Comments on community poems by MendedFences27



  • Oblivious (Neville) \"No need or reason to pretend,\" that she knew. Why would she? It is now...
    October 1st, 2020 21:24
  • A Patchwork of Ashes (Neville) Like a wild fire leaving behind fields of ash, she burned through his...
    September 30th, 2020 16:40
  • Michaelmas Melody (Orchidee) O.K., so I asked my wife (a Sussex girl) if she knew the song, and she did...
    September 29th, 2020 13:51
  • Together (Fay Slimm.) Let\'s hope there is enough time to save this Earth. With certain fools in...
    September 29th, 2020 13:36
  • Come-a-Day (Neville) Finding the ideal resting spot among the flora and fauna and to share it...
    September 29th, 2020 12:27
  • Blank (MendedFences27)
    September 28th, 2020 18:33
  • Take One (Fay Slimm.) Some things are meant to be in pairs, people too, especially lovers are...
    September 28th, 2020 16:21
  • Making His Way Home (Neville) Sometimes familiarity becomes the dominant desire. Aging brings a comfort...
    September 28th, 2020 16:12
  • rude Awakenings (L. B. Mek) Some people are just cranky in the morning. There will be no loving until...
    September 28th, 2020 15:59
  • “ Promises of Vows (Dove) Vows, promises, etc.. They are meant, only as long as their intent. It\'s...
    September 27th, 2020 19:02
  • Enmeshed (Fay Slimm.) The Spider\'s Web, often the intention of the phrase is indicate a...
    September 27th, 2020 18:49
  • Discarded 2 (Neville) What happens to all the thoughts that have been? Some are memorialized in...
    September 27th, 2020 18:41
  • SO IT\'S SUNDAY (Michael Edwards) I find this humorous. I may have done this or something similar, like...
    September 27th, 2020 18:25
  • Salvation Seasons (Orchidee) Very good, thoroughly enjoyed this poem, Reminded me of \"Turn, Turn....
    September 27th, 2020 18:14
  • Compromise (Fay Slimm.) Love\'s renewal, bringing \"bluebirds\" of tomorrow, along with an...
    September 26th, 2020 14:21
  • Sleeper (Neville) Self sacrifice for what? A blatant waste of human life. A sad story indeed...
    September 26th, 2020 13:58
  • All the Ends of Me (Neville) \"Bruised\" it seems by a shameless lady of \"sailors and serfs n by...
    September 25th, 2020 19:09
  • Grown.. (Poetic Dan) Watch out, she will soften your heart. You gotta love it, though. Cute as...
    September 20th, 2020 11:28
  • Hippie Am I. (Goldfinch60) I must agree with the sentiment of this poem. Love is surely the answer....
    September 20th, 2020 11:24
  • Bruises (Neville) Wow, such deviant love, or abuse, but here seems a mutual endeavor, yet...
    September 20th, 2020 11:13
  • Absolutely Stunning! (Goldfinch60) Beautiful, sometimes Nature provides a work of art for us to enjoy. Great...
    September 5th, 2020 12:23
  • EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (3) (Michael Edwards) Yeah, my Grandmother had one of those. Also I remember my Father saying...
    September 5th, 2020 12:19
  • EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (2) (Michael Edwards) Took a while but it finally dawned on me, the meaning in your drawing. The...
    September 4th, 2020 12:02
  • A Fragment (Jarcher54) Symbols abound in this beautiful scene of conquering grief: Roses. leaf,...
    September 3rd, 2020 10:13
  • Abundance. (Fay Slimm.) Living here, this is the beginning of what most here call the best time of...
    September 3rd, 2020 10:07
  • No Return. (Goldfinch60) How many times to we try returning only to face great disappointment. Like...
    September 3rd, 2020 09:56
  • EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (1) (Michael Edwards) Is this not the very definition of the sexes? I truly laughed out loud...
    September 3rd, 2020 09:51
  • Decisions & Choices (Neville) The map of life looks more like a spider\'s web than a straight line....
    September 3rd, 2020 09:45
  • Over The Hill (Neville) Time to break new ground. Nothing grows on plowed land, except wild...
    August 31st, 2020 16:56
  • Simple as That (Neville) Straight forward truth. Can\'t be said any better. - Phil A.
    August 31st, 2020 08:58
  • Endsong (Neville) Time just keeps on rolling. Fate, if one chooses to believe in...
    August 30th, 2020 22:09
  • New Appetite. (Fay Slimm.) Life is a series of changes. One must keep going through it all. \"And the...
    August 27th, 2020 12:35
  • IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (9-12) (Michael Edwards) A lovely bunch of idioms. \"Cowards,\" are\" tough\" to \"get going.\" ...
    August 27th, 2020 12:21
  • Modern Love (Neville) Much better title, it adds to the surprise. Here\'s a take on this with...
