Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• DEATH (THE BLACK PEN) Life and Death who can tell the difference.I think Life is the one that we...
  November 29th, 2023 15:01
• The Mind (Sam.C) Yes I\'ve never trusted my Mind.It always seems to be angry about...
  November 29th, 2023 14:58
• peace (MCarman) Yes indeed be thankful but carry a gun as well.
  November 27th, 2023 16:04
• Waiting For A Saviour. (Goldfinch60) Here Here. No more waiting.Let\'s be happy by ourselves without that...
  November 27th, 2023 16:01
• Like a sparkling Roman candle – (Amy Michelle Mosier) This is a brief description.It needs a feeling.How did you feel seeing...
  November 26th, 2023 16:02
• Letters (SpiderLotus) This is full of generalisations.Because of that I couldn\'t find any...
  November 26th, 2023 16:00
• In Peace. (Goldfinch60) Peace in the world.There is something to aim at.Nice poem
  November 22nd, 2023 02:23
• PALAISTINE (Gary Booker) Nothing that happens in the Middle East makes any sense.It has been a...
  November 21st, 2023 14:16
• Chasing Sanity (NinjaGirl) We are all just 24 hours away from Stone age.Look at Gaza And Ukraine or...
  November 20th, 2023 17:31
• Stargazing (Vee Mcg) Very well done.Very poetic and thoughtful.
  November 20th, 2023 17:27
• Looking Back The History Of Anne Boleyn (Kinsley Lee) Nicely written.
  November 20th, 2023 17:26
• Our Deep Love. (Goldfinch60) I guess true Love is what we are all searching for.It is amazing that you...
  November 19th, 2023 02:28
• Happy Birthday Dad. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful tribute.Well done.
  November 17th, 2023 14:42
• AN ODE OF GRATITUDE (Bobby O) A lovely tribute. Well done
  November 17th, 2023 14:40
• eye bug / I, bug (Amysliterature) Very impactful.I\'m not sure what is going on here but hey what would I...
  November 17th, 2023 14:38
• Dying (B.E.Poet) Sounds like my honeymoon.Still its all worth it in the end.
  November 14th, 2023 15:50
• Dacrydium (Dara Ó Rinn) I hate it when trees talk.They always sound like they are barking.
  November 14th, 2023 15:49
• Timely Love (Sunnykp) This is yet another tedious poem that confuses Love with Sex without...
  November 14th, 2023 15:46
• Cry me a river (Amalia) This is well written.It lacks an explanation of who is involved but what...
  November 14th, 2023 15:44
• True love exist (Natalie Heisey) This was a very positive view of life.well done
  November 14th, 2023 02:31
• I Hang my Hope on Orion\'s Belt (Sugiura Asuna) A nice reflection.Well done
  November 14th, 2023 02:29
• One Day More. (Goldfinch60) Each day is a gift.At least you can appreciate it.By far my favourite...
  November 14th, 2023 02:28
• Rise up (David A Liebermann) A good positive poem.Well done
  November 12th, 2023 02:22
• The Lady In The Van. (Goldfinch60) Some Nuns have bad habits I\'m afraid.Good fun poem
  November 12th, 2023 02:20
• Le Pouvoir d\'Être: Se Dérouler à Travers le Regard d\'Autrui (GeekSusie) Remember today, this moment, this verse, A reflection of yourself, in...
  November 10th, 2023 15:39
• Home (Gray0328) Home sweet home. Memories are precious.Well written poem.
  November 9th, 2023 15:20
• Fighting For Peace? (Goldfinch60) War is just part of the deal.The saddest part.
  November 9th, 2023 02:30
• The Day She Went Away (Hunar Miglani) Yet another tedious failed relationship poem.How many million times does...
  November 8th, 2023 14:30
• Let’s Walk Together On The Same Path… (G.Cabús) Happiness is okay.A nice goal
  November 8th, 2023 14:29
• Thumb Stump (Gray0328) Wow that\'s painful. At least you have a story to tell the grandchildren
  November 8th, 2023 14:27
• Forty Two Years Today. (Goldfinch60) My Father died with Dementia so I have some idea but you are right to be...
  November 7th, 2023 02:51
• Answering The \'Phone. (Goldfinch60) A great fun story. Well done
  November 5th, 2023 17:33
• Lonely Little Vagina (Thomas W Case) This is very clever .Some humour here and personification of the female...
