Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• Life\'s fight (Tony36) So very true Tony.
  May 4th, 2017 08:49
• Dreams (Highlander50) A readable poem on dual aspects of dreams - - an engaging aspect the...
  May 4th, 2017 08:48
• Moonlight Sonata (Gino) Such an appeal in these well-writtten words of invitation to begin love...
  May 4th, 2017 05:36
• THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards) The words describe hidden sacred places so well Michael and the drawing...
  May 4th, 2017 04:52
• Writer\'s Block NOT! (WriteBeLight) Great write - yes those times of block are a challenge my friend.
  May 3rd, 2017 13:07
• C H L O R O P H Y L L ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) An acrostic which teaches us much about the need for preservation of...
  May 3rd, 2017 13:03
• LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24> (Michael Edwards) Ha ha ha - - a really good set of limericks to start my day\'s read - -...
  May 2nd, 2017 07:45
• Walking Into The Wood. (Goldfinch60) A lovely read and so pleased you have a wood to walk in - such a magical...
  May 1st, 2017 11:58
• FADED (Michael Edwards) Longing soaks through every line in this look backward to more loving...
  May 1st, 2017 05:08
• COASTAL EROSION ~ A 77 Acrostic Sonnet ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Good to have you back again Brian and the warning acrostic shows how close...
  April 29th, 2017 11:34
• The Jilted Muse (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) There is short-line power in each one of these verses - enjoyed the...
  April 28th, 2017 13:17
• THE VOICE (Tony36) Very inspiring write Tony - thank you for sharing this wonderful voice...
  April 28th, 2017 11:47
• DESPAIR (Michael Edwards) A powerful few lines here Michael - - the message is couched in some...
  April 28th, 2017 07:32
• Lead Foot (WriteBeLight) I agree entirely - road users of the type your verse describes are a true...
  April 28th, 2017 07:28
• Ode to The Galaxy (Lizzy Renee) An amazing summary of the galaxy\'s fascination Lizzie - - love the...
  April 27th, 2017 10:22
• Humans need a HEREAFTER (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Thanks for this inspirational read to pursue the belief in a Hereafter. I...
  April 26th, 2017 02:00
• My wee special guest (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) A charm of a tribute to the lovely canary - in Cornwall U.K. we have no...
  April 26th, 2017 01:52
• Metallic marvels (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) Your verse aptly captures the attraction of slow, sensuous melt from solid...
  April 26th, 2017 01:45
• From Gandam To London All Sing Your Glory (Pintu Mahakul) I have commented an hour back on this lovely poem and now it seems to be...
  April 25th, 2017 13:21
• Mercy Missioners (Orchidee) I love the wonderful Hills of the North Rejoice and your own words fit so...
  April 25th, 2017 11:39
• Dancing Eyes (Garry) Lovely memories Gary and so romantically written she will treasure this...
  April 25th, 2017 08:39
• A Child\'\'s Love for Her Mum (RebeccaRose.x) A verse of appreciation to a well loved Mum and so full of reasons for...
  April 25th, 2017 07:11
• Island of Words and Music. (Goldfinch60) An island we all want to enter and get the blessings of music so well...
  April 25th, 2017 03:56
• Day After Long Weekend Blues (WriteBeLight) Yes weekends are a boon for today\'s hard workers - very well told all the...
  April 24th, 2017 10:10
• Peregrine Pride (WriteBeLight) Ah - I loved this poetic account of caring for Perigrine offspring -...
  April 23rd, 2017 08:23
• JERUSALEM CHARM ! An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A fine lesson on the wonders of Jerusalem both today and during the stay...
  April 23rd, 2017 04:25
• America (Gino) A hope scribed in hope and very well captured that feeling of needful...
  April 23rd, 2017 04:23
• Hold Me (Gino) A great appeal in this romantic invitation Gino - - so gently sensual -...
  April 22nd, 2017 23:43
• I am Disciple of God (Pintu Mahakul) Such a fine example of faith in action and written so early in life Pintu...
  April 22nd, 2017 23:41
• I Am... (Vena Wolf) A gentle reminder that mortality breeds needs. Whispers from lost loved...
  April 20th, 2017 16:17
• Stop and Look Back. (Goldfinch60) Good advice and so neatly written - thanks for sharing this suggestion to...
  April 20th, 2017 05:27
• MY BUNNY RABBITS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Your bunny picture looks so cute Brian and I agree little bunnies make...
  April 20th, 2017 05:25
• Reap and sow (Wackyheartache4) Talking of and to the flowers makes this verse so special to me. A...
