Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• inherent Truth (L. B. Mek) \"Repetition\" can be a useful poetic tool or it can ruin a poem. Here the...
  April 2nd, 2021 19:17
• Ripple Through (A Boy With Roses) As we age the days do indeed seem shorter. We shouldn\'t lose hope as it...
  April 2nd, 2021 19:11
• Our Poem (Fay Slimm.) Sometimes the sweetest words are, \"Goodbye my love,\" but they are also...
  March 14th, 2021 19:40
• Tomodachi ya Koibito (Neville) What better way to honor someone than in poetry. Be she friend/lover/both,...
  March 14th, 2021 19:26
• You can go there from here (Rrodriguez) I\'m sitting here in the Northern Cold, and suddenly along comes your poem...
  March 10th, 2021 17:15
• Melancholic Men (Kevin Michael Bloor) This is a wonderful poem. I\'ve been a melancholic man from time to time...
  March 10th, 2021 16:59
• HIDDEN DEEP (Michael Edwards) \"Truckled light\" submissive to one\'s control. If only we could...
  March 10th, 2021 16:49
• Out of Mind (Neville) That which we have lost hurts the most. A sustained love, never equals the...
  March 9th, 2021 20:51
• Jerry the fox terrier (Dusk arising) Cute dog. A poem about said dog, or more about the poet? Liked the dual...
  March 9th, 2021 20:39
• I Am With You (Orchidee) A house of the Lord built for the glory of God, repaired by his servants...
  March 9th, 2021 20:35
• Windmills Of Your Mind. (Goldfinch60) A pleasant flight it was. Your words gave a lofty air to it, and we were...
  March 9th, 2021 20:29
• Some Sounds Easily Missed (Neville) Some believe that our voice communications is what separates us from the...
  March 8th, 2021 23:36
• Sufferings Seen (Orchidee) Good poem. I liked the penultimate verse, especially.
  March 8th, 2021 23:26
• sluggish (Dusk arising) Made me laugh DA. What more can one ask? - Phil A.
  March 8th, 2021 23:08
• The Antipodean Adventures of Jack the Lad. (Doggerel Dave) Well it kept my interest for a long while and when it ended I said to...
  March 7th, 2021 22:16
• Peaceful Pursuals (Orchidee) The world would be a better place if people facing a decision would simply...
  March 7th, 2021 21:59
• Love like a Song (Neville) Most of music is love songs, except country. If you play a country song...
  March 7th, 2021 21:55
• Zoom Coffee. (Goldfinch60) If you cannot laugh at yourself, you are humorless. Zoom is today\'s...
  March 7th, 2021 21:48
• historys enemy (Dusk arising) Can a person ever, truly go home. We are a product not of our birth, but...
  March 7th, 2021 21:44
• Testing Times (Orchidee) Praise the Lord and pass the ammunition! I\'ll need it to defend myself...
  February 23rd, 2021 11:43
• Never Enough (Jerry Reynolds) Some people are never satisfied, or is it birds? Insatiable appetites, or...
  February 23rd, 2021 11:33
• Spooky Action at a Distance (Philip) Entangled particles are \"Spooky\" for sure and disobey Einstein\'s limit...
  January 25th, 2021 23:08
• Chill. (Fay Slimm.) Ah, your poem gave me a sense of joy at the certainty of Spring arriving....
  January 25th, 2021 23:00
• A TRUMPERICK (Michael Edwards) Humor with a biting edge. Truth spoken out loud. Spoon feeding of the...
  January 25th, 2021 22:41
• Wordiku Seven. (Goldfinch60) I\'m at a loss for words, So much contained in just three. Let not the...
  January 25th, 2021 22:34
• Manifesto or Look Beyond the Name. (Doggerel Dave) When you walk in the woods, you seek a path, a more direct way forward....
  December 11th, 2020 23:00
• Ascertaining Advent (Orchidee) As a lover of Christmas music (who isn\'t?) I appreciated your poem and...
  December 11th, 2020 22:37
• The Village Ghost. (Goldfinch60) \"The village ghost,\" gave me an invisible chuckle. Someone should have...
  December 11th, 2020 22:30
• It\'s over then? (Doggerel Dave) The dialogue seems realistic. Two people of different mindsets. Your poem...
  November 13th, 2020 22:39
• Unsung (Fay Slimm.) \"When will they ever learn?\" See, this reminded me of Pete Seeger\'s...
  November 13th, 2020 12:25
• Nevafar (Neville) Words \"lost on the wind,\" and yet \"come back to haunt,\" and inspire,...
  November 13th, 2020 12:08
• Inscription Plus... (Doggerel Dave) Sherman said, \"War is Hell,\" he was right. It is the culmination of all...
