Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Strategically Lost (Neville)
Lost in the warmest place you could find? For a short while anyway. Yet,...
December 10th, 2024 16:38 - Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe (Neville)
The first seems a bit \"passive-aggressive\" for both the \"you\" and the...
December 8th, 2024 23:43 - The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Silence is golden. What more can I say? Sometimes, people come at you...
December 5th, 2024 13:53 - Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58)
Say what you will, this is a damn fine poem. It is best that we share...
December 5th, 2024 13:47 - Watched (Neville)
The beauty of a woman is a powerful attraction. So powerful, that we are...
December 5th, 2024 13:40 - The Ghost of John Lennon (Teddy.15)
A beautiful poem and wish. Peace could be had if all the people would...
December 5th, 2024 13:34 - Such a Waste of Fine Words (Neville)
\"Fine words,\" like fine wine must struggle to attain their sweetness....
November 29th, 2024 13:21 - Here (Doggerel Dave)
You\'re here because a couple got together and co-mingled some...
November 29th, 2024 13:01 - Best Dream Ever (senryu) (Teddy.15)
Kid in a candy store, that\'s the best dream ever. There definitely must...
November 28th, 2024 18:13 - Green Tangents (Neville)
An apocalyptic scenario from which there is no surviving. No one left to...
November 28th, 2024 17:59 - Lying & Truly (Neville)
It hits a bit softer when it is mutual, and a lot harder when it is just...
November 26th, 2024 20:29 - Forget Me Not (Teddy.15)
We are all what we were born as, altered only by the paths we follow in...
November 25th, 2024 17:25 - Filled With Joy. (Goldfinch60)
Very refreshing poem. It filled my mind and heart with joy, too. Sometimes...
November 25th, 2024 17:10 - Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it? (Doggerel Dave)
LMFAO, DD.
November 25th, 2024 17:02 - Team Building (Neville)
It begs the question, if the roles were reversed, how would you feel about...
November 25th, 2024 16:54 - Amaterasu (Neville)
An ode to a Shinto Goddess of the Sun, and of womanly perfection. Your...
November 21st, 2024 19:29 - The Literature Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful Andy. I could not agree more. Without music what would the world...
November 21st, 2024 19:06 - Paralytic (Teddy.15)
Wow Teddy, tell us how you really feel (LOL). You are spot on. As I said...
November 16th, 2024 11:50 - Satanic Panic (Tristan Robert Lange)
So true. We all are fed crap to devour, and too many will not put in the...
November 16th, 2024 11:38 - LEST WE FORGET (Doggerel Dave)
Much said in a few words. We remember them, but never do enough to prevent...
November 14th, 2024 17:39 - Essence (Neville)
Something always remains of a lover no longer with us. I suppose that the...
November 14th, 2024 17:35 - Ode To Profiteroles. (Goldfinch60)
I could die for a profiterole right now. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:26 - Ants (Sorenbarrett)
\"Follow a scent trail. swallow rules, life sacrificed,\" Like sheep to...
November 14th, 2024 17:23 - Keep A Lid On It (Cassie58)
So sorry to hear of your losses. A difficult chore to rummage through...
November 14th, 2024 17:17 - The Colour of Void (Cassie58)
No punctuation, no capitalization, sets the scene for the sadness in this...
November 13th, 2024 21:23 - Messengers In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Some very wise words. Andy. Help others to see the light. You are a ray of...
November 13th, 2024 21:09 - Superfluous Twists (Neville)
I guess this means that men being strung along, to the point of...
November 13th, 2024 21:05 - Not Alone (HangingbyaHalo)
Sometimes I wonder what will become of all those folk who stare at their...
November 13th, 2024 17:47 - Letting Go of Your Ghost (Neville)
You can let go of the \"Ghost.\" but the \"Ghost\" may not let go of you....
November 12th, 2024 10:37 - Why does love hurt? (Ashley!)
The deeper the love the more the parting hurts. There is always a tomorrow...
November 9th, 2024 21:53 - Crying out load (David Wakeling)
Beautiful poem David. Loved each of the scenes you painted with your...
November 9th, 2024 21:42 - Each New Day. (Goldfinch60)
Love the connection between love and the seasons. \"And new life will be...
November 9th, 2024 21:39 - Leaving (Leonardo Abreu)
A sad poem about a lost love. Very well constructed and full of great...
November 9th, 2024 21:34 - Emophilia (Neville)
Falling in love is not something one does quickly .... except that I did...
November 9th, 2024 21:29 - Wilderness (Neville)
Lost in the wilderness, of any sort, becomes a game of survival. In the...