    August 27th, 2020 10:56
  • Invasion. (Fay Slimm.) Light fascinates. Brings forth all the color our eyes can perceive. Your...
    August 26th, 2020 18:34
  • The Day The Carousel Stopped (DesertWords) My first visit here. I kind of like this poem. Assuming it about the day...
    August 26th, 2020 18:29
  • IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (5-8) (Michael Edwards) Someone once told me, \"It was so quiet you could hear a mouse drop.\" I...
    August 26th, 2020 16:09
  • Summer’s End (Neville) The end of summer, isolated and alone, with only darkening days to look...
    August 26th, 2020 16:01
  • Drop Me off @ the Next Stop (Neville) The Bus driver says Destiny stops for no man. Growing old means you have a...
    August 25th, 2020 10:06
  • Bohemian Rhapsody. (Goldfinch60) Too many trips around the Sun, most of my favorites have melted into...
    August 25th, 2020 09:56
  • IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (1-4) (Michael Edwards) Yuk, yuk, chuckle, chuckle. Made me laugh. Thanks for a good start to my...
    August 25th, 2020 09:46
  • If. (Fay Slimm.) Well, I simply love this one, not just the emotions it conveys, but the...
    August 25th, 2020 09:42
  • Full Spate. (Fay Slimm.) It certainly is true,\" the nearer\" we \"come\" the more intense each day...
    August 24th, 2020 12:38
  • Sun Shy (Neville) I wonder if she wandered and was tickled by the fella, when he wondrously...
    August 24th, 2020 12:31
  • Tosca Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A very moving write. Opera is a fine blend of dramatic storytelling and...
    August 24th, 2020 11:50
  • Sky Hungry (Neville) I was airborne with you on this one. \"hanging on the very edge of...
    August 21st, 2020 14:50
  • Best (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful words, Fay. Is love a once in a lifetime event? Or can it...
    August 19th, 2020 17:08
  • NO LITTER   (Michael Edwards) Cartoon - A great one-liner. Poem - Has two identical ends, just like the...
    August 19th, 2020 17:00
  • Natures Glory. (Goldfinch60) They are red because of the moisture in the air bending the light, and so...
    August 19th, 2020 16:04
  • A Mermaids Tale (Neville) A tail of fantasy, breaking through the waves, instilling flight...
    August 18th, 2020 13:56
  • Wax Butterflies (Neville) Wax or otherwise, the life of a \"butterfly\" is short, and I read that...
    August 17th, 2020 16:45
  • Knocking On (Neville) No need for filters, we know how you feel. \"Rejection\" seems to be the...
    August 16th, 2020 11:54
  • Theory of Endurance (Neville) Life is but a series of changes. Nothing is permanent, including time. To...
    August 15th, 2020 12:19
  • Autumn-Imbued. (Fay Slimm.) There\'s nothing like a quiet beach on a clear autumn day. Just the Sun,...
    August 15th, 2020 11:59
  • Steph at Thirty. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful tribute to a granddaughter of whom you must be most proud....
    August 15th, 2020 11:55
  • Remains. (Fay Slimm.) Wow Fay! why so Dark? I have a daughter that is a Ghost Hunter. belongs to...
    August 14th, 2020 14:57
  • Maybe Old but Not Daft (Neville) The ocean draws many people to her. My wife and I have both spent our...
    August 14th, 2020 12:55
  • Times of Youth. (Goldfinch60) Yeah! and \"Amen!\" \"Glorious times\" indeed. I\'m sure half the world...
    August 14th, 2020 12:42
  • It Rained. (Goldfinch60) A river\'s flow is like water under the bridge. Which has absolutely...
    August 13th, 2020 13:54
  • Beaten (Neville) Once there was a woman, cheap as a penny whistle, men played her like a...
    August 13th, 2020 13:34
  • Who Said ! (Fay Slimm.) I do not want to age like wine, only to be drunk at the end, or cheese...
    August 13th, 2020 13:20
  • i’ve come to realize (Jackeggz) You are the standard others must meet, not the other way around. Before...
    August 12th, 2020 10:43
  • That Summer. (Fay Slimm.) Summer by the sea is a great romantic setting. Your poem contains some...
    August 12th, 2020 09:53
  • Of Kept Men & Their Secrets (Neville) A personification of the ocean? \"She\" draws men to her, \"drives\" them...
    August 12th, 2020 09:46
  • Back to School. (Goldfinch60) It makes more sense to send the politicians back to school,- Phil A.
    August 12th, 2020 09:33
  • DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (2) (Michael Edwards) Music is a stimulant: Energizing the nervous system, exciting the brain,...
    August 12th, 2020 09:30
  • Fallen Leaves Behind (Neville) They say you pay a price for beauty, but I doubt they had leaves in mind....
