Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• Lost Cat (Coffeecatsbliss) Yet another tedious failed relationship poem.This must be the number 10...
  September 29th, 2023 15:10
• What it means to be black in America (Lexi) I have a dream today.The answer is to seek out your own and carry a gun.
  September 29th, 2023 15:08
• The Gift (KSChambers) This is word play.Sadly I have no idea what it is about.The problem is...
  September 29th, 2023 15:04
• The branches are bare. (David Wakeling) I hear you mi amigo.If life doesn\'t make you scream sometimes nothing
  September 28th, 2023 00:44
• Bribery and Lies. (David Wakeling) Plans are good.Thanks for commenting.
  September 28th, 2023 00:42
• I am asking for it (Amysliterature) This has problems.Firstly the metaphors drown the meaning.Secondly there...
  September 27th, 2023 15:48
• Imperfections (Bhumika Chowdhury_1437) I have never experienced Love so I cant really understand any of this,
  September 26th, 2023 03:24
• Stanford, my star (Dr.Suryaraju Mattimalla) This is an incredible sad story.Its as if the human race never learn from...
  September 26th, 2023 03:23
• FOLLOW THE SMILE QUICK ROAD (Bobby O) This is incredible.So much wisdom here.Sadly I\'m too dumb to understand...
  September 24th, 2023 21:52
• Such A Beautiful Game. (Goldfinch60) Great match and a wonderful tribute poem.Well done.
  September 24th, 2023 04:25
• Emily goes for a walk. (David Wakeling)
  September 24th, 2023 04:23
• MIX NOT BUSINESS AND FUN (Bobby O) Powerful verse here.A tough life lesson.Well done
  September 23rd, 2023 06:58
• Emily goes for a walk. (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading.Much appreciated
  September 23rd, 2023 06:55
• You, Me, Everyone (The Fife Wanderer) Nice guys finish last
  September 21st, 2023 16:34
• Slowly (Serhat Doğan) This is very thoughtful.Sadly its a little short but hey so is life
  September 20th, 2023 00:25
• i hate these hands (Scottstreet) Hands are just tools.Its the mind that needs to heal.
  September 20th, 2023 00:24
• CRAZED and CONFUSED (Bobby O) Some tough realisations here..I hope time will heal.
  September 19th, 2023 03:20
• Broken Heart Fixed. (Goldfinch60) This is a sad story filled with hope and joy at the end.Gotta love the...
  September 19th, 2023 03:17
• The House of Tears. (David Wakeling) Thank you so much
  September 18th, 2023 16:25
• The New Commandments. (David Wakeling) Quite right.thanks for reading
  September 16th, 2023 04:20
• Enchanted moments (Chiki1601) This is wonderful.certainly filled with joy and happiness.I loved the...
  September 16th, 2023 00:25
• Humdrum Asylum (KASH Moony) welcome to Asylum Earth where crazy people get rich and become...
  September 16th, 2023 00:24
• To be Born (PKF) Welcome to this crazy world.We all know hoe you feel.The secret is do what...
  September 16th, 2023 00:22
• God\'s Humour. (Goldfinch60) This is delightful.God doing comedy.I enjoyed this.It is hard to reconcile...
  September 14th, 2023 21:40
• MONK and MY AUNT (Bobby O) The trifecta: Aunt Carol,he and Thelonius Monk.This inspired me to listen...
  September 14th, 2023 21:35
• The Bus Stop on Grace Avenue. (David Wakeling) Thank you for your wonderful comments.much appreciated mi amigo
  September 14th, 2023 21:31
• Are you insane yet? (David Wakeling) Good for you.Thanks for reading
  September 12th, 2023 18:04
• Even a Clueless Squirrel May Climb (Bobby O) She\'s making you an offer you cant refuse.Enjoyable read.
  September 10th, 2023 17:27
• Our Issue In Life. (Goldfinch60) Oh this is so true .The temptation every day.Mine is chocolate...
  September 10th, 2023 17:23
• HEALING HEART (Suetah) This is quite powerful>I like the rhyme.Some wisdom here as well.Well done
  September 10th, 2023 00:08
• Unmindful (David Wakeling) Thank you so much.
  September 9th, 2023 16:44
• UNSELFISH RAMBLE (Bobby O) This is a powerful poem.Actually it reads like a song.It just needs a...
  September 9th, 2023 00:29
• Smear (PoeticBiscuit) The problem with asking questions in a poem is that it is impossible to...
