Comments on community poems by MendedFences27



  • Ego\'s Down (Neville) In my first introduction to Marmite I spread it on the bread like peanut...
    July 13th, 2020 13:48
  • See Success. (Fay Slimm.) One line truly stunned me - \"stand on the edge of seen and unseen.\" A...
    July 13th, 2020 13:30
  • A Secret. (Fay Slimm.) The mind receives the message, but the heart interprets it, All those...
    July 12th, 2020 11:28
  • AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5) (Michael Edwards) I see blue skies with some sun peeking through over a mountain range and a...
    July 12th, 2020 11:15
  • Freedom (Maxine Smith) Loved your final stanza. Take life as it comes is sound advice for anyone....
    July 10th, 2020 15:00
  • Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.) Clandestine love affairs leave their mark to be carried through the years....
    July 10th, 2020 14:51
  • AGEING COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) The painting and poem do not belong together. It\'s funny (the poem) and...
    July 10th, 2020 14:46
  • she (Dusk arising) Homeward bound to where the enchantress eclipses the enchantment. The...
    July 10th, 2020 14:39
  • Why I Do It (ForeverJesus6) In every instance ask yourself, \"What would Jesus do?\" - Phil A.
    July 8th, 2020 22:42
  • Treasured. (Fay Slimm.) I know it is just \"me,\' but your phrasing of the first two stanzas had...
    July 8th, 2020 13:50
  • Untenable. (Fay Slimm.) Love and obsession -They say the greatest sex organ is the brain, so it\'s...
    July 7th, 2020 15:13
  • AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) Both very clever. Clever art, clever humor. If only they had grown onions...
    July 7th, 2020 15:02
  • Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.) A very unique form of expression. A walk in the woods is becomes...
    July 6th, 2020 17:16
  • White Violets (Neville) **** \'Four stars\" for this one, \"pearlescent\" or otherwise....
    July 6th, 2020 17:00
  • Wonder. (Fay Slimm.) I was just wondering how the beauty of this small gem can speak so loudly...
    June 19th, 2020 21:58


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