Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Ease (---mari0)
Exceptional. \"Hearing a smile,\" that\'s brilliant. And with \"it\'s the...
March 7th, 2017 19:19 - Where It All Went Wrong (Mouse_Mango)
First poem? Welcome. A good one to start with. I liked how you went from...
March 7th, 2017 19:05 - Timeless (ToniSears17)
Beautiful images, similes and metaphors galore, make for a lovely poem. We...
March 7th, 2017 18:17 - Openess (Augustus)
Very spiritual, indeed. A great thought on life and coping. Brilliant and...
March 7th, 2017 18:12 - Fear (Izzi Lynn)
From one who is old and withered, let me say that you should listen to...
March 7th, 2017 18:08 - Strange forbidden fruit (Desaru)
The ill tasting fruit, to represent the ills of a lifetime. We tend to...
March 7th, 2017 18:01 - About Pen brook Manor (Willyweed)
Nice tale of spectral shenanigans against an unsuspecting motorist....
March 7th, 2017 17:46 - A COCKNEYS LOT (Chapter One) (Michael Edwards)
Wicked awesome Michael. Just more slang from the Boston locale. Within the...
March 7th, 2017 17:35 - Cutting Free. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Cutting free\" means leaving behind the baggage of the past, finding a...
March 7th, 2017 17:22 - Being Ready. (Fay Slimm.)
I really liked Stanza 4. \"Hedgerows dancing to Spring\'s evocative...
March 6th, 2017 14:54 - a gray November day (Willyweed)
Another haunted happening, or justa fictional story. Either way, well...
March 6th, 2017 14:35 - A UNION NOW REGRETTED (Michael Edwards)
He\'s gone and she\'s concerned about the future. I have to say that I...
March 6th, 2017 14:27 - Damaged Soul (Rrodriguez)
Sad indeed. Well expressed by you. Perhaps it will aide your friend in...
March 5th, 2017 18:47 - Spring Knows. (Fay Slimm.)
Can\'t get here fast enough. The resilience of Nature is truly amazing....
March 5th, 2017 18:18 - bruised purple (Willyweed)
\"Bruised and purple,\" Some physical, some psychological, but we all...
March 5th, 2017 18:10 - THE MAIDEN (Michael Edwards)
Haiku for a maiden in search of love. Nice image. - Phil A.
March 5th, 2017 18:00 - LIMERICKS 16, 17 & 18. (Michael Edwards)
On the limericks - humorous as always, and I agree on Nottingham.
On the...
March 4th, 2017 20:28 - Writing 3 (Tony36)
Nice write, Tony. - Phil A.
March 4th, 2017 20:23 - Sales (Augustus)
Forced by Nature to, once again, adapt. Something we\'ve done all of our...
March 4th, 2017 20:20 - Time\'s Needle. (Fay Slimm.)
The majesty of the morning Sun. Chasing the darkness and spreading light...
March 4th, 2017 20:10 - Solmonet (Rrodriguez)
The beauty of the setting Sun, captured in poetic style, and painted with...
March 4th, 2017 20:03 - An Evening Stroll With Grandpa (Rrodriguez)
Precious moments indeed. I believe it is the return of innocent eyes that...
March 3rd, 2017 22:02 - Creation (Tony36)
Hold on to your beliefs, Tony. Surely you will be rewarded in Heaven. -...
March 3rd, 2017 21:55 - Yearning to Sail (Augustus)
Thought that photo might have been of the \"Eagle.\" U.S. Coast Guard...
March 3rd, 2017 21:53 - Mother; I remain (Willyweed)
The bad seed, the black sheep, the one who turns out bad: the mother\'s...
March 3rd, 2017 21:46 - Live in Peace - FIBS (Goldfinch60)
Interesting form. New to me. You\'ve mastered it with this piece....
March 3rd, 2017 21:34 - THE VIEW FROM BEYOND (Michael Edwards)
I said to myself that I wasn\'t going to compliment your painting, again....
March 3rd, 2017 21:29 - Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.)
Man\'s struggles against the sea: Storms, huge tides, floods, tidal waves...
March 3rd, 2017 21:12 - Drought (Quemis)
One minute it\'s soft and beautiful, and then it\'s gut wrenching- raw....
March 2nd, 2017 14:11 - Over thinking ~ An acrostic (Poems_)
Try Yoga. Great for clearing the mind and beneficial for your health. Nice...
March 2nd, 2017 13:50 - Watson and Holmes Went Camping. (Goldfinch60)
Two of my favorite characters. Read all, watched all, of the books and...
March 2nd, 2017 13:45 - \"Heart Beat Stars\" (Augustus)
It appears the universe offers up endless possibilities, not just...
March 2nd, 2017 13:39 - B.O. Bomb (WriteBeLight)
Saw it on the news last night. Maybe they\'ll rebuild with better...
