Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- I don\'t believe what I believe (Poetic Dan)
A compelling read Dan - we are certainly equipped to keep on trying to...
October 13th, 2017 14:49 - COASTAL EROSION ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A warm welcome home to this lovely poetry site Brian my friend - a sad...
October 13th, 2017 14:46 - Faded Flower (WL Schuett)
Fantastic talent for brushwork and poetry - very poignant both picture...
October 13th, 2017 10:42 - difficult departure (Frank Prem)
You tell a mystery story so well here Frank - - I could taste that smoky...
October 12th, 2017 10:33 - walk in the woods (Tony36)
The last line of this verse made me sit up and think - finding lion tracks...
October 11th, 2017 14:01 - These vary words i speak. (Joseph M Marion)
Such an appealing read and so well expressed - the heart which feels...
October 11th, 2017 13:58 - Halloween Will Soon Be Here (Christina8)
Halloween soon comes around again Christina and your lovely imagery makes...
October 11th, 2017 10:03 - White Lie (FredPeyer)
A relationship build on a lie cannot be but ended - finished...
October 11th, 2017 05:57 - Hill of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A tribute to courage as taught from the cradle and put into a poem worthy...
October 11th, 2017 05:52 - Just One Wish (Accidental Poet)
This verse brought me very near tears for nothing replaces a mother\'s...
October 11th, 2017 05:47 - His and hers (Poetic Dan)
A sad read which must have been painful to write Dan -- questions asked...
October 10th, 2017 08:24 - Love of my life...........the beat goes on (Ray ray)
A lovely message of future intent - well wishes to you and to your beloved...
October 10th, 2017 08:17 - With You (Christina8)
A beautiful confession of realized love Christina - - a lovely read.
October 10th, 2017 08:12 - All seasons (Malubotelho)
A lovely read Malu - - so tender and appealing.
October 10th, 2017 08:10 - God\'s Sense of Humour. (Goldfinch60)
A good reminder here Goldi - fun is the gift which we often forget.
October 9th, 2017 05:24 - The love can never change (David)
The truth of love is expressed so eloquently in this poignant read David...
October 9th, 2017 05:23 - Poets of MPS (Accidental Poet)
Grateful thanks for this beautiful and perceptive tribute my friend - we...
October 9th, 2017 05:19 - Last Row (FredPeyer)
Fred this so aptly describes someone I knew - beauty of that sort can...
October 8th, 2017 04:50 - A GENTLE LAND (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for this gorgeous form used to portray gentle peace with...
October 8th, 2017 02:42 - KIPPERED (Michael Edwards)
B-Bmmmmm - - poor little kipper already smoked and ready methinks - - love...
October 7th, 2017 11:38 - Perpetual Presence (Orchidee)
a lovely prayerful read Steve - thanks for sharing the comfort such...
October 7th, 2017 10:22 - On Line Love (Mugsdaddy)
Love this admission of good on-line love - - a beautiful read.
October 7th, 2017 10:20 - perfect time (Frank Prem)
Dogs in the grasp of making music can teach us all much Frank - join \'em...
October 7th, 2017 08:45 - Is Opera For Me? (Goldfinch60)
I have to agree with Michael here - opera has ever been fighting to get...
October 7th, 2017 08:41 - Missed (FredPeyer)
Ooooh now this I can relate to Fred - - a missed train stands for so much...
October 7th, 2017 08:38 - Consequences are free (Poetic Dan)
Haha ha Dan - - what a surprise at the end of this intriguing write. Had...
October 7th, 2017 08:30 - Living One Day At A Time (Accidental Poet)
Such a wise and inspiring read - \"living one day at a time\" is all we...
October 7th, 2017 08:26 - MAKE ME MORE LIKE AN APPLE TREE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a charming comparison you make here Brian - being likened to a tree...
October 7th, 2017 08:23 - tide (Dusk arising)
So vividly portrayed the change autumn brings to both tide and shore - ...
October 6th, 2017 11:18 - PTSD (Christina8)
Such a tragic disease is that called theses days as PTSD when from...
October 6th, 2017 11:09 - WHAT MAKES THE BRITISH HAPPY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha - - I love the wit in this first rate verse - - I think it would...
October 6th, 2017 11:06 - Wisdom Ways (Orchidee)
Amen to this prayerful appeal to One who knows how to live life...
October 6th, 2017 11:03 - DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2) (Michael Edwards)
I love to read this one aloud Michael - top drawer writing and - -...
