Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Until death do us part (Aa Harvey) Thanks for this endearing outline of an on-going romance and with hope in...
  July 28th, 2017 04:57
• A Days first kiss..... (P.H.Rose) A romantic tribute to true devotion with a verse expressing such ...
  July 28th, 2017 04:52
• MY LIFE ~ GOD\'S TAPESTRY (BRIAN & ANGELA) The richness of woven design in our lives comes through every line in this...
  July 28th, 2017 04:47
• AND WAVES WILL ALWAYS ROLL (Michael Edwards) A wonderful roll to this salty read Michael - another super write along...
  July 28th, 2017 03:23
• Shredded Life. (Goldfinch60) I can imagine how you felt my friend - to see a loved daughter\'s past...
  July 27th, 2017 07:36
• S O I L S P O L L U T I O N ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Yes we are all in the blame area of pollution these days Brian - doing...
  July 27th, 2017 06:27
• our forum (Onepauly) A triumph of rhyme contained in this tribute to forum and what it...
  July 27th, 2017 06:24
• Finally Go To Sleep. (Kevin browne) Some wonderful imagery on the degree of frustration a thinking mind feels...
  July 27th, 2017 06:21
• Day By Day (Tony36) A very sincere verse of positive faith Tony - a pleasure to read.
  July 26th, 2017 12:04
• Don’t Go (Charlesbarrett) A true and lasting comparison you make here Charles - spoken straight...
  July 26th, 2017 06:34
• F A B R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) A sensuous acrostic on fabrics and written with a smile on your poet\'s...
  July 26th, 2017 05:15
• Another Glass of Whiskey (FredPeyer) So vividly written this cry against alcohol abuse Fred - - so many...
  July 26th, 2017 04:45
• Treasure the Moment. (Goldfinch60) Such wise advice in these lines G. - - moments are precious.
  July 26th, 2017 03:36
• ANOTHER DAY (Michael Edwards) Ah - such business in these linguistic lines Michael yet with a story...
  July 26th, 2017 03:30
• Home (Charlesbarrett) Your poetic expressions on home bring the reasons for those four walls to...
  July 26th, 2017 03:22
• Willful Intentions. (Kevin browne) Breathtaking imagery used in this well written prose Kevin - - how true...
  July 25th, 2017 13:48
• lamentation (Heather T) So sad that your community has dwindled with such unwelcome grief dear...
  July 25th, 2017 13:44
• I just wanted to fly (Malubotelho) We need reminders like this for at times we would all want things not so...
  July 25th, 2017 02:41
• THE LIFE AHEAD (Michael Edwards) Youth they say is often wasted on the young - this verse indicates that in...
  July 24th, 2017 01:49
• Glass House (FredPeyer) All goes round in a watcher\'s circle Fred - good points made here.
  July 23rd, 2017 11:40
• FOOD FOR THOUGHTS FOR ALL MEMBERS! (RAJ NANDY) Dear dear long-time friend - your poetry and research prior to writing ...
  July 23rd, 2017 11:39
• Tranquility (Aa Harvey) So vivid the scene and its excellent description - - tranquility indeed...
  July 23rd, 2017 08:59
• THANK GOD FOR PLANET EARTH ! Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) So inspiring this verse of reminders dear Brian - - our planet is a true...
  July 23rd, 2017 04:40
• A T M O S P H E R I C S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Loud applause for this much needed reminder Brian. Air is vital to life...
  July 22nd, 2017 03:56
• Unfair (Malubotelho) Full of sincere appeal for love to look again at the blessings it has. A...
  July 22nd, 2017 03:07
• Seeing the Light. (Goldfinch60) Great duo of verse and number GF. - seeing the light is important.
  July 21st, 2017 06:14
• AGE IS IN THE MIND (Michael Edwards) How wise is this - thanks for the reminder Michael - - and for the...
  July 21st, 2017 01:49
• Sticks And Cons. (Kevin browne) A thought-provoking piece of work Kevin - \"poet\'s pens have ideas\" and...
  July 19th, 2017 16:45
• Love entropy (Malubotelho) How succinctly true these lines about love - unnurtured it dies and that...
  July 19th, 2017 12:26
• focus (Onepauly) Love the sentiment and the rhythm in this verse Paul - - good feel to the...
  July 19th, 2017 05:21
• E U T H A N A S I A ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) A difficult subject but when quality of life dwindles to nothing I feel...
  July 19th, 2017 04:08
• Dying Love (FredPeyer) How poignant this poem Fred - filled with sad reasons for comparing a dead...
  July 19th, 2017 04:05
• A part of the process (Aa Harvey) A wonderful read of life still inside but loved before bursting out to the...
