Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• IMMERSED IN TIME (Michael Edwards) Memories, recalled within the mind, and some are toxic reminders. We carry...
  April 5th, 2017 22:24
• the fabric of my soul (Willyweed) Interesting questions, asked poetically, The answers vary for each of us,...
  April 5th, 2017 22:17
• The Better Angels of Our Nature (Rrodriguez) I think this is great. It capture the tone of his address, and the...
  April 4th, 2017 21:13
• DOOR (Michael Edwards) Perfecto! I love the door image. I know not why. Perhaps an open door...
  April 4th, 2017 21:06
• Saved By A Robin. (Goldfinch60) Oh, nice one. A dream gone astray, or like you said , maybe a rescue, or...
  April 4th, 2017 20:50
• The Last Goodbye (Garry) That entire last stanza is the heart of your poetic remembrance. I had...
  April 4th, 2017 20:45
• still you remain (Willyweed) This one\'s a gem. I\'ve read it twice. \"Things I can remember? But...
  April 4th, 2017 20:41
• Born (Tony36) You are a brave man. Keep on keeping on. - Phil A.
  April 3rd, 2017 21:13
• remember (Willyweed) \"Ancient souls are with us,\" I believe this. Nothing ever disappears,...
  April 3rd, 2017 21:11
• Scrambled Message (Philip) It happened near here as well. A young girl struck down while on her phone...
  April 3rd, 2017 20:34
• MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE (Michael Edwards) Not a wine drinker, but I like your poem.Is this another form I don\'t...
  April 3rd, 2017 20:29
• THE PATH (Michael Edwards) This one is truly impressive. Not only for the pathways trail winding...
  April 1st, 2017 18:59
• I am you (Willyweed) Said many times over and over, again by so many lovers. It must be true....
  April 1st, 2017 18:48
• Santuary Bar (WriteBeLight) Well, sounds like fun, in a \"Me\" kind of way, but we all need those...
  March 31st, 2017 19:56
• THE BARMY BARD (Michael Edwards) Funny stuff. Must admit he changed the world, oops, sorry stage, with his...
  March 31st, 2017 19:50
• DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards) Great recap. In all, the only answers we wanted to hear. Phil A.
  March 30th, 2017 21:57
• BBQ (Tony36) O. K., now, I\'m hungry. Steak is it? One of my favorites. If this damn...
  March 30th, 2017 18:16
• \"shy bird\" (Willyweed) Hey, I really like this one. Your rhyming is great. The story is clever....
  March 30th, 2017 18:12
• WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION (Michael Edwards) So my favorite couple in the house with the creaking stairs, which they...
  March 30th, 2017 17:53
• WAS IT LOVE ? (5) (Michael Edwards) Thank you for that>>. What room, bedroom, kitchen, living room, or even...
  March 28th, 2017 20:03
• Let Us Cross Over The River (Pantoum Poem) (Rrodriguez) Some would say that the loss of Jackson is what cost the south the war....
  March 27th, 2017 20:28
• WAS IT LOVE (4) (Michael Edwards) Onward and upward. What\'s at the top of those stairs? Are they really...
  March 27th, 2017 15:10
• Drop of life (Wilting moon) Very, very, nice. It\'s been said that all of the Universe exists in one...
  March 26th, 2017 19:33
• Difference. (Fay Slimm.) Diversity is what makes life worth living. It is God\'s artwork. No two...
  March 26th, 2017 19:25
• Within (Augustus) The days of chivalry always seem so glamorous for women, when in truth,...
  March 26th, 2017 19:17
• WAS IT LOVE - PART3 (Michael Edwards) I have a million questions, as I\'m sure some of your other readers do as...
  March 26th, 2017 19:06
• One Day;Maybe (Garry) Oh oh, Big Brother is watching and talking. Your poem conveys a sense of...
  March 26th, 2017 18:58
• WAS IT LOVE ? (2) (Michael Edwards) Hmmm... I\'m quizzical about quinzanes. Where did you discover them? Very...
  March 25th, 2017 19:43
• My Paraiba Tourmaline Gem (Rrodriguez) I always appreciated the vivid colors of the Caribbean. These gems, are...
  March 24th, 2017 20:05
• Things That Make Me Smile (Garry) \"Fresh bread baking,\" is number one on my list.Yum. Used to pass a...
  March 24th, 2017 20:00
• WAS IT LOVE ? (Michael Edwards) Hope and love seem to almost always coexist. She saw some form of love or...
  March 24th, 2017 19:55
• Harry The Hawk (A Nort the Newt Tale ) (Tony36) I have a hawk that lives in my back yard. He\'s too small to keep the...
  March 24th, 2017 19:52
• Dave The Cat (Philip) Nice little ditty about your cat. I guess they were put on this Earth to...
