Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- English Weather (Aa Harvey)
And don\'t forget the wind. I find that here in New England, there is...
July 29th, 2020 21:28 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
Odes indeed. Raindrops upon window panes, become a song of praise. Poets...
July 29th, 2020 21:23 - Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor)
To lose your father at such a young age is tragedy for sure, but your...
July 29th, 2020 21:17 - Struck Down. (Goldfinch60)
It just goes to prove that Golf should never be taken seriously.What with...
July 29th, 2020 19:32 - HALF EMPTY (Michael Edwards)
Bottoms up! Make mine a Guiness. Beautiful drawing. Love the comedy of...
July 29th, 2020 19:17 - In Error. (Fay Slimm.)
This world would be a beautiful place if it weren\'t for people.
Think of...
July 28th, 2020 09:20 - LOVE IS MANIFEST (Michael Edwards)
A clearly defined image of peace and harmony, of love that lasts through...
July 28th, 2020 09:03 - Two Weeks in July (Neville)
Reminded me of the song, \"We\'ll sing in the Sunshine...........Then...
July 27th, 2020 11:10 - If Only. (Fay Slimm.)
And thus you did. The music of Nature is compelling and poets thrive on...
July 27th, 2020 10:59 - Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60)
Oh so true, GF60. Many things to remember and many to try and...
July 27th, 2020 10:47 - Time (Justagirl)
Write it all down girl. Your thoughts, your dreams, whatever you think...
July 22nd, 2020 22:38 - NUTS (Michael Edwards)
Liked your \"nutty\" bit of humor. Nut allergies are serious business....
July 22nd, 2020 12:06 - Non-Sound. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, what a very poignant write. The trials and tribulation of love and...
July 22nd, 2020 11:59 - Refilled. (Goldfinch60)
Life is not like a glass in any way, but I agree that a life can be...
July 22nd, 2020 11:51 - walk away (Dusk arising)
They say
Home is where the heart is,\" but it\'s not always true. Home...
July 22nd, 2020 11:45 - Captured. (Fay Slimm.)
This is a fine take on one of Nature\'s great forces. We try to harness...
July 21st, 2020 13:07 - An English Pub (Emptypot)
Is this the one in Poynings?
I think your poem describes it well, but so...
July 16th, 2020 21:57 - Mullins Yard (Neville)
I read this as aging out or becoming obsolete. Or maybe you just like...
July 15th, 2020 15:23 - AGEING COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards)
Well, these two lines are a pair to behold
and very alluring since you...
July 15th, 2020 15:07 - A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards)
Maybe you spelled \"Steel\" wrong? With this guy it ought to be...
July 14th, 2020 13:41 - Ego\'s Down (Neville)
In my first introduction to Marmite I spread it on the bread like peanut...
July 13th, 2020 13:48 - See Success. (Fay Slimm.)
One line truly stunned me - \"stand on the edge of seen and unseen.\"
A...
July 13th, 2020 13:30 - A Secret. (Fay Slimm.)
The mind receives the message, but the heart interprets it, All those...
July 12th, 2020 11:28 - AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5) (Michael Edwards)
I see blue skies with some sun peeking through over a mountain range and a...
July 12th, 2020 11:15 - Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.)
Clandestine love affairs leave their mark to be carried through the years....
July 10th, 2020 14:51 - AGEING COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
The painting and poem do not belong together. It\'s funny (the poem) and...
July 10th, 2020 14:46 - she (Dusk arising)
Homeward bound to where the enchantress eclipses the enchantment. The...
July 10th, 2020 14:39 - Why I Do It (ForeverJesus7)
In every instance ask yourself, \"What would Jesus do?\" - Phil A.
July 8th, 2020 22:42 - Treasured. (Fay Slimm.)
I know it is just \"me,\' but your phrasing of the first two stanzas had...
July 8th, 2020 13:50 - Untenable. (Fay Slimm.)
Love and obsession -They say the greatest sex organ is the brain, so it\'s...
July 7th, 2020 15:13 - AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Both very clever. Clever art, clever humor. If only they had grown onions...
July 7th, 2020 15:02 - Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.)
A very unique form of expression. A walk in the woods is becomes...
July 6th, 2020 17:16 - White Violets (Neville)
**** \'Four stars\" for this one, \"pearlescent\" or otherwise....
July 6th, 2020 17:00 - Wonder. (Fay Slimm.)
I was just wondering how the beauty of this small gem can speak so loudly...
