Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• Jump From a Plane (Ternic73) Paratroopers are indeed a brave lot. They are first in, usually, or the...
  February 21st, 2017 10:16
• Be you (Crow.) Nice write, great message. Let your true self shine. Keep on writing with...
  February 21st, 2017 10:05
• Being Fickle. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely. It\'s such a refreshing time of year, and you\'ve captured that...
  February 21st, 2017 09:51
• Justica Picks (Augustus) The rich, the poor, the elite, the common man, justice for all, not so...
  February 20th, 2017 17:59
• when your alone with Bon Jovi (Jooles) Everyone has \"their\" music and I suppose \"their\" dance, but mostly it...
  February 20th, 2017 12:44
• Face in the Flames (Edthepoet) A sad reflection on lost love. We\'ve been there and it hurts. The...
  February 20th, 2017 12:28
• The Kernel\'s Lost. Try Floss. (WriteBeLight) Ah yes, the dangers of popcorn. Will nature please stop the assault on the...
  February 20th, 2017 11:13
• How Does It Feel? (VictoriaOliviaGreene) Sounds like depression. But then if you can write about it that may be...
  February 20th, 2017 11:05
• PLUNDER (Michael Edwards) It truly is a plundering of our legacy. The pirating of land for...
  February 20th, 2017 10:44
• LIFE (VictoriaOliviaGreene) Well, that\'s certainly true. Nice expression of a longstanding concept. -...
  February 19th, 2017 17:12
• The Tree we all are. (ABreathOrSigh) It\'s true, we all have the same desire in life, namely, happiness. We are...
  February 19th, 2017 17:09
• LIMERICK No 9 (Michael Edwards) Funny limerick. Awesome painting. I guess the inventor was unhinged....
  February 19th, 2017 12:46
• Devil in Disguise (Poems_) All things, all people, are never what they seem at the first glance.In...
  February 19th, 2017 12:33
• Becoming Other. (Fay Slimm.) Nature, in all its glory, can and does inspire. We become a bee, a fox, a...
  February 19th, 2017 12:21
• Another Touch (Augustus) \"Truth,\" is a precious commodity in any relationship. Incomplete...
  February 18th, 2017 15:14
• Going Round Again (Philip) \"Make the most of your second youth,\" ain\'t that the truth. There\'s no...
  February 18th, 2017 15:05
• WITHIN THE SANCTION OF THE WALLS (Michael Edwards) I\'ve heard many praiseworthy compliments on the value of \"moonshine,\"...
  February 18th, 2017 14:38
• WITHIN THE SANCTION OF THE WALLS (Michael Edwards) I\'ve heard many praiseworthy compliments on the value of \"moonshine,\"...
  February 18th, 2017 14:15
• I Swear I\'m Stuck (WriteBeLight) So, enough humor over this poem, enough of the \"I can\'t find the right...
  February 18th, 2017 11:57
• Emotions (Poems_) Great images. Try to slow down and let joy catch up. Sadness, guilt,...
  February 18th, 2017 11:13
• A Touch (Augustus) \'87, C\'mon it was only 30 years ago. Where does the time go, when...
  February 17th, 2017 19:00
• Changeling. (Fay Slimm.) Yes, the wind can dance and twirl like a ballerina, and roar like a lion....
  February 17th, 2017 17:19
• River stone (Reivax Camlost) Loved it. A great image expressed cleverly and clearly. Every word...
  February 17th, 2017 17:11
• Sestina (M4y4_bee) Wow! Clever stuff. Sounds like a time consuming process, to get it just...
  February 17th, 2017 17:07
• Night time (Poems_) Your poems are good. I can see the images you create. Now change them to...
  February 17th, 2017 16:53
• Sharp Stone Syllables (Quemis) One must love one\'s self before they can love another. Feelings of self...
  February 17th, 2017 12:40
• Freedom Phrases (WriteBeLight) My humble opinion is that we write because we must. There is a certain...
  February 17th, 2017 12:18
• Real world (Isabel Chelisia Villa) Wow! Is there a poet in you? For damn sure. I can tell by how you write....
  February 17th, 2017 11:51
• To Have And Let Go (WriteBeLight) Life is not a book where you turn the page and find out what\'s happening...
