Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• THE RECURRING DREAM (Louis Gibbs) And thusly, you may have found the cure for your recurring dream....
  September 13th, 2017 14:53
• A COUPLE OF EDONES (Michael Edwards) Wonderful stuff. Great ideas expressed in a rigid format. Very difficult....
  September 13th, 2017 14:27
• Once Upon My Midnight\'s Madness (Swingline) Somehow reminded me of 9-11. What with all the jumping and fire. Horrible...
  May 6th, 2017 20:45
• DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards) All manners have left the table, or so it seems. The best of the best...
  May 6th, 2017 20:41
• Nightmares (Bibbeck) This is very well done, especially for such an early age. You most...
  May 6th, 2017 20:32
• I knew it wasnt true (Mizzy) Freedom? Yes? Sounds like the end of a relationship. Hope all is working...
  May 6th, 2017 20:24
• Wee Willy (Swingline) I\'m sure there\'s a joke here about frog\'s legs and long tongues, but...
  May 4th, 2017 17:26
• For Thine Eyes Only. (Fay Slimm.) Who\'s this Thine guy? Lucky fellow. A beautiful message sent back in time...
  May 4th, 2017 17:18
• Friggen Hornets (WriteBeLight) Hornets and wasps, yuck! I hate them.It seems I spend a great deal of time...
  May 4th, 2017 08:25
• THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards) My understanding of how villages got built, was that the church was the...
  May 4th, 2017 08:02
• THE GATHERING (Michael Edwards) I do not think that this is one day in the life of a woman, but rather her...
  May 4th, 2017 07:54
• Perhaps. (Fay Slimm.) Here where I live there is, on much older homes, an architectural...
  May 2nd, 2017 15:50
• Bird Bath (WriteBeLight) I like how they line up (or should I say tree up) for their turn in the...
  May 2nd, 2017 15:28
• LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24> (Michael Edwards) Three humorous sketches and one of Veere. Well done, Michael. I like #3,...
  May 2nd, 2017 15:18
• Start With A Cup (WriteBeLight) Cofffff....eeeeee! Used to be, my jump start in the morning, too, but, now...
  May 1st, 2017 20:24
• A SIMPLE MAN (Michael Edwards) A brilliant painting, in both examples, poem and drawing. Very picturesque...
  April 30th, 2017 17:26
• Awakening. (Goldfinch60) Facing another day on the planet is always a lucky day. Being able to...
  April 29th, 2017 20:49
• Boldness. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully spoken moment with Nature. All creatures become fascinating...
  April 28th, 2017 22:07
• DESPAIR (Michael Edwards) Whatever she said, it was powerful, or maybe it was just, \"No.\" Another...
  April 28th, 2017 21:57
• Questions (Lizzy Renee) There are more questions than there are answers. The important thing is to...
  April 28th, 2017 18:02
• NOSTALGIA (Michael Edwards) Ah, yes, the memories of our youth. Can they ever be seen again? or have...
  April 27th, 2017 20:40
• Rain Power (WriteBeLight) And they cancelled the ballgame!! I too hate potholes, and driving in the...
  April 25th, 2017 21:52
• Raphia Regalis Leaves (Gary Edward Geraci) The ways of life graded by the grandeur of leaves, very unique expression...
  April 25th, 2017 21:45
• The Battle Between Truth and Lies (Lizzy Renee) Live by the truth. Lies bring you down, trip you up, and destroy your self...
  April 25th, 2017 21:36
• Day After Long Weekend Blues (WriteBeLight) Beautiful weekend, now back to the grind, One reason to hate Mondays or...
  April 24th, 2017 20:14
• Scaled. (Fay Slimm.) Love can scale to the highest height, overcome any barrier, physical or...
  April 24th, 2017 20:08
• Strawberry fire (Down the rabbithole) Very zesty. Great mix of metaphor and directness. Be careful, the fruit of...
  April 23rd, 2017 21:13
• Smitten. (Fay Slimm.) Bitten by the Dove of Love? So, someone has to ask the question, might as...
  April 20th, 2017 20:38
• Foggy Fever (WriteBeLight) Time is a precious commodity. We work, eat and sleep and there is no time...
  April 20th, 2017 20:31
• ECHOES (Michael Edwards) A beautiful scene, to me, a summer\'s day of bright light and warmth, a...
  April 20th, 2017 20:24
• Pact (LIGHT WARRIOR) I think in life we all face trials, we are tested, and those who survive...
  April 20th, 2017 20:14
• When Love comes (Willyweed) So true. Sometimes you never realize it\'s happening. Great write. Loved...
  April 20th, 2017 20:05
• STOP (Michael Edwards) Sometimes we choose to not see things as they are, and sometimes we wish...
  April 19th, 2017 21:16
• The Engineer and the Salesman (WriteBeLight) The Engineer creates, the Salesman sells, It\'s the sale that involves a...
