Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Wordiku Eight. (Goldfinch60)
Do you know what happens if you put \"a bomb in a bull?\" - It\'s...
May 19th, 2022 13:44 - Imagine without \'F\' (Rozina)
No guitar knowledge here, but I did enjoy your \" never give up\"...
May 19th, 2022 13:13 - Sad Day (Paul Bell)
Very well constructed. Humorous, and a cool play on words. I laughed. What...
May 17th, 2022 15:45 - sunset (Hazel_Blossom)
A beautiful poem. \"Little things\" \"kept in boxes for rainy days\", such...
May 17th, 2022 14:50 - Haiku To Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
Brilliant Haiku and Senryu. Perfectly executed. Love your Senryu. It...
May 17th, 2022 14:24 - Its All in the Way that She Eddies and Flows (Neville)
Time to raise the sails and head for the open seas. Sometimes you\'re...
May 12th, 2022 21:56 - Throwing sticks (Dusk arising)
May the days on the beach linger ever longer for you both. What a terrific...
May 10th, 2022 11:15 - Mirror dimension (Kitty the naughty poet)
Nice. Very mystical. \"As my essence sits on the floor,\" could be the...
May 10th, 2022 11:06 - Tactics (Fay Slimm.)
The road to a sustained relationship is littered with nodes of decision...
May 6th, 2022 15:03 - All the Words He Left Trapped in Her Throat (Neville)
Funny how one small moment in time, when actions speak louder than words,...
May 6th, 2022 14:45 - Tea? (Kitty the naughty poet)
You seem well steeped in tease -oops - I meant teas. I\'m with you on...
May 2nd, 2022 14:54 - Fish Supper (Neville)
Now that you taught me how, I think I\'ll go fishing. This poem was as...
May 2nd, 2022 14:36 - Upon Reflections Shattered (Neville)
Let\'s not get angry at the mirror and crack it \"well and truly,\" just...
May 1st, 2022 19:21 - Like Some Old Discarded Stocking (Neville)
Careful! You may start a fashion trend. If life serves you lemons... make...
April 30th, 2022 16:38 - First Flush (Fay Slimm.)
A great expression of Spring\'s arrival. Color returns to replace the drab...
April 25th, 2022 19:41 - Wind Dancer .. a Haiku (Neville)
Dancing in the wind. Somewhere off a cliff I imagine. Free to be \"wild.\"...
April 25th, 2022 19:29 - Try To Remember (Bella Shepard)
\" Let me tell you Bella, they\'re most likely there in your pocketbook.\"...
April 24th, 2022 21:13 - A Snowfall (Peppino)
Well written. Enjoyed it. And how kind of you to feed them. It seemed I...
April 24th, 2022 21:03 - REWRITE THE PAST📜 (ChrisLyn🕊)
A good write, O.K. better than good. What struck me about it was the tone,...
April 24th, 2022 20:38 - Inside Her Pants #2 (Neville)
A funny place to be keeping your pets
even if one is Man\'s Best Friend....
April 24th, 2022 20:19 - raft of reeds (Dusk arising)
\"lies\" often spell the end of many things, \"bonds\" included. Terrific...
April 12th, 2022 11:47 - So Ready (Fay Slimm.)
Cries from the inner self rise up in the twilight of sleep. Moments are...
April 12th, 2022 11:42 - Gooder than Good Even (Neville)
\"by a mile and a smile,\" and a half! Does that mean this is Neopoetic....
April 12th, 2022 11:28 - Echo (Almost)
Think of yourself first. Let others come to you. The right partner will...
February 2nd, 2022 20:27 - Oh Summer – Tra La La (Doggerel Dave)
\"Oh Summer\" - How I miss her. Sub-zero temps, \"feets\" of snow, and...
February 2nd, 2022 20:00 - Comingness (Fay Slimm.)
A very descriptive write. Mornings are the best time of day, their...
January 30th, 2022 20:43 - Cygnus RA21h46m32.24S-D32’53’ (Neville)
A \"shining brightly\" star becomes a fond remembrance of a loved one. The...
January 30th, 2022 20:25 - Old Age (Abantika Chakraborty)
A powerful piece of writing. It is a precise vision of a dream and...
January 30th, 2022 20:14 - What it All Boils Down To (Neville)
If poetry is a sin, we are all going to burn in hell. Probably worth it...
January 28th, 2022 21:10 - She Danced (Buzz Bray)
A sweet romantic poem filled with remembrances of her and the joy she...
January 28th, 2022 20:46 - Missed (Fay Slimm.)
Words as majestic as that oak tree. Such a loss will be a long time...
January 28th, 2022 20:22 - In Motion (Fay Slimm.)
I love the sound of a rushing stream or river as it pours over rocks. Your...
December 22nd, 2021 23:44 - Horizontal Curves & Vertical Bars (Neville)
Sorry, I can\'t tell who, what, or where \"she\" is, but that doesn\'t...
