Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• don\'t hesitate (Willyweed) The hateful suffer in misery. The loving live in joy. Two paths: one like...
  April 17th, 2017 19:41
• Unsung Whispers. (Fay Slimm.) I think as writers we have more of an affinity for quiet than most. To me,...
  April 14th, 2017 21:11
• Lily of Easter (WriteBeLight) Lilies are such beautiful flowers, and on this weekend so significant....
  April 14th, 2017 21:06
• COMICAL COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Humor and sculpting, Wow! Funny stuff that, the jokes not the sculptures....
  April 14th, 2017 20:59
• UNFOLDED (Down the rabbithole) I like this one. No surprise there, so well written. I especially liked...
  April 13th, 2017 20:06
• Scrambled Message (Philip) Too much technology, not enough humanity. 1984 is coming. Ear phones in,...
  April 13th, 2017 19:52
• LEICESTER STATION (Michael Edwards) Terrific poem, great use of historic and modern comparison. Hand-wound...
  April 13th, 2017 19:46
• I am the traveler (Willyweed) To be the universal traveler, roaming the great expanse of space, sounds...
  April 12th, 2017 12:02
• Tribal Organisation. (Fay Slimm.) Learned a lot from this one. It\'s almost human like. Our leaders tend to...
  April 12th, 2017 11:48
• Neighbour Watching (Goldfinch60) Our tongues are going to melt away as we adapt to the external mode of...
  April 12th, 2017 11:41
• THE UNKNOWN MAN (Michael Edwards) Rumor has it that this is a terrific poem for one who can barely scribble....
  April 12th, 2017 11:26
• A City Day (Nameless) Boston is fantastic day or night! ( Go Sox, Go Pats!!) You\'re right...
  April 11th, 2017 15:57
• THREE SMILES (Michael Edwards) Great fun. I\'m inclined toward number three, trash mail Why worry about...
  April 11th, 2017 15:51
• We Deserve It. (Fay Slimm.) Yeah, let\'s all make over our hearts. Let\'s lose the greed, the lust for...
  April 11th, 2017 15:39
• Sunday in the Garden (Willyweed) A beautiful poem for children...of all ages. The optimism of it\'s message...
  April 11th, 2017 15:33
• Victorious. (Fay Slimm.) Love is the answer to everything. Human emotions are defenseless against...
  April 10th, 2017 20:44
• MY PLACE (Michael Edwards) How do you do watercolors without a water supply? Nice little poem about...
  April 10th, 2017 20:38
• The Compass (Rrodriguez) It will be a brave new world some day, when Man can look past his own...
  April 10th, 2017 20:32
• unfolding (Willyweed) A very hopeful and uplifting message. Sunrise, Sunset, all is well....
  April 10th, 2017 20:23
• SECLUSION (Michael Edwards) A quiet place for art and the art of love. What more could a person want?...
  April 9th, 2017 19:10
• BINDING VOWS (Michael Edwards) Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting...
  April 8th, 2017 21:34
• Whale-Play. (Fay Slimm.) And it wove a great tale indeed. I\'ve been whale watching and it was a...
  April 8th, 2017 21:25
• wild rabbit (Willyweed) Sort of like Willy through the looking glass, follow the rabbit and see...
  April 8th, 2017 21:19
• Who I Am. (Fay Slimm.) Sounds like a Declaration of Independence. Hope it all works out for you....
  April 7th, 2017 20:18
• Season Of Respite (WriteBeLight) Thank God, I do believe it has broken. I sense Spring in the air. Time to...
  April 7th, 2017 20:12
• IS TODAY TODAY ? (Michael Edwards) Is that a drawing of your home? You wish. Whatever today is, tomorrow will...
  April 7th, 2017 20:01
• Lost To Reality. (Goldfinch60) It takes a brave heart to deal with what you have to, and only a love...
  April 7th, 2017 09:39
• Wonderment. (Fay Slimm.) Thanks for the translation. I needed that .A sultry and sensuous...
  April 6th, 2017 19:18
• words 3 (Tony36) Great sentiment, full of truth. A nice poem for all to read. - Phil A.
  April 6th, 2017 16:06
• AUTUMN SUN (Michael Edwards) Beautiful words, \"ripened rays,\" \"cobwebs newly spun,\" etc. A fresh...
  April 6th, 2017 16:05
• \"not just a women\" (Willyweed) Love is eternal. This is the message I get from this. An enjoyable little...
  April 6th, 2017 15:51
• The Wonders of God\'s Creation (Rrodriguez) Certainly paints a beautiful picture, you intended result for sure. Why...
  April 5th, 2017 22:30
• IMMERSED IN TIME (Michael Edwards) Memories, recalled within the mind, and some are toxic reminders. We carry...
  April 5th, 2017 22:24
• the fabric of my soul (Willyweed) Interesting questions, asked poetically, The answers vary for each of us,...
