Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.

• The Last Station of The Cross. (Goldfinch60) Such a vivid reminder here of the deep and lasting sacrifice at that...
  April 14th, 2017 05:28
• Lily of Easter (WriteBeLight) What a beautiful reflection of the lily\'s importance - thank you for...
  April 14th, 2017 05:26
• GOOD FRIDAY NEWS ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) A timely and memorable reminder of this very special Celebration. Thanks...
  April 14th, 2017 05:25
• Words of Love (Garry) A fine summary of how former relationships create and bind. The heart...
  April 13th, 2017 23:31
• LEICESTER STATION (Michael Edwards) Leicester has reason to be proud of both picture an poem dear Michael - -...
  April 13th, 2017 03:36
• Flowing Through (+4) (Kurt Philip Behm) Good questions for poets in the first verse Kurt and love the Easter...
  April 12th, 2017 18:11
• Spring Clean Up (WriteBeLight) Oooh - -Spring cleaning is always a chore - I always tackle the garden...
  April 12th, 2017 16:18
• A View from my bedroom chair.... (P.H.Rose) A watchful and very perceptive eye transcribes the happenings in such...
  April 12th, 2017 03:02
• THE UNKNOWN MAN (Michael Edwards) You pen a picture of what gossip can do to a sensitive nature in this...
  April 12th, 2017 02:58
• Pride\'s Abode (Tristan Robert Lange) Pride certainly wreaks havoc and thanks for this needed reminder. Good...
  April 12th, 2017 02:55
• Neighbour Watching (Goldfinch60) There is a time and a place for these electronic devices - natural beauty...
  April 12th, 2017 02:53
• WHY ? (BRIAN & ANGELA) A time of sadness and ultimate happiness - what a Redeemer the human race...
  April 12th, 2017 02:50
• Passion Progressing (Orchidee) A very expressive picture of the trials that our Christ had to face at...
  April 11th, 2017 13:42
• Icy winds (EmerOR) Very expressive in word and form - - welcome to this friendly site Emor -...
  April 11th, 2017 13:39
• ice and embers (Katherined) A sad but well written read Katherine.
  April 11th, 2017 13:37
• The Gang ( A Nort the Newt story) (Tony36) Great read Tony - - old Nort knows a thing or two from which we could...
  April 11th, 2017 13:36
• The Deer (PoeticFlows) so true that the light of Now drives out any fear. A wonderful rhyme as a...
  April 11th, 2017 13:35
• THREE SMILES (Michael Edwards) Another smile raised by your valued sayings dear Michael and as for the...
  April 11th, 2017 04:37
• Unexpected Beauty and Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Such an upbeat feel of positive vibes in this poem my friend.
  April 11th, 2017 04:35
• OUR INNER BEAUTY ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) So much truth in these wise suggestions my friend.
  April 11th, 2017 04:34
• Dead Red Limerick. (Garry) Witty and clever this limerick Garry
  April 11th, 2017 04:33
• My Nemesis. (Goldfinch60) Ah - - clever verse with a sting in its tail - my own battle is with ivy -...
  April 10th, 2017 02:37
• rage and the rainbow (Willyweed) An excellent reminder with so much to think on - thanks for sharing this...
  April 9th, 2017 10:26
• Awaiting June (WriteBeLight) Love this chirpy welcome to summer\'s attractions - a lovely read.
  April 9th, 2017 10:02
• I Feel Your Love You Give (Pintu Mahakul) Your appeal for the wisdom of a living faith is etched deeply in the lines...
  April 7th, 2017 11:03
• I stand on the edge (DaveG) A journey through moments of past and preset written with careful...
  April 6th, 2017 08:38
• \"not just a women\" (Willyweed) Plenty of romantic power in these few words Willy
  April 6th, 2017 08:34
• Vivien Leigh (Magenta1) A c;harm of a read about an all-time favourite and oh such a beauty....
  April 6th, 2017 08:33
• words 3 (Tony36) Put so expressively this gem of truth.
  April 6th, 2017 08:31
• Was there ever a day (ItsKillaWatt) Sad but a well-formed piece of poetic prose. Thanks for sharing.
  April 6th, 2017 08:30
• Beautiful (LukeMorrison) Lots of food for thought in this poem Luke - - a good comparison and...
  April 6th, 2017 02:29
• AUTUMN SUN (Michael Edwards) The triolet form fits so well with the picture of mellow autumn - another...
  April 6th, 2017 02:22
• Infinity. (Goldfinch60) A well expressed journey into the mind\'s unknown and fine tribute to...
  April 6th, 2017 02:20
• Life As Mixed Child (Poetic Justice) You are and will always be special dear Rose - your writing shows both...
