Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• her name Elenore (Willyweed) Almost Poe-ish. A stark and scary tale of lost love, lost mind, and...
  March 13th, 2017 18:49
• A COUPLE OF LITTLE \'UNS (Michael Edwards) Wow, international acclaim, well done. Couple of nice ditties also. _ Phil...
  March 13th, 2017 18:45
• Sun\'s Out (WriteBeLight) !8-20 up your way, a little lighter here. I had thought it might be over....
  March 13th, 2017 18:42
• White Nectar. (Fay Slimm.) The old time milk maid\'s work was long and hard. Today\'s modern...
  March 13th, 2017 18:34
• Space (---mari0) Worlds apart, emotionally or physically? It doesn\'t matter, they are the...
  March 12th, 2017 16:02
• You and me (Poems_) The magic of the first kiss. The great moment of loves first blush. You...
  March 12th, 2017 11:49
• Mind Melt (Mouse_Mango) Erotic imaginings or a longing from separation, either way a formidable...
  March 12th, 2017 11:43
• Wait (---mari0) Brilliant work. Loved the format and the message. Missing or having lost...
  March 12th, 2017 11:40
• Singing On. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful expression of hope and love. To reunite in spirit with our one...
  March 12th, 2017 11:36
• Together Forever (Rrodriguez) Amazing how that one special person can change your life forever. It is as...
  March 12th, 2017 11:32
• Words on This Page. (Goldfinch60) \" It\'s only words and words are all I have, \" from a song lost in my...
  March 12th, 2017 10:02
• DALI (Michael Edwards) Great painting, great write. I keep saying that about your work, but it...
  March 12th, 2017 09:56
• Under The Canopy of a Tree (Rrodriguez) When we meditate, most often we seem to ponder peaceful ideas. Is it human...
  March 12th, 2017 09:43
• His Due (Augustus) Two halves to the same soul? I don\'t think the soul makes conscience...
  March 11th, 2017 19:32
• The time... (Poems_) Nice write that saved my day as I sit here having just shoveled snow,...
  March 11th, 2017 15:48
• Before my Life (Caden_Mercer10) Death stops us all. What we see before us is mostly what we choose to see....
  March 11th, 2017 15:42
• Hidden In The Views (WriteBeLight) WBL, I get it, we don\'t live on here, we actually have lives and real...
  March 11th, 2017 15:38
• Waterside (Byepolarbear) The blues personified, immortal as we\'ve all assumed, and now a stranger...
  March 11th, 2017 15:28
• Together. (Fay Slimm.) Unity of spirit, so often dreamed of, so seldom realized. The world could...
  March 11th, 2017 15:21
• touched (Willyweed) A long, long time ago she touched my soul, and she\'s still here with me...
  March 11th, 2017 14:44
• A Single Tree (Rrodriguez) Innocence was lost in that Garden, and again on the hill called Calvary,...
  March 10th, 2017 22:01
• the thorn bird (Willyweed) A coincidence or a messenger of hope, sent to lift the spirits? Nature has...
  March 10th, 2017 21:53
• Where the Garden Grows (Augustus) A garden gives both beauty and nourishment, flowers and vegetables, and a...
  March 10th, 2017 21:37
• What Is It (Tony36) I give up. I was about to say a pen, because it was on your desk, but now...
  March 10th, 2017 21:31
• LIMERICKS 19, 20 & 21 (Michael Edwards) First- I love the colors in your artwork. 2nd - # 21 gets my vote. The...
  March 9th, 2017 18:27
• Whisperings. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully written. How could he say no? A siren song for sure, luring...
  March 9th, 2017 17:58
• Yoga Practice (Philip) Yoga is not an exercise for the body only, but a mental or spiritual...
  March 9th, 2017 17:53
• TIME (Michael Edwards) Man and Nature. Man is constantly getting a good laugh from the wiles of...
  March 8th, 2017 13:26
• Friendship\'s Love. (Fay Slimm.) Well spoken verse on friendship. We are lucky if we have one true friend...
  March 8th, 2017 13:13
• Nevermore (Tristan Robert Lange) Nevermore, the raven of death, closes your austere vision of war and...
  March 7th, 2017 21:00
• Ease (---mari0) Exceptional. \"Hearing a smile,\" that\'s brilliant. And with \"it\'s the...
  March 7th, 2017 19:19
• Where It All Went Wrong (Mouse_Mango) First poem? Welcome. A good one to start with. I liked how you went from...
  March 7th, 2017 19:05
• Timeless (ToniSears17) Beautiful images, similes and metaphors galore, make for a lovely poem. We...
  March 7th, 2017 18:17
• Openess (Augustus) Very spiritual, indeed. A great thought on life and coping. Brilliant and...
