Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Low Hanging Fruit (FredPeyer) Wise message hiding within these four lines Fred. Good rhyme.
  July 14th, 2017 04:02
• Into The Furnace (Edthepoet) First rate verse with a brilliant last stanza - great read Ed.
  July 13th, 2017 17:27
• Natures Wash Day.... (P.H.Rose) An engaging read. Filling in time for a poet means looking around and you...
  July 13th, 2017 09:51
• THE CITY MAN ~ HAVE NO PEACE ! A Sonnet for Nature (BRIAN & ANGELA) Agree heartedly Brian - peoples worldwide who revere the earth and its...
  July 13th, 2017 04:53
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (3) (Michael Edwards) First rate poem after that final stanza - it finished the scene on an...
  July 13th, 2017 02:33
• Searching Through Stillness (Augustus) Pulsing with atmosphere the verse flows toward such an inventive last line...
  July 12th, 2017 15:08
• Bliss (Tony36) A beautiful write Tony - love the romance in that final couplet.
  July 12th, 2017 10:52
• candle light (Onepauly) Clever alliteration Paul - liked the way words flowed into that candlelit...
  July 12th, 2017 07:57
• MARDI GRAS WITH ANGELA ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Fin filled to the brim this jaunt to the carnival after viewing that...
  July 12th, 2017 05:02
• Counting Sheep (Nicholas Browning) Ooooh - I can relate to this when counting sheep fails and words take...
  July 11th, 2017 16:26
• Bends In My Road.... (P.H.Rose) Rain or no the poem has form and style to show imagery at its best P.H.
  July 11th, 2017 09:30
• Deliverance Desirings 2 (Orchidee) A verse filled with faith deserving a loud Amen. Thanks for this lovely...
  July 11th, 2017 09:28
• Splashing Waves In Rainbows. (Kevin browne) Reflections on life and written with fervour this verse speaks to those ...
  July 11th, 2017 03:00
• Heart door (Aa Harvey) A lovely assurance to your special lady - - such a romantic read.
  July 11th, 2017 02:55
• DEJA VU 2 ~ MON CLAIR DE LUNE ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I too learned the version you write of in my French class at school Brian...
  July 11th, 2017 01:41
• Roses (BeautifulDisaster) So sad and so perceptively written this saying goodbye to a much missed...
  July 11th, 2017 01:37
• A FEW SINGLE LINERS (Michael Edwards) Gorgeously attractive abstract Michael and the one liners are a change I...
  July 11th, 2017 01:34
• My Springtime Song (GeraldineTaylor) A bouquet of seasonal difference all beautifully versed in this delightful...
  July 11th, 2017 01:32
• THE ENDLESS QUEST (Louis Gibbs) Knights have an endless mission and cannot forsake the challenge ahead- -...
  July 10th, 2017 13:04
• The Sound Of A Gong. (Edthepoet) The futility and cruelty of war is well brought out in this questioning...
  July 10th, 2017 13:02
• Brilliant Blue (Nicholas Browning) Colour is such a gift as is this interesting tribute to nature\'s variety...
  July 10th, 2017 01:31
• COMMUNICATING WITH GOD ~ A Blank Verse 4 6 4 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) I wholly agree that every day we need by prayerful thought this vital...
  July 9th, 2017 06:07
• A most Unconventional Wedding..... (P.H.Rose) A poem like this brought on by the wedding your verse describes reads...
  July 9th, 2017 03:31
• Heart Space (FredPeyer) Intriguing thoughts here regarding heart-space my friend - -...
  July 9th, 2017 03:27
• Nature\'s Wondrous World. (Goldfinch60) A read to show where true relaxation can be found. Lovely verse.
  July 9th, 2017 02:51
• MEMORIES AND DREAMS (Michael Edwards) Wonderful imagery - a delightful read Michael - gorgeous watercolour.
  July 9th, 2017 01:51
• Mind (FredPeyer) We are made with eternity held inside and this lovely read reminds us that...
  July 8th, 2017 05:22
• Never the never (Aa Harvey) A beautiful poem of love forever - such a tender read and thanks for...
  July 8th, 2017 05:17
• WAKENING (Michael Edwards) Yes day follows the night and a good stretch while still in bed does it...
  July 8th, 2017 02:35
• That Sound. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful and very kind thing to do is write and give copies to others ...
  July 8th, 2017 02:31
• CULINARY HERBS ~ SEASONINGS ~ SPICES An ABCDarian Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Super advice on herbs and spices Brian - a good tip too if the dish...
  July 8th, 2017 02:29
• I forgive you (Lost-but-not-broken17) Your final line lends wisdom to forgiveness dear poet friend. A verse...
  July 6th, 2017 16:40
• The survivors (Emile Dubois) Loud applause for this rant against contamination of misguided thinking on...
