Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Storm (Dusk arising)
Oh - what a compelling tale and what a surprise ending in that final line...
September 24th, 2017 05:40 - FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards)
Tenderest words to describe the feeling of a first love Michael - ...
September 23rd, 2017 02:34 - Just memories 📌 (Malubotelho)
This read had me near tears dear friend - some of the expressions you...
September 22nd, 2017 11:41 - Missing You (FredPeyer)
This is always the way when sudden death takes our dearly beloved - your...
September 22nd, 2017 05:05 - Seeing the World Differently (Goldfinch60)
Very true Goldie - we need every one of these extraordinary people.
September 22nd, 2017 05:03 - TEN OXYMORONS ~ Seriously Funny (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brilliant assessment of the ridiculous meanings of contradictory terms - ...
September 22nd, 2017 04:58 - colours (Dusk arising)
A poignant read which applies to everyone over a certain stage in life....
September 22nd, 2017 04:50 - RING RING (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - -a brilliant last line to this rhymed account of a real life...
September 22nd, 2017 02:07 - Blown Away (Seeker)
Both form and content so sagacious in this arresting verse - that first...
September 21st, 2017 05:34 - Prominent Prey (GeraldineTaylor)
A compelling picture your words paint on the subject of predators...
September 21st, 2017 04:54 - Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
Can just imagine the play for attention at that battle of Hastings between...
September 21st, 2017 04:51 - VENUS ~ MARS ~ SUN & MOON ~ Collaboration ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An exciting swing on the subject of planetary intervention in love and its...
September 21st, 2017 04:48 - Illusions and time (Poetic Dan)
Good questions of where our inner senses begin and how - - I like too the...
September 21st, 2017 04:43 - Taming of the Beast (Mugsdaddy)
A power read with an amazing last line - a lead to follow from dark to...
September 21st, 2017 02:27 - Inner debate (Malubotelho)
Malu your gift for writing comes through each line in this verse to the...
September 20th, 2017 10:46 - A Poem For All (Christina8)
A beautiful tribute to all who here who care for others., May peace gift...
September 20th, 2017 08:56 - Rainbow of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Love that is long lasting and unafraid shines like the rainbow - - a...
September 19th, 2017 15:39 - I Am Free (Christina8)
Your warm heart shines through every line here Christina - - those final...
September 19th, 2017 14:40 - Treasure Trove (Orchidee)
Another spiritual gem to read an be inspired by - thank you my friend.
September 19th, 2017 13:41 - A HARD LESSON (Louis Gibbs)
Facing our demons is the way to freedom and as this verse admits this is...
September 19th, 2017 13:39 - RICE PEAS \'N CHICK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Proper Barbados twang in this yummy read Brian - sets my palette awork...
September 19th, 2017 04:06 - Always know just enough (Poetic Dan)
So sad that some minds come to confusion - a tender piece of caring ...
September 19th, 2017 04:04 - THE BURGESS SHALE (Michael Edwards)
Exciting abstract Michael and the three liners taught me yet another...
September 19th, 2017 03:18 - Validation (Christina8)
The harm a negligent parent can do to young minds - so sad this outpouring...
September 18th, 2017 14:52 - The Gambler (FredPeyer)
A poignant ending for the gambler who never touched cards Fred - a lesson...
September 18th, 2017 14:48 - Love for love (Malubotelho)
Perfecting thoughts for love to grow is such an inspiring part of this...
September 18th, 2017 14:45 - LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Your collab struck all the right notes for me on the wonderful subject of...
September 18th, 2017 05:14 - SHE MONSTICHS (Michael Edwards)
I know a few who suffer the same affliction as those in the final line...
September 18th, 2017 03:30 - LIMERICK 43 (Michael Edwards)
I take my watch off if I know I am late - - naughty I know - - great...
September 17th, 2017 12:28 - Life of love (Poetic Dan)
Agree with Ron - once love gets inside it can wreak havoc but keep...
September 17th, 2017 12:24 - Why? (FredPeyer)
So so true Fred - -reminds me of what was reported that Christ said as...
September 17th, 2017 04:40 - Live in the moment (Slcooper1973)
What an inspiring read and thank you for sharing the special blessings of...
September 17th, 2017 04:37 - HARVEST SUNDAY 2017 ~ ENJOY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A true and humble estimate of God\'s great goodness as harvest is gathered...
September 17th, 2017 03:09 - tower (Dusk arising)
A mighty find Saturday tale with a twist methinks in that minstrel\'s...
September 16th, 2017 11:10 - Slave (FredPeyer)
Agree with Martina - - where has that other side of you been hiding Fred...
