Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- UNWRAPPED. (Fay Slimm.)
Ah, there\'s nothing like coffee in the morning......or did I leave...
May 1st, 2019 13:13 - FROM COMMENTS (1) (Michael Edwards)
O.K. I\'ll play:
\"Though it\'s said time to time
that I do prefer...
May 1st, 2019 11:23 - Colours Without Names (Neville)
Just as there are sounds the human ear cannot hear, there are colors and...
April 30th, 2019 14:13 - DAY MONTH YEAR (Michael Edwards)
Only two dates matter, when you\'re born and when you\'re gone. All else...
April 30th, 2019 13:56 - Crumbs of Comfort (Neville)
Food for thought (no pun intended). We often forget the plight of...
April 29th, 2019 11:30 - SIGNS. (Fay Slimm.)
The ebb and flow of romantic inclinations eloquently expressed: warm and...
April 29th, 2019 11:06 - Empty Sky (Neville)
Sometimes putting words to paper is a lot like chopping wood, much more...
April 28th, 2019 13:42 - FREEING . (Fay Slimm.)
Better to be free than to possess. I loved this little thought provoker....
April 28th, 2019 13:27 - LETTING GO. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Letting go\" of love is painful beyond description. We are left with an...
April 18th, 2019 18:52 - LIVING IN A DREAM (Michael Edwards)
Love your dream-scape. Is that actually you standing there?
With \"closed...
April 18th, 2019 18:41 - MARY HAD .....A RAM (Michael Edwards)
Artwork - Beautiful coloration. I see a multi-colored flying dragon....
April 15th, 2019 13:52 - this lotus of light (Jon Nakapalau)
So true. Love comes uneasily to some, but when it does It causes one to...
April 14th, 2019 19:53 - MIXTURES. (Fay Slimm.)
Perhaps \"dappling\" is Natures abstract art? Or, more philosophically,...
April 14th, 2019 19:45 - NO MORE HER OWN PHILOSOPHER (Michael Edwards)
Abstract - I see birds on a tree limb building a nest. Looking straight in...
April 14th, 2019 19:33 - at closure (Frank Prem)
Loved your imagery in this . \"wind twirls the sky,\" \"the waters are...
April 12th, 2019 15:11 - DEPARTURE. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Departure,\" flocks of birds leaving to migrate to better surroundings....
April 12th, 2019 15:00 - Something Missing. (Goldfinch60)
GF60 you\'re making me hungry. Maybe wife and I will hit a breakfast...
April 12th, 2019 14:50 - Something Missing. (Goldfinch60)
April 12th, 2019 14:46 - SADNESS (Michael Edwards)
Sadness, yes, as a dolphin swims in a polluted sea. No, I don\'t see a...
April 12th, 2019 14:43 - SOLO-CHILL. (Fay Slimm.)
Great write Fay. I loved \"widowed shoreline.\" Very imaginative, and it...
April 2nd, 2019 11:55 - this last full moon (Jon Nakapalau)
A lone shadow is a lonesome shadow. Omens such as these can be...
March 30th, 2019 16:02 - TROUBLE. (Fay Slimm.)
Picture and poem, one and the same, captured in word form just as...
March 30th, 2019 11:57 - At Peace Once More. (Goldfinch60)
Nature provides. As simple as it may seem, having a piece of Nature to...
March 30th, 2019 11:52 - LAVENDER\'S BLUE (Michael Edwards)
Reminds me of \"Lavender Blue\" by Sammy Turner. What the hay is vindaloo?...
March 30th, 2019 11:47 - LEVELS. (Fay Slimm.)
\'When one tugs at a single thing in Nature, he finds it attached to the...
March 29th, 2019 14:44 - Humour in Life. (Goldfinch60)
Oh yeah, life\'s treasured moments. So true GF so true. The best medicine...
March 29th, 2019 14:28 - sliced pickled radish (Jon Nakapalau)
There\'s no place like home, except Grandma\'s. Mine would cook biscuits...
March 29th, 2019 14:17 - BENEATH (Michael Edwards)
Those \"lush green tranquil vales\" seem to be everywhere in England. A...
March 29th, 2019 14:08 - HAVENS. (Fay Slimm.)
What if all the nest raiders could be colored black? We have Bluejays that...
March 27th, 2019 16:43 - Shadow Across the Sky. (Goldfinch60)
Life is a series of changes thrown at us. We have no control over them,...
March 27th, 2019 16:12 - GRINLOADS OF 575s (1) (Michael Edwards)
Three very fine and humorous poems. My favorite is the first. It\'s so...
March 27th, 2019 16:04 - Stuck (Neville)
They say alcohol is good for unsticking things, but I\'ve tried it and it...
March 26th, 2019 14:49 - COURAGE. (Fay Slimm.)
We seem to have an Oceanic wave flowing through this site today.
I live...
March 26th, 2019 14:35 - Instead (Sylviasearcher)
Avoid the Ocean
it\'s a sea of motion
lurking to claim you.