  November 13th, 2020 11:46
• Where Did This Come From? (Goldfinch60) Pat Conroy once said, \"Without music, life is a journey through a...
  November 13th, 2020 11:14
• Not the end of the world, just the edge! (Poetic Dan) \"It\'s not the end of the world.\" If it were would we be standing around...
  November 10th, 2020 15:38
• withered shrub (Dusk arising) God=Love=God=Love=God=Love. We are all born with one purpose in life, the...
  November 10th, 2020 15:19
• Our Tune. (Fay Slimm.) The taste and aroma of your fine wine delivers recollections of past love....
  November 10th, 2020 15:07
• Back There (Fay Slimm.) \" Lost hospitality, tucked in by motherland air, the essence of...
  November 9th, 2020 16:15
• Somewhere Between Trees (Neville) Trees, begin to blossom in Springtime, flourish in Summer, shed their...
  November 9th, 2020 14:49
• The beat of your tune (Lili Ahlam) A couple of ideas are offered up here; on the one hand is the power of...
  October 25th, 2020 19:59
• Nebulous (Fay Slimm.) Words fantastically employed here. The mystical nature of the scene you...
  October 20th, 2020 15:12
• Los Echoes (Neville) \"Echoes\" of bygone days, now blessed with the freedom of maturity, what...
  October 20th, 2020 14:58
• STRUCK (Michael Edwards) We\'ll show him the same sympathy and caring that he has shown to...
  October 4th, 2020 16:47
• Prepped (Neville) Never knew \"Paisley\" could be so much fun. Always considered it overly...
  October 2nd, 2020 14:13
• Stalled (Fay Slimm.) One answer to all, and that is NO! \"Stall\" no longer. Engage, Seek...
  October 2nd, 2020 14:05
• The World at My Table. (Goldfinch60) I love this one Andy. I think I shall save it. I find great truth in your...
  October 2nd, 2020 13:54
• SAVE A SYLLABLE (Michael Edwards) Be - un - pro - test - ing in - de - sist - ness di - vi - a - tion I...
  October 2nd, 2020 13:49
• Autumn\'s Glory. (Goldfinch60) The trees are turning here and I\'m looking forward to my first apple...
  October 1st, 2020 21:56
• Myself (Fay Slimm.) In the poetic sense, if you meant \"Myself\" to mean you, then this is you...
  October 1st, 2020 21:43
• A WINTER NIGHT (Michael Edwards) A beautiful description of approaching winter. It seems at times that we...
  October 1st, 2020 21:33
• Oblivious (Neville) \"No need or reason to pretend,\" that she knew. Why would she? It is now...
  October 1st, 2020 21:24
• A Patchwork of Ashes (Neville) Like a wild fire leaving behind fields of ash, she burned through his...
  September 30th, 2020 16:40
• Michaelmas Melody (Orchidee) O.K., so I asked my wife (a Sussex girl) if she knew the song, and she did...
  September 29th, 2020 13:51
• Together (Fay Slimm.) Let\'s hope there is enough time to save this Earth. With certain fools in...
  September 29th, 2020 13:36
• Come-a-Day (Neville) Finding the ideal resting spot among the flora and fauna and to share it...
  September 29th, 2020 12:27
• Blank (MendedFences27)
  September 28th, 2020 18:33
• Take One (Fay Slimm.) Some things are meant to be in pairs, people too, especially lovers are...
  September 28th, 2020 16:21
• Making His Way Home (Neville) Sometimes familiarity becomes the dominant desire. Aging brings a comfort...
  September 28th, 2020 16:12
• rude Awakenings (L. B. Mek) Some people are just cranky in the morning. There will be no loving until...
  September 28th, 2020 15:59
• “ Promises of Vows (Dove) Vows, promises, etc.. They are meant, only as long as their intent. It\'s...
  September 27th, 2020 19:02
• Enmeshed (Fay Slimm.) The Spider\'s Web, often the intention of the phrase is indicate a...
  September 27th, 2020 18:49
• Discarded 2 (Neville) What happens to all the thoughts that have been? Some are memorialized in...
  September 27th, 2020 18:41
• SO IT\'S SUNDAY (Michael Edwards) I find this humorous. I may have done this or something similar, like...
  September 27th, 2020 18:25
• Salvation Seasons (Orchidee) Very good, thoroughly enjoyed this poem, Reminded me of \"Turn, Turn....
  September 27th, 2020 18:14
• Compromise (Fay Slimm.) Love\'s renewal, bringing \"bluebirds\" of tomorrow, along with an...
  September 26th, 2020 14:21
• Sleeper (Neville) Self sacrifice for what? A blatant waste of human life. A sad story indeed...
  September 26th, 2020 13:58
• All the Ends of Me (Neville) \"Bruised\" it seems by a shameless lady of \"sailors and serfs n by...
