Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• The Fight (Tony36) Never give up the fight compadre.There is light at the end.Powerful poem
  February 7th, 2025 15:43
• Warning (Sorenbarrett) Wow this is graphic.It certainly paints a picture imprisonment.Excellent
  February 7th, 2025 04:51
• Farmer (Tony36) That\'s the life of a farmer. This could be taken as a metaphor.Cleverly...
  February 6th, 2025 14:33
• Gold On Grey (Cassie58) This is so beautiful. It took me to Sunrise over the ocean.It doesn\'t get...
  February 6th, 2025 14:30
• Moon And Stars Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) a beautiful reflection and a beautiful poem.It reminds me to pay more...
  February 6th, 2025 05:56
• Sun is Breaking Through (Poetic Licence) Love certainly is a powerful emotion.Excellent poem.Welll constructed and...
  February 6th, 2025 05:54
• Musings (Sorenbarrett) This is powerful. I like the Greek references, Excellent
  February 6th, 2025 05:51
• along legacy way (Arqios) I think memories are passed on in stories. This is very well constructed...
  February 6th, 2025 05:49
• Marina Musings (Cassie58) Wonderful images created here.I was taken to the water.Excellent
  February 5th, 2025 21:35
• Voice of darkness (Poetic Licence) Wow this puts in words how most of us feel.Life is a journey through...
  February 5th, 2025 05:16
• Time bandit (Sorenbarrett) This is quite sad but I think a lot of divorced people feel this way. I...
  February 5th, 2025 05:13
• At One With Nature\'s Wonder. (Goldfinch60) It is a beautiful place but it takes a keen eye to appreciated it.Well...
  February 4th, 2025 05:30
• untitled 575 (feathered frolick) (Arqios) This was delightful. It took me to a pleasant place. Wonderful Well done.
  February 4th, 2025 05:28
• Reflections (Sorenbarrett) There is a lot of Physics in this.Wonderful.I enjoyed reading Well...
  February 4th, 2025 05:26
• The Trap (Poetic Licence) Sounds like a dramatic life style that comes to a horrible end. He who...
  February 3rd, 2025 05:53
• sound of a day, precluded (Arqios) This ia well written.I heard Greig\'s Morning Mood being played in the...
  February 3rd, 2025 05:51
• Whispers Of The Heart Senryu. (Goldfinch60) This quite short and sweet.Beautiful compadre
  February 3rd, 2025 05:49
• Yesterday\'s embers (Sorenbarrett) I see the burning of a great tree here. Very well written with emotive...
  February 3rd, 2025 05:48
• where time stood still (Arqios) This is an extraordinarily beautiful tribute to a man made gate. But more...
  February 2nd, 2025 04:53
• The Pirates Of Penzance. (Goldfinch60) A great fun musical. Well constructed tribute poem.Excellent
  February 1st, 2025 15:32
• Night visitor (Sorenbarrett) Memories of past love can haunt the mind .Well constructed poem. Enjoyed...
  February 1st, 2025 15:30
• The superhero (Tony36) I knew a nurse like that. Enjoyable poem mi amigo
  February 1st, 2025 15:26
• Little boy blue come blow your horn (Sorenbarrett) I see Donald Trump in this poem. He certainly is one worth keeping an eye...
  January 31st, 2025 15:23
• Imagine If You Will. (Goldfinch60) Some wonderful things to imagine.I think in the end the imagination never...
  January 31st, 2025 15:18
• Wise Man Say (1) (Poetic Licence) This fun and lots of wisdom here. Excellent
  January 31st, 2025 15:16
• not to the swift (Arqios) This beautiful and sad. I see the plight of the writer. Excellent...
  January 31st, 2025 15:15
• Real Fake Beauty (Poetic Licence) Wonderful poem well-constructed with an important message.Enjoyable
  January 30th, 2025 03:24
• Jazz History (Goldfinch60) You certainly know your music.Amazing poem compadre
  January 30th, 2025 03:22
• bridge is out (Arqios) Sadly I believe every relationship must fail.Its a law of physics called...
  January 30th, 2025 03:21
• In Silence And Beyond. (Goldfinch60) Thsis is certainly the ultimate wish.That we should go on beyond this...
  January 29th, 2025 15:52
• The Devils Smile (Poetic Licence) Fear is always with us .This is a very personal account.Made me question...
  January 29th, 2025 15:50
• All ever desired (Sorenbarrett) This is quite sad.Certainly a well constructed poem. I see a aging beauty...
  January 29th, 2025 15:48
• bully-free (Arqios) I am old enough now that all my bullys are dead.That\'s the secret to ...
