Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• Came the Day. (Goldfinch60) I think you\'ve given her the gift she was seeking, a way to memorialize...
  April 1st, 2020 19:07
• waiting (Dusk arising) This is either a love poem or a poem of hope, or, maybe both. It depends...
  April 1st, 2020 18:56
• I FOUND A QUIZ (Michael Edwards) Does that mean you are \"Joan of Art\"? The greatest quiz is what to do...
  March 31st, 2020 21:32
• Insidious (Neville) Life is a series of changes. All things are in motion, uncontrollably....
  March 30th, 2020 19:35
• Sistership. (Fay Slimm.) A terrific and sensitive piece. MM would surely have treasured it. Sibling...
  March 30th, 2020 19:17
• Ripples (Arturo Fernandez Ferre) There\'s a sadness to this poem, as sad as \"broken porcelain.\" I related...
  March 30th, 2020 18:59
• PLENTY FOR ALL (Michael Edwards) A bit dark, coming from you. Your trees remind me of people waiting for a...
  March 12th, 2020 16:12
• Change. (Fay Slimm.) We should all \"greet life\" with your optimism. Springtime brings that...
  March 11th, 2020 18:35
• WINTER NIGHTS (2) (Michael Edwards) Beware that \"winters rust.\" Don\'t let it affect your art. Perhaps the...
  March 11th, 2020 18:24
• Hesitation (Neville) I\'m game for that freworking of old ones specially my hip As for diving...
  March 8th, 2020 20:45
• Forsaken (Neville) Whether \"Forsaken \" in love or in life, she has reached the breaking...
  March 7th, 2020 21:04
• These Nights (SheWasTheSun) Such nights as these come all too often it seems. Unhappy...
  March 6th, 2020 23:16
• Scarlet’s Letter (Railasunshine) I like the rhythm and rhyme of this, but am confused by stanza 3. This...
  March 2nd, 2020 23:43
• Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville) It appears to me that \"Cumbersome\" is both heavy\" and \"long\" and...
  March 2nd, 2020 23:33
• Rebel Pen (SheWasTheSun) This short poem sums up the anguish of parting, and the reflection on...
  March 1st, 2020 23:32
• You Stopped By (SheWasTheSun) When we\'re missing someone, a dream can ease the pain. Never completely,...
  March 1st, 2020 23:22
• He Has Me (SheWasTheSun) This is beautiful poetry. A personal subject, expressed eloquently. the...
  March 1st, 2020 16:50
• Disequilibrium (Neville) There\'s truth in what you write (if there is such a thing as truth). Your...
  February 26th, 2020 12:03
• The better Gems (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) There\'s a lot of beauty in this poem: Comparisons that are heart-felt,...
  February 26th, 2020 11:18
• Into Life. (Goldfinch60) Together forever. There cannot be a more powerful love. A lovely poem...
  February 19th, 2020 15:37
• HAIKU SPRING (2) (Michael Edwards) Shadows shortening Spring succumbing to Summer Supplanting...
  February 19th, 2020 15:30
• Besting. (Fay Slimm.) The chorus of Cicadas chirping close to Sunset on a Summer\'s night.. A...
  February 19th, 2020 15:08
• Scaled (Fay Slimm.) Simply irresistible! Love shatters all defenses. It can be an immediate...
  February 18th, 2020 10:22
• HAIKU SPRING (1) (Michael Edwards) Nothing like tulips in the Springtime to make your mouth water. A great...
  February 18th, 2020 10:10
• Over ? (Fay Slimm.) Some who were lovers can split and be friends. Others who were lovers...
  February 17th, 2020 17:41
• POETRY (Michael Edwards) Such is \"Poetry\" , a thought simply defined. 19 words of elegance, with...
  February 17th, 2020 17:25
• Locked Out (Neville) When any key breaks in any lock it\'s because they are not a match. In a...
  February 15th, 2020 23:18
• Discarded (Neville) Gee, this being V-day, I thought you were talking about \"Discarded\"...
  February 14th, 2020 17:01
• Winged Hearts. (Fay Slimm.) If only an open heart were \"unassailable\" never to be broken. Somehow I...
  February 14th, 2020 16:44
• There Are Good People. (Goldfinch60) Very thoughtful of you to immortalize the good deeds of that young man....
  February 13th, 2020 14:29
• Valentine Moon. (Fay Slimm.) Nothing says Valentine\'s romance like a gorgeous moonlight. Hearts...
  February 13th, 2020 14:19
• Until Spring (Neville) I think that leaves are the reason they call it \"Fall\".and maybe why we...
  February 12th, 2020 23:32
• The only love she held onto (Dusk arising) Loved the seasonal comparisons and the descriptive phrases to describe...
  February 12th, 2020 23:18
• Droplets (PoeticBiscuit) I have to agree with Neville. This is short, concise, and powerful. A...
