Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Senryu ( to sunset) (Teddy.15)
It\'s the imagery in this poem that is its strength. Taking Nightfall and...
February 26th, 2025 20:36 - Aide-Mémoire’s (Neville)
Big or small, some things are never forgotten, but it is the little things...
February 26th, 2025 20:25 - No Pages to See (Teddy.15)
It would be a \"flatline\" world without the poet. No emotions, no beauty,...
February 21st, 2025 17:28 - Playing With Words (Neville)
Love wrapped in poetry. Metaphors that are a metaphor. He and she involved...
February 18th, 2025 12:39 - I Am Metaphor (Teddy.15)
As they asked Zuckerman, \" What is META for? \" Sorry just had to get rid...
February 18th, 2025 12:27 - Not to be confused (Sorenbarrett)
A beautiful poem. Aspects of love and the true nature of it in three...
February 17th, 2025 20:45 - Beautiful Morning (Doggerel Dave)
If we hung the laundry out this morning it would be frozen solid by noon....
February 17th, 2025 20:35 - Shadow (Cassie58)
Oh, so sad. After years it still hurts. When we lost our collie when we...
February 17th, 2025 20:27 - Such A Beautiful Place (Teddy.15)
Think only of the butterflies. Let the darkness be a black one. Keep the...
February 17th, 2025 20:19 - Insatiated (A Neologism for Our Times) (Neville)
Sometimes, we just can\'t get enough of the blood, sweat, and tears. ...
February 17th, 2025 20:13 - The World Holds It`s Breath (Poetic Licence)
Truth, and nothing but the truth. A well-spoken piece. I feel like it will...
February 17th, 2025 20:05 - No1 from MORE OF THE DIFFERENT (Michael Edwards)
A very clever 4-liner. Made me laugh. - Phil A.
February 17th, 2025 19:56 - Walking In The Store. (Goldfinch60)
There\'s always a few inches and tens of pounds between our self-image and...
February 17th, 2025 19:45 - Some Things She Once Said (Neville)
A love lost through the circumstances of separation. The distance serving...
February 16th, 2025 11:16 - Record Player (Sorenbarrett)
Your poem spins memories for its reader. Vinyl plastic at its best. I...
February 16th, 2025 11:04 - Show People Sunshine. (Goldfinch60)
So true. You hit the nail. Be kind and cheery. The thank-yous will be...
February 15th, 2025 20:09 - I\'ll Be Home (Thomas W Case)
Somewhat sad but very inspirational . Memories of happier times with...
February 15th, 2025 20:04 - Shrink Satire (Teddy.15)
I think they\'re called \" shrinks \" because of how a paycheck shrinks...
February 15th, 2025 19:45 - Ax of division (Sorenbarrett)
Your poem digs deep into the wounds that never heal. Some situations are...
December 23rd, 2024 23:39 - Happy Birthday Chet. (Goldfinch60)
Terrific ode to Chet. There is a movie about his life, \"Born To Be...
December 23rd, 2024 23:31 - Darling I Bought You A Hoover (Poetic Licence)
Very entertaining poem, TN. Any truth to this and your happy life could be...
December 23rd, 2024 23:23 - Counting Blessings (Cassie58)
Wonderful poem Cassie. We all need to reflect on our blessings and realize...
December 23rd, 2024 23:17 - Festive Humbug (Teddy.15)
Cheers, Teddy. LOL. Mixing the Christmas spirits with the Christmas spirit...
December 23rd, 2024 23:11 - Strategically Lost (Neville)
Lost in the warmest place you could find? For a short while anyway. Yet,...
December 10th, 2024 16:38 - Yours Truly A. Victim .. & Maybe Just Maybe (Neville)
The first seems a bit \"passive-aggressive\" for both the \"you\" and the...
December 8th, 2024 23:43 - The Power Of Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Silence is golden. What more can I say? Sometimes, people come at you...
December 5th, 2024 13:53 - Veils Of Mystique (Cassie58)
Say what you will, this is a damn fine poem. It is best that we share...
December 5th, 2024 13:47 - Watched (Neville)
The beauty of a woman is a powerful attraction. So powerful, that we are...
December 5th, 2024 13:40 - The Ghost of John Lennon (Teddy.15)
A beautiful poem and wish. Peace could be had if all the people would...
December 5th, 2024 13:34 - Such a Waste of Fine Words (Neville)
\"Fine words,\" like fine wine must struggle to attain their sweetness....
November 29th, 2024 13:21 - Here (Doggerel Dave)
You\'re here because a couple got together and co-mingled some...
November 29th, 2024 13:01 - Best Dream Ever (senryu) (Teddy.15)
Kid in a candy store, that\'s the best dream ever. There definitely must...
November 28th, 2024 18:13 - Green Tangents (Neville)
An apocalyptic scenario from which there is no surviving. No one left to...