  July 19th, 2017 04:02
• IN THEIR ANCESTORS LAND (Michael Edwards) Michael such a haunting feel to this read and the painting adds so well to...
  July 19th, 2017 01:40
• song of the hollow house (Heather T) So evocative of brooding time when mirrored with imagery as moving as this...
  July 18th, 2017 15:23
• I\'m Not Perfect (Tony36) No one need put up with taunts as this well written appeal makes so clear...
  July 18th, 2017 11:19
• Children of War (FredPeyer) This gets right to the heart of war\'s effect on the young - a truly...
  July 18th, 2017 07:25
• A FEW COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) That final line of the last couplet is truly inspired Michael - love the...
  July 18th, 2017 01:44
• 🎀Tear Stains🎀 (Savvi) Welcome to this friendly site S.J. and do hope your newly found freedom...
  July 17th, 2017 13:17
• TOUCHING HEAVEN (Louis Gibbs) Such a tender and caring write and to think you were cuddling a newborn...
  July 17th, 2017 08:25
• OPHELIA (Michael Edwards) Super picture and you captured with imagery the haunting feel of...
  July 17th, 2017 03:26
• Music in my head (Poetic Dan) A flow of good rhythm in this excellent tribute to dancing for fun Dan - ...
  July 16th, 2017 04:20
• mourning light (Heather T) Wow - this thrills to the bone with its stunning imagery and tells its...
  July 15th, 2017 13:58
• Meditative Meanderings (Orchidee) So upbuilding these verses of human destiny when singing life\'s melody ...
  July 15th, 2017 10:19
• SHOOTING STAR (Louis Gibbs) What a loss of recognized talent and as this tribute depicts the fine...
  July 15th, 2017 10:10
• Alone (FredPeyer) This touches home to loners like me - - most poets thrive on imagined...
  July 15th, 2017 04:29
• WORK IN PROGRESS (1) (Michael Edwards) To empty the mind when a subject is chosen is vital - the wording here...
  July 15th, 2017 01:48
• Task Achieved. (Goldfinch60) Listening to music helps the time pass when using the iron - unlike me I...
  July 14th, 2017 06:36
• Speaking in tongue (Poetic Dan) Rule-shifting and being our real selves is the way to freedom - well said...
  July 14th, 2017 06:29
• A FEW COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Excellent wisdom-filled couplets and great sculpture Michael - you have...
  July 14th, 2017 04:52
• Low Hanging Fruit (FredPeyer) Wise message hiding within these four lines Fred. Good rhyme.
  July 14th, 2017 04:02
• Into The Furnace (Edthepoet) First rate verse with a brilliant last stanza - great read Ed.
  July 13th, 2017 17:27
• Natures Wash Day.... (P.H.Rose) An engaging read. Filling in time for a poet means looking around and you...
  July 13th, 2017 09:51
• THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA) Agree heartedly Brian - peoples worldwide who revere the earth and its...
  July 13th, 2017 04:53
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (3) (Michael Edwards) First rate poem after that final stanza - it finished the scene on an...
  July 13th, 2017 02:33
• Searching Through Stillness (Augustus) Pulsing with atmosphere the verse flows toward such an inventive last line...
  July 12th, 2017 15:08
• Bliss (Tony36) A beautiful write Tony - love the romance in that final couplet.
  July 12th, 2017 10:52
• candle light (Onepauly) Clever alliteration Paul - liked the way words flowed into that candlelit...
  July 12th, 2017 07:57
• MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Fin filled to the brim this jaunt to the carnival after viewing that...
  July 12th, 2017 05:02
• Counting Sheep (Nicholas Browning) Ooooh - I can relate to this when counting sheep fails and words take...
  July 11th, 2017 16:26
• Bends In My Road.... (P.H.Rose) Rain or no the poem has form and style to show imagery at its best P.H.
  July 11th, 2017 09:30
• Deliverance Desirings 2 (Orchidee) A verse filled with faith deserving a loud Amen. Thanks for this lovely...
  July 11th, 2017 09:28
• Splashing Waves In Rainbows. (Kevin browne) Reflections on life and written with fervour this verse speaks to those ...
  July 11th, 2017 03:00
• Heart door (Aa Harvey) A lovely assurance to your special lady - - such a romantic read.
  July 11th, 2017 02:55
• DEJA VU 2 ~ MON CLAIR DE LUNE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I too learned the version you write of in my French class at school Brian...
  July 11th, 2017 01:41
• Roses (BeautifulDisaster) So sad and so perceptively written this saying goodbye to a much missed...
  July 11th, 2017 01:37
• A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards) Gorgeously attractive abstract Michael and the one liners are a change I...
  July 11th, 2017 01:34
• My Springtime Song (GeraldineTaylor) A bouquet of seasonal difference all beautifully versed in this delightful...
