Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Ask (Ruby Leighton)
I like the flow of this verse which tells its story with on-going peeps at...
March 28th, 2017 11:28 - WAS IT LOVE ? (5) (Michael Edwards)
I love the continuation of this romantic story - - good idea Michael -...
March 28th, 2017 04:15 - Moved Out (WriteBeLight)
An interesting time in the life of an offspring is when they start to make...
March 27th, 2017 07:55 - So Alone. (Goldfinch60)
Yes that friendly word can lead to all sorts of sharing as people in that...
March 27th, 2017 07:53 - GYMKHANAS ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An engaging acrostic and I truly agree that with a day at Gymkhana you...
March 27th, 2017 07:48 - A reason to be (Aa Harvey)
A very appealing love letter dear poet - - good title too as we all need...
March 25th, 2017 06:22 - FIVE FRUITY HAIKU A DAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Yes - here\'s to the five a day for better health - thanks for the...
March 25th, 2017 06:20 - WAS IT LOVE ? (Michael Edwards)
My eyes see the freshness of love in that wonderful painting dear friend -...
March 24th, 2017 11:04 - DO YOU WANT TO GO? (Michael Edwards)
An exciting piece of abstract art Michael which in this case demanded my...
March 23rd, 2017 03:46 - The story of life..... (Slide Hammer)
Much food for thought in this well written verse about learning from...
March 23rd, 2017 03:18 - Death Steals (Bhorner23)
Such a vivid account of death\'s unforgiving power in this heart-...
March 23rd, 2017 03:15 - A Man of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60)
You cover retirement of this retired man very well here my friend - - ...
March 23rd, 2017 03:09 - Window Ledge Of Love. (Kevin browne)
You capture the feel of lasting love after meeting another with whom...
March 22nd, 2017 08:42 - Going Places (Christina8)
Happy Anniversary Chris and with your special honey here\'s hoping the...
March 21st, 2017 11:35 - Moments Left Unfelt (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Two reflective gems - thanks for sharing them Kurt.
March 21st, 2017 11:26 - The Airman (Garry)
A terse and well composed summary in compelling rhyme of tragic results...
March 20th, 2017 17:19 - Conjunctivitis (MendedFences27)
Ah - I love the flow and ongoing imagery in this masterclass of poetic...
March 18th, 2017 13:30 - To Herself Alone (Kurt Philip Behm)
Ah a rare insight into what a woman keep to herself alone. Good read.
March 18th, 2017 13:27 - Touch Someone\'s Life (Iamwoman)
A lovely thought and thank you for sharing it.
March 18th, 2017 13:25 - Exalting Encouragements (Orchidee)
A soul-stirring read my friend and put to music would enhance even the ...
March 18th, 2017 13:25 - YACKY ZEBRAS (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha - -such a clever fun-write and very inventive.
March 18th, 2017 01:49 - GREAT DAY (Tony36)
A wonderful poem of faith Tony and so very well written.
March 17th, 2017 17:21 - Whispers From Heaven (Christina8)
A verse from the heart will not go unheard dear Christina - Heaven will...
March 17th, 2017 17:20 - Music Conquers All. (Goldfinch60)
Loud applause for this concerto of words for listening well to good music...
March 17th, 2017 07:19 - So Rewarding (WriteBeLight)
So true that being on hand to help when needed is so satisfying. Good
March 17th, 2017 06:28 - The Choice Is Yours (WriteBeLight)
Reasons for personal choice rings out in each line of your words -...
March 16th, 2017 12:26 - GOD\'S LOVE FOR EVERYONE ! A Free Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
God\'s implicit love is brought out so well in this verse of true faith...
March 16th, 2017 12:23 - Spirit of South Crofty (Maria Lees)
You captured so well the poignant atmosphere when mines close Maria - ...
March 16th, 2017 11:35 - Thankful Tributes (Orchidee)
Thanks for this spiritual feast dear poet - - we all need to cleanse our...
March 15th, 2017 13:07 - PLASTIC BOTTLES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh the shame of this awful situation - thanks indeed Brian for bringing...
March 15th, 2017 13:05 - Crown of Convocation (Pintu Mahakul)
A picture of wonderful achievement dear Pintu both in the fine image and...
March 15th, 2017 03:07 - LIMERICKS 37, 38 & 39 (Michael Edwards)
Ah - just what my first read needed today Michael - Chuckling here at ...