November 28th, 2024 17:59 - Lying & Truly (Neville)
It hits a bit softer when it is mutual, and a lot harder when it is just...
November 26th, 2024 20:29 - Forget Me Not (Teddy.15)
We are all what we were born as, altered only by the paths we follow in...
November 25th, 2024 17:25 - Filled With Joy. (Goldfinch60)
Very refreshing poem. It filled my mind and heart with joy, too. Sometimes...
November 25th, 2024 17:10 - Acronyms – not an inspiring title, is it? (Doggerel Dave)
LMFAO, DD.
November 25th, 2024 17:02 - Team Building (Neville)
It begs the question, if the roles were reversed, how would you feel about...
November 25th, 2024 16:54 - Amaterasu (Neville)
An ode to a Shinto Goddess of the Sun, and of womanly perfection. Your...
November 21st, 2024 19:29 - The Literature Of Music. (Goldfinch60)
Beautiful Andy. I could not agree more. Without music what would the world...
November 21st, 2024 19:06 - Paralytic (Teddy.15)
Wow Teddy, tell us how you really feel (LOL). You are spot on. As I said...
November 16th, 2024 11:50 - Satanic Panic (Tristan Robert Lange)
So true. We all are fed crap to devour, and too many will not put in the...
November 16th, 2024 11:38 - LEST WE FORGET (Doggerel Dave)
Much said in a few words. We remember them, but never do enough to prevent...
November 14th, 2024 17:39 - Essence (Neville)
Something always remains of a lover no longer with us. I suppose that the...
November 14th, 2024 17:35 - Ode To Profiteroles. (Goldfinch60)
I could die for a profiterole right now. - Phil A.
November 14th, 2024 17:26 - Ants (Sorenbarrett)
\"Follow a scent trail. swallow rules, life sacrificed,\" Like sheep to...
November 14th, 2024 17:23 - Keep A Lid On It (Cassie58)
So sorry to hear of your losses. A difficult chore to rummage through...
November 14th, 2024 17:17 - The Colour of Void (Cassie58)
No punctuation, no capitalization, sets the scene for the sadness in this...
November 13th, 2024 21:23 - Messengers In Life. (Goldfinch60)
Some very wise words. Andy. Help others to see the light. You are a ray of...
November 13th, 2024 21:09 - Superfluous Twists (Neville)
I guess this means that men being strung along, to the point of...
November 13th, 2024 21:05 - Not Alone (HangingbyaHalo)
Sometimes I wonder what will become of all those folk who stare at their...
November 13th, 2024 17:47 - Letting Go of Your Ghost (Neville)
You can let go of the \"Ghost.\" but the \"Ghost\" may not let go of you....
November 12th, 2024 10:37 - Why does love hurt? (Ashley!)
The deeper the love the more the parting hurts. There is always a tomorrow...
November 9th, 2024 21:53 - Crying out load (David Wakeling)
Beautiful poem David. Loved each of the scenes you painted with your...
November 9th, 2024 21:42 - Each New Day. (Goldfinch60)
Love the connection between love and the seasons. \"And new life will be...
November 9th, 2024 21:39 - Leaving (Leonardo Abreu)
A sad poem about a lost love. Very well constructed and full of great...
November 9th, 2024 21:34 - Emophilia (Neville)
Falling in love is not something one does quickly .... except that I did...
November 9th, 2024 21:29 - Wilderness (Neville)
Lost in the wilderness, of any sort, becomes a game of survival. In the...
November 8th, 2024 13:48 - Solitude (Katdream)
I enjoyed your poem. I liked the image and your words. Especially liked...
November 7th, 2024 19:00 - Glimpsed (Neville)
Funny how, when something changes color we all become amazed. Refracted...
November 7th, 2024 18:48 - Heavily Enlightened (Neville)
I\'m with you there. Or, as Mel Brooks once said. \"I get up in the...
November 3rd, 2024 11:52 - Two Times Four Plus One (Teddy.15)
Who would ever want to change their human life for that of a cat? For all...
November 2nd, 2024 16:10 - Get Yer Diction Right for Starters…. (Doggerel Dave)
If we do not adapt, SOON, we all die, but I suspect we\'ll wait until...
November 1st, 2024 11:22 - Samhain Sonnet. (Goldfinch60)
Loved it. Wonderful poem, Andy. Great craftsmanship. My fav line was \"and...
November 1st, 2024 11:13 - Aftermath (Teddy.15)
Going through \"Halloween Withdrawal\" here. We lived in Salem,...
November 1st, 2024 11:05 - If Only Things Had Been Different (Neville)
Second chances are like 2 in a million, but we all wonder and never...
November 1st, 2024 10:37 - With The Absolute Very Best Of Love (Teddy.15)
A great declaration. These things happen and there always seems to be rain...
