Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• Filled With Joy. (Goldfinch60) This is quite a good look at a spiritual experience. We are not robots we...
  November 25th, 2024 21:25
• near or far of love (Arqios) All I know about relationships is that they all fail sooner or later....
  November 25th, 2024 21:22
• LOSSES SWIFTLY CUT (Bobby O) Never mind mi amigo there are plenty more fish in the sea. This is quite a...
  November 25th, 2024 21:18
• “Play It Again, Sam” (Arqios) Of all the Poetry joints in all the sites in the world this poem had to...
  November 24th, 2024 05:42
• Metal cage (Sorenbarrett) This is powerful. It summarizes the human condition perfectly. Wonderful....
  November 23rd, 2024 14:18
• Road trip (Tony36) This would make a great song. Just needs a few guitar chords.Well done
  November 23rd, 2024 14:14
• All Things Considered (Cassie58) What a wonderful poem. It transported me to happier climes. Excellent...
  November 23rd, 2024 14:12
• Chopin Fantasy Impromptu. (Goldfinch60) This asks the ultimate question. I\'m not sure you get a good answer....
  November 23rd, 2024 05:32
• Life\'s Never Ending Span. (Goldfinch60) What a joyous summary of a life well lived. Wonderful poem.
  November 22nd, 2024 17:30
• Pizza Fit for a Queen (Arqios) What is not to like. A romantic tale of Pizza. That is a magnificent...
  November 22nd, 2024 17:29
• awakening (haiku cluster) (Arqios) This is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout. Real poetry. So many delightful phrases...
  November 21st, 2024 16:23
• The Band (Tony36) This is clever and fun, exploring the trials of starting a new...
  November 21st, 2024 16:20
• Kiss of death (Sorenbarrett) There is so much to think about in this gem. Death Marriage Freedom and...
  November 21st, 2024 05:03
• The Literature Of Music. (Goldfinch60) This is an amazing discovery. I agree music is great. Well done
  November 21st, 2024 02:14
• Snow Of Beauty Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) This is a great poem. Well constructed. It is a mixed bag snow. For some...
  November 20th, 2024 06:06
• Little bird (Sorenbarrett) This is a powerful work.I love the rhyme.It is debatable whether a bird...
  November 20th, 2024 06:03
• Where do dreams flow? (Arqios) This is quite a master piece. The cadence and rhyme are impeccable. There...
  November 20th, 2024 06:00
• Just Imagine This world. (Goldfinch60) This is a wonderful tribute to a great song. A world filled with Peace now...
  November 18th, 2024 02:28
• Bonsai (Sorenbarrett) This is a great poem. Short and sweet. The truth is though I don\'t think...
  November 16th, 2024 20:58
• Keep A Lid On It (Cassie58) This is a heart-felt poem questioning your legacy. I\'m sure you will...
  November 15th, 2024 02:12
• USArse (FrasMac) Some deep and profound questions here. I hope it works out
  November 15th, 2024 02:09
• Romp (acrostic) (Sorenbarrett) Short and sweet. It sums up childhood. Its a wonder we survived
  November 12th, 2024 15:05
• I Am (Tony36) Forged from fire. I love it. Well done
  November 12th, 2024 15:03
• The Sun Shone On Us Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A sunny day good friends and croquet.It doesn\'t get much better than...
  November 12th, 2024 15:02
• Scarlet Skirts (Cassie58) What a wonderful tribute. Well done
  November 12th, 2024 14:59
• Lying In The Dark. (Goldfinch60) The story of a great bottle of wine. Very clever tale and powerful...
  November 11th, 2024 05:57
• my daily dose of humanity (Arqios) Gotta love humans. In fact some of my best friends are almost human.Nice...
  November 10th, 2024 18:57
• Whispers (Sorenbarrett) This is very powerful. I enjoyed reading.
  November 9th, 2024 15:10
• Potential (Tony36) Some words to live by. Well done
  November 9th, 2024 15:09
• Each New Day. (Goldfinch60) It is always a joy to read your poems. This is wonderful. Well done
  November 9th, 2024 05:33
• Glass prison (Sorenbarrett) This is very poetic with powerful images. Well done. Enjoyable
  November 8th, 2024 20:48
• Window of a tear (Sorenbarrett) This is great. The message is clear and is important. Enjoyable
  November 6th, 2024 19:43
• Keloidal Suspension (Arqios) A very rich poem. Filled with images and high-level vocabulary, I had to...
