Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Bliss (Christina8) A beautiful love poem to your other half dear Christina - hope when he...
  October 19th, 2017 08:46
• Poetic Mosaic Perfection. (Kevin browne) Such a moving read Kevin - you chose some beautiful phrasing - \" the...
  October 19th, 2017 05:45
• TRUE LOVE ~ A Villanelle (BRIAN & ANGELA) A perfect form for describing Love - - you write with such feeling...
  October 19th, 2017 05:42
• The Ones I\'ve Kissed (Rrodriguez) A fine ensemble of first kisses here Rrodriguez - a very apt Plath quote...
  October 18th, 2017 13:40
• BOTHER SUN & SISTER MOON ~ Tankas (BRIAN & ANGELA) Sun and Moon as kith and kin and brought to our eyes in tanka form too -...
  October 18th, 2017 12:43
• In The Still Of The Night (Ron parrish aka wordman) Every tender word shows your warm heart and love for a special person - a...
  October 17th, 2017 13:43
• THEY SAY (Louis Gibbs) All we can reasonably handle is the now and you have versed this so...
  October 16th, 2017 16:47
• Dancing to the Music. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful write and reminder that dancing to the music of life makes all...
  October 16th, 2017 16:45
• THE LOVE OF GOD (BRIAN & ANGELA) So so true those three little words mean all the world to human believers...
  October 16th, 2017 16:43
• Know your force (Poetic Dan) An apt piece of imagery brings the right feel to this verse on using our...
  October 16th, 2017 14:38
• Your Worth (Christina8) A glowing love letter to a special person who I hope loved every word. - ...
  October 16th, 2017 14:36
• stronghold (Heather T) Ooooh you have been missed dear clever wordsmith - this verse is amazingly...
  October 16th, 2017 06:44
• Rose Petals (Ron parrish aka wordman) A wonderfully romantic read Ron - the start of a lifetime of love...
  October 16th, 2017 02:06
• No body knows (Joseph M Marion) An admission of love which takes in all life on earth - your pen shows...
  October 15th, 2017 12:30
• THE POETRY OF JESUS ~ A Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A lovely and upbuilding read for today - thanks for the reminder of the...
  October 15th, 2017 05:10
• arthur and alice (Frank Prem) Love as perfectly written to catch readers\' attention and a tale to bring...
  October 15th, 2017 05:06
• All of the Above (FredPeyer) An absolutely lovely read Fred - this goes staightway into my favs. A...
  October 15th, 2017 05:03
• single male shopper (Frank Prem) Ha ha - could it have been you were peeking at someone\'s purchases Frank...
  October 14th, 2017 05:46
• Narrow Escape. (Goldfinch60) This raised a Saturday smile Goldi - glad you found eyes closed with that...
  October 14th, 2017 05:43
• Days like this (Poetic Dan) Love this break-down and build-up again of what most experience some time...
  October 14th, 2017 05:39
• Raising the Bar (FredPeyer) Ah - this explains in a few simple lines what brings us enlightenment Fred...
  October 14th, 2017 05:35
• OH MY ! POETIC SIDE ~ A 2 2 6 4 Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Great poem to inspire all writers - thanks dear Brian for your constant...
  October 14th, 2017 04:08
• My family is moving, again... (Rrodriguez) A mournful and most moving scene you paint of an area which could never...
  October 13th, 2017 16:14
• I don\'t believe what I believe (Poetic Dan) A compelling read Dan - we are certainly equipped to keep on trying to...
  October 13th, 2017 14:49
• COASTAL EROSION ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A warm welcome home to this lovely poetry site Brian my friend - a sad...
  October 13th, 2017 14:46
• Faded Flower (WL Schuett) Fantastic talent for brushwork and poetry - very poignant both picture...
  October 13th, 2017 10:42
• difficult departure (Frank Prem) You tell a mystery story so well here Frank - - I could taste that smoky...
  October 12th, 2017 10:33
• walk in the woods (Tony36) The last line of this verse made me sit up and think - finding lion tracks...
  October 11th, 2017 14:01
• These vary words i speak. (Joseph M Marion) Such an appealing read and so well expressed - the heart which feels...
  October 11th, 2017 13:58
• Halloween Will Soon Be Here (Christina8) Halloween soon comes around again Christina and your lovely imagery makes...
  October 11th, 2017 10:03
• White Lie (FredPeyer) A relationship build on a lie cannot be but ended - finished...
  October 11th, 2017 05:57
• Hill of Life. (Goldfinch60) A tribute to courage as taught from the cradle and put into a poem worthy...
  October 11th, 2017 05:52
• His and hers (Poetic Dan) A sad read which must have been painful to write Dan -- questions asked...
