Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- THE UPS & DOWNS OF LOVE ~ A Doublet Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
This journey through what love can be is so adeptly crafted - impressive...
March 11th, 2017 05:21 - The Boat of Pleasant Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Such a flow of gentle assurance about this peaceful verse. A lovely read.
March 10th, 2017 03:01 - A Global Warming... (Hypothesis)
A mesmerizing read Hypo with a well-written warning noone can ignore....
March 10th, 2017 02:59 - Timeless (Philip)
A wonderful tribute to the people of such wisdom who inhabited Australia...
March 9th, 2017 10:54 - Going Round Again (Philip)
Such a vital message in this verse Philip - so pleased to have caught...
March 9th, 2017 10:50 - she. (Ruth Fadairo)
How beautiful to read a sincere tribute to a wonderful Mum on this...
March 8th, 2017 17:18 - God (Tony36)
One of the most sincere and well written prayerful appeals in poetic...
March 8th, 2017 17:04 - A Whisper Then To Shout (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Inspiring imagery used here which combines phrases with inventive ideas....
March 8th, 2017 01:42 - TIME (Michael Edwards)
Ah Michael - An expertly rendered scene where time catches up with nature...
March 8th, 2017 01:38 - Triumphant Tellings (Orchidee)
A gem of a hymn dear friend.
March 7th, 2017 12:47 - I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Reading through this fine villanelle I am now more than ready to visit...
March 6th, 2017 08:36 - Melancholy Blue (WriteBeLight)
I agree with the comment you left and the words in the poem which sum up...
March 6th, 2017 08:15 - I Am A Soldier (Tony36)
The verse flows with determination to keep fighting whatever attacks us....
March 6th, 2017 08:12 - bruised purple (Willyweed)
Whatever our past we are all bruised and waiting for love from our maker....
March 5th, 2017 12:08 - Heartful Hopes (Orchidee)
A touching hymn-poem with an uplifting message.
March 5th, 2017 12:06 - Stardust (Solomon)
I like the flow to this romantic lament - written in free style the...
March 5th, 2017 12:04 - Carpe Diem (Augustus)
A poignant play on the title words - - shame that pain and its bedmates ...
March 5th, 2017 10:46 - Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you dear friends for your perceptive comments on my sea-poem.
March 4th, 2017 03:47 - Creation (Tony36)
A verse of prayer filled with living faith - an uplifting read.
March 3rd, 2017 13:19 - Invite Intreaty (Orchidee)
A beautiful verse of faith and so clearly explained.
March 3rd, 2017 13:13 - Another Day. (Edthepoet)
I love the flow of this romantic invitation - good write Ed.
March 3rd, 2017 13:12 - THE VIEW FROM BEYOND (Michael Edwards)
A well aimed rant Michael - agree with the gist of this outcry. Love the...
March 3rd, 2017 05:07 - Live in Peace - FIBS (Goldfinch60)
Fantastic form and well done for inspiring us with the subject too. - ...
March 3rd, 2017 05:05 - A N G E L A A R B O L E S ~ A Very Lovely Lady ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A romantic and tender expression to a beautiful and well loved lady.
March 3rd, 2017 05:03 - THREE LITTLE WORDS (Michael Edwards)
Those three words if honestly felt can mean a lot when tears need...
March 2nd, 2017 03:16 - Grandas Wartime Tales (Jenny1959)
What an moving read - - \"blown to pieces at fifteen\" years old - those...
March 1st, 2017 11:23 - Somewhere on the five (Willyweed)
Angels can be sent suddenly and \"show us all we need to see.\" - a...
February 28th, 2017 09:31 - Child Of Luna (LilMiss1988)
Keep looking upward and seeing the sky - good advice here.
February 28th, 2017 09:29 - Lost part of me (The lonely poet)
A heart-rending read - this happens to the best of intentions and...
February 28th, 2017 09:28 - Face to Face 2 (Tony36)
Sounds like lovers at loggerheads and really well versed. Thanks Tony for...
February 28th, 2017 09:26 - For Hopey: Lion\'s Heart (WriteBeLight)
A beautifully caring tribute and so well deserved. Keep strong Hopey.
February 26th, 2017 09:46 - First Steps (AJ)
Those final two lines did it for me AJ - - a fine verse of reasons why...
February 26th, 2017 09:39 - TIME TO GO (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - a familiar scene in many a household - you verse the tension...
February 26th, 2017 06:35 - My River Awaits (Goldfinch60)
Nothing can beat a walk into nature and as this fine verse states the...
