Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• First Love (FredPeyer) You capture the essence of a young first love with this beautiful verse...
  August 15th, 2017 06:04
• Sing a song of the Taj Mahal (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) \"Marbled dome\" and \"lover\'s shrine\" - you capture the essence of this...
  August 15th, 2017 04:29
• ESSENCE POEMS - A SEQUENCE (Michael Edwards) Interesting form which packs a loud into a two liner - - great work
  August 15th, 2017 02:12
• prey (Heather T) I need a cold shower my friend after breathlessly digesting this brilliant...
  August 14th, 2017 16:19
• My Friend (Edward Charles McDevitt) Filled with true friendship assurance this read will be sure to please...
  August 14th, 2017 13:17
• Clocks and Calendars (WriteBeLight) Inspired thinking in this appeal for more time with the one we love - -...
  August 14th, 2017 12:07
• Time to Leave (FredPeyer) An all too familiar pattern in this troubled society is seeing a female...
  August 14th, 2017 12:03
• I\'M A CARIBBEAN PIRATE ~ ENJOY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Me luves them sorts o\' pirates me does - -- good fun write Brian.
  August 14th, 2017 05:22
• red clay baptism (Heather T) Wow - - how enormous the effort and work on a farm such as this - just...
  August 13th, 2017 13:51
• red clay baptism (Heather T) Loud applause for this glorious peep into your family farm-home Heather -...
  August 13th, 2017 13:47
• Check Yourself Out (Edward Charles McDevitt) I refuse self-checkouts for the reasons you give Edward - a fine outcry...
  August 13th, 2017 13:39
• Simplicity Sentiments (Orchidee) A fine testimony to a living faith.
  August 13th, 2017 13:26
• Drained (Gina~) Your write clearly outlines the need for allowing time and chance to be...
  August 12th, 2017 17:17
• Living (FredPeyer) I agree with Antonio your work is a needed reminder that life is for...
  August 12th, 2017 17:08
• When Mother Natures Karma. (Kevin browne) Such a powerful write Kevin - riven with pictures of suffering humanity ...
  August 12th, 2017 17:04
• Parched Lips (Gary Edward Geraci) How wonderful to learn how pursed lips express deep emotion in the...
  August 12th, 2017 16:57
• Color all with Blackened (Simple-Man87) A powerful piece of work - dark but a wonderful read.
  August 11th, 2017 11:40
• IMAGINE (Louis Gibbs) We all overlap in many respects - -love the wit in your imaginings ...
  August 11th, 2017 10:56
• Crispy Wing Things (WriteBeLight) Love this yummy -fun write.
  August 11th, 2017 10:55
• Is It Worth It? (Edward Charles McDevitt) Your warm willing heart shines through these questioning lines my friend -...
  August 11th, 2017 10:53
• vines of eden (Heather T) Filled with poetic vocabulary these \"Vines of Eden\" pulsate with...
  August 9th, 2017 23:55
• GUARDIAN ANGELS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Angels certainly do exist and aid humans to find the spiritual fruits. A...
  August 9th, 2017 13:46
• IN SPITE OF (Louis Gibbs) Can relate to the courage shown by the courageous despite life-threatening...
  August 9th, 2017 13:44
• Dream Lunch (WriteBeLight) Am already packing my bags in the hope for that celebratory lunch dear ...
  August 9th, 2017 13:39
• Terrible Trustings (Orchidee) Thank you for another fine hymn-poem dear friend. Lovely harvest reminder...
  August 9th, 2017 13:36
• Thoughts (Malubotelho) Lovely thoughts here Malu and so timely in these troublesome days - keep...
  August 9th, 2017 13:33
• \"Emergency\" (Edward Charles McDevitt) Oh Edward this read moves me to the heart - a son\'s love for his mother...
  August 9th, 2017 13:29
• HER VOICE FELL SOFT (Michael Edwards) The gentle flow of this read engenders a quiet peace. Fine work Michael.
  August 9th, 2017 02:00
• Blue paradise (Malubotelho) Such an outstanding appeal in this verse Malu - the title itself is a...
  August 8th, 2017 11:53
• It\'s Not All About Me (Edward Charles McDevitt) Edward your writing phrases the many ways poets can express on the same...
  August 8th, 2017 08:48
• Making Love In The Heart Of God/ Absolute Auric Mantra (Whisperingquill) Love the imagery which begins this journey into ongoing life and all it...
  August 8th, 2017 08:41
• Vividly Versed (WriteBeLight) a fine tribute to those who write easily yet sometimes use rare wording...
  August 8th, 2017 08:38
• Deliverance Desirings (Orchidee) Fine spiritual write my friend.
  August 8th, 2017 08:34
• LOVE ~ AN ELUSIVE DREAM ? A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Perfect form and structure to your appealing rhyme Brian - best of all...
