Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• Impressionado 1 (Introverted Sage) I don\'t understand this kind of poetry.It is stream of consciousness and...
  April 24th, 2023 16:44
• The Heartbeat Of The Universe. (Goldfinch60) I love that song.I think it was an inspiration for hundreds of other...
  April 24th, 2023 03:23
• Homeless (WiccanWoman) When a society is based on Money as Jesus said there will always be the...
  April 22nd, 2023 17:28
• Earth Day Poems (Leslie Anne Perry) Don\'t worry.Covid 19 was just the beginning.Another disaster will wipe...
  April 22nd, 2023 17:25
• Rough;Tough (Cofhypieces) This is too rough to read.I gave up.Its repetitive and tedious
  April 22nd, 2023 17:22
• Choices (Emily Bradshaw) This is quite interesting.The trouble with boys is they grow into...
  April 22nd, 2023 17:21
• Requiem Of A Blame (Man With No Name) I read this twice but it is so convoluted I really have no idea what it is...
  April 22nd, 2023 01:14
• I Have A Dream. (Goldfinch60) I don\'t think anyone would disagree with that dream.Wonderful writing
  April 22nd, 2023 01:11
• Like a Mother (Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer) From womb to tomb.That\'s life on Earth
  April 22nd, 2023 01:09
• Sorry I Am Alive. (Goldfinch60) Its tough when you get older and have medical problems.I know from...
  April 20th, 2023 04:22
• Trajectory (Cyriac maliakkal) I tried reading this but it just consists of statements that are not...
  April 17th, 2023 16:48
• Bollocky Bastard (Jenny.g) I started to read this and stopped at the \"c\" word.Sorry that\'s not my...
  April 17th, 2023 16:46
• Life (Alice Ip) This is okay.Reflections of a persons life.Sadly most people life is...
  April 17th, 2023 16:42
• The Shame of Robespierre (Perry) I read this twice but nothing is explained.I think it has something to do...
  April 17th, 2023 16:40
• Sculpture Of Happiness. (Goldfinch60) This is so true.Well done.Ya gotta love the Carpenters.
  April 17th, 2023 03:08
• Consumed (Tallisman) This is well written.Certainly a good depiction of the modern...
  April 14th, 2023 16:17
• The Battle (Miss Mystic) True love it always shines bright
  April 14th, 2023 16:15
• Attached - Daisie-Lyn Fuller (Daisie-Lyn Fuller) This is quite an accurate look most failed relationships.They are...
  April 11th, 2023 00:25
• Dripping (MKL) How depressing.I really struggle to see the purpose of this writing.
  April 11th, 2023 00:23
• Never Here, Never There (A Boy With Roses) I tried to read this but it is so unpleasant I gave up.The main problem is...
  April 10th, 2023 17:29
• Do I Value What Most? (???.) i dont know what this is.All i know is that it is not poetry
  April 10th, 2023 17:26
• Haiku # 2 (Norman Flagtea) Well said.All social media is there so people can hate each other without...
  April 9th, 2023 17:12
• Once there was a time (Sorenbarrett) i read this but there are too many big words that are not
  April 9th, 2023 06:09
• reverie (Peter Gates) Is this a spelling list.I have dyslexia so I hate spelling tests.There are...
  April 8th, 2023 06:32
• 1 (Blaze) I prefer 2 it\'s a much better number.
  April 7th, 2023 04:07
• Grandpa’s dress sense (Chris Duffy) This is horrible.Making fun of the elderly is disgusting.Lets hope you...
  April 5th, 2023 16:16
• Forever (L. Zacarias) I have no idea what this is.All I know is its not poetry
  April 5th, 2023 16:12
• The fragile dream (Domilla) Umm this is why I live alone.Reartyionships are doomed from the tart.Still...
  April 5th, 2023 16:11
• Peaceful company - a ballad in prose (Norman Flagtea) Death is a doorway.nice poem.
  April 5th, 2023 16:09
• Mismatch (Isu) Yet another rant about a failed relationship.It reads like a Facebook...
  April 5th, 2023 00:07
• on writing a love letter (Peter Gates) I tried to read this but words are missing so I gave up.
  April 4th, 2023 06:17
• But Where Has The Time Gone? (Goldfinch60) That the eternal question.Even Einstein himself said it was an illusion.If...
  April 4th, 2023 01:15
• Understanding (Kmills) I read this twice but I guess I am too dumb to understand it. Too many big...
  April 4th, 2023 00:32
• The Prince Of Sorrow (Andino) I read this twice but I don\'t believe in the devil so I couldn\'t relate.