  July 6th, 2017 14:38
• Flow Without Flow (Emile Dubois) Clever expressions on an overripe fruit and with so much food for later...
  July 6th, 2017 14:33
• Secret Love (Tony36) Shyness can wreck all our good intentions - hope the time came to declare...
  July 6th, 2017 13:35
• What is life? (Lost-but-not-broken17) Your reaction to bad news shines out like a beacon in this positive verse...
  July 6th, 2017 13:20
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (2) (Michael Edwards) Smoothly and gently romantic - you have chose a good style for tender...
  July 6th, 2017 04:00
• A Whole Lot of Work (FredPeyer) Love the positive ending to this engaging and imaginative verse - - good...
  July 6th, 2017 01:51
• Bouncy Clouds. (Goldfinch60) Ooooh - what a fun picture around bouncy clouds that gave me a smile ...
  July 5th, 2017 02:13
• THROUGH THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards) Love the feel of these secretive lines Michael and love the cloud-mass in...
  July 5th, 2017 02:09
• Night Rhythms (Garry) This calming read is the last of my day - - Thanks Gary for a gentle...
  July 4th, 2017 16:42
• I Am Always By Your Side (Krystal Brewington) The wholehearted assurance you give of your care and love is truly moving...
  July 4th, 2017 16:15
• We Belong With Each Other (Krystal Brewington) Such a romantic read Krystal - I love the comparisons you make to...
  July 4th, 2017 16:09
• Reprogramming (Poetic Dan) Agree wholeheartedly with these lines Dan - - loud applause for the...
  July 4th, 2017 09:22
• Poem number 1000 - Part Three : Deeper and deeper (Aa Harvey) The doom of ill-fated love sounds its haunting knell in this dark poem. A...
  July 4th, 2017 05:45
• RECYCLE ~ TO SAVE THE PLANET ~ TANKAS (5~7~5~7~7) (BRIAN & ANGELA) A list of sound reasons for recycling in this clever rhyme Brian - - with...
  July 4th, 2017 05:36
• What is Death? (Goldfinch60) This question raised by your verse reminds me of the quote that \"We are...
  July 4th, 2017 02:56
• The snow leopard (Aa Harvey) You paint with assurance this picture of nature pregnant with future - ...
  July 4th, 2017 02:52
• upon a page (Heather T) Top drawer writing Heather -- a stunning read with an inspiring finalé
  July 3rd, 2017 16:06
• THIS TIME AROUND (Louis Gibbs) A clever conclusion to keep in mind Louis - it is the acts not taken that...
  July 3rd, 2017 13:50
• POETS OF THE WORLD - UNITE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A loud Amen to these encouraging lines on protestation by means of...
  July 3rd, 2017 13:48
• Love Lightings (Orchidee) Such thought and faith goes into your wonderful presentations - a very...
  July 3rd, 2017 13:44
• I will not change a word (Tony36) You stood up for freedom of expression which in coming from heart and...
  July 3rd, 2017 13:42
• Something On My Heart. (Kevin browne) This is mind-blowing work Kevin - the twists and turns of description and...
  July 3rd, 2017 13:34
• Morning Fog (FredPeyer) Your description of the fingers of fog versed its demand to surrender so...
  July 3rd, 2017 04:01
• MAY GOD BE IN ME ~ AMEN (BRIAN & ANGELA) A wonderful assurance in prayer-form and one we could memorize for help in...
  July 2nd, 2017 05:28
• The Clown (FredPeyer) An emotive read Fred and so true of any wearing a mask behind which is...
  July 2nd, 2017 05:26
• Summer is Alive - Haiku. (Goldfinch60) Love this haiku of encouragement to look around at the colour of summer....
  July 2nd, 2017 02:23
• The Voice Of God. (Kevin browne) A fine and engaging write Kevin -thanks for sharing these well-chosen...
  July 2nd, 2017 02:21
• Memory (FredPeyer) You describe it all well here Fred - memory can play such tricks with age.
  July 1st, 2017 04:04
• not a poem for andy (Heather T) Those beautiful Andy memories will stay right inside for time immemorial...
  June 30th, 2017 16:17
• The heart of all things (David) I love the personification of heart essence you make in this lovely...
  June 30th, 2017 13:57
• This moment is my lover (David) We have only the now and coat it with lovely gladness we must - another...
  June 30th, 2017 13:51
• To you, who knows me (David) This beautiful mantra puts love where we need it - every breath of each...
  June 30th, 2017 13:49
• YOU LEFT A VOID (Louis Gibbs) Agree wholeheartedly on the sharing of soul through the connection of...
  June 30th, 2017 12:26
• Sheep Story (Orchidee) A thoughtful story of sheep and their journey toward spiritual blessings...
  June 30th, 2017 12:18
• VERDICT (Marjon van Bruggen) Courage to write on such cruel news and in such terse depth will no doubt...
