Comments on community poems by David Wakeling
- Self Destruction (HangingbyaHalo)
This is okay.Very sad and filled with despair but well written.I enjoyed...
December 13th, 2023 14:18 - Meet Our Future. (Goldfinch60)
Wonderfully thoughtful poem.Alwsys a joy to read .I love John Denver...
December 13th, 2023 03:08 - Human Nature: Part 3 - Life and Death (Poetryismusic)
This is okay. Death not being the end is a nice idea.
December 10th, 2023 15:31 - Beauty. (Goldfinch60)
This is a nice tribute to Beauty.Well done.
December 9th, 2023 14:50 - Using The C Word. (Goldfinch60)
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. C C Signor
December 6th, 2023 15:10 - Love Is (Angelia Lamar)
I\'ve never loved nor been loved so I can\'t relate to this
December 4th, 2023 14:58 - Love (Sahildhobalepoetry)
Dogs stop loving you when you stop feeding them.Humans stop loving you...
December 2nd, 2023 03:05 - Against The Flow. (Goldfinch60)
I know the feeling. A great and relatable poem.
December 2nd, 2023 03:04 - Waiting may be (Puzi)
This is clunky and irritating.Nothing is explained.There are so many...
December 1st, 2023 16:01 - The Words We Don\\\\\\\'t Say (That quiet girl)
I don\'t understand this.Why would you advertise the fact that you have...
December 1st, 2023 15:59 - Once in a Blue Moon (Bishop M.)
This is okay.A nice remebrance. I like the rhyme
December 1st, 2023 15:57 - What Lies Beneath (Gray0328)
This is okay.I like the rhyme although some of it is forced. There are a...
December 1st, 2023 15:54 - Grateful Life. (Goldfinch60)
Another day another opportunity.Lovely poem mi amigo
December 1st, 2023 05:43 - Love Is The Sweetest Thing. (Goldfinch60)
Love is certainly worth spreading around.My favourite Queen song as well
November 30th, 2023 06:22 - DEATH (THE BLACK PEN)
Life and Death who can tell the difference.I think Life is the one that we...
November 29th, 2023 15:01 - The Mind (Sam.C)
Yes I\'ve never trusted my Mind.It always seems to be angry about...
November 29th, 2023 14:58 - peace (MCarman)
Yes indeed be thankful but carry a gun as well.
November 27th, 2023 16:04 - Waiting For A Saviour. (Goldfinch60)
Here Here. No more waiting.Let\'s be happy by ourselves without that...
November 27th, 2023 16:01 - Like a sparkling Roman candle (Amy Michelle Mosier)
This is a brief description.It needs a feeling.How did you feel seeing...
November 26th, 2023 16:02 - Letters (SpiderLotus)
This is full of generalisations.Because of that I couldn\'t find any...
November 26th, 2023 16:00 - In Peace. (Goldfinch60)
Peace in the world.There is something to aim at.Nice poem
November 22nd, 2023 02:23 - PALAISTINE (Gary Booker)
Nothing that happens in the Middle East makes any sense.It has been a...
November 21st, 2023 14:16 - Chasing Sanity (NinjaGirl)
We are all just 24 hours away from Stone age.Look at Gaza And Ukraine or...
November 20th, 2023 17:31 - Stargazing (Vee Mcg)
Very well done.Very poetic and thoughtful.
November 20th, 2023 17:27 - Looking Back The History Of Anne Boleyn (Kinsley Lee)
Nicely written.
November 20th, 2023 17:26 - Our Deep Love. (Goldfinch60)
I guess true Love is what we are all searching for.It is amazing that you...
November 19th, 2023 02:28 - Happy Birthday Dad. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful tribute.Well done.
November 17th, 2023 14:42 - AN ODE OF GRATITUDE (Bobby O)
A lovely tribute. Well done
November 17th, 2023 14:40 - eye bug / I, bug (Amysliterature)
Very impactful.I\'m not sure what is going on here but hey what would I...
November 17th, 2023 14:38 - Dying (B.E.Poet)
Sounds like my honeymoon.Still its all worth it in the end.
November 14th, 2023 15:50 - Dacrydium (Ringdara)
I hate it when trees talk.They always sound like they are barking.
November 14th, 2023 15:49 - Timely Love (Sunnykp)
This is yet another tedious poem that confuses Love with Sex without...
November 14th, 2023 15:46 - Cry me a river (Amalia)
This is well written.It lacks an explanation of who is involved but what...
