Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- the bipolar ride (Gray0328)
An honest and self revelatory write.
I\'ve heard patients argue that...
June 30th, 2025 06:53 - Freedom of Expression. (Poetic Licence)
Yes and yes and yes and yes and yes and yes - is that six? (should equal...
June 30th, 2025 06:38 - cannon shot fire (Arqios)
One cannot be everywhere at once - I\'m always open to new history. Plese...
June 30th, 2025 06:21 - Poor Satan sonnet (Sorenbarrett)
Mein Gott! Stretched the sonnet form about as far as it can go as these...
June 30th, 2025 06:11 - \'C\' (NafisaSB)
\'It can stand for the ‘Creative’
Who will let their ideas take...
June 30th, 2025 05:48 - Very Hot Sun Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
Got enough out of your poem today to stay warm for about a minute and a...
June 29th, 2025 18:00 - Who Still Tells The Truth? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Superficial interactions everywhere.....
June 29th, 2025 17:56 - Stasis Will Replace Us (Tristan Robert Lange)
I find as much significance in the structure of your works as the actual...
June 29th, 2025 17:49 - Anyone But You (MendedFences27)
I hate to be a party pooper (yeh?) but as it was getting real, I\'d just...
June 29th, 2025 17:31 - The Fight (Thomas W Case)
A great write. I felt I was there. But well out of range and trouble...
June 28th, 2025 23:16 - Fun With Jack. (Poetic Licence)
Organisation is the key when moving. One hopes Jack was organised enough...
June 28th, 2025 20:36 - The Judge (Tristan Robert Lange)
Oh lovely Tristan, no judgements. I judge all the time: Others: do they,...
June 28th, 2025 20:24 - Whose playbook is this (EvenwheniLie)
Nothing like an external war to keep the population in line with a heady...
June 28th, 2025 17:20 - Time to Cry. (MendedFences27)
Yes Phil, I confess to what in retrospect was a mild form - though I have...
June 28th, 2025 17:09 - Bunnies, Tigers, and...Yeah. (Cheeky Missy)
Nah - Gotta ask now. I\'m anxious for bunny. Not clear - did you take him...
June 28th, 2025 16:55 - Ladies Day. (Goldfinch60)
\"play up play up and play the game\" -You did and not a drop of blood...
June 28th, 2025 09:20 - Dang it! (Orchidee)
Has time lengthened and/or expanded as you became lost in four dimensional...
June 28th, 2025 09:11 - Nauseous and funny (2781)
Jokerman Huh? Got a swing to it that\'s easy to tune into.
June 28th, 2025 09:03 - Thunder from the throne (Sorenbarrett)
Nothing is unchanging in the universe, so...... should either or both of...
June 28th, 2025 08:57 - peel back the neon (Arqios)
Surfaces and superficiality a constant of modern city life. To peer past...
June 27th, 2025 20:48 - The Exorcist (Tristan Robert Lange)
Made me sweat, Tristan; and I\'m not sure whether it was the demonic...
June 27th, 2025 20:28 - Don\'t mix them up (Sorenbarrett)
One of those buggers are going to get you one day if you continue to carry...
June 27th, 2025 20:11 - Haiku (Kevin Hulme)
Can be - no doubt
It\'s deceptively simple.
June 27th, 2025 20:01 - Children Had Fun. (Poetic Licence)
Oh! I do like to be beside the seaside!
I do like to be beside the...
June 27th, 2025 06:04 - apologies (Arqios)
Elements here - kitchen, interaction felt very real. Again the smooth...
June 26th, 2025 16:15 - Dixiemix Jazz Band A Symphony Of Soul. (Goldfinch60)
A fine paean presented in relishing detail and a riot of rhyme. I felt...
June 26th, 2025 02:04 - The P\'s of Poetry (Tristan Robert Lange)
Alliterative masterpiece, You know where I stand on the
June 25th, 2025 23:53 - maga (2781)
Evidently world leaders are flocking to his throne.
Great write, man.
June 25th, 2025 23:44 - in Wordsworth was my father\'s voice (Arqios)
I can say nothing of the relationship, but the smoothness of the write...
June 25th, 2025 08:32 - Mary\'s Fun Life. (Poetic Licence)
Seems they got it together without the aid of a marriage counselor after...
June 25th, 2025 08:14 - Visit with a dream (Sorenbarrett)
\'Rich\' is a key word I\'d use here: rich in dialogue born of rich...
June 25th, 2025 08:07 - The Reverend Smalls. (Kevin Hulme)
A well rounded figure of a bygone era, the Reverend Smalls. Sorry I can\'t...
June 25th, 2025 07:55 - Fine Croquet Day. (Goldfinch60)
After a game of YOUR croquet I always feel that there might be a time when...