  June 30th, 2017 11:01
• ANGER POSTPONED (Marjon van Bruggen) A potent haunt of a read and from experience it reeks of real anger at...
  June 30th, 2017 09:53
• Innocence taken (Thehippiepoet) A dream expressed so real that until I read your side notes I was ...
  June 30th, 2017 09:47
• Mother Nature (Sue.evans) Put in a charming nutshell this view of early-morning Sue - great read.
  June 30th, 2017 04:02
• Waiting (FredPeyer) I can relate to this verse and its lesson in the futility that sheer...
  June 30th, 2017 04:01
• Walk through thought (P.H.Rose) Fine poetic comparison with well chosen phrasing to describe a walk...
  June 30th, 2017 03:56
• DESIDERATUM (Michael Edwards) With its lilting cadence and evocative form this tale of change from dark...
  June 30th, 2017 02:31
• Color of Skin (Tony36) Such good advice in these line Tony - -- agreed skin colour means ...
  June 29th, 2017 10:18
• CARDINAL BEAUTY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) So much interesting information to folk such as I who loving the birds...
  June 29th, 2017 06:17
• Whose Problem. (Goldfinch60) A fine philosophy is enclosed in this wise verse dear friend.
  June 29th, 2017 02:39
• THE ARTIST RESPONDS (Michael Edwards) A true artist reflects the issues around and draws attention by word or...
  June 25th, 2017 14:51
• Extolling Exuberances (Orchidee) Praise indeed for the almighty power of the One who watches over us all.
  June 25th, 2017 13:45
• GOD KNOWS ME ~ AMEN ~ A 4 4 4 2 Blank Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Truths abound in these well written lines - we are indeed able to gift God...
  June 25th, 2017 05:52
• From Here to There. (Goldfinch60) Yes such friends in that latter verse are worth more than gold. A good...
  June 25th, 2017 05:50
• The Shaking (PenguinPoetess) A write full of vivid compassion for friends who lost loved ones in this...
  June 25th, 2017 05:47
• Ballade of Phineas P. Gage (Gary Edward Geraci) A first rate and compelling ballad with archaic linguistics that really ...
  June 25th, 2017 02:13
• Ink Into Wine (Kurt Philip Behm) Expertly presented this suggestion on format. Thanks for sharing it
  June 24th, 2017 10:47
• ENGLISH SUMMER FRUIT ~ PERFECTION ~ HAIKU (BRIAN & ANGELA) A mouth-watering array of juicy haiku - - each fruit selected is full of ...
  June 24th, 2017 10:45
• IN GRANDEUR (Michael Edwards) Rich with artistic grace in both forms this duo of picture and verse ...
  June 24th, 2017 02:36
• KISSING DAY IN UK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Well what a wonderful reason for giving a kiss to those we meet - I...
  June 23rd, 2017 09:53
• Memories of Last Night (FredPeyer) Ha ha - - written in such style and with a surprise ending this has to be...
  June 22nd, 2017 01:51
• As a poet (Tony36) An excellent summary of the true poet - written straight from your...
  June 21st, 2017 16:11
• Birds & Trees are one (Shona Loya) A perceptive and in depth view of nature\'s close oneness - first rate...
  June 21st, 2017 05:04
• Battle Lines. (Fay Slimm.) Thank you Kathy - the change from dusk to dark or dawn to light has...
  June 21st, 2017 04:45
• HEAT WAVE UK ~ ACROSTIC (BRIAN & ANGELA) ha ha - how I agree with your final comments after this clever acrostic...
  June 21st, 2017 04:44
• FESTIVAL OF ST ANTHONY - LISBON (Michael Edwards) Michael your words paint such an evocative palette of colour on this...
  June 21st, 2017 01:32
• Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.) Thank you and bless your warm heart dear Robert - your comments to...
  June 19th, 2017 08:03
• ZEST FOR LIFE. (Terry Collett) Good and poetically alluring this look into life \'s alternatives Terry - ...
  June 19th, 2017 06:44
• DUTCH AND GIRLS 1962 (Terry Collett) This tale of Dutch captivates all the tensions of youth when genders are...
  June 19th, 2017 06:41
• Woman-Fed. (Fay Slimm.) Thank you dear Kathy - - your support is so valued.
  June 18th, 2017 03:25
• Small Plague (Augustus) Nature expressed in all her trials your words echo the ways she is...
  June 17th, 2017 11:57
• \'Escaping from Life\'s Prison. (Goldfinch60) I can relate to the message in this one G - - - good and inspiring read.
  June 17th, 2017 03:49
• lighthouse blind (Heather T) Imagery and assonance second to none in this haunting portrait of love...
  June 17th, 2017 01:43
• other day gray (Heather T) Memory wrapped in a box of yesterday dreams reveals acceptance lifting and...
  June 17th, 2017 01:34