  February 16th, 2017 20:38
• Difference. (Fay Slimm.) Color in nature serves a multitude of purposes, attraction, defense,...
  February 16th, 2017 20:29
• Old Friends (Gencruz) A great personification of Insomnia and Depression, one male, one female....
  February 15th, 2017 21:13
• A Crusade (AJ) I\'ve always said, \"The world would be a beautiful place if it were not...
  February 15th, 2017 21:05
• Believe (Tony36) Without belief there is no hope. Well expressed here. - Phil A.
  February 15th, 2017 18:01
• Who am I? (Antoinette) You are what you want to be. No one can change that or deter it. It is...
  February 15th, 2017 17:59
• Life through my eyes (Ash) Great story-telling in poetic form. Sounds as though it would be a tough...
  February 15th, 2017 16:26
• No Time. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful images, of the sea and the shore causing reflection of things...
  February 15th, 2017 16:04
• Disorderly Conduct (WriteBeLight) In Seattle, while visiting a few years back, I discovered warning signs...
  February 15th, 2017 15:51
• Rays of Light (Augustus) Thank you for the light. Keeep seeing the heavenly love flowing your way....
  February 15th, 2017 13:19
• Unoriginal Sin (Kurt Philip Behm) Love expressed poetically , fostered by the likes of Eliot, Thoreau,...
  February 15th, 2017 11:00
• Humanity (Augustus) Man\'s inhumanity to Man is insane. We cannot stand by and let that...
  February 14th, 2017 21:49
• The Treadmill (Kurt Philip Behm) Life in the fast lane can be terribly hectic, it\'s time to \"slow down\",...
  February 14th, 2017 12:31
• True Character (Augustus) Those in authority are almost always despised for nothing more than the...
  February 13th, 2017 14:30
• Love, In Three Parts (NottarealPoet) This write is raw, brutally honest poetry. It was engrossing. The imagery...
  February 13th, 2017 14:23
• Love 3 (Tony36) Nice write, Tony. Love conquers all.
  February 13th, 2017 14:09
• Hello, From the Other Side (JustABird) Wow! Very emotional write. Kept it clear though, not too much...
  February 13th, 2017 14:06
• Friendly Competition (WriteBeLight) Every diet I ever tried always came with a note at the bottom that said...
  February 13th, 2017 13:46
• My Path Unbroken (Kurt Philip Behm) Three terrific poems. My Fav is the second. I like the uplifting message...
  February 12th, 2017 17:16
• Black Hole (Philip) What happens to or where is all the matter and energy absorbed by the...
  February 11th, 2017 12:24
• OUTBURST (Michael Edwards) I see the \"Outburst\" in your painting and the \"abstraction\" in your...
  February 11th, 2017 12:17
• RETAIL CYCLE (Michael Edwards) The \"Retail Cycle\" is being accelerated by on-line ordering. However the...
  February 10th, 2017 13:41
• February (Reivax Camlost) I see the morning frost, the snow falling, the surface of the snow...
  February 9th, 2017 17:38
• TWO TRAMPS (Michael Edwards) Two mice who wouldn\'t pay the price. Alone in the night, \'cause the...
  February 9th, 2017 16:12
• Five Strangers (Kurt Philip Behm) Sleep, with haunting dreams of repressed emotions one thought were gone,...
  February 9th, 2017 16:06
• Bodies (Corey) \"The heart is the toughest part of the body,\" someone once said, and...
  February 9th, 2017 13:47
• Bodies (Corey) \"The heart is the toughest part of the body,\" someone once said, and...
  February 9th, 2017 13:46
• Mugs, Hugs And Jugs (WriteBeLight) Coffee mugs bring smiles. A brief break from the day\'s stress while you...
  February 8th, 2017 15:54
• Purpose of tears (Stephanie Showers) To be alive requires an open heart. Trying to live with a closed heart is...
  February 8th, 2017 14:50
• Born to the sea (Aa Harvey) Is this a ghost ship? That\'s how I read it - \"Since the life at sea...
  February 8th, 2017 14:32
• The Beauty of the Night (John Snowdon) Night and Day, the eternal struggle. People of both domains feel the pain...
  February 8th, 2017 14:07
• HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN (Michael Edwards) To me this feels like someone in remorse trying to cope and mend their...