  November 5th, 2019 19:23
• Little Girl (FredPeyer) Liked this one. Reminded me of my grandaughter, who likes to write. Kids...
  October 8th, 2019 18:07
• Pages in Passion (Hidden.shine) So much talent for 17, make sure you pursue it. This poem,\'s metaphor...
  July 29th, 2019 16:05
• the aftermath (Hidden.shine) So much said in 15 words. Obviously. someone does not appreciate your...
  July 29th, 2019 15:54
• Anxious Reflection (a sonnet) (Hidden.shine) I find this brilliant. Your words and use of language make this poem flow...
  July 29th, 2019 15:50
• People Feeling. (Goldfinch60) Smiles are remembered, frowns forgotten, so \"smile brother smile.\" Nice...
  July 29th, 2019 15:38
• THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards) As we all know, :art\" and artist\" encompass more than paint and brush,...
  July 29th, 2019 15:31
• Cold Under The Coat (Neville) Here it comes! No, seriously. I thoroughly enjoyed this. We\'ve all been...
  July 29th, 2019 15:20
• Summer Sky (MrNobody40) Greatly expressing the fires of youth. Keeping them burning is the...
  July 25th, 2019 14:49
• A Silent Refrain (Neville) Timing is so critical to a relationship. Too soon or too late can bring...
  July 25th, 2019 14:44
• Love\'s Call. (Fay Slimm.) Soldiers die from the separation and the hell. Two wounds at once, the...
  July 25th, 2019 14:27
• When You Were Perfect (Neville) Perfection found, and then lost. Memories remain. Wishes expressed to be...
  July 24th, 2019 18:25
• A Thimbleful of Seeds (Neville) Could not agree more, since I believe Love and Life are everything. Here,...
  July 24th, 2019 17:33
• Crimson Swathe (Neville) Hope the girl or Hope the longing? Matters naught. A field of poppies...
  July 23rd, 2019 16:42
• My Spirit. (Goldfinch60) When I think of God I think of Love. They may be one and the same, and if...
  June 23rd, 2019 18:18
• TIME ALONE (Michael Edwards) As to your poem, excellent portrayal of \" Time Alone\"\", but Time raises...
  June 23rd, 2019 18:12
• Butterworth Crows (Neville) Wow! - To have seen this must have been a horror. What a great...
  June 11th, 2019 10:26
• SMALLNESS. (Fay Slimm.) It is that \"Smallness\" that allows the rest of us to exist. Bees are...
  June 11th, 2019 10:13
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (11) (Michael Edwards) Makes one wonder what\'s going on behind the closed doors of your pictured...
  June 11th, 2019 09:27
• kālacakra ferris wheel (Jon Nakapalau) Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a...
  June 11th, 2019 09:17
• GORMLESS. (Fay Slimm.) I\'m at a loss for words. Most of what you said I had search for, but...
  June 10th, 2019 14:33
• Coffee (Down the rabbithole) They say coffee is a stimulant and alcohol a depressant , so what happens...
  June 10th, 2019 14:19
• Catching Flies (Neville) A very poignant poem, describing some horrific scenes which, I assume,...
  June 10th, 2019 14:06
• Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60) In America, sedans are becoming obsolete. It\'s all SUV\'s and trucks....
  June 10th, 2019 13:54
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards) I think the art depicts the trap within the words. Now in Vegas, this...
  June 10th, 2019 13:48
• CHOICES. (Fay Slimm.) Love is always the correct choice. There is no life without it. Every day...
  June 7th, 2019 18:56
• BLOCKS. (Fay Slimm.) I think it works out that if you do manage to sleep, then you are no...
  June 6th, 2019 16:55
• Lost Dreams (Jo March) Parting with a love can be a trying and mournful experience. It tears a...
  May 26th, 2019 19:05
• A Cautious Distance (Neville) They say that normal personal space is four feet. I want to know where?...
  May 26th, 2019 14:15
• World in the Sky. (Goldfinch60) Ah yes, cloud formations on a beautiful clear day! those billowy cumulus...
  May 26th, 2019 13:56
• A Night at the Opera. (Goldfinch60) Wasn\'t that a Marx Brother\'s movie? See what happens because I didn\'t...
  May 20th, 2019 18:33
• SHE WAITS (Michael Edwards) Love the language of your poem. It flows smoothly. A dark scenario of...
  May 20th, 2019 18:22
• The Zoo (StephD) Even in the darkest of dark moments there is a light, not external, but...
  May 19th, 2019 16:48
• IN LIFE SPARE US (Michael Edwards) How does the old joke go? \"Once we had a full-length mirror, but now we ...
  May 19th, 2019 16:27
• STONES KNOW. (Fay Slimm.) Must have been a harrowing if not death-defying occupation. I cannot...
