Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• thoughts on time (Dusk arising) Wise thoughts on time and its place in our lives.
  August 26th, 2017 14:30
• SOME MORE ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) Fantastic array of excellent one-liners here Michael - - each one a gem.
  August 26th, 2017 08:48
• THOUGHTS ON MADNESS (Louis Gibbs) Madness has been the word used to discredit the wisest of thinkers in ...
  August 25th, 2017 10:45
• Enamored (Malubotelho) Such a romantic write and the picture adds to the feel of togetherness - ...
  August 25th, 2017 10:39
• A Date with my Muse (FredPeyer) Ha ha - you nailed it again Fred - that Muse does the very same to me...
  August 24th, 2017 06:29
• Panic (Christina8) Panic asserts its presence at most unexpected times and your finely...
  August 24th, 2017 06:20
• Alone / not alone (Aa Harvey) A finely composed and a thought-provoking read AA
  August 24th, 2017 06:16
• The Prism of Life. (Goldfinch60) You hit it right on head describing this changeable life Goldie - a very...
  August 24th, 2017 06:14
• The silliest (Malubotelho) Love the chase of words round the paper blowing away in your creative...
  August 23rd, 2017 15:37
• Friendship. (Docstorm) What a compelling tale doc - a good flow to the telling,, great sense of...
  August 23rd, 2017 15:31
• HOUR GLASS FIGURE ~ A Form Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - - how I love soldiers dipped in runny egg-yolk and remember my...
  August 23rd, 2017 12:20
• Books (Tony36) Same here Tony.
  August 23rd, 2017 12:15
• No Cabbage For You....Well, Maybe (WriteBeLight) A good illustration in this rhyming message and a cabbage really fills the...
  August 23rd, 2017 11:22
• BLINDING REFLECTIONS (Louis Gibbs) The picture you pen of beings as human manifestations on this planet is...
  August 23rd, 2017 08:06
• Where has summer gone? (Sue.evans) This sums up the August fiasco so well Sue - - let us hope September in...
  August 23rd, 2017 05:59
• Just one night... forever (Andrew Charles Forrest) A tender remembrance of true love and rhymed with care the feel of that...
  August 22nd, 2017 15:55
• Naked (Malubotelho) Malu this has to be one of your best - the piece gives a soul-naked view...
  August 22nd, 2017 14:21
• Time (Sue.evans) Living each moment - this wise piece reminds us to make the days count - ...
  August 22nd, 2017 10:30
• Lost without you (Sue.evans) Your words move the depths of my heart Sue - - so sad that dignity is...
  August 22nd, 2017 10:27
• Miss You Too! (WriteBeLight) Glad you are back and posting again dear WBL - a welcome read and be sure...
  August 22nd, 2017 10:21
• Insignificance. (Goldfinch60) Beautiful music as the words are being read - - - none of us who are...
  August 22nd, 2017 04:19
• FISH & CHIPS & MUSHY PEAS ! AN EPAULAERYU (BRIAN & ANGELA) A very yummy write my friend - and with a sprinkle of such classic form...
  August 22nd, 2017 04:12
• Dependency (Gina~) A good example of perceptive rhyming and I love the message ending this...
  August 21st, 2017 16:42
• Fun Bags (WriteBeLight) Ha ha - - love the wit behind some of these lines WBL - great fun read.
  August 21st, 2017 16:39
• The Sad Clown (Tony36) Sad but well written Tony - I always feel for what is behind the grin of...
  August 21st, 2017 16:38
• Millia (Sefrin) Could anyone not be comforted by reading these archaic assurances that...
  August 21st, 2017 16:33
• Lost and found (Andrew Charles Forrest) An intriguing four-liner that ends with a sting of surprise - - look...
  August 21st, 2017 16:29
• I am here, I am the storm (Andrew Charles Forrest) Love the personification in this clever rhyme - I can relate closely to...
  August 21st, 2017 16:25
• JOURNEY\'S END (Michael Edwards) Enjoyed both the tale of welcome homecoming and an abstract full of the...
  August 21st, 2017 05:06
• FROM MY WINDOW ~ A Diamond Pivot Poem (BRIAN & ANGELA) Such a lovely form the diamond poem and so apt the sense in the words you...
  August 21st, 2017 04:12
• A collection of \'Love is...\' Poetry - Breeze (Aa Harvey) Clever reflection on love.
  August 21st, 2017 04:10
• Hard Day (FredPeyer) Problems are always there at the bottom of any bottle - - well expressed...
  August 21st, 2017 04:09
• He made her (Malubotelho) A sensual feel to each well written line in this piece of gently erotica...
  August 20th, 2017 09:48
• ALONE (Michael Edwards) Even the colour of the abstract evokes pathos and the slow read of your...
