 2025 15:46 - My Old Ghost. (Goldfinch60)
You can afford to ignore the inevitable when your joy in what you have is...
September 5th, 2025 07:22 - Iambic Wotsit (Orchidee)
The \'Bluffers Guide to Poetic Form\' - an indispensable guide required...
September 5th, 2025 07:03 - “Lovin’ where I live” (Arqios)
The call of our sometimes richly beautiful sometimes scary land. Time we...
September 4th, 2025 18:43 - Devil’s Medical Plan (Rebellion_in_sanity)
I may have to abandon my stance as agnostic..... this could easily be....
September 4th, 2025 16:18 - Plastic legacy (Sorenbarrett)
Despite your justified aesthetic objections, plastic has it\'s place in...
September 3rd, 2025 12:52 - This has to stop (Orchidee)
If Fido is not making any more bones, what about all the other hounds in...
September 3rd, 2025 12:28 - On This Special Day (Tom Dylan)
This relationship with your father definitely deserved the malt.
September 3rd, 2025 02:21 - Sovereign Citizen (Doggerel Dave)
\'Welcome Soren. Note the effort and the edginess of your response. Or as...
September 2nd, 2025 22:00 - Well said. (Aa Harvey)
So it is your wish to always speak in metaphor? Why? Because reality is...
September 2nd, 2025 17:12 - My Advice (M.E.M.)
This comes from direct experience, doesn\'t it? Very real.
September 2nd, 2025 17:07 - the quill\'s nocturne (Arqios)
Far too metaphysical (rather than metaphorical) for me, but I like it...
September 2nd, 2025 05:47 - I love women (Sukanya Bhattacharya)
Are there many of you in this world? Far too many are conformist, as are...
September 2nd, 2025 05:39 - Driving Offence (Tom Dylan)
Do they still do those parachute jumping courses which provided much...
September 2nd, 2025 05:23 - what else is there to say? (NinjaGirl)
Heard it all before, but never like that - might have changed my mind if I...
September 1st, 2025 18:07 - Oh go on......! (Orchidee)
Jest tole a porky, din\'t yer......
September 1st, 2025 17:53 - And The Sun Rises. (Goldfinch60)
Why, where are you going to? Can I come too?
September 1st, 2025 10:53 - The Universal Root (Gray0328)
Homage to the spud 👍It\'s earned it.
September 1st, 2025 10:49 - Fear of Falling (Neville)
Well if you don\'t want it, send it down here....
(I have a terrible...
September 1st, 2025 10:33 - And then it rained (Tom Dylan)
There you go, been away, and on your return, look (above) at the welcome...
September 1st, 2025 10:29 - A not so Grand dad (Kevin Hulme)
Never mind the relationship - glass bottles with silver top managed to...
August 31st, 2025 20:18 - Choose (NafisaSB)
The crucial, fundamental choice: stay with family or go.
Let\'s hope both...
August 31st, 2025 18:45 - What Actually Holds Sway (Tristan Robert Lange)
..... and they died for that...
Your context clarifies it all, Tristan.
August 31st, 2025 18:35 - Swarms Around Me. (Goldfinch60)
So wot\'s rong with that?
Please elucidate.
August 31st, 2025 07:10 - Be Present (Bella Shepard)
I do try - as much for trip prevention as your rich appreciation, Bella....
August 30th, 2025 21:00 - Holy People\'s Town (Tristan Robert Lange)
Oh that old time religion....... I really don\'t know what to pray.... no...
August 30th, 2025 20:50 - the dam is breached (Arqios)
The frustration takes a back seat as realisation takes command...that door...
August 30th, 2025 09:43 - pleasing piece (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Pleasing\'s right. Very neat.
August 30th, 2025 09:36 - Father\'s day (2781)
Confusion mounts...coulda been any one of \'em by the sounds of it....
August 30th, 2025 09:29 - The Beauty Of Music Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s better - you are back on track, Andy.
August 30th, 2025 03:12 - ....and The Monkey Laughed (Rebellion_in_sanity)
No way I can add to that - it is its own justification.
August 29th, 2025 07:30 - Live For Today Again. (Goldfinch60)
Can\'t fault this advice today...