Powerful...
March 26th, 2019 14:25 - Saturday Nights Were Special. (Goldfinch60)
So many memories, so many Saturday nights, in reality pretty much the same...
March 26th, 2019 14:02 - billy told me (Jon Nakapalau)
A sad but beautiful tale of unattainable happiness, lost to the horrors of...
March 26th, 2019 13:55 - MYSTERY. (Fay Slimm.)
Empathy for the crab? Truly a poet\'s response. Much so that a poem is...
March 22nd, 2019 13:33 - that first morning (Jon Nakapalau)
Spring is known for loosing Cupid\'s arrows. Your bowman takes on a flight...
March 22nd, 2019 13:09 - Set Her Free. (Goldfinch60)
All feelings such as this whether written or spoken need to be heard or...
March 22nd, 2019 11:19 - A Life in Grey (Nicholas Browning)
Life , death, the Earth, and Mankind, all intertwine in as many ways as...
March 22nd, 2019 11:12 - DEFINITIONS (4) (Michael Edwards)
\"Ultimatum\" is a fact. On \"Novel\" I have a question, \"Has every...
March 22nd, 2019 10:55 - CLIMBING. (Fay Slimm.)
A lost love through betrayal is more injurious than a loss, and your poem...
March 20th, 2019 13:38 - How Else Would We Know? (Nicholas Browning)
Finding the right words aye, that\'s the rub. Is it art, if I change...
March 19th, 2019 16:11 - WAVERING. (Fay Slimm.)
Billions of people in the world, each with their own idea of reality. It...
March 19th, 2019 15:52 - CAGE AND CREED (Michael Edwards)
What do they do for an encore?
Your poem says it all. My only question...
March 19th, 2019 15:43 - Intimidating Senryu. (Goldfinch60)
A Senryu for those who have attempted this form. It can be...
March 19th, 2019 15:35 - Adonais (Jo March)
An excellent tribute poem. From what I know of his life and works it seems...
March 19th, 2019 15:31 - Solemn Revelations (WL Schuett)
Wonderful words, indeed, and an inspiring remembrance. \"Intimacy with no...
March 12th, 2019 19:00 - Living the Day. (Goldfinch60)
Inspiring words of wisdom. Optimism with a sense of logic. Words to live...
March 9th, 2019 12:17 - MARCH 1st 2019 (Michael Edwards)
Brilliant and lovely poetry, the real thing. Smoothness, imagery, and...
March 9th, 2019 12:13 - Searching for Peace (Sunshinefalling)
Powerful words. Also frightening. You etch a very sad picture of one\'s...
March 9th, 2019 12:09 - let me tell you a story (Jon Nakapalau)
Love it. Absolute truth. Today everyone has a story, and the word...
March 9th, 2019 12:02 - Why (Purdy61)
I see a lost love here, but I also see some poetic ability. \"Falling...
March 8th, 2019 11:24 - how many times (Jon Nakapalau)
Very thought-provoking. Just what is it that people are seeking when they...
March 8th, 2019 11:17 - Boudoir (Neville)
What a room, what a scene, What a moment in time. Youth squanders many a...
March 8th, 2019 10:56 - BIRD-TALK.. (Fay Slimm.)
We are in the midst of Snowstorms here. I\'ll be lucky to see a Penguin,...
March 8th, 2019 10:44 - Church Swansong. (Goldfinch60)
Nice little song of a swan, GF 60.
Looks like he took a swan dive when he...
March 8th, 2019 10:30 - HER VEINS (Michael Edwards)
The cartoon is almost too close to reality.
The poem ; I like the...
March 8th, 2019 10:05 - TOFFEE AND COFFEE (Michael Edwards)
I\'m sure you can get Toffee Coffee at Starbucks, without any sogginess....
March 7th, 2019 22:34 - ARDOUR. (Fay Slimm.)
Lusty and bawdy, like rolling in the clover. Oooooh....such anti Victorian...
March 7th, 2019 22:22 - RICIN\'S NICE (Michael Edwards)
To the point, shouldn\'t there be \"Up\" and \"Down\" arrows. At least...
March 6th, 2019 09:15 - INSIDE ME. (Fay Slimm.)
Life hardens us all. Better to be the rock and not the bug, Remember that...
March 5th, 2019 17:15 - mr. blue man (Jon Nakapalau)
\"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies.\"
We all get checked on every day,...
March 5th, 2019 17:06 - Flower. (Goldfinch60)
Enjoyed this little uprising of a poem. Interesting interaction between...
March 5th, 2019 16:53 - YOU DO NOT SEE (Michael Edwards)
Bingo, another winner. East vs. West. The fleeing Sun drops for the night,...
March 5th, 2019 16:45 - TO THE SANDMAN (Fay Slimm.)
Most nights my wife does not sleep well, up and down a million times, so I...