  March 7th, 2017 18:12
• Fear (Izzi Lynn) From one who is old and withered, let me say that you should listen to...
  March 7th, 2017 18:08
• Strange forbidden fruit (Desaru) The ill tasting fruit, to represent the ills of a lifetime. We tend to...
  March 7th, 2017 18:01
• About Pen brook Manor (Willyweed) Nice tale of spectral shenanigans against an unsuspecting motorist....
  March 7th, 2017 17:46
• A COCKNEYS LOT (Chapter One) (Michael Edwards) Wicked awesome Michael. Just more slang from the Boston locale. Within the...
  March 7th, 2017 17:35
• Cutting Free. (Fay Slimm.) \"Cutting free\" means leaving behind the baggage of the past, finding a...
  March 7th, 2017 17:22
• Being Ready. (Fay Slimm.) I really liked Stanza 4. \"Hedgerows dancing to Spring\'s evocative...
  March 6th, 2017 14:54
• a gray November day (Willyweed) Another haunted happening, or justa fictional story. Either way, well...
  March 6th, 2017 14:35
• A UNION NOW REGRETTED (Michael Edwards) He\'s gone and she\'s concerned about the future. I have to say that I...
  March 6th, 2017 14:27
• Damaged Soul (Rrodriguez) Sad indeed. Well expressed by you. Perhaps it will aide your friend in...
  March 5th, 2017 18:47
• Spring Knows. (Fay Slimm.) Can\'t get here fast enough. The resilience of Nature is truly amazing....
  March 5th, 2017 18:18
• bruised purple (Willyweed) \"Bruised and purple,\" Some physical, some psychological, but we all...
  March 5th, 2017 18:10
• THE MAIDEN (Michael Edwards) Haiku for a maiden in search of love. Nice image. - Phil A.
  March 5th, 2017 18:00
• LIMERICKS 16, 17 & 18. (Michael Edwards) On the limericks - humorous as always, and I agree on Nottingham. On the...
  March 4th, 2017 20:28
• Writing 3 (Tony36) Nice write, Tony. - Phil A.
  March 4th, 2017 20:23
• Sales (Augustus) Forced by Nature to, once again, adapt. Something we\'ve done all of our...
  March 4th, 2017 20:20
• Time\'s Needle. (Fay Slimm.) The majesty of the morning Sun. Chasing the darkness and spreading light...
  March 4th, 2017 20:10
• Solmonet (Rrodriguez) The beauty of the setting Sun, captured in poetic style, and painted with...
  March 4th, 2017 20:03
• An Evening Stroll With Grandpa (Rrodriguez) Precious moments indeed. I believe it is the return of innocent eyes that...
  March 3rd, 2017 22:02
• Creation (Tony36) Hold on to your beliefs, Tony. Surely you will be rewarded in Heaven. -...
  March 3rd, 2017 21:55
• Yearning to Sail (Augustus) Thought that photo might have been of the \"Eagle.\" U.S. Coast Guard...
  March 3rd, 2017 21:53
• Mother; I remain (Willyweed) The bad seed, the black sheep, the one who turns out bad: the mother\'s...
  March 3rd, 2017 21:46
• Live in Peace - FIBS (Goldfinch60) Interesting form. New to me. You\'ve mastered it with this piece....
  March 3rd, 2017 21:34
• THE VIEW FROM BEYOND (Michael Edwards) I said to myself that I wasn\'t going to compliment your painting, again....
  March 3rd, 2017 21:29
• Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.) Man\'s struggles against the sea: Storms, huge tides, floods, tidal waves...
  March 3rd, 2017 21:12
• Drought (Quemis) One minute it\'s soft and beautiful, and then it\'s gut wrenching- raw....
  March 2nd, 2017 14:11
• Over thinking ~ An acrostic (Poems_) Try Yoga. Great for clearing the mind and beneficial for your health. Nice...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:50
• Watson and Holmes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60) Two of my favorite characters. Read all, watched all, of the books and...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:45
• \"Heart Beat Stars\" (Augustus) It appears the universe offers up endless possibilities, not just...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:39
• B.O. Bomb (WriteBeLight) Saw it on the news last night. Maybe they\'ll rebuild with better...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:29
• death was a lady (Willyweed) Death is almost always portrayed as either a shadowy figure or a horrible...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:19
• THREE LITTLE WORDS (Michael Edwards) Wisdom of the ages. - I do whatever the voices in my wife\'s head tell me...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:09
• Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.) Love it. A very graphic description of the pain and hurt felt from...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:01
• I am the Poet (Tony36) I like this one Tony. It says so much about the power of the pen. The...
  March 1st, 2017 21:42
• Lost (Augustus) No stars? Scary thought. What would happen? Absolute chaos. And I think we...