  August 8th, 2017 05:09
• The id, the ego and the super-ego (Aa Harvey) A thrill of a read to some fortunate lady and hoping your appeal will hit...
  August 8th, 2017 05:06
• Dreamers (Michael Edwards) So true that night skies can evoke much in lovers - - lovely brushwork...
  August 8th, 2017 04:16
• wild horses (Heather T) Gentle erotica slides from your pen like nectared silk in this piece of...
  August 7th, 2017 14:00
• A FEW COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) An intriguing trio of couplets here Michael - can relate to the middle...
  August 7th, 2017 02:45
• Who Needs Weeds? (WriteBeLight) This gave me a smile as I think I have their close relations in my garden...
  August 6th, 2017 14:34
• Inimitable Inauguration (Orchidee) Such a comfort to read these assurance dear friend - and so ancient the...
  August 6th, 2017 14:32
• I Wonder Why (Edward Charles McDevitt) Keep up you reading and commenting Ed. and your work will get plenty of...
  August 5th, 2017 13:59
• Happy Weekend (Edward Charles McDevitt) A lovely flow to this friendly acrostic - - inventive rhyming and good...
  August 5th, 2017 13:56
• TRISTAN & ISOLDE ~ A Tragic Love Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Deeply honoured for the dedication my friend - - the tragic tale of...
  August 5th, 2017 10:33
• Look Both Ways (WriteBeLight) Wise council and written in wonderful rhyme. You capture the feeling of...
  August 4th, 2017 12:52
• Cooling Comforts (Orchidee) A beautiful read dear friend.
  August 4th, 2017 12:50
• Incubating (Malubotelho) Writer\'s block laid out in so much good imagery -and with such feeling I...
  August 4th, 2017 12:49
• Tropical Rain (FredPeyer) Your poetic expressions of tropical rain are the best I have read - so...
  August 4th, 2017 05:19
• The Undarkened House. (Goldfinch60) Morning will never be dull or dark in your house my friend - can imagine...
  August 4th, 2017 05:00
• SIX TO TEN ~ NUMBERS GAME II ~ TANKAS ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - that wonderful number nine did it for me Brian - - love to...
  August 4th, 2017 04:57
• DROWNED IN SORROW (Michael Edwards) Wowers - - great imagery Michael -- have to read this one again.
  August 4th, 2017 02:15
• Cook (Tony36) cooking for friends is a real pleasure in life - - good that you feel...
  August 3rd, 2017 14:21
• Twenty four of darkness.... (P.H.Rose) Only an empathetic heart would go to these sightless lengths P.H. and...
  August 3rd, 2017 13:39
• Class Reunion (FredPeyer) I remember a class reunion in which I was hard put to tell who was who for...
  August 3rd, 2017 13:12
• NUMBERS GAME ~ FIVE RHYMING TANKAS (BRIAN & ANGELA) A style and form which demands so much writing experience Brian - - such a...
  August 3rd, 2017 13:08
• Sentiments It Found. (Kevin browne) Deeply felt this pearl Kevin - my favourite piece is contained in the...
  August 3rd, 2017 12:39
• A Hat For That (WriteBeLight) Ah - a first rate set of reasons why our poet-hat must be given space on...
  August 3rd, 2017 12:36
• THE SMILING DIED (Michael Edwards) Pathos perfected in these slow sad lines. Great work Michael.
  August 3rd, 2017 04:24
• gehenna burning (Heather T) Gifted beyond words your slant-eyed look at the world raises the bar...
  August 2nd, 2017 16:21
• Dark moon arrives.... (P.H.Rose) A temporary blindfold can be a valuable experiment and to think you see...
  August 2nd, 2017 13:59
• Blowing Bubbles (Tony36) Fresh and bubbly this fun at water\'s edge Tony.
  August 2nd, 2017 11:56
• Death (Malubotelho) Yes - \"death where is your sting\" says the holy word for light is what I...
  August 2nd, 2017 11:08
• WE ALL ARE CAPTIVES (Louis Gibbs) A truth wrapped in poetry - I agree with Michael a belter for sure - -...
  August 2nd, 2017 08:17
• Garden Glories (Orchidee) A fine array of reasons for daily praise - so many blessings in your...
  August 2nd, 2017 08:15
• 3 ONE LINERS (Michael Edwards) Love to bits number 2 which raised a big smile on reading. That third ...
  August 2nd, 2017 06:35
• Food Fight (WriteBeLight) Oooh I know how you feel cos I have his kith and kin in my own veggie...
  August 2nd, 2017 06:03
• Entwined Under an Aster Sky (Whisperingquill) Fantastic phrasing in this tribute to artful erotica Quil - - the power of...
