Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• The Bus Stop on Grace Avenue. (David Wakeling) Thank you so much
  April 17th, 2023 03:05
• The Last Iceberg. (David Wakeling) Okay
  April 15th, 2023 06:18
• Consumed (Tallisman) This is well written.Certainly a good depiction of the modern...
  April 14th, 2023 16:17
• The Battle (Miss Mystic) True love it always shines bright
  April 14th, 2023 16:15
• Are you insane yet? (David Wakeling) So true.Thanks for commenting
  April 14th, 2023 03:02
• Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice. (David Wakeling) Indeed I might start nurturing my garden first.One rose at a time
  April 12th, 2023 03:22
• Attached - Daisie-Lyn Fuller (Daisie-Lyn Fuller) This is quite an accurate look most failed relationships.They are...
  April 11th, 2023 00:25
• Dripping (MKL) How depressing.I really struggle to see the purpose of this writing.
  April 11th, 2023 00:23
• Never Here, Never There (A Boy With Roses) I tried to read this but it is so unpleasant I gave up.The main problem is...
  April 10th, 2023 17:29
• Do I Value What Most? (???.) i dont know what this is.All i know is that it is not poetry
  April 10th, 2023 17:26
• Joseph’s speech at the funeral of his wife of 25 years. (David Wakeling) Very kind of you to say.Thank you
  April 10th, 2023 05:52
• Haiku # 2 (Norman Flagtea) Well said.All social media is there so people can hate each other without...
  April 9th, 2023 17:12
• Once there was a time (Sorenbarrett) i read this but there are too many big words that are not
  April 9th, 2023 06:09
• The Sound of Bob Dylan. (David Wakeling) No thanks I like it the way it is
  April 8th, 2023 19:12
• reverie (Peter Gates) Is this a spelling list.I have dyslexia so I hate spelling tests.There are...
  April 8th, 2023 06:32
• Percentage (Accidental Poet) This packed full of cliche advice. There is no chance of any of it coming...
  April 8th, 2023 06:30
• The Train to Treblinka. (David Wakeling) Yes I have actually.Modern high schools are becoming unsafe.The number of...
  April 7th, 2023 16:04
• 1 (Blaze) I prefer 2 it\'s a much better number.
  April 7th, 2023 04:07
• Grandpa’s dress sense (Chris Duffy) This is horrible.Making fun of the elderly is disgusting.Lets hope you...
  April 5th, 2023 16:16
• Forever (L. Zacarias) I have no idea what this is.All I know is its not poetry
  April 5th, 2023 16:12
• The fragile dream (Domilla) Umm this is why I live alone.Reartyionships are doomed from the tart.Still...
  April 5th, 2023 16:11
• Peaceful company - a ballad in prose (Norman Flagtea) Death is a doorway.nice poem.
  April 5th, 2023 16:09
• The most horrifying discovery of my childhood. (David Wakeling) Thank you fort he wise comment
  April 5th, 2023 16:04
• The most horrifying discovery of my childhood. (David Wakeling) Indeed well said.Thank you for reading
  April 5th, 2023 03:26
• Mismatch (Isu) Yet another rant about a failed relationship.It reads like a Facebook...
  April 5th, 2023 00:07
• on writing a love letter (Peter Gates) I tried to read this but words are missing so I gave up.
  April 4th, 2023 06:17
• But Where Has The Time Gone? (Goldfinch60) That the eternal question.Even Einstein himself said it was an illusion.If...
  April 4th, 2023 01:15
• Understanding (Kmills) I read this twice but I guess I am too dumb to understand it. Too many big...
  April 4th, 2023 00:32
• The Prince Of Sorrow (Andino) I read this twice but I don\'t believe in the devil so I couldn\'t relate.
  April 4th, 2023 00:30
• Sea of Memories (Undreamed_friend) This is okay.Very thoughtful and poetic
  April 3rd, 2023 16:17
• The Sermon on the Hill. (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading
  April 2nd, 2023 05:51
• What Lies Inside (SweetOdodoGrass43) I read this twice but there are too many big words.I didn\'t understand...
  April 1st, 2023 20:40
• Jesus (Cedrick) This is okay if you believe in fairy tales.