March 15th, 2017 03:02 - As You Like It. (Goldfinch60)
You paint a picture of global paradise to which I add a loud Amen dear...
March 15th, 2017 02:57 - Gone (Jmcg)
An expressively sad reflection on the meaning of friendship in this well...
March 14th, 2017 06:01 - COLOR ME A RAINBOW (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A bouquet of beautiful hues from your poetic heart Brian - - we are truly...
March 14th, 2017 05:57 - THE RAIN THAT WASHED THE SKY (Michael Edwards)
Such a tender and intimate scene of release amid the comfort of love -...
March 14th, 2017 03:35 - Defend the child inside you (Miss.Steele)
Agreed we need to keep our inner child truly alive - a lovely read.
March 14th, 2017 03:30 - She. (Goldfinch60)
Sad but so beautiful - everyone needs a time of happy departure. A read...
March 14th, 2017 03:28 - Elegy I for the death of Leonard Cohen (Andrew Charles Forrest)
This song carries his memory dear poet and those who can remember more...
March 11th, 2017 12:46 - Passionate Penitence (Orchidee)
A fine prayer-poem of faith and praise. I love that final line.
March 11th, 2017 12:44 - touched (Willyweed)
Such a good imaginative write that I was there in castle on the hill. A...
March 11th, 2017 09:24 - To my daughter (Lanejamesc)
A daughter is special and this verse so filled with a father\'s love will...
March 11th, 2017 06:24 - A False Infinity (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Some provoking questions here which will keep the mind busy Kurt - a ...
March 11th, 2017 06:20 - THE UPS & DOWNS OF LOVE ~ A Doublet Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This journey through what love can be is so adeptly crafted - impressive...
March 11th, 2017 05:21 - The Boat of Pleasant Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Such a flow of gentle assurance about this peaceful verse. A lovely read.
March 10th, 2017 03:01 - A Global Warming... (Hypothesis)
A mesmerizing read Hypo with a well-written warning noone can ignore....
March 10th, 2017 02:59 - Timeless (Philip)
A wonderful tribute to the people of such wisdom who inhabited Australia...
March 9th, 2017 10:54 - Going Round Again (Philip)
Such a vital message in this verse Philip - so pleased to have caught...
March 9th, 2017 10:50 - she. (Ruth Fadairo)
How beautiful to read a sincere tribute to a wonderful Mum on this...
March 8th, 2017 17:18 - God (Tony36)
One of the most sincere and well written prayerful appeals in poetic...
March 8th, 2017 17:04 - A Whisper Then To Shout (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Inspiring imagery used here which combines phrases with inventive ideas....
March 8th, 2017 01:42 - TIME (Michael Edwards)
Ah Michael - An expertly rendered scene where time catches up with nature...
March 8th, 2017 01:38 - Triumphant Tellings (Orchidee)
A gem of a hymn dear friend.
March 7th, 2017 12:47 - I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Reading through this fine villanelle I am now more than ready to visit...
March 6th, 2017 08:36 - Melancholy Blue (WriteBeLight)
I agree with the comment you left and the words in the poem which sum up...
March 6th, 2017 08:15 - I Am A Soldier (Tony36)
The verse flows with determination to keep fighting whatever attacks us....
March 6th, 2017 08:12 - bruised purple (Willyweed)
Whatever our past we are all bruised and waiting for love from our maker....
March 5th, 2017 12:08 - Heartful Hopes (Orchidee)
A touching hymn-poem with an uplifting message.
March 5th, 2017 12:06 - Stardust (Solomon)
I like the flow to this romantic lament - written in free style the...
March 5th, 2017 12:04 - Carpe Diem (Augustus)
A poignant play on the title words - - shame that pain and its bedmates ...
March 5th, 2017 10:46 - Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you dear friends for your perceptive comments on my sea-poem.
March 4th, 2017 03:47 - Creation (Tony36)
A verse of prayer filled with living faith - an uplifting read.
March 3rd, 2017 13:19 - Invite Intreaty (Orchidee)
A beautiful verse of faith and so clearly explained.
March 3rd, 2017 13:13 - Another Day. (Edthepoet)
I love the flow of this romantic invitation - good write Ed.
March 3rd, 2017 13:12 - THE VIEW FROM BEYOND (Michael Edwards)
A well aimed rant Michael - agree with the gist of this outcry. Love the...
March 3rd, 2017 05:07 - Live in Peace - FIBS (Goldfinch60)
Fantastic form and well done for inspiring us with the subject too. - ...