November 16th, 2021 20:08 - Rain (James Alexander)
A pleasant reflection on \"Rain.\" Liked you words and phrasings. \"the...
November 14th, 2021 19:42 - Breakfast Rituals (Neville)
A tender moment caught and revealed in fine fashion. Sunday morning...
October 25th, 2021 21:18 - People Do Not Care Rant. (Goldfinch60)
All civility is disappearing. Mankind is regressing to barbaric times. I...
October 25th, 2021 13:08 - AND PUPPETS DANCE (Michael Edwards)
Someone\'s quiet time ( daydream ) is unexpectedly interrupted by a bird /...
October 25th, 2021 12:58 - Beautiful (Fay Slimm.)
To see such beauty in the evening sky and to capture it so eloquently is...
October 19th, 2021 18:28 - Dirty Laugh (Neville)
The difference between a \"laugh\" and a \"dirty laugh\" is that the...
October 19th, 2021 18:18 - A Final Plea (HangingbyaHalo)
This took me back to the passing of many a dear one. You have painted the...
October 19th, 2021 17:54 - Wind Powered Submarines. (Doggerel Dave)
Wind powered subs - Well hoist the mainsail Matey! Oh yeah they do have...
October 3rd, 2021 18:00 - Surprisingly More. (Goldfinch60)
So true Andy. Life is complicated and the variance is wide. We may or not...
October 3rd, 2021 17:48 - Respite (Fay Slimm.)
As beautiful as an autumn day. My favorite time of the year. Yes winter is...
October 3rd, 2021 17:45 - Words Left Unsaid (Saxon Crow)
A beautiful piece of poetry, of love never spoken and the aftermath of...
August 11th, 2021 13:26 - Otherness (Fay Slimm.)
I don\'t think these words are spontaneous, but rather they come from your...
August 11th, 2021 13:11 - Perfectly Hued (Neville)
\"Perfectly hued,\" is of itself a dream. Even a world without people,...
August 11th, 2021 12:22 - And Now (Fay Slimm.)
Four seasons in the countryside, painted with a time worn brush. It felt...
August 8th, 2021 16:13 - Calling Time (Neville)
A truly exceptional write. Taking time to \"ease into a favorite chair\"...
August 8th, 2021 16:06 - When You Find These Words (Neville)
I have found them and they speak to me. - Phil A.
August 6th, 2021 17:43 - Collusion (Fay Slimm.)
The Earth actually produces a sound as it spins on its axis. This and the...
August 4th, 2021 16:22 - Recovering From The Shock. (Goldfinch60)
Eventually they realize that the roles are shifting. Still a thrill when...
August 3rd, 2021 11:25 - Upon the Tip of His Tongue (Neville)
Frivolous affairs, some long remembered, some forgotten straight away. You...
July 25th, 2021 22:25 - Awake Before Sleep (M.E.M.)
It\'s just the chemical reactions of your brain as it readies for sleep....
July 18th, 2021 22:23 - Time Versus Love (Fay Slimm.)
Love is either a desert or a garden, never anything in between. The...
July 18th, 2021 22:14 - Love\'s Home. (Goldfinch60)
A lifetime of love cannot be destroyed by the passing of one. The...
July 18th, 2021 22:02 - Cathedral Bells (Neville)
One of religion\'s only good qualities is the art that it has inspired,...
July 18th, 2021 21:58 - The Main Drag (Rebmasters)
I guess the \"main drag\" is a drag. Too common place to be of interest....
July 18th, 2021 21:45 - Age Of Wisdom. (Goldfinch60)
No, No, No! We are not as old as we think, or feel. We are as old as we...
July 17th, 2021 14:31 - Magnificently Different (Neville)
Stopped and fell into this trove of memories, though without the mandolin....
July 13th, 2021 16:24 - Ephemeral: ‘We’ (L. B. Mek)
\'We are\" not what we wish we were, or something greater or more...
July 13th, 2021 16:13 - The Lost Words. (Goldfinch60)
\"Thee is a place where all the lost words go,\" just as there is for...
July 13th, 2021 16:01 - The Last Words of the Night (Goldfinch60)
Sincere affection felt throughout this poem. Memories recalled at a time...
July 4th, 2021 12:51 - Geraldine (Neville)
Strong emotions here in this poem, and your comments add to the symbolism...
July 4th, 2021 12:46 - Three T’s (Neville)
Of the three, \"time\" is the most consistent. Perpetually there, racing...
July 3rd, 2021 18:49 - My New Lady. (Goldfinch60)
Music can sooth the soul. Case in point Beegie and GF60. We listen to...
June 13th, 2021 15:18 - A Precious Drought (Neville)
Sweet, heartfelt, and glorious words.
May your \"parched\" \"garden\"...
