Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• Angry Words. (Goldfinch60) I believe you are right.Kindness rules.
  September 3rd, 2023 20:08
• We Do Not Understand (Goldfinch60) You\'re a lucky man amigo
  August 30th, 2023 02:37
• Peace At The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60) As always well written.The delightful end of a hard day.Gotta love
  August 25th, 2023 17:28
• In Memory of K.F. (Orchidee) This is a sad story.Funerals can be difficult. Church has nothing to do...
  August 25th, 2023 17:25
• Path Of Life. (Goldfinch60) At least you are on the right path.I think my path has a few cracks in...
  August 23rd, 2023 17:07
• not forgotten (Jim56) This is jolly and filled with cliches of \"love\" which I cannot relate
  August 23rd, 2023 17:05
• A Dreadful Thought (Bishop M.) It is not clear what the problem is but the protagonist is in conflict.The...
  August 23rd, 2023 17:03
• \"Full circle\" ; 8 June, 2023 (Soman Ragavan) This is quite a master piece.It has the sense of love and duty and plain...
  August 21st, 2023 16:09
• A Superb Day. (Goldfinch60) I always feel better when i read your poems.You should put them in a...
  August 20th, 2023 18:01
• MICHAEL D (Bobby O) A heart felt commentary.Some anger here.I\'m not sure who the person is...
  August 20th, 2023 17:59
• The Dahlias. (Goldfinch60) Very respectful.Gotta love dahlias.I have some in my garden as well.Quite...
  August 18th, 2023 02:45
• Triq (Introverted Sage) This bounces along like a song.Well done I love the rhyme.
  August 18th, 2023 02:43
• Fading Hope (Beth K) This is quite sad.Cat lovers know how hard it is to see them suffer.Still...
  August 17th, 2023 20:25
• Blessed to Share (Bobby O) Wonderful writing.I always enjoy good writng.Great picture as well.
  August 17th, 2023 20:22
• The Final Match. (Goldfinch60) Its always a great thrill to cheer on your favourite team.This is a great...
  August 14th, 2023 16:52
• Casually Unhinged (Hayley Brown) I read this twice but because there are no names for the characters the...
  August 7th, 2023 18:19
• Against The Flow. (Goldfinch60) This is very insightful.I like the flow.Well done
  August 7th, 2023 18:16
• Hole (Transprodigalson) This is self indulgent and I am left wondering at the purpose.
  August 7th, 2023 18:13
• Spirit Does (Introverted Sage) This uses the world Spirit quite a lot but doesn\'t explain what the...
  August 7th, 2023 18:12
• Somehow (Bevan tse stuart) All relationships fail.The parties want different things.Its no-ones
  August 7th, 2023 18:10
• 52 ON THE TABLE (Bobby O) This is a wonderful description of a memorable card game.It builds the...
  August 4th, 2023 17:34
• JAZZ IS LIFE (Bobby O) This is a great tribute to an original form of musical expression.It...
  August 4th, 2023 17:27
• Awake At Six. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love the morning.Filled with promise.Great poem Andy.Now make sure...
  August 2nd, 2023 17:30
• The longing (A.L.H) I this a shopping list? I\'d like to buy some of these items.The window...
  August 2nd, 2023 17:28
• Unmaking Love (Satishverma) I read this twice but I have no idea what it is about.I think its about...
  July 30th, 2023 00:25
• Denied (Introverted Sage) This flows well.I like the rhyme. Well done
  July 30th, 2023 00:24
• African Proverb. (Goldfinch60) A very moving proverb.
  July 29th, 2023 03:12
• QUIXOTE IMPOSSIBLE (Bobby O) I think we attempt the impossible every day and achieve.Well done
  July 28th, 2023 03:09
• Seek (2781) This okay if you are religious.If not it is annoying
  July 28th, 2023 03:07
• Smile For More. (Goldfinch60) This is a great sentiment.Well done
  July 28th, 2023 03:06
• Daddy\'s Little Girl (GiftedT17) This was okay.Memories.However it is a bit confusing.I\'m not sure what it...
  July 27th, 2023 17:13
• Mountains (Miss_Dreamer) This is okay.Sadly I don\'t know what it is about.It seems unfinished
  July 27th, 2023 17:11
• I miss you (Bloodbat_Workshop) This is filled with a lot of cliches but hey the rhyme is good.The message...
  July 27th, 2023 17:09
• Tony Bennett. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful tribute to the greats.Sad to hear about Tony Bennett.I\'ll play...
