Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- Closeness. (Fay Slimm.)
O.M.G. Love, Music, and the Afterlife. Interwoven into this short question...
April 29th, 2020 18:49 - Wishing for More. (Goldfinch60)
Somewhere in your poem is the sense of hope. It seems we are born with it...
April 29th, 2020 18:38 - COMICAL COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Penguins actually do surf. Poor Willy has to get his waves right. Maybe he...
April 29th, 2020 18:32 - escape (JustABird)
\"she rocks back and forth,\" I see an older woman, perhaps beset with...
April 28th, 2020 17:42 - After the Clapping (Sylviasearcher)
I think they deserve a round of applause; putting their lives on the line...
April 28th, 2020 16:30 - Battle. (Fay Slimm.)
The daily \"battle\" of Night vs. Day and the glamorous skies that result....
April 28th, 2020 16:15 - Pot of Gold. (Goldfinch60)
A very deep thought; Life\'s reflection as the final reward. You have...
April 28th, 2020 16:09 - COMICAL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Time for a shot of November third. I think your penguins have more common...
April 28th, 2020 16:02 - No Pot of Gold (Neville)
He who seeks gold at the end of a rainbow treks a very long journey.
When...
April 27th, 2020 19:46 - NEVER HAVE I (Michael Edwards)
A good bit of fun, this. What with helmets, parrots, and eggs on one\'s...
April 11th, 2020 13:19 - Ache (SerenWise)
I like this poem. The metaphors and similes are creative and relate to one...
April 6th, 2020 22:24 - Cliff (Hedy)
It is a dangerous edge upon which an artist such as yourself must walk. A...
April 6th, 2020 22:13 - Take Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Stay strong, Fay. \"And this too will pass.\" Sleep can sometimes carry...
April 6th, 2020 22:01 - Hello! (Goldfinch60)
Hello! Hello! Hello!
My god why would you name you dog that? She must get...
April 6th, 2020 21:53 - STIFF ZIP (Michael Edwards)
This magical anointment is readily available at your local alipterium or...
April 6th, 2020 21:47 - Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville)
A story well spoken. The book of love is like a novel written in pain and...
April 6th, 2020 19:45 - oh, my darling (Queer-with-a-pen)
This poem may be short, but it says a lot. It exudes the melancholy/sorrow...
April 4th, 2020 16:22 - THIS SENTENCE - A SELECTION OF MONOSUCHS (Michael Edwards)
I began at the end and came to the conclusion that the end begins where...
April 4th, 2020 15:55 - Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.)
This moment of onsetting worry, as she traveled homeward in dread of the...
April 2nd, 2020 15:26 - Came the Day. (Goldfinch60)
I think you\'ve given her the gift she was seeking, a way to memorialize...
April 1st, 2020 19:07 - waiting (Dusk arising)
This is either a love poem or a poem of hope, or, maybe both. It depends...
April 1st, 2020 18:56 - I FOUND A QUIZ (Michael Edwards)
Does that mean you are \"Joan of Art\"?
The greatest quiz is what to do...
March 31st, 2020 21:32 - Insidious (Neville)
Life is a series of changes. All things are in motion, uncontrollably....
March 30th, 2020 19:35 - Sistership. (Fay Slimm.)
A terrific and sensitive piece. MM would surely have treasured it. Sibling...
March 30th, 2020 19:17 - Ripples (Arturo Fernandez Ferre)
There\'s a sadness to this poem, as sad as \"broken porcelain.\" I related...
March 30th, 2020 18:59 - PLENTY FOR ALL (Michael Edwards)
A bit dark, coming from you.
Your trees remind me of people waiting for a...
March 12th, 2020 16:12 - Change. (Fay Slimm.)
We should all \"greet life\" with your optimism. Springtime brings that...
March 11th, 2020 18:35 - WINTER NIGHTS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Beware that \"winters rust.\" Don\'t let it affect your art. Perhaps the...
March 11th, 2020 18:24 - Hesitation (Neville)
I\'m game for that freworking of old ones specially my hip
As for diving...
March 8th, 2020 20:45 - Forsaken (Neville)
Whether \"Forsaken \" in love or in life, she has reached the breaking...
March 7th, 2020 21:04 - These Nights (SheWasTheSun)
Such nights as these come all too often it seems. Unhappy...
March 6th, 2020 23:16 - Scarlet’s Letter (Railasunshine)
I like the rhythm and rhyme of this, but am confused by stanza 3.
This...
March 2nd, 2020 23:43 - Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville)
It appears to me that \"Cumbersome\" is both heavy\" and \"long\" and...
March 2nd, 2020 23:33 - Rebel Pen (SheWasTheSun)
This short poem sums up the anguish of parting, and the reflection on...
