Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• Long Distance (Debake) The characters are not named so the reader is not engaged.Nothing is...
  February 21st, 2023 22:59
• The Night (2781) fantasy
  February 21st, 2023 03:00
• Lock Up (R.J.Stone) The poem is repetitive and unclear.It does not stand on its own.No reason...
  February 19th, 2023 15:43
• The Dawn is just a Cobweb away (Arobot) This reads like the author wants to give some life advice.Unfortunately...
  February 19th, 2023 04:50
• 6 what my anxiety feels like (MiddleMood) This is quite personal.Hopefully it was cathartic for you.It is well...
  February 17th, 2023 00:32
• Except (Mara \"Marzipan\") This is quite self indulgent. more like a dating profile than a poem. But...
  February 16th, 2023 16:49
• Earth Colors (Descovia) This is certainly a positive view life.well done
  February 16th, 2023 16:46
• I wanna grow old with you (Kitty the naughty poet) A lovely wish poem.Made me a little teary.Well done.
  February 11th, 2023 21:04