Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm. at My poetic side

Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

WHAT MAKES THE BRITISH HAPPY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ha ha - - I love the wit in this first rate verse - - I think it would...
October 6th, 2017 11:06
Wisdom Ways (Orchidee) Amen to this prayerful appeal to One who knows how to live life...
October 6th, 2017 11:03
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2) (Michael Edwards) I love to read this one aloud Michael - top drawer writing and - -...
October 6th, 2017 01:44
Frolicking fun (Poetic Dan) Oh how alive both the verse and the video - could feel the flow and the...
October 5th, 2017 11:08
Once More Her Hero. (Goldfinch60) A smile in the read for me Goldie - so many have fears of such cobwebby ...
October 5th, 2017 02:59
I Want to Meet a Stranger (MALU) Ah this write gets to the heart of our emotional need at times Malu -...
October 5th, 2017 02:54
coffee train (Frank Prem) I echo those lovely coffee-toots Frank - yes please for me.
October 5th, 2017 02:52
DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1) (Michael Edwards) A classical piece with an extra- clever last line - super pencil-work...
October 5th, 2017 02:35
THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards) The wry humour struck me in the final three liner \"Binding chains...
October 5th, 2017 02:26
Comforting Considerations (Orchidee) Considering comfort through needed reminders that we are never alone - - a...
October 4th, 2017 10:40
AUTUMN HAIKU ~ For CHRISTINA (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine haiku tribute to the most colourful time of the year my friend -...
October 4th, 2017 10:38
Just an Organ? (Mugsdaddy) Loud applause for this wise advice in such a beautiful poem. Such a good...
October 4th, 2017 06:09
Growing Into Older Life. (Kevin browne) A thought provoking read Kevin - letting go and saying a last goodbye is...
October 3rd, 2017 13:47
PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ha ha - love the flow and rhyme in this fun read from you two clever...
October 3rd, 2017 13:42
Littlest of things (Poetic Dan) Little things have always meant a lot Dan - - love the chosen image too.
October 3rd, 2017 13:40
HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - you make ballooning so worth a try Brian - - the experience must be...
October 2nd, 2017 16:48
Wedding Day (Christina8) Thank you Christina for sharing not only your glorious day but the love...
October 2nd, 2017 16:39
Hiking the Urayoán Mountains (Rrodriguez) How your description of peace in those mountains rings through each line ...
October 2nd, 2017 16:35
Take my hand (Poetic Dan) Such a special read Dan - so pleased you have found the way to love the...
October 2nd, 2017 16:27
In Your Memory Dear Paternal Aunt (Pintu Mahakul) A heart-touching acrostic and very fine tribute dear Pintu - an aunt well...
October 2nd, 2017 16:21
Come Sleep, Oh Sleep (Rrodriguez) First rate writing in a tricky form too - reading through the whole piece...
October 1st, 2017 16:33
GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Full of faith and encouragement this inspiring read Brian - how we all...
October 1st, 2017 05:15
THE TEMPTRESS (Michael Edwards) Powerful subject and the triolet form with its repetition is an inspired...
October 1st, 2017 02:43
Clever or Wise. (Goldfinch60) Good advice Goldie - if we change ourselves all else around can alter to...
September 30th, 2017 05:15
SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Both the picture and words have that wonderful appeal that only you and...
September 30th, 2017 05:13
MULTITASKING (Michael Edwards) Oooooooh flack you surely invite with this blight on how and why females...
September 30th, 2017 02:26
Clipped Wings (Christina8) Such a difficult subject to write on and you do it with empathy despite...
September 29th, 2017 16:10
The Creature (Tony36) Good to see you back posting Tony and a scary creature you create d for...
September 29th, 2017 14:54
Love theatre 🎭 (Malubotelho) Your penned the scene so well I could see that love theatre too - -- a...
September 29th, 2017 11:06
TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Casual Sex did it for me Brian - - how can it ever be casual !! A clever...
September 28th, 2017 16:16
Sand Crabs (FredPeyer) Yes balance is the answer Fred - a good reminder in this enjoyable verse...
September 28th, 2017 01:33
Desolation (Ravenssongbird) You word desolation so poetically well -- welcome Raven to MPS.
September 28th, 2017 01:29
THE UNFOLDING FIASCO (Louis Gibbs) Enjoyed this read about our journey through life on earth - and the fiasco...
September 27th, 2017 06:57
My Mentor. (Goldfinch60) A tender tribute to a much loved Dad - - - a lovely read.
