Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• The Time Has Come. (Goldfinch60) t sounds like a wonderful adventure. Enjoyed reading. It is eternally...
  January 6th, 2025 04:41
• Gone (Sorenbarrett) This is so well constructed. I like the rhyme and the nostalgic mood. Well...
  January 6th, 2025 04:39
• Another New Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Another day another opportunity. wonderful salute to the sun
  January 5th, 2025 04:48
• My Heart Still Beats The Same (Poetic Licence) Sticks and stones will break your bones but your heart still beats the...
  January 4th, 2025 15:16
• read to your satisfaction (Arqios) Wow this is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout. I hope you don\'t mind me calling...
  January 4th, 2025 15:13
• Travelling Through Life. (Goldfinch60) The summary of a life well lived. And it is not over yet. Excellent. Well...
  January 2nd, 2025 14:43
• Think Twice Before Sending (Poetic Licence) Some good advice here.So well constructed. I love the rhyme and cadnce....
  January 2nd, 2025 14:40
• spaces we inhabit: mornings (Arqios) Short and sweet. Well written mi amigo
  January 2nd, 2025 14:38
• Poetry Sharing (Tony36) A wonderful encounter. Well written
  January 2nd, 2025 14:37
• The New Year Of Love, Joy And Peace. (Goldfinch60) wonderful poem mi amigo. Happy New year to you and your family
  January 1st, 2025 15:29
• I Might Be A Lunatic (Poetic Licence) We have no choice. We have to be Optimistic for our kid\'s sake. Great...
  January 1st, 2025 15:27
• New gods (Sorenbarrett) This is quite good.It captures the changing nature of Mythology.Excellent...
  January 1st, 2025 15:25
• Mud Maid in Winter (Cassie58) The mud maid is an amazing living sculpture. Changes with the...
  January 1st, 2025 15:23
• Happy new year (Tony36) Happy new year to you also.Timely poem
  January 1st, 2025 15:19
• these are the days (Arqios) Days nights and mornings.Now that covers it all.I liked the cadence of...
  December 31st, 2024 07:26
• The Last Poem This Year. (Goldfinch60) Happiness peace and Love now there is a good way to live.Enjoyable poem
  December 31st, 2024 07:24
• Bugged out (Sorenbarrett) This is an interesting take on finding bugs or shells of them.I liked the...
  December 31st, 2024 07:23
• Evil Apple Tree (Or Is It Me) (Poetic Licence) A great poem.it is hard to get it right in the garden.Well written I liked...
  December 31st, 2024 07:20
• Five Years Ago Today Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) A nice tribute to a loving wife. You were fortunate to know her I\'m...
  December 30th, 2024 04:08
• I Have a GUN ( But we can talk) (Poetic Licence) Great poem about the stupidity of War. People killing each other is the...
  December 30th, 2024 04:06
• Love To Eternity. (Goldfinch60) This is special. I particulary like the line about laughing together. It...
  December 28th, 2024 15:33
• Take What`s Left (Poetic Licence) Oh dear something personal going on here. Still I hope it works out
  December 28th, 2024 15:31
• Shadows (Sorenbarrett) This is an interesting rhyme technique. It is very much a song writer\'s...
  December 28th, 2024 15:29
• grappling with Today (Arqios) Wow this is special. So many good lines here. I particularly like \"Dance...
  December 28th, 2024 15:26
• Cooking (Tony36) A fun poem about cooking.Enjoyable
  December 28th, 2024 15:22
• Hole (Sorenbarrett) This is why I don\'t drink. I hate waking up in a dark well. Good poem
  December 27th, 2024 18:32
• They (Tony36) Wow this is the cold hard truth. Welcome to Life.Slavery until you...
  December 27th, 2024 18:29
• OH (MY DAD is SANTA) (Poetic Licence) This is amazing. Great fun story of believing in Santa. enjoyable
  December 27th, 2024 18:27
• All That Jazz. (Goldfinch60) What an amazing tribute to an incredible form of music.Enjoyed reading
  December 27th, 2024 03:54
• through the eyes of a stranger (Arqios) Wow this is amazing.The humble reader is taken on a journey of life that...
  December 26th, 2024 15:13
• The Turkeys Done A Runner (Poetic Licence) The Turkey is hiding in the straw. I saw him in a dream. Wonderful fun
  December 26th, 2024 15:08
• Decisions. (Goldfinch60) Decisions indeed.I usually make the wrong decisions but hey that\'s...
  December 26th, 2024 15:06
• Night (Sorenbarrett) Wow now this is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout.real poetry. rhyme cadence...
