Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• POETS OF THE WORLD - UNITE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A loud Amen to these encouraging lines on protestation by means of...
  July 3rd, 2017 13:48
• Love Lightings (Orchidee) Such thought and faith goes into your wonderful presentations - a very...
  July 3rd, 2017 13:44
• I will not change a word (Tony36) You stood up for freedom of expression which in coming from heart and...
  July 3rd, 2017 13:42
• Something On My Heart. (Kevin browne) This is mind-blowing work Kevin - the twists and turns of description and...
  July 3rd, 2017 13:34
• Morning Fog (FredPeyer) Your description of the fingers of fog versed its demand to surrender so...
  July 3rd, 2017 04:01
• MAY GOD BE IN ME ~ AMEN (BRIAN & ANGELA) A wonderful assurance in prayer-form and one we could memorize for help in...
  July 2nd, 2017 05:28
• The Clown (FredPeyer) An emotive read Fred and so true of any wearing a mask behind which is...
  July 2nd, 2017 05:26
• Summer is Alive - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Love this haiku of encouragement to look around at the colour of summer....
  July 2nd, 2017 02:23
• The Voice Of God. (Kevin browne) A fine and engaging write Kevin -thanks for sharing these well-chosen...
  July 2nd, 2017 02:21
• Memory (FredPeyer) You describe it all well here Fred - memory can play such tricks with age.
  July 1st, 2017 04:04
• not a poem for andy (Heather T) Those beautiful Andy memories will stay right inside for time immemorial...
  June 30th, 2017 16:17
• The heart of all things (David) I love the personification of heart essence you make in this lovely...
  June 30th, 2017 13:57
• This moment is my lover (David) We have only the now and coat it with lovely gladness we must - another...
  June 30th, 2017 13:51
• To you, who knows me (David) This beautiful mantra puts love where we need it - every breath of each...
  June 30th, 2017 13:49
• YOU LEFT A VOID (Louis Gibbs) Agree wholeheartedly on the sharing of soul through the connection of...
  June 30th, 2017 12:26
• Sheep Story (Orchidee) A thoughtful story of sheep and their journey toward spiritual blessings...
  June 30th, 2017 12:18
• VERDICT (Marjon van Bruggen) Courage to write on such cruel news and in such terse depth will no doubt...
  June 30th, 2017 11:01
• ANGER POSTPONED (Marjon van Bruggen) A potent haunt of a read and from experience it reeks of real anger at...
  June 30th, 2017 09:53
• Innocence taken (Thehippiepoet) A dream expressed so real that until I read your side notes I was ...
  June 30th, 2017 09:47
• Mother Nature (Sue.evans) Put in a charming nutshell this view of early-morning Sue - great read.
  June 30th, 2017 04:02
• Waiting (FredPeyer) I can relate to this verse and its lesson in the futility that sheer...
  June 30th, 2017 04:01
• Walk through thought (P.H.Rose) Fine poetic comparison with well chosen phrasing to describe a walk...
  June 30th, 2017 03:56
• DESIDERATUM (Michael Edwards) With its lilting cadence and evocative form this tale of change from dark...
  June 30th, 2017 02:31
• Color of Skin (Tony36) Such good advice in these line Tony - -- agreed skin colour means ...
  June 29th, 2017 10:18
• CARDINAL BEAUTY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) So much interesting information to folk such as I who loving the birds...
  June 29th, 2017 06:17
• Whose Problem. (Goldfinch60) A fine philosophy is enclosed in this wise verse dear friend.
  June 29th, 2017 02:39
• THE ARTIST RESPONDS (Michael Edwards) A true artist reflects the issues around and draws attention by word or...
  June 25th, 2017 14:51
• Extolling Exuberances (Orchidee) Praise indeed for the almighty power of the One who watches over us all.
  June 25th, 2017 13:45
• GOD KNOWS ME ~ AMEN ~ A 4 4 4 2 Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Truths abound in these well written lines - we are indeed able to gift God...
  June 25th, 2017 05:52
• From Here to There. (Goldfinch60) Yes such friends in that latter verse are worth more than gold. A good...
  June 25th, 2017 05:50
• The Shaking (PenguinPoetess) A write full of vivid compassion for friends who lost loved ones in this...
  June 25th, 2017 05:47
• Ballade of Phineas P. Gage (Gary Edward Geraci) A first rate and compelling ballad with archaic linguistics that really ...
  June 25th, 2017 02:13
• Ink Into Wine (Kurt Philip Behm) Expertly presented this suggestion on format. Thanks for sharing it
  June 24th, 2017 10:47
• ENGLISH SUMMER FRUIT ~ PERFECTION ~ HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA) A mouth-watering array of juicy haiku - - each fruit selected is full of ...
