Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- Beautiful things (Aals)
A lovely feel to this read which explains beauty in so many ways. Thank...
January 27th, 2017 17:12 - To Gary (Augustus)
Life-changing times well versed in this insightful look at two friends in...
January 27th, 2017 17:09 - Snow Day For My Sole and Spirit (WriteBeLight)
Ha - - a stunning fun-write - - made my morning.
January 27th, 2017 06:54 - HALF FULL OR HALF EMPTY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA)
A sound piece of advice wrapped up in a linguistic parcel of humour -- a...
January 27th, 2017 04:41 - In Remembrance of My Lost Angel (Carl Halling)
The sadness wrapped in the words touches the heart Carl - - loss of this...
January 27th, 2017 04:03 - THE VICTIM (Michael Edwards)
Loud applause for picture and words - - your verse bring tears to the eyes...
January 27th, 2017 04:00 - My Father\'s Tears (Edthepoet)
A poignantly nostalgic read which tugs the heartstrings. Your words open...
January 27th, 2017 03:58 - AND STILL THE CANDLE BURNED (Michael Edwards)
Michael your talent for image and word never fail - a truly delightful...
January 26th, 2017 07:13 - ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME ! (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Ah - - now this is so clever and the read makes good sense - - your ...
January 26th, 2017 07:11 - Out of Sync (Quemis)
Love the strong flow of this piece - good imagery too. Well done.
January 26th, 2017 07:02 - MOVEMENT (Illia)
Keep going forward with a bold smile - that\'s the best way - - an...
January 25th, 2017 14:36 - First Annual (Phoenix8523)
A heart-wrenching read Phoenix - - regret visits us all at times - you...
January 25th, 2017 14:34 - THE HEALING POWER OF POETRY - by Raj Nandy (RAJ NANDY)
Your illuminating words on the meaning and historic use of poetry shows...
January 25th, 2017 14:31 - las nubes saben (Janetaylor)
An astoudingly beautiful picture dear Jane and I am sure the poem in...
January 25th, 2017 13:03 - Out on a limb / On a Whim (Augustus)
Such clever metaphors friend - a truly illuminating read.
January 25th, 2017 12:56 - Young (Olverasama)
Welcome to MPS Olvera - your poem of how life can be looked at makes...
January 25th, 2017 06:27 - When I Write (Lovett4166)
An engaging read and one to which I too relate. Thank you for sharing.
January 25th, 2017 06:23 - THE LAMENT OF A NON-BELIEVER (Michael Edwards)
Oh - I love the watercolour Michael and as for the poetic confession ...
January 25th, 2017 06:21 - The Last Embrace (Meggie Gultiano)
A very warm welcome dear Meggie to this friendly site - your tribute to...
January 25th, 2017 06:01 - LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Oh what a dream-land.Sounds a place to put on my visit-list for when my...
January 25th, 2017 05:56 - returning west (Janetaylor)
The depth your poem reaches through fabulous imagery touches the essence...
January 23rd, 2017 09:50 - I am (Briancawhite)
A fine first posting on this friendly site Brianca and welcome to MPS - -...
January 22nd, 2017 05:11 - R I G H T E O U S N E S S EXALTS A NATION ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Spiritual values win out every time Brian - - a wonderful encouragement to...
January 22nd, 2017 05:08 - Heart of Gold (Christina8)
What a loving tribute to a wonderful lady - - your pride to have known...
January 21st, 2017 17:57 - Have Strength (Iamwoman)
A powerful and inspiring verse - - a delight to read.
January 21st, 2017 17:51 - ESTUARY (Michael Edwards)
Michael your artistic pen and exciting painting perfectly capture the...
January 21st, 2017 03:07 - IDYLL (Michael Edwards)
Both picture and verse show fervour for clarity\'s detailed minutia with ...
January 20th, 2017 17:15 - The Science Of Bad Habits (WriteBeLight)
Reading this raised a big smile as thinking I too prefer to go barefoot in...
January 20th, 2017 14:38 - Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.)
So pleased you enjoyed the poem dear friends - - and thank you for your...
January 20th, 2017 14:21 - Never Again. (Fay Slimm.)
Thank you Brian - nature gives us so much material for poetry and I...
January 19th, 2017 05:46 - Doubt (P.H.Rose)
Ah - this is truly showing Doubt the door for it can effect all writers...
January 19th, 2017 04:33 - Appreciwaite (Robclint8586)
Beautiful format and wonderfully romantic this appealing verse. Welcome to...
January 19th, 2017 04:28 - Moonlight (Mel1349)
Ah - I love the comparison of sunlight to moonlight in this tender...