November 14th, 2023 15:44 - True love exist (Natalie Heisey)
This was a very positive view of life.well done
November 14th, 2023 02:31 - I Hang my Hope on Orion\'s Belt (Sugiura Asuna)
A nice reflection.Well done
November 14th, 2023 02:29 - One Day More. (Goldfinch60)
Each day is a gift.At least you can appreciate it.By far my favourite...
November 14th, 2023 02:28 - Rise up (David A Liebermann)
A good positive poem.Well done
November 12th, 2023 02:22 - The Lady In The Van. (Goldfinch60)
Some Nuns have bad habits I\'m afraid.Good fun poem
November 12th, 2023 02:20 - Le Pouvoir d\'Être: Se Dérouler à Travers le Regard d\'Autrui (GeekSusie)
Remember today, this moment, this verse,
A reflection of yourself, in...
November 10th, 2023 15:39 - Home (Gray0328)
Home sweet home. Memories are precious.Well written poem.
November 9th, 2023 15:20 - Fighting For Peace? (Goldfinch60)
War is just part of the deal.The saddest part.
November 9th, 2023 02:30 - The Day She Went Away (Hunar Miglani)
Yet another tedious failed relationship poem.How many million times does...
November 8th, 2023 14:30 - Let’s Walk Together On The Same Path… (G.Cabús)
Happiness is okay.A nice goal
November 8th, 2023 14:29 - Thumb Stump (Gray0328)
Wow that\'s painful. At least you have a story to tell the grandchildren
November 8th, 2023 14:27 - Healing(Unfinished) (A thousand wishes)
This is quiet sad.Maybe you need a pet yo cheer you up.try a kitten, they...
November 8th, 2023 14:22 - Forty Two Years Today. (Goldfinch60)
My Father died with Dementia so I have some idea but you are right to be...
November 7th, 2023 02:51 - Answering The \'Phone. (Goldfinch60)
A great fun story. Well done
November 5th, 2023 17:33 - Lonely Little Vagina (Thomas W Case)
This is very clever .Some humour here and personification of the female...
November 3rd, 2023 15:01 - Beauty Is Light. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful sentiment.Well done
November 3rd, 2023 02:37 - That Glorious Game. (Goldfinch60)
It is a great game.This is a nice tribute.well done
October 30th, 2023 15:45 - CONCISE EXCELL (Bobby O)
Nice tribute. Well done
October 30th, 2023 15:43 - winter (Joshi)
This is okay.Sadly I have never seen snow so I can\'t relate
October 30th, 2023 15:41 - The girl\'s world (Sk)
Who is \"she\" and why should the reader care? This needs names to engage...
October 30th, 2023 15:40 - The Meeting With Someone I Once Loved (Mavv)
Who are you talking to and why would I feel comfortable...
October 30th, 2023 15:37 - Breadwork. (Goldfinch60)
I always think of you as a bread winner.Lovely poem
October 28th, 2023 02:23 - remember the brave (Jim56)
I guess we have to live with War. It affects us all. Nice poem
October 27th, 2023 15:52 - Timeless Square (Gray0328)
This was a confusing disappointment.While it is well structured after 400...
October 27th, 2023 15:49 - IN CLARITY MIST (1 SIGFRIDSSON)
This is a clunky read.Because there are so many words missing the meaning...
October 27th, 2023 15:45 - Ex lover (Emyralle)
Yet another failed relationship poem.They are really tedious
October 27th, 2023 15:44 - Sun On The Sea, (Goldfinch60)
Life doesn\'t get much better than that.Well done mi amigo
October 25th, 2023 21:22 - Analog Of The Brain (Thomas W Case)
This is quite true.The creative mind can be a joy and a curse.Well written
October 25th, 2023 21:20 - Ghost (Moco)
This is okay.Sad in places but hey that\'s relationships for you.They all...
October 24th, 2023 15:12 - Rise Above: From Fool to Sage (GeekSusie)
The demon drink. I hate the fact that Alcohol ruins so many lives I am...
October 24th, 2023 15:10 - WHEN A STRONG AND FRESH WIND... (Natalie Gladmir)
This is okay.The rhyme is forced in some places but I like the cadence.It...
October 24th, 2023 15:06 - Calliope Inspiration. (Goldfinch60)
I always feel good when I read your poems.Thank you compadre
October 18th, 2023 02:24 - Just Pretend (Constant0123456789)
This is very good.I guess well all have to pretend.Very perceptive
October 16th, 2023 15:05 - Snow (FallingAwake2)
I\'ve never seen the snow so I can\'t relate.Nice poem however
October 16th, 2023 02:04 - Tenderness by Leonid Martinow (Ksey_Gan)
Without names this is meaningless. The reader is not engaged
October 15th, 2023 15:08 - The Lost Ones (GenXer Shamrocker ☘️)
Oh I think we are all lost.Have you ever tried to find your way through...
