Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• sticks, stones, and the futility of fingers (Heather T) Wounds like this heal only with slow and heartwrenching attendance to the...
  June 17th, 2017 01:27
• Writting words (Tony36) Thoughtfully caring these loving words.
  June 15th, 2017 10:46
• Ageless Assurance (Orchidee) A fine write and full of live faith.
  June 15th, 2017 10:45
• Dementia - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Such a sad read - when dementia hits family is the only time we can...
  June 15th, 2017 03:11
• STRINGS (Louis Gibbs) Those strings do the same thing for me Louis - - a delightfully dreamy...
  June 14th, 2017 07:16
• Incandescent Flame (GeraldineTaylor) Such a rousing and inspirational read Geraldine - so pleased to have...
  June 14th, 2017 04:18
• A LIFE FULLY LIVED (Louis Gibbs) This read touches the heart with its reasons for hanging on when things...
  June 12th, 2017 08:21
• LOST IN THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards) The heart of a female has no comfort from broken promises - though sad...
  June 10th, 2017 02:59
• Broken Country. (Goldfinch60) A fine explanation and an engaging read G.
  June 10th, 2017 02:56
• Breakfast. (Garry) Doc\'s advice is worth considering Garry - remembering however that...
  June 10th, 2017 02:52
• SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 5 and 6 (Michael Edwards) Love the wit in your limericks Michael
  June 9th, 2017 07:37
• wisp (Heather T) A depth of expression pulses through this richly linguistic verse - I...
  June 9th, 2017 02:13
• SUSPICION (Michael Edwards) Mysterious and provocative this verse with its painting to match and oh...
  June 8th, 2017 02:57
• COURAGEOUS LOVE (Louis Gibbs) Your tribute to a well-loved \"man for all seasons\" touches the heart...
  June 7th, 2017 10:57
• Crown On Loan (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Vital points for us poets to remember in these few lines Kurt.
  June 7th, 2017 10:48
• Unending Tomorrows (Augustus) The research which must have gone into this gives readers so much insight...
  June 7th, 2017 09:17
• Max Richter. (Goldfinch60) Such a wonderful use of musical instruments in the number by Max Richter -...
  June 7th, 2017 07:49
• AT THE CEMETERY (RAJ NANDY) A poignant narrative with a heart-rending end dear Raj - so good to see...
  June 7th, 2017 03:13
• Mournful Memories (Orchidee) A dark but powerful write.
  June 6th, 2017 14:55
• Color Master (Augustus) How truly delightful to not only see you in video performing in front of...
  June 6th, 2017 12:46
• Impossible Conquered. (Goldfinch60) A wise reminder.
  June 6th, 2017 03:18
• Mislaid. (Fay Slimm.)
  June 5th, 2017 06:11
• Clinical Trials (Augustus) Trials must come when fighting despondence and this write shows an...
  June 4th, 2017 13:25
• Deliverance Declaration (Orchidee) A lovely presentation of faith. That psalm is a comfort to many today.
  June 4th, 2017 13:17
• Mannequin Words (ElenaGrace) I feel the romance of these well-crafted lines and love the comparison to...
  June 4th, 2017 13:15
• THE WIZZARDS OF OZ (Louis Gibbs) Good form chosen to denounce these wizards who shape whatever they feel...
  June 4th, 2017 13:13
• Voices Call (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) I love the terse power in these few lines Kurt - - faith is the keyword in...
  June 4th, 2017 13:11
• LIMERICK 33 (Michael Edwards) Ha ha ha ha - great stuff.
  June 4th, 2017 07:22
• Nan. (Goldfinch60) Your loving words and phrases would reach to anyone\'s heart having lost...
  June 4th, 2017 06:05
• A Narrative Snare (Ethan) Ah - the snare we as poets have to see and escape from - a great piece of...
  June 4th, 2017 06:03
• Eyes to My Soul (Gino) A plea which, encased as it is in excellent phrasing appeals to the heart...
  June 4th, 2017 06:01
• SCRIPTURE FOR SUNDAY ~ PLEASE PRAY FOR LONDON (AGAIN) (BRIAN & ANGELA) A sincere Amen to this remembrance of recent London and Manchester...
  June 4th, 2017 05:58
• Cathartic Lacerations (Whisperingquill) An exciting read which sits very well in the form you chose - love the...
  June 4th, 2017 05:56
• When Rodents Roam... (P.H.Rose) You verse their activities so well here P.H. - I once read that rats are...
