Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave

• Of Men, Mice, Liver, and Love (Thomas W Case) An episodic sketch of a messy life, if not well lived, most certainly...
  December 13th, 2025 22:55
• Labyrinth for the Living (Tristan Robert Lange) Don\'t bother to thank me - all the work, the prodigious work Tristan,...
  December 13th, 2025 21:06
• Dream of the rich, nightmare of the poor (Sorenbarrett) Well placed Soren: Metaphor free, coherent – I’ll give you a...
  December 13th, 2025 20:28
• My thoughts (NafisaSB) Great to fly high (or is it just fly?) with those thoughts, but I feel...
  December 13th, 2025 07:37
• Oh Internet, How You Let Me Down! (Friendship) Oh don\'t be like that - this medium has allowed improvement from a very...
  December 12th, 2025 17:36
• Stillness Doesn’t Shout (Syd) Long spaces - they continue to get longer, for which I cannot be more...
  December 12th, 2025 17:25
• My body and You (NinjaGirl) Your trauma remains and causes much pain. (Beyond acknowledgement there...
  December 12th, 2025 17:16
• Lady Earth (Yazz) Open and shut case of rape, no question. Well poemed.
  December 12th, 2025 17:09
• Why (Vanna) Good question. So I would suggest you forget about you for a while. and...
  December 12th, 2025 07:20
• Bulldozer (Aman 12) No reason why it could not be satire well strung together. The...
  December 12th, 2025 07:10
• Our Wonderful Game. (Goldfinch60) This is all very well, but wot about the rulz of the game in verse, much...
  December 12th, 2025 07:02
• Dead Or Living? - OT/NT Series 13 (Orchidee) \'Dead or living?\' You tell me.......
  December 12th, 2025 06:54
• The Mark (Sorenbarrett) Been there - squatting was never romantic or easy.
  December 12th, 2025 06:50
• Dragonflies (Megan Blaney) That last stanza speaks of a tragic misinterpretation. Was what could have...
  December 11th, 2025 22:15
• Lonely (Amethyste) Obviously bots is not the answer....
  December 11th, 2025 22:05
• I’m Cold, Why Won’t Anyone Care (Aaron Roberson) Could conceivably care if I knew the actual circumstances involved and...
  December 11th, 2025 22:02
• A Revolutionary Call (Jyoti Verma) I would hope this message (as is) has been spread much wider than the...
  December 11th, 2025 17:17
• Wandering (Sorenbarrett) I confess to that almost mystical pull exerted over me when close by the...
  December 11th, 2025 17:09
• the line (Tristan Robert Lange) Apprentice labyrinth (content though very relatable for me) Keep up the...
  December 11th, 2025 16:51
• One Night (M.E.M.) Sometimes, perhaps occasionally a one night stand can have a rare...
  December 11th, 2025 16:43
• Man\'s Infinite Appetite (Gray0328) Electronic babel and an infinite appetite for this.. Infinite stupidity...
  December 11th, 2025 16:36
• a story from my life or my life\'s story? (NinjaGirl) Riddle? Obviously a traumatic event you have yet to recover from .
  December 11th, 2025 00:12
• OO7 - Me? (Chris Duffy) 008 calling: Shift over sunshine , you\'ve been on the job too long, time...
  December 11th, 2025 00:10
• Poison Plant: Oleander (M.E.M.) So no point in advice relating to contact with police, medical...
  December 10th, 2025 18:24
• Aisle twenty four (Sorenbarrett) Now that\'s entertainment, Soren. I tripped over on my way out of that...
  December 10th, 2025 06:16
• The Chuckle Brothers (Paul Bell) The veracity of your reportage is astounding. Each character given an...
  December 10th, 2025 06:08
• Dopamine Indulgence (Gray0328) Addictions (of so many kinds) do have their rewards short term....
  December 10th, 2025 01:22
• Life\'s schooling (Sorenbarrett) Hey, today (local time) Oz has (I\'m told) legislated the first in the...
  December 10th, 2025 01:10
• Singing In The Choir. (Goldfinch60) If I could sing I would experience, I think, the feelings of unity and...
  December 9th, 2025 06:18
• Mouth And Heart? - OT/NT Series 10 (Orchidee) Comment from author about the poem: Bit of a shock to the system, that -...
  December 9th, 2025 06:07
• Bad Person (NinjaGirl) Too keen to adjust, to fit in. Be you and let them come to...... you!
  December 9th, 2025 01:19
• what do i think? (Tristan Robert Lange) Don\'t seem to have access to Dixie Dodd Tristan, since she only seems to...
  December 9th, 2025 01:10
• as absence returns (Arqios) It\'s the created atmosphere I look for in your poems, Rik.
