Comments on community poems by Doggerel Dave
- ~> Nay, I Shan\'t Share! ( Sonnet-Dedication ) (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad
Thou can’st see what property can’st do,
Apart from...
September 23rd, 2024 16:37 - Autumn Equinox Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, Mate - rich and fine.
September 23rd, 2024 10:37 - What has the world received from poets? (VeryYrev)
Read this on two separate occasions, and while I find this an engrossing...
September 23rd, 2024 02:23 - Goodness (2781)
Yes definitely still there…but perhaps as times get harder then it\'s...
September 23rd, 2024 02:18 - ~> Heroin! - form Monotetra - (Thad Wilk)
Some fish manage to get away
With the bait and live another day;
But for...
September 22nd, 2024 15:49 - Through Darkness, Towards Justice (GeekSusie)
A thin sliver of optimism well writ, when all I can see is a world headed...
September 22nd, 2024 07:43 - Grand Mort .. & .. The Transient Value of Slaves (Neville)
- I\'m sure she will...I hope to conk out gently or with a small amount...
September 22nd, 2024 07:33 - Central Law\'s (Drone7)
Like to offer some background here?
Not suggesting an essay, just two or...
September 22nd, 2024 07:15 - Love Must Ever Be Acrostic Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Give it a try, Andy.
September 22nd, 2024 02:43 - Sei Tutto Per Me! [ Sicilian Sonnet ] (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad, You don\'t really need any further response after Missy has...
September 21st, 2024 21:15 - Expectations (Sorenbarrett)
I\'ll go for the impeccable rhyme and the last two lines, Soren.
September 21st, 2024 16:36 - If the Cap Don\'t Fit .. & .. Glare (Neville)
But if you is still \'ere, can\'t be nothing much wrong with your...
September 21st, 2024 04:21 - ~> April Showers Bring May Flowers - Acrostic - (Thad Wilk)
Oh that\'s orright then, Back to love poetry next week..... or something...
September 21st, 2024 00:43 - Stars Above (M.E.M.)
Great thought - unity in separation with the universe as your...
September 20th, 2024 18:28 - ~> April Showers Bring May Flowers - Acrostic - (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad,
Never seen the point of acrostics in terms of Truth ‘n...
September 20th, 2024 18:23 - Notice (Orchidee)
\'See you later, Orchi.
September 20th, 2024 06:34 - The Art in Martial Arts (Tom Dylan)
Mate, please give Aikido a look....
September 20th, 2024 05:36 - Where you belong (Maplespal)
Colonialism and the big carve up. Africa never stood a chance.
September 19th, 2024 17:31 - ~> Since Ya Left - [ red neck ] free verse (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad.
I think I’m about to opt out of today’s discussion. I...
September 19th, 2024 16:58 - Nothing To Say? (Dan Williams)
A smooth run, Dan. Too good not to let your intended target find it....
September 19th, 2024 08:06 - Everyday Rarities (Tom Dylan)
Memories - the special value mundane objects can acquire over time,...
September 19th, 2024 05:55 - Cryo Babes .. and .. The Hurting Game (Neville)
So two responses, Neville:
- I personally find all reproductive...
September 19th, 2024 02:42 - Love Into Light Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
\'Imagine\' my anthem of the\'60\'s and 70\'s, Mr Sonneteer. Are these...
September 19th, 2024 02:21 - Meanwhile... (Orchidee)
Dunno who your trickcyclist Is, but I do believe you should be up for a...
September 19th, 2024 02:11 - OMG! I Can\'t Think Of Anything To Write! (Thad Wilk)
I wandered lonely right round here
Looking for some halfway decent...
September 18th, 2024 18:50 - Me (Bella Shepard)
You have been, and will be sorely missed, Bella....... I\'ve run out of...
September 18th, 2024 18:22 - Now Out in The Open (Neville)
Not much of that around here right now, but I do have vivid but decently...
September 18th, 2024 08:46 - 100 Not Out (Tom Dylan)
I ain\'t much good at them figures of speech, Tom - they feel like...
September 18th, 2024 02:34 - Back To My Youth Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
You get a blue plaque “Here lived Andy, a contented man”, while I’ve...
September 18th, 2024 02:16 - ~> Across The Span Of Ageless Skies (Thad Wilk)
That is a sweetly smooth paean to love, Thad - even if, on the mention of...
September 17th, 2024 18:02 - Black Pearls (Neville)
I only managed to get it from the subsequent discussion, I’m afraid,...
September 17th, 2024 07:30 - Another One of The Lads (Tom Dylan)
\"His so-called banter borders on bullying but he’s only having a...
September 17th, 2024 07:05 - Screw Top. (Doggerel Dave)
But do they know when to laugh and to laugh appropriately without name...
