Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• Aspirational Ascent (Orchidee) Someones deep beliefs written done.Well done
  July 19th, 2023 03:10
• Dosti (Chiki1601) This is wonderful.I loved the rhyme and the skillful cadence.A masterpiece
  July 19th, 2023 03:09
• Today I went to the Valley of Erudition. (David Wakeling) Thank you so much
  July 18th, 2023 19:26
• Plea For Change (Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu) I hope things improve in Kenya.Sadly God doesn\'t care
  July 17th, 2023 17:15
• A plum from God (David Wakeling) Okay.Thanks for reading
  July 17th, 2023 17:08
• My cat ([email protected]) I hate cats.
  July 14th, 2023 17:56
• SOME PLANS ARE TRICKY (Bobby O) Great poem of self disclosure.I particularly like the line \"She read my...
  July 14th, 2023 17:55
• The Supermarket on Forsaken Street. (David Wakeling) Thank you very much for your intelligent comments
  July 14th, 2023 17:50
• Ignored By Others. (Goldfinch60) This is well done.Noone could argue with the wisdom here..Beautiful music...
  July 12th, 2023 18:13
• Lost at Sea (Zarnold_Lamore) Oh I think we all know the feeling.That is life on a watery planet.Well...
  July 12th, 2023 18:09
• The Strange Visitor. (David Wakeling) Thank you
  July 12th, 2023 18:08
• Close your eyes (David A Liebermann) Happy is a good thing to be.Well done
  July 12th, 2023 01:06
• The Days of Milk and Marmalade (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading.
  July 8th, 2023 03:11
• The Days of Milk and Marmalade (David Wakeling) Thank you for your insight.Much appreciated
  July 7th, 2023 17:33
• The Battle and the Baby (David Wakeling) Indeed.It all makes sense.Thanks for your insight
  July 7th, 2023 01:03
• No Edge (Walter alter) This is odd.It reminds me of a song by Bob Dylan.You think it makes sense...
  July 5th, 2023 17:41
• The Girl With The Starry Dress (Dove) This is an enchanting story.I\'ll get Disney on the phone.
  July 4th, 2023 17:12
• Song of Life (David Wakeling) Indeed.Thanks for reading Andy
  July 4th, 2023 17:11
• When You Are Gone. (Goldfinch60) This is a wonderful poem.Some eternal truths here. Well done.My favourite...
  July 3rd, 2023 07:25
• Sandra (David Wakeling) Thank you.Sandra was a nurse who was working night shift when two men came...
  July 3rd, 2023 07:24
• Silver Moon (David Wakeling) Thank you. Something to look forward to after a hard life.
  July 3rd, 2023 07:19
• Sometimes it rains at night. (David Wakeling) Indeed.There are two sides to every coin.Thanks for commenting
  July 3rd, 2023 07:17
• Keep Moving Forward (13LaurenD) i tried to read this but it kept on going and going and going.I gave...
  June 30th, 2023 17:32
• Our Love For Each Other. (Goldfinch60) This brought a tear to my eye.That song was on the radio when I first fell...
  June 30th, 2023 17:28
• Dire Predictions (Gary Edward Geraci) The problem with asking questions in a poem is that you will not get any...
  June 30th, 2023 17:26
• Love Is (Saxon Crow) Because there are no names the reader is not engaged.It makes no sense
  June 30th, 2023 17:24
• Last like Jesus (Tayama) What a shame Jesus never existed.Still children will believe in fairy...
  June 30th, 2023 17:23
• T.E.L.S.H.A(Telsha) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) This makes no sense at all
  June 30th, 2023 17:22
• To the Deep (Lorrel ONeill) I tried to read this but there are too many words missing so I gave up
  June 29th, 2023 22:33
• Just a memory (Love-Me-Softly) Yet another tedious poem about the failure of relationships.Snooze
  June 27th, 2023 00:28
• ARCHERY CLASSES (Michael Edwards) This is a bit of fun.Well done
  June 27th, 2023 00:27
• Rest in pieces (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading and commenting.
  June 26th, 2023 17:45
• KINDNESS. (David Wakeling) Very kind of you to say
  June 24th, 2023 03:06
• Love\\\\\\\'s Haunting Echo (Marcellus) I read this twice but although I appreciate the word play and the rhyme...