  November 6th, 2024 19:41
• Awake Once More. (Goldfinch60) You have had a good life but more importantly you appreciated every...
  November 5th, 2024 06:09
• Eyes, Heart, Mind And Soul. (Goldfinch60) Sounds like a wonderful recipe. Just add music and now you are cooking....
  November 4th, 2024 03:16
• Swing From Paris Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) You inspired me to look up Swin from Paris.Thanks mi amigo
  November 2nd, 2024 17:09
• Birth of a poem (Sorenbarrett) This is quite clever.The birth of a poem can be hard work,Well done mi...
  November 2nd, 2024 17:08
• Snack Attack (Tony36) Sounds like Halloween on the Project.Good fun
  November 2nd, 2024 17:06
• Glimpses of the past (Sorenbarrett) Wonderful poem about the joy of memories. In fact memories are everything....
  November 1st, 2024 06:13
• Samhain Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) This is a master piece mi amigo.I love the cadence, and the rhyme....
  November 1st, 2024 02:46
• untitled (autumn sijo) (Arqios) This captures warmth and winter chill all in one. Excellent
  October 30th, 2024 05:35
• Sepia dreams (Sorenbarrett) This has a wonderful nostalgic feel about it. An old photograph can say so...
  October 30th, 2024 05:33
• Bad To Best. (Goldfinch60) This is very true. Good Bad or Ugly it all contributes to a rich life....
  October 30th, 2024 05:31
• Losing Me ... (Diana .) This is sad and raw. It is about a failed relationship. The problem is all...
  October 29th, 2024 02:16
• Just One Day. (Goldfinch60) Well done compadre. I always learn something important from your poems.
  October 28th, 2024 20:49
• Oktoberfest (Arqios) I always love a good limerick to be sure to be sure,Good fun here.
  October 28th, 2024 20:47
• Home Full Of Cheer. (Goldfinch60) It sounds like a enjoyable night.The detail here is wonderful.It...
  October 27th, 2024 02:46
• Books (Tony36) Yes I was saddened when the book shops closed.There was something magical...
  October 26th, 2024 15:37
• A nursery rhyme for us mature children (Sorenbarrett) Certainly a poet having fun.
  October 26th, 2024 15:35
• The Sibilance Of Showers. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love Nature.Beautiful poem here mi amigo
  October 26th, 2024 01:38
• Night\'s soliloquy (Sorenbarrett) This is brilliant. Night is a double-edged sword. It is a safe refuge but...
  October 25th, 2024 19:44
• Trovatori Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) This is magnificent. Every line is truer than the one before.Well done
  October 24th, 2024 01:36
• Canvas In Our Imagination. (Goldfinch60) This is a profound piece. The song is indeed forms of art. Well written
  October 23rd, 2024 01:58
• The Maze (Tony36) That\'s life it is a Maze and it is Amazing. Clever poem.
  October 22nd, 2024 20:23
• Back To The Sea. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful image here. You are a lucky enchilada mi amigo. Have fun
  October 21st, 2024 16:03
• Smoke (Sorenbarrett) This is magic.I read it and could here Vivaldi Four Seasons.Very...
  October 20th, 2024 17:29
• The Prison of God (Abdullah123) This certainly is an epic poem exploring all the myths and legends of...
  October 20th, 2024 16:42
• Halloween (Sorenbarrett) This is q powerful narrative. As roar as reality gets.Very well written,I...
  October 19th, 2024 16:38
• Welcoming Light. (Goldfinch60) Very powerful poem.Took me back to my morning commute.
  October 19th, 2024 16:35
• The Poet (Tony36) Wonderful poem and wonderful sentiment.Well done.Inspiring
  October 19th, 2024 16:33
• Pillar of support (Sorenbarrett) A nice tribute. I like the rhyme as well.Excellent
  October 17th, 2024 21:40
• SPINNING CONCLUSION (Bobby O) Great story with a hopeful ending. Everything goes better with a little...
  October 16th, 2024 06:06
• Scatter Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) What a wonderful message. Spread sunshine everywhere Well done
  October 16th, 2024 06:04
• Let go (Sorenbarrett) This is amazing. Very well constructed. I love the rhyme. Well done...
  October 16th, 2024 06:02
• Walking In Old Age Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) You are doing great. Still writing great poems like this one.