June 24th, 2025 20:36 - Chuckles Week (Part 2). (Poetic Licence)
Arsehole poetry.😆
June 24th, 2025 20:29 - Talking more rubbish! (Orchidee)
How dare you cast aspersions at the antipodean lifestyle like that. I am...
June 24th, 2025 19:48 - Marriage Advice For Men (Chuckles Week Part 1). (Poetic Licence)
Chuckle? All I see are profound truths. (And I\'ve neva been married........
June 24th, 2025 19:40 - To Jail He Went. (Goldfinch60)
A😆wise😅decision😂mate🤣.
June 22nd, 2025 17:04 - Can\'t get out! (Orchidee)
Your relationship with KP is obviously evolving...Neva read that KP...
June 22nd, 2025 16:57 - You Just Know (Thomas W Case)
Great yarn - more than well told.
June 22nd, 2025 16:46 - The Answer is No (Tristan Robert Lange)
I was born genetically male to perform a certain reproductive function...
June 22nd, 2025 02:13 - Fido wants to know (Orchidee)
Got a feeling I have been pulled (or perhaps pushed) into a parallel...
June 22nd, 2025 01:39 - unyielding eyes (Arqios)
I really like your message, mate. Feels about right to me...However...
June 21st, 2025 18:27 - Be the first (NafisaSB)
Great advice really. It\'s just a shame I fail in so many and don\'t...
June 21st, 2025 17:44 - I Don`t Have To Agree. (Poetic Licence)
Let’s get our definitions clear here, can we?
If that gun is real, then...
June 21st, 2025 17:34 - The Longest Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
You and your bleedin\' sonnets!!......... Orright it was a good \'un, up...
June 21st, 2025 17:04 - Gloomy Doom heehee (Orchidee)
I\'m full of empathy for you. Wot a surprise! But I feel full of misery...
June 20th, 2025 20:18 - Live Life Like A Sponge (Senryu) Go On Read It , You Might Like It!!!. (Poetic Licence)
An image now filed under \'tools\' and incorporated into a part of me now....
June 20th, 2025 18:27 - Of Rain, and Tea, and Secrets, Eh?! (Cheeky Missy)
Cat\'s? Ambivalent relationship with same; rain I don\'t want to discuss....
June 20th, 2025 01:10 - Baby Baby… (Doggerel Dave)
Come on - depletion of resources, the environment, climate change,...
June 19th, 2025 23:55 - Got That Out (Tristan Robert Lange)
.....And as you so rightly say, you got that out, didn\'t...
June 19th, 2025 11:32 - Got That Out (Tristan Robert Lange)
Teensy bit peeved today, was yer?
June 19th, 2025 11:28 - The Scarlet Muse (Kevin Hulme)
You\'ve muscled in on a pile of muse poems which turn up here from time to...
June 19th, 2025 02:32 - Where Does Time Go? (Goldfinch60)
For me after many many tries finally gave up 27/12/86 the day I returned...
June 19th, 2025 02:11 - Regrets (Jerry Reynolds)
Hell yes jerry - but what actually happened was engaging and in some cases...
June 18th, 2025 23:09 - Do Not Be A Beaver. (Poetic Licence)
Thought this was personal advice directed at a civil engineer tasked with...
June 18th, 2025 19:29 - Random Thoughts (MendedFences27)
Prof Google confirms the truth of your penultimate random thought. I would...
June 18th, 2025 19:10 - In the Legs of Loss (Tristan Robert Lange)
Didn\'t quite work out, huh?
Underneath there I do understand, really....
June 18th, 2025 07:47 - My Friend (Sorenbarrett)
A life unencumbered by convention but rich in generosity. And your first...
June 18th, 2025 07:33 - still the earth breathes (Arqios)
A hymn of hope for this earth beyond my words. I leave it to Soren above...
June 18th, 2025 07:21 - What a man is (Sorenbarrett)
Well at least one man somewhere........ You definitely have a way with...
June 17th, 2025 04:29 - wild horses on asphalt (Gray0328)
In very few actual lines you painted a complete picture of longing. ...
June 16th, 2025 18:08 - Perfect Life. (Poetic Licence)
If (big IF) they are living the perfect life then the most superlative...
June 16th, 2025 07:23 - More News (Doggerel Dave)
Made it! Top of the pops at Trending Now. Won\'t last long - some...
June 16th, 2025 05:18 - veil of the known (Arqios)
As I\'m not well versed (oh dear) in metaphor, I only saw an abused river...
June 15th, 2025 17:37 - Weeds (Tony Grannell)
I feel weeds are only weeds if they are so defined as such. Perhaps the...
June 15th, 2025 17:14 - Dads Jokes For Father\'s Day (Poetic Licence)
I\'m not a dad, but I\'ve managed to laugh - they are quality corn.
June 14th, 2025 23:09 - Conversation with a ghost (Jerry Reynolds)
I think it\'s quite possible you made the right decision there,
June 14th, 2025 18:18 - The Flag (Tristan Robert Lange)
Unfurled indeed - Bullshit sliced diced and analysed here. It delivered...