September 17th, 2024 02:28 - If I Could I Would (Tom Dylan)
Seems I missed this one - apologies, Tom.
Unless it were possible to take...
September 16th, 2024 21:03 - A Winter Passing (Cassie58)
Sometimes it can be about words unsaid ...and now..
Thanks Cassie.
September 16th, 2024 17:33 - ~> Whilst At The Beach (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad.
Well at least they’re doing better than me -
I’ve...
September 16th, 2024 17:18 - ~> It\'s You I Idolize -form Trijan Refrain - (Thad Wilk)
It\'s me day off, Thad.....🙃
September 16th, 2024 02:13 - Sonnet For Steven. (Goldfinch60)
I\'m no good at this stuff, so all I can add is that you have done right...
September 15th, 2024 06:42 - Now we are three.... (Orchidee)
Take care, Steven.
September 15th, 2024 06:36 - True Facts (Drone7)
😂All in it together, then?
Neat.
September 15th, 2024 06:00 - They Lied About the Five Minute Warning (Neville)
... And never will be, plus even if there were, where to go, what...
September 15th, 2024 05:57 - Country walk (Sorenbarrett)
Word picture well painted, Soren.
September 15th, 2024 05:53 - Devil Plays the Fiddle (Teddy.15)
The devil would be in her feet and diet denial - the pain and torture...
September 15th, 2024 05:51 - Wellcome to the 5:00 news (MR.apocalypse)
Nah - Wot\'s it about, then???😂🙃
Grrreat stuff...
September 15th, 2024 00:04 - ~> Cooking, Is A Science! - form Limericks - (Thad Wilk)
Don’t go blaming me – stand on your own two flipflops (boots? Carpet...
September 14th, 2024 17:34 - My Father’s Daughters (Cassie58)
Hello Cassie - feels like a very attractive walk.
But how many sisters?...
September 14th, 2024 16:44 - Paper lantern (FrasMac)
Yes - can tell you are new - you haven\'t managed to beat the programme ...
September 14th, 2024 16:26 - Pretty in Purple and Pink (Neville)
Answers on a postcard?
A species of hermit crab?
September 14th, 2024 08:34 - On war.. (NafisaSB)
;You shouldn\'t start me off again - I\'ve only just calmed...
September 14th, 2024 01:55 - Reading Is A Crime. (Goldfinch60)
You gonna become our new George Orwell and Aldous Huxley combined, Andy?...
September 14th, 2024 01:50 - Ten Thoughts on Freedom (MendedFences27)
Stirring the pot? Sorry - I\'ve just finished responding to you and...
September 13th, 2024 22:01 - The Tears (M.E.M.)
First time prompt free? That You? Sad that it is so sad, because it is...
September 13th, 2024 21:56 - ~> Tears In Ma Beer Tuesday! - Sad Song - (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad,
I cannot with all certainty discern if this is you, or you...
September 13th, 2024 21:48 - Island Of Dreams Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Dunno how I missed this little gem when I keep a close eye on what you are...
September 13th, 2024 06:39 - Diplomacy (NafisaSB)
A very ambivalent attitude to a Diplomat, If I may say so….
I confess...
September 13th, 2024 06:24 - I Want so badly to live (Poetaldo)
God not climate change?
Climate change not God?
September 13th, 2024 06:08 - America’s glass jaw (EvenwheniLie)
Am I to take it that you are not too happy with the situation right...
September 13th, 2024 06:05 - Karmasutra (Teddy.15)
I\'m mercifully ignorant in that I\'m not even sure quite what a pretzel...
September 13th, 2024 06:00 - Dedication Delights (Orchidee)
I\'m very fond of abbeys and cathedrals (if not crowded with other...
September 13th, 2024 05:49 - Hopes May Rise Over Grasmere (Tom Dylan)
The tourist experience: I loved my trips when they showed me some of the...
September 12th, 2024 17:09 - The rusty nail (Sorenbarrett)
On a straightforward literal level, there was a rusty protruding nail...
September 12th, 2024 16:56 - ~> Come Fly With Me (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad.
Those two will probably make a better go of it than many...
September 12th, 2024 16:28 - Crime Scene (Tony36)
Good write.
September 12th, 2024 00:15 - The Stare (Tristan Robert Lange)
Unease isn\'t the half of it. If a return stare doesn\'t fix, then...
September 11th, 2024 20:34 - ~> Take Me To Your Leader Bro! (Thad Wilk)
Ah What\'s up Doc? Doncha wanna drop that AK47 an try some of this extra...
September 11th, 2024 19:32 - Me described by-way-of “in & out” (Maplespal)
After that I would have felt better, but how do you feel? (In monorhyme...
September 11th, 2024 07:20 - Almena Dreams (Thoughtless)
I don\'t understand all of the local references, to be quite honest,...