  June 24th, 2017 10:45
• IN GRANDEUR (Michael Edwards) Rich with artistic grace in both forms this duo of picture and verse ...
  June 24th, 2017 02:36
• KISSING DAY IN UK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well what a wonderful reason for giving a kiss to those we meet - I...
  June 23rd, 2017 09:53
• Memories of Last Night (FredPeyer) Ha ha - - written in such style and with a surprise ending this has to be...
  June 22nd, 2017 01:51
• As a poet (Tony36) An excellent summary of the true poet - written straight from your...
  June 21st, 2017 16:11
• Birds & Trees are one (Shona Loya) A perceptive and in depth view of nature\'s close oneness - first rate...
  June 21st, 2017 05:04
• Battle Lines. (Fay Slimm.) Thank you Kathy - the change from dusk to dark or dawn to light has...
  June 21st, 2017 04:45
• HEAT WAVE UK ~ ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA) ha ha - how I agree with your final comments after this clever acrostic...
  June 21st, 2017 04:44
• FESTIVAL OF ST ANTHONY - LISBON (Michael Edwards) Michael your words paint such an evocative palette of colour on this...
  June 21st, 2017 01:32
• Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.) Thank you and bless your warm heart dear Robert - your comments to...
  June 19th, 2017 08:03
• ZEST FOR LIFE. (Terry Collett) Good and poetically alluring this look into life \'s alternatives Terry - ...
  June 19th, 2017 06:44
• DUTCH AND GIRLS 1962 (Terry Collett) This tale of Dutch captivates all the tensions of youth when genders are...
  June 19th, 2017 06:41
• Woman-Fed. (Fay Slimm.) Thank you dear Kathy - - your support is so valued.
  June 18th, 2017 03:25
• Small Plague (Augustus) Nature expressed in all her trials your words echo the ways she is...
  June 17th, 2017 11:57
• \'Escaping from Life\'s Prison. (Goldfinch60) I can relate to the message in this one G - - - good and inspiring read.
  June 17th, 2017 03:49
• lighthouse blind (Heather T) Imagery and assonance second to none in this haunting portrait of love...
  June 17th, 2017 01:43
• other day gray (Heather T) Memory wrapped in a box of yesterday dreams reveals acceptance lifting and...
  June 17th, 2017 01:34
• sticks, stones, and the futility of fingers (Heather T) Wounds like this heal only with slow and heartwrenching attendance to the...
  June 17th, 2017 01:27
• Writting words (Tony36) Thoughtfully caring these loving words.
  June 15th, 2017 10:46
• Ageless Assurance (Orchidee) A fine write and full of live faith.
  June 15th, 2017 10:45
• Dementia - Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) Such a sad read - when dementia hits family is the only time we can...
  June 15th, 2017 03:11
• STRINGS (Louis Gibbs) Those strings do the same thing for me Louis - - a delightfully dreamy...
  June 14th, 2017 07:16
• Incandescent Flame (GeraldineTaylor) Such a rousing and inspirational read Geraldine - so pleased to have...
  June 14th, 2017 04:18
• A LIFE FULLY LIVED (Louis Gibbs) This read touches the heart with its reasons for hanging on when things...
  June 12th, 2017 08:21
• LOST IN THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards) The heart of a female has no comfort from broken promises - though sad...
  June 10th, 2017 02:59
• Broken Country. (Goldfinch60) A fine explanation and an engaging read G.
  June 10th, 2017 02:56
• Breakfast. (Garry) Doc\'s advice is worth considering Garry - remembering however that...
  June 10th, 2017 02:52
• SYNTACTIC AMBIGUITY 5 and 6 (Michael Edwards) Love the wit in your limericks Michael
  June 9th, 2017 07:37
• wisp (Heather T) A depth of expression pulses through this richly linguistic verse - I...
  June 9th, 2017 02:13
• SUSPICION (Michael Edwards) Mysterious and provocative this verse with its painting to match and oh...
  June 8th, 2017 02:57
• COURAGEOUS LOVE (Louis Gibbs) Your tribute to a well-loved \"man for all seasons\" touches the heart...
  June 7th, 2017 10:57
• Crown On Loan (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm) Vital points for us poets to remember in these few lines Kurt.
  June 7th, 2017 10:48
• Unending Tomorrows (Augustus) The research which must have gone into this gives readers so much insight...
  June 7th, 2017 09:17
• Max Richter. (Goldfinch60) Such a wonderful use of musical instruments in the number by Max Richter -...
