Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• Another 575 (Michael Edwards) Too many times was I bitten and felt that jolt, which explains a...
  June 19th, 2020 21:49
• Exciting. (Fay Slimm.) So beautiful Fay. Your words are more powerful than the photo. Reading it...
  June 18th, 2020 13:30
• DESERTED NOW (Michael Edwards) Let me add some more praise upon this poem and artwork. \"Fire-light...
  June 17th, 2020 18:25
• Caught. (Fay Slimm.) This is brilliant Fay. I\'ve never looked at bubbles in this way. Surely...
  June 15th, 2020 21:23
• Glorious Din. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful poem Fay. I love poems of nature. This one rings true, as we...
  June 12th, 2020 18:24
• Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.) Of course there is silent-speak. Its a raising of an eyebrow, a roll of...
  June 11th, 2020 15:48
• How do I....... (Suresh) Many questions that we all think about during the course of a...
  June 10th, 2020 16:16
• Welcome to my head at times (Paris Margaret) The best of times, the worst of times. The paradox of humanity. Each life...
  June 10th, 2020 12:18
• Destined. (Fay Slimm.) Revealing a sad loss, yet ever so sweetly. Your poem cries for the oft...
  June 10th, 2020 10:54
• Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.) Dreams - are they just imagination functioning while we are sleeping,...
  June 9th, 2020 22:34
• in a place he wants to be (Dusk arising) A great message for Vets of any era. Will their spirit live on in future...
  June 9th, 2020 22:24
• Unbecoming (SheWasTheSun) Before we can love anyone or anything we must first love ourselves.Once we...
  June 9th, 2020 22:18
• Climax (Neville) This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or...
  June 9th, 2020 22:10
• Upon the Morrow (Neville) Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is...
  June 6th, 2020 17:21
• The Sorriest of Words (Neville) \"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and...
  June 4th, 2020 18:58
• Skien (Neville) Well, technically it\'s still Spring, or maybe for some unknown reason...
  May 31st, 2020 18:01
• I am He (Kevin Michael Bloor) One and only true love, A rare and precious thing. Bound to last forever....
  April 29th, 2020 18:55
• Closeness. (Fay Slimm.) O.M.G. Love, Music, and the Afterlife. Interwoven into this short question...
  April 29th, 2020 18:49
• Wishing for More. (Goldfinch60) Somewhere in your poem is the sense of hope. It seems we are born with it...
  April 29th, 2020 18:38
• COMICAL COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) Penguins actually do surf. Poor Willy has to get his waves right. Maybe he...
  April 29th, 2020 18:32
• escape (JustABird) \"she rocks back and forth,\" I see an older woman, perhaps beset with...
  April 28th, 2020 17:42
• After the Clapping (Sylviasearcher) I think they deserve a round of applause; putting their lives on the line...
  April 28th, 2020 16:30
• Battle. (Fay Slimm.) The daily \"battle\" of Night vs. Day and the glamorous skies that result....
  April 28th, 2020 16:15
• Pot of Gold. (Goldfinch60) A very deep thought; Life\'s reflection as the final reward. You have...
  April 28th, 2020 16:09
• COMICAL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) Time for a shot of November third. I think your penguins have more common...
  April 28th, 2020 16:02
• No Pot of Gold (Neville) He who seeks gold at the end of a rainbow treks a very long journey. When...
  April 27th, 2020 19:46
• NEVER HAVE I (Michael Edwards) A good bit of fun, this. What with helmets, parrots, and eggs on one\'s...
  April 11th, 2020 13:19
• Ache (SerenWise) I like this poem. The metaphors and similes are creative and relate to one...
  April 6th, 2020 22:24
• Cliff (Hedy) It is a dangerous edge upon which an artist such as yourself must walk. A...
  April 6th, 2020 22:13
• Take Me. (Fay Slimm.) Stay strong, Fay. \"And this too will pass.\" Sleep can sometimes carry...
  April 6th, 2020 22:01
• Hello! (Goldfinch60) Hello! Hello! Hello! My god why would you name you dog that? She must get...
  April 6th, 2020 21:53
• STIFF ZIP (Michael Edwards) This magical anointment is readily available at your local alipterium or...
  April 6th, 2020 21:47
• Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville) A story well spoken. The book of love is like a novel written in pain and...
  April 6th, 2020 19:45
• oh, my darling (Queer-with-a-pen) This poem may be short, but it says a lot. It exudes the melancholy/sorrow...
  April 4th, 2020 16:22
• THIS SENTENCE - A SELECTION OF MONOSUCHS (Michael Edwards) I began at the end and came to the conclusion that the end begins where...
  April 4th, 2020 15:55
• Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.) This moment of onsetting worry, as she traveled homeward in dread of the...