  April 6th, 2017 02:12
• HOUR GLASS ~ FIGURE (BRIAN & ANGELA) Fantastic form from top to bottom dear Brian - - very clever indeed.
  April 6th, 2017 02:04
• Missing You Chris (Pintu Mahakul) such a fitting tribute to a much missed poet-friend. Thank you dear Pintu...
  April 5th, 2017 07:42
• A Book of my life..... (P.H.Rose) May your book reach all those who would like help to live wisely in this...
  April 4th, 2017 16:33
• My Lovely Mate Ivan. (Kevin browne) Such a moving and detailed account Kevin of a mate who has in filling his...
  April 4th, 2017 16:23
• The Last Goodbye (Garry) Sad but true Garry that the kind and softly spoken often have much more to...
  April 4th, 2017 16:10
• CARDINAL (NORTHERN) FAVORITE USA STATE BIRD (BRIAN & ANGELA) Such a magnificent colour shouts from the feathers of cardinal birds - ...
  April 4th, 2017 11:50
• Scrambled Message (Philip) This verse explains so well what can happen when attention is taken...
  April 2nd, 2017 08:20
• A SUNDAY SMILE (Michael Edwards) Your talent with brush and water always amazes and this piece today just...
  April 2nd, 2017 03:01
• MY RAINBOW DAY ~ COLORFUL ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) A veritable bouquet of colour to your lovely day Brian. - those jammys ...
  April 1st, 2017 04:37
• To Sleep? (Garry) A snack as you described sounds like sleep will not be far away Garry.
  April 1st, 2017 04:35
• THE PATH (Michael Edwards) Ah - this has to be one of your best pieces of descriptive poetry Michael ...
  April 1st, 2017 01:02
• to the town that made me (ThomasGorden) This appeal to a town is a powerfully expressive piece of discerning prose...
  April 1st, 2017 00:58
• No Nation (ThomasGorden) Love the flow in this well written outcry against the danger of pride. An...
  April 1st, 2017 00:48
• Lost in a Book. (Goldfinch60) Ha ha - - snap my friend - this really describes me !
  March 31st, 2017 04:44
• The night (Robert \" grave robber\" redford.) Welcome Casey - the lovely imagery in this verse to the beauty of night...
  March 31st, 2017 04:42
• THE DAILY GRIND ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Daily grind described so well - this verse makes me glad I have retired...
  March 31st, 2017 04:41
• June (Adrian Ward) What a wonderful message to send to a lady\'s forthcoming wedding -- a...
  March 31st, 2017 04:35
• DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards) Great ending to the love saga and oh what a picture - your watercolours...
  March 30th, 2017 05:49
• Don\'t Deflect (WriteBeLight) So true these words encouraging apology when needed- it makes all the...
  March 30th, 2017 05:49
• Children (Tony36) Well written and on such a needed subject too Tony.
  March 29th, 2017 10:44
• you are but a shadow (Willyweed) A poignant write which highlights the pain caused in relationships when...
  March 29th, 2017 07:33
• Opening Poem To My New Novel: \'Death From The Sky\' (Kurt Philip Behm) An engagingly good poetic opener to your new novel Kurt.
  March 28th, 2017 11:34
• Love (Tony36) First rate romantic appeal in this verse of love Tony. Great read.
  March 28th, 2017 11:32
• Salvation Safety (Orchidee) A bouquet of reasons why spiritual questions find answers in faith. A...
  March 28th, 2017 11:30
• Ask (Ruby Leighton) I like the flow of this verse which tells its story with on-going peeps at...
  March 28th, 2017 11:28
• WAS IT LOVE ? (5) (Michael Edwards) I love the continuation of this romantic story - - good idea Michael -...
  March 28th, 2017 04:15
• Moved Out (WriteBeLight) An interesting time in the life of an offspring is when they start to make...
  March 27th, 2017 07:55
• So Alone. (Goldfinch60) Yes that friendly word can lead to all sorts of sharing as people in that...
  March 27th, 2017 07:53
• GYMKHANAS ~ A Blank Verse Acrostic (BRIAN & ANGELA) An engaging acrostic and I truly agree that with a day at Gymkhana you...
  March 27th, 2017 07:48
• A reason to be (Aa Harvey) A very appealing love letter dear poet - - good title too as we all need...
  March 25th, 2017 06:22
• FIVE FRUITY HAIKU A DAY ! (BRIAN & ANGELA) Yes - here\'s to the five a day for better health - thanks for the...
  March 25th, 2017 06:20
• WAS IT LOVE ? (Michael Edwards) My eyes see the freshness of love in that wonderful painting dear friend -...
  March 24th, 2017 11:04
• DO YOU WANT TO GO? (Michael Edwards) An exciting piece of abstract art Michael which in this case demanded my...