  April 1st, 2023 20:39
• We are the stuff that screams are made of. (David Wakeling) Thank you so much
  April 1st, 2023 20:35
• Family in the Flowers (Ernie lawton) This is okay.It needs the characters to be named.Otherwise it has no...
  March 31st, 2023 16:11
• Dog Show (Hacklec) I hate Dogs.They serve no purpose any more.The poem is tedious
  March 31st, 2023 16:08
• The House of Tears. (David Wakeling) Good for you.I\'ll be there as well once they let me out of the house of...
  March 31st, 2023 02:10
• Pamela Strong and the Lemon Meringue Pie. (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading
  March 30th, 2023 23:12
• Lonely (Sorenbarrett) Who cares??Go get a puppy.
  March 30th, 2023 16:11
• overindulgent (Lovedud) I read this twice but sadly the metaphor drowns the meaning.That\'s if...
  March 30th, 2023 16:10
• Red flags (Emmalouise) Yet another failed relationship whinge.Why would anyone want to read...
  March 30th, 2023 16:09
• I\'m still learning (Sunset Desires) I tried reading this but the characters are not named so there is no...
  March 30th, 2023 16:07
• I\'m still learning (Sunset Desires) I tried reading this but the characters are not named so there is no...
  March 30th, 2023 16:07
• To rhyme, or not to is the question (EvenwheniLie) Great poetry rhymes.That\'s what helps to make it great.Anyway you are not...
  March 30th, 2023 02:56
• RAIN OF POEM (Samprikta Paul) This is not finished.I really have no idea what it is about.It reads like...
  March 29th, 2023 15:48
• Where are you love? (Jod-tow) There are too many cliches here to have any clear meaning.Nothing is...
  March 29th, 2023 15:46
• Black Knights (Davion Ray) I read this twice but I have no idea what its about.Something about...
  March 29th, 2023 15:44
• Puppa goes on a Yacht. (David Wakeling) I\'m not offended at all.Actually there are other adventures that Puppa...
  March 28th, 2023 20:16
• The Writers War (TheLittlePoet) This is okay I guess .Unfortunately nothing is explained.It is hard for...
  March 27th, 2023 18:46
• The Unknown Battle (SweetOdodoGrass43) Its a sad truth.Words can kill.Well said
  March 27th, 2023 18:31
• Boss and me (Rahulwairagar) Normally I like rhyme but this is tedious to read.Nothing is explained.
  March 27th, 2023 05:11
• chiseled out (Arqios) I read this twice but cannot see the purpose.It\'s certainly not poetry
  March 27th, 2023 05:09
• The last sunset (Anaisabel89) This is quite nice.Very poetic.Well done
  March 26th, 2023 04:43
• These Men Of Wales. (Goldfinch60) Now that\'s what I\'m talkin\' \'bout.the welsh have such wonderful...
  March 26th, 2023 01:56
• Poetry (Dr. Soma) Because there are no names the reader is not engaged.The reader doesn\'t...
  March 26th, 2023 00:36
• The Rain Over Kiama. (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading
  March 25th, 2023 15:55
• Entropy (EvenwheniLie) It is not \"got\" to die.It should be \"have\" to die.Learn English before...
  March 25th, 2023 15:46
• Fuck \'em all (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla) This is tedious and sad.It shows a disturbed mind.The \"f\" word indicates...
  March 25th, 2023 15:44
• One Size (Kayla.terry) This is a clunky read that goers nowhere.Who cares about the shirt you...
  March 24th, 2023 14:57
• Byproduct (John Prophet) Is this a spelling list.I have dyslexia so Spelling tests are not fair.
  March 24th, 2023 14:55
• Music In Time. (Goldfinch60) So much beautiful music and so little time.Well said.I was just listening...
  March 24th, 2023 03:09
• There was a time (David Wakeling) Indeed there was.Thanks for reading
  March 24th, 2023 03:06
• Am I human being? (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla) This is hard to understand.Sadly you probably are human.Its nothing to be...
  March 23rd, 2023 16:04
• Psalm 2 (David Wakeling) Thank you
  March 23rd, 2023 15:57
• Psalm 2 (David Wakeling) Indeed
  March 23rd, 2023 02:04
• Psalm 2 (David Wakeling) Thank you so much.
  March 23rd, 2023 02:04
• Boom! (Jeff2510) Just keep taking the medication and things will improve I\'m sure.A sad...