  June 4th, 2017 05:54
• My beautiful cordyline... (P.H.Rose) To cry with joy when a flower blooms shows nature enjoys first place in...
  June 2nd, 2017 16:28
• Feeding Time to the Silence (LIGHT WARRIOR) A powerful outcry against false friends and the torture deceit can employ...
  June 1st, 2017 23:14
• Beautiful Moonlight (Gino) Your words adorn the beautiful mystery of moonlight Gino. A romantic look...
  June 1st, 2017 22:53
• The Ecstasy of Gold (Gino) Breathless with admiration for this treat of a read Gino - your imagery...
  June 1st, 2017 22:45
• Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.) Heartfelt thanks dear friends for you kind and encouraging comments and ...
  June 1st, 2017 16:15
• PEACE (Louis Gibbs) A feeling of peace brought on by gentle rain is something I too would...
  June 1st, 2017 09:52
• The Ascender (Augustus) Reading the dip into alliteration and assonance you scribed here made my...
  June 1st, 2017 08:55
• LIMERICK 32 (Michael Edwards) Where do you get these limericks from Michael - so full of fun.
  June 1st, 2017 04:18
• Beauty Described Pt.1 (Abpoet18) Loud applause for this shout of poetic reasons why love must be patient...
  May 30th, 2017 11:06
• Catching attention, delivering  effective messages that make the difference (Avigail) Such good and meaningful advice Avigail - - poets need to go on writing...
  May 30th, 2017 11:03
• THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs) A thought-provoking read Louis - -love that final stanza which attributes...
  May 30th, 2017 11:00
• The Foley (Augustus) The intricate exposure which constantly takes over you express so bravely...
  May 30th, 2017 09:31
• PEACE OF THE DOVE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) The beauty of doves so well expressed Brian - - another amazing acrostic...
  May 30th, 2017 05:21
• WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED (Michael Edwards) What a land of light this place must be. You draw its paradise with words...
  May 30th, 2017 01:47
• Cancer Dying (Augustus) My heart goes out to you Augustus my faraway poet-friend - sending you...
  May 29th, 2017 16:17
• False Limits (Kurt Philip Behm) Wise advice Kurt and so precisely written. - love the power in that final...
  May 29th, 2017 13:00
• THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR (Michael Edwards) Both pictures painted and penned to perfection - - You have real talent my...
  May 26th, 2017 03:35
• On The Green Envied Moss (Edthepoet) A tale of romance with a sting in its sad tail - - your pen evokes times...
  May 25th, 2017 08:48
• Seeds of Enlightenment (Whisperingquill) Enlightenment described with skill of internal rhyming - - -well crafted...
  May 25th, 2017 05:15
• PRAYER ~ A BLESSING (BRIAN & ANGELA) Prayer is a vital gift to all human beings and so good to see its...
  May 25th, 2017 04:27
• THE WHITE FROCKED MAID (Michael Edwards) A maid made so real I was there in that ghostly old mullioned room. A...
  May 24th, 2017 04:54
• SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet) (BRIAN & ANGELA) A haunt of a read as a dire reminder of what this country faces . Pray we...
  May 23rd, 2017 08:38
• Echoe Deep Swallows (Edthepoet) The flow and mystery encased in this absorbing verse gives such a boost...
  May 23rd, 2017 08:34
• LIMMERICK 29 (Michael Edwards) A smile on my face as I contemplate a nude little Barrington without his...
  May 23rd, 2017 02:49
• The Bubble. (Goldfinch60) Prayerful thoughts go with you in this hardest of tasks when a loved one...
  May 23rd, 2017 02:47
• Resignation (Jabberwocky) A soulful refection on love now gone - a verse which pours lonely from...
  May 23rd, 2017 02:45
• Words as I fall asleep... (P.H.Rose) Words filled with darker colour bring to the fore a life of regret..... a...
  May 23rd, 2017 02:40
• The Forge (Augustus) Ah - you make it all come to life in this vivid description of what it...
  May 23rd, 2017 02:37
• For Augustus (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) A caring and uplifting message for friend Augustus and with words...
  May 22nd, 2017 16:29
• My Name is Cupid (Lgp74415) Ah - loud applause for this flowing verse on that rascal Cupid and what he...
  May 22nd, 2017 08:31
• Courtship after Love (Jabberwocky) Adeptly crafted this yearning to show and be shown intimacy again grabs...
  May 22nd, 2017 04:58
• COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A loud Amen to this resolve Brian - - helping others and working...
  May 22nd, 2017 04:20
• Somewhere In Your Eyes (Magenta1) Poetic expressions of excellent quality flame from this piece of...
