Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• Intimidating Senryu. (Goldfinch60) A Senryu for those who have attempted this form. It can be...
  March 19th, 2019 15:35
• Adonais (Jo March) An excellent tribute poem. From what I know of his life and works it seems...
  March 19th, 2019 15:31
• Solemn Revelations (WL Schuett) Wonderful words, indeed, and an inspiring remembrance. \"Intimacy with no...
  March 12th, 2019 19:00
• Living the Day. (Goldfinch60) Inspiring words of wisdom. Optimism with a sense of logic. Words to live...
  March 9th, 2019 12:17
• MARCH 1st 2019 (Michael Edwards) Brilliant and lovely poetry, the real thing. Smoothness, imagery, and...
  March 9th, 2019 12:13
• Searching for Peace (Sunshinefalling) Powerful words. Also frightening. You etch a very sad picture of one\'s...
  March 9th, 2019 12:09
• let me tell you a story (Jon Nakapalau) Love it. Absolute truth. Today everyone has a story, and the word...
  March 9th, 2019 12:02
• Why (Purdy61) I see a lost love here, but I also see some poetic ability. \"Falling...
  March 8th, 2019 11:24
• how many times (Jon Nakapalau) Very thought-provoking. Just what is it that people are seeking when they...
  March 8th, 2019 11:17
• Boudoir (Neville) What a room, what a scene, What a moment in time. Youth squanders many a...
  March 8th, 2019 10:56
• BIRD-TALK.. (Fay Slimm.) We are in the midst of Snowstorms here. I\'ll be lucky to see a Penguin,...
  March 8th, 2019 10:44
• Church Swansong. (Goldfinch60) Nice little song of a swan, GF 60. Looks like he took a swan dive when he...
  March 8th, 2019 10:30
• HER VEINS (Michael Edwards) The cartoon is almost too close to reality. The poem ; I like the...
  March 8th, 2019 10:05
• TOFFEE AND COFFEE (Michael Edwards) I\'m sure you can get Toffee Coffee at Starbucks, without any sogginess....
  March 7th, 2019 22:34
• ARDOUR. (Fay Slimm.) Lusty and bawdy, like rolling in the clover. Oooooh....such anti Victorian...
  March 7th, 2019 22:22
• RICIN\'S NICE (Michael Edwards) To the point, shouldn\'t there be \"Up\" and \"Down\" arrows. At least...
  March 6th, 2019 09:15
• INSIDE ME. (Fay Slimm.) Life hardens us all. Better to be the rock and not the bug, Remember that...
  March 5th, 2019 17:15
• mr. blue man (Jon Nakapalau) \"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies.\" We all get checked on every day,...
  March 5th, 2019 17:06
• Flower. (Goldfinch60) Enjoyed this little uprising of a poem. Interesting interaction between...
  March 5th, 2019 16:53
• YOU DO NOT SEE (Michael Edwards) Bingo, another winner. East vs. West. The fleeing Sun drops for the night,...
  March 5th, 2019 16:45
• TO THE SANDMAN (Fay Slimm.) Most nights my wife does not sleep well, up and down a million times, so I...
  March 4th, 2019 13:22
• I Am That Guy (Neville) Imagination is what makes the poet and the storyteller what they are. All...
  March 4th, 2019 13:08
• MOPPING UP (Michael Edwards) Humor for a Monday, with a cartoon and two funny shorties. Got us laughing...
  March 4th, 2019 12:54
• Paper Cuts (Neville) Faceless, paper dolls are truly dangerous to a man\'s heart. However, with...
  March 3rd, 2019 16:48
• Valley on the Hill. (Goldfinch60) The older, the longer the \"UP\" becomes. Confusing choice of name, \"The...
  March 3rd, 2019 14:12
• A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards) Tears of happiness for the sleeping Vicar? Or is it the resignation? ...
  March 3rd, 2019 14:04
• The Last Hurt (Neville) Sooner or later heartbreak finds us all. Love\'s darker side leaves a...
  March 2nd, 2019 21:18
• SOLO. (Fay Slimm.) A look to the sea for the hope of a returning lover, a classic image, that...
  February 27th, 2019 20:31
• Shadow of the Arrow (WL Schuett) We all evaluate our lives at one time or another. Could we have achieved...
  February 27th, 2019 20:15
• Alone (Gigilovesfood) Absolutely painful loneliness expressed here. Very dramatic presentation....
  February 26th, 2019 22:48
• seven years (Laurenroe) They say \"Time heals all\" , it\'s not entirely true, but as time passes...
  February 21st, 2019 20:35
• My Raft (Hpoetry) As I see this analogy: The raft (your heart) you have spent time and labor...
  January 29th, 2019 16:25
• The Tin Man Laments (Jon Nakapalau) He became human. Shortly thereafter, a Tin Lizzy dumped him for an...
