Comments on community poems by MendedFences27



  • WINTER (Michael Edwards) I like this one. Michael. The passing of Winter into the nether regions....
    June 2nd, 2018 15:16
  • My Sails are Luffing (Lorna) Brilliant metaphor! A simple but powerful poem. Life, boats, wind , and...
    April 30th, 2018 11:59
  • at home (Onepauly) Just for the fun of it? A great flow of words and rhymes. No particular...
    April 29th, 2018 11:05
  • FIRST BALLAD. (Fay Slimm.) I will join the chorus and say that this is a well crafted piece. The link...
    April 7th, 2018 21:53
  • Fulfilled. (Fay Slimm.) Great actress, great quote, great poem, \"Love is, self-fulfilled.\" Love...
    January 11th, 2018 16:06
  • THIS LAND HE CALLS HIS HOME (Michael Edwards) Excellent write, reminded me the shore I live near. Rocky, misty at times,...
    January 11th, 2018 15:51
  • Winter Sounds. (Fay Slimm.) \"Winter sounds saddest.....when seen from behind,\" is a beautiful and...
    January 8th, 2018 16:14
  • selfish (Here) It\'s been said (probably by me) that before you can love another, you...
    December 29th, 2017 22:00
  • Life (Misplacedpoems) I find a lot of wisdom and understanding in this poem: \"Where none of us...
    December 28th, 2017 18:06
  • Inspirational (MaddieJ) I like the fact that this is an \"Inspirational\" poem. In particular the...
    December 23rd, 2017 19:34
  • Seduction. (Fay Slimm.) The call of the siren, not to be taken lightly, but with extreme caution,...
    December 7th, 2017 17:20
  • Sexual Healing. (Wallace) The world as one big Love-In. If it could only be, would it not be heaven....
    December 7th, 2017 16:59
  • NEW RESOLVE (Michael Edwards) Well, he finally won her heart, and putting all the troubles of the past...
    December 7th, 2017 16:54
  • “The Stars are Ruthless to Me” (AlinaVanderson) More than just beautiful words, a wonderful expression of love. The...
    December 3rd, 2017 18:45
  • THE CONFORMIST (Michael Edwards) I always say, \"Think outside of the big picture, \" and people say,...
    December 2nd, 2017 21:01
  • Watching (Adam Shirley) I like this one. Three scenes spliced together in two very different...
    November 22nd, 2017 21:17
  • Today\'s Poem. (Fay Slimm.) A beautiful write it is, Fay.\"Bird-agility,\" \"feathers reflect to...
    November 10th, 2017 15:53
  • THE MERMAIDS SIGH (Michael Edwards) I have a notion that the motion of the ocean - or its \"swell\" / are all...
    November 10th, 2017 15:45
  • Life is a Mess (FredPeyer) Never, ever, clean up completely. Always leave some small reminder of what...
    November 10th, 2017 15:06
  • my place in nothing (Frank Prem) Looking up at the universe, we see only what\'s within the realm of our...
    November 10th, 2017 14:52
  • The Actor (FredPeyer) Minimal wording, maximum effect. Sometimes less is more. I believe for...
    November 7th, 2017 20:34
  • stirring the soup (Frank Prem) Makes one wonder what was in the \"yonder?\" Was it another \'cauldron?\"...
    November 7th, 2017 20:26
  • The Land Of The Free (Christina8) A sad situation here in the U.S. Those in power seem hopelessly neutered...
    November 7th, 2017 20:18
  • Edge of the Wind (WL Schuett) Sometimes in the search for a better place we learn that where we began...
    November 7th, 2017 20:08
  • HER TAINTED HEART (Michael Edwards) \"Her Tainted Heart\" title sent me looking for guilt on her part. Overly...
    November 7th, 2017 19:54
  • Carrying On. (Fay Slimm.) Living by the sea, one learns of its might, but making a living on the...
    November 7th, 2017 19:39
  • A Leaf (Brycycle) A year in the life, from rebirth in Spring through to the ashes of dead...
    November 7th, 2017 19:12
  • three echoes (Frank Prem) Recently, someone wrote on here that love is \"soundless,\" now here in...
    November 6th, 2017 13:37
  • Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.) \"There exists silence not found by sound,\" \"secret whispers\" of love....
    November 2nd, 2017 15:42
  • Captured. (Fay Slimm.) Caught and captured, to be turned into useful energy, by boat sails, by...
    October 20th, 2017 14:06
  • The Beckoning. (Goldfinch60) For all things there is a time, you will surely walk along it in peace...
    October 20th, 2017 13:48
  • the water (Frank Prem) A life, a stream, you are the water. Like two streams join to become a...
    October 20th, 2017 13:43
  • THE HOUSE (Michael Edwards) A great beginning to what could be a greater poem. We want to know what...
    October 20th, 2017 13:37
  • Breaking Free (WL Schuett) \"A blink of an eye, between the righteous and the fool.\" \'Wasted years...