  March 22nd, 2023 15:30
• They were her all, and she was the \"they\" (ForeverAbi) I read this twice but because the characters are not named the reader is...
  March 22nd, 2023 15:28
• Salute (David Wakeling) Indeed it is.Thank you for reading
  March 22nd, 2023 05:15
• the cycle ride (NafisaSB) Good story.I liked the rhyme as well
  March 22nd, 2023 01:46
• The fears of the world (Nature) Some good advice here
  March 22nd, 2023 01:45
• Cloud Watching (Netashi) I read this twice but I guess I am too dumb to know what it is about.I...
  March 21st, 2023 21:47
• Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling) Indeed
  March 21st, 2023 16:06
• The Days of Milk and Marmalade. (David Wakeling) Regrets are all we have
  March 21st, 2023 16:04
• The Lady Who Liked Mangos.            (David Wakeling) Its in Melbourne
  March 21st, 2023 16:02
• Same Sky Different Rain. (David Wakeling) Good one
  March 21st, 2023 05:02
• Death Of Joy (NilavroNill) This is okay.I have no idea what it is about because nothing is explained...
  March 21st, 2023 02:11
• POSTCARD STORIES (Shadow424) Is this a Spelling test.I have dyslexia so I\'m not good and Spelling .Why...
  March 20th, 2023 21:41
• Crucifixion (Satishverma) I read this twice but cannot understand a single word.To be meaningful you...
  March 20th, 2023 21:40
• My Imagination (River) I actually found the real world to be threatening and boring.I too live in...
  March 20th, 2023 06:02
• Sometimes it rains at night. (David Wakeling) Okay
  March 18th, 2023 23:34
• Shakespeare Doesn\'t Live Here Anymore (Charles69) Although a lot of work has been put in to write this I could really...
  March 18th, 2023 05:56
• Walk Back In (Ambersaldiva) Because the characters are not named the reader is not engaged and...
  March 16th, 2023 16:09
• The Tigris (Markthetabor) This was irritating to read.There is too much space between words.It made...
  March 16th, 2023 16:06
• The Boy With Warm Hands (Gie) This ia okay.Sadly when you ask questions in a poem you don\'t get any...
  March 16th, 2023 16:04
• The Battle and the Baby (David Wakeling) Thank you so much.
  March 16th, 2023 05:38
• Pointless (John Prophet) The point of Life is to get angry with God.And in that anger you will find...
  March 15th, 2023 16:34
• \"Spring\" (KACHOW) I really don\'t understand Haiku.Poets love words yet Haiku tries to use...
  March 15th, 2023 06:02
• Silence Kills (NewWolf) Silence is golden except when women are involved.
  March 14th, 2023 05:19
• The Good don’t die young. (David Wakeling) They are crushed and die young and so are released from life. Probably ...
  March 14th, 2023 05:16
• The Harsh Light of Day. (David Wakeling) Thank you for reading
  March 13th, 2023 16:28
• Back to you Billy, for ways I whiled away herding ennui (Rew4er2nail) I read this twice but didn\'t understand a single word.The mystery to me...
  March 11th, 2023 15:34
• The Seagulls over Rose Bay don’t like Wine. (David Wakeling) Thank you so much
  March 11th, 2023 15:29
• The House of Tears. (David Wakeling) Indeed.
  March 11th, 2023 02:49
• THE FREAK OF NATURE (Shayl) This is a little self indulgent.I mean anxiety is a serious mental illness...
  March 11th, 2023 01:47
• V.A.Z.R.A.E.J.J.(Vaz-Raejj): (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) This makes no sense to me.You need to read some real poets and try again
  March 11th, 2023 01:45
• Post-Cancer (M.E.M.) There is a pull of the tourniquet around my bicep as my fingernails dig...
  March 9th, 2023 21:16
• To Love and Live (Alvin P) What a shame Love doesn\'t exist.You are confusing it with Lust but hey...
  March 9th, 2023 15:56
• Post-Cancer (M.E.M.) I can\'t read this because there are words missing. Its good that you...
  March 9th, 2023 15:55
• It’s no Citizen Kane (An Apocalypse in Noir) (Pazuzu) This is quite good.Reminds me of The Big Sleep or The Maltese Falcon.Gotta...
  March 9th, 2023 15:52