  November 3rd, 2023 15:01
• Beauty Is Light. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful sentiment.Well done
  November 3rd, 2023 02:37
• That Glorious Game. (Goldfinch60) It is a great game.This is a nice tribute.well done
  October 30th, 2023 15:45
• CONCISE EXCELL (Bobby O) Nice tribute. Well done
  October 30th, 2023 15:43
• winter (Joshi) This is okay.Sadly I have never seen snow so I can\'t relate
  October 30th, 2023 15:41
• The girl\'s world (Sk) Who is \"she\" and why should the reader care? This needs names to engage...
  October 30th, 2023 15:40
• The Meeting With Someone I Once Loved (Madds) Who are you talking to and why would I feel comfortable...
  October 30th, 2023 15:37
• Breadwork. (Goldfinch60) I always think of you as a bread winner.Lovely poem
  October 28th, 2023 02:23
• remember the brave (Jim56) I guess we have to live with War. It affects us all. Nice poem
  October 27th, 2023 15:52
• Timeless Square (Gray0328) This was a confusing disappointment.While it is well structured after 400...
  October 27th, 2023 15:49
• IN CLARITY MIST (1 SIGFRIDSSON) This is a clunky read.Because there are so many words missing the meaning...
  October 27th, 2023 15:45
• Ex lover (Emyralle) Yet another failed relationship poem.They are really tedious
  October 27th, 2023 15:44
• Sun On The Sea, (Goldfinch60) Life doesn\'t get much better than that.Well done mi amigo
  October 25th, 2023 21:22
• Analog Of The Brain (Thomas W Case) This is quite true.The creative mind can be a joy and a curse.Well written
  October 25th, 2023 21:20
• Ghost (Moco) This is okay.Sad in places but hey that\'s relationships for you.They all...
  October 24th, 2023 15:12
• Rise Above: From Fool to Sage (GeekSusie) The demon drink. I hate the fact that Alcohol ruins so many lives I am...
  October 24th, 2023 15:10
• WHEN A STRONG AND FRESH WIND... (Natalie Gladmir) This is okay.The rhyme is forced in some places but I like the cadence.It...
  October 24th, 2023 15:06
• Calliope Inspiration. (Goldfinch60) I always feel good when I read your poems.Thank you compadre
  October 18th, 2023 02:24
• Just Pretend (Constant0123456789) This is very good.I guess well all have to pretend.Very perceptive
  October 16th, 2023 15:05
• Snow (FallingAwake2) I\'ve never seen the snow so I can\'t relate.Nice poem however
  October 16th, 2023 02:04
• Tenderness by Leonid Martinow (Ksey_Gan) Without names this is meaningless. The reader is not engaged
  October 15th, 2023 15:08
• The Lost Ones (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️) Oh I think we are all lost.Have you ever tried to find your way through...
  October 15th, 2023 15:06
•   It May Blow Me In The Right Direction (Teddy.15) This is very pleasant.It sums up a wonderful day out.Delightful
  October 12th, 2023 02:12
• JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version) (Bobby O) I have to agree here.This made me revisit the Jazz greats.There should be...
  October 11th, 2023 13:42
• The Walk Up The Hill. (Goldfinch60) I know some places like that.This poem took me there.Well done
  October 11th, 2023 02:00
• What love is (13LaurenD) I have read 10 million \"failed\" relationship poems.This is perhaps the...
  October 8th, 2023 16:37
• Grandmothers (Cameron Pfiester) You are lucky to have a good grandmother.Most of them are dithering idiots...
  October 8th, 2023 16:33
• The Years Ahead. (Goldfinch60) Best wishes mi amigo.
  October 8th, 2023 16:30
• Dwindling Numbers To Win The Contest (Weep little lion girl) I read this twice but I guess I\'m too dumb to understand what is going...
  October 7th, 2023 23:06
• Simple Understanding. (Goldfinch60) An irresistible argument.Nicely done
  October 5th, 2023 16:00
• Gratefulness. (Goldfinch60) You have been fortunate and what is more important you know it.Well...
  October 4th, 2023 15:22
• Hell has come (Ady123) I knew hell was here when Donald Trump got into the white house.Nice poem
  October 4th, 2023 15:19
• The Courage to Be: Embracing My Authenticity (GeekSusie) I like this.It shows a great deal of courage.Gay pride let God himself say...
  October 4th, 2023 15:17
• Untitled for a reason (AlitaOpal) This is like the Spelling test I had in Year 8.I got 3 out of 10.I tried...
  October 3rd, 2023 22:06
• A Night AT The Musicals. (Goldfinch60) Nice tribute.I love the musicals.Singing in the rain...Just singing in the...