  April 19th, 2017 04:50
• STOP (Michael Edwards) The form you chose made me think of a pyramid\'s power to hide secrets...
  April 19th, 2017 03:49
• DIAMONDS ~ Are a Girl\'s Best Friend (BRIAN & ANGELA) Ah - the ultimate engagement gift and so very well explained too Brian - -...
  April 18th, 2017 06:08
• TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN (Michael Edwards) Your words always weave an engaging story and this one is no exception...
  April 18th, 2017 03:14
• Daydream Lies (John Snowdon) I like the flow of this poignant verse so well inter-rhymed and full of...
  April 17th, 2017 16:26
• Answers to Questions Seldom Asked (John Snowdon) Your questions are more than normally asked as terse line unfolds reasons...
  April 17th, 2017 16:19
• I AM A STREAM ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Love this fresh look at streams and their journey,. I would be a tinckling...
  April 17th, 2017 10:54
• don\'t hesitate (Willyweed) Well captured this need for love and compassion.
  April 17th, 2017 10:50
• THE MUSIC OF THE SEA (Michael Edwards) I love the feel and flow of this oceanic rhyme Michael - Also the...
  April 17th, 2017 06:43
• ARRIVAL (Michael Edwards) Thanks for this poetic look at the season\'s push toward more colourful ...
  April 15th, 2017 07:52
• The Last Station of The Cross. (Goldfinch60) Such a vivid reminder here of the deep and lasting sacrifice at that...
  April 14th, 2017 05:28
• Lily of Easter (WriteBeLight) What a beautiful reflection of the lily\'s importance - thank you for...
  April 14th, 2017 05:26
• GOOD FRIDAY NEWS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A timely and memorable reminder of this very special Celebration. Thanks...
  April 14th, 2017 05:25
• Words of Love (Garry) A fine summary of how former relationships create and bind. The heart...
  April 13th, 2017 23:31
• LEICESTER STATION (Michael Edwards) Leicester has reason to be proud of both picture an poem dear Michael - -...
  April 13th, 2017 03:36
• Flowing Through (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm) Good questions for poets in the first verse Kurt and love the Easter...
  April 12th, 2017 18:11
• Spring Clean Up (WriteBeLight) Oooh - -Spring cleaning is always a chore - I always tackle the garden...
  April 12th, 2017 16:18
• A View from my bedroom chair.... (P.H.Rose) A watchful and very perceptive eye transcribes the happenings in such...
  April 12th, 2017 03:02
• THE UNKNOWN MAN (Michael Edwards) You pen a picture of what gossip can do to a sensitive nature in this...
  April 12th, 2017 02:58
• Pride\'s Abode (Tristan Robert Lange) Pride certainly wreaks havoc and thanks for this needed reminder. Good...
  April 12th, 2017 02:55
• Neighbour Watching (Goldfinch60) There is a time and a place for these electronic devices - natural beauty...
  April 12th, 2017 02:53
• WHY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) A time of sadness and ultimate happiness - what a Redeemer the human race...
  April 12th, 2017 02:50
• Passion Progressing (Orchidee) A very expressive picture of the trials that our Christ had to face at...
  April 11th, 2017 13:42
• Icy winds (EmerOR) Very expressive in word and form - - welcome to this friendly site Emor -...
  April 11th, 2017 13:39
• ice and embers (Katherined) A sad but well written read Katherine.
  April 11th, 2017 13:37
• The Gang ( A Nort the Newt story) (Tony36) Great read Tony - - old Nort knows a thing or two from which we could...
  April 11th, 2017 13:36
• The Deer (PoeticFlows) so true that the light of Now drives out any fear. A wonderful rhyme as a...
  April 11th, 2017 13:35
• THREE SMILES (Michael Edwards) Another smile raised by your valued sayings dear Michael and as for the...
  April 11th, 2017 04:37
• Unexpected Beauty and Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Such an upbeat feel of positive vibes in this poem my friend.
  April 11th, 2017 04:35
• OUR INNER BEAUTY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) So much truth in these wise suggestions my friend.
  April 11th, 2017 04:34
• Dead Red Limerick. (Garry) Witty and clever this limerick Garry
  April 11th, 2017 04:33
• My Nemesis. (Goldfinch60) Ah - - clever verse with a sting in its tail - my own battle is with ivy -...
  April 10th, 2017 02:37
• rage and the rainbow (Willyweed) An excellent reminder with so much to think on - thanks for sharing this...
  April 9th, 2017 10:26
• Awaiting June (WriteBeLight) Love this chirpy welcome to summer\'s attractions - a lovely read.