    October 20th, 2017 13:26
  • Blind Faith (WL Schuett) 46 years into a marriage and still, things mystify me, about her, about...
    October 19th, 2017 20:38
  • YOU. (Fay Slimm.) Alchemy and Nature, said to be one and the same. What great descriptive...
    October 16th, 2017 10:07
  • Zlata\'s Daughter (Frank Prem) An awesome write, loaded with emotions we try to hide, like bigotry and...
    October 16th, 2017 09:55
  • New Start (FredPeyer) Ah yes, the one that got away, but then returns, and once again and we...
    October 16th, 2017 09:38
  • THEY SAY (Louis Gibbs) An excellent write. \"To what end\"....exactly! If there were past lives...
    October 16th, 2017 09:31
  • Owl-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) As it hunts through ruins of castles, an owl\' s call do you hear? Somehow...
    October 15th, 2017 15:43
  • Can you see me? (Addynicole) To be seen \"as strong, confident, and intelligent\" talk to this person....
    October 14th, 2017 19:40
  • Traumatic Childhood Memory (Prose Poem) (Rrodriguez) Such things can be remembered, and who knows maybe they should be, but...
    October 14th, 2017 19:16
  • Truth (Addynicole) Truth - What is it? Some things have a certitude, the Sun is in the sky,...
    October 14th, 2017 10:37
  • Narrow Escape. (Goldfinch60) I had to laugh! I read this just after bringing her morning tea. I guess...
    October 14th, 2017 10:03
  • My family is moving, again... (Rrodriguez) I have lived in some tough places, but none like the South Bronx of the...
    October 13th, 2017 17:37
  • Awe (PACollin) I once said something to the effect that life is sorted into \"moments\"...
    October 13th, 2017 13:29
  • Faded Flower (WL Schuett) I think the painting is a stirring representation of loneliness and...
    October 13th, 2017 13:04
  • Together Again (FredPeyer) Missing someone who has been lost, and you\'ve captured it exquisitely,...
    October 13th, 2017 12:27
  • THE CURSE OF AWARENESS (Louis Gibbs) Inner peace comes with the acceptance of the outer world as it exists. We...
    October 13th, 2017 12:20
  • In The Making. (Fay Slimm.) An artist or an artisan, whichever they are called, their work can be...
    October 13th, 2017 11:26
  • THOSE days (Tamara Lancaster) O.K. I rather like this one. I see the dark first stanza as loneliness....
    October 10th, 2017 14:43
  • Playing At Love. (Fay Slimm.) So true, Fay. Unintended yet spoken love can be hurtful, destructive, and...
    October 10th, 2017 13:53
  • tango (Frank Prem) \"The Tango\", or if I ever tried it, \"The Tangle.\" Someone would...
    October 8th, 2017 13:17
  • But Still We Laugh. (Goldfinch60) Gold - It\'s a tough situation you are in, but to be able to find humor...
    October 8th, 2017 10:25
  • A GENTLE LAND (Michael Edwards) Ah, yes, poetic idealism, makes one want to find this land and live...
    October 8th, 2017 10:14
  • Missed (FredPeyer) I sense there was someone on that train he wanted to meet.What with...
    October 7th, 2017 17:44
  • perfect time (Frank Prem) A dog is a man\'s best friend, but not a duet partner, or is he? They are...
    October 7th, 2017 17:17
  • What Could Be....... (MaddieJ) \"Soulda, woulda. coulda,\" cal all be replaced by one word, \"DID.\' ...
    October 7th, 2017 17:08
  • Less Trodden. (Fay Slimm.) Forget the \"path less taken,\" take the one never dreamed of. Your poem...
    October 7th, 2017 16:26
  • KIPPERED (Michael Edwards) Kippers!! Yuk! Sorry Michael, but not for me, not at breakfast. The poem...
    October 7th, 2017 16:10
  • DE MORTUIS NIL NISI BONUM (Version 1) (Michael Edwards) \"Moving clay,\" lays the groundwork (no pun intended) for so much more. I...
    October 5th, 2017 18:33
  • October\' s Intent. (Fay Slimm.) A lovely write about the turning of the season. One of my favorite times...
    October 4th, 2017 20:01
  • Scarred (FredPeyer) This world will go on without us and the billions who have gone before.We...
    October 4th, 2017 14:46
  • THE AUTOCRAT (Michael Edwards) \"The Autocrat,\" in Haiku format. One can read the last word of each line...
    October 4th, 2017 14:29
  • What My Teacher Really Taught me (Syd) Very well written, very meaningful. A positive message about life and...
    October 3rd, 2017 16:03
  • Sweet Memories (FredPeyer) I think I\'ve been in that bar...more than once. So you took me down...
    October 3rd, 2017 15:51
  • This Love (Adrianna Kjeld) I believe Fred said it best, :You tell it like it is.\" Some of us wander...