March 1st, 2020 23:32 - You Stopped By (SheWasTheSun)
When we\'re missing someone, a dream can ease the pain. Never completely,...
March 1st, 2020 23:22 - He Has Me (SheWasTheSun)
This is beautiful poetry. A personal subject, expressed eloquently. the...
March 1st, 2020 16:50 - Disequilibrium (Neville)
There\'s truth in what you write (if there is such a thing as truth). Your...
February 26th, 2020 12:03 - The better Gems (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
There\'s a lot of beauty in this poem: Comparisons that are heart-felt,...
February 26th, 2020 11:18 - Into Life. (Goldfinch60)
Together forever. There cannot be a more powerful love.
A lovely poem...
February 19th, 2020 15:37 - HAIKU SPRING (2) (Michael Edwards)
Shadows shortening
Spring succumbing to Summer
Supplanting...
February 19th, 2020 15:30 - Besting. (Fay Slimm.)
The chorus of Cicadas chirping close to Sunset on a Summer\'s night..
A...
February 19th, 2020 15:08 - Scaled (Fay Slimm.)
Simply irresistible!
Love shatters all defenses. It can be an immediate...
February 18th, 2020 10:22 - HAIKU SPRING (1) (Michael Edwards)
Nothing like tulips in the Springtime to make your mouth water.
A great...
February 18th, 2020 10:10 - Over ? (Fay Slimm.)
Some who were lovers can split and be friends.
Others who were lovers...
February 17th, 2020 17:41 - POETRY (Michael Edwards)
Such is \"Poetry\" , a thought simply defined. 19 words of elegance, with...
February 17th, 2020 17:25 - Locked Out (Neville)
When any key breaks in any lock it\'s because they are not a match. In a...
February 15th, 2020 23:18 - Discarded (Neville)
Gee, this being V-day, I thought you were talking about \"Discarded\"...
February 14th, 2020 17:01 - Winged Hearts. (Fay Slimm.)
If only an open heart were \"unassailable\" never to be broken. Somehow I...
February 14th, 2020 16:44 - There Are Good People. (Goldfinch60)
Very thoughtful of you to immortalize the good deeds of that young man....
February 13th, 2020 14:29 - Valentine Moon. (Fay Slimm.)
Nothing says Valentine\'s romance like a gorgeous moonlight. Hearts...
February 13th, 2020 14:19 - Until Spring (Neville)
I think that leaves are the reason they call it \"Fall\".and maybe why we...
February 12th, 2020 23:32 - The only love she held onto (Dusk arising)
Loved the seasonal comparisons and the descriptive phrases to describe...
February 12th, 2020 23:18 - Droplets (PoeticBiscuit)
I have to agree with Neville. This is short, concise, and powerful. A...
November 5th, 2019 19:23 - Little Girl (FredPeyer)
Liked this one. Reminded me of my grandaughter, who likes to write. Kids...
October 8th, 2019 18:07 - Pages in Passion (Hidden.shine)
So much talent for 17, make sure you pursue it.
This poem,\'s metaphor...
July 29th, 2019 16:05 - the aftermath (Hidden.shine)
So much said in 15 words. Obviously. someone does not appreciate your...
July 29th, 2019 15:54 - Anxious Reflection (a sonnet) (Hidden.shine)
I find this brilliant. Your words and use of language make this poem flow...
July 29th, 2019 15:50 - People Feeling. (Goldfinch60)
Smiles are remembered, frowns forgotten, so \"smile brother smile.\"
Nice...
July 29th, 2019 15:38 - THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards)
As we all know, :art\" and artist\" encompass more than paint and brush,...
July 29th, 2019 15:31 - Cold Under The Coat (Neville)
Here it comes! No, seriously. I thoroughly enjoyed this. We\'ve all been...
July 29th, 2019 15:20 - Summer Sky (MrNobody40)
Greatly expressing the fires of youth. Keeping them burning is the...
July 25th, 2019 14:49 - A Silent Refrain (Neville)
Timing is so critical to a relationship. Too soon or too late can bring...
July 25th, 2019 14:44 - Love\'s Call. (Fay Slimm.)
Soldiers die from the separation and the hell. Two wounds at once, the...
July 25th, 2019 14:27 - When You Were Perfect (Neville)
Perfection found, and then lost. Memories remain. Wishes expressed to be...
July 24th, 2019 18:25 - A Thimbleful of Seeds (Neville)
Could not agree more, since I believe Love and Life are everything. Here,...
July 24th, 2019 17:33 - Crimson Swathe (Neville)
Hope the girl or Hope the longing? Matters naught. A field of poppies...