  June 22nd, 2023 17:41
• Distant (PoeticBiscuit) This seems unfinished.The poor reader is left wondering who is talking to...
  June 22nd, 2023 17:39
• Hands (Bevan tse stuart) This is okay.Thew hands are certainly a wonder to behold.Well done
  June 22nd, 2023 17:37
• What A Day. (Goldfinch60) Congratulations a beautiful poem and and ceremony.Von Karajan is my...
  June 21st, 2023 04:39
• THE FARE. (David Wakeling) It costs you one life to live.Death is the fare.
  June 20th, 2023 17:15
• How to burn it away (Bevan tse stuart) This is quite involved and sad.Certainly a very powerful piece.Well done
  June 19th, 2023 17:39
• Dear Dad (Yyonae) There are so many words missing here i couldn\'t understand it which is a...
  June 18th, 2023 17:49
• OBSESSION. (David Wakeling) Thank you so much
  June 17th, 2023 21:58
• A gentle lady. (David Wakeling) We can only hope.Thanks for reading
  June 16th, 2023 05:02
• Maxim (James Michael) Win what? What is the prize?
  June 14th, 2023 18:51
• The Lady with the Fire Bird in the Palms of her Hands. (David Wakeling) Thank you
  June 14th, 2023 18:49
• RAIN. (David Wakeling) Thank you so much
  June 13th, 2023 00:50
• I Could Be Your Boyfriend (A Boy With Roses) This is well written.Some deep insight.It even has adjectives.Excellent
  June 11th, 2023 18:00
• Since your Departure  (Nkznoodles) Sad broken relationships that\'s what women are good at.But hey there is...
  June 11th, 2023 17:58
• Margairetta (David Wakeling) Thank you I will try.
  June 11th, 2023 17:54
• Guys And Dolls. (Goldfinch60) I love guys and dolls.This poem took me there.Well done
  June 10th, 2023 06:13
• Go Nanna Go Nanna (David Wakeling) Thank you for reading.It was Nanna when she was young
  June 10th, 2023 06:11
• Go Nanna Go Nanna (David Wakeling) Thank you so much
  June 10th, 2023 00:24
• Find me (Anabasova) I read this twice but nothing is explained so I couldn\'t understand it
  June 4th, 2023 00:00
• Katherine remembers. (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading much apreciated
  June 3rd, 2023 18:06
• The Miracle. (David Wakeling) Indeed it is
  June 2nd, 2023 16:50
• Compete with self.. (NafisaSB) This is probably good advice I just never take advice.
  June 2nd, 2023 00:23
• I can’t take one so young. (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading
  May 29th, 2023 16:28
• Build A Table. (Goldfinch60) Some wise words here.Gotta love the Moody Blues as well
  May 27th, 2023 18:43
• Mrs Karminski’s Ornaments. (David Wakeling) Its all true for someone..Thanks for reading
  May 27th, 2023 00:51
• Bed of roses or thorns (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) I did find love once but it flew away like a scared parrot.The poem...
  May 26th, 2023 17:36
• The Black Cat that crossed my path. (David Wakeling) I think Love can drive people to suicide especially when your partner...
  May 23rd, 2023 17:08
• What it feels like to never have been loved. (Nabi5) Love smove...All you need is a kitten or a bunny rabbit.They love you
  May 22nd, 2023 17:49
• FACING HARD TRUTH (Bobby O) This is a powerful piece.Made me think.
  May 21st, 2023 03:09
• Gratitude For Where We Are. (Goldfinch60) I love Bobby Darin songs.Hit after hit after hit.Great poem about time...
  May 21st, 2023 03:08
• Hope Of Help (Orchidee) This is quite a powerful piece .Well done
  May 21st, 2023 03:06
• In Passing (David Wakeling) Thank you for that wonderful thought
  May 21st, 2023 03:02
• Musing (Fay Slimm.) This is quite nice.It seems unfinished but hey what would I know
  May 18th, 2023 03:59
• Air Instrumentation. (Goldfinch60) A fascinating tale.It keeps the interest right to the end
  May 18th, 2023 03:57
• Joti, a poor Punjabi girl makes her wedding vows. (David Wakeling) They are wonderful. Thanks so much
  May 18th, 2023 03:55
• Rosa Louise McCauley Parks. (David Wakeling) Indeed thanks for commenting
  May 17th, 2023 16:42
• Crying out Loud (David Wakeling) I am sorry to hear that.But you are right there is no saviour coming
  May 15th, 2023 05:09
• Little Esther aged 3 brushes Nanna’s hair. (David Wakeling) Thank you so much
  May 15th, 2023 05:06
• I Do Now. (Goldfinch60) This is a lovely piece.My god the platters.I haven\'t heard music like...
