Comments on community poems by MendedFences27



  • A Mermaids Tale (Neville) A tail of fantasy, breaking through the waves, instilling flight...
    August 18th, 2020 13:56
  • Wax Butterflies (Neville) Wax or otherwise, the life of a \"butterfly\" is short, and I read that...
    August 17th, 2020 16:45
  • Knocking On (Neville) No need for filters, we know how you feel. \"Rejection\" seems to be the...
    August 16th, 2020 11:54
  • Theory of Endurance (Neville) Life is but a series of changes. Nothing is permanent, including time. To...
    August 15th, 2020 12:19
  • Autumn-Imbued. (Fay Slimm.) There\'s nothing like a quiet beach on a clear autumn day. Just the Sun,...
    August 15th, 2020 11:59
  • Steph at Thirty. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful tribute to a granddaughter of whom you must be most proud....
    August 15th, 2020 11:55
  • Remains. (Fay Slimm.) Wow Fay! why so Dark? I have a daughter that is a Ghost Hunter. belongs to...
    August 14th, 2020 14:57
  • Maybe Old but Not Daft (Neville) The ocean draws many people to her. My wife and I have both spent our...
    August 14th, 2020 12:55
  • Times of Youth. (Goldfinch60) Yeah! and \"Amen!\" \"Glorious times\" indeed. I\'m sure half the world...
    August 14th, 2020 12:42
  • It Rained. (Goldfinch60) A river\'s flow is like water under the bridge. Which has absolutely...
    August 13th, 2020 13:54
  • Beaten (Neville) Once there was a woman, cheap as a penny whistle, men played her like a...
    August 13th, 2020 13:34
  • Who Said ! (Fay Slimm.) I do not want to age like wine, only to be drunk at the end, or cheese...
    August 13th, 2020 13:20
  • i’ve come to realize (Jackeggz) You are the standard others must meet, not the other way around. Before...
    August 12th, 2020 10:43
  • That Summer. (Fay Slimm.) Summer by the sea is a great romantic setting. Your poem contains some...
    August 12th, 2020 09:53
  • Of Kept Men & Their Secrets (Neville) A personification of the ocean? \"She\" draws men to her, \"drives\" them...
    August 12th, 2020 09:46
  • Back to School. (Goldfinch60) It makes more sense to send the politicians back to school,- Phil A.
    August 12th, 2020 09:33
  • DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (2) (Michael Edwards) Music is a stimulant: Energizing the nervous system, exciting the brain,...
    August 12th, 2020 09:30
  • Fallen Leaves Behind (Neville) They say you pay a price for beauty, but I doubt they had leaves in mind....
    August 9th, 2020 19:13
  • I Spied. (Fay Slimm.) A very delightful scribble, Fay. Some great imagery. Lines of poetic...
    August 9th, 2020 18:59
  • Carpéing Diem. (Fay Slimm.) A beautiful poem Fay. It makes one want to walk the shoreline once again....
    August 8th, 2020 11:49
  • Sun Drops (Neville) All Moonshine truly is , is reflected Sunshine, but the folklore it\'s...
    August 8th, 2020 11:39
  • Nirvana (Sylviasearcher) I hate myself, I hate the things I\'ve done, but I want to live. Sounds...
    August 8th, 2020 11:13
  • Something in the Air (Neville) Nicely spoken Nev. No matter where you go these days, you see the effects....
    August 7th, 2020 10:54
  • NO LONGER HEARD (Michael Edwards) Just as I clicked to read this I was perusing Emerson\'s \"Threnody.\" I...
    August 5th, 2020 16:54
  • Love-Light. (Fay Slimm.) \"Love light\" conquers all, \"ce-la-vie,\" \"no one\'s to blame,\"...
    August 4th, 2020 15:22
  • Sidewalk Cracks II (SheWasTheSun) I just finished Part 1 and now I\'m crushed. I hope this is fiction and...
    August 3rd, 2020 22:11
  • Sidewalk Cracks (SheWasTheSun) True Love \"lives in the sidewalk cracks,\" between the lines, and many...
    August 3rd, 2020 22:06
  • Catzzzzzzz. (Fay Slimm.) Cats - Too mysterious to comprehend. From Lions and Tigers to household...
    July 30th, 2020 09:21
  • Chasing the word (Sylviasearcher) Words flatter poetic beauty created. collected, structured, written,...
    July 30th, 2020 09:13
  • Imagination and Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Imagination and dreams are different only in the control. We control...
    July 30th, 2020 09:03
  • English Weather (Aa Harvey) And don\'t forget the wind. I find that here in New England, there is...