June 19th, 2020 21:58 - Another 575 (Michael Edwards)
Too many times was I bitten and felt that jolt, which explains a...
June 19th, 2020 21:49 - Exciting. (Fay Slimm.)
So beautiful Fay. Your words are more powerful than the photo. Reading it...
June 18th, 2020 13:30 - DESERTED NOW (Michael Edwards)
Let me add some more praise upon this poem and artwork. \"Fire-light...
June 17th, 2020 18:25 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
This is brilliant Fay. I\'ve never looked at bubbles in this way. Surely...
June 15th, 2020 21:23 - Glorious Din. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful poem Fay. I love poems of nature. This one rings true, as we...
June 12th, 2020 18:24 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
Of course there is silent-speak. Its a raising of an eyebrow, a roll of...
June 11th, 2020 15:48 - How do I....... (Suresh)
Many questions that we all think about during the course of a...
June 10th, 2020 16:16 - Welcome to my head at times (Paris)
The best of times, the worst of times. The paradox of humanity. Each life...
June 10th, 2020 12:18 - Destined. (Fay Slimm.)
Revealing a sad loss, yet ever so sweetly. Your poem cries for the oft...
June 10th, 2020 10:54 - Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.)
Dreams - are they just imagination functioning while we are sleeping,...
June 9th, 2020 22:34 - in a place he wants to be (Dusk arising)
A great message for Vets of any era. Will their spirit live on in future...
June 9th, 2020 22:24 - Unbecoming (SheWasTheSun)
Before we can love anyone or anything we must first love ourselves.Once we...
June 9th, 2020 22:18 - Climax (Neville)
This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or...
June 9th, 2020 22:10 - Upon the Morrow (Neville)
Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is...
June 6th, 2020 17:21 - The Sorriest of Words (Neville)
\"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and...
June 4th, 2020 18:58 - Skien (Neville)
Well, technically it\'s still Spring, or maybe for some unknown reason...
May 31st, 2020 18:01 - I am He (Kevin Michael Bloor)
One and only true love, A rare and precious thing. Bound to last forever....
April 29th, 2020 18:55 - Closeness. (Fay Slimm.)
O.M.G. Love, Music, and the Afterlife. Interwoven into this short question...
April 29th, 2020 18:49 - Wishing for More. (Goldfinch60)
Somewhere in your poem is the sense of hope. It seems we are born with it...
April 29th, 2020 18:38 - COMICAL COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Penguins actually do surf. Poor Willy has to get his waves right. Maybe he...
April 29th, 2020 18:32 - escape (JustABird)
\"she rocks back and forth,\" I see an older woman, perhaps beset with...
April 28th, 2020 17:42 - After the Clapping (Sylviasearcher)
I think they deserve a round of applause; putting their lives on the line...
April 28th, 2020 16:30 - Battle. (Fay Slimm.)
The daily \"battle\" of Night vs. Day and the glamorous skies that result....
April 28th, 2020 16:15 - Pot of Gold. (Goldfinch60)
A very deep thought; Life\'s reflection as the final reward. You have...
April 28th, 2020 16:09 - COMICAL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Time for a shot of November third. I think your penguins have more common...
April 28th, 2020 16:02 - No Pot of Gold (Neville)
He who seeks gold at the end of a rainbow treks a very long journey.
When...
April 27th, 2020 19:46 - NEVER HAVE I (Michael Edwards)
A good bit of fun, this. What with helmets, parrots, and eggs on one\'s...
April 11th, 2020 13:19 - Ache (SerenWise)
I like this poem. The metaphors and similes are creative and relate to one...
April 6th, 2020 22:24 - Cliff (Hedy)
It is a dangerous edge upon which an artist such as yourself must walk. A...
April 6th, 2020 22:13 - Take Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Stay strong, Fay. \"And this too will pass.\" Sleep can sometimes carry...
April 6th, 2020 22:01 - Hello! (Goldfinch60)
Hello! Hello! Hello!
My god why would you name you dog that? She must get...
April 6th, 2020 21:53 - STIFF ZIP (Michael Edwards)
This magical anointment is readily available at your local alipterium or...
April 6th, 2020 21:47 - Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville)
A story well spoken. The book of love is like a novel written in pain and...
April 6th, 2020 19:45 - oh, my darling (Queer-with-a-pen)
This poem may be short, but it says a lot. It exudes the melancholy/sorrow...
April 4th, 2020 16:22 - THIS SENTENCE - A SELECTION OF MONOSUCHS (Michael Edwards)
I began at the end and came to the conclusion that the end begins where...