February 26th, 2017 06:31 - LET US ALL PRAISE GOD ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A tribute to a faith that is brimming with life - agreed wholeheartedly...
February 26th, 2017 06:29 - Celebration Certainties (Orchidee)
A powerful and uplifting read,
February 25th, 2017 14:08 - 25 February 2017 (Reivax Camlost)
Terse but so meaningful - you master the less very well in this short and...
February 25th, 2017 14:06 - New Depths. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah thanks a load - glad you like the short read - --Coooo to thee too.
February 25th, 2017 11:17 - You Are What You Are. (Goldfinch60)
Love the message in this perceptive verse. Being confident to be only...
February 25th, 2017 11:06 - I WORE A HAT ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Hats and me have never agreed but I love to imagine all those differing...
February 25th, 2017 11:04 - Soap And Water (WriteBeLight)
Ah - love the sweet picture and the telling lines on that awful aversion...
February 25th, 2017 11:01 - Deer (Tony36)
A fine example in these few lines of the only thing to raise toward any...
February 25th, 2017 10:52 - Carpe Diem (Philip)
Excellent advice in this well-rhymed poem Philip.
February 25th, 2017 10:50 - CHANGES (Michael Edwards)
Expressive reminder that nature will never stand still - change comes at a...
February 24th, 2017 17:24 - The Over (John Snowdon)
Pathos runs through this well written poetic reason why \"love is not for...
February 24th, 2017 17:16 - Find The Strength And Courage (Brooklyn6timesplus)
A good piece of advice and so tenderly given.
February 24th, 2017 17:11 - I Am with Your Hands (Amit)
A wonderful declaration of love.
February 24th, 2017 17:10 - Rock Reassurances (Orchidee)
A very inspiring verse of praise - I love that part of Psalm 18.
February 24th, 2017 14:54 - Tracks (Augustus)
Love the humour in these few lines - - when I take a walk my own tracks...
February 24th, 2017 14:49 - Music (Lost-but-not-broken17)
A lilting piece to the blessings of music - and I agree without it we...
February 23rd, 2017 10:24 - Sweet Love (Notapoet)
A soothing read of lyrical tribute to love.
February 23rd, 2017 09:39 - I Could But Won\'t (WriteBeLight)
A good flow to this rant against the vagaries of others.
February 23rd, 2017 07:00 - MEMORIES (Michael Edwards)
The slow pace of line makes such a peaceful flow to this read Michael -...
February 22nd, 2017 05:18 - Accepted (Tony36)
A powerful message in these few words.
February 21st, 2017 13:56 - Sheen (Augustus)
Stunning imagination and wonderful internal rhyming make this dire...
February 21st, 2017 13:55 - GLOBAL WARMINGS & WARNINGS ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fantastic sonnet on a topical subject Brian - - acrostic and coloured the...
February 21st, 2017 06:21 - PLUNDER (Michael Edwards)
Rich with poetic eloquence the verse epitomizes heedless uprooting of much...
February 20th, 2017 03:29 - The Tree we all are. (ABreathOrSigh)
Such a thought provoking few lines - - I love the appeal of that final...
February 19th, 2017 17:26 - Once The Present Has Died (Kurt Philip Behm)
The power in some of these lines is palpable -- thanks for outlining what...
February 18th, 2017 14:12 - Freedom Phrases (WriteBeLight)
Agree most wholeheartedly with these expressive lines - - a gifted...
February 17th, 2017 09:20 - Farm life (Tony36)
An exciting life on any farm by the sound of those differing animals Tony ...
February 17th, 2017 09:16 - Ballad to a Journey (Elizabethan Sea)
You describe a move across miles with all its challenges so well here - -...
February 16th, 2017 15:40 - To Have And Let Go (WriteBeLight)
So inspiring this telling poem - -moving on is ever a challenge.
February 16th, 2017 14:30 - Words I\'d Like To Say (Caroline Lowry)
Such a loving tribute to a well loved and much missed father - a moving...
February 16th, 2017 14:27 - Cyberfriends (Classicmister)
A fine build up to the scene of two sharing cyber-space- - no need of...
February 16th, 2017 14:24 - Lauren...Are You Waking? (John Snowdon)
Enjoyed the build to a scene of love fulfilled - love the flow from the...
February 16th, 2017 14:21 - The Verse Unknown (Kurt Philip Behm)
A fine collection of interesting poetry - - always a treat to read good...
