Comments on community poems by David Wakeling
- Fighting For Peace? (Goldfinch60)
War is just part of the deal.The saddest part.
November 9th, 2023 02:30 - The Day She Went Away (Hunar Miglani)
Yet another tedious failed relationship poem.How many million times does...
November 8th, 2023 14:30 - Let’s Walk Together On The Same Path… (G.Cabús)
Happiness is okay.A nice goal
November 8th, 2023 14:29 - Thumb Stump (Gray0328)
Wow that\'s painful. At least you have a story to tell the grandchildren
November 8th, 2023 14:27 - Healing(Unfinished) (A thousand wishes)
This is quiet sad.Maybe you need a pet yo cheer you up.try a kitten, they...
November 8th, 2023 14:22 - Song for a toddler (David Wakeling)
Thank you sir.Much appreciated
November 8th, 2023 02:11 - Forty Two Years Today. (Goldfinch60)
My Father died with Dementia so I have some idea but you are right to be...
November 7th, 2023 02:51 - Answering The \'Phone. (Goldfinch60)
A great fun story. Well done
November 5th, 2023 17:33 - Lonely Little Vagina (Thomas W Case)
This is very clever .Some humour here and personification of the female...
November 3rd, 2023 15:01 - Beauty Is Light. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful sentiment.Well done
November 3rd, 2023 02:37 - That Glorious Game. (Goldfinch60)
It is a great game.This is a nice tribute.well done
October 30th, 2023 15:45 - CONCISE EXCELL (Bobby O)
Nice tribute. Well done
October 30th, 2023 15:43 - winter (Joshi)
This is okay.Sadly I have never seen snow so I can\'t relate
October 30th, 2023 15:41 - The girl\'s world (Sk)
Who is \"she\" and why should the reader care? This needs names to engage...
October 30th, 2023 15:40 - The Meeting With Someone I Once Loved (Mavv)
Who are you talking to and why would I feel comfortable...
October 30th, 2023 15:37
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