  December 9th, 2025 00:55
• Happy Lisa. (Goldfinch60) Nurses who can take bloods with consummate skill are provided with...
  December 4th, 2025 05:40
• Sandy claws (Sorenbarrett) Think I prefer the upper floor in a quiet Sydney suburb....
  December 4th, 2025 05:23
• No means No (Aaron Roberson) Relevant title. Might have a good message, but I can\'t read it. Who are...
  December 3rd, 2025 23:27
• A COWBOY POET SHOT IN THE SHIN (David Welch) CPWBOY? Change if I haven\'t missed something of special significance,...
  December 3rd, 2025 23:22
• the dark of the wight (Tristan Robert Lange) Wonderful word sculpture, Tristan... No worries, but I leave others to...
  December 3rd, 2025 17:37
• question (Tristan Robert Lange) All in one, Tristan. they’d rather not hear because of the fear which...
  December 2nd, 2025 17:11
• Snow Globe Sonnet (Matthew R. Callies) I have a snow dome (or globe) , but after your sonnet I really don\'t need...
  December 2nd, 2025 16:38
• You\'re My All Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I\'m fed up with trying to write something different and original about...
  December 1st, 2025 07:41
• Somewhere Near the Far Side of Insight (Neville) Missed this - don\'t know how, you must be well and truly en voyage by...
  December 1st, 2025 07:27
• car ride on a wet day (PerditaRose) Perfect - I know this and the gratitude which comes of being on the dry...
  December 1st, 2025 07:11
• A Brief case (Aman 12) Still don\'t know where you live, but it could well be some part of...
  December 1st, 2025 07:06
• Twilight on Sunday (NafisaSB) You amaze - You mean exotic India ☺️reveres Sunday? Despite you...
  November 30th, 2025 06:33
• Two Singing Sessions. (Goldfinch60) \"Good things come to those who wait\"
  November 30th, 2025 06:22
• Amenable Andrew (Orchidee) Not an ex member of the British Royal family then, this geezer?
  November 30th, 2025 06:14
• Reunited (Paul Bell) Don\'t do that too often, Paul will you...Subtly done but painful none the...
  November 30th, 2025 06:09
• not your appliance (Tristan Robert Lange) Don\'t think I\'ve ever come across the dynamics of an abusive...
  November 29th, 2025 18:45
• Handle in its home (Sophia.) Good luck. Get real and get out there.
  November 29th, 2025 04:22
• A Ruler To Reign - OT/NT Series 2 (Orchidee) Sounds like there was dirty work at the crossroads when Herod had a go......
  November 29th, 2025 04:15
• Dirty Postcards (Kevin Hulme) This is hysterical...nah... I mean historical. The dirty postcard business...
  November 28th, 2025 21:15
• hearth of language (Arqios) The connection in between the words forms the moment in space and time....
  November 28th, 2025 17:06
• Rover (Paul Bell) And in Dull village it is discussed for years - who said what to whom and...
  November 28th, 2025 16:42
• National Sport- (Aman 12) Consumerism rules and by G.. how the money rolls in... I clothe myself...
  November 28th, 2025 16:28
• Immortalised Life (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Mate, you are getting very heavy lately. I like it, but feel I\'m being...
  November 28th, 2025 05:01
• Why Do I Write Poetry? (Goldfinch60) Gives you something to do after breakfast ....lol
  November 28th, 2025 04:42
• HISTORY\'S BUFFET (David Welch) Any argument which might remind that it is history which provides...
  November 28th, 2025 01:17
• ink on the Savannah (Arqios) \"scarfing fragments into chorus more than jotted lines on a...
  November 27th, 2025 17:46
• The Little Black Book (Paul Bell) I do wish a female hound hadn\'t got all the blame.....
  November 27th, 2025 17:34
• Poetry (Neilton) Poetry is only worthwhile if the material expressed means something. Go...
  November 27th, 2025 17:26
• The deal (2781) Not quite sure where you are going with this one, but I\'d say corporate...
  November 27th, 2025 17:22
• Types Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Better luck next............................... Andy, you broaden my...
  November 27th, 2025 06:08
• Why Is Nobody Angry? (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) Seems covid was the excuse for many nefarious political dealings which has...
  November 27th, 2025 06:02
• Purple Diary (Aman 12) The function of a secret diary well noted. But why here? The read, smooth...
  November 27th, 2025 05:56
• I\'m \'orrible! (Orchidee) Your domestic dynamics do appear...
  November 27th, 2025 05:45
• Taxation of Credulity (Rebellion_in_sanity) Seems the main theme here would be Taxation.... So one has to ask _ who...