March 2nd, 2017 13:29 - death was a lady (Willyweed)
Death is almost always portrayed as either a shadowy figure or a horrible...
March 2nd, 2017 13:19 - THREE LITTLE WORDS (Michael Edwards)
Wisdom of the ages. - I do whatever the voices in my wife\'s head tell me...
March 2nd, 2017 13:09 - Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.)
Love it. A very graphic description of the pain and hurt felt from...
March 2nd, 2017 13:01 - I am the Poet (Tony36)
I like this one Tony. It says so much about the power of the pen. The...
March 1st, 2017 21:42 - Lost (Augustus)
No stars? Scary thought. What would happen? Absolute chaos. And I think we...
March 1st, 2017 21:38 - dance with my shadow (Willyweed)
Time to lighten the load before you go overboard. Deep six the clutter of...
March 1st, 2017 21:31 - Get Off It! (WriteBeLight)
Very humorous. I hate driving, and heavy traffic only makes it worse....
March 1st, 2017 21:25 - For Elizabeth (Will Hiltz)
As time passes memories become jumbled together. If clouded by fears,...
March 1st, 2017 21:12 - THE RETURN (Michael Edwards)
Wow, great write. Very descriptive. It rings of intimacy and love, of...
March 1st, 2017 21:01 - Live Silver. (Fay Slimm.)
Images that jump from the paper to the reader: of herring, sails, boats,...
March 1st, 2017 20:50 - Coveted. (Fay Slimm.)
A great write, full of history, and description of what was a very...
February 28th, 2017 13:14 - The Old Man (Goldfinch60)
Yes indeed, we all get there eventually, and we tend to reflect and ponder...
February 28th, 2017 13:00 - Leaving Nashville (Will Hiltz)
I believe you\'ve captured the essence of country music in your piece. Can...
February 28th, 2017 12:56 - Party\'s Over (WriteBeLight)
Tough choices in life are not always easily made, but sometimes we just...
February 28th, 2017 12:40 - PREDICTION (Michael Edwards)
Live for today, plan for tomorrow. Life is short. Enjoy it while you can....
February 28th, 2017 12:05 - Odd One In (WriteBeLight)
Loneliness is a blight on the spirit, although not so much at work if you...
February 27th, 2017 15:16 - Out on the promenade (Willyweed)
A moonlit night on the promenade, a great setting for love and dance. This...
February 27th, 2017 15:07 - TRANSIENCE (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful Michael. I loved your play with words. I\'m torn between someone...
February 27th, 2017 15:02 - TIME TO GO (Michael Edwards)
I usually tell her I left and came back. And she say\'s \"You didn\'t?\" I...
February 26th, 2017 21:22 - Impossible to get through (Poems_)
You have a poet\'s heart and a brilliant mind. We all spend many, many...
February 26th, 2017 21:17 - Love\'s Due. (Fay Slimm.)
Love, music, and song, together they bring hope or misery, depending on...
February 26th, 2017 20:50 - Acquainted with Much Pain (Rrodriguez)
It seems that pain and the night are always together. One amplifies the...
February 26th, 2017 20:40 - New Depths. (Fay Slimm.)
The depth of one\'s soul cannot be measured in real terms only in mystical...
February 26th, 2017 20:21 - Fearful hope (Isabel Chelisia Villa)
You only get one Dad. So make the most of it, but do not stand for any...
February 26th, 2017 20:16 - I went outside to pick up some leaves (Rrodriguez)
\"Tears of many trees\" is brilliant.This entire piece has many wonderful...
February 26th, 2017 20:11 - Time Bandage (WriteBeLight)
A \"Time Bandage.\" You put it on and the wound underneath enters a time...
February 22nd, 2017 15:24 - Remand (Quemis)
Fertility and fallow land, ending in dust. We all end in dust, everything...
February 22nd, 2017 15:14 - MEMORIES (Michael Edwards)
I have to agree with Fay a bit, I love the flow of your words in this one....
February 22nd, 2017 15:03 - An Astronomer Drives His Wife Home (Will Hiltz)
Beautiful poem. Great images, great musings, man is so inconsequential to...
February 22nd, 2017 14:57 - What was the reason? (Poems_)
True love never dies. It simply never was. True love is between two...
February 22nd, 2017 14:51 - Baby give me time. (Bella cortez)
I\'m seeing a relationship about to be broken up, but not just now. One is...
February 22nd, 2017 14:41 - Dreams (Isabel Chelisia Villa)
Your life is no longer just your own. It is your\'s and his. You must go...
February 22nd, 2017 14:28 - Three Faces. (Fay Slimm.)
What to do with the blank page? Fill it with meaningful musings such as...
February 22nd, 2017 14:16 - Sheen (Augustus)
Loved it. Reads like Sci-Fi. Asteroid crashes into the sea, strange things...