  August 2nd, 2017 03:43
• Falling into the Night. (Goldfinch60) Lovely images of nightfall in this read - thanks for sharing your...
  August 2nd, 2017 03:39
• MY DOG ~ OLD SHEP (BRIAN & ANGELA) I remember the emotion the song evoked Brian - thanks for this reminder...
  August 2nd, 2017 03:31
• Guitars in the night (Aa Harvey) Fantasy takes dreamers to all sorts of exciting places as this fine...
  August 2nd, 2017 03:26
• linger (Heather T) Glad I did not miss this little gem - another piece of amazing word-usage...
  August 1st, 2017 22:36
• angel smoke (Heather T) Breath-taking poetry - your talent for word is second to none Heather.
  August 1st, 2017 22:26
• AUGUSTUS (Louis Gibbs) Augustus and his verses have been much missed and do hope this fine poem...
  August 1st, 2017 16:38
• Glory Greatness (Orchidee) Full of wonderful help for the spirit and thank you for sharing such...
  August 1st, 2017 12:45
• I Feel Better (WriteBeLight) Ah - just to look at that great baby smiling with gratefulness for a new...
  August 1st, 2017 12:44
• Memories revisited... (P.H.Rose) Your words describe the scene of many a loss in lots of streets and...
  August 1st, 2017 12:38
• On the Bus (FredPeyer) A picture painted so well here of many left now on their own and not...
  August 1st, 2017 02:09
• MY VALLEY ~ A 4442 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Quiet and virgin valleys are disappearing world-wide dear Brian - - thanks...
  August 1st, 2017 02:06
• THREE SENRYUS (Michael Edwards) These three beguiling Sens. make me want more Michael - good work.
  August 1st, 2017 02:01
• Forwards In Return. (Kevin browne) Yes Kevin time really falls fast and as this engaging piece of prose...
  July 31st, 2017 16:23
• The Outing (WriteBeLight) Only read the postings on this terrible abuse today - was speechless...
  July 31st, 2017 14:27
• foolish heart (Heather T) I am speechless with shock after reading your outing of this person dear...
  July 31st, 2017 13:50
• five candles (Heather T) No need for me to be giving you lessons dear Heather - this spontaneous...
  July 31st, 2017 13:24
• WORDS WRITTEN (Michael Edwards) Oh too true my friend. I lose lots of fragmented thoughts this way.
  July 31st, 2017 05:39
• Yin to my yang (Poetic Dan) A wonderful verse of assurance for some lucky lady - such a delight to...
  July 31st, 2017 05:36
• Secret Place (FredPeyer) A delectable description of the secret place we all need Fred - your pen...
  July 31st, 2017 05:34
• mortal (Heather T) First class writing Heather - metre and line length flow with potent...
  July 30th, 2017 16:45
• Without you (Private poet) The sudden loss of a loved one is always so challenging and your words in...
  July 30th, 2017 12:23
• LATE JULY (Michael Edwards) Your brush and pen fill both pictures with July\'s great bounty. A lovely...
  July 30th, 2017 04:11
• My grandson and his dog... (P.H.Rose) A Spontaneous smile held my heart as read through these lines - - love...
  July 29th, 2017 13:50
• Fear (FredPeyer) You capture so well the results of succumbing to fear Fred - - a terrible...
  July 29th, 2017 11:08
• SUMMER BEDDING IS NOT AN OPTION (Michael Edwards) This read would make any mouth water my friend - ha - provided they...
  July 29th, 2017 05:33
• Over the Hills and Far Away. (Goldfinch60) Some love and others cannot abide the sound of the bagpipes and you pen so...
  July 29th, 2017 05:31
• Our Rainforests (GeraldineTaylor) You lay out this cry in and for the green wilderness so well here...
  July 29th, 2017 05:22
• I am left speechless by her beauty (Aa Harvey) A read of true woe but so beautifully imaged with poetic metaphor - - such...
  July 29th, 2017 05:19
• L A B O R A T O R I E S ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Never realized as much about the diversity in labs. before Brian - - an...
  July 29th, 2017 05:12
• FINAL CURTAIN (Louis Gibbs) The ongoing saga of continuation wrapped in a poetic nutshell - love...
  July 28th, 2017 16:21
• My MPS friends (Christina8) You have been much missed dear Christina and so good to know you will soon...
  July 28th, 2017 16:12
• Orange Memory. (Goldfinch60) A charming flower and so special in your life G. that the verse glows...
  July 28th, 2017 05:14
• Kaleidoscope (FredPeyer) A great read as you opened that cardboard tube again to me to show how...
  July 28th, 2017 05:09
• My Maternal Grandparents, \"William and Dessie Ozmun\". (Edward Charles McDevitt) Your young and talented ability to tell in words the feelings for family...
  July 28th, 2017 05:03