January 19th, 2017 04:06 - Us (Whoweare)
What an enchanting love poem with a tender last line. Welcome to MPS and...
January 19th, 2017 04:01 - The Sum Of Three (WriteBeLight)
The victims of world disorder are listed so carefully in your verse and ...
January 18th, 2017 13:57 - Bully (Tony36)
The average bully would cringe when hearing this read my friend....
January 18th, 2017 13:51 - Eye of The Beholder (Augustus)
Strong points made in this verse re. the demise of all for nothing alive...
January 18th, 2017 13:47 - A Work In Progress (Garryd85)
Keeping faith although a challenge is all it takes - - - a great first...
January 18th, 2017 11:08 - deluged in epiphany (Janetaylor)
Nowhere like nature to bring us to heel Jane - the poem so cleverly lined...
January 18th, 2017 11:04 - Leave not the robin in the road (Reivax Camlost)
Enjoyed the archaic form and strong message in this short fable - the...
January 18th, 2017 00:23 - I\'m Falling In Love With You (Jarid)
An honest confession of love portrayed in this tender romantic verse - ...
January 18th, 2017 00:17 - Silence (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Good flow to this verse which echoes the image and number you chose ...
January 18th, 2017 00:14 - My Mind is My Poetic Side (Pintu Mahakul)
Clever title and lovely poem dear Pintu - a warm welcome to this friendly...
January 17th, 2017 13:09 - Asleep In Your Arms (Sefrin)
Riddles with loss yet filled with beautiful love this lament shows just...
January 17th, 2017 09:48 - A Stolen Heart (Sefrin)
Yes - your words ask why when love is so fragile the end should come as...
January 17th, 2017 09:45 - Immortal Love (Sefrin)
Some wonderful lines of comfort to remember here for those who have loved...
January 17th, 2017 09:40 - I have seen it all (Aa Harvey)
Apt question to end this gentle appeal - - good read.
January 16th, 2017 10:04 - Her guardian (Ks24)
A finely expressed appeal in this positive verse. Welcome to this friendly...
January 16th, 2017 10:02 - Cart (Tony36)
Much to think on in this metaphor Tony - good read.
January 16th, 2017 09:59 - Booze Hound (WriteBeLight)
Oh - love both the fun-poem and image to match. The booze-hound I take...
January 16th, 2017 09:58 - Cold turkey (Anthony woodard)
A powerful lament on lost love - such a moving read Anthony.
January 16th, 2017 06:57 - The Wings Of Your World. (Kevin browne)
An exciting and mystical free-style verse Kevin - from the title onwards...
January 16th, 2017 04:57 - Be Brave despite the storm... (P.H.Rose)
I admire the account of dangers at sea - it often needs bravery on the...
January 16th, 2017 04:48 - ALONE (Michael Edwards)
Stunningly good painting and words of aloneness which read slowly evoke...
January 16th, 2017 04:39 - Faceless Child (NB)
This read wrings the heart - a powerful write and so well crafted.
January 16th, 2017 04:34 - The smallest hours (Anthony woodard)
I love the flow and rhyme in this tribute to introspection in the...
January 15th, 2017 10:29 - Camp (Tony36)
Oooh I love camping and fires and nightime skies. Great read
January 15th, 2017 10:27 - December Sky (Fay Slimm.)
Thanks Brian - as you say Nature has an unending supply of subject matter...
January 15th, 2017 10:25 - POEM FOR SUNDAY ~ GOD IS OUR STRENGTH ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
An inspiring read my friend - to be an influence for good should be our...
January 15th, 2017 06:47 - Pen Paper and Agoraphobia (Andrew Charles Forrest)
A question we all at times ask brings to a finalé this short lament. an...
January 15th, 2017 03:41 - A Single Tear (Ron parrish aka wordman)
Picture and song add to the pathos of this lonely lament. An appealing...
January 15th, 2017 03:38 - Moonflowers and daisies (S.L Appleby)
These honest reflections highlight the need to allow life \'s happenings...
January 14th, 2017 17:30 - Fine By Me (AliMay)
Romantic appeal with an honest overview of what means what to a...
January 14th, 2017 17:25 - The Laugh (Augustus)
A description of terror known well today by many - a scary but powerful...
January 13th, 2017 17:14 - Love--(Senryu) (Christina8)
Beautiful love such as this poem verses so well just has to be a forever...
January 13th, 2017 14:56 - What Could Have Been (Phoenix8523)
I love all these refreshing \"what ifs\" - thinking at life slanty-eyed...
January 13th, 2017 13:03 - Struggling at the Crossroads (Phoenix8523)
A read filled with anguish of choice which crossroads image so well yet...
January 13th, 2017 12:40
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