Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• \"Heart Beat Stars\" (Augustus) It appears the universe offers up endless possibilities, not just...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:39
• B.O. Bomb (WriteBeLight) Saw it on the news last night. Maybe they\'ll rebuild with better...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:29
• death was a lady (Willyweed) Death is almost always portrayed as either a shadowy figure or a horrible...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:19
• THREE LITTLE WORDS (Michael Edwards) Wisdom of the ages. - I do whatever the voices in my wife\'s head tell me...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:09
• Still Climbing. (Fay Slimm.) Love it. A very graphic description of the pain and hurt felt from...
  March 2nd, 2017 13:01
• I am the Poet (Tony36) I like this one Tony. It says so much about the power of the pen. The...
  March 1st, 2017 21:42
• Lost (Augustus) No stars? Scary thought. What would happen? Absolute chaos. And I think we...
  March 1st, 2017 21:38
• dance with my shadow (Willyweed) Time to lighten the load before you go overboard. Deep six the clutter of...
  March 1st, 2017 21:31
• Get Off It! (WriteBeLight) Very humorous. I hate driving, and heavy traffic only makes it worse....
  March 1st, 2017 21:25
• For Elizabeth (Will Hiltz) As time passes memories become jumbled together. If clouded by fears,...
  March 1st, 2017 21:12
• THE RETURN (Michael Edwards) Wow, great write. Very descriptive. It rings of intimacy and love, of...
  March 1st, 2017 21:01
• Live Silver. (Fay Slimm.) Images that jump from the paper to the reader: of herring, sails, boats,...
  March 1st, 2017 20:50
• Coveted. (Fay Slimm.) A great write, full of history, and description of what was a very...
  February 28th, 2017 13:14
• The Old Man (Goldfinch60) Yes indeed, we all get there eventually, and we tend to reflect and ponder...
  February 28th, 2017 13:00
• Leaving Nashville (Will Hiltz) I believe you\'ve captured the essence of country music in your piece. Can...
  February 28th, 2017 12:56
• Party\'s Over (WriteBeLight) Tough choices in life are not always easily made, but sometimes we just...
  February 28th, 2017 12:40
• PREDICTION (Michael Edwards) Live for today, plan for tomorrow. Life is short. Enjoy it while you can....
  February 28th, 2017 12:05
• Odd One In (WriteBeLight) Loneliness is a blight on the spirit, although not so much at work if you...
  February 27th, 2017 15:16
• Out on the promenade (Willyweed) A moonlit night on the promenade, a great setting for love and dance. This...
  February 27th, 2017 15:07
• TRANSIENCE (Michael Edwards) Beautiful Michael. I loved your play with words. I\'m torn between someone...
  February 27th, 2017 15:02
• TIME TO GO (Michael Edwards) I usually tell her I left and came back. And she say\'s \"You didn\'t?\" I...
  February 26th, 2017 21:22
• Impossible to get through (Poems_) You have a poet\'s heart and a brilliant mind. We all spend many, many...
  February 26th, 2017 21:17
• Love\'s Due. (Fay Slimm.) Love, music, and song, together they bring hope or misery, depending on...
  February 26th, 2017 20:50
• Acquainted with Much Pain (Rrodriguez) It seems that pain and the night are always together. One amplifies the...
  February 26th, 2017 20:40
• New Depths. (Fay Slimm.) The depth of one\'s soul cannot be measured in real terms only in mystical...
  February 26th, 2017 20:21
• Fearful hope (Isabel Chelisia Villa) You only get one Dad. So make the most of it, but do not stand for any...
  February 26th, 2017 20:16
• I went outside to pick up some leaves (Rrodriguez) \"Tears of many trees\" is brilliant.This entire piece has many wonderful...
  February 26th, 2017 20:11
• Time Bandage (WriteBeLight) A \"Time Bandage.\" You put it on and the wound underneath enters a time...
  February 22nd, 2017 15:24
• Remand (Quemis) Fertility and fallow land, ending in dust. We all end in dust, everything...
  February 22nd, 2017 15:14
• MEMORIES (Michael Edwards) I have to agree with Fay a bit, I love the flow of your words in this one....
  February 22nd, 2017 15:03
• An Astronomer Drives His Wife Home (Will Hiltz) Beautiful poem. Great images, great musings, man is so inconsequential to...
  February 22nd, 2017 14:57
• What was the reason? (Poems_) True love never dies. It simply never was. True love is between two...
  February 22nd, 2017 14:51
• Baby give me time. (Bella cortez) I\'m seeing a relationship about to be broken up, but not just now. One is...
  February 22nd, 2017 14:41
• Dreams (Isabel Chelisia Villa) Your life is no longer just your own. It is your\'s and his. You must go...
