Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Beautiful things (Aals) A lovely feel to this read which explains beauty in so many ways. Thank...
  January 27th, 2017 17:12
• To Gary (Augustus) Life-changing times well versed in this insightful look at two friends in...
  January 27th, 2017 17:09
• Snow Day For My Sole and Spirit (WriteBeLight) Ha - - a stunning fun-write - - made my morning.
  January 27th, 2017 06:54
• HALF FULL OR HALF EMPTY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) A sound piece of advice wrapped up in a linguistic parcel of humour -- a...
  January 27th, 2017 04:41
• In Remembrance of My Lost Angel (Carl Halling) The sadness wrapped in the words touches the heart Carl - - loss of this...
  January 27th, 2017 04:03
• THE VICTIM (Michael Edwards) Loud applause for picture and words - - your verse bring tears to the eyes...
  January 27th, 2017 04:00
• My Father\'s Tears (Edthepoet) A poignantly nostalgic read which tugs the heartstrings. Your words open...
  January 27th, 2017 03:58
• AND STILL THE CANDLE BURNED (Michael Edwards) Michael your talent for image and word never fail - a truly delightful...
  January 26th, 2017 07:13
• ALPHABETIC POEM ~ AWESOME ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - - now this is so clever and the read makes good sense - - your ...
  January 26th, 2017 07:11
• Out of Sync (Quemis) Love the strong flow of this piece - good imagery too. Well done.
  January 26th, 2017 07:02
• MOVEMENT (Illia) Keep going forward with a bold smile - that\'s the best way - - an...
  January 25th, 2017 14:36
• First Annual (Phoenix8523) A heart-wrenching read Phoenix - - regret visits us all at times - you...
  January 25th, 2017 14:34
• THE HEALING POWER OF POETRY - by Raj Nandy (RAJ NANDY) Your illuminating words on the meaning and historic use of poetry shows...
  January 25th, 2017 14:31
• las nubes saben (Janetaylor) An astoudingly beautiful picture dear Jane and I am sure the poem in...
  January 25th, 2017 13:03
• Out on a limb / On a Whim (Augustus) Such clever metaphors friend - a truly illuminating read.
  January 25th, 2017 12:56
• Young (Olverasama) Welcome to MPS Olvera - your poem of how life can be looked at makes...
  January 25th, 2017 06:27
• When I Write (Lovett4166) An engaging read and one to which I too relate. Thank you for sharing.
  January 25th, 2017 06:23
• THE LAMENT OF A NON-BELIEVER (Michael Edwards) Oh - I love the watercolour Michael and as for the poetic confession ...
  January 25th, 2017 06:21
• The Last Embrace (Meggie Gultiano) A very warm welcome dear Meggie to this friendly site - your tribute to...
  January 25th, 2017 06:01
• LA LA LAND ~ An Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh what a dream-land.Sounds a place to put on my visit-list for when my...
  January 25th, 2017 05:56
• returning west (Janetaylor) The depth your poem reaches through fabulous imagery touches the essence...
  January 23rd, 2017 09:50
• I am (Briancawhite) A fine first posting on this friendly site Brianca and welcome to MPS - -...
  January 22nd, 2017 05:11
• R I G H T E O U S N E S S EXALTS A NATION ~ AMEN ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Spiritual values win out every time Brian - - a wonderful encouragement to...
  January 22nd, 2017 05:08
• Heart of Gold (Christina8) What a loving tribute to a wonderful lady - - your pride to have known...
  January 21st, 2017 17:57
• Have Strength (Iamwoman) A powerful and inspiring verse - - a delight to read.
  January 21st, 2017 17:51
• ESTUARY (Michael Edwards) Michael your artistic pen and exciting painting perfectly capture the...
  January 21st, 2017 03:07
• IDYLL (Michael Edwards) Both picture and verse show fervour for clarity\'s detailed minutia with ...
  January 20th, 2017 17:15
• The Science Of Bad Habits (WriteBeLight) Reading this raised a big smile as thinking I too prefer to go barefoot in...
  January 20th, 2017 14:38
• Lovescape. (Fay Slimm.) So pleased you enjoyed the poem dear friends - - and thank you for your...
  January 20th, 2017 14:21
• Never Again. (Fay Slimm.) Thank you Brian - nature gives us so much material for poetry and I...
  January 19th, 2017 05:46
• Doubt (P.H.Rose) Ah - this is truly showing Doubt the door for it can effect all writers...
  January 19th, 2017 04:33
• Appreciwaite (Robclint8586) Beautiful format and wonderfully romantic this appealing verse. Welcome to...
  January 19th, 2017 04:28
• Moonlight (Mel1349) Ah - I love the comparison of sunlight to moonlight in this tender...
