Comments on community poems by David Wakeling
- It started with an ending (A lockless key)
This is a bit confronting.Lots of unforgivable things here.Many...
March 9th, 2023 02:01 - Sands of Time (John_Bingham)
Time certainly is a mystery.Einstein said it was an illusion. It is used...
March 8th, 2023 05:14 - Gravity is love …gravity is a woman (Domilla)
This is certainly a tribute to Women.I am not sure all women can be...
March 8th, 2023 05:11 - The Train to Auschwitz. (David Wakeling)
Indeed.I hope so.All Nazi\'s should have a special place in Hell
March 7th, 2023 05:09 - Impeccable (Satishverma)
I read this twice but the metaphors drown the meaning so I really have no...
March 6th, 2023 20:58 - Newly-Felt. (Fay Slimm.)
I read this twice and while it is well written I am too dumb to understand...
March 6th, 2023 05:36 - The Beautiful World Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Thank you for reminding me how much I love music.Well done I am dusting...
March 6th, 2023 05:34 - Today I went to the Valley of Erudition. (David Wakeling)
Indeed it is.thank you for reading my work
March 6th, 2023 05:32 - Yasmen takes her Hajib off. (David Wakeling)
We do indeed.Thanks for commenting
March 5th, 2023 04:45 - Small To Large Steps. (Goldfinch60)
Life is a dance put you have to learn the steps.This is well done filled...
March 4th, 2023 04:48 - Ugly Sue. (David Wakeling)
Indeed.thanks for your comments
March 3rd, 2023 15:24 - Ok To Admit You’re Not Ok (Mark The Phenomenon)
This is okay.I like the message and the rhyme Well done
March 3rd, 2023 02:00 - The Pearl Necklace. (David Wakeling)
Thank you
March 2nd, 2023 05:29 - I am so sorry (Pocev_Gjoshe)
This is a chunky read.It is condescending to women and really quite...
March 1st, 2023 17:09 - The Tiger (Kinsley Lee)
This is okay.I like the rhyme and the use of adjectives.It seems...
March 1st, 2023 17:07 - Dubravka danced in the kitchen all alone. (David Wakeling)
Indeed.Thanks for reading
March 1st, 2023 05:14 - Sun! (Joakim Bergen)
Talking to the Sun is a little confusing.It reads like a script rather...
February 28th, 2023 17:28 - Some Resent Our Comment and Become Absent (Mvvenkataraman)
Commenting is a greater art than actually writing a poem. Sadly most...
February 28th, 2023 17:26 - The Sun did not rise this morning (David Wakeling)
What a coincidence.Great minds think alike
February 28th, 2023 05:15 - Brain Awakening. (Goldfinch60)
That\'s also true of the word Australia.Every A in Australia is pronounced...
February 28th, 2023 02:21 - Interloper (PurpleGlasses)
I found this confusing but hey what would I know
February 27th, 2023 05:16 - Insanity (Sorenbarrett)
This is quite confronting.Just like modern life is.Well done
February 27th, 2023 05:14 - Joseph and the last orange (David Wakeling)
Thank you.
February 27th, 2023 05:11 - Hair Today.... (David Wakeling)
Thank you.Much appreciated
February 26th, 2023 04:43 - Standing on the cliff , by the sea, at night, I heard a voice. (David Wakeling)
Thank you Much appreciated
February 25th, 2023 05:07 - AT OUR AGE!! (Goldfinch60)
Age shall not weary them Nor the sciatic nerve condemn
February 25th, 2023 02:11 - What game is this (David Wakeling)
Thank you
February 25th, 2023 02:01 - Everyday (Chemtrails) (Shaunmatthewcpoetry)
It is difficult to work out the purpose of this.I suspect there is no...
February 23rd, 2023 02:41 - Some day (Norman Flagtea)
This is unfinished and frankly has no meaning.The reader is completely...
February 23rd, 2023 02:40 - These are the dark days (David Wakeling)
What What
February 23rd, 2023 02:35 - my everything. (Ayathebest55)
This doesn\'t make sense. If you wanted to forget someone why write a poem...
February 22nd, 2023 23:30 - The Complexity of Being Human. (Aurelian Swift)
This is okay.It actually has a coherent theme.Well done
February 22nd, 2023 20:17 - Long Distance (Debake)
The characters are not named so the reader is not engaged.Nothing is...
February 21st, 2023 22:59 - My name is Mary Judith MaCallister (David Wakeling)
No can do amigo no can do.Thanks for reading
February 21st, 2023 16:01 - The Night (2781)
fantasy
February 21st, 2023 03:00 - Lock Up (R.J.Stone)
The poem is repetitive and unclear.It does not stand on its own.No reason...
February 19th, 2023 15:43 - Mr Bellmeister catches the bus. (David Wakeling)
Indeed.Thanks for your comments
February 19th, 2023 15:39 - The Dawn is just a Cobweb away (Arobot)
This reads like the author wants to give some life advice.Unfortunately...
February 19th, 2023 04:50 - The Train to Treblinka. (David Wakeling)
Thank you for your comments.Much appreciated
February 18th, 2023 02:15 - 6 what my anxiety feels like (MiddleMood)
This is quite personal.Hopefully it was cathartic for you.It is well...
February 17th, 2023 00:32 - Little Davy Blue Eyes. (David Wakeling)
Joy....do you need the definiton
February 17th, 2023 00:26 - Except (Mara \"Marzipan\")
This is quite self indulgent. more like a dating profile than a poem. But...
February 16th, 2023 16:49 - Earth Colors (Descovia)
This is certainly a positive view life.well done
February 16th, 2023 16:46 - We are nearly home, my angel, we are nearly home. (David Wakeling)
Thank you for your comments.Much apreciated
February 15th, 2023 05:38 - The House of Tears. (David Wakeling)
February 13th, 2023 05:50 - God Pty Ltd (David Wakeling)
The truth is what ever you want it to be Judas Iscariot
February 12th, 2023 04:51 - I wanna grow old with you (Kitty the naughty poet)
A lovely wish poem.Made me a little teary.Well done.
February 11th, 2023 21:04
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