Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards) I have a notion that the motion of the ocean - or its \"swell\" / are all...
  November 10th, 2017 15:45
• Life is a Mess (FredPeyer) Never, ever, clean up completely. Always leave some small reminder of what...
  November 10th, 2017 15:06
• my place in nothing (Frank Prem) Looking up at the universe, we see only what\'s within the realm of our...
  November 10th, 2017 14:52
• The Actor (FredPeyer) Minimal wording, maximum effect. Sometimes less is more. I believe for...
  November 7th, 2017 20:34
• stirring the soup (Frank Prem) Makes one wonder what was in the \"yonder?\" Was it another \'cauldron?\"...
  November 7th, 2017 20:26
• The Land Of The Free (Christina8) A sad situation here in the U.S. Those in power seem hopelessly neutered...
  November 7th, 2017 20:18
• Edge of the Wind (WL Schuett) Sometimes in the search for a better place we learn that where we began...
  November 7th, 2017 20:08
• HER TAINTED HEART (Michael Edwards) \"Her Tainted Heart\" title sent me looking for guilt on her part. Overly...
  November 7th, 2017 19:54
• Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.) Living by the sea, one learns of its might, but making a living on the...
  November 7th, 2017 19:39
• A Leaf (Brycycle) A year in the life, from rebirth in Spring through to the ashes of dead...
  November 7th, 2017 19:12
• three echoes (Frank Prem) Recently, someone wrote on here that love is \"soundless,\" now here in...
  November 6th, 2017 13:37
• Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.) \"There exists silence not found by sound,\" \"secret whispers\" of love....
  November 2nd, 2017 15:42
• Captured. (Fay Slimm.) Caught and captured, to be turned into useful energy, by boat sails, by...
  October 20th, 2017 14:06
• The Beckoning. (Goldfinch60) For all things there is a time, you will surely walk along it in peace...
  October 20th, 2017 13:48
• the water (Frank Prem) A life, a stream, you are the water. Like two streams join to become a...
  October 20th, 2017 13:43
• THE HOUSE (Michael Edwards) A great beginning to what could be a greater poem. We want to know what...
  October 20th, 2017 13:37
• Breaking Free (WL Schuett) \"A blink of an eye, between the righteous and the fool.\" \'Wasted years...
  October 20th, 2017 13:26
• Blind Faith (WL Schuett) 46 years into a marriage and still, things mystify me, about her, about...
  October 19th, 2017 20:38
• YOU. (Fay Slimm.) Alchemy and Nature, said to be one and the same. What great descriptive...
  October 16th, 2017 10:07
• Zlata\'s Daughter (Frank Prem) An awesome write, loaded with emotions we try to hide, like bigotry and...
  October 16th, 2017 09:55
• New Start (FredPeyer) Ah yes, the one that got away, but then returns, and once again and we...
  October 16th, 2017 09:38
• THEY SAY (Louis Gibbs) An excellent write. \"To what end\"....exactly! If there were past lives...
  October 16th, 2017 09:31
• Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) As it hunts through ruins of castles, an owl\' s call do you hear? Somehow...
  October 15th, 2017 15:43
• Can you see me? (Addynicole) To be seen \"as strong, confident, and intelligent\" talk to this person....
  October 14th, 2017 19:40
• Traumatic Childhood Memory (Prose Poem) (Rrodriguez) Such things can be remembered, and who knows maybe they should be, but...
  October 14th, 2017 19:16
• Truth (Addynicole) Truth - What is it? Some things have a certitude, the Sun is in the sky,...
  October 14th, 2017 10:37
• Narrow Escape. (Goldfinch60) I had to laugh! I read this just after bringing her morning tea. I guess...
  October 14th, 2017 10:03
• My family is moving, again... (Rrodriguez) I have lived in some tough places, but none like the South Bronx of the...
  October 13th, 2017 17:37
• Awe (PACollin) I once said something to the effect that life is sorted into \"moments\"...
  October 13th, 2017 13:29
• Faded Flower (WL Schuett) I think the painting is a stirring representation of loneliness and...
  October 13th, 2017 13:04
• Together Again (FredPeyer) Missing someone who has been lost, and you\'ve captured it exquisitely,...
  October 13th, 2017 12:27
• THE CURSE OF AWARENESS (Louis Gibbs) Inner peace comes with the acceptance of the outer world as it exists. We...
  October 13th, 2017 12:20
• In The Making. (Fay Slimm.) An artist or an artisan, whichever they are called, their work can be...
  October 13th, 2017 11:26
• THOSE days (Tamara Lancaster) O.K. I rather like this one. I see the dark first stanza as loneliness....
  October 10th, 2017 14:43
• Playing At Love. (Fay Slimm.) So true, Fay. Unintended yet spoken love can be hurtful, destructive, and...