  September 8th, 2023 15:55
• Picture perfect (DREEK0) I read this twice but there are so many mistakes I don\'t know what it...
  September 8th, 2023 15:55
• Shackles & chains (Natalie Heisey) This is quite powerful.A call to arms..well done
  September 5th, 2023 17:00
• Progression (Steve Goldenfort) I read this twice and while it is well constructed I have no idea what it...
  September 5th, 2023 16:58
• Message for Nora (ShrektheDuck) Keep it friendly.Relationships always fail.Love and Hate are the same
  September 5th, 2023 16:56
• Replace Coffee? (Goldfinch60) I need a cup of coffee after this poem.The bag pipes are glorious.Well
  September 5th, 2023 03:17
• The Soul of Sun (David Wakeling) You are probably right but I like my Sun the best.Just sayin
  September 5th, 2023 03:15
• The sickness of sorrow (A.B. Jakobsen) The author needs to lighten up.Maybe see a doctor about depression...
  September 4th, 2023 16:10
• Angry Words. (Goldfinch60) I believe you are right.Kindness rules.
  September 3rd, 2023 20:08
• Mr Bellmeister catches the bus. (David Wakeling) Exactly right.Thanks for your comments.Always a joy.
  September 1st, 2023 22:27
• The Sound of Bob Dylan. (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading.I think you\'re right.I\'ll revisit this song
  August 31st, 2023 22:40
• The most horrifying discovery of my childhood. (David Wakeling) I hope I have.thanks for your comments
  August 31st, 2023 05:36
• We Do Not Understand (Goldfinch60) You\'re a lucky man amigo
  August 30th, 2023 02:37
• Little Davy Blue Eyes. (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading
  August 27th, 2023 22:31
• Peace At The End Of The Day. (Goldfinch60) As always well written.The delightful end of a hard day.Gotta love
  August 25th, 2023 17:28
• In Memory of K.F. (Orchidee) This is a sad story.Funerals can be difficult. Church has nothing to do...
  August 25th, 2023 17:25
• The Flight of the Bird boy. (David Wakeling) Yes I used to be.I had my wings clipped though
  August 25th, 2023 17:20
• Dancing with Death. (David Wakeling) Indeed I have wonderful memories.Thanks for reading
  August 24th, 2023 02:40
• Path Of Life. (Goldfinch60) At least you are on the right path.I think my path has a few cracks in...
  August 23rd, 2023 17:07
• not forgotten (Jim56) This is jolly and filled with cliches of \"love\" which I cannot relate
  August 23rd, 2023 17:05
• A Dreadful Thought (Bishop M.) It is not clear what the problem is but the protagonist is in conflict.The...
  August 23rd, 2023 17:03
• Dad and the creaky window. (David Wakeling) Thank you for your inspired comments.I\'m not sure he liked Milton.I\'m...
  August 22nd, 2023 16:43
• \"Full circle\" ; 8 June, 2023 (Soman Ragavan) This is quite a master piece.It has the sense of love and duty and plain...
  August 21st, 2023 16:09
• A Superb Day. (Goldfinch60) I always feel better when i read your poems.You should put them in a...
  August 20th, 2023 18:01
• MICHAEL D (Bobby O) A heart felt commentary.Some anger here.I\'m not sure who the person is...
  August 20th, 2023 17:59
• When Miss Veil comes to the Back Door. (David Wakeling) I\'ve found the way to handle depression .It is a handful of brazil...
  August 20th, 2023 17:56
• The Lighthouse Watchkeep and the White Witches of Kiama. (David Wakeling) Thank you again.Your comments are much appreciated
  August 19th, 2023 18:52
• The Lion and The Lily. (David Wakeling) Yes indeed.Thanks so much for reading
  August 19th, 2023 18:50
• The Lighthouse Watchkeep and the White Witches of Kiama. (David Wakeling) What a remarkable commentary. I thank you for taking the time to say so...
  August 19th, 2023 00:22
• The Dahlias. (Goldfinch60) Very respectful.Gotta love dahlias.I have some in my garden as well.Quite...
  August 18th, 2023 02:45
• Triq (Introverted Sage) This bounces along like a song.Well done I love the rhyme.
  August 18th, 2023 02:43
• Fading Hope (Beth K) This is quite sad.Cat lovers know how hard it is to see them suffer.Still...
  August 17th, 2023 20:25
• Blessed to Share (Bobby O) Wonderful writing.I always enjoy good writng.Great picture as well.