April 4th, 2020 15:55 - Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.)
This moment of onsetting worry, as she traveled homeward in dread of the...
April 2nd, 2020 15:26 - Came the Day. (Goldfinch60)
I think you\'ve given her the gift she was seeking, a way to memorialize...
April 1st, 2020 19:07 - waiting (Dusk arising)
This is either a love poem or a poem of hope, or, maybe both. It depends...
April 1st, 2020 18:56 - I FOUND A QUIZ (Michael Edwards)
Does that mean you are \"Joan of Art\"?
The greatest quiz is what to do...
March 31st, 2020 21:32 - Insidious (Neville)
Life is a series of changes. All things are in motion, uncontrollably....
March 30th, 2020 19:35 - Sistership. (Fay Slimm.)
A terrific and sensitive piece. MM would surely have treasured it. Sibling...
March 30th, 2020 19:17 - Ripples (Arturo Fernandez Ferre)
There\'s a sadness to this poem, as sad as \"broken porcelain.\" I related...
March 30th, 2020 18:59 - PLENTY FOR ALL (Michael Edwards)
A bit dark, coming from you.
Your trees remind me of people waiting for a...
March 12th, 2020 16:12 - Change. (Fay Slimm.)
We should all \"greet life\" with your optimism. Springtime brings that...
March 11th, 2020 18:35 - WINTER NIGHTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Beware that \"winters rust.\" Don\'t let it affect your art. Perhaps the...
March 11th, 2020 18:24 - Hesitation (Neville)
I\'m game for that freworking of old ones specially my hip
As for diving...
March 8th, 2020 20:45 - Forsaken (Neville)
Whether \"Forsaken \" in love or in life, she has reached the breaking...
March 7th, 2020 21:04 - These Nights (SheWasTheSun)
Such nights as these come all too often it seems. Unhappy...
March 6th, 2020 23:16 - Scarlet’s Letter (Railasunshine)
I like the rhythm and rhyme of this, but am confused by stanza 3.
This...
March 2nd, 2020 23:43 - Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville)
It appears to me that \"Cumbersome\" is both heavy\" and \"long\" and...
March 2nd, 2020 23:33 - Rebel Pen (SheWasTheSun)
This short poem sums up the anguish of parting, and the reflection on...
March 1st, 2020 23:32 - You Stopped By (SheWasTheSun)
When we\'re missing someone, a dream can ease the pain. Never completely,...
March 1st, 2020 23:22 - He Has Me (SheWasTheSun)
This is beautiful poetry. A personal subject, expressed eloquently. the...
March 1st, 2020 16:50 - Disequilibrium (Neville)
There\'s truth in what you write (if there is such a thing as truth). Your...
February 26th, 2020 12:03 - The better Gems (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
There\'s a lot of beauty in this poem: Comparisons that are heart-felt,...
February 26th, 2020 11:18 - Into Life. (Goldfinch60)
Together forever. There cannot be a more powerful love.
A lovely poem...
February 19th, 2020 15:37 - HAIKU SPRING (2) (Michael Edwards)
Shadows shortening
Spring succumbing to Summer
Supplanting...
February 19th, 2020 15:30 - Besting. (Fay Slimm.)
The chorus of Cicadas chirping close to Sunset on a Summer\'s night..
A...
February 19th, 2020 15:08 - Scaled (Fay Slimm.)
Simply irresistible!
Love shatters all defenses. It can be an immediate...
February 18th, 2020 10:22 - HAIKU SPRING (1) (Michael Edwards)
Nothing like tulips in the Springtime to make your mouth water.
A great...
February 18th, 2020 10:10 - Over ? (Fay Slimm.)
Some who were lovers can split and be friends.
Others who were lovers...
February 17th, 2020 17:41 - POETRY (Michael Edwards)
Such is \"Poetry\" , a thought simply defined. 19 words of elegance, with...
February 17th, 2020 17:25 - Locked Out (Neville)
When any key breaks in any lock it\'s because they are not a match. In a...
February 15th, 2020 23:18 - Discarded (Neville)
Gee, this being V-day, I thought you were talking about \"Discarded\"...
February 14th, 2020 17:01 - Winged Hearts. (Fay Slimm.)
If only an open heart were \"unassailable\" never to be broken. Somehow I...
February 14th, 2020 16:44 - There Are Good People. (Goldfinch60)
Very thoughtful of you to immortalize the good deeds of that young man....
February 13th, 2020 14:29
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