Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• slipping away (Arqios) Seems a sense of loneliness and losing confidence. A very powerful...
  March 5th, 2025 05:13
• Returning And Reviving (Orchidee) A great poem. A tribute to a great religion. Excellent
  March 5th, 2025 05:10
• Nuts (Sorenbarrett) This certainly is a close look in the mirror. Some this seems tough on...
  March 5th, 2025 05:09
• minuet of the reeds (Arqios) A beautiful poem.Some of the big words I had to look up but a powerful...
  March 4th, 2025 15:59
• The Rules Of Cricket. (Goldfinch60) In or out Cricket is a confusing game. I never did understand it much.Fun...
  March 4th, 2025 15:57
• Webs of words (Sorenbarrett) The Greeks sure had many Gods.I liked the idea of weaving.Excellent
  March 4th, 2025 15:54
• Poetry is my way to express myself (Tony36) A powerful statement .Poetry is a way of life. Made me think
  March 4th, 2025 15:51
• Kite (Cassie58) Yes a beautiful poem.A tribute to a wonderful bird. So well...
  March 4th, 2025 15:50
• ‘bear pottery’ (Arqios) This is great fun. Enjoyable read
  March 3rd, 2025 17:10
• Fighting For Peace! (Goldfinch60) Good point. There is no sense to war.Never has been.Important poem here
  March 3rd, 2025 17:09
• Your Voice (Tony36) In this age of Protest this poem is very relevant.Inspirational
  March 3rd, 2025 17:07
• Do you know? (Sorenbarrett) Wow some fundamental questions right here.Made me think for the first time...
  March 3rd, 2025 17:06
• Seasons In a Year. (Poetic Licence) What a beautiful poem.It reads like a song.Excellent
  March 3rd, 2025 17:03
• Eclipse (Arqios) Always a joy to read your poems and comments.
  March 2nd, 2025 17:41
• Fun in (Sun)Day (Poetic Licence) So much wisdom here.Made me think.Wonderful.
  March 2nd, 2025 17:40
• Love For Eternity And Beyond. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful tribute to eternal love.Always a joy to read your poems
  March 2nd, 2025 17:39
• Canned expression (Sorenbarrett) Some deep questions here.Enjoyable and cleverly constructed
  March 2nd, 2025 17:37
• Castle Keep (Arqios) Thats the sad truth about sand castles they get re-possesed.Delightful
  March 1st, 2025 06:18
• That Place Called Home. (Goldfinch60) Home sure is a wonderful place.beautiful poem.
  March 1st, 2025 06:16
• Space pirate speed demons (Sorenbarrett) This may sound odd but I think at the quantum level the universe performs...
  March 1st, 2025 06:15
• Race night (Tony36) Good poem.It maintains the urgency of the big race.Excelllent
  February 28th, 2025 14:59
• The New Jacques Loussier. (Goldfinch60) Sounds like a wonderful evening. Wonderful tribute poem
  February 27th, 2025 15:10
• when echo lost its shadow (Arqios) This is a remarkable story.It is a wonderful poem.What I liked so much is...
  February 27th, 2025 15:08
• If i Were Made Off Glass (Poetic Licence) Raises an interesting question. We are travelling through the looking...
  February 27th, 2025 15:03
• You (Tony36) This is quite beautiful.I enjoyed reading
  February 27th, 2025 15:02
• It doesn\'t matter anymore (Sorenbarrett) This is brilliant.Rhyme cadence and purpose.What more could they...
  February 27th, 2025 15:00
• The Information Building. (Goldfinch60) It\'s the information age alright. Great poem with a fun ending
  February 26th, 2025 17:01
• A Selfish Man. (Poetic Licence) I think that selfish man is my neighbour. An iinteresting poem.MAde me...
  February 26th, 2025 17:00
• Pages not written (Sorenbarrett) The history of the native indians is quite sad. Quite a nice tribute here...
  February 26th, 2025 16:58
• ( weighing in ) (Arqios) Thank is the question. I think poetry is whatever you want it to be.Great...
  February 26th, 2025 16:56
• Natures Symphony Is Here. (Goldfinch60) Natures symphony is a beautiful way to put it.Wonderful. Made my day
  February 25th, 2025 05:18
• Blossoming (2017) (Arqios) This is wonderful.A beautiful description of an amazing place.I\'m booking...
  February 25th, 2025 05:16
• True story (to be or not to be) (Sorenbarrett) Wow that was shocking. Being different is still difficult despite all the...