  October 10th, 2017 13:53
• tango (Frank Prem) \"The Tango\", or if I ever tried it, \"The Tangle.\" Someone would...
  October 8th, 2017 13:17
• But Still We Laugh. (Goldfinch60) Gold - It\'s a tough situation you are in, but to be able to find humor...
  October 8th, 2017 10:25
• A GENTLE LAND (Michael Edwards) Ah, yes, poetic idealism, makes one want to find this land and live...
  October 8th, 2017 10:14
• Missed (FredPeyer) I sense there was someone on that train he wanted to meet.What with...
  October 7th, 2017 17:44
• perfect time (Frank Prem) A dog is a man\'s best friend, but not a duet partner, or is he? They are...
  October 7th, 2017 17:17
• What Could Be....... (MaddieJ) \"Soulda, woulda. coulda,\" cal all be replaced by one word, \"DID.\' ...
  October 7th, 2017 17:08
• Less Trodden. (Fay Slimm.) Forget the \"path less taken,\" take the one never dreamed of. Your poem...
  October 7th, 2017 16:26
• KIPPERED (Michael Edwards) Kippers!! Yuk! Sorry Michael, but not for me, not at breakfast. The poem...
  October 7th, 2017 16:10
• DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1) (Michael Edwards) \"Moving clay,\" lays the groundwork (no pun intended) for so much more. I...
  October 5th, 2017 18:33
• October\' s Intent. (Fay Slimm.) A lovely write about the turning of the season. One of my favorite times...
  October 4th, 2017 20:01
• Scarred (FredPeyer) This world will go on without us and the billions who have gone before.We...
  October 4th, 2017 14:46
• THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards) \"The Autocrat,\" in Haiku format. One can read the last word of each line...
  October 4th, 2017 14:29
• What My Teacher Really Taught me (Syd) Very well written, very meaningful. A positive message about life and...
  October 3rd, 2017 16:03
• Sweet Memories (FredPeyer) I think I\'ve been in that bar...more than once. So you took me down...
  October 3rd, 2017 15:51
• This Love (Adrianna Kjeld) I believe Fred said it best, :You tell it like it is.\" Some of us wander...
  October 3rd, 2017 15:35
• Thank God, Papi is Home Again (Rrodriguez) A beautiful message Roberto. Only those who have lived through it know the...
  October 3rd, 2017 15:00
• ON BEING A POET (Michael Edwards) Agreed, agreed, agreed,...or more simply, I agree with all you have...
  October 3rd, 2017 12:56
• Ode to Music. (Goldfinch60) \"Without music, life is a journey through a desert\" - Conroy. So true...
  October 3rd, 2017 12:40
• The Late Muse. (Goldfinch60) The muse that creeps in the night, sometimes referred to as getting older....
  October 3rd, 2017 12:30
• THE BURGESS SHALE (Michael Edwards) Excellent haikus strung together to form a larger piece. Very old fossils...
  September 19th, 2017 10:52
• SHE MONSTICHS (Michael Edwards) The \"She\" in #4 is the girl for me. Lots of fun in your Monostichs,...
  September 18th, 2017 18:45
• LIMERICK 43 (Michael Edwards) I think I worked for that guy. He always left early. I was about to say...
  September 17th, 2017 09:46
• HIS PICTURE GONE (Michael Edwards) A picture gone, someone is missed. a faded wall enhances the contrast....
  September 16th, 2017 11:52
• Suicide Note (Liberty_Shadows) L.S. - Listen to Seek. Consider today the first day of YOUR life. Build it...
  September 15th, 2017 17:39
• WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards) The poem first - What a tortuous exercise this must have been, but you got...
  September 15th, 2017 15:10
• THE ABSTRACT ARTIST (Michael Edwards) Fresh ideas come in new forms, when all the older forms have been used up....
  September 14th, 2017 19:13
• THE RECURRING DREAM (Louis Gibbs) And thusly, you may have found the cure for your recurring dream....
  September 13th, 2017 14:53
• A COUPLE OF EDONES (Michael Edwards) Wonderful stuff. Great ideas expressed in a rigid format. Very difficult....
  September 13th, 2017 14:27
• Once Upon My Midnight\'s Madness (Swingline) Somehow reminded me of 9-11. What with all the jumping and fire. Horrible...
  May 6th, 2017 20:45
• DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards) All manners have left the table, or so it seems. The best of the best...
  May 6th, 2017 20:41
• Nightmares (Bibbeck) This is very well done, especially for such an early age. You most...
  May 6th, 2017 20:32
• I knew it wasnt true (Mizzy) Freedom? Yes? Sounds like the end of a relationship. Hope all is working...