  January 29th, 2025 15:45
• Future Days (Cassie58) Lovely news.It is not always easy but it is a blessing.Well written
  January 29th, 2025 15:42
• The visitors (Tony36) Wonderful imaginative tale.So well constructed as well.Enjoyable
  January 29th, 2025 15:40
• Words On This Page. (Goldfinch60) I am sure the words you write will come. Good poem
  January 28th, 2025 05:43
• Word of rocks (Sorenbarrett) This was enjoyable to read.The sea carving out shapes and the night moving...
  January 28th, 2025 05:41
• into the arms of night (Arqios) Got to love the night. Well done. A very positive poem.
  January 28th, 2025 05:39
• Mozart\'s Birthday Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love Mozart.This is a wonderful tribute to the greatest composer of...
  January 27th, 2025 05:50
• The Devils Kiss (Poetic Licence) A very well constructed piece with an important message.It sounds like you...
  January 27th, 2025 05:48
• fleet-footed good (Arqios) A wonderful journey.I was transported because I do prefer to walk.Well...
  January 27th, 2025 05:47
• Pick a page (Sorenbarrett) Well constructed with wisdom as well.Excellent
  January 27th, 2025 05:45
• Rise and Shine (Cassie58) Lovely poem about birdsong. Well done.I was transported.
  January 26th, 2025 16:34
• Victim (Sorenbarrett) This is certainly a well-constructed powerful piece. I see Gods and...
  January 26th, 2025 05:32
• Daily Sensuality. (Goldfinch60) certainly having fun with this poem.Well written.Excellent
  January 26th, 2025 05:27
• Incredible India: my motherland (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Sounds like a magical place.Certainly old and modern mixed...
  January 25th, 2025 14:53
• Mary and Jack (Night of Passion) (Poetic Licence) Oh dear leaving without finishng the job.Well written.We have all been...
  January 24th, 2025 16:06
• Little Life (Orchidee) This says what a lot of us feel.The most important relationship is between...
  January 24th, 2025 16:03
• Deflowered (Sorenbarrett) Wow this is powerful.The fight between Nature and the senses.Nature often...
  January 24th, 2025 16:01
• Bella (Tony36) This is so incredible. The escape from a terrible place and so well...
  January 24th, 2025 15:59
• don’t know (Arqios) I think you are just exhausted. Writing is a tough journey.It is a...
  January 24th, 2025 15:56
• New Joy To The Choir. (Goldfinch60) It sounds like a fun group activity.Joy and wonder
  January 24th, 2025 02:17
• My Saving Grace. (Goldfinch60) Good to here that you found peace by the river.Wonderful poem.Excellent
  January 22nd, 2025 19:35
• Between heartbeats (Sorenbarrett) Time sure is a mystery.Some ask if it is real.This poem made me...
  January 22nd, 2025 19:33
• The Actress (Tony36) Gotta love actresses and actors.I remember Lauren Bacall.This poem is so...
  January 22nd, 2025 19:32
• Value of Gifts (Poetic Licence) Yes gift giving is a complex procedure. So many gifts are unwanted or even...
  January 22nd, 2025 19:30
• Seventies Love Sonnet. (Goldfinch60) An amazing love story mi amigo. SO good to hear that love can last
  January 20th, 2025 19:27
• Homographs (Sorenbarrett) This is very clever and fun to read. Gotta love those homographs,
  January 20th, 2025 19:25
• The Visitor (Tony36) An amazing meeting with the grim reaper.I enjoyed reading well done
  January 20th, 2025 19:23
• new day (Arqios) This is quite a plea for reparation. It ends optimistically. Well done
  January 19th, 2025 06:32
• Wound (Sorenbarrett) This certainly packs a punch. There is a lot of anger here and hurt that...
  January 19th, 2025 06:29
• Healthy Body. (Goldfinch60) This is a recipe for happiness. I always feel better when I read your...
  January 17th, 2025 16:21
• Muddy shoes (Sorenbarrett) This got me thinking.Well done.The trouble we cause can leave an imprint...
  January 17th, 2025 16:20
• CTRL + ALT + DLT (Arqios) This is a powerful poem. I see a dance with Pain that we want to come to...
  January 17th, 2025 16:18
• The Abandoned McDonald\'s (Tony36) Yes nothing sadder than a childhood favourite place that has gotten old. I...
  January 17th, 2025 16:15
• Start The Day. (Goldfinch60) Certainly a great way to view the new day.I enjoyed reading this poem...
  January 16th, 2025 05:50
• time’s no friend (Arqios) Time and tide wait for no man.Certainly no friend.An interesting poem...
