Comments on community poems by David Wakeling

• Alex And Reg. (Goldfinch60) A lovely story of simple joys of meeting friends.An enjoyable poem.
  June 23rd, 2024 17:16
• Pretension (2781) This raises the ultimate doubt we all live with.Made me think.Well done.
  June 20th, 2024 17:38
• Jingle Bells! (Orchidee) Got to love Christmas.Clever poem.Well done
  June 20th, 2024 17:36
• Litha Acrostic 2. (Goldfinch60) A great and cleverly joyful poem.Well done sir.
  June 20th, 2024 17:34
• Places of Peace (Orchidee) Lets always strive for peace.The alternative is unthinkable.Well...
  June 13th, 2024 18:49
• The Glory Of Children. (Goldfinch60) Its a shocking mystery.I guess you have to bring back hanging.Send a...
  June 13th, 2024 18:48
• I write (O. Ella) This is a great insight into the nature of Love.Very profound and
  June 9th, 2024 22:45
• CARVING (Bobby O) This is quite a insightful description of one man\'s life.Made me...
  June 7th, 2024 17:34
• Our River. (Goldfinch60) This is quite beautiful.Out of all the rivers in all the world you were...
  June 7th, 2024 17:29
• Beegie Adair Acrostic, (Goldfinch60) I\'m ashamed to admit I didn\'t know Beegie\'s music before.Thanks to you...
  June 6th, 2024 17:47
• Another Day. (Goldfinch60) Another day another chance.Short and sweet.Well done
  June 1st, 2024 06:55
• Cooeee! (Orchidee) This is a change from your religious poetry. A little bit more fun.Well...
  May 31st, 2024 17:40
• If There Wasn\'t A Price....? (Goldfinch60) I think I learned something today.this poem is filled with a life time of...
  May 31st, 2024 17:37
• Some See Senryu. (Goldfinch60) A very profound statement.I relate to this. Well done
  May 29th, 2024 17:41
• Another Lover (Thomas W Case) Women ya can\'t live with them and ya can\'t live without them.I choose...
  May 29th, 2024 17:39
• An Empty Space (Cassie58) A wonderful sonnet.well constructed.A little touch of reality...
  May 28th, 2024 07:18
• Walking To the End Of Time. (Goldfinch60) This is special.I am amazed at your optimism it is contagious.Well done
  May 28th, 2024 07:15
• MAGIC OF WORDS (Bobby O) Words are magic.They form magic spells.Wonderful poem.Enjoyed
  May 26th, 2024 16:26
• Havan For Shivani. (Goldfinch60) Bless the house and all who live there.Wonderful poem and a wonderful...
  May 25th, 2024 16:34
• Just Judgement (Orchidee) Very well constructed poem.I like the rhyme.The message is eternal.Well...
  May 21st, 2024 07:42
• Hugo. (Goldfinch60) This is a delightful story. Very much a dog\'s tale.Well done
  May 21st, 2024 07:40
• Where is it (2781) Fear of the Lord is worth millions.A powerful read.
  May 21st, 2024 07:38
• Cor Meum, Caput Meum (My Heart My Head) (Thomas W Case) If you find a place with less pain let me know. Quite a \"poetic\" view of...
  May 19th, 2024 17:09
• The Nature Of Wales. (Goldfinch60) Its a beautiful country Wales but a little cold at times. Nice to go with...
  May 19th, 2024 17:08
• ALL WE TREASURE (Bobby O) There is so much in this.friendship Doubt Fear.Its all there like a Jazz...
  May 19th, 2024 17:07
• Look To Infinity. (Goldfinch60) It certainly is a profound adventure.Great poem on a lofty topic.Well done
  May 18th, 2024 21:29
• It\'s the Little Things (Thomas W Case) Some of us are in our own private prisons and yes we appreciated the...
  May 17th, 2024 16:41
• Lovelorn Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Deep feelings here.Well constructed.Enjoyed.
  May 17th, 2024 16:38
• Why Wars? (Goldfinch60) I think you have raised the eternal question.Sadly no-one has a good...
  May 16th, 2024 21:20
• Damnation Island (Lunatic\'s Ball) (Thomas W Case) I sometimes think we are already there.Great poem.Enjoyed
  May 16th, 2024 21:16
• Good-Bye Gonzo (Thomas W Case) Bat country forever.Good read. Enjoyed
  May 14th, 2024 20:11
• Golden Girl. (Goldfinch60) Very beautiful description.Well done.It took me to a place of peace.
