Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Valentine Moon. (Fay Slimm.)
Nothing says Valentine\'s romance like a gorgeous moonlight. Hearts...
February 13th, 2020 14:19 - Until Spring (Neville)
I think that leaves are the reason they call it \"Fall\".and maybe why we...
February 12th, 2020 23:32 - The only love she held onto (Dusk arising)
Loved the seasonal comparisons and the descriptive phrases to describe...
February 12th, 2020 23:18 - Droplets (PoeticBiscuit)
I have to agree with Neville. This is short, concise, and powerful. A...
November 5th, 2019 19:23 - Little Girl (FredPeyer)
Liked this one. Reminded me of my grandaughter, who likes to write. Kids...
October 8th, 2019 18:07 - Pages in Passion (Hidden.shine)
So much talent for 17, make sure you pursue it.
This poem,\'s metaphor...
July 29th, 2019 16:05 - the aftermath (Hidden.shine)
So much said in 15 words. Obviously. someone does not appreciate your...
July 29th, 2019 15:54 - Anxious Reflection (a sonnet) (Hidden.shine)
I find this brilliant. Your words and use of language make this poem flow...
July 29th, 2019 15:50 - People Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
Smiles are remembered, frowns forgotten, so \"smile brother smile.\"
Nice...
July 29th, 2019 15:38 - THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards)
As we all know, :art\" and artist\" encompass more than paint and brush,...
July 29th, 2019 15:31 - Cold Under The Coat (Neville)
Here it comes! No, seriously. I thoroughly enjoyed this. We\'ve all been...
July 29th, 2019 15:20 - Summer Sky (MrNobody40)
Greatly expressing the fires of youth. Keeping them burning is the...
July 25th, 2019 14:49 - A Silent Refrain (Neville)
Timing is so critical to a relationship. Too soon or too late can bring...
July 25th, 2019 14:44 - Love\'s Call. (Fay Slimm.)
Soldiers die from the separation and the hell. Two wounds at once, the...
July 25th, 2019 14:27 - When You Were Perfect (Neville)
Perfection found, and then lost. Memories remain. Wishes expressed to be...
July 24th, 2019 18:25 - A Thimbleful of Seeds (Neville)
Could not agree more, since I believe Love and Life are everything. Here,...
July 24th, 2019 17:33 - Crimson Swathe (Neville)
Hope the girl or Hope the longing? Matters naught. A field of poppies...
July 23rd, 2019 16:42 - My Spirit. (Goldfinch60)
When I think of God I think of Love. They may be one and the same, and if...
June 23rd, 2019 18:18 - TIME ALONE (Michael Edwards)
As to your poem, excellent portrayal of \" Time Alone\"\", but Time raises...
June 23rd, 2019 18:12 - Butterworth Crows (Neville)
Wow! - To have seen this must have been a horror. What a great...
June 11th, 2019 10:26 - SMALLNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
It is that \"Smallness\" that allows the rest of us to exist. Bees are...
June 11th, 2019 10:13 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (11) (Michael Edwards)
Makes one wonder what\'s going on behind the closed doors of your pictured...
June 11th, 2019 09:27 - kālacakra ferris wheel (Jon Nakapalau)
Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a...
June 11th, 2019 09:17 - GORMLESS. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m at a loss for words. Most of what you said I had search for, but...
June 10th, 2019 14:33 - Coffee (Down the rabbithole)
They say coffee is a stimulant and alcohol a depressant , so what happens...
June 10th, 2019 14:19 - Catching Flies (Neville)
A very poignant poem, describing some horrific scenes which, I assume,...
June 10th, 2019 14:06 - Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60)
In America, sedans are becoming obsolete. It\'s all SUV\'s and trucks....
June 10th, 2019 13:54 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards)
I think the art depicts the trap within the words.
Now in Vegas, this...
June 10th, 2019 13:48 - CHOICES. (Fay Slimm.)
Love is always the correct choice. There is no life without it. Every day...
June 7th, 2019 18:56 - BLOCKS. (Fay Slimm.)
I think it works out that if you do manage to sleep, then you are no...
June 6th, 2019 16:55 - Lost Dreams (Jo March)
Parting with a love can be a trying and
mournful experience. It tears a...
May 26th, 2019 19:05 - A Cautious Distance (Neville)
They say that normal personal space is four feet. I want to know where?...
May 26th, 2019 14:15 - World in the Sky. (Goldfinch60)
Ah yes, cloud formations on a beautiful clear day! those billowy cumulus...
May 26th, 2019 13:56 - A Night at the Opera. (Goldfinch60)
Wasn\'t that a Marx Brother\'s movie? See what happens because I didn\'t...
