Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- River stone (Reivax Camlost)
Loved it. A great image expressed cleverly and clearly. Every word...
February 17th, 2017 17:11 - Sestina (M4y4_bee)
Wow! Clever stuff. Sounds like a time consuming process, to get it just...
February 17th, 2017 17:07 - Night time (Poems_)
Your poems are good. I can see the images you create. Now change them to...
February 17th, 2017 16:53 - Sharp Stone Syllables (Quemis)
One must love one\'s self before they can love another. Feelings of self...
February 17th, 2017 12:40 - Freedom Phrases (WriteBeLight)
My humble opinion is that we write because we must. There is a certain...
February 17th, 2017 12:18 - Real world (Isabel Chelisia Villa)
Wow! Is there a poet in you? For damn sure. I can tell by how you write....
February 17th, 2017 11:51 - To Have And Let Go (WriteBeLight)
Life is not a book where you turn the page and find out what\'s happening...
February 16th, 2017 20:38 - Difference. (Fay Slimm.)
Color in nature serves a multitude of purposes, attraction, defense,...
February 16th, 2017 20:29 - Old Friends (Gencruz)
A great personification of Insomnia and Depression, one male, one female....
February 15th, 2017 21:13 - A Crusade (AJ)
I\'ve always said, \"The world would be a beautiful place if it were not...
February 15th, 2017 21:05 - Believe (Tony36)
Without belief there is no hope. Well expressed here. - Phil A.
February 15th, 2017 18:01 - Who am I? (Antoinette)
You are what you want to be. No one can change that or deter it. It is...
February 15th, 2017 17:59 - Life through my eyes (Ash)
Great story-telling in poetic form. Sounds as though it would be a tough...
February 15th, 2017 16:26 - No Time. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful images, of the sea and the shore causing reflection of things...
February 15th, 2017 16:04 - Disorderly Conduct (WriteBeLight)
In Seattle, while visiting a few years back, I discovered warning signs...
February 15th, 2017 15:51 - Rays of Light (Augustus)
Thank you for the light. Keeep seeing the heavenly love flowing your way....
February 15th, 2017 13:19 - Unoriginal Sin (Kurt Philip Behm)
Love expressed poetically , fostered by the likes of Eliot, Thoreau,...
February 15th, 2017 11:00 - Humanity (Augustus)
Man\'s inhumanity to Man is insane. We cannot stand by and let that...
February 14th, 2017 21:49 - The Treadmill (Kurt Philip Behm)
Life in the fast lane can be terribly hectic, it\'s time to \"slow down\",...
February 14th, 2017 12:31 - True Character (Augustus)
Those in authority are almost always despised for nothing more than the...
February 13th, 2017 14:30 - Love, In Three Parts (NottarealPoet)
This write is raw, brutally honest poetry. It was engrossing. The imagery...
February 13th, 2017 14:23 - Love 3 (Tony36)
Nice write, Tony. Love conquers all.
February 13th, 2017 14:09 - Hello, From the Other Side (JustABird)
Wow! Very emotional write. Kept it clear though, not too much...
February 13th, 2017 14:06 - Friendly Competition (WriteBeLight)
Every diet I ever tried always came with a note at the bottom that said...
February 13th, 2017 13:46 - My Path Unbroken (Kurt Philip Behm)
Three terrific poems. My Fav is the second. I like the uplifting message...
February 12th, 2017 17:16 - Black Hole (Philip)
What happens to or where is all the matter and energy absorbed by the...
February 11th, 2017 12:24 - OUTBURST (Michael Edwards)
I see the \"Outburst\" in your painting and the \"abstraction\" in your...
February 11th, 2017 12:17 - RETAIL CYCLE (Michael Edwards)
The \"Retail Cycle\" is being accelerated by on-line ordering. However the...
February 10th, 2017 13:41 - February (Reivax Camlost)
I see the morning frost, the snow falling, the surface of the snow...
February 9th, 2017 17:38 - TWO TRAMPS (Michael Edwards)
Two mice who wouldn\'t pay the price.
Alone in the night, \'cause the...
February 9th, 2017 16:12 - Five Strangers (Kurt Philip Behm)
Sleep, with haunting dreams of repressed emotions one thought were gone,...
February 9th, 2017 16:06 - Bodies (Corey)
\"The heart is the toughest part of the body,\" someone once said, and...
February 9th, 2017 13:47 - Bodies (Corey)
\"The heart is the toughest part of the body,\" someone once said, and...
February 9th, 2017 13:46 - Mugs, Hugs And Jugs (WriteBeLight)
Coffee mugs bring smiles. A brief break from the day\'s stress while you...