  July 23rd, 2023 03:10
• Come Dine with Me (Ted Goddard) This is a bit of tasty good fun
  July 21st, 2023 17:15
• I Will Remember That! (Goldfinch60) Well you are a great poet.Keep up the good work
  July 21st, 2023 03:31
• Aspirational Ascent (Orchidee) Someones deep beliefs written done.Well done
  July 19th, 2023 03:10
• Dosti (Chiki1601) This is wonderful.I loved the rhyme and the skillful cadence.A masterpiece
  July 19th, 2023 03:09
• Plea For Change (Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu) I hope things improve in Kenya.Sadly God doesn\'t care
  July 17th, 2023 17:15
• My cat ([email protected]) I hate cats.
  July 14th, 2023 17:56
• SOME PLANS ARE TRICKY (Bobby O) Great poem of self disclosure.I particularly like the line \"She read my...
  July 14th, 2023 17:55
• Ignored By Others. (Goldfinch60) This is well done.Noone could argue with the wisdom here..Beautiful music...
  July 12th, 2023 18:13
• Lost at Sea (Zarnold_Lamore) Oh I think we all know the feeling.That is life on a watery planet.Well...
  July 12th, 2023 18:09
• Close your eyes (David A Liebermann) Happy is a good thing to be.Well done
  July 12th, 2023 01:06
• No Edge (Walter alter) This is odd.It reminds me of a song by Bob Dylan.You think it makes sense...
  July 5th, 2023 17:41
• The Girl With The Starry Dress (Dove) This is an enchanting story.I\'ll get Disney on the phone.
  July 4th, 2023 17:12
• When You Are Gone. (Goldfinch60) This is a wonderful poem.Some eternal truths here. Well done.My favourite...
  July 3rd, 2023 07:25
• Keep Moving Forward (13LaurenD) i tried to read this but it kept on going and going and going.I gave...
  June 30th, 2023 17:32
• Our Love For Each Other. (Goldfinch60) This brought a tear to my eye.That song was on the radio when I first fell...
  June 30th, 2023 17:28
• Dire Predictions (Gary Edward Geraci) The problem with asking questions in a poem is that you will not get any...
  June 30th, 2023 17:26
• Love Is (Saxon Crow) Because there are no names the reader is not engaged.It makes no sense
  June 30th, 2023 17:24
• Last like Jesus (Tayama) What a shame Jesus never existed.Still children will believe in fairy...
  June 30th, 2023 17:23
• T.E.L.S.H.A(Telsha) (Jerry Wayne Lawrence) This makes no sense at all
  June 30th, 2023 17:22
• To the Deep (Lorrel ONeill) I tried to read this but there are too many words missing so I gave up
  June 29th, 2023 22:33
• Just a memory (Love-Me-Softly) Yet another tedious poem about the failure of relationships.Snooze
  June 27th, 2023 00:28
• ARCHERY CLASSES (Michael Edwards) This is a bit of fun.Well done
  June 27th, 2023 00:27
• Love\\\\\\\'s Haunting Echo (Marcellus) I read this twice but although I appreciate the word play and the rhyme...
  June 22nd, 2023 17:41
• Distant (PoeticBiscuit) This seems unfinished.The poor reader is left wondering who is talking to...
  June 22nd, 2023 17:39
• Hands (Bevan tse stuart) This is okay.Thew hands are certainly a wonder to behold.Well done
  June 22nd, 2023 17:37
• What A Day. (Goldfinch60) Congratulations a beautiful poem and and ceremony.Von Karajan is my...
  June 21st, 2023 04:39
• How to burn it away (Bevan tse stuart) This is quite involved and sad.Certainly a very powerful piece.Well done
  June 19th, 2023 17:39
• Dear Dad (Yyonae) There are so many words missing here i couldn\'t understand it which is a...
  June 18th, 2023 17:49
• Maxim (James Michael) Win what? What is the prize?
  June 14th, 2023 18:51
• I Could Be Your Boyfriend (A Boy With Roses) This is well written.Some deep insight.It even has adjectives.Excellent
  June 11th, 2023 18:00
• Since your Departure  (Nkznoodles) Sad broken relationships that\'s what women are good at.But hey there is...
  June 11th, 2023 17:58
• Guys And Dolls. (Goldfinch60) I love guys and dolls.This poem took me there.Well done
  June 10th, 2023 06:13
• Find me (Anabasova) I read this twice but nothing is explained so I couldn\'t understand it
  June 4th, 2023 00:00
• Compete with self.. (NafisaSB) This is probably good advice I just never take advice.