September 16th, 2017 11:05 - Embrace the remembering (Poetic Dan)
A wonderful reminder of the time we were dual - -- the inspired phrase...
September 16th, 2017 10:58 - The Morning Sky (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Your words shared with us such stunning beauty of seeing the morning with...
September 16th, 2017 10:55 - Harvest Humblings (Orchidee)
A super verse of adoration for God\'s great gifts - - I agree too with...
September 16th, 2017 10:53 - Hungry Ghosts (Goldfinch60)
Good question -- love the reasoning in this one Goldie.
September 15th, 2017 13:55 - FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Stunning form and clever rhyming - a treat of a mirror-read Brian my...
September 15th, 2017 13:54 - Turtles on a log (WL Schuett)
Turtles can teach us so much about resting to take in the day. Good read...
September 15th, 2017 13:52 - A friend (Tony36)
Great read Tony. Friends are so special they deserve this fine tribute.
September 15th, 2017 13:48 - Today (Edward Charles McDevitt)
A beautiful tribute to what friends can achieve and hoping the display on...
September 15th, 2017 13:41 - Today (Edward Charles McDevitt)
A beautiful tribute to what friends can achieve and hoping the display on...
September 15th, 2017 13:41 - Follow Thy Elsewhere (Seek)
Some outstanding rhyming in this exciting verse - - I love the final...
September 15th, 2017 09:27 - Blessed (Christina8)
A positive end to a challenging start in life Christina - The courage...
September 14th, 2017 11:04 - The water and the rock (Malubotelho)
A lovely thought that the rock and water exchange contact - the picture...
September 14th, 2017 11:00 - THE ABSTRACT ARTIST (Michael Edwards)
Children often show the way Michael and imagination is their forté - -...
September 14th, 2017 02:57 - C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Cheers to both fabulous poets for your collabs - keep up the good work.
September 14th, 2017 02:53 - Just Human (FredPeyer)
Good read and helpful to many who find it hard to accept Self - yes ...
September 14th, 2017 02:51 - Ocean Swim (FredPeyer)
I was there in that heavenly water with you Fred - a verse which excites...
September 13th, 2017 10:39 - F L O R I D A ~ WE ALL LOVE YOU An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A warm -hearted and informed acrostic to the place where sunshine and...
September 12th, 2017 14:53 - Broken Days. (Kevin browne)
Amazing imagery here to express the sad state of many today. \"Unfortunate...
September 11th, 2017 11:47 - SEVEN ROSES FOR SUNDAY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Roses in a well tended garden are a heavenly gift - such a lovely verse...
September 10th, 2017 13:25 - Comforting Commissioning (Orchidee)
Faith reaches heights nothing else can - good news expressed very well ...
September 9th, 2017 11:10 - \"Worry\' (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Wishing you good news health-wise Edward - worry I agree does not change...
September 9th, 2017 11:09 - For the love of Autumn (Dark_energy)
So enjoyable this expression of autumnal love - -the chosen image really...
September 9th, 2017 11:06 - Doors left open (Poetic Dan)
Your words have hit me Dan and the image is carefully chosen to mold into...
September 9th, 2017 05:14 - A THOUSAND WRECKS (Michael Edwards)
Fraught with adventure this sea-tale in painting and word - - a form new...
September 9th, 2017 02:02 - Poverty of the Soul (WL Schuett)
The search shows that an answer will be found soon Bill - - the territory...
September 9th, 2017 01:48 - Heart of Mercy (WL Schuett)
Such a compelling appeal in both painting and poem - so pleased to have...
September 9th, 2017 01:41 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Sky (Aa Harvey)
Love is in the smallest of things - love is the force behind life in this...
September 8th, 2017 15:12 - Your Love (Tony36)
Sad and heart-rending read Tony
September 8th, 2017 10:20 - Undeniably You (Christina8)
A piece of beautiful nostalgia - hoping your dreams always come true...
September 8th, 2017 06:57 - Concluding Formal Prayers Series - 6 (Orchidee)
A humbling example of prayer.
September 8th, 2017 06:27 - HOW WAS YOUR DAY ~ HAVE OR HAVE~NOT ? ~ A Lament Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A surprising set of numbers to tell us the state of this planet\'s...
September 8th, 2017 05:32 - DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
The first one liner did it for me too Michael - and that line drawing of...
September 8th, 2017 02:10 - THE BROKEN (Louis Gibbs)
Broken but writing the pain away - a good description and tribute to the...