  October 10th, 2017 08:24
• Love of my life...........the beat goes on (Ray ray) A lovely message of future intent - well wishes to you and to your beloved...
  October 10th, 2017 08:17
• With You (Christina8) A beautiful confession of realized love Christina - - a lovely read.
  October 10th, 2017 08:12
• All seasons (Malubotelho) A lovely read Malu - - so tender and appealing.
  October 10th, 2017 08:10
• God\'s Sense of Humour. (Goldfinch60) A good reminder here Goldi - fun is the gift which we often forget.
  October 9th, 2017 05:24
• The love can never change (David) The truth of love is expressed so eloquently in this poignant read David...
  October 9th, 2017 05:23
• Last Row (FredPeyer) Fred this so aptly describes someone I knew - beauty of that sort can...
  October 8th, 2017 04:50
• A GENTLE LAND (Michael Edwards) Loud applause for this gorgeous form used to portray gentle peace with...
  October 8th, 2017 02:42
• KIPPERED (Michael Edwards) B-Bmmmmm - - poor little kipper already smoked and ready methinks - - love...
  October 7th, 2017 11:38
• Perpetual Presence (Orchidee) a lovely prayerful read Steve - thanks for sharing the comfort such...
  October 7th, 2017 10:22
• On Line Love (Mugsdaddy) Love this admission of good on-line love - - a beautiful read.
  October 7th, 2017 10:20
• perfect time (Frank Prem) Dogs in the grasp of making music can teach us all much Frank - join \'em...
  October 7th, 2017 08:45
• Is Opera For Me? (Goldfinch60) I have to agree with Michael here - opera has ever been fighting to get...
  October 7th, 2017 08:41
• Missed (FredPeyer) Ooooh now this I can relate to Fred - - a missed train stands for so much...
  October 7th, 2017 08:38
• Consequences are free (Poetic Dan) Haha ha Dan - - what a surprise at the end of this intriguing write. Had...
  October 7th, 2017 08:30
• MAKE ME MORE LIKE AN APPLE TREE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) What a charming comparison you make here Brian - being likened to a tree...
  October 7th, 2017 08:23
• tide (Dusk arising) So vividly portrayed the change autumn brings to both tide and shore - ...
  October 6th, 2017 11:18
• PTSD (Christina8) Such a tragic disease is that called theses days as PTSD when from...
  October 6th, 2017 11:09
• WHAT MAKES THE BRITISH HAPPY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ha ha - - I love the wit in this first rate verse - - I think it would...
  October 6th, 2017 11:06
• Wisdom Ways (Orchidee) Amen to this prayerful appeal to One who knows how to live life...
  October 6th, 2017 11:03
• DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (2) (Michael Edwards) I love to read this one aloud Michael - top drawer writing and - -...
  October 6th, 2017 01:44
• Frolicking fun (Poetic Dan) Oh how alive both the verse and the video - could feel the flow and the...
  October 5th, 2017 11:08
• Once More Her Hero. (Goldfinch60) A smile in the read for me Goldie - so many have fears of such cobwebby ...
  October 5th, 2017 02:59
• I Want to Meet a Stranger (MALU) Ah this write gets to the heart of our emotional need at times Malu -...
  October 5th, 2017 02:54
• coffee train (Frank Prem) I echo those lovely coffee-toots Frank - yes please for me.
  October 5th, 2017 02:52
• DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1) (Michael Edwards) A classical piece with an extra- clever last line - super pencil-work...
  October 5th, 2017 02:35
• THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards) The wry humour struck me in the final three liner \"Binding chains...
  October 5th, 2017 02:26
• Comforting Considerations (Orchidee) Considering comfort through needed reminders that we are never alone - - a...
  October 4th, 2017 10:40
• AUTUMN HAIKU ~ For CHRISTINA (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine haiku tribute to the most colourful time of the year my friend -...
  October 4th, 2017 10:38
• Just an Organ? (Mugsdaddy) Loud applause for this wise advice in such a beautiful poem. Such a good...
  October 4th, 2017 06:09
• Growing Into Older Life. (Kevin browne) A thought provoking read Kevin - letting go and saying a last goodbye is...
  October 3rd, 2017 13:47
• PURRRFECT PETS ~ PERFECT COLLABORATION CHRISTINA & BRIAN (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ha ha - love the flow and rhyme in this fun read from you two clever...
  October 3rd, 2017 13:42
• Littlest of things (Poetic Dan) Little things have always meant a lot Dan - - love the chosen image too.
  October 3rd, 2017 13:40
• HOT AIR BALLOONS ~ A Rhyming Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - you make ballooning so worth a try Brian - - the experience must be...
  October 2nd, 2017 16:48
• Wedding Day (Christina8) Thank you Christina for sharing not only your glorious day but the love...