  March 24th, 2017 19:49
• A Man of Infinite Leisure - alternate version. (Goldfinch60) I like this one, of the two, maybe because I relate more to this. My tag...
  March 24th, 2017 19:47
• DO YOU WANT TO GO? (Michael Edwards) A \"wee\" bit of humor. The need for the wee is too much tea .My wife and...
  March 23rd, 2017 17:15
• Survival. (Fay Slimm.) The spirit of trees is amazing. I have a tree that started growing out...
  March 23rd, 2017 16:46
• Love is a Battlefield (JustABird) I really like this one. Short and to the point. Very succinct. Love is a...
  March 22nd, 2017 20:45
• Starlit nights (Willyweed) The stars, everybody\'s favorite muse. They inspire to the Nth degree. A...
  March 22nd, 2017 20:20
• THREE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Loved the couplets. Loved the painting. Clouds in the sky? We all see...
  March 22nd, 2017 20:16
• The Unwritten Book. (Goldfinch60) The book not written. Can a poet find the least traveled path to...
  March 22nd, 2017 20:08
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Raindrops are gems, and so is this poem. Pearls, diamonds, crystaline...
  March 22nd, 2017 20:01
• Forgotten Dreams (Garry) Last two lines: Throughout you are describing a house and it continues...
  March 21st, 2017 19:51
• BENEATH A PEWTERED SKY (Michael Edwards) I\'m still working on my interpretation, but so far I think someone is...
  March 21st, 2017 18:46
• Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.) Interesting style, very \" to the point.\" A lot said in few words. We are...
  March 21st, 2017 18:29
• Smiling Jack (WriteBeLight) Nice story, nice rhyme. Honesty is the best policy, believed by so few,...
  March 21st, 2017 18:22
• Smiling Jack (WriteBeLight) Nice story, nice rhyme. Honesty is the best policy, believed by so few,...
  March 21st, 2017 18:22
• The Airman (Garry) It reminds me of all those old newsreels of men and their flying machines,...
  March 20th, 2017 21:00
• Hearts Wept. (Fay Slimm.) Losing a friend is most difficult. A poet-friend leaves behind words that...
  March 20th, 2017 13:27
• MY FIRST VILLANELLE (Michael Edwards) A great write in a highly structured form. It\'s so difficult to...
  March 20th, 2017 13:15
• Full of Joy Now (Rrodriguez) Mother T. also said, \"One filled with joy, preaches, without...
  March 20th, 2017 13:06
• something there is (William mcgreal) I think you\'re lucky to have found this. It\'s brilliant. Save it for...
  March 18th, 2017 22:31
• (a)live (---mari0) A fine distinction, finely presented. To be living is not be alive,...
  March 18th, 2017 22:21
• One Half without the Other. (Niallprideaux) Nice \"stream of consciousness\" writing. Here in mind, gone in actuality....
  March 18th, 2017 19:35
• Death (Poems_) The Grim Reaper cometh, A collector of souls, and we are all ...next. Got...
  March 18th, 2017 19:30
• YACKY ZEBRAS (Michael Edwards) Yacky zebras permeate the NFL. You may not understand, but your American...
  March 18th, 2017 19:06
• An Omen. (Fay Slimm.) Better the owl than the rats. I felt the crumbling walls reading this....
  March 18th, 2017 18:46
• Found Absent. (Fay Slimm.) My God, how long ago was this ended, child labor laws and all. What...
  March 17th, 2017 21:09
• Ugly War! (Rrodriguez) War will end when the would be soldiers and would be victims refuse to...
  March 17th, 2017 20:52
• THE MAN NEXT DOOR (Michael Edwards) Poor chap. I feel for him. Maybe we all get to where he\'s at from time to...
  March 17th, 2017 20:43
• Late (Fi00na) We never have enough time. There is so much work to be done. Stay...
  March 17th, 2017 20:36
• Racing (---mari0) I was going to say that it\'s between you and him, but anxiety ( if that...
  March 16th, 2017 21:20
• Dinner in the Dark. (Goldfinch60) Why does everyone want to be a Vampire? To me it would be a horrible...
  March 16th, 2017 21:10
• Truth\'s Trust........ (Fay Slimm.) Trust is a necessary part of any relationship. You speak of it\'s absolute...
  March 16th, 2017 21:06
• THE DRESS (Michael Edwards) We can dream, but then we have to face reality. Well spoken, Michael. And...
  March 16th, 2017 21:02
• LIMERICKS 37, 38 & 39 (Michael Edwards) \"Tide,\" the detergent to clean the \"old sailor\'s hide?\" Sorry, poor...
  March 15th, 2017 20:20
• Tribute To Vincent. (Fay Slimm.) Great tribute. Obviously you are a fan of the man. A painter ahead of his...
