Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• THE DARK OF MIDNIGHT HOUR (Michael Edwards) Both pictures painted and penned to perfection - - You have real talent my...
  May 26th, 2017 03:35
• On The Green Envied Moss (Edthepoet) A tale of romance with a sting in its sad tail - - your pen evokes times...
  May 25th, 2017 08:48
• Seeds of Enlightenment (Whisperingquill) Enlightenment described with skill of internal rhyming - - -well crafted...
  May 25th, 2017 05:15
• PRAYER ~ A BLESSING (BRIAN & ANGELA) Prayer is a vital gift to all human beings and so good to see its...
  May 25th, 2017 04:27
• THE WHITE FROCKED MAID (Michael Edwards) A maid made so real I was there in that ghostly old mullioned room. A...
  May 24th, 2017 04:54
• SUICIDE BOMBERS ~ A Lament (7 7 Sonnet) (BRIAN & ANGELA) A haunt of a read as a dire reminder of what this country faces . Pray we...
  May 23rd, 2017 08:38
• Echoe Deep Swallows (Edthepoet) The flow and mystery encased in this absorbing verse gives such a boost...
  May 23rd, 2017 08:34
• LIMMERICK 29 (Michael Edwards) A smile on my face as I contemplate a nude little Barrington without his...
  May 23rd, 2017 02:49
• The Bubble. (Goldfinch60) Prayerful thoughts go with you in this hardest of tasks when a loved one...
  May 23rd, 2017 02:47
• Resignation (Jabberwocky) A soulful refection on love now gone - a verse which pours lonely from...
  May 23rd, 2017 02:45
• Words as I fall asleep... (P.H.Rose) Words filled with darker colour bring to the fore a life of regret..... a...
  May 23rd, 2017 02:40
• The Forge (Augustus) Ah - you make it all come to life in this vivid description of what it...
  May 23rd, 2017 02:37
• For Augustus (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) A caring and uplifting message for friend Augustus and with words...
  May 22nd, 2017 16:29
• My Name is Cupid (Lgp74415) Ah - loud applause for this flowing verse on that rascal Cupid and what he...
  May 22nd, 2017 08:31
• Courtship after Love (Jabberwocky) Adeptly crafted this yearning to show and be shown intimacy again grabs...
  May 22nd, 2017 04:58
• COOPERATION ? YES ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A loud Amen to this resolve Brian - - helping others and working...
  May 22nd, 2017 04:20
• Somewhere In Your Eyes (Magenta1) Poetic expressions of excellent quality flame from this piece of...
  May 22nd, 2017 02:03
• I\'ll be there (Gypsysoul) Oh this read goes right to the heart and leaves such a feeling of love...
  May 22nd, 2017 01:59
• THE CLOAK I WEAR (Michael Edwards) Love this - both picture and verse are so absorbingly good
  May 22nd, 2017 01:55
• Siphoning Intraversely (Whisperingquill) What a linguist pleasure to read is this uplifting palette of words drawn...
  May 21st, 2017 13:16
• Damnation Still Unrhymed (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Love the strong message in verse number one and the flippant fun...
  May 21st, 2017 13:12
• New Glasses (WriteBeLight) So glad you got fixed up with the right glasses so now we will have lots...
  May 21st, 2017 13:09
• LIMERICK 29 (Michael Edwards) First rate limerick - tickled me pink.....
  May 21st, 2017 08:11
• River\'s Bourne (Prose) (Lucaso) A bouquet of amazingly rendered imagery which rivets the eyes and makes...
  May 21st, 2017 08:10
• Feeding Frenzy (Jabberwocky) Cleverly worded this terse observation on dull company. Good write.
  May 21st, 2017 08:07
• THE LOVE OF GOD ~ A 4 4 3 3 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A beautiful set of praiseworthy traits we have as a gift from our Father...
  May 21st, 2017 04:43
• Sunlight - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Good haiku thanks for giving us something to think on today
  May 21st, 2017 04:42
• FRIENDS ~ An Anaphoric Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Friends are a gift indeed and you verse them so well in this form of...
  May 20th, 2017 02:01
• TEMPEST (Michael Edwards) Full of flowing tempestuous spirit - - both painting and poem a
  May 20th, 2017 01:57
• Ludwig. (Goldfinch60) Wow - what a fantastic parody by Dudley and to think I never saw this...
  May 20th, 2017 01:55
• You (Rachelle) A really good rhythm to this romantic verse Rachelle and welcome to MPS ...
  May 19th, 2017 13:49
• COUNT BLESSINGS ! A 5 ~ 9 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Yes we should be prepared to make a difference and giving to others is one...