October 15th, 2023 15:06 - It May Blow Me In The Right Direction (Teddy.15)
This is very pleasant.It sums up a wonderful day out.Delightful
October 12th, 2023 02:12 - JAZZ IS LIFE ( updated version) (Bobby O)
I have to agree here.This made me revisit the Jazz greats.There should be...
October 11th, 2023 13:42 - The Walk Up The Hill. (Goldfinch60)
I know some places like that.This poem took me there.Well done
October 11th, 2023 02:00 - What love is (13LaurenD)
I have read 10 million \"failed\" relationship poems.This is perhaps the...
October 8th, 2023 16:37 - Grandmothers (Cameron Pfiester)
You are lucky to have a good grandmother.Most of them are dithering idiots...
October 8th, 2023 16:33 - The Years Ahead. (Goldfinch60)
Best wishes mi amigo.
October 8th, 2023 16:30 - Dwindling Numbers To Win The Contest (Weep little lion girl)
I read this twice but I guess I\'m too dumb to understand what is going...
October 7th, 2023 23:06 - Simple Understanding. (Goldfinch60)
An irresistible argument.Nicely done
October 5th, 2023 16:00 - Gratefulness. (Goldfinch60)
You have been fortunate and what is more important you know it.Well...
October 4th, 2023 15:22 - Hell has come (Ady123)
I knew hell was here when Donald Trump got into the white house.Nice poem
October 4th, 2023 15:19 - The Courage to Be: Embracing My Authenticity (GeekSusie)
I like this.It shows a great deal of courage.Gay pride let God himself say...
October 4th, 2023 15:17 - Untitled for a reason (AlitaOpal)
This is like the Spelling test I had in Year 8.I got 3 out of 10.I tried...
October 3rd, 2023 22:06 - A Night AT The Musicals. (Goldfinch60)
Nice tribute.I love the musicals.Singing in the rain...Just singing in the...
September 30th, 2023 19:21 - Love! (a stream of thought poem) (Joakim Bergen)
This is word play.Sadly I have no idea what it is about but hey what would...
September 30th, 2023 15:26 - Love? Affection? Care? (SOHAN BALAJI SG)
Sadly Love and Happiness don\'t exist but hey what wouldI know,
September 30th, 2023 15:24 - I LEFT (Bobby O)
Women ya can\'t live with them and ya can\'t kill \'em.Never mind at least...
September 30th, 2023 15:21 - Discover (Charu Bhuyar)
This is okay.It is a little hard for me to understand but hey what would I...
September 30th, 2023 15:18 - Lost Cat (Coffeecatsbliss)
Yet another tedious failed relationship poem.This must be the number 10...
September 29th, 2023 15:10 - What it means to be black in America (Lexi)
I have a dream today.The answer is to seek out your own and carry a gun.
September 29th, 2023 15:08 - The Gift (KSChambers)
This is word play.Sadly I have no idea what it is about.The problem is...
September 29th, 2023 15:04 - I am asking for it (Amysliterature)
This has problems.Firstly the metaphors drown the meaning.Secondly there...
September 27th, 2023 15:48 - Imperfections (Bhumika Chowdhury_1437)
I have never experienced Love so I cant really understand any of this,
September 26th, 2023 03:24 - Stanford, my star (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla)
This is an incredible sad story.Its as if the human race never learn from...
September 26th, 2023 03:23 - FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O)
This is incredible.So much wisdom here.Sadly I\'m too dumb to understand...
September 24th, 2023 21:52 - Such A Beautiful Game. (Goldfinch60)
Great match and a wonderful tribute poem.Well done.
September 24th, 2023 04:25 - MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O)
Powerful verse here.A tough life lesson.Well done
September 23rd, 2023 06:58 - You, Me, Everyone (The Fife Wanderer)
Nice guys finish last
September 21st, 2023 16:34 - Slowly (Serhat Doğan)
This is very thoughtful.Sadly its a little short but hey so is life
September 20th, 2023 00:25 - i hate these hands (Scottstreet)
Hands are just tools.Its the mind that needs to heal.
September 20th, 2023 00:24 - CRAZED and CONFUSED (Bobby O)
Some tough realisations here..I hope time will heal.
September 19th, 2023 03:20 - Broken Heart Fixed. (Goldfinch60)
This is a sad story filled with hope and joy at the end.Gotta love the...
September 19th, 2023 03:17
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