  August 20th, 2017 07:12
• THE HOLY SPIRIT ~ Poem for Sunday (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine read and good reminder of the gift the Holy Spirit brings to us....
  August 20th, 2017 07:06
• DESTINATION MARS ~ THE RED PLANET ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh Yes my friend - - -Red Mars ready for it first pioneers sans...
  August 19th, 2017 14:24
• Communion Capturings (Orchidee) A spiritual read which being based on the tune of a family favourite hymn...
  August 19th, 2017 14:16
• Love Within A Dream (Sefrin) A tender bounty of linguistic word-play which delights with its expert...
  August 18th, 2017 12:24
• A MERRY LUNCH (Michael Edwards) Ha - - after reading the lighthearted flow of this fun-ballad how I wish I...
  August 18th, 2017 05:12
• Reaching Nirvana. (Goldfinch60) The road to sheer bliss and so beautifully described here Gold with both...
  August 18th, 2017 01:57
• I AM A MIDDLEMAN ! A Rhyming 662 Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - You have nailed the role so well Brian - - Middleman - or Woman...
  August 17th, 2017 04:00
• pretty (Heather T) I am sure Mr T. will treasure this sensuous piece of alluring metaphor...
  August 15th, 2017 14:32
• First Love (FredPeyer) You capture the essence of a young first love with this beautiful verse...
  August 15th, 2017 06:04
• Sing a song of the Taj Mahal (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) \"Marbled dome\" and \"lover\'s shrine\" - you capture the essence of this...
  August 15th, 2017 04:29
• ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE (Michael Edwards) Interesting form which packs a loud into a two liner - - great work
  August 15th, 2017 02:12
• prey (Heather T) I need a cold shower my friend after breathlessly digesting this brilliant...
  August 14th, 2017 16:19
• My Friend (Edward Charles McDevitt) Filled with true friendship assurance this read will be sure to please...
  August 14th, 2017 13:17
• Clocks and Calendars (WriteBeLight) Inspired thinking in this appeal for more time with the one we love - -...
  August 14th, 2017 12:07
• Time to Leave (FredPeyer) An all too familiar pattern in this troubled society is seeing a female...
  August 14th, 2017 12:03
• I\'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Me luves them sorts o\' pirates me does - -- good fun write Brian.
  August 14th, 2017 05:22
• red clay baptism (Heather T) Wow - - how enormous the effort and work on a farm such as this - just...
  August 13th, 2017 13:51
• red clay baptism (Heather T) Loud applause for this glorious peep into your family farm-home Heather -...
  August 13th, 2017 13:47
• Check Yourself Out (Edward Charles McDevitt) I refuse self-checkouts for the reasons you give Edward - a fine outcry...
  August 13th, 2017 13:39
• Simplicity Sentiments (Orchidee) A fine testimony to a living faith.
  August 13th, 2017 13:26
• Drained (Gina~) Your write clearly outlines the need for allowing time and chance to be...
  August 12th, 2017 17:17
• Living (FredPeyer) I agree with Antonio your work is a needed reminder that life is for...
  August 12th, 2017 17:08
• When Mother Natures Karma. (Kevin browne) Such a powerful write Kevin - riven with pictures of suffering humanity ...
  August 12th, 2017 17:04
• Parched Lips (Gary Edward Geraci) How wonderful to learn how pursed lips express deep emotion in the...
  August 12th, 2017 16:57
• Color all with Blackened (Simple-Man87) A powerful piece of work - dark but a wonderful read.
  August 11th, 2017 11:40
• IMAGINE (Louis Gibbs) We all overlap in many respects - -love the wit in your imaginings ...
  August 11th, 2017 10:56
• Crispy Wing Things (WriteBeLight) Love this yummy -fun write.
  August 11th, 2017 10:55
• Is It Worth It? (Edward Charles McDevitt) Your warm willing heart shines through these questioning lines my friend -...
  August 11th, 2017 10:53
• vines of eden (Heather T) Filled with poetic vocabulary these \"Vines of Eden\" pulsate with...
  August 9th, 2017 23:55
• GUARDIAN ANGELS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Angels certainly do exist and aid humans to find the spiritual fruits. A...
  August 9th, 2017 13:46
• IN SPITE OF (Louis Gibbs) Can relate to the courage shown by the courageous despite life-threatening...
  August 9th, 2017 13:44
• Dream Lunch (WriteBeLight) Am already packing my bags in the hope for that celebratory lunch dear ...
  August 9th, 2017 13:39
• Terrible Trustings (Orchidee) Thank you for another fine hymn-poem dear friend. Lovely harvest reminder...
