Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- When the Voices Multiply (Ezekiel Olayemi)
Always choose the path that leads where you want to go. There are many...
July 10th, 2025 15:08 - One More Open Verdict For the Road (Neville)
Wow, this makes me think deeply. There are so many ways people fall, in...
July 10th, 2025 15:01 - Hyenas (Damaso)
What I get from this, is \"Life,\" death and judgement. Your closing line...
July 10th, 2025 14:34 - starfall, freefall (Arqios)
Rik, I love the playing with form and how it can add to the meaning of a...
July 10th, 2025 14:14 - Fraternity (Doggerel Dave)
\"Fraternity,\" can be many things to many people, from just an...
July 10th, 2025 14:04 - Lost art (Sorenbarrett)
Nice one, SB. I guess poetry is safe from falling and shattering, and can...
July 10th, 2025 13:55 - Access Denied. (Poetic Licence)
Nice, PL. I don\'t know how far down that \'basement floor\' is, but I...
July 10th, 2025 13:43 - The Keys To Happiness Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful, Andy. I think music is a universal language. Like poetry it...
July 10th, 2025 13:37 - Some Kind of African Life (Neville)
Hey, welcome back. Missed your poetry. Hope this poem wasn\'t why you were...
July 9th, 2025 11:57 - A vision (Sorenbarrett)
What goes around comes around, and we all pay for out transgressions...
July 9th, 2025 10:53 - Half a Heart. (Poetic Licence)
Very clever and wise. We could all befall the same fate in our struggles...
July 9th, 2025 10:41 - Accept Reality. (Goldfinch60)
Wise words, Andy. I guess we all get there eventually. Time to \"accept...
July 9th, 2025 10:37 - Lessons in Love from Water and Stone (GeekSusie)
Earthly metaphors for a relationship, river and mountain, coexisting in...
July 6th, 2025 20:09 - Orgasm Of Dawn (Gaias Soothing Haven)
This is beautiful, somewhat erotic, but in a teasing way. The arrival of...
July 6th, 2025 19:58 - Helpless Witness (Vanna)
A beautiful, but sad poem. You\'ve expressed your depiction of the...
July 6th, 2025 19:43 - Home Again (Bella Shepard)
Welcome back.
A nice Senryu to restart. hope you stay a while and bring...
July 6th, 2025 19:36 - The Jackalope (Tony36)
Good fun Poem.
July 6th, 2025 13:56 - Butterfly Reflections (Teddy.15)
A beautiful butterfly as a resurrected loved one, I never heard of this...
July 6th, 2025 13:47 - Why me? (Sorenbarrett)
There are all types of good fortune. Some people get discovered and become...
July 6th, 2025 13:31 - feasting you (Arqios)
A brilliant remembrance of olden times when two hearts were one. The...
July 6th, 2025 12:17 - Wise Man Say (19) (Poetic Licence)
Some wonder wisdom here. I loved the one about a \'door.\" - Phil A.
July 6th, 2025 12:08 - The True Power of A Soul (Teddy.15)
July 1st, 2025 14:25 - The True Power of A Soul (Teddy.15)
Let the light shine on this poem. There is much knowledge contained...
July 1st, 2025 14:25 - Race Revolution (Tony36)
Amen!! When will the human race wake up and realize that we are all one...
July 1st, 2025 14:18 - Little bird (Sorenbarrett)
Oh, this tale tells of a lost love. Symbolisms of birds and flight and a...
July 1st, 2025 14:13 - Seed You Sow (Senryu). (Poetic Licence)
To nurture is to love. What a great sentiment. We can succeed at...
July 1st, 2025 14:06 - June 14, 2010: journal entry (Arqios)
Wow, If we could live in our poetry worlds, the world would be a beautiful...
July 1st, 2025 14:00 - A Sonnet For Your Fiftieth Year. (Goldfinch60)
This is great. Full of understanding and pride. My son turns 50 next year....
July 1st, 2025 13:42 - Wise Man Say (18). (Poetic Licence)
Lots of wisdom here. Like the one about pulling the plug. Sometimes, we...
June 29th, 2025 13:18 - The bribe (Sorenbarrett)
Good one SB. Quite a story and well told. Too many loopholes in the law,...
June 29th, 2025 13:02 - waltz of the wind (Arqios)
Beautiful words, Rik. It\'s a beautiful Sunday here and your pic and words...
June 29th, 2025 12:55 - Soul Seeker (Teddy.15)
Wow Teddy, A lot said in so few words. I must agree it\'s the \"heart\"...
June 29th, 2025 11:38 - Prithee, What Colour IS Speechless Afterall? (Cheeky Missy)
These are not easy to create, seems like a lot of work. A bit of humor in...
June 29th, 2025 11:29 - One of my most favourite Questions? (Teddy.15)
Yes, I have, and none are poets. I believe that our concentration on the...