June 14th, 2025 18:12 - Mountain Men (Tony Grannell)
Would you be very much offended if I opted out of a trip to your...
June 14th, 2025 17:56 - a lad\'s cards (Arqios)
Facinating. I never knew. In my day (I mean kiddie day) and inherited from...
June 14th, 2025 17:24 - Musk Vs Trump (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
Bored with the witless wonders without social skills - or would be if what...
June 13th, 2025 17:01 - Since when was..... (Orchidee)
Obvioously a letter from a totally different culture time and space.
You...
June 13th, 2025 16:55 - CONFIDENCE (Twizzle48)
Much depth to a poem which is really engineered towards an argument I can...
June 13th, 2025 06:10 - Summer (NafisaSB)
Since the tea I am addicted to comes from India, I hesitate to upset you...
June 13th, 2025 06:00 - The Maid (Sorenbarrett)
Paid - made my day, Soren. Recognition with laughter kept me awake through...
June 13th, 2025 05:47 - Strawberry Moon Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
You\'ve got a way with sonnets that I admire greatly, Andy. Couldn\'t you...
June 12th, 2025 17:37 - The World We Live In (Ezekiel Olayemi)
As good a picture of modern society, its pressures and controls as I\'ve...
June 12th, 2025 16:58 - Greggs Desciple. (Poetic Licence)
Fat shaming are yer? Only joking - I don\'t understand obesity either.
June 12th, 2025 16:51 - Spinning Hoops (Poetic Licence)
Not sure about the Abattoir, but in my fantasy land I do hope for a Grand...
June 11th, 2025 17:34 - Neighbor Reveals Why Police Recently Surrounded This Abandoned Home (Matthew R. Callies)
Passivity and apathy, and anyway it is better to not get involved - Great...
June 11th, 2025 17:23 - No, Guess I Musta Followed Peter Pan (Cheeky Missy)
Wot only three? Too much food slowed you down? Was almost nearly a...
June 9th, 2025 17:14 - We Evacuate To Where. (Poetic Licence)
Thumbs up to Cheeky Missy for her realistic assessment of the children...
June 9th, 2025 16:59 - Cake and strawberries (Orchidee)
All that gorging - sounds like displacement activity to me. From what are...
June 9th, 2025 16:35 - Curiosity (Shahla Latifi)
Nothing wrong with being alone, it can consolidate one\'s own identity....
June 8th, 2025 18:04 - Three Topics (Shahla Latifi)
Hard to respond to in one small box - however, the truth of it all shines...
June 8th, 2025 17:42 - Calligraphy. (Goldfinch60)
A poem a day, a walk by the river, a round or two of croquet and now cali...
June 8th, 2025 17:29 - Cup o\' tea and....... (Orchidee)
Provided you can limit your hyperglycemic indulgencies to those specific...
June 8th, 2025 17:05 - Drear Love (Gray0328)
I\'ll go for the contradictions embodied in the penultimate stanza.
June 8th, 2025 16:57 - The eyes of a lover (Tallisman)
Used all your tale telling skills to draw me in Tallisman.
Good to see...
June 8th, 2025 16:50 - Jack and Jill (Poetic Licence)
Too late for a marriage counsellor and veterinarian?
Neva mind it takes...
June 7th, 2025 17:56 - Damaged (Sorenbarrett)
Nothing there I cannot understand and nothing there I cannot but agree...
June 7th, 2025 17:46 - Once Upon The End of-- and...! (Cheeky Missy)
The only commonalities I can feasibly find in your extraordinarily diverse...
June 7th, 2025 17:32 - Judgment Day (Shahla Latifi)
I feel privileged to read it, and to borrow from another faith\'s imagery,...
June 7th, 2025 17:17 - Eating the moon (Orchidee)
Leave the thing alone! It should be admired but not eaten; just like a...
June 7th, 2025 16:57 - Act now (NafisaSB)
I\'ll remember \'The tea/coffee may get cold But then you can add ice\'....
June 7th, 2025 02:37 - Of Cold Pizza for Breakfast and Other Oddities (Cheeky Missy)
And enjoy I did. I\'ve got to try Barry\'s tea one day - won\'t be a...
June 7th, 2025 02:20 - Jogging Pete (Kevin Hulme)
Well you could try getting those old dogs clipped🙃.... thoroughly...
June 7th, 2025 02:01 - I need answers (Orchidee)
No, yes, yes. No, no, no. Slept through it. Made up the difference in cost...
June 6th, 2025 17:53 - Habit or addiction (Sorenbarrett)
Most of what we ingest have therapeutic windows....
Good \'un Soren.
June 5th, 2025 18:20 - Rome, Africa’s disobedient child (EvenwheniLie)
Ignorance is not bliss, is it really? There are truths there, particularly...
June 5th, 2025 18:14
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