  April 2nd, 2020 15:26
• Came the Day. (Goldfinch60) I think you\'ve given her the gift she was seeking, a way to memorialize...
  April 1st, 2020 19:07
• waiting (Dusk arising) This is either a love poem or a poem of hope, or, maybe both. It depends...
  April 1st, 2020 18:56
• I FOUND A QUIZ (Michael Edwards) Does that mean you are \"Joan of Art\"? The greatest quiz is what to do...
  March 31st, 2020 21:32
• Insidious (Neville) Life is a series of changes. All things are in motion, uncontrollably....
  March 30th, 2020 19:35
• Sistership. (Fay Slimm.) A terrific and sensitive piece. MM would surely have treasured it. Sibling...
  March 30th, 2020 19:17
• Ripples (Arturo Fernandez Ferre) There\'s a sadness to this poem, as sad as \"broken porcelain.\" I related...
  March 30th, 2020 18:59
• PLENTY FOR ALL (Michael Edwards) A bit dark, coming from you. Your trees remind me of people waiting for a...
  March 12th, 2020 16:12
• Change. (Fay Slimm.) We should all \"greet life\" with your optimism. Springtime brings that...
  March 11th, 2020 18:35
• WINTER NIGHTS (2) (Michael Edwards) Beware that \"winters rust.\" Don\'t let it affect your art. Perhaps the...
  March 11th, 2020 18:24
• Hesitation (Neville) I\'m game for that freworking of old ones specially my hip As for diving...
  March 8th, 2020 20:45
• Forsaken (Neville) Whether \"Forsaken \" in love or in life, she has reached the breaking...
  March 7th, 2020 21:04
• These Nights (SheWasTheSun) Such nights as these come all too often it seems. Unhappy...
  March 6th, 2020 23:16
• Scarlet’s Letter (Railasunshine) I like the rhythm and rhyme of this, but am confused by stanza 3. This...
  March 2nd, 2020 23:43
• Some Words Are Too Heavy (Neville) It appears to me that \"Cumbersome\" is both heavy\" and \"long\" and...
  March 2nd, 2020 23:33
• Rebel Pen (SheWasTheSun) This short poem sums up the anguish of parting, and the reflection on...
  March 1st, 2020 23:32
• You Stopped By (SheWasTheSun) When we\'re missing someone, a dream can ease the pain. Never completely,...
  March 1st, 2020 23:22
• He Has Me (SheWasTheSun) This is beautiful poetry. A personal subject, expressed eloquently. the...
  March 1st, 2020 16:50
• Disequilibrium (Neville) There\'s truth in what you write (if there is such a thing as truth). Your...
  February 26th, 2020 12:03
• The better Gems (🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽) There\'s a lot of beauty in this poem: Comparisons that are heart-felt,...
  February 26th, 2020 11:18
• Into Life. (Goldfinch60) Together forever. There cannot be a more powerful love. A lovely poem...
  February 19th, 2020 15:37
• HAIKU SPRING (2) (Michael Edwards) Shadows shortening Spring succumbing to Summer Supplanting...
  February 19th, 2020 15:30
• Besting. (Fay Slimm.) The chorus of Cicadas chirping close to Sunset on a Summer\'s night.. A...
  February 19th, 2020 15:08
• Scaled (Fay Slimm.) Simply irresistible! Love shatters all defenses. It can be an immediate...
  February 18th, 2020 10:22
• HAIKU SPRING (1) (Michael Edwards) Nothing like tulips in the Springtime to make your mouth water. A great...
  February 18th, 2020 10:10
• Over ? (Fay Slimm.) Some who were lovers can split and be friends. Others who were lovers...
  February 17th, 2020 17:41
• POETRY (Michael Edwards) Such is \"Poetry\" , a thought simply defined. 19 words of elegance, with...
  February 17th, 2020 17:25
• Locked Out (Neville) When any key breaks in any lock it\'s because they are not a match. In a...
  February 15th, 2020 23:18
• Discarded (Neville) Gee, this being V-day, I thought you were talking about \"Discarded\"...
  February 14th, 2020 17:01
• Winged Hearts. (Fay Slimm.) If only an open heart were \"unassailable\" never to be broken. Somehow I...
  February 14th, 2020 16:44
• There Are Good People. (Goldfinch60) Very thoughtful of you to immortalize the good deeds of that young man....
  February 13th, 2020 14:29
• Valentine Moon. (Fay Slimm.) Nothing says Valentine\'s romance like a gorgeous moonlight. Hearts...
  February 13th, 2020 14:19
• Until Spring (Neville) I think that leaves are the reason they call it \"Fall\".and maybe why we...