    July 29th, 2020 21:28
  • In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Odes indeed. Raindrops upon window panes, become a song of praise. Poets...
    July 29th, 2020 21:23
  • Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor) To lose your father at such a young age is tragedy for sure, but your...
    July 29th, 2020 21:17
  • Struck Down. (Goldfinch60) It just goes to prove that Golf should never be taken seriously.What with...
    July 29th, 2020 19:32
  • HALF EMPTY (Michael Edwards) Bottoms up! Make mine a Guiness. Beautiful drawing. Love the comedy of...
    July 29th, 2020 19:17
  • In Error. (Fay Slimm.) This world would be a beautiful place if it weren\'t for people. Think of...
    July 28th, 2020 09:20
  • LOVE IS MANIFEST (Michael Edwards) A clearly defined image of peace and harmony, of love that lasts through...
    July 28th, 2020 09:03
  • Two Weeks in July (Neville) Reminded me of the song, \"We\'ll sing in the Sunshine...........Then...
    July 27th, 2020 11:10
  • If Only. (Fay Slimm.) And thus you did. The music of Nature is compelling and poets thrive on...
    July 27th, 2020 10:59
  • Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60) Oh so true, GF60. Many things to remember and many to try and...
    July 27th, 2020 10:47
  • Time (Justagirl) Write it all down girl. Your thoughts, your dreams, whatever you think...
    July 22nd, 2020 22:38
  • NUTS (Michael Edwards) Liked your \"nutty\" bit of humor. Nut allergies are serious business....
    July 22nd, 2020 12:06
  • Non-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, what a very poignant write. The trials and tribulation of love and...
    July 22nd, 2020 11:59
  • Refilled. (Goldfinch60) Life is not like a glass in any way, but I agree that a life can be...
    July 22nd, 2020 11:51
  • walk away (Dusk arising) They say Home is where the heart is,\" but it\'s not always true. Home...
    July 22nd, 2020 11:45
  • Captured. (Fay Slimm.) This is a fine take on one of Nature\'s great forces. We try to harness...
    July 21st, 2020 13:07
  • An English Pub (Emptypot) Is this the one in Poynings? I think your poem describes it well, but so...
    July 16th, 2020 21:57
  • Mullins Yard (Neville) I read this as aging out or becoming obsolete. Or maybe you just like...
    July 15th, 2020 15:23
  • AGEING COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards) Well, these two lines are a pair to behold and very alluring since you...
    July 15th, 2020 15:07
  • A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards) Maybe you spelled \"Steel\" wrong? With this guy it ought to be...
    July 14th, 2020 13:41
  • Ego\'s Down (Neville) In my first introduction to Marmite I spread it on the bread like peanut...
    July 13th, 2020 13:48
  • See Success. (Fay Slimm.) One line truly stunned me - \"stand on the edge of seen and unseen.\" A...
    July 13th, 2020 13:30
  • A Secret. (Fay Slimm.) The mind receives the message, but the heart interprets it, All those...
    July 12th, 2020 11:28
  • AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5) (Michael Edwards) I see blue skies with some sun peeking through over a mountain range and a...
    July 12th, 2020 11:15
  • Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.) Clandestine love affairs leave their mark to be carried through the years....
    July 10th, 2020 14:51
  • AGEING COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) The painting and poem do not belong together. It\'s funny (the poem) and...
    July 10th, 2020 14:46
  • she (Dusk arising) Homeward bound to where the enchantress eclipses the enchantment. The...
    July 10th, 2020 14:39
  • Why I Do It (ForeverJesus7) In every instance ask yourself, \"What would Jesus do?\" - Phil A.
    July 8th, 2020 22:42
  • Treasured. (Fay Slimm.) I know it is just \"me,\' but your phrasing of the first two stanzas had...
    July 8th, 2020 13:50
  • Untenable. (Fay Slimm.) Love and obsession -They say the greatest sex organ is the brain, so it\'s...
    July 7th, 2020 15:13
  • AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) Both very clever. Clever art, clever humor. If only they had grown onions...
    July 7th, 2020 15:02
  • Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.) A very unique form of expression. A walk in the woods is becomes...
    July 6th, 2020 17:16
  • White Violets (Neville) **** \'Four stars\" for this one, \"pearlescent\" or otherwise....
    July 6th, 2020 17:00
  • Wonder. (Fay Slimm.) I was just wondering how the beauty of this small gem can speak so loudly...
    June 19th, 2020 21:58
  • Another 575 (Michael Edwards) Too many times was I bitten and felt that jolt, which explains a...
    June 19th, 2020 21:49
  • Exciting. (Fay Slimm.) So beautiful Fay. Your words are more powerful than the photo. Reading it...