October 6th, 2017 01:44 - Frolicking fun (Poetic Dan)
Oh how alive both the verse and the video - could feel the flow and the...
October 5th, 2017 11:08 - Once More Her Hero. (Goldfinch60)
A smile in the read for me Goldie - so many have fears of such cobwebby ...
October 5th, 2017 02:59 - I Want to Meet a Stranger (MALU)
Ah this write gets to the heart of our emotional need at times Malu -...
October 5th, 2017 02:54 - coffee train (Frank Prem)
I echo those lovely coffee-toots Frank - yes please for me.
October 5th, 2017 02:52 - DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1) (Michael Edwards)
A classical piece with an extra- clever last line - super pencil-work...
October 5th, 2017 02:35 - THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards)
The wry humour struck me in the final three liner \"Binding chains...
October 5th, 2017 02:26 - Comforting Considerations (Orchidee)
Considering comfort through needed reminders that we are never alone - - a...
October 4th, 2017 10:40 - AUTUMN HAIKU ~ For CHRISTINA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine haiku tribute to the most colourful time of the year my friend -...
October 4th, 2017 10:38 - Empathy Among The Species (Accidental Poet)
I agree wholly with this inspiring write -- empathy among species is...
October 4th, 2017 06:11 - Just an Organ? (Mugsdaddy)
Loud applause for this wise advice in such a beautiful poem. Such a good...
October 4th, 2017 06:09 - Growing Into Older Life. (Kevin browne)
A thought provoking read Kevin - letting go and saying a last goodbye is...
October 3rd, 2017 13:47 - PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ha ha - love the flow and rhyme in this fun read from you two clever...
October 3rd, 2017 13:42 - Littlest of things (Poetic Dan)
Little things have always meant a lot Dan - - love the chosen image too.
October 3rd, 2017 13:40 - HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - you make ballooning so worth a try Brian - - the experience must be...
October 2nd, 2017 16:48 - Wedding Day (Christina8)
Thank you Christina for sharing not only your glorious day but the love...
October 2nd, 2017 16:39 - Hiking the Urayoán Mountains (Rrodriguez)
How your description of peace in those mountains rings through each line ...
October 2nd, 2017 16:35 - Take my hand (Poetic Dan)
Such a special read Dan - so pleased you have found the way to love the...
October 2nd, 2017 16:27 - In Your Memory Dear Paternal Aunt (Pintu Mahakul)
A heart-touching acrostic and very fine tribute dear Pintu - an aunt well...
October 2nd, 2017 16:21 - Come Sleep, Oh Sleep (Rrodriguez)
First rate writing in a tricky form too - reading through the whole piece...
October 1st, 2017 16:33 - GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Full of faith and encouragement this inspiring read Brian - how we all...
October 1st, 2017 05:15 - All-Points Bulletin (Accidental Poet)
Wow you wrote this so real I am already peering out from my window in fear...
October 1st, 2017 05:12 - THE TEMPTRESS (Michael Edwards)
Powerful subject and the triolet form with its repetition is an inspired...
October 1st, 2017 02:43 - Clever or Wise. (Goldfinch60)
Good advice Goldie - if we change ourselves all else around can alter to...
September 30th, 2017 05:15 - SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Both the picture and words have that wonderful appeal that only you and...
September 30th, 2017 05:13 - You Remind Me (Accidental Poet)
Such an appeal in these honest words. Great read.
September 30th, 2017 05:12 - MULTITASKING (Michael Edwards)
Oooooooh flack you surely invite with this blight on how and why females...
September 30th, 2017 02:26 - Clipped Wings (Christina8)
Such a difficult subject to write on and you do it with empathy despite...
September 29th, 2017 16:10 - The Creature (Tony36)
Good to see you back posting Tony and a scary creature you create d for...
September 29th, 2017 14:54 - Love theatre 🎭 (Malubotelho)
Your penned the scene so well I could see that love theatre too - -- a...
September 29th, 2017 11:06 - TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Casual Sex did it for me Brian - - how can it ever be casual !! A clever...
September 28th, 2017 16:16 - Sand Crabs (FredPeyer)
Yes balance is the answer Fred - a good reminder in this enjoyable verse...
September 28th, 2017 01:33 - Desolation (Ravenssongbird)
You word desolation so poetically well -- welcome Raven to MPS.
September 28th, 2017 01:29 - THE UNFOLDING FIASCO (Louis Gibbs)
Enjoyed this read about our journey through life on earth - and the fiasco...
September 27th, 2017 06:57 - My Mentor. (Goldfinch60)
A tender tribute to a much loved Dad -
- - a lovely read.
