Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Cook (Tony36)
cooking for friends is a real pleasure in life - - good that you feel...
August 3rd, 2017 14:21 - Twenty four of darkness.... (P.H.Rose)
Only an empathetic heart would go to these sightless lengths P.H. and...
August 3rd, 2017 13:39 - Class Reunion (FredPeyer)
I remember a class reunion in which I was hard put to tell who was who for...
August 3rd, 2017 13:12 - NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A style and form which demands so much writing experience Brian - - such a...
August 3rd, 2017 13:08 - Sentiments It Found. (Kevin browne)
Deeply felt this pearl Kevin - my favourite piece is contained in the...
August 3rd, 2017 12:39 - A Hat For That (WriteBeLight)
Ah - a first rate set of reasons why our poet-hat must be given space on...
August 3rd, 2017 12:36 - THE SMILING DIED (Michael Edwards)
Pathos perfected in these slow sad lines. Great work Michael.
August 3rd, 2017 04:24 - gehenna burning (Heather T)
Gifted beyond words your slant-eyed look at the world raises the bar...
August 2nd, 2017 16:21 - Dark moon arrives.... (P.H.Rose)
A temporary blindfold can be a valuable experiment and to think you see...
August 2nd, 2017 13:59 - Blowing Bubbles (Tony36)
Fresh and bubbly this fun at water\'s edge Tony.
August 2nd, 2017 11:56 - Death (Malubotelho)
Yes - \"death where is your sting\" says the holy word for light is what I...
August 2nd, 2017 11:08 - WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES (Louis Gibbs)
A truth wrapped in poetry - I agree with Michael a belter for sure - -...
August 2nd, 2017 08:17 - Garden Glories (Orchidee)
A fine array of reasons for daily praise - so many blessings in your...
August 2nd, 2017 08:15 - 3 ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Love to bits number 2 which raised a big smile on reading. That third ...
August 2nd, 2017 06:35 - Food Fight (WriteBeLight)
Oooh I know how you feel cos I have his kith and kin in my own veggie...
August 2nd, 2017 06:03 - Entwined Under an Aster Sky (Whisperingquill)
Fantastic phrasing in this tribute to artful erotica Quil - - the power of...
August 2nd, 2017 03:43 - Falling into the Night. (Goldfinch60)
Lovely images of nightfall in this read - thanks for sharing your...
August 2nd, 2017 03:39 - MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP (BRIAN & ANGELA)
I remember the emotion the song evoked Brian - thanks for this reminder...
August 2nd, 2017 03:31 - Guitars in the night (Aa Harvey)
Fantasy takes dreamers to all sorts of exciting places as this fine...
August 2nd, 2017 03:26 - linger (Heather T)
Glad I did not miss this little gem - another piece of amazing word-usage...
August 1st, 2017 22:36 - angel smoke (Heather T)
Breath-taking poetry - your talent for word is second to none Heather.
August 1st, 2017 22:26 - AUGUSTUS (Louis Gibbs)
Augustus and his verses have been much missed and do hope this fine poem...
August 1st, 2017 16:38 - Glory Greatness (Orchidee)
Full of wonderful help for the spirit and thank you for sharing such...
August 1st, 2017 12:45 - I Feel Better (WriteBeLight)
Ah - just to look at that great baby smiling with gratefulness for a new...
August 1st, 2017 12:44 - Memories revisited... (P.H.Rose)
Your words describe the scene of many a loss in lots of streets and...
August 1st, 2017 12:38 - On the Bus (FredPeyer)
A picture painted so well here of many left now on their own and not...
August 1st, 2017 02:09 - MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Quiet and virgin valleys are disappearing world-wide dear Brian - - thanks...
August 1st, 2017 02:06 - THREE SENRYUS (Michael Edwards)
These three beguiling Sens. make me want more Michael - good work.
August 1st, 2017 02:01 - Forwards In Return. (Kevin browne)
Yes Kevin time really falls fast and as this engaging piece of prose...
July 31st, 2017 16:23 - The Outing (WriteBeLight)
Only read the postings on this terrible abuse today - was speechless...
July 31st, 2017 14:27 - foolish heart (Heather T)
I am speechless with shock after reading your outing of this person dear...
July 31st, 2017 13:50 - five candles (Heather T)
No need for me to be giving you lessons dear Heather - this spontaneous...
July 31st, 2017 13:24 - WORDS WRITTEN (Michael Edwards)
Oh too true my friend. I lose lots of fragmented thoughts this way.