September 27th, 2017 06:54
101 (Poetic Dan) Fine admonition in these lined my friend. Letting go is the way to get...
September 27th, 2017 06:49
Make My Heart Sing (Christina8) A fine read Christina - Your experience of shedding the heavier baggage is...
September 27th, 2017 06:44
FUSIONS 2 (Michael Edwards) Sounds like the way I too like to finish a meal Michael. Love the rhyming...
September 27th, 2017 01:06
Repose of the long journey (Pintu Mahakul) Filled with faith and acceptance this poem shows ways of looking at ends...
September 26th, 2017 14:53
Dawns Piper (WL Schuett) Stunning painting and amazing writing - - loud applause for both of them ...
September 26th, 2017 14:49
Found my voice (Poetic Dan) An understanding of other wraps itself round every line and a Dad must...
September 26th, 2017 14:45
Thirsty 💉 (Malubotelho) Wow a vivid portrayal of desire at its fiercest - -such a good...
September 26th, 2017 14:42
Empathy (FredPeyer) Tenderness perfected in this lovely tribute to empathy Fred.
September 26th, 2017 05:02
Left For Dead. (Wallace) Oh such a sad piece though appealingly written. I admire the rhyming in...
September 26th, 2017 05:00
MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Music is surely a gift from above and you word it so well here Brian - ...
September 26th, 2017 04:58
FROM FUSIONS 1 (Michael Edwards) Love the imagery used in this autumnal re-post. Pleased you decided to...
September 26th, 2017 04:56
The Tandem of Love. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful first read of enduring love - love that last line - -...
September 26th, 2017 02:51
Adrenaline--Part 1 (Christina8) Oooooh - - another stunner of a last line to this poignantly written tale...
September 25th, 2017 07:18
DORCAS (Michael Edwards) A smile every few lines in reading this tale of a donkey called Dorcas - ...
September 24th, 2017 05:49
Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60) Good advice in this interesting read.
September 24th, 2017 05:45
Mind Games (FredPeyer) Something to think on in that last stanza my friend and very well...
September 24th, 2017 05:42
Storm (Dusk arising) Oh - what a compelling tale and what a surprise ending in that final line...
September 24th, 2017 05:40
FIRST LOVE (Michael Edwards) Tenderest words to describe the feeling of a first love Michael - ...
September 23rd, 2017 02:34
Just memories 📌 (Malubotelho) This read had me near tears dear friend - some of the expressions you...
September 22nd, 2017 11:41
Missing You (FredPeyer) This is always the way when sudden death takes our dearly beloved - your...
September 22nd, 2017 05:05
Seeing the World Differently (Goldfinch60) Very true Goldie - we need every one of these extraordinary people.
September 22nd, 2017 05:03
TEN OXYMORONS ~ Seriously Funny (BRIAN & ANGELA) Brilliant assessment of the ridiculous meanings of contradictory terms - ...
September 22nd, 2017 04:58
colours (Dusk arising) A poignant read which applies to everyone over a certain stage in life....
September 22nd, 2017 04:50
RING RING (Michael Edwards) Ha ha ha - -a brilliant last line to this rhymed account of a real life...
September 22nd, 2017 02:07
Blown Away (Seeker) Both form and content so sagacious in this arresting verse - that first...
September 21st, 2017 05:34
Prominent Prey (GeraldineTaylor) A compelling picture your words paint on the subject of predators...
September 21st, 2017 04:54
Goldie and Orchi at Hastings. (Goldfinch60) Can just imagine the play for attention at that battle of Hastings between...
September 21st, 2017 04:51
VENUS ~ MARS ~ SUN & MOON ~ Collaboration ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) An exciting swing on the subject of planetary intervention in love and its...
September 21st, 2017 04:48
Illusions and time (Poetic Dan) Good questions of where our inner senses begin and how - - I like too the...
September 21st, 2017 04:43
Taming of the Beast (Mugsdaddy) A power read with an amazing last line - a lead to follow from dark to...
September 21st, 2017 02:27
Inner debate (Malubotelho) Malu your gift for writing comes through each line in this verse to the...
September 20th, 2017 10:46
A Poem For All (Christina8) A beautiful tribute to all who here who care for others., May peace gift...
September 20th, 2017 08:56
Rainbow of Life. (Goldfinch60) Love that is long lasting and unafraid shines like the rainbow - - a...
September 19th, 2017 15:39
I Am Free (Christina8) Your warm heart shines through every line here Christina - - those final...