March 4th, 2019 13:22 - I Am That Guy (Neville)
Imagination is what makes the poet and the storyteller what they are. All...
March 4th, 2019 13:08 - MOPPING UP (Michael Edwards)
Humor for a Monday, with a cartoon and two funny shorties. Got us laughing...
March 4th, 2019 12:54 - Paper Cuts (Neville)
Faceless, paper dolls are truly dangerous to a man\'s heart. However, with...
March 3rd, 2019 16:48 - Valley on the Hill. (Goldfinch60)
The older, the longer the \"UP\" becomes. Confusing choice of name, \"The...
March 3rd, 2019 14:12 - A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards)
Tears of happiness for the sleeping Vicar? Or is it the resignation? ...
March 3rd, 2019 14:04 - The Last Hurt (Neville)
Sooner or later heartbreak finds us all. Love\'s darker side leaves a...
March 2nd, 2019 21:18 - SOLO. (Fay Slimm.)
A look to the sea for the hope of a returning lover, a classic image, that...
February 27th, 2019 20:31 - Shadow of the Arrow (WL Schuett)
We all evaluate our lives at one time or another. Could we have achieved...
February 27th, 2019 20:15 - Alone (Gigilovesfood)
Absolutely painful loneliness expressed here. Very dramatic presentation....
February 26th, 2019 22:48 - seven years (Laurenroe)
They say \"Time heals all\" , it\'s not entirely true, but as time passes...
February 21st, 2019 20:35 - My Raft (Hpoetry)
As I see this analogy: The raft (your heart) you have spent time and labor...
January 29th, 2019 16:25 - The Tin Man Laments (Jon Nakapalau)
He became human. Shortly thereafter, a Tin Lizzy dumped him for an...
January 29th, 2019 15:50 - sitting on the edge (Jon Nakapalau)
Psychologists just released a study saying that frequent visits to the...
January 29th, 2019 15:42 - everything flies away (Jon Nakapalau)
To me, Time is like a raging river carrying us along. It can\'t be stopped...
January 29th, 2019 15:35 - salisbury steak tv dinner (Jon Nakapalau)
It\'s never as advertised. Even the lowliest T.V. dinner can breach the...
January 29th, 2019 15:23 - HOPING. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful. The Natural Cycles: the seasons, life/death - if we make it...
January 23rd, 2019 19:24 - Dali’s Eyes (Neville)
A terrific poem. It speaks the desire of every poet. To take the \"breath...
January 1st, 2019 20:31 - As white as the winter (Joanna Garrido)
Sometimes it takes enormous courage to turn and run. Why do people make...
December 30th, 2018 18:51 - OLD INTO NEW. (Fay Slimm.)
Well chosen wording of Nature\'s changing environs. Always...
December 30th, 2018 18:45 - Rough Sketched & True (Neville)
Whether it becomes a completed painting or not it will leave a vision in...
December 30th, 2018 18:37 - Free (Jaayx3)
This seems very personal, very real. You say all the things one would say...
December 30th, 2018 17:48 - No Longer (Jaayx3)
A friendship that is ending, with no chance of resurrection. Perhaps,...
December 29th, 2018 19:10 - Secrets of the Field (Neville)
A field filled with feelings. A harvest of Love and rape. A history of...
December 29th, 2018 19:02 - A Cold Kiss on Pont Neuf (Jim Yates)
A beautiful reminiscence. I believe we\'ve all felt that \"cold kiss\"...
August 22nd, 2018 23:11 - NOW-NESS. (Fay Slimm.)
LIve in the moment. Make every \"now-ness\" a \"WOW-ness.\" Beautiful and...
August 18th, 2018 22:57 - A Journey to Forever and Always (HangingbyaHalo)
Beautiful! A vivid description of Love for the ages. A \"journey\" as you...
August 18th, 2018 15:36 - She eyed the world... (Crystal Hope)
Terrific, escapism at its best. Imagination in flight, expressed in the...
August 9th, 2018 16:10 - gospel (Izzi Lynn)
Izzi - Wow! what a powerful message.
Your writing, your form of...
August 9th, 2018 16:04 - What is Love? (Goldfinch60)
I, too, believe Love is ethereal, not of this world. Science cannot...
August 6th, 2018 14:52 - SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED (Michael Edwards)
Who knows where true love is to be found? Watching a bee-hive seems now,...
August 6th, 2018 14:43 - half of me (Cheyenneherren)
A lost love can be a heartbreak, as if you can no longer exist, but the...
August 6th, 2018 14:31 - Love Notes (Vela)
Great imagery. Loved it. \"My skin still remembers,\" a love from long...
August 5th, 2018 12:13 - WINTER (Michael Edwards)
I like this one. Michael. The passing of Winter into the nether regions....
June 2nd, 2018 15:16 - My Sails are Luffing (Lorna)
Brilliant metaphor! A simple but powerful poem. Life, boats, wind , and...
April 30th, 2018 11:59
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