Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Ocean Swim (FredPeyer)
I was there in that heavenly water with you Fred - a verse which excites...
September 13th, 2017 10:39 - F L O R I D A ~ WE ALL LOVE YOU An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A warm -hearted and informed acrostic to the place where sunshine and...
September 12th, 2017 14:53 - Broken Days. (Kevin browne)
Amazing imagery here to express the sad state of many today. \"Unfortunate...
September 11th, 2017 11:47 - SEVEN ROSES FOR SUNDAY (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Roses in a well tended garden are a heavenly gift - such a lovely verse...
September 10th, 2017 13:25 - Comforting Commissioning (Orchidee)
Faith reaches heights nothing else can - good news expressed very well ...
September 9th, 2017 11:10 - \"Worry\' (Edward Charles McDevitt)
Wishing you good news health-wise Edward - worry I agree does not change...
September 9th, 2017 11:09 - For the love of Autumn (Dark_energy)
So enjoyable this expression of autumnal love - -the chosen image really...
September 9th, 2017 11:06 - Doors left open (Poetic Dan)
Your words have hit me Dan and the image is carefully chosen to mold into...
September 9th, 2017 05:14 - A THOUSAND WRECKS (Michael Edwards)
Fraught with adventure this sea-tale in painting and word - - a form new...
September 9th, 2017 02:02 - Poverty of the Soul (WL Schuett)
The search shows that an answer will be found soon Bill - - the territory...
September 9th, 2017 01:48 - Heart of Mercy (WL Schuett)
Such a compelling appeal in both painting and poem - so pleased to have...
September 9th, 2017 01:41 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Sky (Aa Harvey)
Love is in the smallest of things - love is the force behind life in this...
September 8th, 2017 15:12 - Your Love (Tony36)
Sad and heart-rending read Tony
September 8th, 2017 10:20 - Undeniably You (Christina8)
A piece of beautiful nostalgia - hoping your dreams always come true...
September 8th, 2017 06:57 - Concluding Formal Prayers Series - 6 (Orchidee)
A humbling example of prayer.
September 8th, 2017 06:27 - HOW WAS YOUR DAY ~ HAVE OR HAVE~NOT ? ~ A Lament Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A surprising set of numbers to tell us the state of this planet\'s...
September 8th, 2017 05:32 - DREAMS - A FEW ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
The first one liner did it for me too Michael - and that line drawing of...
September 8th, 2017 02:10 - THE BROKEN (Louis Gibbs)
Broken but writing the pain away - a good description and tribute to the...
September 8th, 2017 02:07 - Wordsmith (FredPeyer)
A fine summary of the work needed to complete a canvas of artistic poetry...
September 8th, 2017 02:03 - SHE CONFIRMS (Michael Edwards)
Well done again with duo of line drawing and trinet form of poetry. An...
September 7th, 2017 13:24 - Find (Nicholas Browning)
Lovely Senryu Nicholas - I love the message that peace comes when we...
September 7th, 2017 11:15 - Thick Skinned (WriteBeLight)
Standing up to be counted is best. A good read.
September 7th, 2017 09:09 - lustfully, greedily (Dusk arising)
Ah - Such an unexpected ending - what a sensuous tease you composed...
September 6th, 2017 16:15 - THE GREAT DECEPTION (Louis Gibbs)
Time is as we here on earth see it but really the moment is all we ever...
September 6th, 2017 13:28 - Ennobling Entrance (Orchidee)
You express the texts so clearly - thank you for this inspiring read...
September 6th, 2017 13:26 - Preparing for Irma (Malubotelho)
Wishing you and your state safety from Irma - take care Malu and waiting...
September 6th, 2017 13:23 - FIVE SEVEN FIVES (Michael Edwards)
Just love the middle three liner here Michael - so so true is this short...
September 6th, 2017 05:03 - Awakening (Sue.evans)
A first class expression of gifts a quiet morning can bring Sue - a...
September 6th, 2017 05:00 - My Tomorrows. (Goldfinch60)
A glorious piece of morning music chosen to match the excellent verse. ...
September 6th, 2017 04:57 - Ocean (FredPeyer)
The ocean\'s precocious behaviour in a fine nutshell my friend - -love...
September 6th, 2017 04:55 - REDUCE ~ REUSE ~ REPAIR ~ Save the Planet ~ An 822 Production ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
First rate mantra to teach not only the young to save this beautiful...
September 6th, 2017 04:53 - Look away (Aa Harvey)
The wonder of love wrapped in expressive reflections. Good read A.A.
September 6th, 2017 04:48 - Grateful That ... (WriteBeLight)
You use my favourite word all the way through this lovely verse WBL - - am...