  February 22nd, 2017 14:28
• Three Faces. (Fay Slimm.) What to do with the blank page? Fill it with meaningful musings such as...
  February 22nd, 2017 14:16
• Sheen (Augustus) Loved it. Reads like Sci-Fi. Asteroid crashes into the sea, strange things...
  February 21st, 2017 15:13
• Anticipation (Stephanie Showers) Wow! That sense of a bond when you first meet someone, the commonality of...
  February 21st, 2017 11:34
• AUTUMN (VictoriaOliviaGreene) Nature rules us all. Leaves are are her way of rewarding us. Truly a...
  February 21st, 2017 10:51
• Pain In The Glass (WriteBeLight) I\'ve lived in the Northeast for 73 years and I love it here. Where else...
  February 21st, 2017 10:40
• LIMERICKS 10, 11, and 12 (Michael Edwards) Beautiful artwork. Three funny limericks. How does one judge a limerick,...
  February 21st, 2017 10:27
• Jump From a Plane (Ternic73) Paratroopers are indeed a brave lot. They are first in, usually, or the...
  February 21st, 2017 10:16
• Be you (Crow.) Nice write, great message. Let your true self shine. Keep on writing with...
  February 21st, 2017 10:05
• Being Fickle. (Fay Slimm.) Lovely. It\'s such a refreshing time of year, and you\'ve captured that...
  February 21st, 2017 09:51
• Justica Picks (Augustus) The rich, the poor, the elite, the common man, justice for all, not so...
  February 20th, 2017 17:59
• when your alone with Bon Jovi (Jooles) Everyone has \"their\" music and I suppose \"their\" dance, but mostly it...
  February 20th, 2017 12:44
• Face in the Flames (Edthepoet) A sad reflection on lost love. We\'ve been there and it hurts. The...
  February 20th, 2017 12:28
• The Kernel\'s Lost. Try Floss. (WriteBeLight) Ah yes, the dangers of popcorn. Will nature please stop the assault on the...
  February 20th, 2017 11:13
• How Does It Feel? (VictoriaOliviaGreene) Sounds like depression. But then if you can write about it that may be...
  February 20th, 2017 11:05
• PLUNDER (Michael Edwards) It truly is a plundering of our legacy. The pirating of land for...
  February 20th, 2017 10:44
• LIFE (VictoriaOliviaGreene) Well, that\'s certainly true. Nice expression of a longstanding concept. -...
  February 19th, 2017 17:12
• The Tree we all are. (ABreathOrSigh) It\'s true, we all have the same desire in life, namely, happiness. We are...
  February 19th, 2017 17:09
• LIMERICK No 9 (Michael Edwards) Funny limerick. Awesome painting. I guess the inventor was unhinged....
  February 19th, 2017 12:46
• Devil in Disguise (Poems_) All things, all people, are never what they seem at the first glance.In...
  February 19th, 2017 12:33
• Becoming Other. (Fay Slimm.) Nature, in all its glory, can and does inspire. We become a bee, a fox, a...
  February 19th, 2017 12:21
• Another Touch (Augustus) \"Truth,\" is a precious commodity in any relationship. Incomplete...
  February 18th, 2017 15:14
• Going Round Again (Philip) \"Make the most of your second youth,\" ain\'t that the truth. There\'s no...
  February 18th, 2017 15:05
• WITHIN THE SANCTION OF THE WALLS (Michael Edwards) I\'ve heard many praiseworthy compliments on the value of \"moonshine,\"...
  February 18th, 2017 14:38
• WITHIN THE SANCTION OF THE WALLS (Michael Edwards) I\'ve heard many praiseworthy compliments on the value of \"moonshine,\"...
  February 18th, 2017 14:15
• I Swear I\'m Stuck (WriteBeLight) So, enough humor over this poem, enough of the \"I can\'t find the right...
  February 18th, 2017 11:57
• Emotions (Poems_) Great images. Try to slow down and let joy catch up. Sadness, guilt,...
  February 18th, 2017 11:13
• A Touch (Augustus) \'87, C\'mon it was only 30 years ago. Where does the time go, when...
  February 17th, 2017 19:00
• Changeling. (Fay Slimm.) Yes, the wind can dance and twirl like a ballerina, and roar like a lion....
  February 17th, 2017 17:19
• River stone (Reivax Camlost) Loved it. A great image expressed cleverly and clearly. Every word...
  February 17th, 2017 17:11
• Sestina (M4y4_bee) Wow! Clever stuff. Sounds like a time consuming process, to get it just...
  February 17th, 2017 17:07
• Night time (Poems_) Your poems are good. I can see the images you create. Now change them to...
  February 17th, 2017 16:53
• Sharp Stone Syllables (Quemis) One must love one\'s self before they can love another. Feelings of self...