February 8th, 2017 15:54 - Purpose of tears (Stephanie Showers)
To be alive requires an open heart. Trying to live with a closed heart is...
February 8th, 2017 14:50 - Born to the sea (Aa Harvey)
Is this a ghost ship? That\'s how I read it - \"Since the life at sea...
February 8th, 2017 14:32 - The Beauty of the Night (John Snowdon)
Night and Day, the eternal struggle. People of both domains feel the pain...
February 8th, 2017 14:07 - HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN (Michael Edwards)
To me this feels like someone in remorse trying to cope and mend their...
February 8th, 2017 13:08 - Peeling the Pain (Amy Milton Roemer)
Needing is the deeper emotion. It\'s like Love vs. Like. Wanting almost...
February 7th, 2017 16:26 - Donuts (Brice1232)
Enjoyed this with my coffee this morning. Just getting time to tell you...
February 7th, 2017 16:14 - Team G.O.A.T. (WriteBeLight)
We\'re five weeks behind most of the other teams getting ready for 2017....
February 7th, 2017 16:00 - INSIDE OUTSIDE (Michael Edwards)
Humor and art, Refreshing. Now a jumper, that\'s like a sweater, correct?...
February 7th, 2017 15:52 - Awesome Love (Tony36)
One day at a time. Nice write. - Phil A.
February 7th, 2017 15:40 - This Stone (Tony36)
Ah, Love upon the sacrificial stone. A heart torn apart, coping through...
February 6th, 2017 15:41 - Write The World Right (Corey)
Maybe you have spelled out exactly what we all should be doing. Writing to...
February 6th, 2017 15:34 - NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
This ia a beautiful description of night from a \"practised mind.\" ...
February 6th, 2017 13:12 - One Wish (Elphaba993)
From your heart - no doubt. All they need are your love and your time. If...
February 6th, 2017 12:51 - Your Song Has Sung (Kurt Philip Behm)
All valid questions to pose to any writer. I suppose it takes a degree of...
February 6th, 2017 12:48 - THE GREAT UNREAD (Michael Edwards)
Great painting. Here are my comments: 1)
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- Phil A.
February 5th, 2017 12:45 - inconsequential (Anthrodynia)
Well done. I believe it\'s poetry.
Keep writing.
February 4th, 2017 20:24 - RELEASE (Michael Edwards)
\"Release\" - as in death. Am I reading this right? \"In open land where...
February 4th, 2017 14:59 - No One Listens To Me (Philip)
We\'re listening.. to your words in verse. Yes, we\'ve all felt this way...
February 4th, 2017 11:38 - Children (Tony36)
Oh, that it could only remain. Children are born as people should be in...
February 3rd, 2017 15:25 - THE ORCHARD BY NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful -\"in filigree against the sky\" Loved it. You are an artist in...
February 3rd, 2017 15:17 - Less Important Side of Reality (NB)
People-watching can be an alluring pastime. Now, this may sound stupid...
February 3rd, 2017 12:08 - comfort (Tony36)
What!? That thing is huge. Not exactly something you can carry around with...
February 2nd, 2017 19:55 - THE SAD TALE OF THE UNFORTUNATE EGG (Michael Edwards)
I really liked this one Michael. Maybe I was in the mood for something a...
February 2nd, 2017 19:50 - HE LOOKED NO MORE FOR BRIDGES (Michael Edwards)
Well, I like it. Glad you chose that title. We can go searching endlessly,...
February 1st, 2017 14:37 - God\'s Handiwork (Shadorma) (Rrodriguez)
Interesting form, new to me, thanks for that. Terrific painting, who cares...
February 1st, 2017 12:06 - A Dream (Rrodriguez)
Imagery of a heart on fire, a longing, a desire. A dream broken suddenly,...
January 31st, 2017 21:52 - Timeless (Philip)
No time - no stress. No deadlines, no obligations. Life is beautiful. A...
January 31st, 2017 16:34 - POEM - WORK IN PROGRESS (Michael Edwards)
Sometimes we have to look out the window to see the light and realize that...
January 31st, 2017 11:47 - 30 January 2017 (Severus Alexander)
Beautiful. A simple thing like a passing breeze can rouse a host of...
January 30th, 2017 23:21 - The Jazz Band in Gas Masks (Oliver Cobbin)
I have to agree with DS about the imagery, it is fantastic, in the sense...
January 30th, 2017 20:21 - Where do I begin my poem? (Rrodriguez)
I think I\'ve read that same book...again and again and again, but never...
January 29th, 2017 21:04 - MY STRIPED RAINBOW CAT ~ A Rhyming Sonnet (BRIAN & ANGELA)
No matter how old a person gets to be, it is said that in their Mum\'s...
January 29th, 2017 20:24
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