September 5th, 2017 09:03 - COLORS OF THE RAINBOW ~ Collaboration Poem ~ BRIAN & SANTITA (BRIAN & ANGELA)
What a vivid and colourfully scribed tribute to rainbows - well done you...
September 5th, 2017 07:44 - She Fever Too. (Goldfinch60)
Ha ha - you wrote your fill in this yummy version dear Goldie. Great...
September 5th, 2017 04:30 - Jigsaw of Life. (Goldfinch60)
Such a good and inspired piece of advice my friend.
September 4th, 2017 13:54 - Afraid (Edward Charles McDevitt)
At times like this poem describes our faith is sorely tested - wishing...
September 4th, 2017 13:53 - Motion Picture (Nicholas Browning)
A collection of reasons why personal history wins every time - an...
September 4th, 2017 13:49 - DAFFODILS (Michael Edwards)
Oooh a challenge of a form methinks and you pen it so well Michael - ...
September 3rd, 2017 05:10 - Two into One. (Goldfinch60)
A scary end to my morning read Goldie - shall have to watch out for those...
September 3rd, 2017 04:06 - GOD ANSWERS PRAYER ~ Sonnet for Sunday ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Prayer has an invincible power and thanks for sharing this with us today...
September 3rd, 2017 04:04 - My Soul (FredPeyer)
So inspiring your definition of the soul Fred - - a mountain of reasons to...
September 3rd, 2017 04:03 - Insomnia (Malubotelho)
A scary place to be is sleepless when \"drenched in inquisition\" and your...
September 2nd, 2017 16:29 - EBB AND FLOW (Michael Edwards)
Words flow so gently in this sensuous poem -- a beautiful read and love...
September 2nd, 2017 09:49 - Social Media Lives (Sue.evans)
Measuring ourselves too much with others is a product of what this fine...
September 2nd, 2017 03:04 - Getting Older (FredPeyer)
You pen well the right attitude to aging Fred - we have choices as to...
September 2nd, 2017 03:01 - S E P T E M B E R ! An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
If I had to choose a favourite month it would have to be September - a...
September 2nd, 2017 02:59 - bare of branches (Heather T)
Missed your incredible writing dear Heather but this re-entry more than...
September 1st, 2017 13:56 - Things That Impress Me Most... (Sue.evans)
A wonderfully comprehensive list of selfless traits we all need to read...
September 1st, 2017 13:49 - BITTERSWEET (Louis Gibbs)
Life is as you say in this interesting write Louis - - we can only try to...
September 1st, 2017 05:26 - PYRAMID SELLING (Michael Edwards)
You describe this type of selling so well here Michael - - .love the duck...
September 1st, 2017 01:54 - Don\'t Even Try To Please Everyone (WriteBeLight)
Not all wear the same skin as you so rightly express here WBL - I agree...
August 31st, 2017 16:47 - Mother. (Kevin browne)
Ah - a worthy and very perceptive tribute Kevin to all those excellent ...
August 31st, 2017 16:40 - Evangelism Encouragements (Orchidee)
Inspiring video and words.
August 30th, 2017 11:00 - The Pen (Tony36)
True to life the pen of poet takes over the mind - a good reminder and...
August 30th, 2017 10:59 - AUTUMN (Michael Edwards)
Autumn encased in a few choice words could never be bettered - great...
August 29th, 2017 02:37 - MPS ~ WE ARE FAMILY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
We are as you so poetically say Brian a closely knit family of writers and...
August 28th, 2017 12:32 - I\'LL LET YOU KNOW (Louis Gibbs)
A personal perspective from John and told with such imaginative talent ...
August 27th, 2017 15:30 - thoughts on time (Dusk arising)
Wise thoughts on time and its place in our lives.
August 26th, 2017 14:30 - SOME MORE ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards)
Fantastic array of excellent one-liners here Michael - - each one a gem.
August 26th, 2017 08:48 - THOUGHTS ON MADNESS (Louis Gibbs)
Madness has been the word used to discredit the wisest of thinkers in ...
August 25th, 2017 10:45 - Enamored (Malubotelho)
Such a romantic write and the picture adds to the feel of togetherness - ...
August 25th, 2017 10:39 - A Date with my Muse (FredPeyer)
Ha ha - you nailed it again Fred - that Muse does the very same to me...
August 24th, 2017 06:29 - Panic (Christina8)
Panic asserts its presence at most unexpected times and your finely...
August 24th, 2017 06:20 - Alone / not alone (Aa Harvey)
A finely composed and a thought-provoking read AA
August 24th, 2017 06:16 - The Prism of Life. (Goldfinch60)
You hit it right on head describing this changeable life Goldie - a very...