May 20th, 2019 18:33 - SHE WAITS (Michael Edwards)
Love the language of your poem. It flows smoothly. A dark scenario of...
May 20th, 2019 18:22 - The Zoo (StephD)
Even in the darkest of dark moments there is a light, not external, but...
May 19th, 2019 16:48 - IN LIFE SPARE US (Michael Edwards)
How does the old joke go? \"Once we had a full-length mirror, but now we ...
May 19th, 2019 16:27 - STONES KNOW. (Fay Slimm.)
Must have been a harrowing if not death-defying occupation. I cannot...
May 19th, 2019 16:14 - Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60)
If you drink enough wine everything tastes good. it\'s a recipe for...
May 19th, 2019 15:53 - Mid Winter (Philip)
Well, thanks for the weather reminder. And here, we were just seeing the...
May 19th, 2019 15:35 - UNANSWERABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
What is love, but obsession? There is no masquerading in love. Everything...
May 16th, 2019 11:38 - Flowers Musing on Rain (Lorna)
Its a mild Winter we are having this Spring. If any hope remains, or if...
May 15th, 2019 14:12 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (5) (Michael Edwards)
Had to stop once I saw your artwork. Wow. Great coloration. Asense of...
May 15th, 2019 13:38 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Abstract it is. You\'ve given us. \"wallpaper fading\" (an old home),...
May 10th, 2019 21:39 - SPIN-BACK (Fay Slimm.)
Taking speed from the car puts life into its inhabitants. When will people...
May 6th, 2019 15:10 - IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards)
Art - So, that\'s what it looks like beyond the weir?
Poetry - I followed...
May 6th, 2019 14:54 - Weighty worries? 😋 (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
The war rages on, with beauty as the lure, and social acceptance as the...
May 4th, 2019 13:31 - I Am What I Am (Neville)
\"I am Me,\" and you are you, no two the same. Billions of people in the...
May 4th, 2019 13:21 - Letter to ones own (Jay123)
You\'re right, it\'s cyclical. I believe we\'ve all felt as your poem...
May 4th, 2019 13:06 - FROM COMMENTS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Refresh the memories, with something new. Yuck! Replace the old music...
May 4th, 2019 12:16 - THE WELL OF TIME (Michael Edwards)
Art - Looks to my eye like music flowing from an old 78.
Poetry - The old...
May 3rd, 2019 15:38 - WHAT WORTH. (Fay Slimm.)
But what
wisdom sprouteth from thy pen if we not read...
May 2nd, 2019 10:03 - In The Beginning (Neville)
Funny how the difference between \"here\" and \"gone\" can change our...
May 2nd, 2019 08:14 - Strange Awakening. (Goldfinch60)
Birdsong in the morning. What a great way to start your day. \"Cherish...
May 2nd, 2019 08:06 - FROM COMMENTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
The art is filled with so many possibilities;If I envision things moving...
May 2nd, 2019 07:58 - UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah, there\'s nothing like coffee in the morning......or did I leave...
May 1st, 2019 13:13 - FROM COMMENTS (1) (Michael Edwards)
O.K. I\'ll play:
\"Though it\'s said time to time
that I do prefer...
May 1st, 2019 11:23 - Colours Without Names (Neville)
Just as there are sounds the human ear cannot hear, there are colors and...
April 30th, 2019 14:13 - DAY MONTH YEAR (Michael Edwards)
Only two dates matter, when you\'re born and when you\'re gone. All else...
April 30th, 2019 13:56 - Crumbs of Comfort (Neville)
Food for thought (no pun intended). We often forget the plight of...
April 29th, 2019 11:30 - SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.)
The ebb and flow of romantic inclinations eloquently expressed: warm and...
April 29th, 2019 11:06 - Empty Sky (Neville)
Sometimes putting words to paper is a lot like chopping wood, much more...
April 28th, 2019 13:42 - FREEING . (Fay Slimm.)
Better to be free than to possess. I loved this little thought provoker....
April 28th, 2019 13:27 - LETTING GO. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Letting go\" of love is painful beyond description. We are left with an...
April 18th, 2019 18:52 - LIVING IN A DREAM (Michael Edwards)
Love your dream-scape. Is that actually you standing there?
With \"closed...
April 18th, 2019 18:41 - MARY HAD .....A RAM (Michael Edwards)
Artwork - Beautiful coloration. I see a multi-colored flying dragon....
April 15th, 2019 13:52 - this lotus of light (Jon Nakapalau)
So true. Love comes uneasily to some, but when it does It causes one to...
April 14th, 2019 19:53 - MIXTURES. (Fay Slimm.)
Perhaps \"dappling\" is Natures abstract art? Or, more philosophically,...