  April 4th, 2023 00:30
• Sea of Memories (Undreamed_friend) This is okay.Very thoughtful and poetic
  April 3rd, 2023 16:17
• What Lies Inside (SweetOdodoGrass43) I read this twice but there are too many big words.I didn\'t understand...
  April 1st, 2023 20:40
• Jesus (Cedrick) This is okay if you believe in fairy tales.
  April 1st, 2023 20:39
• Family in the Flowers (Ernie lawton) This is okay.It needs the characters to be named.Otherwise it has no...
  March 31st, 2023 16:11
• Dog Show (Hacklec) I hate Dogs.They serve no purpose any more.The poem is tedious
  March 31st, 2023 16:08
• Lonely (Sorenbarrett) Who cares??Go get a puppy.
  March 30th, 2023 16:11
• overindulgent (Lovedud) I read this twice but sadly the metaphor drowns the meaning.That\'s if...
  March 30th, 2023 16:10
• Red flags (Emmalouise) Yet another failed relationship whinge.Why would anyone want to read...
  March 30th, 2023 16:09
• I\'m still learning (Sunset Desires) I tried reading this but the characters are not named so there is no...
  March 30th, 2023 16:07
• I\'m still learning (Sunset Desires) I tried reading this but the characters are not named so there is no...
  March 30th, 2023 16:07
• To rhyme, or not to is the question (EvenwheniLie) Great poetry rhymes.That\'s what helps to make it great.Anyway you are not...
  March 30th, 2023 02:56
• RAIN OF POEM (Samprikta Paul) This is not finished.I really have no idea what it is about.It reads like...
  March 29th, 2023 15:48
• Where are you love? (Jod-tow) There are too many cliches here to have any clear meaning.Nothing is...
  March 29th, 2023 15:46
• Black Knights (Davion Ray) I read this twice but I have no idea what its about.Something about...
  March 29th, 2023 15:44
• The Writers War (TheLittlePoet) This is okay I guess .Unfortunately nothing is explained.It is hard for...
  March 27th, 2023 18:46
• The Unknown Battle (SweetOdodoGrass43) Its a sad truth.Words can kill.Well said
  March 27th, 2023 18:31
• Boss and me (Rahulwairagar) Normally I like rhyme but this is tedious to read.Nothing is explained.
  March 27th, 2023 05:11
• chiseled out (Arqios) I read this twice but cannot see the purpose.It\'s certainly not poetry
  March 27th, 2023 05:09
• These Men Of Wales. (Goldfinch60) Now that\'s what I\'m talkin\' \'bout.the welsh have such wonderful...
  March 26th, 2023 01:56
• Poetry (Dr. Soma) Because there are no names the reader is not engaged.The reader doesn\'t...
  March 26th, 2023 00:36
• Entropy (EvenwheniLie) It is not \"got\" to die.It should be \"have\" to die.Learn English before...
  March 25th, 2023 15:46
• One Size (Kayla.terry) This is a clunky read that goers nowhere.Who cares about the shirt you...
  March 24th, 2023 14:57
• Byproduct (John Prophet) Is this a spelling list.I have dyslexia so Spelling tests are not fair.
  March 24th, 2023 14:55
• Music In Time. (Goldfinch60) So much beautiful music and so little time.Well said.I was just listening...
  March 24th, 2023 03:09
• Boom! (Jeff2510) Just keep taking the medication and things will improve I\'m sure.A sad...
  March 22nd, 2023 15:30
• They were her all, and she was the \"they\" (ForeverAbi) I read this twice but because the characters are not named the reader is...
  March 22nd, 2023 15:28
• the cycle ride (NafisaSB) Good story.I liked the rhyme as well
  March 22nd, 2023 01:46
• The fears of the world (Nature) Some good advice here
  March 22nd, 2023 01:45
• Death Of Joy (NilavroNill) This is okay.I have no idea what it is about because nothing is explained...
  March 21st, 2023 02:11
• POSTCARD STORIES (Shadow424) Is this a Spelling test.I have dyslexia so I\'m not good and Spelling .Why...
  March 20th, 2023 21:41
• Crucifixion (Satishverma) I read this twice but cannot understand a single word.To be meaningful you...
  March 20th, 2023 21:40
• My Imagination (River) I actually found the real world to be threatening and boring.I too live in...
  March 20th, 2023 06:02
• Shakespeare Doesn\'t Live Here Anymore (Charles69) Although a lot of work has been put in to write this I could really...
  March 18th, 2023 05:56
• Walk Back In (Ambersaldiva) Because the characters are not named the reader is not engaged and...