  May 15th, 2023 00:57
• The Dawn Of A New Day (Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu) This is quite good.It suffers one major fault however.While the metaphors...
  May 11th, 2023 17:11
• EVERY BUNNY NEEDS SOME BUNNY (Bobby O) This is a fun read.Well done
  May 11th, 2023 03:19
• Carol goes to a bar. (David Wakeling) Yes and thank you for your enlightened comments.Some lives are broken by...
  May 11th, 2023 03:17
• Loyalty and honesty (NafisaSB) You might be waiting a long time. Most people live in a world of lies
  May 11th, 2023 01:14
• Myths are growing; everyone should run (Rezwan Alam) i read this twice but I am too dumb to understand it.I think its about...
  May 11th, 2023 01:13
• Giving up the Fight (David Wakeling) Well said.Thanks for reading
  May 10th, 2023 16:51
• The Sensitive Ape (David Wakeling) Indeed good point thank you
  May 6th, 2023 18:34
• An Ego That Wouldn’t Relent (Oscar Auliq-Ice) Good for you.Certainly a positive message here
  April 30th, 2023 01:03
• Your Morning, My Evening  (Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer) Its hard enough to have a close relationship.Long distance is impossible
  April 30th, 2023 01:01
• PERHAPS (Bobby O) This is quite an achievement.It bounces along like a rap song.Good fun
  April 30th, 2023 01:00
• I Wish I Could Live (Robert Isaacs Chiwala) This is quite a confronting tale.Being so sick as to wish to die is quite...
  April 30th, 2023 00:58
• What is it about you (Grahamhk) This is okay.Sadly the characters are not named but hey what would I...
  April 30th, 2023 00:56
• Tastes (MKL) I read this but because the characters are not named I am left asking...
  April 26th, 2023 00:07
• ... (Lumpydawg) This is so trite it would make a good popular song.Just needs a tedious...
  April 25th, 2023 16:57
• I Really Truly Love You... (Jaimeleigh) Sadly Love doesn\'t exist.Its all about sex.This is really tedious. Yet...
  April 25th, 2023 16:54
• I\'m t i r e d (NinjaGirl) This is okay.What would be helpful is to explain what you intend to do...
  April 25th, 2023 16:51
• Letting Go. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love the big band sound.The poem has so much wisdom.Well done. Good...
  April 25th, 2023 01:17
• The last words of Amber Watson (David Wakeling) Thank you
  April 25th, 2023 01:14
• The brother You Know (Hollow Enigma) This is okay.A tribute to brotherhood.I liked the rhyme
  April 25th, 2023 00:54
• SKIP THE. SELFISH. ROAD (Bobby O) This is a tribute to personal growth.Well done
  April 25th, 2023 00:50
• Spring Flowers (Oni Lana) You have got to love flowers.They certainly make life colourful. Nice poem
  April 25th, 2023 00:49
• Trapped Under Ice (Ok Waleed) I read this but I am left asking \"Who cares\"? It is not poetry
  April 24th, 2023 16:58
• Fuzzy (TW! mention of self harm, eating disorder, misuse of drugs) (Soloo) If this is how you feel you are seriously unwell.You need to see a doctor...
  April 24th, 2023 16:56
• It Will Never Be (Tayama) The trouble with asking questions is there can be no answers.It just...
  April 24th, 2023 16:54
• Sad as fuck by Abby Rose Wise (Abby1234) If this is how you really feel you need help.So see a doctor today.
  April 24th, 2023 16:53
• Unhappy Red House Finch (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) I don\'t understand this.Is it a joke??
  April 24th, 2023 16:49
• The Consequences Of Sniffing Glue (Randyjohnson71) If you tell an idiot not to do something he will go ahead and do it just...
  April 24th, 2023 16:47
• Impressionado 1 (Introverted Sage) I don\'t understand this kind of poetry.It is stream of consciousness and...
  April 24th, 2023 16:44