Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Music (Lost-but-not-broken17)
A lilting piece to the blessings of music - and I agree without it we...
February 23rd, 2017 10:24 - Sweet Love (Notapoet)
A soothing read of lyrical tribute to love.
February 23rd, 2017 09:39 - I Could But Won\'t (WriteBeLight)
A good flow to this rant against the vagaries of others.
February 23rd, 2017 07:00 - MEMORIES (Michael Edwards)
The slow pace of line makes such a peaceful flow to this read Michael -...
February 22nd, 2017 05:18 - Accepted (Tony36)
A powerful message in these few words.
February 21st, 2017 13:56 - Sheen (Augustus)
Stunning imagination and wonderful internal rhyming make this dire...
February 21st, 2017 13:55 - GLOBAL WARMINGS & WARNINGS ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Fantastic sonnet on a topical subject Brian - - acrostic and coloured the...
February 21st, 2017 06:21 - PLUNDER (Michael Edwards)
Rich with poetic eloquence the verse epitomizes heedless uprooting of much...
February 20th, 2017 03:29 - The Tree we all are. (ABreathOrSigh)
Such a thought provoking few lines - - I love the appeal of that final...
February 19th, 2017 17:26 - Once The Present Has Died (Kurt Philip Behm)
The power in some of these lines is palpable -- thanks for outlining what...
February 18th, 2017 14:12 - Freedom Phrases (WriteBeLight)
Agree most wholeheartedly with these expressive lines - - a gifted...
February 17th, 2017 09:20 - Farm life (Tony36)
An exciting life on any farm by the sound of those differing animals Tony ...
February 17th, 2017 09:16 - Ballad to a Journey (Elizabethan Sea)
You describe a move across miles with all its challenges so well here - -...
February 16th, 2017 15:40 - To Have And Let Go (WriteBeLight)
So inspiring this telling poem - -moving on is ever a challenge.
February 16th, 2017 14:30 - Words I\'d Like To Say (Caroline Lowry)
Such a loving tribute to a well loved and much missed father - a moving...
February 16th, 2017 14:27 - Cyberfriends (Classicmister)
A fine build up to the scene of two sharing cyber-space- - no need of...
February 16th, 2017 14:24 - Lauren...Are You Waking? (John Snowdon)
Enjoyed the build to a scene of love fulfilled - love the flow from the...
February 16th, 2017 14:21 - The Verse Unknown (Kurt Philip Behm)
A fine collection of interesting poetry - - always a treat to read good...
February 16th, 2017 14:19 - The desert road (Aa Harvey)
A most interesting road filled with romantic wishes. A expressive piece...
February 16th, 2017 06:25 - Through the Looking Glass (AJ)
An engaging verse of well written reflection and questions we all think of...
February 16th, 2017 06:24 - SAINT VALENTINE ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Such an interesting read on why Valentine\'s day is celebrated with love...
February 13th, 2017 08:43 - By the River (Classicmister)
Ah - a first rate set of rhyming couplets with natural flow - - an...
February 12th, 2017 17:22 - Six Months On (Caroline Lowry)
Such a heart-rending verse Caroline - a beautiful tribute to a much...
February 12th, 2017 17:15 - LOVED WITH EVERLASTING LOVE ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A picture of great truth heads these inspiring lines which need to be...
February 12th, 2017 12:41 - Tree At My Backyard (Rrodriguez)
A positive and faith-filled outlook to end this introspective time of...
February 12th, 2017 12:21 - Piel Canela (Augustus)
A short-line sensation of romantic intrigue - great read.
February 12th, 2017 12:14 - My Path Unbroken (Kurt Philip Behm)
A fulfilling read is this trio of lyrical, swift flowing rhyme - great...
February 12th, 2017 12:12 - The Other Side of Hope (Vvnrose)
Very inspiring read and love the wonderful choice of picture.
February 11th, 2017 17:21 - My Special Valentine (Iamwoman)
A beautiful Valentine love poem. Delightful read.
February 11th, 2017 14:29 - spirit blows dark clouds away (Avigail)
Such an uplifting read - - spirit certainly does recharge our batteries.
February 11th, 2017 10:11 - The Telling (Augustus)
Keep holding close that \"abundance of love\" my friend \"caring hands\"...
February 10th, 2017 12:44 - Our First Kiss (Christina K)
Who could forget that first well described moment which came with a kiss....
February 5th, 2017 17:05 - Positive Vibes (Reese Marie)
Good recipe Reese for creating inner peace - an inspiring read.
February 5th, 2017 17:03 - RELEASE (Michael Edwards)
Love the lyrical flow of the poetry with a masterly picture to colour the...