  April 9th, 2017 10:02
• I Feel Your Love You Give (Pintu Mahakul) Your appeal for the wisdom of a living faith is etched deeply in the lines...
  April 7th, 2017 11:03
• I stand on the edge (DaveG) A journey through moments of past and preset written with careful...
  April 6th, 2017 08:38
• \"not just a women\" (Willyweed) Plenty of romantic power in these few words Willy
  April 6th, 2017 08:34
• Vivien Leigh (Magenta1) A c;harm of a read about an all-time favourite and oh such a beauty....
  April 6th, 2017 08:33
• words 3 (Tony36) Put so expressively this gem of truth.
  April 6th, 2017 08:31
• Was there ever a day (ItsKillaWatt) Sad but a well-formed piece of poetic prose. Thanks for sharing.
  April 6th, 2017 08:30
• Beautiful (LukeMorrison) Lots of food for thought in this poem Luke - - a good comparison and...
  April 6th, 2017 02:29
• AUTUMN SUN (Michael Edwards) The triolet form fits so well with the picture of mellow autumn - another...
  April 6th, 2017 02:22
• Infinity. (Goldfinch60) A well expressed journey into the mind\'s unknown and fine tribute to...
  April 6th, 2017 02:20
• Life As Mixed Child (Poetic Justice) You are and will always be special dear Rose - your writing shows both...
  April 6th, 2017 02:12
• HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE (BRIAN & ANGELA) Fantastic form from top to bottom dear Brian - - very clever indeed.
  April 6th, 2017 02:04
• Missing You Chris (Pintu Mahakul) such a fitting tribute to a much missed poet-friend. Thank you dear Pintu...
  April 5th, 2017 07:42
• A Book of my life..... (P.H.Rose) May your book reach all those who would like help to live wisely in this...
  April 4th, 2017 16:33
• My Lovely Mate Ivan. (Kevin browne) Such a moving and detailed account Kevin of a mate who has in filling his...
  April 4th, 2017 16:23
• The Last Goodbye (Garry) Sad but true Garry that the kind and softly spoken often have much more to...
  April 4th, 2017 16:10
• CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD (BRIAN & ANGELA) Such a magnificent colour shouts from the feathers of cardinal birds - ...
  April 4th, 2017 11:50
• Scrambled Message (Philip) This verse explains so well what can happen when attention is taken...
  April 2nd, 2017 08:20
• A SUNDAY SMILE (Michael Edwards) Your talent with brush and water always amazes and this piece today just...
  April 2nd, 2017 03:01
• MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A veritable bouquet of colour to your lovely day Brian. - those jammys ...
  April 1st, 2017 04:37
• To Sleep? (Garry) A snack as you described sounds like sleep will not be far away Garry.
  April 1st, 2017 04:35
• THE PATH (Michael Edwards) Ah - this has to be one of your best pieces of descriptive poetry Michael ...
  April 1st, 2017 01:02
• to the town that made me (ThomasGorden) This appeal to a town is a powerfully expressive piece of discerning prose...
  April 1st, 2017 00:58
• No Nation (ThomasGorden) Love the flow in this well written outcry against the danger of pride. An...
  April 1st, 2017 00:48
• Lost in a Book. (Goldfinch60) Ha ha - - snap my friend - this really describes me !
  March 31st, 2017 04:44
• The night (Robert \" grave robber\" redford.) Welcome Casey - the lovely imagery in this verse to the beauty of night...
  March 31st, 2017 04:42
• THE DAILY GRIND ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Daily grind described so well - this verse makes me glad I have retired...
  March 31st, 2017 04:41
• June (Adrian Ward) What a wonderful message to send to a lady\'s forthcoming wedding -- a...
  March 31st, 2017 04:35
• DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards) Great ending to the love saga and oh what a picture - your watercolours...
  March 30th, 2017 05:49
• Don\'t Deflect (WriteBeLight) So true these words encouraging apology when needed- it makes all the...
  March 30th, 2017 05:49
• Children (Tony36) Well written and on such a needed subject too Tony.
  March 29th, 2017 10:44
• you are but a shadow (Willyweed) A poignant write which highlights the pain caused in relationships when...
  March 29th, 2017 07:33
• Opening Poem To My New Novel: \'Death From The Sky\' (Kurt Philip Behm) An engagingly good poetic opener to your new novel Kurt.
  March 28th, 2017 11:34
• Love (Tony36) First rate romantic appeal in this verse of love Tony. Great read.
  March 28th, 2017 11:32
• Salvation Safety (Orchidee) A bouquet of reasons why spiritual questions find answers in faith. A...
  March 28th, 2017 11:30