June 4th, 2021 11:01 - Sheen (Neville)
\"A stolen kiss\" might bring the \"sheen\" back to a blind person\'s...
June 3rd, 2021 19:35 - Enticing (Fay Slimm.)
The glory of morning\'s Sunrise and its draw on poet\'s words. A wonderful...
June 3rd, 2021 16:17 - Upon Reflection (Neville)
Pets and their owners seem to merge
into one creature, likewise husbands...
June 3rd, 2021 16:08 - If Truth was a Colour (Neville)
There is an artist\'s palette for all of the truths to be told. One of...
June 2nd, 2021 18:10 - was it just moments (Dusk arising)
What an experience! It brings to mind
those reported incidents of...
May 26th, 2021 13:09 - So Much (Fay Slimm.)
Difficult to convey the wonderment we feel when face to face with...
May 26th, 2021 12:45 - Scarce Blues (Neville)
In passing, the life of a butterfly is very short, seasonal to be exact....
May 26th, 2021 12:33 - Appetite (Fay Slimm.)
When one turns the page, one is never the same as before. Each page adds...
May 20th, 2021 10:54 - Paper Cups (Neville)
Ah, yes. the hurried emotions of youth. Surely, she would remember the...
May 20th, 2021 10:45 - Wakening (Fay Slimm.)
The lunacy of Love. How it transforms ordinary, clear thinking people into...
May 17th, 2021 18:16 - Light In Our Lives. (Goldfinch60)
Thoroughly enjoyable, both poem and music. Yes I was toe tapping. Finding...
April 11th, 2021 16:37 - Oh To Be (CLM)
I really like this poem. I read it as being about empathy, feeling what...
April 11th, 2021 11:18 - Vacancies. (Goldfinch60)
A nice tale of the macabre to accompany your music. I believe I will be...
April 2nd, 2021 19:26 - inherent Truth (L. B. Mek)
\"Repetition\" can be a useful poetic tool or it can ruin a poem. Here the...
April 2nd, 2021 19:17 - Ripple Through (A Boy With Roses)
As we age the days do indeed seem shorter. We shouldn\'t lose hope as it...
April 2nd, 2021 19:11 - Our Poem (Fay Slimm.)
Sometimes the sweetest words are, \"Goodbye my love,\" but they are also...
March 14th, 2021 19:40 - Tomodachi ya Koibito (Neville)
What better way to honor someone than in poetry. Be she friend/lover/both,...
March 14th, 2021 19:26 - You can go there from here (Rrodriguez)
I\'m sitting here in the Northern Cold, and suddenly along comes your poem...
March 10th, 2021 17:15 - Melancholic Men (Kevin Michael Bloor)
This is a wonderful poem. I\'ve been a melancholic man from time to time...
March 10th, 2021 16:59 - HIDDEN DEEP (Michael Edwards)
\"Truckled light\" submissive to one\'s control. If only we could...
March 10th, 2021 16:49 - Out of Mind (Neville)
That which we have lost hurts the most. A sustained love, never equals the...
March 9th, 2021 20:51 - Jerry the fox terrier (Dusk arising)
Cute dog. A poem about said dog, or more about the poet? Liked the dual...
March 9th, 2021 20:39 - I Am With You (Orchidee)
A house of the Lord built for the glory of God, repaired by his servants...
March 9th, 2021 20:35 - Windmills Of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60)
A pleasant flight it was. Your words gave a lofty air to it, and we were...
March 9th, 2021 20:29 - Some Sounds Easily Missed (Neville)
Some believe that our voice communications is what separates us from the...
March 8th, 2021 23:36 - Sufferings Seen (Orchidee)
Good poem. I liked the penultimate verse, especially.
March 8th, 2021 23:26 - sluggish (Dusk arising)
Made me laugh DA. What more can one ask? - Phil A.
March 8th, 2021 23:08 - The Antipodean Adventures of Jack the Lad. (Doggerel Dave)
Well it kept my interest for a long while and when it ended I said to...
March 7th, 2021 22:16 - Peaceful Pursuals (Orchidee)
The world would be a better place if people facing a decision would simply...
March 7th, 2021 21:59 - Love like a Song (Neville)
Most of music is love songs, except country. If you play a country song...
March 7th, 2021 21:55 - Zoom Coffee. (Goldfinch60)
If you cannot laugh at yourself, you are humorless. Zoom is today\'s...
March 7th, 2021 21:48 - historys enemy (Dusk arising)
Can a person ever, truly go home. We are a product not of our birth, but...
March 7th, 2021 21:44 - Testing Times (Orchidee)
Praise the Lord and pass the ammunition! I\'ll need it to defend myself...
February 23rd, 2021 11:43 - Never Enough (Jerry Reynolds)
Some people are never satisfied, or is it birds? Insatiable appetites, or...
February 23rd, 2021 11:33
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