  May 16th, 2017 06:54
• Plastered Poetry (WriteBeLight) Ha ha - the picture with words tell the whole fun-story - - - great smile...
  May 16th, 2017 05:44
• Reflections in My Life. (Goldfinch60) A flow of lovely nostalgia in this positive poem on how to look at the...
  May 16th, 2017 02:11
• HIS NAME NOT HANDED DOWN (Michael Edwards) A lyrical ballad that outlines the lonely life led of many a heart left...
  May 16th, 2017 00:58
• GROW TREES NOT ARMIES (NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...) Such good advice in this well written lines Rachel - making peace with...
  May 15th, 2017 05:33
• LIMERICK 26 (Michael Edwards) I got the wind of that limerick Michael right from the very first line. ...
  May 13th, 2017 04:58
• Comforting Consolations (Orchidee) Beautiful words - very inspiring.
  May 12th, 2017 14:01
• Profaned (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Wonderful reads Kurt - all three - - a favourite line in The Prophet of...
  May 12th, 2017 13:59
• Your Spirit (Tony36) Heart-rending this honest appeal for spiritual help - a haunt of a read...
  May 12th, 2017 13:18
• 40 SHADES OF GREEN ~ JOHNNY CASH (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - I love that last line Brian - A name and talent to remember is JC...
  May 12th, 2017 01:56
• PERCEPTIONS MISPLACED (Michael Edwards) Excellent words and that clever painting has much to say too. A wonderful...
  May 12th, 2017 01:49
• My Mother\'s Ireland (Matthew mckeown) Matthew your pen records memories of Ireland\'s green charm told by a...
  May 11th, 2017 16:05
• Revealing Nothing (Garry) Such a clever few words which say so much.
  May 11th, 2017 13:46
• Always You (Gino) Straight from a warm romantic heart this prayerful verse Gino - - a lovely...
  May 11th, 2017 02:35
• The Shadow of my Passing (Garry) I love the uplift of this optimistic few lines Garry - it worked a treat...
  May 11th, 2017 00:05
• Stay Young (WriteBeLight) Good advice - I agree to stay responsible is the best way of dumping...
  May 10th, 2017 09:04
• My beautiful angel (Highlander50) A lovely ballad to your coming bride - she will surely treasure each line...
  May 9th, 2017 07:56
• Sly Fox (KathrineWillows) This sums up what the fox may think as he does his rounds of outhouses...
  May 8th, 2017 12:02
• BBQ (Tony36) Mmmmm sounds very yummy this saucy write Tony.
  May 8th, 2017 11:59
• The wall (Wren Ann) i agree with Gary that the wall has to be seen to be what it is in...
  May 8th, 2017 11:57
• Five Favoured (Orchidee) The great Spirit of truth certainly lives within us dear friend if we...
  May 8th, 2017 11:55
• AT THE CONCERT (Michael Edwards) Like your paintings the words of this poem make music to those who love...
  May 7th, 2017 01:49
• Alongside a Lover (Gary Edward Geraci) A profound search into the spiritual journey we as humans all take - -...
  May 6th, 2017 11:17
• Undertow. (Fay Slimm.) My thank you to all for the comments - this poem was written as tribute to...
  May 6th, 2017 04:47
• Have the Aliens Landed? (Goldfinch60) Ha ha - - a wonderful comparison - talking it seems to themselves I have...
  May 6th, 2017 04:44
• DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards) Food is a true blessing and should be valued as such. A good reminder that...
  May 6th, 2017 02:03
• PLANS FOR TONIGHT (Michael Edwards) Love the cartoon Michael and as for the old currency -- -pleeeeeeeeease...
  May 5th, 2017 04:52
• Life\'s fight (Tony36) So very true Tony.
  May 4th, 2017 08:49
• Dreams (Highlander50) A readable poem on dual aspects of dreams - - an engaging aspect the...
  May 4th, 2017 08:48
• Moonlight Sonata (Gino) Such an appeal in these well-writtten words of invitation to begin love...
  May 4th, 2017 05:36
• THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards) The words describe hidden sacred places so well Michael and the drawing...
  May 4th, 2017 04:52
• Writer\'s Block NOT! (WriteBeLight) Great write - yes those times of block are a challenge my friend.
  May 3rd, 2017 13:07
• C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) An acrostic which teaches us much about the need for preservation of...
  May 3rd, 2017 13:03
• LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24> (Michael Edwards) Ha ha ha - - a really good set of limericks to start my day\'s read - -...
  May 2nd, 2017 07:45
• Walking Into The Wood. (Goldfinch60) A lovely read and so pleased you have a wood to walk in - such a magical...
  May 1st, 2017 11:58
• FADED (Michael Edwards) Longing soaks through every line in this look backward to more loving...