July 31st, 2017 05:39 - Yin to my yang (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful verse of assurance for some lucky lady - such a delight to...
July 31st, 2017 05:36 - Secret Place (FredPeyer)
A delectable description of the secret place we all need Fred - your pen...
July 31st, 2017 05:34 - mortal (Heather T)
First class writing Heather - metre and line length flow with potent...
July 30th, 2017 16:45 - Without you (Private poet)
The sudden loss of a loved one is always so challenging and your words in...
July 30th, 2017 12:23 - LATE JULY (Michael Edwards)
Your brush and pen fill both pictures with July\'s great bounty. A lovely...
July 30th, 2017 04:11 - My grandson and his dog... (P.H.Rose)
A Spontaneous smile held my heart as read through these lines - - love...
July 29th, 2017 13:50 - Fear (FredPeyer)
You capture so well the results of succumbing to fear Fred - - a terrible...
July 29th, 2017 11:08 - SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION (Michael Edwards)
This read would make any mouth water my friend - ha - provided they...
July 29th, 2017 05:33 - Over the Hills and Far Away. (Goldfinch60)
Some love and others cannot abide the sound of the bagpipes and you pen so...
July 29th, 2017 05:31 - Our Rainforests (GeraldineTaylor)
You lay out this cry in and for the green wilderness so well here...
July 29th, 2017 05:22 - I am left speechless by her beauty (Aa Harvey)
A read of true woe but so beautifully imaged with poetic metaphor - - such...
July 29th, 2017 05:19 - L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Never realized as much about the diversity in labs. before Brian - - an...
July 29th, 2017 05:12 - FINAL CURTAIN (Louis Gibbs)
The ongoing saga of continuation wrapped in a poetic nutshell - love...
July 28th, 2017 16:21 - My MPS friends (Christina8)
You have been much missed dear Christina and so good to know you will soon...
July 28th, 2017 16:12 - Orange Memory. (Goldfinch60)
A charming flower and so special in your life G. that the verse glows...
July 28th, 2017 05:14 - Kaleidoscope (FredPeyer)
A great read as you opened that cardboard tube again to me to show how...
July 28th, 2017 05:09 - My Maternal Grandparents, \"William and Dessie Ozmun\". (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Your young and talented ability to tell in words the feelings for family...
July 28th, 2017 05:03 - Until death do us part (Aa Harvey)
Thanks for this endearing outline of an on-going romance and with hope in...
July 28th, 2017 04:57 - A Days first kiss..... (P.H.Rose)
A romantic tribute to true devotion with a verse expressing such ...
July 28th, 2017 04:52 - MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
The richness of woven design in our lives comes through every line in this...
July 28th, 2017 04:47 - AND WAVES WILL ALWAYS ROLL (Michael Edwards)
A wonderful roll to this salty read Michael - another super write along...
July 28th, 2017 03:23 - Shredded Life. (Goldfinch60)
I can imagine how you felt my friend - to see a loved daughter\'s past...
July 27th, 2017 07:36 - S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes we are all in the blame area of pollution these days Brian - doing...
July 27th, 2017 06:27 - our forum (Onepauly)
A triumph of rhyme contained in this tribute to forum and what it...
July 27th, 2017 06:24 - Finally Go To Sleep. (Kevin browne)
Some wonderful imagery on the degree of frustration a thinking mind feels...
July 27th, 2017 06:21 - Day By Day (Tony36)
A very sincere verse of positive faith Tony - a pleasure to read.
July 26th, 2017 12:04 - Don’t Go (Charlesbarrett)
A true and lasting comparison you make here Charles - spoken straight...
July 26th, 2017 06:34 - F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A sensuous acrostic on fabrics and written with a smile on your poet\'s...
July 26th, 2017 05:15 - Another Glass of Whiskey (FredPeyer)
So vividly written this cry against alcohol abuse Fred - - so many...
July 26th, 2017 04:45 - Treasure the Moment. (Goldfinch60)
Such wise advice in these lines G. - - moments are precious.
July 26th, 2017 03:36 - ANOTHER DAY (Michael Edwards)
Ah - such business in these linguistic lines Michael yet with a story...
July 26th, 2017 03:30 - Home (Charlesbarrett)
Your poetic expressions on home bring the reasons for those four walls to...
July 26th, 2017 03:22 - Willful Intentions. (Kevin browne)
Breathtaking imagery used in this well written prose Kevin - - how true...
July 25th, 2017 13:48 - lamentation (Heather T)
So sad that your community has dwindled with such unwelcome grief dear...