  May 14th, 2024 20:09
• Cats Know Fun (Thomas W Case) This was fun.very enjoyable.well done
  May 13th, 2024 04:58
• Chet Has Gone. (Goldfinch60) What a wonderful tribute to a great musician. Well done
  May 13th, 2024 04:56
• Favourable Faith (Orchidee) Faith Hope and Charity now that\'s a wonderful combination.Nice tribute as...
  May 11th, 2024 05:00
• Musical Peace. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love music.It hath charms to soothe the savage breast.Well written.
  May 11th, 2024 04:58
• Yet Another Fine Day. (Goldfinch60) I always feel better when i read your poems.Well done mi amigo
  May 10th, 2024 03:28
• And All That Jazz. (Goldfinch60) This is a masterpiece.A detailed look at all that Jazz.Loved it
  May 9th, 2024 03:05
• Possessing Peace (Orchidee) Nice poem.Well done.Enjoyable
  May 7th, 2024 21:15
• The Great Grey Beast. (Goldfinch60) yes indeed those were the days.An enjoyable read.
  May 7th, 2024 21:14
• Our Book. (Goldfinch60) Wisdom and great music.What more could we want.Well done I think I\'ll...
  May 6th, 2024 03:11
• And It Rained! (Goldfinch60) Yes more fun in the Sun.Great story.It took me there.Well done
  May 4th, 2024 16:09
• Sibling Rivalry. (Goldfinch60) Hair today gone tomorrow. I can relate to this.I haven\'t talked to my...
  May 2nd, 2024 17:24
• Phone Cook. (Goldfinch60) I hate waiting on the phone.Its a trick so you will hang up.Clever poem...
  April 30th, 2024 17:27
• Music Conquers All. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love Music.Especially Wolfgang Amadeus.Well written
  April 28th, 2024 03:39
• A Color Poem (Hey!) I read this twice but I\'m a little confused.Black is not a colour.It is...
  April 24th, 2024 16:55
• The Happiness Of Life. (Goldfinch60) Sunshine and Happiness.Not a bad recipe for a good life.Well said
  April 24th, 2024 16:48
• Struck Down. (Goldfinch60) Great fun story and well constructed.Excellent
  April 23rd, 2024 02:56
• Nature\'s Blanket. (Goldfinch60) A remarkable poem.It captures the glory of the view and the struggle to...
  April 22nd, 2024 02:54
• Frozen Love (Thomas W Case) Wonderful story.I enjoyed reading.Well done
  April 18th, 2024 18:20
• Some Words Speak for Themselves (Neville) Hope Love and Peace. Not a bad recipe for a good life
  April 18th, 2024 03:19
• They Came To The Door. (Goldfinch60) I\'ve always ignored organized religion.I just believe in myself these...
  April 18th, 2024 03:17
• Flowers from my grave (Sammysomal 79) This is quite well written.Well done
  April 17th, 2024 16:13
• Apathy. (Goldfinch60) Makes good sense as usual mi amigo.great poem and great message
  April 17th, 2024 03:15
• Well 1 (Hugh) Umm a bleak but realistic view of the nightmare we call Life.Well done
  April 14th, 2024 17:24
• The Shadows Were Back. (Goldfinch60) We\'re all goin on a Summer Holiday....for a week or two...Loved the...
  April 14th, 2024 17:22
• Echos of longing (Koshish) This is very well constructed,I love the rhyme.A sad but accurate...
  April 13th, 2024 15:48
• Life (13LaurenD) This is quite a statement.It seems very personal.I guess I am too dumb to...
  April 13th, 2024 15:45
• Gov\'t (Sunshine777) A thoughtful poem.Well done
  April 13th, 2024 15:42
• Argh! Pain (Orchidee) There\'s something fishy about this relationship.Great read and good fun
  April 13th, 2024 15:39
• Custer. (Goldfinch60) Holy guacamole.Very well constructed and good fun punch line.Enjoyed
  April 13th, 2024 15:34
• Mirror, mirror on the wall (Ladywithaquill) A unique poem with a positive message at the end.Well done
  April 12th, 2024 03:50
• Burned (NinjaGirl) This is quite a sad poem.But certainly some Truth here.
  April 12th, 2024 03:49
• Olive Oil (Orchidee) A wonderful prayer.Well done
  April 12th, 2024 03:47
• Weak To Strong (Goldfinch60) Will do.Some wise words here.
  April 12th, 2024 03:46
• Unitarians. (Goldfinch60) It sounds like a reasonable religion.I think we all seek meaning in...