  September 30th, 2023 19:21
• Love! (a stream of thought poem) (Joakim Bergen) This is word play.Sadly I have no idea what it is about but hey what would...
  September 30th, 2023 15:26
• Love? Affection? Care? (SOHAN BALAJI SG) Sadly Love and Happiness don\'t exist but hey what wouldI know,
  September 30th, 2023 15:24
• I LEFT (Bobby O) Women ya can\'t live with them and ya can\'t kill \'em.Never mind at least...
  September 30th, 2023 15:21
• Discover (Charu Bhuyar) This is okay.It is a little hard for me to understand but hey what would I...
  September 30th, 2023 15:18
• Lost Cat (Coffeecatsbliss) Yet another tedious failed relationship poem.This must be the number 10...
  September 29th, 2023 15:10
• What it means to be black in America (Lexi) I have a dream today.The answer is to seek out your own and carry a gun.
  September 29th, 2023 15:08
• The Gift (KSChambers) This is word play.Sadly I have no idea what it is about.The problem is...
  September 29th, 2023 15:04
• I am asking for it (Amysliterature) This has problems.Firstly the metaphors drown the meaning.Secondly there...
  September 27th, 2023 15:48
• Imperfections (Bhumika Chowdhury_1437) I have never experienced Love so I cant really understand any of this,
  September 26th, 2023 03:24
• FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O) This is incredible.So much wisdom here.Sadly I\'m too dumb to understand...
  September 24th, 2023 21:52
• Such A Beautiful Game. (Goldfinch60) Great match and a wonderful tribute poem.Well done.
  September 24th, 2023 04:25
• MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O) Powerful verse here.A tough life lesson.Well done
  September 23rd, 2023 06:58
• You, Me, Everyone (The Fife Wanderer) Nice guys finish last
  September 21st, 2023 16:34
• Slowly (Serhat Doğan) This is very thoughtful.Sadly its a little short but hey so is life
  September 20th, 2023 00:25
• i hate these hands (Scottstreet) Hands are just tools.Its the mind that needs to heal.
  September 20th, 2023 00:24
• CRAZED and CONFUSED (Bobby O) Some tough realisations here..I hope time will heal.
  September 19th, 2023 03:20
• Broken Heart Fixed. (Goldfinch60) This is a sad story filled with hope and joy at the end.Gotta love the...
  September 19th, 2023 03:17
• Enchanted moments (Chiki1601) This is wonderful.certainly filled with joy and happiness.I loved the...
  September 16th, 2023 00:25
• Humdrum Asylum (KASH Moony) welcome to Asylum Earth where crazy people get rich and become...
  September 16th, 2023 00:24
• To be Born (PKF) Welcome to this crazy world.We all know hoe you feel.The secret is do what...
  September 16th, 2023 00:22
• God\'s Humour. (Goldfinch60) This is delightful.God doing comedy.I enjoyed this.It is hard to reconcile...
  September 14th, 2023 21:40
• MONK and MY AUNT (Bobby O) The trifecta: Aunt Carol,he and Thelonius Monk.This inspired me to listen...
  September 14th, 2023 21:35
• Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb (Bobby O) She\'s making you an offer you cant refuse.Enjoyable read.
  September 10th, 2023 17:27
• Our Issue In Life. (Goldfinch60) Oh this is so true .The temptation every day.Mine is chocolate...
  September 10th, 2023 17:23
• HEALING HEART (Suetah) This is quite powerful>I like the rhyme.Some wisdom here as well.Well done
  September 10th, 2023 00:08
• UNSELFISH RAMBLE (Bobby O) This is a powerful poem.Actually it reads like a song.It just needs a...
  September 9th, 2023 00:29
• Smear (PoeticBiscuit) The problem with asking questions in a poem is that it is impossible to...
  September 8th, 2023 15:55
• Picture perfect (DREEK0) I read this twice but there are so many mistakes I don\'t know what it...
  September 8th, 2023 15:55
• Shackles & chains (Natalie Heisey) This is quite powerful.A call to arms..well done
  September 5th, 2023 17:00
• Progression (Steve Goldenfort) I read this twice and while it is well constructed I have no idea what it...
  September 5th, 2023 16:58
• Message for Nora (ShrektheDuck) Keep it friendly.Relationships always fail.Love and Hate are the same
  September 5th, 2023 16:56
• Replace Coffee? (Goldfinch60) I need a cup of coffee after this poem.The bag pipes are glorious.Well
  September 5th, 2023 03:17
• The sickness of sorrow (A.B. Jakobsen) The author needs to lighten up.Maybe see a doctor about depression...
  September 4th, 2023 16:10