  August 17th, 2023 20:22
• The Hand. (David Wakeling) Thanks for your wonderful comment.Much appreciated
  August 17th, 2023 20:20
• The Long Walk to the Bath. (David Wakeling) Yes I wrote this a while ago.A different time.Thanks for your concern
  August 16th, 2023 03:19
• The Final Match. (Goldfinch60) Its always a great thrill to cheer on your favourite team.This is a great...
  August 14th, 2023 16:52
• Javelin. (David Wakeling) Thanks for reading.
  August 14th, 2023 16:50
• I shall be.. (David Wakeling) Thank you so much.
  August 12th, 2023 06:11
• Casually Unhinged (Hayley Brown) I read this twice but because there are no names for the characters the...
  August 7th, 2023 18:19
• Against The Flow. (Goldfinch60) This is very insightful.I like the flow.Well done
  August 7th, 2023 18:16
• Hole (Semi-deadpoet) This is self indulgent and I am left wondering at the purpose.
  August 7th, 2023 18:13
• Spirit Does (Introverted Sage) This uses the world Spirit quite a lot but doesn\'t explain what the...
  August 7th, 2023 18:12
• Somehow (Bevan tse stuart) All relationships fail.The parties want different things.Its no-ones
  August 7th, 2023 18:10
• 52 ON THE TABLE (Bobby O) This is a wonderful description of a memorable card game.It builds the...
  August 4th, 2023 17:34
• JAZZ IS LIFE (Bobby O) This is a great tribute to an original form of musical expression.It...
  August 4th, 2023 17:27
• Standing on a tight rope juggling broken glass. (David Wakeling) Not fictional.It all happened.But thanks for your comments
  August 3rd, 2023 18:27
• Awake At Six. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love the morning.Filled with promise.Great poem Andy.Now make sure...
  August 2nd, 2023 17:30
• The longing (A.L.H) I this a shopping list? I\'d like to buy some of these items.The window...
  August 2nd, 2023 17:28
• The Sermon on the Hill. (David Wakeling) okay kinda.thanks for reading
  August 1st, 2023 02:57
• The song of Falcon the Stallion (David Wakeling) Will do compadre will do
  July 30th, 2023 03:06
• Unmaking Love (Satishverma) I read this twice but I have no idea what it is about.I think its about...
  July 30th, 2023 00:25
• Denied (Introverted Sage) This flows well.I like the rhyme. Well done
  July 30th, 2023 00:24
• African Proverb. (Goldfinch60) A very moving proverb.
  July 29th, 2023 03:12
• Belinda talks to her Husband while he is asleep. (David Wakeling) Belinda got the midnight train to Tulsa.I might do a sequel.What a good...
  July 29th, 2023 03:10
• QUIXOTE IMPOSSIBLE (Bobby O) I think we attempt the impossible every day and achieve.Well done
  July 28th, 2023 03:09
• Seek (2781) This okay if you are religious.If not it is annoying
  July 28th, 2023 03:07
• Smile For More. (Goldfinch60) This is a great sentiment.Well done
  July 28th, 2023 03:06
• There was a time (David Wakeling) sure has changed but I still dream of the good old days
  July 28th, 2023 03:05
• Daddy\'s Little Girl (GiftedT17) This was okay.Memories.However it is a bit confusing.I\'m not sure what it...
  July 27th, 2023 17:13
• Mountains (Miss_Dreamer) This is okay.Sadly I don\'t know what it is about.It seems unfinished
  July 27th, 2023 17:11
• I miss you (Bloodbat_Workshop) This is filled with a lot of cliches but hey the rhyme is good.The message...
  July 27th, 2023 17:09
• Ths Sun did not rise (David Wakeling) I\'m sure you are right.Thanks for commenting Andy.Always appreciated
  July 25th, 2023 03:02
• The Pearl Necklace. (David Wakeling) Indeed very true.
  July 24th, 2023 02:58
• Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone. (David Wakeling) I always wish I learned to dance.I do love music however.Thanks for
  July 24th, 2023 02:57
• Tony Bennett. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful tribute to the greats.Sad to hear about Tony Bennett.I\'ll play...
  July 23rd, 2023 03:10
• Ugly Sue. (David Wakeling) That\'s my name don\'t wear it out.
  July 22nd, 2023 17:21
• Come Dine with Me (Ted Goddard) This is a bit of tasty good fun
  July 21st, 2023 17:15
• I Will Remember That! (Goldfinch60) Well you are a great poet.Keep up the good work
  July 21st, 2023 03:31