March 3rd, 2017 05:05 - A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A romantic and tender expression to a beautiful and well loved lady.
March 3rd, 2017 05:03 - THREE LITTLE WORDS (Michael Edwards)
Those three words if honestly felt can mean a lot when tears need...
March 2nd, 2017 03:16 - Grandas Wartime Tales (Jenny1959)
What an moving read - - \"blown to pieces at fifteen\" years old - those...
March 1st, 2017 11:23 - Somewhere on the five (Willyweed)
Angels can be sent suddenly and \"show us all we need to see.\" - a...
February 28th, 2017 09:31 - Child Of Luna (LilMiss1988)
Keep looking upward and seeing the sky - good advice here.
February 28th, 2017 09:29 - Lost part of me (The lonely poet)
A heart-rending read - this happens to the best of intentions and...
February 28th, 2017 09:28 - Face to Face 2 (Tony36)
Sounds like lovers at loggerheads and really well versed. Thanks Tony for...
February 28th, 2017 09:26 - For Hopey: Lion\'s Heart (WriteBeLight)
A beautifully caring tribute and so well deserved. Keep strong Hopey.
February 26th, 2017 09:46 - First Steps (AJ)
Those final two lines did it for me AJ - - a fine verse of reasons why...
February 26th, 2017 09:39 - TIME TO GO (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - a familiar scene in many a household - you verse the tension...
February 26th, 2017 06:35 - My River Awaits (Goldfinch60)
Nothing can beat a walk into nature and as this fine verse states the...
February 26th, 2017 06:31 - LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A tribute to a faith that is brimming with life - agreed wholeheartedly...
February 26th, 2017 06:29 - Celebration Certainties (Orchidee)
A powerful and uplifting read,
February 25th, 2017 14:08 - 25 February 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
Terse but so meaningful - you master the less very well in this short and...
February 25th, 2017 14:06 - New Depths. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah thanks a load - glad you like the short read - --Coooo to thee too.
February 25th, 2017 11:17 - You Are What You Are. (Goldfinch60)
Love the message in this perceptive verse. Being confident to be only...
February 25th, 2017 11:06 - I WORE A HAT ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Hats and me have never agreed but I love to imagine all those differing...
February 25th, 2017 11:04 - Soap And Water (WriteBeLight)
Ah - love the sweet picture and the telling lines on that awful aversion...
February 25th, 2017 11:01 - Deer (Tony36)
A fine example in these few lines of the only thing to raise toward any...
February 25th, 2017 10:52 - Carpe Diem (Philip)
Excellent advice in this well-rhymed poem Philip.
February 25th, 2017 10:50 - CHANGES (Michael Edwards)
Expressive reminder that nature will never stand still - change comes at a...
February 24th, 2017 17:24 - The Over (John Snowdon)
Pathos runs through this well written poetic reason why \"love is not for...
February 24th, 2017 17:16 - Find The Strength And Courage (Brooklyn6timesplus)
A good piece of advice and so tenderly given.
February 24th, 2017 17:11 - I Am with Your Hands (Amit)
A wonderful declaration of love.
February 24th, 2017 17:10 - Rock Reassurances (Orchidee)
A very inspiring verse of praise - I love that part of Psalm 18.
February 24th, 2017 14:54 - Tracks (Augustus)
Love the humour in these few lines - - when I take a walk my own tracks...
February 24th, 2017 14:49 - Music (Lost-but-not-broken17)
A lilting piece to the blessings of music - and I agree without it we...
February 23rd, 2017 10:24 - Sweet Love (Notapoet)
A soothing read of lyrical tribute to love.
February 23rd, 2017 09:39 - I Could But Won\'t (WriteBeLight)
A good flow to this rant against the vagaries of others.
February 23rd, 2017 07:00 - MEMORIES (Michael Edwards)
The slow pace of line makes such a peaceful flow to this read Michael -...
February 22nd, 2017 05:18 - Accepted (Tony36)
A powerful message in these few words.
February 21st, 2017 13:56 - Sheen (Augustus)
Stunning imagination and wonderful internal rhyming make this dire...
February 21st, 2017 13:55 - GLOBAL WARMINGS & WARNINGS ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fantastic sonnet on a topical subject Brian - - acrostic and coloured the...
February 21st, 2017 06:21 - PLUNDER (Michael Edwards)
Rich with poetic eloquence the verse epitomizes heedless uprooting of much...
February 20th, 2017 03:29
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