  January 29th, 2019 15:50
• sitting on the edge (Jon Nakapalau) Psychologists just released a study saying that frequent visits to the...
  January 29th, 2019 15:42
• everything flies away (Jon Nakapalau) To me, Time is like a raging river carrying us along. It can\'t be stopped...
  January 29th, 2019 15:35
• salisbury steak tv dinner (Jon Nakapalau) It\'s never as advertised. Even the lowliest T.V. dinner can breach the...
  January 29th, 2019 15:23
• HOPING. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful. The Natural Cycles: the seasons, life/death - if we make it...
  January 23rd, 2019 19:24
• Dali’s Eyes (Neville) A terrific poem. It speaks the desire of every poet. To take the \"breath...
  January 1st, 2019 20:31
• As white as the winter (Joanna Garrido) Sometimes it takes enormous courage to turn and run. Why do people make...
  December 30th, 2018 18:51
• OLD INTO NEW. (Fay Slimm.) Well chosen wording of Nature\'s changing environs. Always...
  December 30th, 2018 18:45
• Rough Sketched & True (Neville) Whether it becomes a completed painting or not it will leave a vision in...
  December 30th, 2018 18:37
• Free (Jaayx3) This seems very personal, very real. You say all the things one would say...
  December 30th, 2018 17:48
• No Longer (Jaayx3) A friendship that is ending, with no chance of resurrection. Perhaps,...
  December 29th, 2018 19:10
• Secrets of the Field (Neville) A field filled with feelings. A harvest of Love and rape. A history of...
  December 29th, 2018 19:02
• A Cold Kiss on Pont Neuf (Jim Yates) A beautiful reminiscence. I believe we\'ve all felt that \"cold kiss\"...
  August 22nd, 2018 23:11
• NOW-NESS. (Fay Slimm.) LIve in the moment. Make every \"now-ness\" a \"WOW-ness.\" Beautiful and...
  August 18th, 2018 22:57
• A Journey to Forever and Always (HangingbyaHalo) Beautiful! A vivid description of Love for the ages. A \"journey\" as you...
  August 18th, 2018 15:36
• She eyed the world... (Crystal Hope) Terrific, escapism at its best. Imagination in flight, expressed in the...
  August 9th, 2018 16:10
• gospel (Izzi Lynn) Izzi - Wow! what a powerful message. Your writing, your form of...
  August 9th, 2018 16:04
• What is Love? (Goldfinch60) I, too, believe Love is ethereal, not of this world. Science cannot...
  August 6th, 2018 14:52
• SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED (Michael Edwards) Who knows where true love is to be found? Watching a bee-hive seems now,...
  August 6th, 2018 14:43
• half of me (Cheyenneherren) A lost love can be a heartbreak, as if you can no longer exist, but the...
  August 6th, 2018 14:31
• Love Notes (Vela) Great imagery. Loved it. \"My skin still remembers,\" a love from long...
  August 5th, 2018 12:13
• WINTER (Michael Edwards) I like this one. Michael. The passing of Winter into the nether regions....
  June 2nd, 2018 15:16
• My Sails are Luffing (Lorna) Brilliant metaphor! A simple but powerful poem. Life, boats, wind , and...
  April 30th, 2018 11:59
• at home (Onepauly) Just for the fun of it? A great flow of words and rhymes. No particular...
  April 29th, 2018 11:05
• FIRST BALLAD. (Fay Slimm.) I will join the chorus and say that this is a well crafted piece. The link...
  April 7th, 2018 21:53
• Fulfilled. (Fay Slimm.) Great actress, great quote, great poem, \"Love is, self-fulfilled.\" Love...
  January 11th, 2018 16:06
• THIS LAND HE CALLS HIS HOME (Michael Edwards) Excellent write, reminded me the shore I live near. Rocky, misty at times,...
  January 11th, 2018 15:51
• Winter Sounds. (Fay Slimm.) \"Winter sounds saddest.....when seen from behind,\" is a beautiful and...
  January 8th, 2018 16:14
• selfish (Here) It\'s been said (probably by me) that before you can love another, you...
  December 29th, 2017 22:00
• Life (Misplacedpoems) I find a lot of wisdom and understanding in this poem: \"Where none of us...
  December 28th, 2017 18:06
• Inspirational (MaddieJ) I like the fact that this is an \"Inspirational\" poem. In particular the...
  December 23rd, 2017 19:34
• Seduction. (Fay Slimm.) The call of the siren, not to be taken lightly, but with extreme caution,...
  December 7th, 2017 17:20
• Sexual Healing. (Wallace) The world as one big Love-In. If it could only be, would it not be heaven....