  April 5th, 2017 22:17
• The Better Angels of Our Nature (Rrodriguez) I think this is great. It capture the tone of his address, and the...
  April 4th, 2017 21:13
• DOOR (Michael Edwards) Perfecto! I love the door image. I know not why. Perhaps an open door...
  April 4th, 2017 21:06
• Saved By A Robin. (Goldfinch60) Oh, nice one. A dream gone astray, or like you said , maybe a rescue, or...
  April 4th, 2017 20:50
• The Last Goodbye (Garry) That entire last stanza is the heart of your poetic remembrance. I had...
  April 4th, 2017 20:45
• still you remain (Willyweed) This one\'s a gem. I\'ve read it twice. \"Things I can remember? But...
  April 4th, 2017 20:41
• Born (Tony36) You are a brave man. Keep on keeping on. - Phil A.
  April 3rd, 2017 21:13
• remember (Willyweed) \"Ancient souls are with us,\" I believe this. Nothing ever disappears,...
  April 3rd, 2017 21:11
• Scrambled Message (Philip) It happened near here as well. A young girl struck down while on her phone...
  April 3rd, 2017 20:34
• MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE (Michael Edwards) Not a wine drinker, but I like your poem.Is this another form I don\'t...
  April 3rd, 2017 20:29
• THE PATH (Michael Edwards) This one is truly impressive. Not only for the pathways trail winding...
  April 1st, 2017 18:59
• I am you (Willyweed) Said many times over and over, again by so many lovers. It must be true....
  April 1st, 2017 18:48
• Santuary Bar (WriteBeLight) Well, sounds like fun, in a \"Me\" kind of way, but we all need those...
  March 31st, 2017 19:56
• THE BARMY BARD (Michael Edwards) Funny stuff. Must admit he changed the world, oops, sorry stage, with his...
  March 31st, 2017 19:50
• DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards) Great recap. In all, the only answers we wanted to hear. Phil A.
  March 30th, 2017 21:57
• BBQ (Tony36) O. K., now, I\'m hungry. Steak is it? One of my favorites. If this damn...
  March 30th, 2017 18:16
• \"shy bird\" (Willyweed) Hey, I really like this one. Your rhyming is great. The story is clever....
  March 30th, 2017 18:12
• WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION (Michael Edwards) So my favorite couple in the house with the creaking stairs, which they...
  March 30th, 2017 17:53
• WAS IT LOVE ? (5) (Michael Edwards) Thank you for that>>. What room, bedroom, kitchen, living room, or even...
  March 28th, 2017 20:03
• Let Us Cross Over The River (Pantoum Poem) (Rrodriguez) Some would say that the loss of Jackson is what cost the south the war....
  March 27th, 2017 20:28
• WAS IT LOVE (4) (Michael Edwards) Onward and upward. What\'s at the top of those stairs? Are they really...
  March 27th, 2017 15:10
• Drop of life (Wilting moon) Very, very, nice. It\'s been said that all of the Universe exists in one...
  March 26th, 2017 19:33
• Difference. (Fay Slimm.) Diversity is what makes life worth living. It is God\'s artwork. No two...
  March 26th, 2017 19:25
• Within (Augustus) The days of chivalry always seem so glamorous for women, when in truth,...
  March 26th, 2017 19:17
• WAS IT LOVE - PART3 (Michael Edwards) I have a million questions, as I\'m sure some of your other readers do as...
  March 26th, 2017 19:06
• One Day;Maybe (Garry) Oh oh, Big Brother is watching and talking. Your poem conveys a sense of...
  March 26th, 2017 18:58
• WAS IT LOVE ? (2) (Michael Edwards) Hmmm... I\'m quizzical about quinzanes. Where did you discover them? Very...
  March 25th, 2017 19:43
• My Paraiba Tourmaline Gem (Rrodriguez) I always appreciated the vivid colors of the Caribbean. These gems, are...
  March 24th, 2017 20:05
• Things That Make Me Smile (Garry) \"Fresh bread baking,\" is number one on my list.Yum. Used to pass a...
  March 24th, 2017 20:00
• WAS IT LOVE ? (Michael Edwards) Hope and love seem to almost always coexist. She saw some form of love or...
  March 24th, 2017 19:55
• Harry The Hawk (A Nort the Newt Tale ) (Tony36) I have a hawk that lives in my back yard. He\'s too small to keep the...
  March 24th, 2017 19:52
• Dave The Cat (Philip) Nice little ditty about your cat. I guess they were put on this Earth to...
  March 24th, 2017 19:49
• A Man of Infinite Leisure - alternate version. (Goldfinch60) I like this one, of the two, maybe because I relate more to this. My tag...
  March 24th, 2017 19:47
• DO YOU WANT TO GO? (Michael Edwards) A \"wee\" bit of humor. The need for the wee is too much tea .My wife and...