  December 26th, 2024 15:04
• Errors In Life. (Goldfinch60) That is so true Politicians and Managers blame everyone else except...
  December 24th, 2024 05:26
• Darling I Bought You A Hoover (Poetic Licence) A wonderful Christmas story. Enjoyable. Well done
  December 23rd, 2024 21:15
• Ax of division (Sorenbarrett) This is an interesting style. Creates a Charles Dicken like atmosphere....
  December 23rd, 2024 21:12
• Light To Brightness. (Goldfinch60) The light of Love and the light of day.Wonderful poem
  December 22nd, 2024 02:53
• God`s Gift To Us (Poetic Licence) Sad but true. God sure has left the Devil in charge, It takes strength and...
  December 21st, 2024 14:55
• Longest Night Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Wow a beautiful story.Enjoable. The birth of Light
  December 21st, 2024 14:54
• God\'s Christmas (Sorenbarrett) A thoughtful poem.Brings some reality to the fantasy of Christmas.Made me...
  December 21st, 2024 14:52
• 21-12-24 (Arqios) The truth about growing up.It can be a lot different.Thoughtful poem
  December 21st, 2024 14:49
• Wanna fall in love? (Rhmn_7) A vivid exploration of the many ways Love can happened.Enjoyable read
  December 21st, 2024 14:47
• The Ride (Tony36) Freedom is worth having even if only for a short time.Good poem
  December 21st, 2024 14:43
• Counting Blessings (Cassie58) A wonderful poem including the joy and the sorrow of this confusing world....
  December 21st, 2024 14:40
• The Day Music Died. (Goldfinch60) I love Buddy Holly songs.Always have. Every one including the Beatles...
  December 19th, 2024 05:16
• Legacy (Cassie58) sounds like Scotland the Brave.I think some of my ancestors came from...
  December 18th, 2024 22:03
• Love Is All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) This is very well constructed.I love the music in the words.Love is all
  December 17th, 2024 14:46
• Time Cannot Heal (Poetic Licence) You are right.Time does not heal anything.I think that we are meant to...
  December 17th, 2024 14:44
• autumn chofu (Arqios) Poetry in motion.Very powerful . The autumn leaves falling like a ballet...
  December 17th, 2024 14:42
• Call of the earth (Sorenbarrett) In each life there is a rise and fall. There secret is not to care.A...
  December 17th, 2024 14:40
• Poseidon\'s bones (Sorenbarrett) Fascinating story about Meerchaum. I got a feeling I actually learned...
  December 16th, 2024 06:11
• Fragile (Cassie58) So many beautiful images here. It lets the imagination run wild and...
  December 14th, 2024 15:20
• Vlad and Donald (Poetic Licence) Every circus must have a clown.Looks like we have two clowns; Donald Mc...
  December 14th, 2024 15:17
• THE MIRROR TALKS (Bobby O) A deep self evaluation.These are doubts and disappointments we all have. A...
  December 14th, 2024 15:11
• Forever Love Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Love takes the prize.Nicely done.I loce Cilla Black as well. Great read
  December 14th, 2024 15:08
• Fisherman\'s song (Sorenbarrett) So many vivid images here. So well constructed. A hint of Jesus as well
  December 14th, 2024 15:06
• Christmas Time (Tony36) Gotta love Christmas.A great tribute here to a great holiday.Well done
  December 14th, 2024 15:02
• M\"mmm !!! (Poetic Licence) Sounds like my girlfriend on a date. Always ends in NO.Just kidding
  December 12th, 2024 03:55
• Glimmer of Frost (Arqios) Half the world, half the time is Frozen. This certainly paints a vivid...
  December 12th, 2024 03:54
• The Shadows. (Goldfinch60) They were fantastic. Cliff Richards and the Shadows. They inspired the...
  December 12th, 2024 03:51
• Undeserving (Sorenbarrett) This is well constructed. I like the rhyme. Guilt and shame are always...
  December 12th, 2024 03:48
• Ella Fitzgerald Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love Ella.I mean \"Summertime\" and \"Aint misbehaven\" are...
  December 10th, 2024 15:29
• Words of the prophets (Sorenbarrett) Out of the dust emerges the truth.This is a sad and powerful...
  December 10th, 2024 15:26
• unlikely treasures (Arqios) Pickaxes unearthing jewels, Great work. It captures the creative mind
  December 10th, 2024 15:24
• HERALDS HEAL (Bobby O) A tragic tale so often happens. Tears and smiles. I like the optimistic...
  December 10th, 2024 15:21
• The girl across the hall (Tony36) Oh I remember that feeling. Well written about the trepidation of...