  May 22nd, 2017 02:03
• I\'ll be there (Gypsysoul) Oh this read goes right to the heart and leaves such a feeling of love...
  May 22nd, 2017 01:59
• THE CLOAK I WEAR (Michael Edwards) Love this - both picture and verse are so absorbingly good
  May 22nd, 2017 01:55
• Siphoning Intraversely (Whisperingquill) What a linguist pleasure to read is this uplifting palette of words drawn...
  May 21st, 2017 13:16
• Damnation Still Unrhymed (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Love the strong message in verse number one and the flippant fun...
  May 21st, 2017 13:12
• New Glasses (WriteBeLight) So glad you got fixed up with the right glasses so now we will have lots...
  May 21st, 2017 13:09
• LIMERICK 29 (Michael Edwards) First rate limerick - tickled me pink.....
  May 21st, 2017 08:11
• River\'s Bourne (Prose) (Lucaso) A bouquet of amazingly rendered imagery which rivets the eyes and makes...
  May 21st, 2017 08:10
• Feeding Frenzy (Jabberwocky) Cleverly worded this terse observation on dull company. Good write.
  May 21st, 2017 08:07
• THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A beautiful set of praiseworthy traits we have as a gift from our Father...
  May 21st, 2017 04:43
• Sunlight - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Good haiku thanks for giving us something to think on today
  May 21st, 2017 04:42
• FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Friends are a gift indeed and you verse them so well in this form of...
  May 20th, 2017 02:01
• TEMPEST (Michael Edwards) Full of flowing tempestuous spirit - - both painting and poem a
  May 20th, 2017 01:57
• Ludwig. (Goldfinch60) Wow - what a fantastic parody by Dudley and to think I never saw this...
  May 20th, 2017 01:55
• You (Rachelle) A really good rhythm to this romantic verse Rachelle and welcome to MPS ...
  May 19th, 2017 13:49
• COUNT BLESSINGS ! A 5 ~ 9 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Yes we should be prepared to make a difference and giving to others is one...
  May 16th, 2017 06:54
• Plastered Poetry (WriteBeLight) Ha ha - the picture with words tell the whole fun-story - - - great smile...
  May 16th, 2017 05:44
• Reflections in My Life. (Goldfinch60) A flow of lovely nostalgia in this positive poem on how to look at the...
  May 16th, 2017 02:11
• HIS NAME NOT HANDED DOWN (Michael Edwards) A lyrical ballad that outlines the lonely life led of many a heart left...
  May 16th, 2017 00:58
• GROW TREES NOT ARMIES (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) Such good advice in this well written lines Rachel - making peace with...
  May 15th, 2017 05:33
• LIMERICK 26 (Michael Edwards) I got the wind of that limerick Michael right from the very first line. ...
  May 13th, 2017 04:58
• Comforting Consolations (Orchidee) Beautiful words - very inspiring.
  May 12th, 2017 14:01
• Profaned (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful reads Kurt - all three - - a favourite line in The Prophet of...
  May 12th, 2017 13:59
• Your Spirit (Tony36) Heart-rending this honest appeal for spiritual help - a haunt of a read...
  May 12th, 2017 13:18
• 40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - I love that last line Brian - A name and talent to remember is JC...
  May 12th, 2017 01:56
• PERCEPTIONS MISPLACED (Michael Edwards) Excellent words and that clever painting has much to say too. A wonderful...
  May 12th, 2017 01:49
• My Mother\'s Ireland (Matthew mckeown) Matthew your pen records memories of Ireland\'s green charm told by a...
  May 11th, 2017 16:05
• Revealing Nothing (Garry) Such a clever few words which say so much.
  May 11th, 2017 13:46
• Always You (Gino) Straight from a warm romantic heart this prayerful verse Gino - - a lovely...
  May 11th, 2017 02:35
• The Shadow of my Passing (Garry) I love the uplift of this optimistic few lines Garry - it worked a treat...
  May 11th, 2017 00:05
• Stay Young (WriteBeLight) Good advice - I agree to stay responsible is the best way of dumping...
  May 10th, 2017 09:04
• My beautiful angel (Highlander50) A lovely ballad to your coming bride - she will surely treasure each line...
  May 9th, 2017 07:56
• Sly Fox (KathrineWillows) This sums up what the fox may think as he does his rounds of outhouses...
  May 8th, 2017 12:02
• BBQ (Tony36) Mmmmm sounds very yummy this saucy write Tony.
  May 8th, 2017 11:59