  April 18th, 2017 22:27
• shining star (Willyweed) It takes courage to deal with those types of problems, both for the victim...
  April 18th, 2017 22:17
• TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN (Michael Edwards) I think we\'ve all had those moments of unintended frost, but the way...
  April 18th, 2017 22:14
• THE MUSIC OF THE SEA (Michael Edwards) Some call it the roar of the sea, here it\'s the music, and I\'ve heard it...
  April 17th, 2017 19:46
• don\'t hesitate (Willyweed) The hateful suffer in misery. The loving live in joy. Two paths: one like...
  April 17th, 2017 19:41
• Unsung Whispers. (Fay Slimm.) I think as writers we have more of an affinity for quiet than most. To me,...
  April 14th, 2017 21:11
• Lily of Easter (WriteBeLight) Lilies are such beautiful flowers, and on this weekend so significant....
  April 14th, 2017 21:06
• COMICAL COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Humor and sculpting, Wow! Funny stuff that, the jokes not the sculptures....
  April 14th, 2017 20:59
• UNFOLDED (Down the rabbithole) I like this one. No surprise there, so well written. I especially liked...
  April 13th, 2017 20:06
• Scrambled Message (Philip) Too much technology, not enough humanity. 1984 is coming. Ear phones in,...
  April 13th, 2017 19:52
• LEICESTER STATION (Michael Edwards) Terrific poem, great use of historic and modern comparison. Hand-wound...
  April 13th, 2017 19:46
• I am the traveler (Willyweed) To be the universal traveler, roaming the great expanse of space, sounds...
  April 12th, 2017 12:02
• Tribal Organisation. (Fay Slimm.) Learned a lot from this one. It\'s almost human like. Our leaders tend to...
  April 12th, 2017 11:48
• Neighbour Watching (Goldfinch60) Our tongues are going to melt away as we adapt to the external mode of...
  April 12th, 2017 11:41
• THE UNKNOWN MAN (Michael Edwards) Rumor has it that this is a terrific poem for one who can barely scribble....
  April 12th, 2017 11:26
• A City Day (Nameless) Boston is fantastic day or night! ( Go Sox, Go Pats!!) You\'re right...
  April 11th, 2017 15:57
• THREE SMILES (Michael Edwards) Great fun. I\'m inclined toward number three, trash mail Why worry about...
  April 11th, 2017 15:51
• We Deserve It. (Fay Slimm.) Yeah, let\'s all make over our hearts. Let\'s lose the greed, the lust for...
  April 11th, 2017 15:39
• Sunday in the Garden (Willyweed) A beautiful poem for children...of all ages. The optimism of it\'s message...
  April 11th, 2017 15:33
• Victorious. (Fay Slimm.) Love is the answer to everything. Human emotions are defenseless against...
  April 10th, 2017 20:44
• MY PLACE (Michael Edwards) How do you do watercolors without a water supply? Nice little poem about...
  April 10th, 2017 20:38
• The Compass (Rrodriguez) It will be a brave new world some day, when Man can look past his own...
  April 10th, 2017 20:32
• unfolding (Willyweed) A very hopeful and uplifting message. Sunrise, Sunset, all is well....
  April 10th, 2017 20:23
• SECLUSION (Michael Edwards) A quiet place for art and the art of love. What more could a person want?...
  April 9th, 2017 19:10
• BINDING VOWS (Michael Edwards) Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting...
  April 8th, 2017 21:34
• Whale-Play. (Fay Slimm.) And it wove a great tale indeed. I\'ve been whale watching and it was a...
  April 8th, 2017 21:25
• wild rabbit (Willyweed) Sort of like Willy through the looking glass, follow the rabbit and see...
  April 8th, 2017 21:19
• Who I Am. (Fay Slimm.) Sounds like a Declaration of Independence. Hope it all works out for you....
  April 7th, 2017 20:18
• Season Of Respite (WriteBeLight) Thank God, I do believe it has broken. I sense Spring in the air. Time to...
  April 7th, 2017 20:12
• IS TODAY TODAY ? (Michael Edwards) Is that a drawing of your home? You wish. Whatever today is, tomorrow will...
  April 7th, 2017 20:01
• Lost To Reality. (Goldfinch60) It takes a brave heart to deal with what you have to, and only a love...
  April 7th, 2017 09:39
• Wonderment. (Fay Slimm.) Thanks for the translation. I needed that .A sultry and sensuous...
  April 6th, 2017 19:18
• words 3 (Tony36) Great sentiment, full of truth. A nice poem for all to read. - Phil A.
  April 6th, 2017 16:06
• AUTUMN SUN (Michael Edwards) Beautiful words, \"ripened rays,\" \"cobwebs newly spun,\" etc. A fresh...
  April 6th, 2017 16:05
• \"not just a women\" (Willyweed) Love is eternal. This is the message I get from this. An enjoyable little...