  March 14th, 2017 14:51
• THE RAIN THAT WASHED THE SKY (Michael Edwards) A shared moment embraced in the arms of he, with whom she chose to share...
  March 14th, 2017 14:47
• on a winters day (Willyweed) Another testament of true love. Beautifully written and presented here....
  March 14th, 2017 14:40
• A While (Augustus) Best of luck. Hang in there. - Phil A.
  March 13th, 2017 18:59
• Child 2 (Tony36) A living Picasso no doubt. Modern impressionism. Reminds me of when mine...
  March 13th, 2017 18:58
• her name Elenore (Willyweed) Almost Poe-ish. A stark and scary tale of lost love, lost mind, and...
  March 13th, 2017 18:49
• A COUPLE OF LITTLE \'UNS (Michael Edwards) Wow, international acclaim, well done. Couple of nice ditties also. _ Phil...
  March 13th, 2017 18:45
• Sun\'s Out (WriteBeLight) !8-20 up your way, a little lighter here. I had thought it might be over....
  March 13th, 2017 18:42
• White Nectar. (Fay Slimm.) The old time milk maid\'s work was long and hard. Today\'s modern...
  March 13th, 2017 18:34
• Space (---mari0) Worlds apart, emotionally or physically? It doesn\'t matter, they are the...
  March 12th, 2017 16:02
• You and me (Poems_) The magic of the first kiss. The great moment of loves first blush. You...
  March 12th, 2017 11:49
• Mind Melt (Mouse_Mango) Erotic imaginings or a longing from separation, either way a formidable...
  March 12th, 2017 11:43
• Wait (---mari0) Brilliant work. Loved the format and the message. Missing or having lost...
  March 12th, 2017 11:40
• Singing On. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful expression of hope and love. To reunite in spirit with our one...
  March 12th, 2017 11:36
• Together Forever (Rrodriguez) Amazing how that one special person can change your life forever. It is as...
  March 12th, 2017 11:32
• Words on This Page. (Goldfinch60) \" It\'s only words and words are all I have, \" from a song lost in my...
  March 12th, 2017 10:02
• DALI (Michael Edwards) Great painting, great write. I keep saying that about your work, but it...
  March 12th, 2017 09:56
• Under The Canopy of a Tree (Rrodriguez) When we meditate, most often we seem to ponder peaceful ideas. Is it human...
  March 12th, 2017 09:43
• His Due (Augustus) Two halves to the same soul? I don\'t think the soul makes conscience...
  March 11th, 2017 19:32
• The time... (Poems_) Nice write that saved my day as I sit here having just shoveled snow,...
  March 11th, 2017 15:48
• Before my Life (Caden_Mercer10) Death stops us all. What we see before us is mostly what we choose to see....
  March 11th, 2017 15:42
• Hidden In The Views (WriteBeLight) WBL, I get it, we don\'t live on here, we actually have lives and real...
  March 11th, 2017 15:38
• Waterside (Byepolarbear) The blues personified, immortal as we\'ve all assumed, and now a stranger...
  March 11th, 2017 15:28
• Together. (Fay Slimm.) Unity of spirit, so often dreamed of, so seldom realized. The world could...
  March 11th, 2017 15:21
• touched (Willyweed) A long, long time ago she touched my soul, and she\'s still here with me...
  March 11th, 2017 14:44
• A Single Tree (Rrodriguez) Innocence was lost in that Garden, and again on the hill called Calvary,...
  March 10th, 2017 22:01
• the thorn bird (Willyweed) A coincidence or a messenger of hope, sent to lift the spirits? Nature has...
  March 10th, 2017 21:53
• Where the Garden Grows (Augustus) A garden gives both beauty and nourishment, flowers and vegetables, and a...
  March 10th, 2017 21:37
• What Is It (Tony36) I give up. I was about to say a pen, because it was on your desk, but now...
  March 10th, 2017 21:31
• LIMERICKS 19, 20 & 21 (Michael Edwards) First- I love the colors in your artwork. 2nd - # 21 gets my vote. The...
  March 9th, 2017 18:27
• Whisperings. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully written. How could he say no? A siren song for sure, luring...
  March 9th, 2017 17:58
• Yoga Practice (Philip) Yoga is not an exercise for the body only, but a mental or spiritual...
  March 9th, 2017 17:53
• TIME (Michael Edwards) Man and Nature. Man is constantly getting a good laugh from the wiles of...
  March 8th, 2017 13:26
• Friendship\'s Love. (Fay Slimm.) Well spoken verse on friendship. We are lucky if we have one true friend...
  March 8th, 2017 13:13
• Nevermore (Tristan Robert Lange) Nevermore, the raven of death, closes your austere vision of war and...
  March 7th, 2017 21:00