Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• Together Again (FredPeyer) Missing someone who has been lost, and you\'ve captured it exquisitely,...
  October 13th, 2017 12:27
• THE CURSE OF AWARENESS (Louis Gibbs) Inner peace comes with the acceptance of the outer world as it exists. We...
  October 13th, 2017 12:20
• In The Making. (Fay Slimm.) An artist or an artisan, whichever they are called, their work can be...
  October 13th, 2017 11:26
• THOSE days (Tamara Lancaster) O.K. I rather like this one. I see the dark first stanza as loneliness....
  October 10th, 2017 14:43
• Playing At Love. (Fay Slimm.) So true, Fay. Unintended yet spoken love can be hurtful, destructive, and...
  October 10th, 2017 13:53
• tango (Frank Prem) \"The Tango\", or if I ever tried it, \"The Tangle.\" Someone would...
  October 8th, 2017 13:17
• But Still We Laugh. (Goldfinch60) Gold - It\'s a tough situation you are in, but to be able to find humor...
  October 8th, 2017 10:25
• A GENTLE LAND (Michael Edwards) Ah, yes, poetic idealism, makes one want to find this land and live...
  October 8th, 2017 10:14
• Missed (FredPeyer) I sense there was someone on that train he wanted to meet.What with...
  October 7th, 2017 17:44
• perfect time (Frank Prem) A dog is a man\'s best friend, but not a duet partner, or is he? They are...
  October 7th, 2017 17:17
• What Could Be....... (MaddieJ) \"Soulda, woulda. coulda,\" cal all be replaced by one word, \"DID.\' ...
  October 7th, 2017 17:08
• Less Trodden. (Fay Slimm.) Forget the \"path less taken,\" take the one never dreamed of. Your poem...
  October 7th, 2017 16:26
• KIPPERED (Michael Edwards) Kippers!! Yuk! Sorry Michael, but not for me, not at breakfast. The poem...
  October 7th, 2017 16:10
• DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1) (Michael Edwards) \"Moving clay,\" lays the groundwork (no pun intended) for so much more. I...
  October 5th, 2017 18:33
• October\' s Intent. (Fay Slimm.) A lovely write about the turning of the season. One of my favorite times...
  October 4th, 2017 20:01
• Scarred (FredPeyer) This world will go on without us and the billions who have gone before.We...
  October 4th, 2017 14:46
• THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards) \"The Autocrat,\" in Haiku format. One can read the last word of each line...
  October 4th, 2017 14:29
• What My Teacher Really Taught me (Syd) Very well written, very meaningful. A positive message about life and...
  October 3rd, 2017 16:03
• Sweet Memories (FredPeyer) I think I\'ve been in that bar...more than once. So you took me down...
  October 3rd, 2017 15:51
• This Love (Adrianna Kjeld) I believe Fred said it best, :You tell it like it is.\" Some of us wander...
  October 3rd, 2017 15:35
• Thank God, Papi is Home Again (Rrodriguez) A beautiful message Roberto. Only those who have lived through it know the...
  October 3rd, 2017 15:00
• ON BEING A POET (Michael Edwards) Agreed, agreed, agreed,...or more simply, I agree with all you have...
  October 3rd, 2017 12:56
• Ode to Music. (Goldfinch60) \"Without music, life is a journey through a desert\" - Conroy. So true...
  October 3rd, 2017 12:40
• The Late Muse. (Goldfinch60) The muse that creeps in the night, sometimes referred to as getting older....
  October 3rd, 2017 12:30
• THE BURGESS SHALE (Michael Edwards) Excellent haikus strung together to form a larger piece. Very old fossils...
  September 19th, 2017 10:52
• SHE MONSTICHS (Michael Edwards) The \"She\" in #4 is the girl for me. Lots of fun in your Monostichs,...
  September 18th, 2017 18:45
• LIMERICK 43 (Michael Edwards) I think I worked for that guy. He always left early. I was about to say...
  September 17th, 2017 09:46
• HIS PICTURE GONE (Michael Edwards) A picture gone, someone is missed. a faded wall enhances the contrast....
  September 16th, 2017 11:52
• Suicide Note (Liberty_Shadows) L.S. - Listen to Seek. Consider today the first day of YOUR life. Build it...
  September 15th, 2017 17:39
• WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards) The poem first - What a tortuous exercise this must have been, but you got...
  September 15th, 2017 15:10
• THE ABSTRACT ARTIST (Michael Edwards) Fresh ideas come in new forms, when all the older forms have been used up....
  September 14th, 2017 19:13
• THE RECURRING DREAM (Louis Gibbs) And thusly, you may have found the cure for your recurring dream....
  September 13th, 2017 14:53
• A COUPLE OF EDONES (Michael Edwards) Wonderful stuff. Great ideas expressed in a rigid format. Very difficult....