April 14th, 2019 19:45 - NO MORE HER OWN PHILOSOPHER (Michael Edwards)
Abstract - I see birds on a tree limb building a nest. Looking straight in...
April 14th, 2019 19:33 - at closure (Frank Prem)
Loved your imagery in this . \"wind twirls the sky,\" \"the waters are...
April 12th, 2019 15:11 - DEPARTURE. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Departure,\" flocks of birds leaving to migrate to better surroundings....
April 12th, 2019 15:00 - Something Missing. (Goldfinch60)
GF60 you\'re making me hungry. Maybe wife and I will hit a breakfast...
April 12th, 2019 14:50 - Something Missing. (Goldfinch60)
April 12th, 2019 14:46 - SADNESS (Michael Edwards)
Sadness, yes, as a dolphin swims in a polluted sea. No, I don\'t see a...
April 12th, 2019 14:43 - SOLO-CHILL. (Fay Slimm.)
Great write Fay. I loved \"widowed shoreline.\" Very imaginative, and it...
April 2nd, 2019 11:55 - this last full moon (Jon Nakapalau)
A lone shadow is a lonesome shadow. Omens such as these can be...
March 30th, 2019 16:02 - TROUBLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Picture and poem, one and the same, captured in word form just as...
March 30th, 2019 11:57 - At Peace Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Nature provides. As simple as it may seem, having a piece of Nature to...
March 30th, 2019 11:52 - LAVENDER\'S BLUE (Michael Edwards)
Reminds me of \"Lavender Blue\" by Sammy Turner. What the hay is vindaloo?...
March 30th, 2019 11:47 - LEVELS. (Fay Slimm.)
\'When one tugs at a single thing in Nature, he finds it attached to the...
March 29th, 2019 14:44 - Humour in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Oh yeah, life\'s treasured moments. So true GF so true. The best medicine...
March 29th, 2019 14:28 - sliced pickled radish (Jon Nakapalau)
There\'s no place like home, except Grandma\'s. Mine would cook biscuits...
March 29th, 2019 14:17 - BENEATH (Michael Edwards)
Those \"lush green tranquil vales\" seem to be everywhere in England. A...
March 29th, 2019 14:08 - HAVENS. (Fay Slimm.)
What if all the nest raiders could be colored black? We have Bluejays that...
March 27th, 2019 16:43 - Shadow Across the Sky. (Goldfinch60)
Life is a series of changes thrown at us. We have no control over them,...
March 27th, 2019 16:12 - GRINLOADS OF 575s (1) (Michael Edwards)
Three very fine and humorous poems. My favorite is the first. It\'s so...
March 27th, 2019 16:04 - Stuck (Neville)
They say alcohol is good for unsticking things, but I\'ve tried it and it...
March 26th, 2019 14:49 - COURAGE. (Fay Slimm.)
We seem to have an Oceanic wave flowing through this site today.
I live...
March 26th, 2019 14:35 - Instead (Sylviasearcher)
Avoid the Ocean
it\'s a sea of motion
lurking to claim you.
Powerful...
March 26th, 2019 14:25 - Saturday Nights Were Special. (Goldfinch60)
So many memories, so many Saturday nights, in reality pretty much the same...
March 26th, 2019 14:02 - billy told me (Jon Nakapalau)
A sad but beautiful tale of unattainable happiness, lost to the horrors of...
March 26th, 2019 13:55 - MYSTERY. (Fay Slimm.)
Empathy for the crab? Truly a poet\'s response. Much so that a poem is...
March 22nd, 2019 13:33 - that first morning (Jon Nakapalau)
Spring is known for loosing Cupid\'s arrows. Your bowman takes on a flight...
March 22nd, 2019 13:09 - Set Her Free. (Goldfinch60)
All feelings such as this whether written or spoken need to be heard or...
March 22nd, 2019 11:19 - A Life in Grey (Nicholas Browning)
Life , death, the Earth, and Mankind, all intertwine in as many ways as...
March 22nd, 2019 11:12 - DEFINITIONS (4) (Michael Edwards)
\"Ultimatum\" is a fact. On \"Novel\" I have a question, \"Has every...
March 22nd, 2019 10:55 - CLIMBING. (Fay Slimm.)
A lost love through betrayal is more injurious than a loss, and your poem...
March 20th, 2019 13:38 - How Else Would We Know? (Nicholas Browning)
Finding the right words aye, that\'s the rub. Is it art, if I change...
March 19th, 2019 16:11 - WAVERING. (Fay Slimm.)
Billions of people in the world, each with their own idea of reality. It...
March 19th, 2019 15:52 - CAGE AND CREED (Michael Edwards)
What do they do for an encore?
Your poem says it all. My only question...
March 19th, 2019 15:43
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