  November 27th, 2025 05:39
• The Shoes (Thomas W Case) Where is a good cobbler when you need one? I have a special affinity with...
  November 26th, 2025 23:50
• Sharks (Aman 12) Your commentary made it for me. Each of your statistics could be woven...
  November 26th, 2025 19:17
• America (Sorenbarrett) Not like you to get political, Soren - something wrong?
  November 26th, 2025 18:59
• The Living And The Lifeless (Orchidee) When I were young, I worked with an old bloke who summed up nicely far too...
  November 26th, 2025 18:52
• Ambiguous (2781) Please make it clear that this is not the Dave to whom you refer; I\'m a...
  November 26th, 2025 18:44
• Love Smoke (Paul Bell) Yer good book says \"Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die\" No...
  November 26th, 2025 18:34
• Villanelle for a Plastic Oracle (Matthew R. Callies) One more toy I was never given and know nothing about.(sob). Sounds as if...
  November 25th, 2025 22:12
• True Civilisation (Rebellion_in_sanity) Could be resolved overnight. but is the result of political inaction. Or...
  November 25th, 2025 17:34
• The Temporary And The Eternal (Orchidee) Temporary is always a waste of time and effort - go for the eternal.....
  November 25th, 2025 16:49
• Watching stupidity (Maplespal) Series of individual pieces on each of those stupidities would be good
  November 25th, 2025 16:45
• Young love is silly (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Could not read your poem owing to it\'s deep red background. Answer refers...
  November 25th, 2025 16:40
• Saint Expertise (Tristan Robert Lange) I may have many faults and one or two health problems, but (and feel free...
  November 25th, 2025 16:29
• The Milkman\'s Passing (Gray0328) Nostalgia I really enjoyed, a pre dawn mood piece. Even if the milkman\'s...
  November 25th, 2025 16:18
• funny little thing (NinjaGirl) As usual (I bore myself with repetition) can you find another word other...
  November 23rd, 2025 19:08
• ROYAL FAMILY LARGEST BENEFIT CLAIMANTS (Nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)) Great title and general tenor. Your pin says it loud and clear. The only...
  November 23rd, 2025 19:02
• Urination humiliation (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) Forever fear; pelvic floor exercises for ever.......... are there no...
  November 23rd, 2025 17:44
• Creation (Bella Shepard) Certainly couldn\'t be by design, otherwise a new updated better running...
  November 23rd, 2025 17:27
• Away Together Once More. (Goldfinch60) If I make an absolute and sacred promise not to turn up there and spoil...
  November 22nd, 2025 18:49
• My Soul for the Devil (Megan Blaney) A poem on poetry is normally something I avoid, but with your little extra...
  November 22nd, 2025 18:29
• Myth Cracking. (Goldfinch60) Don\'t get it..... What\'s an iron? Is this iron to be found in the bottom...
  November 21st, 2025 13:56
• Cop that (2781) I think you may be a wee bit upset...... I can relate to much of it. I...
  November 20th, 2025 23:14
• Worm Wood (Tristan Robert Lange) Unsure of my bearings here - about as unsure as the child, I would think....
  November 20th, 2025 19:04
• A Tiger, a Tie, and a Monkey with a Note (Megan Blaney) A careful interwoven narrative I was both intrigued by and enjoyed....
  November 20th, 2025 18:08
• the road ahead (Arqios) You form depths of feeling and mood which I can visualise and know, then...
  November 19th, 2025 22:24
• Genesis (Sorenbarrett) AI rules? Nah - pull the plug.
  November 19th, 2025 16:22
• At the Bus Station (Matthew R. Callies) Sonder rulz, but your poetic definition has more depth and therefore is...
  November 19th, 2025 16:14
• A Walk On The Moors (Goldfinch60) Your peace and tranquillity supported here by rich detail. I enjoyed the...
  November 18th, 2025 18:58
• This is a Mess (Thomas W Case) Yes, a right mess.
  November 18th, 2025 18:49
• Brain Farts and Other Commonalities (Matthew R. Callies) Turns out that perhaps I\'m not the only one... Amused with some...
  November 18th, 2025 18:46
• Thankful Thoughts (Orchidee) We engage in monumental (yay! that\'s a good word) and profound...
  November 17th, 2025 15:46
• when all else fails, try following directions (Gray0328) What I felt was pure irony in the title drew me in....
  November 17th, 2025 15:29
• What did Freud really say (Hzugman) Safely put that one away with the disclaimer in the second line. One...
  November 17th, 2025 01:35
• Idioms (PerditaRose) I am well past responding to \"Baby, won\'t you come home?\"...
  November 17th, 2025 01:24