  September 13th, 2017 14:27
• Once Upon My Midnight\'s Madness (Swingline) Somehow reminded me of 9-11. What with all the jumping and fire. Horrible...
  May 6th, 2017 20:45
• DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards) All manners have left the table, or so it seems. The best of the best...
  May 6th, 2017 20:41
• Nightmares (Bibbeck) This is very well done, especially for such an early age. You most...
  May 6th, 2017 20:32
• I knew it wasnt true (Mizzy) Freedom? Yes? Sounds like the end of a relationship. Hope all is working...
  May 6th, 2017 20:24
• Wee Willy (Swingline) I\'m sure there\'s a joke here about frog\'s legs and long tongues, but...
  May 4th, 2017 17:26
• For Thine Eyes Only. (Fay Slimm.) Who\'s this Thine guy? Lucky fellow. A beautiful message sent back in time...
  May 4th, 2017 17:18
• Friggen Hornets (WriteBeLight) Hornets and wasps, yuck! I hate them.It seems I spend a great deal of time...
  May 4th, 2017 08:25
• THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards) My understanding of how villages got built, was that the church was the...
  May 4th, 2017 08:02
• THE GATHERING (Michael Edwards) I do not think that this is one day in the life of a woman, but rather her...
  May 4th, 2017 07:54
• Perhaps. (Fay Slimm.) Here where I live there is, on much older homes, an architectural...
  May 2nd, 2017 15:50
• Bird Bath (WriteBeLight) I like how they line up (or should I say tree up) for their turn in the...
  May 2nd, 2017 15:28
• LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24> (Michael Edwards) Three humorous sketches and one of Veere. Well done, Michael. I like #3,...
  May 2nd, 2017 15:18
• Start With A Cup (WriteBeLight) Cofffff....eeeeee! Used to be, my jump start in the morning, too, but, now...
  May 1st, 2017 20:24
• A SIMPLE MAN (Michael Edwards) A brilliant painting, in both examples, poem and drawing. Very picturesque...
  April 30th, 2017 17:26
• Awakening. (Goldfinch60) Facing another day on the planet is always a lucky day. Being able to...
  April 29th, 2017 20:49
• Boldness. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully spoken moment with Nature. All creatures become fascinating...
  April 28th, 2017 22:07
• DESPAIR (Michael Edwards) Whatever she said, it was powerful, or maybe it was just, \"No.\" Another...
  April 28th, 2017 21:57
• Questions (Lizzy Renee) There are more questions than there are answers. The important thing is to...
  April 28th, 2017 18:02
• NOSTALGIA (Michael Edwards) Ah, yes, the memories of our youth. Can they ever be seen again? or have...
  April 27th, 2017 20:40
• Rain Power (WriteBeLight) And they cancelled the ballgame!! I too hate potholes, and driving in the...
  April 25th, 2017 21:52
• Raphia Regalis Leaves (Gary Edward Geraci) The ways of life graded by the grandeur of leaves, very unique expression...
  April 25th, 2017 21:45
• The Battle Between Truth and Lies (Lizzy Renee) Live by the truth. Lies bring you down, trip you up, and destroy your self...
  April 25th, 2017 21:36
• Day After Long Weekend Blues (WriteBeLight) Beautiful weekend, now back to the grind, One reason to hate Mondays or...
  April 24th, 2017 20:14
• Scaled. (Fay Slimm.) Love can scale to the highest height, overcome any barrier, physical or...
  April 24th, 2017 20:08
• Strawberry fire (Down the rabbithole) Very zesty. Great mix of metaphor and directness. Be careful, the fruit of...
  April 23rd, 2017 21:13
• Smitten. (Fay Slimm.) Bitten by the Dove of Love? So, someone has to ask the question, might as...
  April 20th, 2017 20:38
• Foggy Fever (WriteBeLight) Time is a precious commodity. We work, eat and sleep and there is no time...
  April 20th, 2017 20:31
• ECHOES (Michael Edwards) A beautiful scene, to me, a summer\'s day of bright light and warmth, a...
  April 20th, 2017 20:24
• Pact (LIGHT WARRIOR) I think in life we all face trials, we are tested, and those who survive...
  April 20th, 2017 20:14
• When Love comes (Willyweed) So true. Sometimes you never realize it\'s happening. Great write. Loved...
  April 20th, 2017 20:05
• STOP (Michael Edwards) Sometimes we choose to not see things as they are, and sometimes we wish...
  April 19th, 2017 21:16
• The Engineer and the Salesman (WriteBeLight) The Engineer creates, the Salesman sells, It\'s the sale that involves a...
  April 18th, 2017 22:27
• shining star (Willyweed) It takes courage to deal with those types of problems, both for the victim...
  April 18th, 2017 22:17
• TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN (Michael Edwards) I think we\'ve all had those moments of unintended frost, but the way...