  August 9th, 2017 13:36
• Thoughts (Malubotelho) Lovely thoughts here Malu and so timely in these troublesome days - keep...
  August 9th, 2017 13:33
• \"Emergency\" (Edward Charles McDevitt) Oh Edward this read moves me to the heart - a son\'s love for his mother...
  August 9th, 2017 13:29
• HER VOICE FELL SOFT (Michael Edwards) The gentle flow of this read engenders a quiet peace. Fine work Michael.
  August 9th, 2017 02:00
• Blue paradise (Malubotelho) Such an outstanding appeal in this verse Malu - the title itself is a...
  August 8th, 2017 11:53
• It\'s Not All About Me (Edward Charles McDevitt) Edward your writing phrases the many ways poets can express on the same...
  August 8th, 2017 08:48
• Making Love In The Heart Of God/ Absolute Auric Mantra (Whisperingquill) Love the imagery which begins this journey into ongoing life and all it...
  August 8th, 2017 08:41
• Vividly Versed (WriteBeLight) a fine tribute to those who write easily yet sometimes use rare wording...
  August 8th, 2017 08:38
• Deliverance Desirings (Orchidee) Fine spiritual write my friend.
  August 8th, 2017 08:34
• LOVE ~ AN ELUSIVE DREAM ? A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Perfect form and structure to your appealing rhyme Brian - best of all...
  August 8th, 2017 05:09
• The id, the ego and the super-ego (Aa Harvey) A thrill of a read to some fortunate lady and hoping your appeal will hit...
  August 8th, 2017 05:06
• Dreamers (Michael Edwards) So true that night skies can evoke much in lovers - - lovely brushwork...
  August 8th, 2017 04:16
• wild horses (Heather T) Gentle erotica slides from your pen like nectared silk in this piece of...
  August 7th, 2017 14:00
• A FEW COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) An intriguing trio of couplets here Michael - can relate to the middle...
  August 7th, 2017 02:45
• Who Needs Weeds? (WriteBeLight) This gave me a smile as I think I have their close relations in my garden...
  August 6th, 2017 14:34
• Inimitable Inauguration (Orchidee) Such a comfort to read these assurance dear friend - and so ancient the...
  August 6th, 2017 14:32
• I Wonder Why (Edward Charles McDevitt) Keep up you reading and commenting Ed. and your work will get plenty of...
  August 5th, 2017 13:59
• Happy Weekend (Edward Charles McDevitt) A lovely flow to this friendly acrostic - - inventive rhyming and good...
  August 5th, 2017 13:56
• TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Deeply honoured for the dedication my friend - - the tragic tale of...
  August 5th, 2017 10:33
• Look Both Ways (WriteBeLight) Wise council and written in wonderful rhyme. You capture the feeling of...
  August 4th, 2017 12:52
• Cooling Comforts (Orchidee) A beautiful read dear friend.
  August 4th, 2017 12:50
• Incubating (Malubotelho) Writer\'s block laid out in so much good imagery -and with such feeling I...
  August 4th, 2017 12:49
• Tropical Rain (FredPeyer) Your poetic expressions of tropical rain are the best I have read - so...
  August 4th, 2017 05:19
• The Undarkened House. (Goldfinch60) Morning will never be dull or dark in your house my friend - can imagine...
  August 4th, 2017 05:00
• SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - that wonderful number nine did it for me Brian - - love to...
  August 4th, 2017 04:57
• DROWNED IN SORROW (Michael Edwards) Wowers - - great imagery Michael -- have to read this one again.
  August 4th, 2017 02:15
• Cook (Tony36) cooking for friends is a real pleasure in life - - good that you feel...
  August 3rd, 2017 14:21
• Twenty four of darkness.... (P.H.Rose) Only an empathetic heart would go to these sightless lengths P.H. and...
  August 3rd, 2017 13:39
• Class Reunion (FredPeyer) I remember a class reunion in which I was hard put to tell who was who for...
  August 3rd, 2017 13:12
• NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS (BRIAN & ANGELA) A style and form which demands so much writing experience Brian - - such a...
  August 3rd, 2017 13:08
• Sentiments It Found. (Kevin browne) Deeply felt this pearl Kevin - my favourite piece is contained in the...
  August 3rd, 2017 12:39
• A Hat For That (WriteBeLight) Ah - a first rate set of reasons why our poet-hat must be given space on...
  August 3rd, 2017 12:36
• THE SMILING DIED (Michael Edwards) Pathos perfected in these slow sad lines. Great work Michael.
  August 3rd, 2017 04:24
• gehenna burning (Heather T) Gifted beyond words your slant-eyed look at the world raises the bar...
  August 2nd, 2017 16:21