August 24th, 2017 06:14 - The silliest (Malubotelho)
Love the chase of words round the paper blowing away in your creative...
August 23rd, 2017 15:37 - Friendship. (Docstorm)
What a compelling tale doc - a good flow to the telling,, great sense of...
August 23rd, 2017 15:31 - HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - - how I love soldiers dipped in runny egg-yolk and remember my...
August 23rd, 2017 12:20 - Books (Tony36)
Same here Tony.
August 23rd, 2017 12:15 - No Cabbage For You....Well, Maybe (WriteBeLight)
A good illustration in this rhyming message and a cabbage really fills the...
August 23rd, 2017 11:22 - BLINDING REFLECTIONS (Louis Gibbs)
The picture you pen of beings as human manifestations on this planet is...
August 23rd, 2017 08:06 - Where has summer gone? (Sue.evans)
This sums up the August fiasco so well Sue - - let us hope September in...
August 23rd, 2017 05:59 - Just one night... forever (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A tender remembrance of true love and rhymed with care the feel of that...
August 22nd, 2017 15:55 - Naked (Malubotelho)
Malu this has to be one of your best - the piece gives a soul-naked view...
August 22nd, 2017 14:21 - Time (Sue.evans)
Living each moment - this wise piece reminds us to make the days count - ...
August 22nd, 2017 10:30 - Lost without you (Sue.evans)
Your words move the depths of my heart Sue - - so sad that dignity is...
August 22nd, 2017 10:27 - Miss You Too! (WriteBeLight)
Glad you are back and posting again dear WBL - a welcome read and be sure...
August 22nd, 2017 10:21 - Insignificance. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful music as the words are being read - - - none of us who are...
August 22nd, 2017 04:19 - FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A very yummy write my friend - and with a sprinkle of such classic form...
August 22nd, 2017 04:12 - Dependency (Gina~)
A good example of perceptive rhyming and I love the message ending this...
August 21st, 2017 16:42 - Fun Bags (WriteBeLight)
Ha ha - - love the wit behind some of these lines WBL - great fun read.
August 21st, 2017 16:39 - The Sad Clown (Tony36)
Sad but well written Tony - I always feel for what is behind the grin of...
August 21st, 2017 16:38 - Millia (Sefrin)
Could anyone not be comforted by reading these archaic assurances that...
August 21st, 2017 16:33 - Lost and found (Andrew Charles Forrest)
An intriguing four-liner that ends with a sting of surprise - - look...
August 21st, 2017 16:29 - I am here, I am the storm (Andrew Charles Forrest)
Love the personification in this clever rhyme - I can relate closely to...
August 21st, 2017 16:25 - JOURNEY\'S END (Michael Edwards)
Enjoyed both the tale of welcome homecoming and an abstract full of the...
August 21st, 2017 05:06 - FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such a lovely form the diamond poem and so apt the sense in the words you...
August 21st, 2017 04:12 - A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Breeze (Aa Harvey)
Clever reflection on love.
August 21st, 2017 04:10 - Hard Day (FredPeyer)
Problems are always there at the bottom of any bottle - - well expressed...
August 21st, 2017 04:09 - He made her (Malubotelho)
A sensual feel to each well written line in this piece of gently erotica...
August 20th, 2017 09:48 - ALONE (Michael Edwards)
Even the colour of the abstract evokes pathos and the slow read of your...
August 20th, 2017 07:12 - THE HOLY SPIRIT ~ Poem for Sunday (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A fine read and good reminder of the gift the Holy Spirit brings to us....
August 20th, 2017 07:06 - DESTINATION MARS ~ THE RED PLANET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh Yes my friend - - -Red Mars ready for it first pioneers sans...
August 19th, 2017 14:24 - Communion Capturings (Orchidee)
A spiritual read which being based on the tune of a family favourite hymn...
August 19th, 2017 14:16 - Love Within A Dream (Sefrin)
A tender bounty of linguistic word-play which delights with its expert...
August 18th, 2017 12:24 - A MERRY LUNCH (Michael Edwards)
Ha - - after reading the lighthearted flow of this fun-ballad how I wish I...
August 18th, 2017 05:12 - Reaching Nirvana. (Goldfinch60)
The road to sheer bliss and so beautifully described here Gold with both...
August 18th, 2017 01:57 - I AM A MIDDLEMAN ! A Rhyming 662 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - You have nailed the role so well Brian - - Middleman - or Woman...
August 17th, 2017 04:00 - pretty (Heather T)
I am sure Mr T. will treasure this sensuous piece of alluring metaphor...
August 15th, 2017 14:32
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