Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.



  • Soap And Water (WriteBeLight) Ah - love the sweet picture and the telling lines on that awful aversion...
    February 25th, 2017 11:01
  • Deer (Tony36) A fine example in these few lines of the only thing to raise toward any...
    February 25th, 2017 10:52
  • Carpe Diem (Philip) Excellent advice in this well-rhymed poem Philip.
    February 25th, 2017 10:50
  • CHANGES (Michael Edwards) Expressive reminder that nature will never stand still - change comes at a...
    February 24th, 2017 17:24
  • The Over (John Snowdon) Pathos runs through this well written poetic reason why \"love is not for...
    February 24th, 2017 17:16
  • Find The Strength And Courage (Brooklyn6timesplus) A good piece of advice and so tenderly given.
    February 24th, 2017 17:11
  • I Am with Your Hands (Amit) A wonderful declaration of love.
    February 24th, 2017 17:10
  • Rock Reassurances (Orchidee) A very inspiring verse of praise - I love that part of Psalm 18.
    February 24th, 2017 14:54
  • Tracks (Augustus) Love the humour in these few lines - - when I take a walk my own tracks...
    February 24th, 2017 14:49
  • Music (Lost-but-not-broken17) A lilting piece to the blessings of music - and I agree without it we...
    February 23rd, 2017 10:24
  • Sweet Love (Notapoet) A soothing read of lyrical tribute to love.
    February 23rd, 2017 09:39
  • I Could But Won\'t (WriteBeLight) A good flow to this rant against the vagaries of others.
    February 23rd, 2017 07:00
  • MEMORIES (Michael Edwards) The slow pace of line makes such a peaceful flow to this read Michael -...
    February 22nd, 2017 05:18
  • Accepted (Tony36) A powerful message in these few words.
    February 21st, 2017 13:56
  • Sheen (Augustus) Stunning imagination and wonderful internal rhyming make this dire...
    February 21st, 2017 13:55


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