  January 16th, 2025 05:48
• To L. B. (Sorenbarrett) Nice tribute to a fellow scribe.I like the rhyme
  January 16th, 2025 05:46
• Gray (Sorenbarrett) great poem about the contrariness of this crazy world. Opposites and...
  January 15th, 2025 05:14
• Death In The Night. (Goldfinch60) Scary poem but good fun as well.Excellent
  January 15th, 2025 05:10
• On the porch (2781) Very good writing.It transported me to the farm with that great dependency...
  January 15th, 2025 01:44
• The power of words (Tony36) This is certainly true. Words can hurt and heal and last a long...
  January 15th, 2025 00:05
• Our Book Of Life. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful wisdom here.The book of life includes us all.Well done Excellent
  January 13th, 2025 05:05
• once there was a boy (Arqios) I remember these feelings so well. This poem capture the sad and wonderful...
  January 13th, 2025 05:03
• Mist (Sorenbarrett) A wonderful poem that creates a vista so beautiful.Enjoyable
  January 13th, 2025 04:58
• Angels Watching Over You (Poetic Licence) A lovely wish and prayer.Well done Excellent
  January 13th, 2025 04:57
• Riddle (Sorenbarrett) This one is well written.I must say it is a riddle.It has a number of...
  January 12th, 2025 04:49
• the lighthouse keeper’s watch (Arqios) I have always admired the light house watchman.The perfect job for a...
  January 12th, 2025 04:42
• Where Do The Lonely People Go (Poetic Licence) Sadly this palace is the home of the lonely.Maybe try getting a kitten...
  January 11th, 2025 16:04
• spaces we inhabit: with every breath (Arqios) You are a wise man mi amigo.Your wisdom shines through like a light-house...
  January 11th, 2025 16:00
• Baby giggles (Tony36) They are cute them little angels.Sad what happens to them as they grow....
  January 11th, 2025 15:58
• Flies buzz (Sorenbarrett) Sounds like my Divorce. Death of love and fear.Powerful stuff.Some anger...
  January 11th, 2025 15:56
• Never Blame. (Goldfinch60) People can be amazing. A good summary of human interactions. Excellent
  January 11th, 2025 05:56
• My Path Of Life. (Goldfinch60) It soon like you are in a good place.Nice poem mi amigo
  January 10th, 2025 15:29
• What happened to beauty? (Sorenbarrett) This is a honest and sad commentary on modern life.Where is the Beauty...
  January 10th, 2025 15:28
• As The Clouds Gently Roll On By (Poetic Licence) This is quite a plee.A man alone bargaining with a life that will not...
  January 10th, 2025 15:25
• reflection by the sea (Arqios) A wonderful thoughtful poem. It really possesses the elements of poetry....
  January 10th, 2025 15:22
• Footprints Left In Sand and Snow (Cassie58) This is a beautiful and tender appreciation of etenal Love and the passing...
  January 10th, 2025 15:19
• Chickens (Sorenbarrett) This reminds me of Aesops fables only deeper.Well done
  January 8th, 2025 19:50
• tears you could have cried (Arqios) This is well written.I love poems that have adjectives in them.Well done
  January 8th, 2025 19:48
• The Tower (Tony36) Wonderful and fantastic tale.I\'ll get Disney on the line and we can make...
  January 8th, 2025 19:47
• Our Lakeside River. (Goldfinch60) Another beautiful scene. It took me there. Well done
  January 8th, 2025 03:04
• Watson And Homes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60) This is good fun.A well told tale with good intent.Enjoyable
  January 7th, 2025 05:24
• Hope in Those Smiling Eyes (Poetic Licence) Sadly it is the world we live in.War is always somewhere.Hope is all we...
  January 7th, 2025 05:22
• Star Shining (Orchidee) A timely tribute to Christ the King.Well done
  January 6th, 2025 04:43
• The Time Has Come. (Goldfinch60) t sounds like a wonderful adventure. Enjoyed reading. It is eternally...
  January 6th, 2025 04:41
• Gone (Sorenbarrett) This is so well constructed. I like the rhyme and the nostalgic mood. Well...
  January 6th, 2025 04:39
• Another New Day Tanka. (Goldfinch60) Another day another opportunity. wonderful salute to the sun
  January 5th, 2025 04:48
• My Heart Still Beats The Same (Poetic Licence) Sticks and stones will break your bones but your heart still beats the...
  January 4th, 2025 15:16
• read to your satisfaction (Arqios) Wow this is what I\'m talkin\' \'bout. I hope you don\'t mind me calling...
  January 4th, 2025 15:13