November 8th, 2024 13:48 - Solitude (Katdream)
I enjoyed your poem. I liked the image and your words. Especially liked...
November 7th, 2024 19:00 - Glimpsed (Neville)
Funny how, when something changes color we all become amazed. Refracted...
November 7th, 2024 18:48 - Heavily Enlightened (Neville)
I\'m with you there. Or, as Mel Brooks once said. \"I get up in the...
November 3rd, 2024 11:52 - Two Times Four Plus One (Teddy.15)
Who would ever want to change their human life for that of a cat? For all...
November 2nd, 2024 16:10 - Get Yer Diction Right for Starters…. (Doggerel Dave)
If we do not adapt, SOON, we all die, but I suspect we\'ll wait until...
November 1st, 2024 11:22 - Samhain Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Loved it. Wonderful poem, Andy. Great craftsmanship. My fav line was \"and...
November 1st, 2024 11:13 - Aftermath (Teddy.15)
Going through \"Halloween Withdrawal\" here. We lived in Salem,...
November 1st, 2024 11:05 - If Only Things Had Been Different (Neville)
Second chances are like 2 in a million, but we all wonder and never...
November 1st, 2024 10:37 - With The Absolute Very Best Of Love (Teddy.15)
A great declaration. These things happen and there always seems to be rain...
October 31st, 2024 13:51 - Looking Beyond Spring (Neville)
Missing someone and hoping to find them in the future. The \"rains\" of...
October 31st, 2024 13:46 - Reach iut (Tony36)
Necessary words spoken here. It\'s something we should all do.
October 31st, 2024 13:27 - Bear (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you, Andy
October 31st, 2024 12:13 - Self Obsessed (Sunshine777)
A very moving scene created here. Your style is unique. Your empathy for...
October 30th, 2024 09:34 - Hail (Neville)
Whoa, big hailstones. They are very dangerous. Can be killers. Global...
October 30th, 2024 09:28 - LIMERICKS 127, 128 and 129 (Michael Edwards)
Naughty but nice. I loved the one about \"Scruffy.\" Good to see the...
October 30th, 2024 09:18 - A Very Special Journey (Teddy.15)
Ah, how many times do artists and poets find their muse in a starry sky?...
October 30th, 2024 09:04 - Another Moment Lost (Neville)
All the moments of our youth should be treasured. They are why we are...
October 28th, 2024 12:08 - Just One Day. (Goldfinch60)
Sound advice. One day at a time. A coping mechanism for sure. I say,...
October 28th, 2024 11:49 - Medlar to Blet (Neville)
Well, I\'m now much more informed today than yesterday, when I didn\'t...
October 27th, 2024 11:47 - Halfway to Hanoi (Neville)
A chance encounter interrupted by a man-made firebomb. A journey that...
October 26th, 2024 17:25 - Sixty Minute Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
To spend a million within an hour is near impossible. What would you buy?...
October 26th, 2024 14:24 - The Sibilance Of Showers. (Goldfinch60)
A gentle rain shower is like a natural sedative. It works for me and...
October 26th, 2024 14:09 - SHE AGREES (Michael Edwards)
Enjoyed the scene you\'ve described here, and it ended happily. Loved the...
October 25th, 2024 13:41 - Fake ID (Teddy.15)
He\'s a P.H.D. alright, A Pig-Headed D*+k. Just like in your photo. I...
October 25th, 2024 13:16 - Inaudible Sounds (Neville)
Sound is always present except in a vacuum. Yet even there, your ears...
October 25th, 2024 13:00 - Ice-Slide (Teddy.15)
I think penguins are some of the funniest creatures alive. Your poem is a...
October 24th, 2024 11:04 - Bemused to Death (Neville)
When the muse gets loose, we lose the juice. However we lose that...
October 24th, 2024 10:47 - Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do (Neville)
It\'s like an Isosceles triangle, it won\'t work unless all sides are...
October 23rd, 2024 13:26 - Some Things Change Too Much (Neville)
\"Full of complete strangers.\" Sometimes, the passage of time leaves one...
October 22nd, 2024 13:13 - The Repatriation of Shards (Neville)
Once bright and shining as part of a stained-glass window high on the...
October 17th, 2024 12:09 - Fit For Purpose (Neville)
Reminds me of pub\'s years ago whose only purpose was for drinking. Now a...
October 10th, 2024 15:58 - Just As Sunsets (Neville)
As the \"Sunsets\" behind \"displaced fragments of ancient mountains\" It...
October 8th, 2024 13:26 - Gaea’s Garden (Neville)
And so it is. Life, Death, Rebirth. A lot said in few words. The power of...