  December 7th, 2017 16:59
• NEW RESOLVE (Michael Edwards) Well, he finally won her heart, and putting all the troubles of the past...
  December 7th, 2017 16:54
• “The Stars are Ruthless to Me” (AlinaVanderson) More than just beautiful words, a wonderful expression of love. The...
  December 3rd, 2017 18:45
• THE CONFORMIST (Michael Edwards) I always say, \"Think outside of the big picture, \" and people say,...
  December 2nd, 2017 21:01
• Watching (Adam Shirley) I like this one. Three scenes spliced together in two very different...
  November 22nd, 2017 21:17
• Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.) A beautiful write it is, Fay.\"Bird-agility,\" \"feathers reflect to...
  November 10th, 2017 15:53
• THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards) I have a notion that the motion of the ocean - or its \"swell\" / are all...
  November 10th, 2017 15:45
• Life is a Mess (FredPeyer) Never, ever, clean up completely. Always leave some small reminder of what...
  November 10th, 2017 15:06
• my place in nothing (Frank Prem) Looking up at the universe, we see only what\'s within the realm of our...
  November 10th, 2017 14:52
• The Actor (FredPeyer) Minimal wording, maximum effect. Sometimes less is more. I believe for...
  November 7th, 2017 20:34
• stirring the soup (Frank Prem) Makes one wonder what was in the \"yonder?\" Was it another \'cauldron?\"...
  November 7th, 2017 20:26
• The Land Of The Free (Christina8) A sad situation here in the U.S. Those in power seem hopelessly neutered...
  November 7th, 2017 20:18
• Edge of the Wind (WL Schuett) Sometimes in the search for a better place we learn that where we began...
  November 7th, 2017 20:08
• HER TAINTED HEART (Michael Edwards) \"Her Tainted Heart\" title sent me looking for guilt on her part. Overly...
  November 7th, 2017 19:54
• Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.) Living by the sea, one learns of its might, but making a living on the...
  November 7th, 2017 19:39
• A Leaf (Brycycle) A year in the life, from rebirth in Spring through to the ashes of dead...
  November 7th, 2017 19:12
• three echoes (Frank Prem) Recently, someone wrote on here that love is \"soundless,\" now here in...
  November 6th, 2017 13:37
• Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.) \"There exists silence not found by sound,\" \"secret whispers\" of love....
  November 2nd, 2017 15:42
• Captured. (Fay Slimm.) Caught and captured, to be turned into useful energy, by boat sails, by...
  October 20th, 2017 14:06
• The Beckoning. (Goldfinch60) For all things there is a time, you will surely walk along it in peace...
  October 20th, 2017 13:48
• the water (Frank Prem) A life, a stream, you are the water. Like two streams join to become a...
  October 20th, 2017 13:43
• THE HOUSE (Michael Edwards) A great beginning to what could be a greater poem. We want to know what...
  October 20th, 2017 13:37
• Breaking Free (WL Schuett) \"A blink of an eye, between the righteous and the fool.\" \'Wasted years...
  October 20th, 2017 13:26
• Blind Faith (WL Schuett) 46 years into a marriage and still, things mystify me, about her, about...
  October 19th, 2017 20:38
• YOU. (Fay Slimm.) Alchemy and Nature, said to be one and the same. What great descriptive...
  October 16th, 2017 10:07
• Zlata\'s Daughter (Frank Prem) An awesome write, loaded with emotions we try to hide, like bigotry and...
  October 16th, 2017 09:55
• New Start (FredPeyer) Ah yes, the one that got away, but then returns, and once again and we...
  October 16th, 2017 09:38
• THEY SAY (Louis Gibbs) An excellent write. \"To what end\"....exactly! If there were past lives...
  October 16th, 2017 09:31
• Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) As it hunts through ruins of castles, an owl\' s call do you hear? Somehow...
  October 15th, 2017 15:43
• Can you see me? (Addynicole) To be seen \"as strong, confident, and intelligent\" talk to this person....
  October 14th, 2017 19:40
• Traumatic Childhood Memory (Prose Poem) (Rrodriguez) Such things can be remembered, and who knows maybe they should be, but...
  October 14th, 2017 19:16
• Truth (Addynicole) Truth - What is it? Some things have a certitude, the Sun is in the sky,...
  October 14th, 2017 10:37
• Narrow Escape. (Goldfinch60) I had to laugh! I read this just after bringing her morning tea. I guess...
  October 14th, 2017 10:03
• My family is moving, again... (Rrodriguez) I have lived in some tough places, but none like the South Bronx of the...
  October 13th, 2017 17:37
• Awe (PACollin) I once said something to the effect that life is sorted into \"moments\"...
  October 13th, 2017 13:29
• Faded Flower (WL Schuett) I think the painting is a stirring representation of loneliness and...
  October 13th, 2017 13:04