    June 18th, 2020 13:30
  • DESERTED NOW (Michael Edwards) Let me add some more praise upon this poem and artwork. \"Fire-light...
    June 17th, 2020 18:25
  • Caught. (Fay Slimm.) This is brilliant Fay. I\'ve never looked at bubbles in this way. Surely...
    June 15th, 2020 21:23
  • Glorious Din. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful poem Fay. I love poems of nature. This one rings true, as we...
    June 12th, 2020 18:24
  • Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.) Of course there is silent-speak. Its a raising of an eyebrow, a roll of...
    June 11th, 2020 15:48
  • How do I....... (Suresh) Many questions that we all think about during the course of a...
    June 10th, 2020 16:16
  • Welcome to my head at times (Paris Margaret) The best of times, the worst of times. The paradox of humanity. Each life...
    June 10th, 2020 12:18
  • Destined. (Fay Slimm.) Revealing a sad loss, yet ever so sweetly. Your poem cries for the oft...
    June 10th, 2020 10:54
  • Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.) Dreams - are they just imagination functioning while we are sleeping,...
    June 9th, 2020 22:34
  • in a place he wants to be (Dusk arising) A great message for Vets of any era. Will their spirit live on in future...
    June 9th, 2020 22:24
  • Unbecoming (SheWasTheSun) Before we can love anyone or anything we must first love ourselves.Once we...
    June 9th, 2020 22:18
  • Climax (Neville) This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or...
    June 9th, 2020 22:10
  • Upon the Morrow (Neville) Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is...
    June 6th, 2020 17:21
  • The Sorriest of Words (Neville) \"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and...
    June 4th, 2020 18:58
  • Skien (Neville) Well, technically it\'s still Spring, or maybe for some unknown reason...
    May 31st, 2020 18:01
  • I am He (Kevin Michael Bloor) One and only true love, A rare and precious thing. Bound to last forever....
    April 29th, 2020 18:55
  • Closeness. (Fay Slimm.) O.M.G. Love, Music, and the Afterlife. Interwoven into this short question...
    April 29th, 2020 18:49
  • Wishing for More. (Goldfinch60) Somewhere in your poem is the sense of hope. It seems we are born with it...
    April 29th, 2020 18:38
  • COMICAL COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) Penguins actually do surf. Poor Willy has to get his waves right. Maybe he...
    April 29th, 2020 18:32
  • escape (JustABird) \"she rocks back and forth,\" I see an older woman, perhaps beset with...
    April 28th, 2020 17:42
  • After the Clapping (Sylviasearcher) I think they deserve a round of applause; putting their lives on the line...
    April 28th, 2020 16:30
  • Battle. (Fay Slimm.) The daily \"battle\" of Night vs. Day and the glamorous skies that result....
    April 28th, 2020 16:15
  • Pot of Gold. (Goldfinch60) A very deep thought; Life\'s reflection as the final reward. You have...
    April 28th, 2020 16:09
  • COMICAL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) Time for a shot of November third. I think your penguins have more common...
    April 28th, 2020 16:02
  • No Pot of Gold (Neville) He who seeks gold at the end of a rainbow treks a very long journey. When...
    April 27th, 2020 19:46
  • NEVER HAVE I (Michael Edwards) A good bit of fun, this. What with helmets, parrots, and eggs on one\'s...
    April 11th, 2020 13:19
  • Ache (SerenWise) I like this poem. The metaphors and similes are creative and relate to one...
    April 6th, 2020 22:24
  • Cliff (Hedy) It is a dangerous edge upon which an artist such as yourself must walk. A...
    April 6th, 2020 22:13
  • Take Me. (Fay Slimm.) Stay strong, Fay. \"And this too will pass.\" Sleep can sometimes carry...
    April 6th, 2020 22:01
  • Hello! (Goldfinch60) Hello! Hello! Hello! My god why would you name you dog that? She must get...
    April 6th, 2020 21:53
  • STIFF ZIP (Michael Edwards) This magical anointment is readily available at your local alipterium or...
    April 6th, 2020 21:47
  • Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville) A story well spoken. The book of love is like a novel written in pain and...
    April 6th, 2020 19:45
  • oh, my darling (Queer-with-a-pen) This poem may be short, but it says a lot. It exudes the melancholy/sorrow...
    April 4th, 2020 16:22
  • THIS SENTENCE - A SELECTION OF MONOSUCHS (Michael Edwards) I began at the end and came to the conclusion that the end begins where...
    April 4th, 2020 15:55
  • Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.) This moment of onsetting worry, as she traveled homeward in dread of the...
    April 2nd, 2020 15:26


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