July 23rd, 2019 16:42 - My Spirit. (Goldfinch60)
When I think of God I think of Love. They may be one and the same, and if...
June 23rd, 2019 18:18 - TIME ALONE (Michael Edwards)
As to your poem, excellent portrayal of \" Time Alone\"\", but Time raises...
June 23rd, 2019 18:12 - Butterworth Crows (Neville)
Wow! - To have seen this must have been a horror. What a great...
June 11th, 2019 10:26 - SMALLNESS. (Fay Slimm.)
It is that \"Smallness\" that allows the rest of us to exist. Bees are...
June 11th, 2019 10:13 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (11) (Michael Edwards)
Makes one wonder what\'s going on behind the closed doors of your pictured...
June 11th, 2019 09:27 - kālacakra ferris wheel (Jon Nakapalau)
Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a...
June 11th, 2019 09:17 - GORMLESS. (Fay Slimm.)
I\'m at a loss for words. Most of what you said I had search for, but...
June 10th, 2019 14:33 - Coffee (Down the rabbithole)
They say coffee is a stimulant and alcohol a depressant , so what happens...
June 10th, 2019 14:19 - Catching Flies (Neville)
A very poignant poem, describing some horrific scenes which, I assume,...
June 10th, 2019 14:06 - Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60)
In America, sedans are becoming obsolete. It\'s all SUV\'s and trucks....
June 10th, 2019 13:54 - From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards)
I think the art depicts the trap within the words.
Now in Vegas, this...
June 10th, 2019 13:48 - CHOICES. (Fay Slimm.)
Love is always the correct choice. There is no life without it. Every day...
June 7th, 2019 18:56 - BLOCKS. (Fay Slimm.)
I think it works out that if you do manage to sleep, then you are no...
June 6th, 2019 16:55 - Lost Dreams (Jo March)
Parting with a love can be a trying and
mournful experience. It tears a...
May 26th, 2019 19:05 - A Cautious Distance (Neville)
They say that normal personal space is four feet. I want to know where?...
May 26th, 2019 14:15 - World in the Sky. (Goldfinch60)
Ah yes, cloud formations on a beautiful clear day! those billowy cumulus...
May 26th, 2019 13:56 - A Night at the Opera. (Goldfinch60)
Wasn\'t that a Marx Brother\'s movie? See what happens because I didn\'t...
May 20th, 2019 18:33 - SHE WAITS (Michael Edwards)
Love the language of your poem. It flows smoothly. A dark scenario of...
May 20th, 2019 18:22 - The Zoo (StephD)
Even in the darkest of dark moments there is a light, not external, but...
May 19th, 2019 16:48 - IN LIFE SPARE US (Michael Edwards)
How does the old joke go? \"Once we had a full-length mirror, but now we ...
May 19th, 2019 16:27 - STONES KNOW. (Fay Slimm.)
Must have been a harrowing if not death-defying occupation. I cannot...
May 19th, 2019 16:14 - Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60)
If you drink enough wine everything tastes good. it\'s a recipe for...
May 19th, 2019 15:53 - Mid Winter (Philip)
Well, thanks for the weather reminder. And here, we were just seeing the...
May 19th, 2019 15:35 - UNANSWERABLE. (Fay Slimm.)
What is love, but obsession? There is no masquerading in love. Everything...
May 16th, 2019 11:38 - Flowers Musing on Rain (Lorna)
Its a mild Winter we are having this Spring. If any hope remains, or if...
May 15th, 2019 14:12 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (5) (Michael Edwards)
Had to stop once I saw your artwork. Wow. Great coloration. Asense of...
May 15th, 2019 13:38 - OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Abstract it is. You\'ve given us. \"wallpaper fading\" (an old home),...
May 10th, 2019 21:39 - SPIN-BACK (Fay Slimm.)
Taking speed from the car puts life into its inhabitants. When will people...
May 6th, 2019 15:10 - IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards)
Art - So, that\'s what it looks like beyond the weir?
Poetry - I followed...
May 6th, 2019 14:54 - Weighty worries? 😋 (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽)
The war rages on, with beauty as the lure, and social acceptance as the...
May 4th, 2019 13:31 - I Am What I Am (Neville)
\"I am Me,\" and you are you, no two the same. Billions of people in the...
May 4th, 2019 13:21 - Letter to ones own (Jay123)
You\'re right, it\'s cyclical. I believe we\'ve all felt as your poem...
May 4th, 2019 13:06 - FROM COMMENTS (3) (Michael Edwards)
Refresh the memories, with something new. Yuck! Replace the old music...
May 4th, 2019 12:16 - THE WELL OF TIME (Michael Edwards)
Art - Looks to my eye like music flowing from an old 78.
Poetry - The old...
May 3rd, 2019 15:38
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