  June 2nd, 2023 00:23
• Build A Table. (Goldfinch60) Some wise words here.Gotta love the Moody Blues as well
  May 27th, 2023 18:43
• Bed of roses or thorns (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) I did find love once but it flew away like a scared parrot.The poem...
  May 26th, 2023 17:36
• What it feels like to never have been loved. (Nabi5) Love smove...All you need is a kitten or a bunny rabbit.They love you
  May 22nd, 2023 17:49
• FACING HARD TRUTH (Bobby O) This is a powerful piece.Made me think.
  May 21st, 2023 03:09
• Gratitude For Where We Are. (Goldfinch60) I love Bobby Darin songs.Hit after hit after hit.Great poem about time...
  May 21st, 2023 03:08
• Hope Of Help (Orchidee) This is quite a powerful piece .Well done
  May 21st, 2023 03:06
• Musing (Fay Slimm.) This is quite nice.It seems unfinished but hey what would I know
  May 18th, 2023 03:59
• Air Instrumentation. (Goldfinch60) A fascinating tale.It keeps the interest right to the end
  May 18th, 2023 03:57
• I Do Now. (Goldfinch60) This is a lovely piece.My god the platters.I haven\'t heard music like...
  May 15th, 2023 00:57
• The Dawn Of A New Day (Mwalimu Wuod Mwalimu) This is quite good.It suffers one major fault however.While the metaphors...
  May 11th, 2023 17:11
• EVERY BUNNY NEEDS SOME BUNNY (Bobby O) This is a fun read.Well done
  May 11th, 2023 03:19
• Loyalty and honesty (NafisaSB) You might be waiting a long time. Most people live in a world of lies
  May 11th, 2023 01:14
• Myths are growing; everyone should run (Rezwan Alam) i read this twice but I am too dumb to understand it.I think its about...
  May 11th, 2023 01:13
• An Ego That Wouldn’t Relent (Oscar Auliq-Ice) Good for you.Certainly a positive message here
  April 30th, 2023 01:03
• Your Morning, My Evening  (Dr. Shailesh Gupta Veer) Its hard enough to have a close relationship.Long distance is impossible
  April 30th, 2023 01:01
• PERHAPS (Bobby O) This is quite an achievement.It bounces along like a rap song.Good fun
  April 30th, 2023 01:00
• I Wish I Could Live (Robert Isaacs Chiwala) This is quite a confronting tale.Being so sick as to wish to die is quite...
  April 30th, 2023 00:58
• What is it about you (Grahamhk) This is okay.Sadly the characters are not named but hey what would I...
  April 30th, 2023 00:56
• Tastes (MKL) I read this but because the characters are not named I am left asking...
  April 26th, 2023 00:07
• ... (Lumpydawg) This is so trite it would make a good popular song.Just needs a tedious...
  April 25th, 2023 16:57
• I Really Truly Love You... (Jaimeleigh) Sadly Love doesn\'t exist.Its all about sex.This is really tedious. Yet...
  April 25th, 2023 16:54
• I\'m t i r e d (NinjaGirl) This is okay.What would be helpful is to explain what you intend to do...
  April 25th, 2023 16:51
• Letting Go. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love the big band sound.The poem has so much wisdom.Well done. Good...
  April 25th, 2023 01:17
• The brother You Know (Hollow Enigma) This is okay.A tribute to brotherhood.I liked the rhyme
  April 25th, 2023 00:54
• SKIP THE. SELFISH. ROAD (Bobby O) This is a tribute to personal growth.Well done
  April 25th, 2023 00:50
• Spring Flowers (Oni Lana) You have got to love flowers.They certainly make life colourful. Nice poem
  April 25th, 2023 00:49
• Trapped Under Ice (Ok Waleed) I read this but I am left asking \"Who cares\"? It is not poetry
  April 24th, 2023 16:58
• Fuzzy (TW! mention of self harm, eating disorder, misuse of drugs) (Soloo) If this is how you feel you are seriously unwell.You need to see a doctor...
  April 24th, 2023 16:56
• It Will Never Be (Tayama) The trouble with asking questions is there can be no answers.It just...
  April 24th, 2023 16:54
• Sad as fuck by Abby Rose Wise (Abby1234) If this is how you really feel you need help.So see a doctor today.
  April 24th, 2023 16:53
• Unhappy Red House Finch (PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :)) I don\'t understand this.Is it a joke??
  April 24th, 2023 16:49
• The Consequences Of Sniffing Glue (Randyjohnson71) If you tell an idiot not to do something he will go ahead and do it just...
  April 24th, 2023 16:47