  May 6th, 2017 20:24
• Wee Willy (Swingline) I\'m sure there\'s a joke here about frog\'s legs and long tongues, but...
  May 4th, 2017 17:26
• For Thine Eyes Only. (Fay Slimm.) Who\'s this Thine guy? Lucky fellow. A beautiful message sent back in time...
  May 4th, 2017 17:18
• Friggen Hornets (WriteBeLight) Hornets and wasps, yuck! I hate them.It seems I spend a great deal of time...
  May 4th, 2017 08:25
• THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards) My understanding of how villages got built, was that the church was the...
  May 4th, 2017 08:02
• THE GATHERING (Michael Edwards) I do not think that this is one day in the life of a woman, but rather her...
  May 4th, 2017 07:54
• Perhaps. (Fay Slimm.) Here where I live there is, on much older homes, an architectural...
  May 2nd, 2017 15:50
• Bird Bath (WriteBeLight) I like how they line up (or should I say tree up) for their turn in the...
  May 2nd, 2017 15:28
• LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24> (Michael Edwards) Three humorous sketches and one of Veere. Well done, Michael. I like #3,...
  May 2nd, 2017 15:18
• Start With A Cup (WriteBeLight) Cofffff....eeeeee! Used to be, my jump start in the morning, too, but, now...
  May 1st, 2017 20:24
• A SIMPLE MAN (Michael Edwards) A brilliant painting, in both examples, poem and drawing. Very picturesque...
  April 30th, 2017 17:26
• Awakening. (Goldfinch60) Facing another day on the planet is always a lucky day. Being able to...
  April 29th, 2017 20:49
• Boldness. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully spoken moment with Nature. All creatures become fascinating...
  April 28th, 2017 22:07
• DESPAIR (Michael Edwards) Whatever she said, it was powerful, or maybe it was just, \"No.\" Another...
  April 28th, 2017 21:57
• Questions (Lizzy Renee) There are more questions than there are answers. The important thing is to...
  April 28th, 2017 18:02
• NOSTALGIA (Michael Edwards) Ah, yes, the memories of our youth. Can they ever be seen again? or have...
  April 27th, 2017 20:40
• Rain Power (WriteBeLight) And they cancelled the ballgame!! I too hate potholes, and driving in the...
  April 25th, 2017 21:52
• Raphia Regalis Leaves (Gary Edward Geraci) The ways of life graded by the grandeur of leaves, very unique expression...
  April 25th, 2017 21:45
• The Battle Between Truth and Lies (Lizzy Renee) Live by the truth. Lies bring you down, trip you up, and destroy your self...
  April 25th, 2017 21:36
• Day After Long Weekend Blues (WriteBeLight) Beautiful weekend, now back to the grind, One reason to hate Mondays or...
  April 24th, 2017 20:14
• Scaled. (Fay Slimm.) Love can scale to the highest height, overcome any barrier, physical or...
  April 24th, 2017 20:08
• Strawberry fire (Down the rabbithole) Very zesty. Great mix of metaphor and directness. Be careful, the fruit of...
  April 23rd, 2017 21:13
• Smitten. (Fay Slimm.) Bitten by the Dove of Love? So, someone has to ask the question, might as...
  April 20th, 2017 20:38
• Foggy Fever (WriteBeLight) Time is a precious commodity. We work, eat and sleep and there is no time...
  April 20th, 2017 20:31
• ECHOES (Michael Edwards) A beautiful scene, to me, a summer\'s day of bright light and warmth, a...
  April 20th, 2017 20:24
• Pact (LIGHT WARRIOR) I think in life we all face trials, we are tested, and those who survive...
  April 20th, 2017 20:14
• When Love comes (Willyweed) So true. Sometimes you never realize it\'s happening. Great write. Loved...
  April 20th, 2017 20:05
• STOP (Michael Edwards) Sometimes we choose to not see things as they are, and sometimes we wish...
  April 19th, 2017 21:16
• The Engineer and the Salesman (WriteBeLight) The Engineer creates, the Salesman sells, It\'s the sale that involves a...
  April 18th, 2017 22:27
• shining star (Willyweed) It takes courage to deal with those types of problems, both for the victim...
  April 18th, 2017 22:17
• TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN (Michael Edwards) I think we\'ve all had those moments of unintended frost, but the way...
  April 18th, 2017 22:14
• THE MUSIC OF THE SEA (Michael Edwards) Some call it the roar of the sea, here it\'s the music, and I\'ve heard it...
  April 17th, 2017 19:46
• don\'t hesitate (Willyweed) The hateful suffer in misery. The loving live in joy. Two paths: one like...
  April 17th, 2017 19:41
• Unsung Whispers. (Fay Slimm.) I think as writers we have more of an affinity for quiet than most. To me,...
  April 14th, 2017 21:11