  March 1st, 2017 21:38
• dance with my shadow (Willyweed) Time to lighten the load before you go overboard. Deep six the clutter of...
  March 1st, 2017 21:31
• Get Off It! (WriteBeLight) Very humorous. I hate driving, and heavy traffic only makes it worse....
  March 1st, 2017 21:25
• For Elizabeth (Will Hiltz) As time passes memories become jumbled together. If clouded by fears,...
  March 1st, 2017 21:12
• THE RETURN (Michael Edwards) Wow, great write. Very descriptive. It rings of intimacy and love, of...
  March 1st, 2017 21:01
• Live Silver. (Fay Slimm.) Images that jump from the paper to the reader: of herring, sails, boats,...
  March 1st, 2017 20:50
• Coveted. (Fay Slimm.) A great write, full of history, and description of what was a very...
  February 28th, 2017 13:14
• The Old Man (Goldfinch60) Yes indeed, we all get there eventually, and we tend to reflect and ponder...
  February 28th, 2017 13:00
• Leaving Nashville (Will Hiltz) I believe you\'ve captured the essence of country music in your piece. Can...
  February 28th, 2017 12:56
• Party\'s Over (WriteBeLight) Tough choices in life are not always easily made, but sometimes we just...
  February 28th, 2017 12:40
• PREDICTION (Michael Edwards) Live for today, plan for tomorrow. Life is short. Enjoy it while you can....
  February 28th, 2017 12:05
• Odd One In (WriteBeLight) Loneliness is a blight on the spirit, although not so much at work if you...
  February 27th, 2017 15:16
• Out on the promenade (Willyweed) A moonlit night on the promenade, a great setting for love and dance. This...
  February 27th, 2017 15:07
• TRANSIENCE (Michael Edwards) Beautiful Michael. I loved your play with words. I\'m torn between someone...
  February 27th, 2017 15:02
• TIME TO GO (Michael Edwards) I usually tell her I left and came back. And she say\'s \"You didn\'t?\" I...
  February 26th, 2017 21:22
• Impossible to get through (Poems_) You have a poet\'s heart and a brilliant mind. We all spend many, many...
  February 26th, 2017 21:17
• Love\'s Due. (Fay Slimm.) Love, music, and song, together they bring hope or misery, depending on...
  February 26th, 2017 20:50
• Acquainted with Much Pain (Rrodriguez) It seems that pain and the night are always together. One amplifies the...
  February 26th, 2017 20:40
• New Depths. (Fay Slimm.) The depth of one\'s soul cannot be measured in real terms only in mystical...
  February 26th, 2017 20:21
• Fearful hope (Isabel Chelisia Villa) You only get one Dad. So make the most of it, but do not stand for any...
  February 26th, 2017 20:16
• I went outside to pick up some leaves (Rrodriguez) \"Tears of many trees\" is brilliant.This entire piece has many wonderful...
  February 26th, 2017 20:11
• Time Bandage (WriteBeLight) A \"Time Bandage.\" You put it on and the wound underneath enters a time...
  February 22nd, 2017 15:24
• Remand (Quemis) Fertility and fallow land, ending in dust. We all end in dust, everything...
  February 22nd, 2017 15:14
• MEMORIES (Michael Edwards) I have to agree with Fay a bit, I love the flow of your words in this one....
  February 22nd, 2017 15:03
• An Astronomer Drives His Wife Home (Will Hiltz) Beautiful poem. Great images, great musings, man is so inconsequential to...
  February 22nd, 2017 14:57
• What was the reason? (Poems_) True love never dies. It simply never was. True love is between two...
  February 22nd, 2017 14:51
• Baby give me time. (Bella cortez) I\'m seeing a relationship about to be broken up, but not just now. One is...
  February 22nd, 2017 14:41
• Dreams (Isabel Chelisia Villa) Your life is no longer just your own. It is your\'s and his. You must go...
  February 22nd, 2017 14:28
• Three Faces. (Fay Slimm.) What to do with the blank page? Fill it with meaningful musings such as...
  February 22nd, 2017 14:16
• Sheen (Augustus) Loved it. Reads like Sci-Fi. Asteroid crashes into the sea, strange things...
  February 21st, 2017 15:13
• Anticipation (Stephanie Showers) Wow! That sense of a bond when you first meet someone, the commonality of...
  February 21st, 2017 11:34
• AUTUMN (VictoriaOliviaGreene) Nature rules us all. Leaves are are her way of rewarding us. Truly a...
  February 21st, 2017 10:51
• Pain In The Glass (WriteBeLight) I\'ve lived in the Northeast for 73 years and I love it here. Where else...
  February 21st, 2017 10:40