  January 19th, 2017 04:06
• Us (Whoweare) What an enchanting love poem with a tender last line. Welcome to MPS and...
  January 19th, 2017 04:01
• The Sum Of Three (WriteBeLight) The victims of world disorder are listed so carefully in your verse and ...
  January 18th, 2017 13:57
• Bully (Tony36) The average bully would cringe when hearing this read my friend....
  January 18th, 2017 13:51
• Eye of The Beholder (Augustus) Strong points made in this verse re. the demise of all for nothing alive...
  January 18th, 2017 13:47
• A Work In Progress (Garryd85) Keeping faith although a challenge is all it takes - - - a great first...
  January 18th, 2017 11:08
• deluged in epiphany (Janetaylor) Nowhere like nature to bring us to heel Jane - the poem so cleverly lined...
  January 18th, 2017 11:04
• Leave not the robin in the road (Reivax Camlost) Enjoyed the archaic form and strong message in this short fable - the...
  January 18th, 2017 00:23
• I\'m Falling In Love With You (Jarid) An honest confession of love portrayed in this tender romantic verse - ...
  January 18th, 2017 00:17
• Silence (Ron parrish aka wordman) Good flow to this verse which echoes the image and number you chose ...
  January 18th, 2017 00:14
• My Mind is My Poetic Side (Pintu Mahakul) Clever title and lovely poem dear Pintu - a warm welcome to this friendly...
  January 17th, 2017 13:09
• Asleep In Your Arms (Sefrin) Riddles with loss yet filled with beautiful love this lament shows just...
  January 17th, 2017 09:48
• A Stolen Heart (Sefrin) Yes - your words ask why when love is so fragile the end should come as...
  January 17th, 2017 09:45
• Immortal Love (Sefrin) Some wonderful lines of comfort to remember here for those who have loved...
  January 17th, 2017 09:40
• I have seen it all (Aa Harvey) Apt question to end this gentle appeal - - good read.
  January 16th, 2017 10:04
• Her guardian (Ks24) A finely expressed appeal in this positive verse. Welcome to this friendly...
  January 16th, 2017 10:02
• Cart (Tony36) Much to think on in this metaphor Tony - good read.
  January 16th, 2017 09:59
• Booze Hound (WriteBeLight) Oh - love both the fun-poem and image to match. The booze-hound I take...
  January 16th, 2017 09:58
• Cold turkey (Anthony woodard) A powerful lament on lost love - such a moving read Anthony.
  January 16th, 2017 06:57
• The Wings Of Your World. (Kevin browne) An exciting and mystical free-style verse Kevin - from the title onwards...
  January 16th, 2017 04:57
• Be Brave despite the storm... (P.H.Rose) I admire the account of dangers at sea - it often needs bravery on the...
  January 16th, 2017 04:48
• ALONE (Michael Edwards) Stunningly good painting and words of aloneness which read slowly evoke...
  January 16th, 2017 04:39
• Faceless Child (NB) This read wrings the heart - a powerful write and so well crafted.
  January 16th, 2017 04:34
• The smallest hours (Anthony woodard) I love the flow and rhyme in this tribute to introspection in the...
  January 15th, 2017 10:29
• Camp (Tony36) Oooh I love camping and fires and nightime skies. Great read
  January 15th, 2017 10:27
• December Sky (Fay Slimm.) Thanks Brian - as you say Nature has an unending supply of subject matter...
  January 15th, 2017 10:25
• POEM FOR SUNDAY ~ GOD IS OUR STRENGTH ~ A Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) An inspiring read my friend - to be an influence for good should be our...
  January 15th, 2017 06:47
• Pen Paper and Agoraphobia (Andrew Charles Forrest) A question we all at times ask brings to a finalé this short lament. an...
  January 15th, 2017 03:41
• A Single Tear (Ron parrish aka wordman) Picture and song add to the pathos of this lonely lament. An appealing...
  January 15th, 2017 03:38
• Moonflowers and daisies (S.L Appleby) These honest reflections highlight the need to allow life \'s happenings...
  January 14th, 2017 17:30
• Fine By Me (AliMay) Romantic appeal with an honest overview of what means what to a...
  January 14th, 2017 17:25
• The Laugh (Augustus) A description of terror known well today by many - a scary but powerful...
  January 13th, 2017 17:14
• Love--(Senryu) (Christina8) Beautiful love such as this poem verses so well just has to be a forever...
  January 13th, 2017 14:56
• What Could Have Been (Phoenix8523) I love all these refreshing \"what ifs\" - thinking at life slanty-eyed...
  January 13th, 2017 13:03
• Struggling at the Crossroads (Phoenix8523) A read filled with anguish of choice which crossroads image so well yet...
  January 13th, 2017 12:40