  July 11th, 2017 01:32
• THE ENDLESS QUEST (Louis Gibbs) Knights have an endless mission and cannot forsake the challenge ahead- -...
  July 10th, 2017 13:04
• The Sound Of A Gong. (Edthepoet) The futility and cruelty of war is well brought out in this questioning...
  July 10th, 2017 13:02
• Brilliant Blue (Nicholas Browning) Colour is such a gift as is this interesting tribute to nature\'s variety...
  July 10th, 2017 01:31
• COMMUNICATING WITH GOD ~ A Blank Verse 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I wholly agree that every day we need by prayerful thought this vital...
  July 9th, 2017 06:07
• A most Unconventional Wedding..... (P.H.Rose) A poem like this brought on by the wedding your verse describes reads...
  July 9th, 2017 03:31
• Heart Space (FredPeyer) Intriguing thoughts here regarding heart-space my friend - -...
  July 9th, 2017 03:27
• Nature\'s Wondrous World. (Goldfinch60) A read to show where true relaxation can be found. Lovely verse.
  July 9th, 2017 02:51
• MEMORIES AND DREAMS (Michael Edwards) Wonderful imagery - a delightful read Michael - gorgeous watercolour.
  July 9th, 2017 01:51
• Mind (FredPeyer) We are made with eternity held inside and this lovely read reminds us that...
  July 8th, 2017 05:22
• Never the never (Aa Harvey) A beautiful poem of love forever - such a tender read and thanks for...
  July 8th, 2017 05:17
• WAKENING (Michael Edwards) Yes day follows the night and a good stretch while still in bed does it...
  July 8th, 2017 02:35
• That Sound. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful and very kind thing to do is write and give copies to others ...
  July 8th, 2017 02:31
• CULINARY HERBS ~ SEASONINGS ~ SPICES An ABCDarian Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Super advice on herbs and spices Brian - a good tip too if the dish...
  July 8th, 2017 02:29
• I forgive you (Lost-but-not-broken17) Your final line lends wisdom to forgiveness dear poet friend. A verse...
  July 6th, 2017 16:40
• The survivors (Emile Dubois) Loud applause for this rant against contamination of misguided thinking on...
  July 6th, 2017 14:38
• Flow Without Flow (Emile Dubois) Clever expressions on an overripe fruit and with so much food for later...
  July 6th, 2017 14:33
• Secret Love (Tony36) Shyness can wreck all our good intentions - hope the time came to declare...
  July 6th, 2017 13:35
• What is life? (Lost-but-not-broken17) Your reaction to bad news shines out like a beacon in this positive verse...
  July 6th, 2017 13:20
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (2) (Michael Edwards) Smoothly and gently romantic - you have chose a good style for tender...
  July 6th, 2017 04:00
• A Whole Lot of Work (FredPeyer) Love the positive ending to this engaging and imaginative verse - - good...
  July 6th, 2017 01:51
• Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60) Ooooh - what a fun picture around bouncy clouds that gave me a smile ...
  July 5th, 2017 02:13
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards) Love the feel of these secretive lines Michael and love the cloud-mass in...
  July 5th, 2017 02:09
• Night Rhythms (Garry) This calming read is the last of my day - - Thanks Gary for a gentle...
  July 4th, 2017 16:42
• I Am Always By Your Side (Krystal Brewington) The wholehearted assurance you give of your care and love is truly moving...
  July 4th, 2017 16:15
• We Belong With Each Other (Krystal Brewington) Such a romantic read Krystal - I love the comparisons you make to...
  July 4th, 2017 16:09
• Reprogramming (Poetic Dan) Agree wholeheartedly with these lines Dan - - loud applause for the...
  July 4th, 2017 09:22
• Poem number 1000 - Part Three : Deeper and deeper (Aa Harvey) The doom of ill-fated love sounds its haunting knell in this dark poem. A...
  July 4th, 2017 05:45
• RECYCLE ~ TO SAVE THE PLANET ~ TANKAS (5~7~5~7~7) (BRIAN & ANGELA) A list of sound reasons for recycling in this clever rhyme Brian - - with...
  July 4th, 2017 05:36
• What is Death? (Goldfinch60) This question raised by your verse reminds me of the quote that \"We are...
  July 4th, 2017 02:56
• The snow leopard (Aa Harvey) You paint with assurance this picture of nature pregnant with future - ...
  July 4th, 2017 02:52
• upon a page (Heather T) Top drawer writing Heather -- a stunning read with an inspiring finalé
  July 3rd, 2017 16:06
• THIS TIME AROUND (Louis Gibbs) A clever conclusion to keep in mind Louis - it is the acts not taken that...
  July 3rd, 2017 13:50