June 19th, 2025 14:33 - More News (Doggerel Dave)
Good one Dave. The news is horrendous these days. Commentators just do...
June 19th, 2025 12:38 - Of An Unknown Poet (Teddy.15)
Amen, Teddy. What a very thoughtful poem. We are all obscure poets, even...
June 19th, 2025 12:30 - I Dreamed I Saw... (Rrodriguez)
Wow, RR. Loved this trip into your strange new world. It read like a scary...
June 19th, 2025 12:19 - White sepulchers (Sorenbarrett)
Well worded. The face of humanity is a scary look. At best we a just a bit...
June 19th, 2025 12:09 - Mammon`s Table. (Poetic Licence)
Like this one, it\'s elusiveness and thoughtfulness all wrapped around a...
June 19th, 2025 11:57 - my poetic side (Arqios)
Arqios, this is a great synopsis of the site and a beautiful poem as well....
June 19th, 2025 11:45 - Where Does Time Go? (Goldfinch60)
Andy, I felt this one. For me it was my 21\'st birthday, so. 60 years ago....
June 19th, 2025 11:43 - What you can\'t accept in yourself (Sorenbarrett)
Interesting form SB. Well rhymed also. Such insecurity can and does...
June 11th, 2025 12:57 - Spinning Hoops (Poetic Licence)
Nice one LP. Seems very relevant to today\'s situation. Seems the spinning...
June 11th, 2025 12:51 - Memories Of Brubeck. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, he was a master. Was there ever a better Jazz song written? A while...
June 11th, 2025 12:42 - lonely (Lunarchloedip)
Reading this, I was almost afraid to comment. Don\'t take that wrong, I...
June 10th, 2025 15:17 - Ships (NafisaSB)
\"Ships that sail in the sea of life,\" is a great metaphor. Then you...
June 10th, 2025 11:58 - Life, the Movie (Thomas W Case)
Act 1 - I loved it. Act 2 - Brilliant script. Act 3 - Sad ending. I guess...
June 8th, 2025 11:10 - Sometimes Until We Are Blue In The Face (Teddy.15)
What we do is to organize those shapes to create Art, part of which is to...
June 7th, 2025 11:48 - Fatigued With You (Alex Arnot)
A sense of despair over a rejection. Cheer up, it will pass. It always...
June 6th, 2025 16:14 - Our Coffee House. (Goldfinch60)
It great that you enjoy the friendship while at the coffee-house. Such...
June 6th, 2025 16:09 - I need answers (Orchidee)
Is a funambulist just an E.M.T. who enjoys his job? Careful now, don\'t...
June 6th, 2025 16:01 - Head of wheat (Sorenbarrett)
From the seed planted to the bread baked. The life cycle rolls along. A...
June 6th, 2025 15:55 - Your Heart Is Strong. (Poetic Licence)
So true, I admit it. - Phil A.
June 6th, 2025 15:48 - A Sprinkling of Philosophical Petals (Teddy.15)
Teddy, from 1 to 6, I loved them all, especially 1, 3,4,5,6, but the first...
June 3rd, 2025 20:35 - Time is our Frenemy (Teddy.15)
So wise. If we try even one thing it is difficult to master it, let alone...
June 1st, 2025 09:29 - Mr. Cotter (Sorenbarrett)
A well told tale, with a message and many inspirations. loved it.
June 1st, 2025 09:27 - Wise Man Say (14) (Poetic Licence)
Wisdom and wry humor, what else could one want. Keep bringing it. - Phil
June 1st, 2025 09:25 - Poet\'s Bush Call (Arqios)
A great bit of Aussie culture and a wish for the future. Loved it.
June 1st, 2025 09:21 - Welcome June. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, thanks for the welcome to June First. May it bring some great...
June 1st, 2025 09:18 - Tell me something new for crying out loud! (Doggerel Dave)
Hey DD, don\'t worry there\'s no such thing as Climate Change. He has...
May 27th, 2025 14:37 - Gone (Sorenbarrett)
This reminded me of the Dutch Elm Disease that wiped out all the chestnut...
May 27th, 2025 14:28 - Blade In My Hand. (Poetic Licence)
Kind of a terrifying piece of poetry. What is the world coming to if we...
May 27th, 2025 14:19 - Blessed Or Blasted Mahler. (Goldfinch60)
Ah, Andy, the dangers of listening to classical music. Perhaps you had...
May 27th, 2025 14:10 - what we\'ll always be (Arqios)
In those unspoken moments, \"the language of skin,\" promises are made...
May 27th, 2025 14:01 - If Raven Was to Come Today (Teddy.15)
\"Who\'s that tapping at my door? Quoth the Raven, \"Nevermore.\" The...
May 26th, 2025 18:37 - beautiful regret (Arqios)
A wonderful description of one of the aspects of love. Your colorful...
May 26th, 2025 13:53 - The Day I Didn\'t Go Back (The Soft Witness)
Good for you. You have an inner strength, or spirit, listen to it, follow...