  September 25th, 2020 19:09
• Grown.. (Poetic Dan) Watch out, she will soften your heart. You gotta love it, though. Cute as...
  September 20th, 2020 11:28
• Hippie Am I. (Goldfinch60) I must agree with the sentiment of this poem. Love is surely the answer....
  September 20th, 2020 11:24
• Bruises (Neville) Wow, such deviant love, or abuse, but here seems a mutual endeavor, yet...
  September 20th, 2020 11:13
• Absolutely Stunning! (Goldfinch60) Beautiful, sometimes Nature provides a work of art for us to enjoy. Great...
  September 5th, 2020 12:23
• EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (3) (Michael Edwards) Yeah, my Grandmother had one of those. Also I remember my Father saying...
  September 5th, 2020 12:19
• EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (2) (Michael Edwards) Took a while but it finally dawned on me, the meaning in your drawing. The...
  September 4th, 2020 12:02
• A Fragment (Jarcher54) Symbols abound in this beautiful scene of conquering grief: Roses. leaf,...
  September 3rd, 2020 10:13
• Abundance. (Fay Slimm.) Living here, this is the beginning of what most here call the best time of...
  September 3rd, 2020 10:07
• No Return. (Goldfinch60) How many times to we try returning only to face great disappointment. Like...
  September 3rd, 2020 09:56
• EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (1) (Michael Edwards) Is this not the very definition of the sexes? I truly laughed out loud...
  September 3rd, 2020 09:51
• Decisions & Choices (Neville) The map of life looks more like a spider\'s web than a straight line....
  September 3rd, 2020 09:45
• Over The Hill (Neville) Time to break new ground. Nothing grows on plowed land, except wild...
  August 31st, 2020 16:56
• Simple as That (Neville) Straight forward truth. Can\'t be said any better. - Phil A.
  August 31st, 2020 08:58
• Endsong (Neville) Time just keeps on rolling. Fate, if one chooses to believe in...
  August 30th, 2020 22:09
• New Appetite. (Fay Slimm.) Life is a series of changes. One must keep going through it all. \"And the...
  August 27th, 2020 12:35
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (9-12) (Michael Edwards) A lovely bunch of idioms. \"Cowards,\" are\" tough\" to \"get going.\" ...
  August 27th, 2020 12:21
• Modern Love (Neville) Much better title, it adds to the surprise. Here\'s a take on this with...
  August 27th, 2020 10:56
• Invasion. (Fay Slimm.) Light fascinates. Brings forth all the color our eyes can perceive. Your...
  August 26th, 2020 18:34
• The Day The Carousel Stopped (DesertWords) My first visit here. I kind of like this poem. Assuming it about the day...
  August 26th, 2020 18:29
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (5-8) (Michael Edwards) Someone once told me, \"It was so quiet you could hear a mouse drop.\" I...
  August 26th, 2020 16:09
• Summer’s End (Neville) The end of summer, isolated and alone, with only darkening days to look...
  August 26th, 2020 16:01
• Drop Me off @ the Next Stop (Neville) The Bus driver says Destiny stops for no man. Growing old means you have a...
  August 25th, 2020 10:06
• Bohemian Rhapsody. (Goldfinch60) Too many trips around the Sun, most of my favorites have melted into...
  August 25th, 2020 09:56
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (1-4) (Michael Edwards) Yuk, yuk, chuckle, chuckle. Made me laugh. Thanks for a good start to my...
  August 25th, 2020 09:46
• If. (Fay Slimm.) Well, I simply love this one, not just the emotions it conveys, but the...
  August 25th, 2020 09:42
• Full Spate. (Fay Slimm.) It certainly is true,\" the nearer\" we \"come\" the more intense each day...
  August 24th, 2020 12:38
• Sun Shy (Neville) I wonder if she wandered and was tickled by the fella, when he wondrously...
  August 24th, 2020 12:31
• Tosca Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A very moving write. Opera is a fine blend of dramatic storytelling and...
  August 24th, 2020 11:50
• Sky Hungry (Neville) I was airborne with you on this one. \"hanging on the very edge of...
  August 21st, 2020 14:50
• Best (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful words, Fay. Is love a once in a lifetime event? Or can it...
  August 19th, 2020 17:08
• NO LITTER   (Michael Edwards) Cartoon - A great one-liner. Poem - Has two identical ends, just like the...
  August 19th, 2020 17:00
• Natures Glory. (Goldfinch60) They are red because of the moisture in the air bending the light, and so...
  August 19th, 2020 16:04
• A Mermaids Tale (Neville) A tail of fantasy, breaking through the waves, instilling flight...
  August 18th, 2020 13:56
• Wax Butterflies (Neville) Wax or otherwise, the life of a \"butterfly\" is short, and I read that...
  August 17th, 2020 16:45