  February 25th, 2025 05:13
• The Adventures of Mary & Harry(1) (Poetic Licence) Great fun.Brightened my day
  February 22nd, 2025 04:51
• Reeling one in (Sorenbarrett) The poet and the fisherman both trying to secure a catch.Great poem
  February 22nd, 2025 04:50
• Calliope Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) This is a wonderful tribute.Beautiful
  February 22nd, 2025 04:46
• Melbourne mosaic (Arqios) Everyone I have spoken to from Melbourne really like the place.From this...
  February 22nd, 2025 04:44
• The Breath Of Music. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love music.Always. A beautiful poem I enjoyed reading
  February 21st, 2025 16:09
• beneath the nightingale’s call (Arqios) Wonderful extension of the ancient Greek story. I enjoyed reading very
  February 21st, 2025 16:07
• Flies (Sorenbarrett) Wow this is a amazing. The flies almost took on super human status as they...
  February 21st, 2025 16:03
• Believe in yourself (Tony36) Great positive message here.Well done Excellent
  February 21st, 2025 16:01
• Grey Day Whispers (Cassie58) A wonderful poem filled with imagery.I enjoyed reading. I love how you use...
  February 21st, 2025 15:59
• I Can`t Hide It (Poetic Licence) Anger is a cross to bare.Powerful poem
  February 21st, 2025 06:14
• Fine Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60) this is quite a beautiful poem.Well done
  February 20th, 2025 15:24
• Three dots dancing (Arqios) This is a well constructed poem.I like the rhyme.Those dots will make you...
  February 20th, 2025 15:23
• Ultimate weapon (Sorenbarrett) This is quite a lot to unpack.I had to read it twice to appreciate it.Pity...
  February 20th, 2025 15:20
• Playing Cards (Tony36) Great poem fun to read.
  February 20th, 2025 15:14
• What I Call Shopping. (Goldfinch60) Fun poem.To find a shop that gives quick service is really good these
  February 19th, 2025 05:25
• To Be My Fathers Son (Poetic Licence) Some raw honesty here. But always taking the right lesson from life\'s...
  February 19th, 2025 05:24
• untitled (bemused rumination) (Arqios) I share the wish that genial kindness shall spring.Well said Great poem...
  February 19th, 2025 05:22
• Divine waste (Sorenbarrett) Wow some anger here and rightly so.God has a lot to answer for.Excellent.I...
  February 19th, 2025 05:20
• sheen of young love (Arqios) This is a gentle respectful treatment of lovers. Enjoyed reading.Welll
  February 18th, 2025 05:25
• Sun On Our Lives Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) This is a wonderful positive poem.Inspirational. Well done
  February 18th, 2025 05:22
• Relics of the lost (Sorenbarrett) This is wonderful. So poetic and filled with inspiring lines. Very...
  February 18th, 2025 05:21
• Walking In The Store. (Goldfinch60) I know the feeling. Fun poem. Well done mi amigo.
  February 17th, 2025 05:39
• The World Holds It`s Breath (Poetic Licence) There is so much to unpack here. I think recent events have made us all...
  February 17th, 2025 05:38
• ‘til all my breath is You (Arqios) Wow this is a snake bite with plenty of venom. I\'m not sure who is upset...
  February 17th, 2025 05:35
• Not to be confused (Sorenbarrett) Wonderful essay on passion and Love. Packed with images.Very good I...
  February 17th, 2025 05:32
• Sonnet On The Death Of A Friend. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful tribute to a great friend. Certainly a sad event but glad to...
  February 16th, 2025 16:36
• Just a Bit Of Fun (Poetic Licence) This was fun and very clever.Enjoyed reading
  February 16th, 2025 16:33
• Record Player (Sorenbarrett) Yes the old music and voices were magical. Reminded me to get out the old...
  February 16th, 2025 16:32
• Truck Driving Man (Tony36) That\'s the life.Keep on Truckin\'.Fun poem.I could see the open road...
  February 16th, 2025 16:29
• once upon a long ago (Arqios) This is wonderful. I was transported to the poet\'s study. Both the joy...
  February 16th, 2025 16:27
• Anniversary Bouquet (Cassie58) A lovely poem fllled with positivity. I enjoyed reading.wonderful.Made me...
  February 16th, 2025 16:22
• Yesterday Was (Poetic Licence) Yesterday seemed to be filled with hearts broken and otherwise. A very...
  February 15th, 2025 21:00
• not your day, either? (Arqios) There seems to be some memories here that are good bad and ugly. Hope...
  February 15th, 2025 20:58
• Sigh of a storm (Sorenbarrett) Wonderful writing. Well constructed verse. Th passing of the day and the...