  December 10th, 2024 15:18
• Sailing To Peace Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) I would like a boat on that river. The river of time and a place of peace....
  December 9th, 2024 06:00
• We are not in Control (Ad Man) (Poetic Licence) This is quite an amazing poem.It is an essay about the good and bad...
  December 9th, 2024 05:59
• The man (Sorenbarrett) Fathers and sons.Its a complex relationship. Well worth exploring
  December 9th, 2024 05:56
• where is home? (Arqios) This is intriguing.powerful metaphors here.
  December 9th, 2024 05:54
• In Amongst The Blackbirds. (Goldfinch60) What a delightful start to the day.Feeding the birds.They are the most...
  December 8th, 2024 06:05
• The perfect poem (Sorenbarrett) We all are Living poetry with feelings and expressions.
  December 8th, 2024 06:03
• life\'s no faerie tale (Arqios) this is so amazing.I love the cadence and rhyme. I,m not sure who she is...
  December 8th, 2024 06:01
• Dreams and Nighmares (Poetic Licence) This is very insightful revealing a real vulnerability. It is always a...
  December 8th, 2024 05:59
• Reaching (Cassie58) This is great fun. Certainly keeps you interested from the start to the...
  December 8th, 2024 01:48
• Natural Art. (Goldfinch60) This is very beautiful. Filled with wonderful detail/very enjoyable...
  December 6th, 2024 02:50
• Creation of Life (Poetic Licence) They say never put all your eggs in one basket but hey what would I know....
  December 5th, 2024 15:24
• The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60) Apathy can be a good weapon against a meaningless attack, Wise words...
  December 5th, 2024 15:22
• Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58) The perils of communication. A really thoughtful poem that that highlights...
  December 5th, 2024 15:20
• Hidden Garden (reverse nonet) (Arqios) Cleverly constructed. It creates a wonderful image. Excellent
  December 5th, 2024 15:17
• Sitting By My River. (Goldfinch60) What a wonderful scene and and an amazing poem.It took me down to the...
  December 4th, 2024 17:42
• Mourn the morn (Sorenbarrett) This made me think of the days on the farm where everything is dependent...
  December 4th, 2024 17:40
• home is where the heart beats (Arqios) This is a thoughtful piece. Home certainly is important.Well done
  December 4th, 2024 17:37
• Sponge (Tony36) If it was that simple but most human sadness is beyond cure. Thoughtful...
  December 4th, 2024 17:36
• Children Of War (Poetic Licence) Its the saddest thing to see children involved in war. This is quite an...
  December 4th, 2024 17:34
• When the Sun Illuminates a Sapphire Sky (Cassie58) Wow this is special.I was transported to that spot.I made you a cup of...
  December 3rd, 2024 20:39
• Jewel discarded (Sorenbarrett) This is a great poem mi amigo. I read it twice. Each poem contains a...
  December 3rd, 2024 15:02
• Memories of the 70`s (Music Fans) (Poetic Licence) WOW this is quite a list. It took me on a trip down amnesia lane....
  December 2nd, 2024 21:42
• To The Gym. (Goldfinch60) I hear what you are saying.The Gym is for young people to show off.I have...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:05
• where I could no longer go home (Arqios) This is really well constructed. I like the rhyme.It is a strange feeling...
  December 2nd, 2024 06:02
• Music Time Machine. (Goldfinch60) This is so true.I heard Joni Mitchel on the radio and even after 40 years...
  November 30th, 2024 17:58
• Omnipresent (Sorenbarrett) So many ways to say Goodbye.A very interesting poem.Thoughtful
  November 30th, 2024 17:55
• Boy and Bonnet (Arqios) What a delightful poem. Love is a many splendered thing.Enjoyed
  November 30th, 2024 17:53
• Flood (Cassie58) What a wonderful look at a natural event.A very positive and delightful...
  November 30th, 2024 17:51
• winter’s embrace (Arqios) This is clever.I have never seen snow so it transported me there.Excellent
  November 29th, 2024 14:47
• No sugar (Sorenbarrett) It is all an illusion and a puppet show. Nice poem short and sweet like my...
  November 29th, 2024 14:45
• Seen With Sadness (Cassie58) What a lovely tribute to a much admired lady. Life was tough in those days...
  November 28th, 2024 02:12
• All American turkey (Sorenbarrett) Sounds like a lot of fun. A lot to be thankful for. Good fun poem
  November 28th, 2024 02:09
• Jazzy Night Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Sounds like a great night of all that Jazz. Great poem
  November 28th, 2024 02:07
• Death Asked Life. (Goldfinch60) This is amazing.So much wisdom in a small place.Well done compadre
  November 26th, 2024 16:57