  October 2nd, 2017 16:39
• Hiking the Urayoán Mountains (Rrodriguez) How your description of peace in those mountains rings through each line ...
  October 2nd, 2017 16:35
• Take my hand (Poetic Dan) Such a special read Dan - so pleased you have found the way to love the...
  October 2nd, 2017 16:27
• In Your Memory Dear Paternal Aunt (Pintu Mahakul) A heart-touching acrostic and very fine tribute dear Pintu - an aunt well...
  October 2nd, 2017 16:21
• Come Sleep, Oh Sleep (Rrodriguez) First rate writing in a tricky form too - reading through the whole piece...
  October 1st, 2017 16:33
• GOD LIFTS ME UP ~ AMEN ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Full of faith and encouragement this inspiring read Brian - how we all...
  October 1st, 2017 05:15
• THE TEMPTRESS (Michael Edwards) Powerful subject and the triolet form with its repetition is an inspired...
  October 1st, 2017 02:43
• Clever or Wise. (Goldfinch60) Good advice Goldie - if we change ourselves all else around can alter to...
  September 30th, 2017 05:15
• SWEET ERATO IS MY MUSE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Both the picture and words have that wonderful appeal that only you and...
  September 30th, 2017 05:13
• MULTITASKING (Michael Edwards) Oooooooh flack you surely invite with this blight on how and why females...
  September 30th, 2017 02:26
• Clipped Wings (Christina8) Such a difficult subject to write on and you do it with empathy despite...
  September 29th, 2017 16:10
• The Creature (Tony36) Good to see you back posting Tony and a scary creature you create d for...
  September 29th, 2017 14:54
• Love theatre 🎭 (Malubotelho) Your penned the scene so well I could see that love theatre too - -- a...
  September 29th, 2017 11:06
• TEN OXYMORONS ~ ON LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Casual Sex did it for me Brian - - how can it ever be casual !! A clever...
  September 28th, 2017 16:16
• Sand Crabs (FredPeyer) Yes balance is the answer Fred - a good reminder in this enjoyable verse...
  September 28th, 2017 01:33
• Desolation (Ravenssongbird) You word desolation so poetically well -- welcome Raven to MPS.
  September 28th, 2017 01:29
• THE UNFOLDING FIASCO (Louis Gibbs) Enjoyed this read about our journey through life on earth - and the fiasco...
  September 27th, 2017 06:57
• My Mentor. (Goldfinch60) A tender tribute to a much loved Dad - - - a lovely read.
  September 27th, 2017 06:54
• 101 (Poetic Dan) Fine admonition in these lined my friend. Letting go is the way to get...
  September 27th, 2017 06:49
• Make My Heart Sing (Christina8) A fine read Christina - Your experience of shedding the heavier baggage is...
  September 27th, 2017 06:44
• FUSIONS 2 (Michael Edwards) Sounds like the way I too like to finish a meal Michael. Love the rhyming...
  September 27th, 2017 01:06
• Repose of the long journey (Pintu Mahakul) Filled with faith and acceptance this poem shows ways of looking at ends...
  September 26th, 2017 14:53
• Dawns Piper (WL Schuett) Stunning painting and amazing writing - - loud applause for both of them ...
  September 26th, 2017 14:49
• Found my voice (Poetic Dan) An understanding of other wraps itself round every line and a Dad must...
  September 26th, 2017 14:45
• Thirsty 💉 (Malubotelho) Wow a vivid portrayal of desire at its fiercest - -such a good...
  September 26th, 2017 14:42
• Empathy (FredPeyer) Tenderness perfected in this lovely tribute to empathy Fred.
  September 26th, 2017 05:02
• Left For Dead. (Wallace) Oh such a sad piece though appealingly written. I admire the rhyming in...
  September 26th, 2017 05:00
• MUSIC ~ FOR A WHILE ..........? (BRIAN & ANGELA) Music is surely a gift from above and you word it so well here Brian - ...
  September 26th, 2017 04:58
• FROM FUSIONS 1 (Michael Edwards) Love the imagery used in this autumnal re-post. Pleased you decided to...
  September 26th, 2017 04:56
• The Tandem of Love. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful first read of enduring love - love that last line - -...
  September 26th, 2017 02:51
• Adrenaline--Part 1 (Christina8) Oooooh - - another stunner of a last line to this poignantly written tale...
  September 25th, 2017 07:18
• DORCAS (Michael Edwards) A smile every few lines in reading this tale of a donkey called Dorcas - ...
  September 24th, 2017 05:49
• Beauty Revealed. (Goldfinch60) Good advice in this interesting read.
  September 24th, 2017 05:45
• Mind Games (FredPeyer) Something to think on in that last stanza my friend and very well...
  September 24th, 2017 05:42