September 11th, 2024 07:09 - On Patriots Day 9/11 (Accidental Poet)
Makes me ill just imagining those who had to end their lives that day -...
September 11th, 2024 01:40 - ~> She\'s Ma Eye Candy! Redneck (Thad Wilk)
G\'day Thad,
Had to be Walmart didn’t it…… and with all that candy...
September 10th, 2024 19:00 - For All Those Occasions When Sometimes is More Than Enough (Neville)
Feels sometimes that it\'s Zen......Neville.... I\'m feeling displaced and...
September 10th, 2024 18:45 - In Silence and Disbelief (Teddy.15)
Hateful time if you were personally involved, Teddy......
But...innocent...
September 10th, 2024 08:59 - Giant Hamsters! (Orchidee)
They\'re humpsters, I keep telling you they will rapidly multiply given...
September 10th, 2024 08:51 - Rust and steel (Sorenbarrett)
You bring out these nuggets nearly every day, all well polished and honed,...
September 10th, 2024 08:41 - A stranger in foreign lands (Saleh Ben Saleh)
The rich tapestry of consciousness memory and existence. Your poem struck...
September 10th, 2024 08:21 - Understand (Goddess of the Mist)
Been away for a while...glad to see you floating down again.
September 9th, 2024 17:54 - > The Doctor Will See You Now! - form Monorhyme - (Thad Wilk)
Here in Oz, because I am of a certain vintage, I get to see these private...
September 9th, 2024 17:50 - im done being politicaly correct (MR.apocalypse)
Part of me wants to argue and shout because some of the ideas that are...
September 9th, 2024 08:47 - Thank You Dad Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
\'Nature\'s gentleman\' - no better tribute from another man and a son.
September 9th, 2024 08:31 - Worship Worthiness (Orchidee)
Didn\'t know you used incense - wot\'s the problem? Moths?
September 9th, 2024 08:28 - Home (Teddy.15)
Might have changed by the time you get there....I may have mentioned.........
September 9th, 2024 08:22 - A thirsty dream (Sorenbarrett)
Certainly made me thirsty,...
September 9th, 2024 08:13 - A complaint (NafisaSB)
I have absolutely no idea - but I\'m with the crows.
September 8th, 2024 23:35 - ~~> I\'m Going To Put My Heart Away! -form Monorhyme- (Thad Wilk)
G’day Thad,
So THAT, a proper purposeful monorhyme with all the...
September 8th, 2024 21:22 - Feather Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
\'Or it\'s telling you to charge forth and do something really adventurous...
September 8th, 2024 07:00 - Psalm Praise (Orchidee)
Think this style suits you orchi.......
September 8th, 2024 06:55 - Bricks of hope (Sorenbarrett)
Precisely - \'the same end\'
Faved for its truth and concision.
That\'s...
September 8th, 2024 06:50 - Dead Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
I never categorise my rubbish, but in your case here, I do believe you...
September 8th, 2024 06:24 - Council elections (2781)
Cannot avoid a response to this. What a pain in the arse the whole...
September 7th, 2024 07:25 - Jazzers List. (Goldfinch60)
Must work through that list myself, Andy – there’s one or two...
September 7th, 2024 02:27 - Fusions? (Orchidee)
I\'ve never understood fusioned poems - it takes much too much sweat and...
September 7th, 2024 01:07 - A Very Poetic Finish (Teddy.15)
Came to this late, Teddy - sorry. Your surrealistic nonsense made me...
September 6th, 2024 23:12 - And So It Is (Cassie58)
Cassie, loved the poem sans the last two stanzas.
September 6th, 2024 22:51 - ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT (Michael Edwards)
Didn\'t see the target as the religions - other secular orthodoxies,...
September 6th, 2024 20:22 - ~> The Moon Hides Secrets - form Sonnet (Thad Wilk)
G’day, Thad –
Admiration for the sonnet form…. Content? Well.. free...
September 6th, 2024 20:07 - Mystery Girl (Tony36)
Good write.
September 6th, 2024 19:49 - Rainbows and Waterfalls (MendedFences27)
OK – so you couldn’t be bothered putting it on canvas, you mislaid...
September 6th, 2024 19:35 - Tattoos and scars (Sorenbarrett)
Yes Soren - if anyone is going to pierce my skin it has to be a fully...
September 6th, 2024 11:55 - Explaining KP & Co (Orchidee)
They\'re teetering on the edge of adversity....
September 6th, 2024 01:57 - Explaining KP & Co (Orchidee)
Wot\'s wrong with hymns? They seem to keep you occupied, and (mostly) out...
September 6th, 2024 01:45 - The Tempest\'s Strike (Tristan Robert Lange)
I felt the surface atmospherics forcefully. In fact such was the painful...
September 5th, 2024 21:20
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