    October 3rd, 2017 15:35
  • Thank God, Papi is Home Again (Rrodriguez) A beautiful message Roberto. Only those who have lived through it know the...
    October 3rd, 2017 15:00
  • ON BEING A POET (Michael Edwards) Agreed, agreed, agreed,...or more simply, I agree with all you have...
    October 3rd, 2017 12:56
  • Ode to Music. (Goldfinch60) \"Without music, life is a journey through a desert\" - Conroy. So true...
    October 3rd, 2017 12:40
  • The Late Muse. (Goldfinch60) The muse that creeps in the night, sometimes referred to as getting older....
    October 3rd, 2017 12:30
  • THE BURGESS SHALE (Michael Edwards) Excellent haikus strung together to form a larger piece. Very old fossils...
    September 19th, 2017 10:52
  • SHE MONSTICHS (Michael Edwards) The \"She\" in #4 is the girl for me. Lots of fun in your Monostichs,...
    September 18th, 2017 18:45
  • LIMERICK 43 (Michael Edwards) I think I worked for that guy. He always left early. I was about to say...
    September 17th, 2017 09:46
  • HIS PICTURE GONE (Michael Edwards) A picture gone, someone is missed. a faded wall enhances the contrast....
    September 16th, 2017 11:52
  • Suicide Note (Liberty_Shadows) L.S. - Listen to Seek. Consider today the first day of YOUR life. Build it...
    September 15th, 2017 17:39
  • WELL FED AM I (Michael Edwards) The poem first - What a tortuous exercise this must have been, but you got...
    September 15th, 2017 15:10
  • THE ABSTRACT ARTIST (Michael Edwards) Fresh ideas come in new forms, when all the older forms have been used up....
    September 14th, 2017 19:13
  • THE RECURRING DREAM (Louis Gibbs) And thusly, you may have found the cure for your recurring dream....
    September 13th, 2017 14:53
  • A COUPLE OF EDONES (Michael Edwards) Wonderful stuff. Great ideas expressed in a rigid format. Very difficult....
    September 13th, 2017 14:27
  • Once Upon My Midnight\'s Madness (Swingline) Somehow reminded me of 9-11. What with all the jumping and fire. Horrible...
    May 6th, 2017 20:45
  • DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards) All manners have left the table, or so it seems. The best of the best...
    May 6th, 2017 20:41
  • Nightmares (Bibbeck) This is very well done, especially for such an early age. You most...
    May 6th, 2017 20:32
  • I knew it wasnt true (Mizzy) Freedom? Yes? Sounds like the end of a relationship. Hope all is working...
    May 6th, 2017 20:24
  • Wee Willy (Swingline) I\'m sure there\'s a joke here about frog\'s legs and long tongues, but...
    May 4th, 2017 17:26
  • For Thine Eyes Only. (Fay Slimm.) Who\'s this Thine guy? Lucky fellow. A beautiful message sent back in time...
    May 4th, 2017 17:18
  • Friggen Hornets (WriteBeLight) Hornets and wasps, yuck! I hate them.It seems I spend a great deal of time...
    May 4th, 2017 08:25
  • THE CHAPEL (Michael Edwards) My understanding of how villages got built, was that the church was the...
    May 4th, 2017 08:02
  • THE GATHERING (Michael Edwards) I do not think that this is one day in the life of a woman, but rather her...
    May 4th, 2017 07:54
  • Perhaps. (Fay Slimm.) Here where I live there is, on much older homes, an architectural...
    May 2nd, 2017 15:50
  • Bird Bath (WriteBeLight) I like how they line up (or should I say tree up) for their turn in the...
    May 2nd, 2017 15:28
  • LIMERICKS 23, 23, and 24> (Michael Edwards) Three humorous sketches and one of Veere. Well done, Michael. I like #3,...
    May 2nd, 2017 15:18
  • Start With A Cup (WriteBeLight) Cofffff....eeeeee! Used to be, my jump start in the morning, too, but, now...
    May 1st, 2017 20:24
  • A SIMPLE MAN (Michael Edwards) A brilliant painting, in both examples, poem and drawing. Very picturesque...
    April 30th, 2017 17:26
  • Awakening. (Goldfinch60) Facing another day on the planet is always a lucky day. Being able to...
    April 29th, 2017 20:49
  • Boldness. (Fay Slimm.) Beautifully spoken moment with Nature. All creatures become fascinating...
    April 28th, 2017 22:07
  • DESPAIR (Michael Edwards) Whatever she said, it was powerful, or maybe it was just, \"No.\" Another...
    April 28th, 2017 21:57
  • Questions (Lizzy Renee) There are more questions than there are answers. The important thing is to...
    April 28th, 2017 18:02
  • NOSTALGIA (Michael Edwards) Ah, yes, the memories of our youth. Can they ever be seen again? or have...
    April 27th, 2017 20:40
  • Rain Power (WriteBeLight) And they cancelled the ballgame!! I too hate potholes, and driving in the...
    April 25th, 2017 21:52
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