  April 18th, 2017 22:14
• THE MUSIC OF THE SEA (Michael Edwards) Some call it the roar of the sea, here it\'s the music, and I\'ve heard it...
  April 17th, 2017 19:46
• don\'t hesitate (Willyweed) The hateful suffer in misery. The loving live in joy. Two paths: one like...
  April 17th, 2017 19:41
• Unsung Whispers. (Fay Slimm.) I think as writers we have more of an affinity for quiet than most. To me,...
  April 14th, 2017 21:11
• Lily of Easter (WriteBeLight) Lilies are such beautiful flowers, and on this weekend so significant....
  April 14th, 2017 21:06
• COMICAL COUPLETS (Michael Edwards) Humor and sculpting, Wow! Funny stuff that, the jokes not the sculptures....
  April 14th, 2017 20:59
• UNFOLDED (Down the rabbithole) I like this one. No surprise there, so well written. I especially liked...
  April 13th, 2017 20:06
• Scrambled Message (Philip) Too much technology, not enough humanity. 1984 is coming. Ear phones in,...
  April 13th, 2017 19:52
• LEICESTER STATION (Michael Edwards) Terrific poem, great use of historic and modern comparison. Hand-wound...
  April 13th, 2017 19:46
• I am the traveler (Willyweed) To be the universal traveler, roaming the great expanse of space, sounds...
  April 12th, 2017 12:02
• Tribal Organisation. (Fay Slimm.) Learned a lot from this one. It\'s almost human like. Our leaders tend to...
  April 12th, 2017 11:48
• Neighbour Watching (Goldfinch60) Our tongues are going to melt away as we adapt to the external mode of...
  April 12th, 2017 11:41
• THE UNKNOWN MAN (Michael Edwards) Rumor has it that this is a terrific poem for one who can barely scribble....
  April 12th, 2017 11:26
• A City Day (Nameless) Boston is fantastic day or night! ( Go Sox, Go Pats!!) You\'re right...
  April 11th, 2017 15:57
• THREE SMILES (Michael Edwards) Great fun. I\'m inclined toward number three, trash mail Why worry about...
  April 11th, 2017 15:51
• We Deserve It. (Fay Slimm.) Yeah, let\'s all make over our hearts. Let\'s lose the greed, the lust for...
  April 11th, 2017 15:39
• Sunday in the Garden (Willyweed) A beautiful poem for children...of all ages. The optimism of it\'s message...
  April 11th, 2017 15:33
• Victorious. (Fay Slimm.) Love is the answer to everything. Human emotions are defenseless against...
  April 10th, 2017 20:44
• MY PLACE (Michael Edwards) How do you do watercolors without a water supply? Nice little poem about...
  April 10th, 2017 20:38
• The Compass (Rrodriguez) It will be a brave new world some day, when Man can look past his own...
  April 10th, 2017 20:32
• unfolding (Willyweed) A very hopeful and uplifting message. Sunrise, Sunset, all is well....
  April 10th, 2017 20:23
• SECLUSION (Michael Edwards) A quiet place for art and the art of love. What more could a person want?...
  April 9th, 2017 19:10
• BINDING VOWS (Michael Edwards) Nice poem, nice photo, nice garden. Can I come for tea? Veyt interesting...
  April 8th, 2017 21:34
• Whale-Play. (Fay Slimm.) And it wove a great tale indeed. I\'ve been whale watching and it was a...
  April 8th, 2017 21:25
• wild rabbit (Willyweed) Sort of like Willy through the looking glass, follow the rabbit and see...
  April 8th, 2017 21:19
• Who I Am. (Fay Slimm.) Sounds like a Declaration of Independence. Hope it all works out for you....
  April 7th, 2017 20:18
• Season Of Respite (WriteBeLight) Thank God, I do believe it has broken. I sense Spring in the air. Time to...
  April 7th, 2017 20:12
• IS TODAY TODAY ? (Michael Edwards) Is that a drawing of your home? You wish. Whatever today is, tomorrow will...
  April 7th, 2017 20:01
• Lost To Reality. (Goldfinch60) It takes a brave heart to deal with what you have to, and only a love...
  April 7th, 2017 09:39
• Wonderment. (Fay Slimm.) Thanks for the translation. I needed that .A sultry and sensuous...
  April 6th, 2017 19:18
• words 3 (Tony36) Great sentiment, full of truth. A nice poem for all to read. - Phil A.
  April 6th, 2017 16:06
• AUTUMN SUN (Michael Edwards) Beautiful words, \"ripened rays,\" \"cobwebs newly spun,\" etc. A fresh...
  April 6th, 2017 16:05
• \"not just a women\" (Willyweed) Love is eternal. This is the message I get from this. An enjoyable little...
  April 6th, 2017 15:51
• The Wonders of God\'s Creation (Rrodriguez) Certainly paints a beautiful picture, you intended result for sure. Why...
  April 5th, 2017 22:30