May 26th, 2025 09:18 - I’m Here Today… (Doggerel Dave)
Dave, Dave, Dave, ones \" bodily frame \" is just housing for your brain,...
May 25th, 2025 18:14 - Until It Hurts (The Soft Witness)
I found this to be enthralling and real. Written with an honest passion,...
May 25th, 2025 16:42 - Coffee (BlessedbyGod)
Some would say it\'s a caffein addiction, but not me, I\'ll never mention...
May 23rd, 2025 09:01 - Demise of a poem (Sorenbarrett)
We\'ve all been there, and I suppose that doesn\'t help at all, and there...
May 23rd, 2025 08:48 - The Urge To Kill. (Poetic Licence)
The answer to your closing questions is YES. This sort of self-evaluation...
May 23rd, 2025 08:36 - Roofing Conundrum (Doggerel Dave)
DD, It\'s all just a big lottery. There\'s good and bad among all walks of...
May 11th, 2025 10:18 - How to Get A Thousand Poet\'s to Think? (Teddy.15)
Teddy, imagine being reunited with your lineage. People from your...
May 11th, 2025 10:04 - Wise Man Say (11). (Poetic Licence)
PL, lots of wisdom among the humor. And it\'s true, \"she already knows.\"
May 11th, 2025 09:56 - Weeds grow (Sorenbarrett)
SB, always the greatest threat to my gardening skills. I hate weeds. I...
May 11th, 2025 09:52 - Two Sided Life. (Goldfinch60)
Andy, wonderful words of wisdom. Choosing wisely makes all the...
May 11th, 2025 09:48 - Lady Iris (Teddy.15)
A beautiful poem posted for wishes of a \"Happy Mother\'s Day,\" enhances...
May 10th, 2025 18:22 - Forever. (David Wakeling)
Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Liked your rhyme scheme and loved the line ,...
May 10th, 2025 17:52 - Senryu ( to sunset) (Teddy.15)
It\'s the imagery in this poem that is its strength. Taking Nightfall and...
February 26th, 2025 20:36 - Aide-Mémoire’s (Neville)
Big or small, some things are never forgotten, but it is the little things...
February 26th, 2025 20:25 - No Pages to See (Teddy.15)
It would be a \"flatline\" world without the poet. No emotions, no beauty,...
February 21st, 2025 17:28 - Playing With Words (Neville)
Love wrapped in poetry. Metaphors that are a metaphor. He and she involved...
February 18th, 2025 12:39 - I Am Metaphor (Teddy.15)
As they asked Zuckerman, \" What is META for? \" Sorry just had to get rid...
February 18th, 2025 12:27 - Not to be confused (Sorenbarrett)
A beautiful poem. Aspects of love and the true nature of it in three...
February 17th, 2025 20:45 - Beautiful Morning (Doggerel Dave)
If we hung the laundry out this morning it would be frozen solid by noon....
February 17th, 2025 20:35 - Shadow (Cassie58)
Oh, so sad. After years it still hurts. When we lost our collie when we...
February 17th, 2025 20:27 - Such A Beautiful Place (Teddy.15)
Think only of the butterflies. Let the darkness be a black one. Keep the...
February 17th, 2025 20:19 - Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times) (Neville)
Sometimes, we just can\'t get enough of the blood, sweat, and tears. ...
February 17th, 2025 20:13 - The World Holds It`s Breath (Poetic Licence)
Truth, and nothing but the truth. A well-spoken piece. I feel like it will...
February 17th, 2025 20:05 - No1 from MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards)
A very clever 4-liner. Made me laugh. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 19:56 - Walking In The Store. (Goldfinch60)
There\'s always a few inches and tens of pounds between our self-image and...
February 17th, 2025 19:45 - Some Things She Once Said (Neville)
A love lost through the circumstances of separation. The distance serving...
February 16th, 2025 11:16 - Record Player (Sorenbarrett)
Your poem spins memories for its reader. Vinyl plastic at its best. I...
February 16th, 2025 11:04 - Show People Sunshine. (Goldfinch60)
So true. You hit the nail. Be kind and cheery. The thank-yous will be...
February 15th, 2025 20:09 - I\'ll Be Home (Thomas W Case)
Somewhat sad but very inspirational . Memories of happier times with...
February 15th, 2025 20:04 - Shrink Satire (Teddy.15)
I think they\'re called \" shrinks \" because of how a paycheck shrinks...
February 15th, 2025 19:45 - Ax of division (Sorenbarrett)
Your poem digs deep into the wounds that never heal. Some situations are...
December 23rd, 2024 23:39 - Happy Birthday Chet. (Goldfinch60)
Terrific ode to Chet. There is a movie about his life, \"Born To Be...
December 23rd, 2024 23:31 - Darling I Bought You A Hoover (Poetic Licence)
Very entertaining poem, TN. Any truth to this and your happy life could be...
December 23rd, 2024 23:23
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