  June 7th, 2017 07:49
• AT THE CEMETERY (RAJ NANDY) A poignant narrative with a heart-rending end dear Raj - so good to see...
  June 7th, 2017 03:13
• Mournful Memories (Orchidee) A dark but powerful write.
  June 6th, 2017 14:55
• Color Master (Augustus) How truly delightful to not only see you in video performing in front of...
  June 6th, 2017 12:46
• Impossible Conquered. (Goldfinch60) A wise reminder.
  June 6th, 2017 03:18
• Mislaid. (Fay Slimm.)
  June 5th, 2017 06:11
• Clinical Trials (Augustus) Trials must come when fighting despondence and this write shows an...
  June 4th, 2017 13:25
• Deliverance Declaration (Orchidee) A lovely presentation of faith. That psalm is a comfort to many today.
  June 4th, 2017 13:17
• Mannequin Words (ElenaGrace) I feel the romance of these well-crafted lines and love the comparison to...
  June 4th, 2017 13:15
• THE WIZZARDS OF OZ (Louis Gibbs) Good form chosen to denounce these wizards who shape whatever they feel...
  June 4th, 2017 13:13
• Voices Call (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) I love the terse power in these few lines Kurt - - faith is the keyword in...
  June 4th, 2017 13:11
• LIMERICK 33 (Michael Edwards) Ha ha ha ha - great stuff.
  June 4th, 2017 07:22
• Nan. (Goldfinch60) Your loving words and phrases would reach to anyone\'s heart having lost...
  June 4th, 2017 06:05
• A Narrative Snare (Ethan) Ah - the snare we as poets have to see and escape from - a great piece of...
  June 4th, 2017 06:03
• Eyes to My Soul (Gino) A plea which, encased as it is in excellent phrasing appeals to the heart...
  June 4th, 2017 06:01
• SCRIPTURE FOR SUNDAY ~ PLEASE PRAY FOR LONDON (AGAIN) (BRIAN & ANGELA) A sincere Amen to this remembrance of recent London and Manchester...
  June 4th, 2017 05:58
• Cathartic Lacerations (Whisperingquill) An exciting read which sits very well in the form you chose - love the...
  June 4th, 2017 05:56
• When Rodents Roam... (P.H.Rose) You verse their activities so well here P.H. - I once read that rats are...
  June 4th, 2017 05:54
• My beautiful cordyline... (P.H.Rose) To cry with joy when a flower blooms shows nature enjoys first place in...
  June 2nd, 2017 16:28
• Feeding Time to the Silence (LIGHT WARRIOR) A powerful outcry against false friends and the torture deceit can employ...
  June 1st, 2017 23:14
• Beautiful Moonlight (Gino) Your words adorn the beautiful mystery of moonlight Gino. A romantic look...
  June 1st, 2017 22:53
• The Ecstasy of Gold (Gino) Breathless with admiration for this treat of a read Gino - your imagery...
  June 1st, 2017 22:45
• Deadly Intent. (Fay Slimm.) Heartfelt thanks dear friends for you kind and encouraging comments and ...
  June 1st, 2017 16:15
• PEACE (Louis Gibbs) A feeling of peace brought on by gentle rain is something I too would...
  June 1st, 2017 09:52
• The Ascender (Augustus) Reading the dip into alliteration and assonance you scribed here made my...
  June 1st, 2017 08:55
• LIMERICK 32 (Michael Edwards) Where do you get these limericks from Michael - so full of fun.
  June 1st, 2017 04:18
• Beauty Described Pt.1 (Abpoet18) Loud applause for this shout of poetic reasons why love must be patient...
  May 30th, 2017 11:06
• Catching attention, delivering  effective messages that make the difference (Avigail) Such good and meaningful advice Avigail - - poets need to go on writing...
  May 30th, 2017 11:03
• THE ENDING (Louis Gibbs) A thought-provoking read Louis - -love that final stanza which attributes...
  May 30th, 2017 11:00
• The Foley (Augustus) The intricate exposure which constantly takes over you express so bravely...
  May 30th, 2017 09:31
• PEACE OF THE DOVE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) The beauty of doves so well expressed Brian - - another amazing acrostic...
  May 30th, 2017 05:21
• WHEN FIRST DISCOVERED (Michael Edwards) What a land of light this place must be. You draw its paradise with words...
  May 30th, 2017 01:47
• Cancer Dying (Augustus) My heart goes out to you Augustus my faraway poet-friend - sending you...
  May 29th, 2017 16:17
• False Limits (Kurt Philip Behm) Wise advice Kurt and so precisely written. - love the power in that final...
  May 29th, 2017 13:00