July 25th, 2017 13:44 - I just wanted to fly (Malubotelho)
We need reminders like this for at times we would all want things not so...
July 25th, 2017 02:41 - THE LIFE AHEAD (Michael Edwards)
Youth they say is often wasted on the young - this verse indicates that in...
July 24th, 2017 01:49 - Glass House (FredPeyer)
All goes round in a watcher\'s circle Fred - good points made here.
July 23rd, 2017 11:40 - FOOD FOR THOUGHTS FOR ALL MEMBERS! (RAJ NANDY)
Dear dear long-time friend - your poetry and research prior to writing ...
July 23rd, 2017 11:39 - Tranquility (Aa Harvey)
So vivid the scene and its excellent description - - tranquility indeed...
July 23rd, 2017 08:59 - THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
So inspiring this verse of reminders dear Brian - - our planet is a true...
July 23rd, 2017 04:40 - A T M O S P H E R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Loud applause for this much needed reminder Brian. Air is vital to life...
July 22nd, 2017 03:56 - Unfair (Malubotelho)
Full of sincere appeal for love to look again at the blessings it has. A...
July 22nd, 2017 03:07 - Seeing the Light. (Goldfinch60)
Great duo of verse and number GF. - seeing the light is important.
July 21st, 2017 06:14 - AGE IS IN THE MIND (Michael Edwards)
How wise is this - thanks for the reminder Michael - - and for the...
July 21st, 2017 01:49 - Sticks And Cons. (Kevin browne)
A thought-provoking piece of work Kevin - \"poet\'s pens have ideas\" and...
July 19th, 2017 16:45 - Love entropy (Malubotelho)
How succinctly true these lines about love - unnurtured it dies and that...
July 19th, 2017 12:26 - focus (Onepauly)
Love the sentiment and the rhythm in this verse Paul - - good feel to the...
July 19th, 2017 05:21 - E U T H A N A S I A ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A difficult subject but when quality of life dwindles to nothing I feel...
July 19th, 2017 04:08 - Dying Love (FredPeyer)
How poignant this poem Fred - filled with sad reasons for comparing a dead...
July 19th, 2017 04:05 - A part of the process (Aa Harvey)
A wonderful read of life still inside but loved before bursting out to the...
July 19th, 2017 04:02 - IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND (Michael Edwards)
Michael such a haunting feel to this read and the painting adds so well to...
July 19th, 2017 01:40 - song of the hollow house (Heather T)
So evocative of brooding time when mirrored with imagery as moving as this...
July 18th, 2017 15:23 - I\'m Not Perfect (Tony36)
No one need put up with taunts as this well written appeal makes so clear...
July 18th, 2017 11:19 - Children of War (FredPeyer)
This gets right to the heart of war\'s effect on the young - a truly...
July 18th, 2017 07:25 - A FEW COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
That final line of the last couplet is truly inspired Michael - love the...
July 18th, 2017 01:44 - 🎀Tear Stains🎀 (Savvi)
Welcome to this friendly site S.J. and do hope your newly found freedom...
July 17th, 2017 13:17 - TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs)
Such a tender and caring write and to think you were cuddling a newborn...
July 17th, 2017 08:25 - OPHELIA (Michael Edwards)
Super picture and you captured with imagery the haunting feel of...
July 17th, 2017 03:26 - Music in my head (Poetic Dan)
A flow of good rhythm in this excellent tribute to dancing for fun Dan - ...
July 16th, 2017 04:20 - mourning light (Heather T)
Wow - this thrills to the bone with its stunning imagery and tells its...
July 15th, 2017 13:58 - Meditative Meanderings (Orchidee)
So upbuilding these verses of human destiny when singing life\'s melody ...
July 15th, 2017 10:19 - SHOOTING STAR (Louis Gibbs)
What a loss of recognized talent and as this tribute depicts the fine...
July 15th, 2017 10:10 - Alone (FredPeyer)
This touches home to loners like me - - most poets thrive on imagined...
July 15th, 2017 04:29 - WORK IN PROGRESS (1) (Michael Edwards)
To empty the mind when a subject is chosen is vital - the wording here...
July 15th, 2017 01:48 - Task Achieved. (Goldfinch60)
Listening to music helps the time pass when using the iron - unlike me I...
July 14th, 2017 06:36 - Speaking in tongue (Poetic Dan)
Rule-shifting and being our real selves is the way to freedom - well said...
July 14th, 2017 06:29 - A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Excellent wisdom-filled couplets and great sculpture Michael - you have...
July 14th, 2017 04:52
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