September 8th, 2017 02:07 - Wordsmith (FredPeyer)
A fine summary of the work needed to complete a canvas of artistic poetry...
September 8th, 2017 02:03 - SHE CONFIRMS (Michael Edwards)
Well done again with duo of line drawing and trinet form of poetry. An...
September 7th, 2017 13:24 - Find (Nicholas Browning)
Lovely Senryu Nicholas - I love the message that peace comes when we...
September 7th, 2017 11:15 - Thick Skinned (WriteBeLight)
Standing up to be counted is best. A good read.
September 7th, 2017 09:09 - lustfully, greedily (Dusk arising)
Ah - Such an unexpected ending - what a sensuous tease you composed...
September 6th, 2017 16:15 - THE GREAT DECEPTION (Louis Gibbs)
Time is as we here on earth see it but really the moment is all we ever...
September 6th, 2017 13:28 - Ennobling Entrance (Orchidee)
You express the texts so clearly - thank you for this inspiring read...
September 6th, 2017 13:26 - Preparing for Irma (Malubotelho)
Wishing you and your state safety from Irma - take care Malu and waiting...
September 6th, 2017 13:23 - FIVE SEVEN FIVES (Michael Edwards)
Just love the middle three liner here Michael - so so true is this short...
September 6th, 2017 05:03 - Awakening (Sue.evans)
A first class expression of gifts a quiet morning can bring Sue - a...
September 6th, 2017 05:00 - My Tomorrows. (Goldfinch60)
A glorious piece of morning music chosen to match the excellent verse. ...
September 6th, 2017 04:57 - Ocean (FredPeyer)
The ocean\'s precocious behaviour in a fine nutshell my friend - -love...
September 6th, 2017 04:55 - REDUCE ~ REUSE ~ REPAIR ~ Save the Planet ~ An 822 Production ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
First rate mantra to teach not only the young to save this beautiful...
September 6th, 2017 04:53 - Look away (Aa Harvey)
The wonder of love wrapped in expressive reflections. Good read A.A.
September 6th, 2017 04:48 - Grateful That ... (WriteBeLight)
You use my favourite word all the way through this lovely verse WBL - - am...
September 5th, 2017 09:03 - COLORS OF THE RAINBOW ~ Collaboration Poem ~ BRIAN & SANTITA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a vivid and colourfully scribed tribute to rainbows - well done you...
September 5th, 2017 07:44 - She Fever Too. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - you wrote your fill in this yummy version dear Goldie. Great...
September 5th, 2017 04:30 - Jigsaw of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Such a good and inspired piece of advice my friend.
September 4th, 2017 13:54 - Afraid (Edward Charles McDevitt)
At times like this poem describes our faith is sorely tested - wishing...
September 4th, 2017 13:53 - Motion Picture (Nicholas Browning)
A collection of reasons why personal history wins every time - an...
September 4th, 2017 13:49 - DAFFODILS (Michael Edwards)
Oooh a challenge of a form methinks and you pen it so well Michael - ...
September 3rd, 2017 05:10 - Two into One. (Goldfinch60)
A scary end to my morning read Goldie - shall have to watch out for those...
September 3rd, 2017 04:06 - GOD ANSWERS PRAYER ~ Sonnet for Sunday ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Prayer has an invincible power and thanks for sharing this with us today...
September 3rd, 2017 04:04 - My Soul (FredPeyer)
So inspiring your definition of the soul Fred - - a mountain of reasons to...
September 3rd, 2017 04:03 - Insomnia (Malubotelho)
A scary place to be is sleepless when \"drenched in inquisition\" and your...
September 2nd, 2017 16:29 - EBB AND FLOW (Michael Edwards)
Words flow so gently in this sensuous poem -- a beautiful read and love...
September 2nd, 2017 09:49 - Social Media Lives (Sue.evans)
Measuring ourselves too much with others is a product of what this fine...
September 2nd, 2017 03:04 - Getting Older (FredPeyer)
You pen well the right attitude to aging Fred - we have choices as to...
September 2nd, 2017 03:01 - S E P T E M B E R ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
If I had to choose a favourite month it would have to be September - a...
September 2nd, 2017 02:59 - bare of branches (Heather T)
Missed your incredible writing dear Heather but this re-entry more than...
September 1st, 2017 13:56 - Things That Impress Me Most... (Sue.evans)
A wonderfully comprehensive list of selfless traits we all need to read...
September 1st, 2017 13:49 - BITTERSWEET (Louis Gibbs)
Life is as you say in this interesting write Louis - - we can only try to...
September 1st, 2017 05:26
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