September 19th, 2017 14:40
Treasure Trove (Orchidee) Another spiritual gem to read an be inspired by - thank you my friend.
September 19th, 2017 13:41
A HARD LESSON (Louis Gibbs) Facing our demons is the way to freedom and as this verse admits this is...
September 19th, 2017 13:39
RICE PEAS \'N CHICK ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Proper Barbados twang in this yummy read Brian - sets my palette awork...
September 19th, 2017 04:06
Always know just enough (Poetic Dan) So sad that some minds come to confusion - a tender piece of caring ...
September 19th, 2017 04:04
THE BURGESS SHALE (Michael Edwards) Exciting abstract Michael and the three liners taught me yet another...
September 19th, 2017 03:18
Validation (Christina8) The harm a negligent parent can do to young minds - so sad this outpouring...
September 18th, 2017 14:52
The Gambler (FredPeyer) A poignant ending for the gambler who never touched cards Fred - a lesson...
September 18th, 2017 14:48
Love for love (Malubotelho) Perfecting thoughts for love to grow is such an inspiring part of this...
September 18th, 2017 14:45
LOVE IS ... ? A Collaboration Sonnet ~ CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Your collab struck all the right notes for me on the wonderful subject of...
September 18th, 2017 05:14
SHE MONSTICHS (Michael Edwards) I know a few who suffer the same affliction as those in the final line...
September 18th, 2017 03:30
LIMERICK 43 (Michael Edwards) I take my watch off if I know I am late - - naughty I know - - great...
September 17th, 2017 12:28
Life of love (Poetic Dan) Agree with Ron - once love gets inside it can wreak havoc but keep...
September 17th, 2017 12:24
Why? (FredPeyer) So so true Fred - -reminds me of what was reported that Christ said as...
September 17th, 2017 04:40
Live in the moment (Slcooper1973) What an inspiring read and thank you for sharing the special blessings of...
September 17th, 2017 04:37
HARVEST SUNDAY 2017 ~ ENJOY (BRIAN & ANGELA) A true and humble estimate of God\'s great goodness as harvest is gathered...
September 17th, 2017 03:09
tower (Dusk arising) A mighty find Saturday tale with a twist methinks in that minstrel\'s...
September 16th, 2017 11:10
Slave (FredPeyer) Agree with Martina - - where has that other side of you been hiding Fred...
September 16th, 2017 11:05
Embrace the remembering (Poetic Dan) A wonderful reminder of the time we were dual - -- the inspired phrase...
September 16th, 2017 10:58
The Morning Sky (Edward Charles McDevitt) Your words shared with us such stunning beauty of seeing the morning with...
September 16th, 2017 10:55
Harvest Humblings (Orchidee) A super verse of adoration for God\'s great gifts - - I agree too with...
September 16th, 2017 10:53
Hungry Ghosts (Goldfinch60) Good question -- love the reasoning in this one Goldie.
September 15th, 2017 13:55
FISHING AT NIGHT ~ A MIRROR POEM (BRIAN & ANGELA) Stunning form and clever rhyming - a treat of a mirror-read Brian my...
September 15th, 2017 13:54
Turtles on a log (WL Schuett) Turtles can teach us so much about resting to take in the day. Good read...
September 15th, 2017 13:52
A friend (Tony36) Great read Tony. Friends are so special they deserve this fine tribute.
September 15th, 2017 13:48
Today (Edward Charles McDevitt) A beautiful tribute to what friends can achieve and hoping the display on...
September 15th, 2017 13:41
Today (Edward Charles McDevitt) A beautiful tribute to what friends can achieve and hoping the display on...
September 15th, 2017 13:41
Follow Thy Elsewhere (Seek) Some outstanding rhyming in this exciting verse - - I love the final...
September 15th, 2017 09:27
Blessed (Christina8) A positive end to a challenging start in life Christina - The courage...
September 14th, 2017 11:04
The water and the rock (Malubotelho) A lovely thought that the rock and water exchange contact - the picture...
September 14th, 2017 11:00
THE ABSTRACT ARTIST (Michael Edwards) Children often show the way Michael and imagination is their forté - -...
September 14th, 2017 02:57
C O L L A B O R A T I O N S ~ An Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Cheers to both fabulous poets for your collabs - keep up the good work.
September 14th, 2017 02:53
Just Human (FredPeyer) Good read and helpful to many who find it hard to accept Self - yes ...
September 14th, 2017 02:51

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