  March 16th, 2023 16:09
• The Tigris (Markthetabor) This was irritating to read.There is too much space between words.It made...
  March 16th, 2023 16:06
• The Boy With Warm Hands (Gie) This ia okay.Sadly when you ask questions in a poem you don\'t get any...
  March 16th, 2023 16:04
• Pointless (John Prophet) The point of Life is to get angry with God.And in that anger you will find...
  March 15th, 2023 16:34
• \"Spring\" (KACHOW) I really don\'t understand Haiku.Poets love words yet Haiku tries to use...
  March 15th, 2023 06:02
• Silence Kills (NewWolf) Silence is golden except when women are involved.
  March 14th, 2023 05:19
• Back to you Billy, for ways I whiled away herding ennui (Poet2rhyme4tommorrow) I read this twice but didn\'t understand a single word.The mystery to me...
  March 11th, 2023 15:34
• THE FREAK OF NATURE (Shayl) This is a little self indulgent.I mean anxiety is a serious mental illness...
  March 11th, 2023 01:47
• V.A.Z.R.A.E.J.J.(Vaz-Raejj): (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) This makes no sense to me.You need to read some real poets and try again
  March 11th, 2023 01:45
• Post-Cancer (M.E.M.) There is a pull of the tourniquet around my bicep as my fingernails dig...
  March 9th, 2023 21:16
• To Love and Live (Alvin P) What a shame Love doesn\'t exist.You are confusing it with Lust but hey...
  March 9th, 2023 15:56
• Post-Cancer (M.E.M.) I can\'t read this because there are words missing. Its good that you...
  March 9th, 2023 15:55
• It’s no Citizen Kane (An Apocalypse in Noir) (Pazuzu) This is quite good.Reminds me of The Big Sleep or The Maltese Falcon.Gotta...
  March 9th, 2023 15:52
• It started with an ending (A lockless key) This is a bit confronting.Lots of unforgivable things here.Many...
  March 9th, 2023 02:01
• Sands of Time (John_Bingham) Time certainly is a mystery.Einstein said it was an illusion. It is used...
  March 8th, 2023 05:14
• Gravity is love …gravity is a woman (Domilla) This is certainly a tribute to Women.I am not sure all women can be...
  March 8th, 2023 05:11
• Impeccable (Satishverma) I read this twice but the metaphors drown the meaning so I really have no...
  March 6th, 2023 20:58
• Newly-Felt. (Fay Slimm.) I read this twice and while it is well written I am too dumb to understand...
  March 6th, 2023 05:36
• The Beautiful World Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Thank you for reminding me how much I love music.Well done I am dusting...
  March 6th, 2023 05:34
• Small To Large Steps. (Goldfinch60) Life is a dance put you have to learn the steps.This is well done filled...
  March 4th, 2023 04:48
• Ok To Admit You’re Not Ok (Mark The Phenomenon) This is okay.I like the message and the rhyme Well done
  March 3rd, 2023 02:00
• I am so sorry (Pocev_Gjoshe) This is a chunky read.It is condescending to women and really quite...
  March 1st, 2023 17:09
• The Tiger (Kinsley Lee) This is okay.I like the rhyme and the use of adjectives.It seems...
  March 1st, 2023 17:07
• Sun! (Joakim Bergen) Talking to the Sun is a little confusing.It reads like a script rather...
  February 28th, 2023 17:28
• Some Resent Our Comment and Become Absent (Mvvenkataraman) Commenting is a greater art than actually writing a poem. Sadly most...
  February 28th, 2023 17:26
• Brain Awakening. (Goldfinch60) That\'s also true of the word Australia.Every A in Australia is pronounced...
  February 28th, 2023 02:21
• Interloper (PurpleGlasses) I found this confusing but hey what would I know
  February 27th, 2023 05:16
• Insanity (Sorenbarrett) This is quite confronting.Just like modern life is.Well done
  February 27th, 2023 05:14
• AT OUR AGE!! (Goldfinch60) Age shall not weary them Nor the sciatic nerve condemn
  February 25th, 2023 02:11
• Everyday (Chemtrails) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry) It is difficult to work out the purpose of this.I suspect there is no...
  February 23rd, 2023 02:41
• Some day (Norman Flagtea) This is unfinished and frankly has no meaning.The reader is completely...
  February 23rd, 2023 02:40
• my everything. (Ayathebest55) This doesn\'t make sense. If you wanted to forget someone why write a poem...
  February 22nd, 2023 23:30
• The Complexity of Being Human. (Aurelian Swift) This is okay.It actually has a coherent theme.Well done
  February 22nd, 2023 20:17