  March 23rd, 2017 17:15
• Survival. (Fay Slimm.) The spirit of trees is amazing. I have a tree that started growing out...
  March 23rd, 2017 16:46
• Love is a Battlefield (JustABird) I really like this one. Short and to the point. Very succinct. Love is a...
  March 22nd, 2017 20:45
• Starlit nights (Willyweed) The stars, everybody\'s favorite muse. They inspire to the Nth degree. A...
  March 22nd, 2017 20:20
• THREE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Loved the couplets. Loved the painting. Clouds in the sky? We all see...
  March 22nd, 2017 20:16
• The Unwritten Book. (Goldfinch60) The book not written. Can a poet find the least traveled path to...
  March 22nd, 2017 20:08
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Raindrops are gems, and so is this poem. Pearls, diamonds, crystaline...
  March 22nd, 2017 20:01
• Forgotten Dreams (Garry) Last two lines: Throughout you are describing a house and it continues...
  March 21st, 2017 19:51
• BENEATH A PEWTERED SKY (Michael Edwards) I\'m still working on my interpretation, but so far I think someone is...
  March 21st, 2017 18:46
• Stirrings. (Fay Slimm.) Interesting style, very \" to the point.\" A lot said in few words. We are...
  March 21st, 2017 18:29
• Smiling Jack (WriteBeLight) Nice story, nice rhyme. Honesty is the best policy, believed by so few,...
  March 21st, 2017 18:22
• Smiling Jack (WriteBeLight) Nice story, nice rhyme. Honesty is the best policy, believed by so few,...
  March 21st, 2017 18:22
• The Airman (Garry) It reminds me of all those old newsreels of men and their flying machines,...
  March 20th, 2017 21:00
• Hearts Wept. (Fay Slimm.) Losing a friend is most difficult. A poet-friend leaves behind words that...
  March 20th, 2017 13:27
• MY FIRST VILLANELLE (Michael Edwards) A great write in a highly structured form. It\'s so difficult to...
  March 20th, 2017 13:15
• Full of Joy Now (Rrodriguez) Mother T. also said, \"One filled with joy, preaches, without...
  March 20th, 2017 13:06
• something there is (William mcgreal) I think you\'re lucky to have found this. It\'s brilliant. Save it for...
  March 18th, 2017 22:31
• (a)live (---mari0) A fine distinction, finely presented. To be living is not be alive,...
  March 18th, 2017 22:21
• One Half without the Other. (Niallprideaux) Nice \"stream of consciousness\" writing. Here in mind, gone in actuality....
  March 18th, 2017 19:35
• Death (Poems_) The Grim Reaper cometh, A collector of souls, and we are all ...next. Got...
  March 18th, 2017 19:30
• YACKY ZEBRAS (Michael Edwards) Yacky zebras permeate the NFL. You may not understand, but your American...
  March 18th, 2017 19:06
• An Omen. (Fay Slimm.) Better the owl than the rats. I felt the crumbling walls reading this....
  March 18th, 2017 18:46
• Found Absent. (Fay Slimm.) My God, how long ago was this ended, child labor laws and all. What...
  March 17th, 2017 21:09
• Ugly War! (Rrodriguez) War will end when the would be soldiers and would be victims refuse to...
  March 17th, 2017 20:52
• THE MAN NEXT DOOR (Michael Edwards) Poor chap. I feel for him. Maybe we all get to where he\'s at from time to...
  March 17th, 2017 20:43
• Late (Fi00na) We never have enough time. There is so much work to be done. Stay...
  March 17th, 2017 20:36
• Racing (---mari0) I was going to say that it\'s between you and him, but anxiety ( if that...
  March 16th, 2017 21:20
• Dinner in the Dark. (Goldfinch60) Why does everyone want to be a Vampire? To me it would be a horrible...
  March 16th, 2017 21:10
• Truth\'s Trust........ (Fay Slimm.) Trust is a necessary part of any relationship. You speak of it\'s absolute...
  March 16th, 2017 21:06
• THE DRESS (Michael Edwards) We can dream, but then we have to face reality. Well spoken, Michael. And...
  March 16th, 2017 21:02
• LIMERICKS 37, 38 & 39 (Michael Edwards) \"Tide,\" the detergent to clean the \"old sailor\'s hide?\" Sorry, poor...
  March 15th, 2017 20:20
• Tribute To Vincent. (Fay Slimm.) Great tribute. Obviously you are a fan of the man. A painter ahead of his...
  March 14th, 2017 14:51
• THE RAIN THAT WASHED THE SKY (Michael Edwards) A shared moment embraced in the arms of he, with whom she chose to share...
  March 14th, 2017 14:47
• on a winters day (Willyweed) Another testament of true love. Beautifully written and presented here....
  March 14th, 2017 14:40