September 27th, 2017 06:54 - Tread Lightly My Dear (Accidental Poet)
This tell it just how it is - - honest words spoken from the heart make...
September 27th, 2017 06:51 - 101 (Poetic Dan)
Fine admonition in these lined my friend. Letting go is the way to get...
September 27th, 2017 06:49 - Make My Heart Sing (Christina8)
A fine read Christina - Your experience of shedding the heavier baggage is...
September 27th, 2017 06:44 - FUSIONS 2 (Michael Edwards)
Sounds like the way I too like to finish a meal Michael. Love the rhyming...
September 27th, 2017 01:06 - Repose of the long journey (Pintu Mahakul)
Filled with faith and acceptance this poem shows ways of looking at ends...
September 26th, 2017 14:53 - Dawns Piper (WL Schuett)
Stunning painting and amazing writing - - loud applause for both of them ...
September 26th, 2017 14:49 - Found my voice (Poetic Dan)
An understanding of other wraps itself round every line and a Dad must...
September 26th, 2017 14:45 - Thirsty 💉 (Malubotelho)
Wow a vivid portrayal of desire at its fiercest - -such a good...
September 26th, 2017 14:42 - Empathy (FredPeyer)
Tenderness perfected in this lovely tribute to empathy Fred.
September 26th, 2017 05:02 - Left For Dead. (Wallace)
Oh such a sad piece though appealingly written. I admire the rhyming in...
September 26th, 2017 05:00 - MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Music is surely a gift from above and you word it so well here Brian - ...
September 26th, 2017 04:58 - FROM FUSIONS 1 (Michael Edwards)
Love the imagery used in this autumnal re-post. Pleased you decided to...
September 26th, 2017 04:56 - Before You Close Your Eyes (Accidental Poet)
A lovely reminder of the value in the gift of sight - a thoughtful write.
September 26th, 2017 04:50 - The Tandem of Love. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful first read of enduring love - love that last line -
-...
September 26th, 2017 02:51 - Adrenaline--Part 1 (Christina8)
Oooooh - - another stunner of a last line to this poignantly written tale...
September 25th, 2017 07:18 - DORCAS (Michael Edwards)
A smile every few lines in reading this tale of a donkey called Dorcas - ...
September 24th, 2017 05:49 - Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60)
Good advice in this interesting read.
September 24th, 2017 05:45 - Mind Games (FredPeyer)
Something to think on in that last stanza my friend and very well...
September 24th, 2017 05:42 - Storm (Dusk arising)
Oh - what a compelling tale and what a surprise ending in that final line...
September 24th, 2017 05:40 - FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards)
Tenderest words to describe the feeling of a first love Michael - ...
September 23rd, 2017 02:34 - Just memories 📌 (Malubotelho)
This read had me near tears dear friend - some of the expressions you...
September 22nd, 2017 11:41 - Missing You (FredPeyer)
This is always the way when sudden death takes our dearly beloved - your...
September 22nd, 2017 05:05 - Seeing the World Differently (Goldfinch60)
Very true Goldie - we need every one of these extraordinary people.
September 22nd, 2017 05:03 - TEN OXYMORONS ~ Seriously Funny (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Brilliant assessment of the ridiculous meanings of contradictory terms - ...
September 22nd, 2017 04:58 - Guardian of Innocence (Accidental Poet)
Such good advice in all walks of life my friend - \"pay no mind to those...
September 22nd, 2017 04:52 - colours (Dusk arising)
A poignant read which applies to everyone over a certain stage in life....
September 22nd, 2017 04:50 - RING RING (Michael Edwards)
Ha ha ha - -a brilliant last line to this rhymed account of a real life...
September 22nd, 2017 02:07 - Blown Away (Seeker)
Both form and content so sagacious in this arresting verse - that first...
September 21st, 2017 05:34 - Prominent Prey (GeraldineTaylor)
A compelling picture your words paint on the subject of predators...
September 21st, 2017 04:54 - Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60)
Can just imagine the play for attention at that battle of Hastings between...
September 21st, 2017 04:51 - VENUS ~ MARS ~ SUN & MOON ~ Collaboration ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An exciting swing on the subject of planetary intervention in love and its...
September 21st, 2017 04:48 - Illusions and time (Poetic Dan)
Good questions of where our inner senses begin and how - - I like too the...
September 21st, 2017 04:43 - Viewpoint (Accidental Poet)
Such good advice wrapped in poetic verse - -thanks for sharing it A.P,
September 21st, 2017 04:39
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