  May 1st, 2017 05:08
• COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good to have you back again Brian and the warning acrostic shows how close...
  April 29th, 2017 11:34
• The Jilted Muse (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) There is short-line power in each one of these verses - enjoyed the...
  April 28th, 2017 13:17
• THE VOICE (Tony36) Very inspiring write Tony - thank you for sharing this wonderful voice...
  April 28th, 2017 11:47
• DESPAIR (Michael Edwards) A powerful few lines here Michael - - the message is couched in some...
  April 28th, 2017 07:32
• Lead Foot (WriteBeLight) I agree entirely - road users of the type your verse describes are a true...
  April 28th, 2017 07:28
• Ode to The Galaxy (Lizzy Renee) An amazing summary of the galaxy\'s fascination Lizzie - - love the...
  April 27th, 2017 10:22
• Humans need a HEREAFTER (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Thanks for this inspirational read to pursue the belief in a Hereafter. I...
  April 26th, 2017 02:00
• My wee special guest (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) A charm of a tribute to the lovely canary - in Cornwall U.K. we have no...
  April 26th, 2017 01:52
• Metallic marvels (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Your verse aptly captures the attraction of slow, sensuous melt from solid...
  April 26th, 2017 01:45
• From Gandam To London All Sing Your Glory (Pintu Mahakul) I have commented an hour back on this lovely poem and now it seems to be...
  April 25th, 2017 13:21
• Mercy Missioners (Orchidee) I love the wonderful Hills of the North Rejoice and your own words fit so...
  April 25th, 2017 11:39
• Dancing Eyes (Garry) Lovely memories Gary and so romantically written she will treasure this...
  April 25th, 2017 08:39
• A Child\'\'s Love for Her Mum (RebeccaRose.x) A verse of appreciation to a well loved Mum and so full of reasons for...
  April 25th, 2017 07:11
• Island of Words and Music. (Goldfinch60) An island we all want to enter and get the blessings of music so well...
  April 25th, 2017 03:56
• Day After Long Weekend Blues (WriteBeLight) Yes weekends are a boon for today\'s hard workers - very well told all the...
  April 24th, 2017 10:10
• Peregrine Pride (WriteBeLight) Ah - I loved this poetic account of caring for Perigrine offspring -...
  April 23rd, 2017 08:23
• JERUSALEM CHARM ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine lesson on the wonders of Jerusalem both today and during the stay...
  April 23rd, 2017 04:25
• America (Gino) A hope scribed in hope and very well captured that feeling of needful...
  April 23rd, 2017 04:23
• Hold Me (Gino) A great appeal in this romantic invitation Gino - - so gently sensual -...
  April 22nd, 2017 23:43
• I am Disciple of God (Pintu Mahakul) Such a fine example of faith in action and written so early in life Pintu...
  April 22nd, 2017 23:41
• I Am... (Vena Wolf) A gentle reminder that mortality breeds needs. Whispers from lost loved...
  April 20th, 2017 16:17
• Stop and Look Back. (Goldfinch60) Good advice and so neatly written - thanks for sharing this suggestion to...
  April 20th, 2017 05:27
• MY BUNNY RABBITS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Your bunny picture looks so cute Brian and I agree little bunnies make...
  April 20th, 2017 05:25
• Reap and sow (Wackyheartache4) Talking of and to the flowers makes this verse so special to me. A...
  April 19th, 2017 04:50
• STOP (Michael Edwards) The form you chose made me think of a pyramid\'s power to hide secrets...
  April 19th, 2017 03:49
• DIAMONDS ~ Are a Girl\'s Best Friend (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - the ultimate engagement gift and so very well explained too Brian - -...
  April 18th, 2017 06:08
• TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN (Michael Edwards) Your words always weave an engaging story and this one is no exception...
  April 18th, 2017 03:14
• Daydream Lies (John Snowdon) I like the flow of this poignant verse so well inter-rhymed and full of...
  April 17th, 2017 16:26
• Answers to Questions Seldom Asked (John Snowdon) Your questions are more than normally asked as terse line unfolds reasons...
  April 17th, 2017 16:19
• I AM A STREAM ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Love this fresh look at streams and their journey,. I would be a tinckling...
  April 17th, 2017 10:54
• don\'t hesitate (Willyweed) Well captured this need for love and compassion.
  April 17th, 2017 10:50
• THE MUSIC OF THE SEA (Michael Edwards) I love the feel and flow of this oceanic rhyme Michael - Also the...
  April 17th, 2017 06:43
• ARRIVAL (Michael Edwards) Thanks for this poetic look at the season\'s push toward more colourful ...
  April 15th, 2017 07:52