February 4th, 2017 09:48 - Victory (Reese Marie)
Welcome to this friendly site Reese and keep that ink flowing. - - A very...
February 3rd, 2017 14:04 - Pension Day at the Post Office (Jenny1959)
A well written story of two different viewpoints but I vote for Tommy for...
February 3rd, 2017 14:01 - THE ORCHARD BY NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Wonderful - - both picture and words. Another gem Michael.
February 3rd, 2017 06:15 - SHE DREAMS (Michael Edwards)
Am so pleased to have caught these two little gems - a wonderful start...
January 31st, 2017 03:18 - Fare Thee Well (Augustus)
Sending every best wish for your speedy return from hospital stay my...
January 30th, 2017 13:43 - Ready. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you dear friends for your commendable comments - all truly ...
January 30th, 2017 10:19 - P O L A R B E A R S ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Wishing with you Brian that this tragic change in Arctic conditions for...
January 30th, 2017 05:29 - The silence (Kevin Clark)
An expressive verse on a much needed subject - I agree silence is vital...
January 30th, 2017 04:36 - The Owl and The Evergreen (Elizabeth Eyres)
A beautiful read full of wonderful rhyming - - I love the personalized...
January 29th, 2017 17:11 - HARLEM BLUES (RAJ NANDY)
The story surrounding a love of the blues weaves around both the subject...
January 29th, 2017 17:06 - Beyond The Nearest Star (Kurt Philip Behm)
Romance oozes from these short lines and the call to re-waken to love has...
January 29th, 2017 15:04 - Hours of Poetry (Augustus)
The very best way to spend free time is to write poetry - agreed my friend...
January 29th, 2017 10:32 - Where do the hearts go? (Marie Braden)
Hearts can change A potent question in this flowing poem Marie - I love...
January 28th, 2017 14:56 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah - - many thanks dear Jane - your comment came so quickly after the...
January 28th, 2017 11:18 - Missing You Missing You (Pintu Mahakul)
The state of missing a loved leader is held in these interesting lines...
January 28th, 2017 05:56 - My Beautiful Dove (Rrodriguez)
Read slowly this poem with its symbol of a beautiful dove shows great...
January 28th, 2017 00:50 - Happy Birthday Fay Madam (Pintu Mahakul)
I am truly honoured dear friend to be the recipient of your kind birthday...
January 28th, 2017 00:39 - Beautiful things (Aals)
A lovely feel to this read which explains beauty in so many ways. Thank...
January 27th, 2017 17:12 - To Gary (Augustus)
Life-changing times well versed in this insightful look at two friends in...
January 27th, 2017 17:09 - Snow Day For My Sole and Spirit (WriteBeLight)
Ha - - a stunning fun-write - - made my morning.
January 27th, 2017 06:54 - HALF FULL OR HALF EMPTY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A sound piece of advice wrapped up in a linguistic parcel of humour -- a...
January 27th, 2017 04:41 - In Remembrance of My Lost Angel (Carl Halling)
The sadness wrapped in the words touches the heart Carl - - loss of this...
January 27th, 2017 04:03 - THE VICTIM (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for picture and words - - your verse bring tears to the eyes...
January 27th, 2017 04:00 - My Father\'s Tears (Edthepoet)
A poignantly nostalgic read which tugs the heartstrings. Your words open...
January 27th, 2017 03:58 - AND STILL THE CANDLE BURNED (Michael Edwards)
Michael your talent for image and word never fail - a truly delightful...
January 26th, 2017 07:13 - ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - - now this is so clever and the read makes good sense - - your ...
January 26th, 2017 07:11 - Out of Sync (Quemis)
Love the strong flow of this piece - good imagery too. Well done.
January 26th, 2017 07:02 - MOVEMENT (Illia)
Keep going forward with a bold smile - that\'s the best way - - an...
January 25th, 2017 14:36 - First Annual (Phoenix8523)
A heart-wrenching read Phoenix - - regret visits us all at times - you...
January 25th, 2017 14:34 - THE HEALING POWER OF POETRY - by Raj Nandy (RAJ NANDY)
Your illuminating words on the meaning and historic use of poetry shows...
January 25th, 2017 14:31 - las nubes saben (Janetaylor)
An astoudingly beautiful picture dear Jane and I am sure the poem in...
January 25th, 2017 13:03 - Out on a limb / On a Whim (Augustus)
Such clever metaphors friend - a truly illuminating read.
January 25th, 2017 12:56 - Young (Olverasama)
Welcome to MPS Olvera - your poem of how life can be looked at makes...