  February 8th, 2017 13:08
• Peeling the Pain (Amy Milton Roemer) Needing is the deeper emotion. It\'s like Love vs. Like. Wanting almost...
  February 7th, 2017 16:26
• Donuts (Brice1232) Enjoyed this with my coffee this morning. Just getting time to tell you...
  February 7th, 2017 16:14
• Team G.O.A.T. (WriteBeLight) We\'re five weeks behind most of the other teams getting ready for 2017....
  February 7th, 2017 16:00
• INSIDE OUTSIDE (Michael Edwards) Humor and art, Refreshing. Now a jumper, that\'s like a sweater, correct?...
  February 7th, 2017 15:52
• Awesome Love (Tony36) One day at a time. Nice write. - Phil A.
  February 7th, 2017 15:40
• This Stone (Tony36) Ah, Love upon the sacrificial stone. A heart torn apart, coping through...
  February 6th, 2017 15:41
• Write The World Right (Corey) Maybe you have spelled out exactly what we all should be doing. Writing to...
  February 6th, 2017 15:34
• NIGHT (Michael Edwards) This ia a beautiful description of night from a \"practised mind.\" ...
  February 6th, 2017 13:12
• One Wish (Elphaba993) From your heart - no doubt. All they need are your love and your time. If...
  February 6th, 2017 12:51
• Your Song Has Sung (Kurt Philip Behm) All valid questions to pose to any writer. I suppose it takes a degree of...
  February 6th, 2017 12:48
• THE GREAT UNREAD (Michael Edwards) Great painting. Here are my comments: 1) 2) - Phil A.
  February 5th, 2017 12:45
• inconsequential (Anthrodynia) Well done. I believe it\'s poetry. Keep writing.
  February 4th, 2017 20:24
• RELEASE (Michael Edwards) \"Release\" - as in death. Am I reading this right? \"In open land where...
  February 4th, 2017 14:59
• No One Listens To Me (Philip) We\'re listening.. to your words in verse. Yes, we\'ve all felt this way...
  February 4th, 2017 11:38
• Children (Tony36) Oh, that it could only remain. Children are born as people should be in...
  February 3rd, 2017 15:25
• THE ORCHARD BY NIGHT (Michael Edwards) Beautiful -\"in filigree against the sky\" Loved it. You are an artist in...
  February 3rd, 2017 15:17
• Less Important Side of Reality (NB) People-watching can be an alluring pastime. Now, this may sound stupid...
  February 3rd, 2017 12:08
• comfort (Tony36) What!? That thing is huge. Not exactly something you can carry around with...
  February 2nd, 2017 19:55
• THE SAD TALE OF THE UNFORTUNATE EGG (Michael Edwards) I really liked this one Michael. Maybe I was in the mood for something a...
  February 2nd, 2017 19:50
• HE LOOKED NO MORE FOR BRIDGES (Michael Edwards) Well, I like it. Glad you chose that title. We can go searching endlessly,...
  February 1st, 2017 14:37
• God\'s Handiwork (Shadorma) (Rrodriguez) Interesting form, new to me, thanks for that. Terrific painting, who cares...
  February 1st, 2017 12:06
• A Dream (Rrodriguez) Imagery of a heart on fire, a longing, a desire. A dream broken suddenly,...
  January 31st, 2017 21:52
• Timeless (Philip) No time - no stress. No deadlines, no obligations. Life is beautiful. A...
  January 31st, 2017 16:34
• POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS (Michael Edwards) Sometimes we have to look out the window to see the light and realize that...
  January 31st, 2017 11:47
• 30 January 2017 (Severus Alexander) Beautiful. A simple thing like a passing breeze can rouse a host of...
  January 30th, 2017 23:21
• The Jazz Band in Gas Masks (Oliver Cobbin) I have to agree with DS about the imagery, it is fantastic, in the sense...
  January 30th, 2017 20:21
• Where do I begin my poem? (Rrodriguez) I think I\'ve read that same book...again and again and again, but never...
  January 29th, 2017 21:04
• MY STRIPED RAINBOW CAT ~ A Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA) No matter how old a person gets to be, it is said that in their Mum\'s...
  January 29th, 2017 20:24