August 29th, 2025 07:03 - Beauty and thorns (Sorenbarrett)
Don\'t know how, but even I can get the metaphor...
Well scribed, Sir.
August 29th, 2025 07:00 - Too Long (Lorna)
Oh come on \"regrets I\'ve had a few\" but there\'s no point in wallowing...
August 29th, 2025 06:48 - A Poem of Very little Consequence (Kevin Hulme)
I have no cause to be disillusioned here, in fact I ended up with more...
August 28th, 2025 18:53 - The stories we tell ourselves (Hzugman)
Well said (versified), H - so very true sometimes.
August 28th, 2025 07:06 - On the Loss of Foss – (Edward Lear’s Cat) (Susannah)
Welcome to MPS. You will eventually accustom yourself to some of the...
August 28th, 2025 06:59 - Our Life. (Goldfinch60)
Please Andy - go back to humour, you do that so well sometimes...
August 28th, 2025 06:53 - Mummy (Paul Bell)
The family - Society\'s primary unit of socialisation...........
August 27th, 2025 15:52 - Regrets (QueenMax)
Indeed - that\'s the way I became who I am now..... I can however very...
August 27th, 2025 15:48 - Avocado (Sorenbarrett)
Viva the avocado In my local store...
Good homage, Soren.
August 27th, 2025 07:42 - Last Goodbyes (Lorna)
When it\'s over, it\'s over....in the meantime... absolutely no point in...
August 27th, 2025 07:11 - Oldies Fault Again. (Goldfinch60)
Can\'t quite work out who is saying what to whom, when, why and to what...
August 27th, 2025 02:28 - Hitchhikers Guide. (Goldfinch60)
This is well versified fun, Andy. Very much enjoyed. A fave.
PS Hitched...
August 26th, 2025 21:38 - Puzzle Piece (DLewis88)
I identify with the shrink from conformity - know it well.
August 26th, 2025 21:13 - Cancel, Click, Repeat (DLewis88)
With you nearly all the way there. a well versed argument re the many who...
August 26th, 2025 21:05 - WISH GRANTED (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Great yarn tinged with irony - enjoyed.
Thinks there may be something...
August 26th, 2025 20:51 - Fake Nudes (Neville)
\'Tell ya what - I\'ll supply the bandages, and if you could send over...
August 26th, 2025 20:38 - a clockwork orangerie (Arqios)
Hey Rik - you have completely superseded Steampunk with a whole new genre,...
August 25th, 2025 18:32 - Disillusioned (NafisaSB)
I saw you more optimistic than that, but cannot deny that realistic does...
August 25th, 2025 18:19 - Atrocity (Ray Moonee)
Apalling. Societal values and norms imposed on the individual. Well...
August 25th, 2025 18:09 - Older. (Chris Duffy)
Recognition. Not an awful lot of fun is it?
I think I\'m ready, but will...
August 25th, 2025 17:58 - My Hungry Body Satisfied. (Goldfinch60)
\"Put another nickel in
In the nickelodeon
All I want is having you
And...
August 25th, 2025 02:36 - Bearded sonnet (Sorenbarrett)
Made me think - damn, gotta charge me trimmer.☺️ Sonnet form utilised...
August 24th, 2025 16:55 - George Committed Suicide (Rebellion_in_sanity)
Great yarn. Made me think - something he should have done better.
August 24th, 2025 16:35 - some people never go crazy (Gray0328)
Very lucky circumstances plus lack of imagination. A great diagnosis of...
August 24th, 2025 16:13 - Porlock (Neville)
A locale evidently frequented by arguably the most noted of the romantic...
August 23rd, 2025 08:20 - Soon to be Home. (Friendship)
Well hurry up then....😂🤣
August 22nd, 2025 20:05 - Dreamscape? (Orchidee)
Wot happened to the hymns? Are you now beyond redemption?
August 22nd, 2025 20:02 - The Hijacked Flag (Syd)
Great stuff, Syd - also glad to know you are still around.
Always been...
August 22nd, 2025 19:54 - Priest Of Fishing. (Goldfinch60)
Up there is one of the most interesting autobiographical pieces you\'ve...
August 22nd, 2025 02:08 - Continuous (Purgatory Phoenix)
Why the need to post same material twice? Dearth of ideas?
August 21st, 2025 17:04
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