  February 12th, 2020 23:32
• The only love she held onto (Dusk arising) Loved the seasonal comparisons and the descriptive phrases to describe...
  February 12th, 2020 23:18
• Droplets (PoeticBiscuit) I have to agree with Neville. This is short, concise, and powerful. A...
  November 5th, 2019 19:23
• Little Girl (FredPeyer) Liked this one. Reminded me of my grandaughter, who likes to write. Kids...
  October 8th, 2019 18:07
• Pages in Passion (Hidden.shine) So much talent for 17, make sure you pursue it. This poem,\'s metaphor...
  July 29th, 2019 16:05
• the aftermath (Hidden.shine) So much said in 15 words. Obviously. someone does not appreciate your...
  July 29th, 2019 15:54
• Anxious Reflection (a sonnet) (Hidden.shine) I find this brilliant. Your words and use of language make this poem flow...
  July 29th, 2019 15:50
• People Feeling. (Goldfinch60) Smiles are remembered, frowns forgotten, so \"smile brother smile.\" Nice...
  July 29th, 2019 15:38
• THE ARTIST (2) (Michael Edwards) As we all know, :art\" and artist\" encompass more than paint and brush,...
  July 29th, 2019 15:31
• Cold Under The Coat (Neville) Here it comes! No, seriously. I thoroughly enjoyed this. We\'ve all been...
  July 29th, 2019 15:20
• Summer Sky (MrNobody40) Greatly expressing the fires of youth. Keeping them burning is the...
  July 25th, 2019 14:49
• A Silent Refrain (Neville) Timing is so critical to a relationship. Too soon or too late can bring...
  July 25th, 2019 14:44
• Love\'s Call. (Fay Slimm.) Soldiers die from the separation and the hell. Two wounds at once, the...
  July 25th, 2019 14:27
• When You Were Perfect (Neville) Perfection found, and then lost. Memories remain. Wishes expressed to be...
  July 24th, 2019 18:25
• A Thimbleful of Seeds (Neville) Could not agree more, since I believe Love and Life are everything. Here,...
  July 24th, 2019 17:33
• Crimson Swathe (Neville) Hope the girl or Hope the longing? Matters naught. A field of poppies...
  July 23rd, 2019 16:42
• My Spirit. (Goldfinch60) When I think of God I think of Love. They may be one and the same, and if...
  June 23rd, 2019 18:18
• TIME ALONE (Michael Edwards) As to your poem, excellent portrayal of \" Time Alone\"\", but Time raises...
  June 23rd, 2019 18:12
• Butterworth Crows (Neville) Wow! - To have seen this must have been a horror. What a great...
  June 11th, 2019 10:26
• SMALLNESS. (Fay Slimm.) It is that \"Smallness\" that allows the rest of us to exist. Bees are...
  June 11th, 2019 10:13
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (11) (Michael Edwards) Makes one wonder what\'s going on behind the closed doors of your pictured...
  June 11th, 2019 09:27
• kālacakra ferris wheel (Jon Nakapalau) Don\'t know much about Buddhism, but I know that life can feel like a...
  June 11th, 2019 09:17
• GORMLESS. (Fay Slimm.) I\'m at a loss for words. Most of what you said I had search for, but...
  June 10th, 2019 14:33
• Coffee (Down the rabbithole) They say coffee is a stimulant and alcohol a depressant , so what happens...
  June 10th, 2019 14:19
• Catching Flies (Neville) A very poignant poem, describing some horrific scenes which, I assume,...
  June 10th, 2019 14:06
• Does Size Matter. (Goldfinch60) In America, sedans are becoming obsolete. It\'s all SUV\'s and trucks....
  June 10th, 2019 13:54
• From \'A COLLECTION\' (10) (Michael Edwards) I think the art depicts the trap within the words. Now in Vegas, this...
  June 10th, 2019 13:48
• CHOICES. (Fay Slimm.) Love is always the correct choice. There is no life without it. Every day...
  June 7th, 2019 18:56
• BLOCKS. (Fay Slimm.) I think it works out that if you do manage to sleep, then you are no...
  June 6th, 2019 16:55
• Lost Dreams (Jo March) Parting with a love can be a trying and mournful experience. It tears a...
  May 26th, 2019 19:05
• A Cautious Distance (Neville) They say that normal personal space is four feet. I want to know where?...
  May 26th, 2019 14:15
• World in the Sky. (Goldfinch60) Ah yes, cloud formations on a beautiful clear day! those billowy cumulus...
  May 26th, 2019 13:56
• A Night at the Opera. (Goldfinch60) Wasn\'t that a Marx Brother\'s movie? See what happens because I didn\'t...
  May 20th, 2019 18:33