  February 15th, 2025 04:45
• Show People Sunshine. (Goldfinch60) Yes this is so true and positive. I think I will take that advice....
  February 15th, 2025 04:43
• “my bloody valentine” (Arqios) This is a powerful history lesson. I always thought Valentines day was...
  February 14th, 2025 15:46
• To My Loving Lady. (Goldfinch60) You are very lucky mi amigo to find someone to love.A beautiful tribute...
  February 14th, 2025 15:43
• The Passion Has Gone (Poetic Licence) Inevitability of lossing love and passion is very sad.Very moving and...
  February 14th, 2025 15:41
• Country Living (Tony36) Yes country life what is not to love.Fresh air and green everywhere.Great...
  February 14th, 2025 15:38
• All loss (Sorenbarrett) That\'s life it can be hard work being alone and getting old. Clever...
  February 14th, 2025 15:36
• Four Thousandth Poem Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Okay that is a lot of poems. Especially keeping that standard.Well...
  February 13th, 2025 05:10
• Naive (Sorenbarrett) Wonderful poem. Well constructed and thoughtful. Love and truth there is a...
  February 13th, 2025 05:08
• The Parade (Tony36) What an exciting parade and poetic tribute
  February 12th, 2025 15:26
• Just Shit (Teardrop) Wow so much to unpack here.Some sadness some panic and some dependence on...
  February 12th, 2025 05:24
• Another Good Day. (Goldfinch60) Good to here you are still positive about life.I know only to well how...
  February 12th, 2025 05:21
• Search For The Truth (Poetic Licence) Umm this is a poem filled with venom.Certainly a clear and powerful...
  February 12th, 2025 05:20
• forever we shall be (Arqios) Very gentle piece.It is inspirational.Well done
  February 12th, 2025 05:18
• Music top hits (Sorenbarrett) The music industry is a mess.I still listen to vinyl.It seems more...
  February 12th, 2025 05:16
• Carpe diem without conscience (Sorenbarrett) That is the clear message of youth.A powerful poem about casting caution...
  February 11th, 2025 15:11
• Little by little (Tony36) Some wisdom here. Wonderful poem woth a clear message.Well done
  February 11th, 2025 15:08
• When Words Mean Nothing (Cassie58) yes death can make us speechless.I believe than just being there is...
  February 11th, 2025 15:06
• companionable travelling (Arqios) Wow this is amazing.It has so much to unpack.It reads like a wonderful...
  February 11th, 2025 05:30
• Night Time Worries. (Goldfinch60) Worry is a problem.You have so much joy in your life and still...
  February 11th, 2025 05:26
• The Hand of Evil (We Have All Week) (Poetic Licence) I don\'t think there are any topics that are more difficult than child...
  February 11th, 2025 05:24
• The Train to North Durham (RSM0812) Women? ya can\'t live with em and ya can\'t shoot em. A lively tale of the...
  February 10th, 2025 15:05
• Why cant everyone leave me alone? (Hey!) This si quite sad and powerful essay asking the question \"Why can\'t they...
  February 9th, 2025 21:53
• The Battle Of Twickenham. (Goldfinch60) Great poem.Always like to see England win.Great tribute
  February 9th, 2025 17:41
• Mask Of Happiness (Teardrop) Loneliness and Sadness now they are a couple of mischievous fairies....
  February 9th, 2025 17:39
• piecemeal (Arqios) I\'m sure we can truly know anyone. It can be a difficult sea to...
  February 9th, 2025 04:47
• Flocks (Sorenbarrett) This is quite a powerful metaphor.I read it twice to appreciate...
  February 9th, 2025 04:44
• A Smile In My Heart. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful night out.Good friends and good music what more do you...
  February 8th, 2025 15:51
• Secret of the hive (Sorenbarrett) Ya gotta love bees.Honey makes the hive go round.This is delightful read.I...
  February 8th, 2025 15:49
• they shall weep no more (Arqios) Nice story of random meeting. Delightful read
  February 8th, 2025 15:46
• Marys Pussy Cat (Poetic Licence) You have to go with those who love you.Interesting story well written....
  February 8th, 2025 15:43
• Wise Man Speak (Poetic Licence) Always enjoyable to learn some wisdom in your poems.Well done mi amigo
  February 7th, 2025 15:50
• On My Road Of Time. (Goldfinch60) A life well lived and it is not over yet.Always a joy to read your poetry
  February 7th, 2025 15:48
• poetspeak (Arqios) This is quite a beautiful tribute to the gentle art of poesy.Wonderful
  February 7th, 2025 15:46