  April 11th, 2024 03:11
• Dead End Eyes (Thomas W Case) Tell me about it.That\'s why I live alone.No women\'s eyes here.Great poem
  April 11th, 2024 00:15
• Counting Cost of the Cross (Orchidee) With you and Jesus on our side we are in a good place.
  April 10th, 2024 03:12
• Cheltenham Croquet. (Goldfinch60) I enjoyed this especially the note about the members accepting you.Great...
  April 10th, 2024 03:10
• Simplicity Sentiments (Orchidee) Well constructed and inspirationsl. Well done mi amigo
  April 9th, 2024 03:27
• My World. (Goldfinch60) Now this is what I\'m talking about.Wonderful poem.Well done.
  April 9th, 2024 03:25
• O Abundant Spirit (Orchidee) What a wonderful prayer.It sounds very familiar.
  April 8th, 2024 15:53
• Buzzard. (Goldfinch60) Great poem.It took me there. Well done
  April 8th, 2024 03:24
• In Harmony Together. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful you can turn a simple walk by the river into a major life...
  April 7th, 2024 03:18
• The Village Ghost (Goldfinch60) Very well structured and good rhyme and cadence.Excellent
  April 6th, 2024 06:10
• Wholesome Wordings (Orchidee) Amen.Inspirational text
  April 5th, 2024 05:55
• So All Is Fine. (Goldfinch60) Another day another opportunity.This is inspirational.Well done
  April 5th, 2024 05:54
• Reflection of the Soul (Thomas W Case) Wonderful.An inspirational poem
  April 4th, 2024 15:50
• Strengthening Love Senryu. (Goldfinch60) Inspirational.A love for all the ages
  April 4th, 2024 05:25
• The New Season. (Goldfinch60) Wonderful to hear you are still active.Very enjoyable poem
  April 3rd, 2024 02:14
• Emmaus Explainings (Orchidee) If peace is the message then I\'m listening
  April 1st, 2024 02:05
• Examining Status Quo. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful group from an amazing time for music
  April 1st, 2024 02:03
• Tomb Tale (Orchidee) This is a powerful rendition of the greatest story ever told.
  March 30th, 2024 22:07
• Sinking into Your Gaze (Koshish) This is very dramatic.Wonderful to read.Excellent
  March 30th, 2024 22:05
• Could Distance Bring Placidity (Weltschmerz) This poses so eternal questions.I\'m not sure I have any answers.Well done
  March 30th, 2024 22:03
• The Bullfrog Dreams of Flying (Thomas W Case) Well done.There \'s a touch of Aesop\'s fables here.Excellent
  March 30th, 2024 22:02
• Dog Walking. (Goldfinch60) This is a delightful story and one that made us all think.Very good
  March 30th, 2024 05:54
• Train to Vienna (Weltschmerz) This is wonderful.It possesses the three great aspects of good poetry:...
  March 29th, 2024 20:20
• Words Tanka. (Goldfinch60) That\'s a clever piece.I enjoyed reading.Well done
  March 29th, 2024 05:48
• Types of Trees (Orchidee) This is wonderful for the Christians reading.Very comforting.
  March 27th, 2024 05:43
• My Beautiful Lady. (Goldfinch60) That is a beautiful poem written to a wonderful lady.Well done.
  March 27th, 2024 05:41
• Please Achieve Peace. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful protest.We all want Peace.God poem Andy
  March 26th, 2024 15:49
• Palms Processional (Orchidee) This is well written and will bring comfort to many.Well done
  March 24th, 2024 05:29
• Calliope Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Oh this is clever. I Enjoyed reading.Well done
  March 24th, 2024 02:10
• The Pub With No Beer. (Goldfinch60) No that\'s a sad tale.Still you had a nic e lunch otherwise
  March 20th, 2024 16:40
• Oh What A Night. (Goldfinch60) What a magic night.Was Peggy Sue there? A whole lot a shakin goin on.This...
  March 17th, 2024 16:08
• Art. (Goldfinch60) Good poem on Art and what it means.Some wisdom here as well
  March 16th, 2024 06:06
• Books Like People. (Goldfinch60) Gotta love books.I have a collection.Great poem.
  March 15th, 2024 04:43
• Why? asks Fido (Orchidee) This was fun.I\'m not sure Fido has a healthy attitude but each to their...
  March 15th, 2024 04:41
• Shanties Getting Better. (Goldfinch60) Bound for Botany Bay no doubt.Great story
  March 14th, 2024 02:29