October 31st, 2024 13:51 - Looking Beyond Spring (Neville)
Missing someone and hoping to find them in the future. The \"rains\" of...
October 31st, 2024 13:46 - Reach iut (Tony36)
Necessary words spoken here. It\'s something we should all do.
October 31st, 2024 13:27 - Bear (Sorenbarrett)
Thank you, Andy
October 31st, 2024 12:13 - Self Obsessed (Sunshine777)
A very moving scene created here. Your style is unique. Your empathy for...
October 30th, 2024 09:34 - Hail (Neville)
Whoa, big hailstones. They are very dangerous. Can be killers. Global...
October 30th, 2024 09:28 - LIMERICKS 127, 128 and 129 (Michael Edwards)
Naughty but nice. I loved the one about \"Scruffy.\" Good to see the...
October 30th, 2024 09:18 - A Very Special Journey (Teddy.15)
Ah, how many times do artists and poets find their muse in a starry sky?...
October 30th, 2024 09:04 - Another Moment Lost (Neville)
All the moments of our youth should be treasured. They are why we are...
October 28th, 2024 12:08 - Just One Day. (Goldfinch60)
Sound advice. One day at a time. A coping mechanism for sure. I say,...
October 28th, 2024 11:49 - Medlar to Blet (Neville)
Well, I\'m now much more informed today than yesterday, when I didn\'t...
October 27th, 2024 11:47 - Halfway to Hanoi (Neville)
A chance encounter interrupted by a man-made firebomb. A journey that...
October 26th, 2024 17:25 - Sixty Minute Slumberbash (Teddy.15)
To spend a million within an hour is near impossible. What would you buy?...
October 26th, 2024 14:24 - The Sibilance Of Showers. (Goldfinch60)
A gentle rain shower is like a natural sedative. It works for me and...
October 26th, 2024 14:09 - SHE AGREES (Michael Edwards)
Enjoyed the scene you\'ve described here, and it ended happily. Loved the...
October 25th, 2024 13:41 - Fake ID (Teddy.15)
He\'s a P.H.D. alright, A Pig-Headed D*+k. Just like in your photo. I...
October 25th, 2024 13:16 - Inaudible Sounds (Neville)
Sound is always present except in a vacuum. Yet even there, your ears...
October 25th, 2024 13:00 - Ice-Slide (Teddy.15)
I think penguins are some of the funniest creatures alive. Your poem is a...
October 24th, 2024 11:04 - Bemused to Death (Neville)
When the muse gets loose, we lose the juice. However we lose that...
October 24th, 2024 10:47 - Some of The Things I Just Can’t Do (Neville)
It\'s like an Isosceles triangle, it won\'t work unless all sides are...
October 23rd, 2024 13:26 - Some Things Change Too Much (Neville)
\"Full of complete strangers.\" Sometimes, the passage of time leaves one...
October 22nd, 2024 13:13 - The Repatriation of Shards (Neville)
Once bright and shining as part of a stained-glass window high on the...
October 17th, 2024 12:09 - Fit For Purpose (Neville)
Reminds me of pub\'s years ago whose only purpose was for drinking. Now a...
October 10th, 2024 15:58 - Just As Sunsets (Neville)
As the \"Sunsets\" behind \"displaced fragments of ancient mountains\" It...
October 8th, 2024 13:26 - Gaea’s Garden (Neville)
And so it is. Life, Death, Rebirth. A lot said in few words. The power of...
October 5th, 2024 15:32 - Another Year Gone. (Goldfinch60)
Congrats, on life and your poem. It showed life in the good and bad times....
October 5th, 2024 15:29 - Masquerade (Tristan Robert Lange)
So be it. Time for the skeletons to free themselves.
A very deep poem...
October 5th, 2024 15:21 - Irksome Quandaries (Neville)
The closer you get to the end, the more infinity looms like a precipice....
September 30th, 2024 10:04 - How is it goodbye? (Ladywithaquill)
We\'ve all been through breakups, and your poem is empathic to how we feel...
September 14th, 2024 09:41 - Hold On Tight (Teddy.15)
I\'m never getting on a roller coaster again. Thanks a lot.
No seriously,...
September 14th, 2024 09:30 - Reading Is A Crime. (Goldfinch60)
When all the books are gone, we can all die of boredom. Or maybe, they\'ll...
September 14th, 2024 09:21 - Pretty in Purple and Pink (Neville)
The release of inhibitions can be hard to overcome. She seemed extreme in...
September 14th, 2024 09:12 - Peace (Tony36)
Amen! Brotherhood before enemy. Equality before difference. peace before...
September 13th, 2024 11:05 - Peace (Tony36)
Amen! Brotherhood before enemy. Equality before difference. peace before...
September 13th, 2024 11:05
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