    August 9th, 2020 19:13
  • I Spied. (Fay Slimm.) A very delightful scribble, Fay. Some great imagery. Lines of poetic...
    August 9th, 2020 18:59
  • Carpéing Diem. (Fay Slimm.) A beautiful poem Fay. It makes one want to walk the shoreline once again....
    August 8th, 2020 11:49
  • Sun Drops (Neville) All Moonshine truly is , is reflected Sunshine, but the folklore it\'s...
    August 8th, 2020 11:39
  • Nirvana (Sylviasearcher) I hate myself, I hate the things I\'ve done, but I want to live. Sounds...
    August 8th, 2020 11:13
  • Something in the Air (Neville) Nicely spoken Nev. No matter where you go these days, you see the effects....
    August 7th, 2020 10:54
  • NO LONGER HEARD (Michael Edwards) Just as I clicked to read this I was perusing Emerson\'s \"Threnody.\" I...
    August 5th, 2020 16:54
  • Love-Light. (Fay Slimm.) \"Love light\" conquers all, \"ce-la-vie,\" \"no one\'s to blame,\"...
    August 4th, 2020 15:22
  • Sidewalk Cracks II (SheWasTheSun) I just finished Part 1 and now I\'m crushed. I hope this is fiction and...
    August 3rd, 2020 22:11
  • Sidewalk Cracks (SheWasTheSun) True Love \"lives in the sidewalk cracks,\" between the lines, and many...
    August 3rd, 2020 22:06
  • Catzzzzzzz. (Fay Slimm.) Cats - Too mysterious to comprehend. From Lions and Tigers to household...
    July 30th, 2020 09:21
  • Chasing the word (Sylviasearcher) Words flatter poetic beauty created. collected, structured, written,...
    July 30th, 2020 09:13
  • Imagination and Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Imagination and dreams are different only in the control. We control...
    July 30th, 2020 09:03
  • English Weather (Aa Harvey) And don\'t forget the wind. I find that here in New England, there is...
    July 29th, 2020 21:28
  • In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Odes indeed. Raindrops upon window panes, become a song of praise. Poets...
    July 29th, 2020 21:23
  • Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor) To lose your father at such a young age is tragedy for sure, but your...
    July 29th, 2020 21:17
  • Struck Down. (Goldfinch60) It just goes to prove that Golf should never be taken seriously.What with...
    July 29th, 2020 19:32
  • HALF EMPTY (Michael Edwards) Bottoms up! Make mine a Guiness. Beautiful drawing. Love the comedy of...
    July 29th, 2020 19:17
  • In Error. (Fay Slimm.) This world would be a beautiful place if it weren\'t for people. Think of...
    July 28th, 2020 09:20
  • LOVE IS MANIFEST (Michael Edwards) A clearly defined image of peace and harmony, of love that lasts through...
    July 28th, 2020 09:03
  • Two Weeks in July (Neville) Reminded me of the song, \"We\'ll sing in the Sunshine...........Then...
    July 27th, 2020 11:10
  • If Only. (Fay Slimm.) And thus you did. The music of Nature is compelling and poets thrive on...
    July 27th, 2020 10:59
  • Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60) Oh so true, GF60. Many things to remember and many to try and...
    July 27th, 2020 10:47
  • Time (Justagirl) Write it all down girl. Your thoughts, your dreams, whatever you think...
    July 22nd, 2020 22:38
  • NUTS (Michael Edwards) Liked your \"nutty\" bit of humor. Nut allergies are serious business....
    July 22nd, 2020 12:06
  • Non-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, what a very poignant write. The trials and tribulation of love and...
    July 22nd, 2020 11:59
  • Refilled. (Goldfinch60) Life is not like a glass in any way, but I agree that a life can be...
    July 22nd, 2020 11:51
  • walk away (Dusk arising) They say Home is where the heart is,\" but it\'s not always true. Home...
    July 22nd, 2020 11:45
  • Captured. (Fay Slimm.) This is a fine take on one of Nature\'s great forces. We try to harness...
    July 21st, 2020 13:07
  • An English Pub (Emptypot) Is this the one in Poynings? I think your poem describes it well, but so...
    July 16th, 2020 21:57
  • Mullins Yard (Neville) I read this as aging out or becoming obsolete. Or maybe you just like...
    July 15th, 2020 15:23
  • AGEING COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards) Well, these two lines are a pair to behold and very alluring since you...
    July 15th, 2020 15:07
  • A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards) Maybe you spelled \"Steel\" wrong? With this guy it ought to be...
    July 14th, 2020 13:41
  • Ego\'s Down (Neville) In my first introduction to Marmite I spread it on the bread like peanut...
    July 13th, 2020 13:48


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