February 16th, 2017 14:19 - The desert road (Aa Harvey)
A most interesting road filled with romantic wishes. A expressive piece...
February 16th, 2017 06:25 - Through the Looking Glass (AJ)
An engaging verse of well written reflection and questions we all think of...
February 16th, 2017 06:24 - SAINT VALENTINE ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such an interesting read on why Valentine\'s day is celebrated with love...
February 13th, 2017 08:43 - By the River (Classicmister)
Ah - a first rate set of rhyming couplets with natural flow - - an...
February 12th, 2017 17:22 - Six Months On (Caroline Lowry)
Such a heart-rending verse Caroline - a beautiful tribute to a much...
February 12th, 2017 17:15 - LOVED WITH EVERLASTING LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A picture of great truth heads these inspiring lines which need to be...
February 12th, 2017 12:41 - Tree At My Backyard (Rrodriguez)
A positive and faith-filled outlook to end this introspective time of...
February 12th, 2017 12:21 - Piel Canela (Augustus)
A short-line sensation of romantic intrigue - great read.
February 12th, 2017 12:14 - My Path Unbroken (Kurt Philip Behm)
A fulfilling read is this trio of lyrical, swift flowing rhyme - great...
February 12th, 2017 12:12 - The Other Side of Hope (Vvnrose)
Very inspiring read and love the wonderful choice of picture.
February 11th, 2017 17:21 - My Special Valentine (Iamwoman)
A beautiful Valentine love poem. Delightful read.
February 11th, 2017 14:29 - spirit blows dark clouds away (Avigail)
Such an uplifting read - - spirit certainly does recharge our batteries.
February 11th, 2017 10:11 - The Telling (Augustus)
Keep holding close that \"abundance of love\" my friend \"caring hands\"...
February 10th, 2017 12:44 - Our First Kiss (Christina K)
Who could forget that first well described moment which came with a kiss....
February 5th, 2017 17:05 - Positive Vibes (Reese Marie)
Good recipe Reese for creating inner peace - an inspiring read.
February 5th, 2017 17:03 - RELEASE (Michael Edwards)
Love the lyrical flow of the poetry with a masterly picture to colour the...
February 4th, 2017 09:48 - Victory (Reese Marie)
Welcome to this friendly site Reese and keep that ink flowing. - - A very...
February 3rd, 2017 14:04 - Pension Day at the Post Office (Jenny1959)
A well written story of two different viewpoints but I vote for Tommy for...
February 3rd, 2017 14:01 - THE ORCHARD BY NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Wonderful - - both picture and words. Another gem Michael.
February 3rd, 2017 06:15 - SHE DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Am so pleased to have caught these two little gems - a wonderful start...
January 31st, 2017 03:18 - Fare Thee Well (Augustus)
Sending every best wish for your speedy return from hospital stay my...
January 30th, 2017 13:43 - Ready. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you dear friends for your commendable comments - all truly ...
January 30th, 2017 10:19 - P O L A R B E A R S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wishing with you Brian that this tragic change in Arctic conditions for...
January 30th, 2017 05:29 - The silence (Kevin Clark)
An expressive verse on a much needed subject - I agree silence is vital...
January 30th, 2017 04:36 - The Owl and The Evergreen (Elizabeth Eyres)
A beautiful read full of wonderful rhyming - - I love the personalized...
January 29th, 2017 17:11 - HARLEM BLUES (RAJ NANDY)
The story surrounding a love of the blues weaves around both the subject...
January 29th, 2017 17:06 - Beyond The Nearest Star (Kurt Philip Behm)
Romance oozes from these short lines and the call to re-waken to love has...
January 29th, 2017 15:04 - Hours of Poetry (Augustus)
The very best way to spend free time is to write poetry - agreed my friend...
January 29th, 2017 10:32 - Where do the hearts go? (Marie Braden)
Hearts can change A potent question in this flowing poem Marie - I love...
January 28th, 2017 14:56 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah - - many thanks dear Jane - your comment came so quickly after the...
January 28th, 2017 11:18 - Missing You Missing You (Pintu Mahakul)
The state of missing a loved leader is held in these interesting lines...
January 28th, 2017 05:56 - My Beautiful Dove (Rrodriguez)
Read slowly this poem with its symbol of a beautiful dove shows great...
January 28th, 2017 00:50 - Happy Birthday Fay Madam (Pintu Mahakul)
I am truly honoured dear friend to be the recipient of your kind birthday...
January 28th, 2017 00:39
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