Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Ripples (Arturo Fernandez Ferre)
There\'s a sadness to this poem, as sad as \"broken porcelain.\" I related...
March 30th, 2020 18:59 - PLENTY FOR ALL (Michael Edwards)
A bit dark, coming from you.
Your trees remind me of people waiting for a...
March 12th, 2020 16:12 - Change. (Fay Slimm.)
We should all \"greet life\" with your optimism. Springtime brings that...
March 11th, 2020 18:35 - WINTER NIGHTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Beware that \"winters rust.\" Don\'t let it affect your art. Perhaps the...
March 11th, 2020 18:24 - Hesitation (Neville)
I\'m game for that freworking of old ones specially my hip
As for diving...
March 8th, 2020 20:45 - Forsaken (Neville)
Whether \"Forsaken \" in love or in life, she has reached the breaking...
March 7th, 2020 21:04 - These Nights (SheWasTheSun)
Such nights as these come all too often it seems. Unhappy...
March 6th, 2020 23:16 - Scarlet’s Letter (Railasunshine)
I like the rhythm and rhyme of this, but am confused by stanza 3.
This...
March 2nd, 2020 23:43 - Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville)
It appears to me that \"Cumbersome\" is both heavy\" and \"long\" and...
March 2nd, 2020 23:33 - Rebel Pen (SheWasTheSun)
This short poem sums up the anguish of parting, and the reflection on...
March 1st, 2020 23:32 - You Stopped By (SheWasTheSun)
When we\'re missing someone, a dream can ease the pain. Never completely,...
March 1st, 2020 23:22 - He Has Me (SheWasTheSun)
This is beautiful poetry. A personal subject, expressed eloquently. the...
March 1st, 2020 16:50 - Disequilibrium (Neville)
There\'s truth in what you write (if there is such a thing as truth). Your...
February 26th, 2020 12:03 - The better Gems (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
There\'s a lot of beauty in this poem: Comparisons that are heart-felt,...
February 26th, 2020 11:18 - Into Life. (Goldfinch60)
Together forever. There cannot be a more powerful love.
A lovely poem...
February 19th, 2020 15:37
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