  February 17th, 2017 12:40
• Freedom Phrases (WriteBeLight) My humble opinion is that we write because we must. There is a certain...
  February 17th, 2017 12:18
• Real world (Isabel Chelisia Villa) Wow! Is there a poet in you? For damn sure. I can tell by how you write....
  February 17th, 2017 11:51
• To Have And Let Go (WriteBeLight) Life is not a book where you turn the page and find out what\'s happening...
  February 16th, 2017 20:38
• Difference. (Fay Slimm.) Color in nature serves a multitude of purposes, attraction, defense,...
  February 16th, 2017 20:29
• Old Friends (Gencruz) A great personification of Insomnia and Depression, one male, one female....
  February 15th, 2017 21:13
• A Crusade (AJ) I\'ve always said, \"The world would be a beautiful place if it were not...
  February 15th, 2017 21:05
• Believe (Tony36) Without belief there is no hope. Well expressed here. - Phil A.
  February 15th, 2017 18:01
• Who am I? (Antoinette) You are what you want to be. No one can change that or deter it. It is...
  February 15th, 2017 17:59
• Life through my eyes (Ash) Great story-telling in poetic form. Sounds as though it would be a tough...
  February 15th, 2017 16:26
• No Time. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful images, of the sea and the shore causing reflection of things...
  February 15th, 2017 16:04
• Disorderly Conduct (WriteBeLight) In Seattle, while visiting a few years back, I discovered warning signs...
  February 15th, 2017 15:51
• Rays of Light (Augustus) Thank you for the light. Keeep seeing the heavenly love flowing your way....
  February 15th, 2017 13:19
• Unoriginal Sin (Kurt Philip Behm) Love expressed poetically , fostered by the likes of Eliot, Thoreau,...
  February 15th, 2017 11:00
• Humanity (Augustus) Man\'s inhumanity to Man is insane. We cannot stand by and let that...
  February 14th, 2017 21:49
• The Treadmill (Kurt Philip Behm) Life in the fast lane can be terribly hectic, it\'s time to \"slow down\",...
  February 14th, 2017 12:31
• True Character (Augustus) Those in authority are almost always despised for nothing more than the...
  February 13th, 2017 14:30
• Love, In Three Parts (NottarealPoet) This write is raw, brutally honest poetry. It was engrossing. The imagery...
  February 13th, 2017 14:23
• Love 3 (Tony36) Nice write, Tony. Love conquers all.
  February 13th, 2017 14:09
• Hello, From the Other Side (JustABird) Wow! Very emotional write. Kept it clear though, not too much...
  February 13th, 2017 14:06
• Friendly Competition (WriteBeLight) Every diet I ever tried always came with a note at the bottom that said...
  February 13th, 2017 13:46
• My Path Unbroken (Kurt Philip Behm) Three terrific poems. My Fav is the second. I like the uplifting message...
  February 12th, 2017 17:16
• Black Hole (Philip) What happens to or where is all the matter and energy absorbed by the...
  February 11th, 2017 12:24
• OUTBURST (Michael Edwards) I see the \"Outburst\" in your painting and the \"abstraction\" in your...
  February 11th, 2017 12:17
• RETAIL CYCLE (Michael Edwards) The \"Retail Cycle\" is being accelerated by on-line ordering. However the...
  February 10th, 2017 13:41
• February (Reivax Camlost) I see the morning frost, the snow falling, the surface of the snow...
  February 9th, 2017 17:38
• TWO TRAMPS (Michael Edwards) Two mice who wouldn\'t pay the price. Alone in the night, \'cause the...
  February 9th, 2017 16:12
• Five Strangers (Kurt Philip Behm) Sleep, with haunting dreams of repressed emotions one thought were gone,...
  February 9th, 2017 16:06
• Bodies (Corey) \"The heart is the toughest part of the body,\" someone once said, and...
  February 9th, 2017 13:47
• Bodies (Corey) \"The heart is the toughest part of the body,\" someone once said, and...
  February 9th, 2017 13:46
• Mugs, Hugs And Jugs (WriteBeLight) Coffee mugs bring smiles. A brief break from the day\'s stress while you...
  February 8th, 2017 15:54
• Purpose of tears (Stephanie Showers) To be alive requires an open heart. Trying to live with a closed heart is...
  February 8th, 2017 14:50
• Born to the sea (Aa Harvey) Is this a ghost ship? That\'s how I read it - \"Since the life at sea...
  February 8th, 2017 14:32
• The Beauty of the Night (John Snowdon) Night and Day, the eternal struggle. People of both domains feel the pain...
  February 8th, 2017 14:07
• HER EPITAPH YET WRITTEN (Michael Edwards) To me this feels like someone in remorse trying to cope and mend their...
  February 8th, 2017 13:08