  April 6th, 2017 15:51
• The Wonders of God\'s Creation (Rrodriguez) Certainly paints a beautiful picture, you intended result for sure. Why...
  April 5th, 2017 22:30
• IMMERSED IN TIME (Michael Edwards) Memories, recalled within the mind, and some are toxic reminders. We carry...
  April 5th, 2017 22:24
• the fabric of my soul (Willyweed) Interesting questions, asked poetically, The answers vary for each of us,...
  April 5th, 2017 22:17
• The Better Angels of Our Nature (Rrodriguez) I think this is great. It capture the tone of his address, and the...
  April 4th, 2017 21:13
• DOOR (Michael Edwards) Perfecto! I love the door image. I know not why. Perhaps an open door...
  April 4th, 2017 21:06
• Saved By A Robin. (Goldfinch60) Oh, nice one. A dream gone astray, or like you said , maybe a rescue, or...
  April 4th, 2017 20:50
• The Last Goodbye (Garry) That entire last stanza is the heart of your poetic remembrance. I had...
  April 4th, 2017 20:45
• still you remain (Willyweed) This one\'s a gem. I\'ve read it twice. \"Things I can remember? But...
  April 4th, 2017 20:41
• Born (Tony36) You are a brave man. Keep on keeping on. - Phil A.
  April 3rd, 2017 21:13
• remember (Willyweed) \"Ancient souls are with us,\" I believe this. Nothing ever disappears,...
  April 3rd, 2017 21:11
• Scrambled Message (Philip) It happened near here as well. A young girl struck down while on her phone...
  April 3rd, 2017 20:34
• MY FAVOURITE TIPPLE (Michael Edwards) Not a wine drinker, but I like your poem.Is this another form I don\'t...
  April 3rd, 2017 20:29
• THE PATH (Michael Edwards) This one is truly impressive. Not only for the pathways trail winding...
  April 1st, 2017 18:59
• I am you (Willyweed) Said many times over and over, again by so many lovers. It must be true....
  April 1st, 2017 18:48
• Santuary Bar (WriteBeLight) Well, sounds like fun, in a \"Me\" kind of way, but we all need those...
  March 31st, 2017 19:56
• THE BARMY BARD (Michael Edwards) Funny stuff. Must admit he changed the world, oops, sorry stage, with his...
  March 31st, 2017 19:50
• DAWN WAITS (Michael Edwards) Great recap. In all, the only answers we wanted to hear. Phil A.
  March 30th, 2017 21:57
• BBQ (Tony36) O. K., now, I\'m hungry. Steak is it? One of my favorites. If this damn...
  March 30th, 2017 18:16
• \"shy bird\" (Willyweed) Hey, I really like this one. Your rhyming is great. The story is clever....
  March 30th, 2017 18:12
• WAS IT LOVE - THE CONCLUSION (Michael Edwards) So my favorite couple in the house with the creaking stairs, which they...
  March 30th, 2017 17:53
• WAS IT LOVE ? (5) (Michael Edwards) Thank you for that>>. What room, bedroom, kitchen, living room, or even...
  March 28th, 2017 20:03
• Let Us Cross Over The River (Pantoum Poem) (Rrodriguez) Some would say that the loss of Jackson is what cost the south the war....
  March 27th, 2017 20:28
• WAS IT LOVE (4) (Michael Edwards) Onward and upward. What\'s at the top of those stairs? Are they really...
  March 27th, 2017 15:10
• Drop of life (Wilting moon) Very, very, nice. It\'s been said that all of the Universe exists in one...
  March 26th, 2017 19:33
• Difference. (Fay Slimm.) Diversity is what makes life worth living. It is God\'s artwork. No two...
  March 26th, 2017 19:25
• Within (Augustus) The days of chivalry always seem so glamorous for women, when in truth,...
  March 26th, 2017 19:17
• WAS IT LOVE - PART3 (Michael Edwards) I have a million questions, as I\'m sure some of your other readers do as...
  March 26th, 2017 19:06
• One Day;Maybe (Garry) Oh oh, Big Brother is watching and talking. Your poem conveys a sense of...
  March 26th, 2017 18:58
• WAS IT LOVE ? (2) (Michael Edwards) Hmmm... I\'m quizzical about quinzanes. Where did you discover them? Very...
  March 25th, 2017 19:43
• My Paraiba Tourmaline Gem (Rrodriguez) I always appreciated the vivid colors of the Caribbean. These gems, are...
  March 24th, 2017 20:05
• Things That Make Me Smile (Garry) \"Fresh bread baking,\" is number one on my list.Yum. Used to pass a...
  March 24th, 2017 20:00
• WAS IT LOVE ? (Michael Edwards) Hope and love seem to almost always coexist. She saw some form of love or...
  March 24th, 2017 19:55