  October 15th, 2024 02:13
• Our Intense Love Tanka. (Goldfinch60) A love for the ages. Thats amazing
  October 12th, 2024 02:19
• Beyond Creation (Abdullah123) Excellent. Very powerful writing. Very Biblical
  October 11th, 2024 05:30
• Earth\'s Birth Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) This is excellent. The history of the Earth with a twist at the end.No...
  October 10th, 2024 02:05
• Each New Day Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Amazing poem mi amigo. Filled with optimism and hope.
  October 7th, 2024 02:20
• Emotionless FREAK (Hey!) Guys are the Worst!. You need to get a kitten or Puppy. Get those happy...
  October 6th, 2024 02:22
• Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful life well lived. Great poem mi amigo
  October 5th, 2024 06:59
• Circles of the invisible (Sorenbarrett) This is quite a journey filled with amazing imagery. Very pleasant to
  October 5th, 2024 06:58
• Walking By Our River Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful poem. Took me on a journey down by the riverside
  October 4th, 2024 02:50
• Running late (Sorenbarrett) A lucky result. Great story and well constructed. I like the rhyme. Well...
  October 3rd, 2024 18:50
• Grandfather\'s Clock. (Goldfinch60) A great item to have in your memory. I enjoyed the enthusiasm of this...
  October 3rd, 2024 06:11
• Music In Life Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Music makes life worthwhile. Great poem mi amigo
  October 2nd, 2024 15:40
• Peace (Tony36) Gotta hope for Peace or we are lost. A Very thoughtful wish
  September 30th, 2024 17:35
• Life is but a dream (Sorenbarrett) This is well done. Very enjoyable. Excellent
  September 30th, 2024 17:33
• Beauty Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A superb poem filled with truth. Very well constructed.Well done
  September 30th, 2024 03:22
• Masters of the universe? (Sorenbarrett) Now this is poetry. I really like the confrontational nature.Well done
  September 28th, 2024 18:52
• Autumnal Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love Autumn. I believe people fall in love in Autumn not Spring....
  September 28th, 2024 18:49
• Loving Light (Cassie58) Now this is what I\'m talkin\' about. Real Poetry. Well done. I love the...
  September 28th, 2024 00:31
• A nation drugged (Sorenbarrett) The world is a mess. This poem is well-constructed and we are right to be...
  September 26th, 2024 20:29
• Our Time Of Jazz. (Goldfinch60) Its always time for Jazz.Good poem to remind people to get their Jazz...
  September 26th, 2024 20:26
• Rain Bringing Life. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful word images here. I can feel the raindrops Well done
  September 24th, 2024 03:23
• Autumn Equinox Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) This is amazing mi amigo Wonderful I love the rhyme and the remarkable...
  September 23rd, 2024 06:09
• Emmaus Experience (Orchidee) The Lord is risen.Great poem
  July 14th, 2024 07:13
• Bag Lady. (Goldfinch60) Mary to the rescue.Well done
  July 14th, 2024 07:11
• My Love Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful sentiment.Well constructed.
  July 10th, 2024 07:41
• Pursuing Peace (Orchidee) What better aim than to pray for Peace. Great write.
  July 10th, 2024 07:40
• courage (Sheta) Courage is a great gift.Sadly the tedium of Life can rob us of our...
  July 7th, 2024 20:27
• Seek First... (Orchidee) This is very well written.I love the attention to detail and the theme of...
  July 7th, 2024 20:24
• A Day Of Music. (Goldfinch60) You really are an inspiration mi amigo.I enjoyed reading this great...
  July 7th, 2024 20:22
• Playing The Game. (Goldfinch60) That\'s a wonderful story.I was taken there with an umbrella.Well done
  July 6th, 2024 17:32
• In Lieu of Flowers (Thomas W Case) This is absolutely beautiful.You are a true Poet mi amigo
  July 5th, 2024 22:21
• Thomas\' Tale (Orchidee) I\'m learning so much about the Bible without actually reading .Well done
  July 3rd, 2024 07:30
• No, There Will Be No Hurricane Tonight. (Goldfinch60) What a tale of destruction.Nature sure gets angry some times.Great poem...
  July 3rd, 2024 07:28
• We Will Return. (Goldfinch60) Sounds like a special place and a special occasion.Enjoyable read
  June 30th, 2024 03:25
• Teacher, Soldier, Athlete (Orchidee) Keeping the Faith.very inspirational
  June 30th, 2024 03:23
• Pain, Like Pie (Thomas W Case) This is amazing. Very well done.I think that pain has a name \"My X\"
  June 23rd, 2024 17:21