Comments on community poems by Fay Slimm.
- The Boat of Pleasant Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Such a flow of gentle assurance about this peaceful verse. A lovely read.
March 10th, 2017 03:01 - A Global Warming... (Hypothesis)
A mesmerizing read Hypo with a well-written warning noone can ignore....
March 10th, 2017 02:59 - Timeless (Philip)
A wonderful tribute to the people of such wisdom who inhabited Australia...
March 9th, 2017 10:54 - Going Round Again (Philip)
Such a vital message in this verse Philip - so pleased to have caught...
March 9th, 2017 10:50 - she. (Ruth Fadairo)
How beautiful to read a sincere tribute to a wonderful Mum on this...
March 8th, 2017 17:18 - God (Tony36)
One of the most sincere and well written prayerful appeals in poetic...
March 8th, 2017 17:04 - A Whisper Then To Shout (+2) (Kurt Philip Behm)
Inspiring imagery used here which combines phrases with inventive ideas....
March 8th, 2017 01:42 - TIME (Michael Edwards)
Ah Michael - An expertly rendered scene where time catches up with nature...
March 8th, 2017 01:38 - Triumphant Tellings (Orchidee)
A gem of a hymn dear friend.
March 7th, 2017 12:47 - I DO LOVE TO VISIT ~ THE US of A ~ A Villanelle (BRIAN & ANGELA)
Reading through this fine villanelle I am now more than ready to visit...
March 6th, 2017 08:36 - Melancholy Blue (WriteBeLight)
I agree with the comment you left and the words in the poem which sum up...
March 6th, 2017 08:15 - I Am A Soldier (Tony36)
The verse flows with determination to keep fighting whatever attacks us....
March 6th, 2017 08:12 - bruised purple (Willyweed)
Whatever our past we are all bruised and waiting for love from our maker....
March 5th, 2017 12:08 - Heartful Hopes (Orchidee)
A touching hymn-poem with an uplifting message.
March 5th, 2017 12:06 - Stardust (Solomon)
I like the flow to this romantic lament - written in free style the...
March 5th, 2017 12:04
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