  May 19th, 2019 16:14
• Wine for Water. (Goldfinch60) If you drink enough wine everything tastes good. it\'s a recipe for...
  May 19th, 2019 15:53
• Mid Winter (Philip) Well, thanks for the weather reminder. And here, we were just seeing the...
  May 19th, 2019 15:35
• UNANSWERABLE. (Fay Slimm.) What is love, but obsession? There is no masquerading in love. Everything...
  May 16th, 2019 11:38
• Flowers Musing on Rain (Lorna) Its a mild Winter we are having this Spring. If any hope remains, or if...
  May 15th, 2019 14:12
• OBSCURE SENRYUS (5) (Michael Edwards) Had to stop once I saw your artwork. Wow. Great coloration. Asense of...
  May 15th, 2019 13:38
• OBSCURE SENRYUS (2) (Michael Edwards) Abstract it is. You\'ve given us. \"wallpaper fading\" (an old home),...
  May 10th, 2019 21:39
• SPIN-BACK (Fay Slimm.) Taking speed from the car puts life into its inhabitants. When will people...
  May 6th, 2019 15:10
• IN TRANSCENDENCE (Michael Edwards) Art - So, that\'s what it looks like beyond the weir? Poetry - I followed...
  May 6th, 2019 14:54
• Weighty worries? 😋 (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) The war rages on, with beauty as the lure, and social acceptance as the...
  May 4th, 2019 13:31
• I Am What I Am (Neville) \"I am Me,\" and you are you, no two the same. Billions of people in the...
  May 4th, 2019 13:21
• Letter to ones own (Jay123) You\'re right, it\'s cyclical. I believe we\'ve all felt as your poem...
  May 4th, 2019 13:06
• FROM COMMENTS (3) (Michael Edwards) Refresh the memories, with something new. Yuck! Replace the old music...
  May 4th, 2019 12:16
• THE WELL OF TIME (Michael Edwards) Art - Looks to my eye like music flowing from an old 78. Poetry - The old...
  May 3rd, 2019 15:38
• WHAT WORTH. (Fay Slimm.) But what wisdom sprouteth from thy pen if we not read...
  May 2nd, 2019 10:03
• In The Beginning (Neville) Funny how the difference between \"here\" and \"gone\" can change our...
  May 2nd, 2019 08:14
• Strange Awakening. (Goldfinch60) Birdsong in the morning. What a great way to start your day. \"Cherish...
  May 2nd, 2019 08:06
• FROM COMMENTS (2) (Michael Edwards) The art is filled with so many possibilities;If I envision things moving...
  May 2nd, 2019 07:58
• UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.) Ah, there\'s nothing like coffee in the morning......or did I leave...
  May 1st, 2019 13:13
• FROM COMMENTS (1) (Michael Edwards) O.K. I\'ll play: \"Though it\'s said time to time that I do prefer...
  May 1st, 2019 11:23
• Colours Without Names (Neville) Just as there are sounds the human ear cannot hear, there are colors and...
  April 30th, 2019 14:13
• DAY MONTH YEAR (Michael Edwards) Only two dates matter, when you\'re born and when you\'re gone. All else...
  April 30th, 2019 13:56
• Crumbs of Comfort (Neville) Food for thought (no pun intended). We often forget the plight of...
  April 29th, 2019 11:30
• SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.) The ebb and flow of romantic inclinations eloquently expressed: warm and...
  April 29th, 2019 11:06
• Empty Sky (Neville) Sometimes putting words to paper is a lot like chopping wood, much more...
  April 28th, 2019 13:42
• FREEING . (Fay Slimm.) Better to be free than to possess. I loved this little thought provoker....
  April 28th, 2019 13:27
• LETTING GO. (Fay Slimm.) \"Letting go\" of love is painful beyond description. We are left with an...
  April 18th, 2019 18:52
• LIVING IN A DREAM (Michael Edwards) Love your dream-scape. Is that actually you standing there? With \"closed...
  April 18th, 2019 18:41
• MARY HAD .....A RAM (Michael Edwards) Artwork - Beautiful coloration. I see a multi-colored flying dragon....
  April 15th, 2019 13:52
• this lotus of light (Jon Nakapalau) So true. Love comes uneasily to some, but when it does It causes one to...
  April 14th, 2019 19:53
• MIXTURES. (Fay Slimm.) Perhaps \"dappling\" is Natures abstract art? Or, more philosophically,...
  April 14th, 2019 19:45
• NO MORE HER OWN PHILOSOPHER (Michael Edwards) Abstract - I see birds on a tree limb building a nest. Looking straight in...
  April 14th, 2019 19:33
• at closure (Frank Prem) Loved your imagery in this . \"wind twirls the sky,\" \"the waters are...
  April 12th, 2019 15:11