February 21st, 2017 15:13 - Anticipation (Stephanie Showers)
Wow! That sense of a bond when you first meet someone, the commonality of...
February 21st, 2017 11:34 - AUTUMN (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
Nature rules us all. Leaves are are her way of rewarding us. Truly a...
February 21st, 2017 10:51 - Pain In The Glass (WriteBeLight)
I\'ve lived in the Northeast for 73 years and I love it here. Where else...
February 21st, 2017 10:40 - LIMERICKS 10, 11, and 12 (Michael Edwards)
Beautiful artwork. Three funny limericks. How does one judge a limerick,...
February 21st, 2017 10:27 - Jump From a Plane (Ternic73)
Paratroopers are indeed a brave lot. They are first in, usually, or the...
February 21st, 2017 10:16 - Be you (Crow.)
Nice write, great message. Let your true self shine. Keep on writing with...
February 21st, 2017 10:05 - Being Fickle. (Fay Slimm.)
Lovely. It\'s such a refreshing time of year, and you\'ve captured that...
February 21st, 2017 09:51 - Justica Picks (Augustus)
The rich, the poor, the elite, the common man, justice for all, not so...
February 20th, 2017 17:59 - when your alone with Bon Jovi (Jooles)
Everyone has \"their\" music and I suppose \"their\" dance, but mostly it...
February 20th, 2017 12:44 - Face in the Flames (Edthepoet)
A sad reflection on lost love. We\'ve been there and it hurts. The...
February 20th, 2017 12:28 - The Kernel\'s Lost. Try Floss. (WriteBeLight)
Ah yes, the dangers of popcorn. Will nature please stop the assault on the...
February 20th, 2017 11:13 - How Does It Feel? (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
Sounds like depression. But then if you can write about it that may be...
February 20th, 2017 11:05 - PLUNDER (Michael Edwards)
It truly is a plundering of our legacy. The pirating of land for...
February 20th, 2017 10:44 - LIFE (VictoriaOliviaGreene)
Well, that\'s certainly true. Nice expression of a longstanding concept. -...
February 19th, 2017 17:12 - The Tree we all are. (ABreathOrSigh)
It\'s true, we all have the same desire in life, namely, happiness. We are...
February 19th, 2017 17:09 - LIMERICK No 9 (Michael Edwards)
Funny limerick. Awesome painting. I guess the inventor was unhinged....
February 19th, 2017 12:46 - Devil in Disguise (Poems_)
All things, all people, are never what they seem at the first glance.In...
February 19th, 2017 12:33 - Becoming Other. (Fay Slimm.)
Nature, in all its glory, can and does inspire. We become a bee, a fox, a...
February 19th, 2017 12:21 - Another Touch (Augustus)
\"Truth,\" is a precious commodity in any relationship. Incomplete...
February 18th, 2017 15:14 - Going Round Again (Philip)
\"Make the most of your second youth,\" ain\'t that the truth. There\'s no...
February 18th, 2017 15:05 - WITHIN THE SANCTION OF THE WALLS (Michael Edwards)
I\'ve heard many praiseworthy compliments on the value of \"moonshine,\"...
February 18th, 2017 14:38 - WITHIN THE SANCTION OF THE WALLS (Michael Edwards)
I\'ve heard many praiseworthy compliments on the value of \"moonshine,\"...
February 18th, 2017 14:15 - I Swear I\'m Stuck (WriteBeLight)
So, enough humor over this poem, enough of the \"I can\'t find the right...
February 18th, 2017 11:57 - Emotions (Poems_)
Great images. Try to slow down and let joy catch up.
Sadness, guilt,...
February 18th, 2017 11:13 - A Touch (Augustus)
\'87, C\'mon it was only 30 years ago. Where does the time go, when...
February 17th, 2017 19:00 - Changeling. (Fay Slimm.)
Yes, the wind can dance and twirl like a ballerina, and roar like a lion....
February 17th, 2017 17:19 - River stone (Reivax Camlost)
Loved it. A great image expressed cleverly and clearly. Every word...
February 17th, 2017 17:11 - Sestina (M4y4_bee)
Wow! Clever stuff. Sounds like a time consuming process, to get it just...
February 17th, 2017 17:07 - Night time (Poems_)
Your poems are good. I can see the images you create. Now change them to...
February 17th, 2017 16:53 - Sharp Stone Syllables (Quemis)
One must love one\'s self before they can love another. Feelings of self...
February 17th, 2017 12:40 - Freedom Phrases (WriteBeLight)
My humble opinion is that we write because we must. There is a certain...
February 17th, 2017 12:18 - Real world (Isabel Chelisia Villa)
Wow! Is there a poet in you? For damn sure. I can tell by how you write....
February 17th, 2017 11:51 - To Have And Let Go (WriteBeLight)
Life is not a book where you turn the page and find out what\'s happening...
February 16th, 2017 20:38
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