October 5th, 2024 15:32 - Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60)
Congrats, on life and your poem. It showed life in the good and bad times....
October 5th, 2024 15:29 - Masquerade (Tristan Robert Lange)
So be it. Time for the skeletons to free themselves.
A very deep poem...
October 5th, 2024 15:21 - Irksome Quandaries (Neville)
The closer you get to the end, the more infinity looms like a precipice....
September 30th, 2024 10:04 - How is it goodbye? (Ladywithaquill)
We\'ve all been through breakups, and your poem is empathic to how we feel...
September 14th, 2024 09:41 - Hold On Tight (Teddy.15)
I\'m never getting on a roller coaster again. Thanks a lot.
No seriously,...
September 14th, 2024 09:30 - Reading Is A Crime. (Goldfinch60)
When all the books are gone, we can all die of boredom. Or maybe, they\'ll...
September 14th, 2024 09:21 - Pretty in Purple and Pink (Neville)
The release of inhibitions can be hard to overcome. She seemed extreme in...
September 14th, 2024 09:12 - Peace (Tony36)
Amen! Brotherhood before enemy. Equality before difference. peace before...
September 13th, 2024 11:05 - Peace (Tony36)
Amen! Brotherhood before enemy. Equality before difference. peace before...
September 13th, 2024 11:05 - Karmasutra (Teddy.15)
I believe the passion should last a bit longer than a lightning bolt, and...
September 13th, 2024 10:13 - Patriotism (Doggerel Dave)
OK, Dave, no fealty to anything? I agree that patriotism should only be...
September 13th, 2024 10:05 - I Long To Meet Me (Rebellion_in_sanity)
I believe many have this same desire, to find one\'s better self. Your...
September 13th, 2024 09:56 - Being Alive. (Goldfinch60)
Stockpiling emotions is never a good idea. Be yourself and let it out....
September 13th, 2024 09:51 - Crumbs (Neville)
Wow! This profoundly sad scene was filled with longing. Trying to remember...
September 11th, 2024 21:14 - Dead Poets (Kevin Michael Bloor)
Absolutely true. Many poets die and are never heard. Their words lie...
September 8th, 2024 11:55 - Peace, love, kindness (Tony36)
Amen!! Your thoughts are spot on. \"Peace, Love and Kindness\" are the...
September 8th, 2024 11:37 - Rainbow (Teddy.15)
A terrific haiku, \"a smiley face upside down\" is brilliant. Loved this...
September 8th, 2024 11:32 - Feather Of Life. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful thought that of course came from you. Keep smiling.
September 8th, 2024 11:28 - And So It Is (Cassie58)
I love this poem until its ending, \"can change.\" It threw me off, \"A...
September 6th, 2024 13:34 - My poems are... (Tom Dylan)
Well if truth is poetry you are a poet. What is imagination? It\'s what we...
September 6th, 2024 13:16 - Tattoos and scars (Sorenbarrett)
A great display of life\'s scaring and bruising. Hopefully no permanent...
September 6th, 2024 12:59 - Explaining KP & Co (Orchidee)
Speak your words and no one else\'s. Don\'t let anyone push you around. ...
September 6th, 2024 12:52 - Old Codgers Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
The joy you share here is an inspiration, Live long and Love. - Phil A.
September 6th, 2024 12:41 - A Very Poetic Finish (Teddy.15)
And also a poetic lunch. Gruesome, yet comical. Alligators devouring...
September 6th, 2024 12:38 - My fathers hands (Pappy155)
Yes, we all get there sooner or later. The time when we realize life has...
September 4th, 2024 12:13 - I am writer (Tom Dylan)
Very clever and also true. We write and become what we write. The tools of...
September 4th, 2024 11:43 - ABROGATIONS OF INTELLECT (Michael Edwards)
Amen. Too many Gods and too little time to sort out who to believe in....
September 4th, 2024 11:17 - From A Distance. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful poem and attached video song. It is truth being spoken in...
September 4th, 2024 10:58 - Everything\'s Alright (Tom Dylan)
From \" Jesus Christ Superstar,\" I think.
If it works keep doing it. We...
September 3rd, 2024 12:56 - Peace To All Acrostic. (Goldfinch60)
A clever acrostic with a most important message. Well done, Andy. - Phil
September 3rd, 2024 12:41 - Dancing On The Water. (Goldfinch60)
A brilliant description of a yacht race. So many descriptive images. I...
August 31st, 2024 16:14 - One Last Night With The Fireflies (Teddy.15)
A night well spent. To commune with Nature is always an exhilarating...
August 31st, 2024 16:07
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