January 25th, 2017 06:27 - When I Write (Lovett4166)
An engaging read and one to which I too relate. Thank you for sharing.
January 25th, 2017 06:23 - THE LAMENT OF A NON-BELIEVER (Michael Edwards)
Oh - I love the watercolour Michael and as for the poetic confession ...
January 25th, 2017 06:21 - The Last Embrace (Meggie Gultiano)
A very warm welcome dear Meggie to this friendly site - your tribute to...
January 25th, 2017 06:01 - LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh what a dream-land.Sounds a place to put on my visit-list for when my...
January 25th, 2017 05:56 - returning west (Janetaylor)
The depth your poem reaches through fabulous imagery touches the essence...
January 23rd, 2017 09:50 - I am (Briancawhite)
A fine first posting on this friendly site Brianca and welcome to MPS - -...
January 22nd, 2017 05:11 - R I G H T E O U S N E S S EXALTS A NATION ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Spiritual values win out every time Brian - - a wonderful encouragement to...
January 22nd, 2017 05:08 - Heart of Gold (Christina8)
What a loving tribute to a wonderful lady - - your pride to have known...
January 21st, 2017 17:57 - Have Strength (Iamwoman)
A powerful and inspiring verse - - a delight to read.
January 21st, 2017 17:51 - No greater (Efthimios William Cornelius)
A well-crafted comforting letter of love - - a heart-touching read.
January 21st, 2017 17:45 - ESTUARY (Michael Edwards)
Michael your artistic pen and exciting painting perfectly capture the...
January 21st, 2017 03:07 - IDYLL (Michael Edwards)
Both picture and verse show fervour for clarity\'s detailed minutia with ...
January 20th, 2017 17:15 - The Science Of Bad Habits (WriteBeLight)
Reading this raised a big smile as thinking I too prefer to go barefoot in...
January 20th, 2017 14:38 - Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.)
So pleased you enjoyed the poem dear friends - - and thank you for your...
January 20th, 2017 14:21 - Never Again. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you Brian - nature gives us so much material for poetry and I...
January 19th, 2017 05:46 - Doubt (P.H.Rose)
Ah - this is truly showing Doubt the door for it can effect all writers...
January 19th, 2017 04:33 - Appreciwaite (Robclint8586)
Beautiful format and wonderfully romantic this appealing verse. Welcome to...
January 19th, 2017 04:28 - Moonlight (Mel1349)
Ah - I love the comparison of sunlight to moonlight in this tender...
January 19th, 2017 04:06 - Us (Whoweare)
What an enchanting love poem with a tender last line. Welcome to MPS and...
January 19th, 2017 04:01 - The Sum Of Three (WriteBeLight)
The victims of world disorder are listed so carefully in your verse and ...
January 18th, 2017 13:57 - Bully (Tony36)
The average bully would cringe when hearing this read my friend....
January 18th, 2017 13:51 - Eye of The Beholder (Augustus)
Strong points made in this verse re. the demise of all for nothing alive...
January 18th, 2017 13:47 - A Work In Progress (Garryd85)
Keeping faith although a challenge is all it takes - - - a great first...
January 18th, 2017 11:08 - deluged in epiphany (Janetaylor)
Nowhere like nature to bring us to heel Jane - the poem so cleverly lined...
January 18th, 2017 11:04 - Leave not the robin in the road (Reivax Camlost)
Enjoyed the archaic form and strong message in this short fable - the...
January 18th, 2017 00:23 - I\'m Falling In Love With You (Jarid)
An honest confession of love portrayed in this tender romantic verse - ...
January 18th, 2017 00:17 - Silence (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Good flow to this verse which echoes the image and number you chose ...
January 18th, 2017 00:14 - My Mind is My Poetic Side (Pintu Mahakul)
Clever title and lovely poem dear Pintu - a warm welcome to this friendly...
January 17th, 2017 13:09 - Asleep In Your Arms (Sefrin)
Riddles with loss yet filled with beautiful love this lament shows just...
January 17th, 2017 09:48 - A Stolen Heart (Sefrin)
Yes - your words ask why when love is so fragile the end should come as...
January 17th, 2017 09:45 - Immortal Love (Sefrin)
Some wonderful lines of comfort to remember here for those who have loved...
January 17th, 2017 09:40 - I have seen it all (Aa Harvey)
Apt question to end this gentle appeal - - good read.
January 16th, 2017 10:04 - Her guardian (Ks24)
A finely expressed appeal in this positive verse. Welcome to this friendly...
January 16th, 2017 10:02
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