  March 23rd, 2017 03:46
• The story of life..... (Slide Hammer) Much food for thought in this well written verse about learning from...
  March 23rd, 2017 03:18
• Death Steals (Bhorner23) Such a vivid account of death\'s unforgiving power in this heart-...
  March 23rd, 2017 03:15
• A Man of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60) You cover retirement of this retired man very well here my friend - - ...
  March 23rd, 2017 03:09
• Window Ledge Of Love. (Kevin browne) You capture the feel of lasting love after meeting another with whom...
  March 22nd, 2017 08:42
• Going Places (Christina8) Happy Anniversary Chris and with your special honey here\'s hoping the...
  March 21st, 2017 11:35
• Moments Left Unfelt (+1) (Kurt Philip Behm) Two reflective gems - thanks for sharing them Kurt.
  March 21st, 2017 11:26
• The Airman (Garry) A terse and well composed summary in compelling rhyme of tragic results...
  March 20th, 2017 17:19
• To Herself Alone (Kurt Philip Behm) Ah a rare insight into what a woman keep to herself alone. Good read.
  March 18th, 2017 13:27
• Touch Someone\'s Life (Iamwoman) A lovely thought and thank you for sharing it.
  March 18th, 2017 13:25
• Exalting Encouragements (Orchidee) A soul-stirring read my friend and put to music would enhance even the ...
  March 18th, 2017 13:25
• YACKY ZEBRAS (Michael Edwards) Ha ha - -such a clever fun-write and very inventive.
  March 18th, 2017 01:49
• GREAT DAY (Tony36) A wonderful poem of faith Tony and so very well written.
  March 17th, 2017 17:21
• Whispers From Heaven (Christina8) A verse from the heart will not go unheard dear Christina - Heaven will...
  March 17th, 2017 17:20
• Music Conquers All. (Goldfinch60) Loud applause for this concerto of words for listening well to good music...
  March 17th, 2017 07:19
• So Rewarding (WriteBeLight) So true that being on hand to help when needed is so satisfying. Good
  March 17th, 2017 06:28
• The Choice Is Yours (WriteBeLight) Reasons for personal choice rings out in each line of your words -...
  March 16th, 2017 12:26
• GOD\'S LOVE FOR EVERYONE ! A Free Verse Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) God\'s implicit love is brought out so well in this verse of true faith...
  March 16th, 2017 12:23
• Spirit of South Crofty (Maria Lees) You captured so well the poignant atmosphere when mines close Maria - ...
  March 16th, 2017 11:35
• Thankful Tributes (Orchidee) Thanks for this spiritual feast dear poet - - we all need to cleanse our...
  March 15th, 2017 13:07
• PLASTIC BOTTLES ~ An Acrostic Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) Oh the shame of this awful situation - thanks indeed Brian for bringing...
  March 15th, 2017 13:05
• Crown of Convocation (Pintu Mahakul) A picture of wonderful achievement dear Pintu both in the fine image and...
  March 15th, 2017 03:07
• LIMERICKS 37, 38 & 39 (Michael Edwards) Ah - just what my first read needed today Michael - Chuckling here at ...
  March 15th, 2017 03:02
• As You Like It. (Goldfinch60) You paint a picture of global paradise to which I add a loud Amen dear...
  March 15th, 2017 02:57
• Gone (Jmcg) An expressively sad reflection on the meaning of friendship in this well...
  March 14th, 2017 06:01
• COLOR ME A RAINBOW (BRIAN & ANGELA) A bouquet of beautiful hues from your poetic heart Brian - - we are truly...
  March 14th, 2017 05:57
• THE RAIN THAT WASHED THE SKY (Michael Edwards) Such a tender and intimate scene of release amid the comfort of love -...
  March 14th, 2017 03:35
• Defend the child inside you (Miss.Steele) Agreed we need to keep our inner child truly alive - a lovely read.
  March 14th, 2017 03:30
• She. (Goldfinch60) Sad but so beautiful - everyone needs a time of happy departure. A read...
  March 14th, 2017 03:28
• Elegy I for the death of Leonard Cohen (Andrew Charles Forrest) This song carries his memory dear poet and those who can remember more...
  March 11th, 2017 12:46
• Passionate Penitence (Orchidee) A fine prayer-poem of faith and praise. I love that final line.
  March 11th, 2017 12:44
• touched (Willyweed) Such a good imaginative write that I was there in castle on the hill. A...
  March 11th, 2017 09:24
• To my daughter (Lanejamesc) A daughter is special and this verse so filled with a father\'s love will...
  March 11th, 2017 06:24
• A False Infinity (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) Some provoking questions here which will keep the mind busy Kurt - a ...
  March 11th, 2017 06:20