Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• MIXTURES. (Fay Slimm.) Perhaps \"dappling\" is Natures abstract art? Or, more philosophically,...
  April 14th, 2019 19:45
• NO MORE HER OWN PHILOSOPHER (Michael Edwards) Abstract - I see birds on a tree limb building a nest. Looking straight in...
  April 14th, 2019 19:33
• at closure (Frank Prem) Loved your imagery in this . \"wind twirls the sky,\" \"the waters are...
  April 12th, 2019 15:11
• DEPARTURE. (Fay Slimm.) \"Departure,\" flocks of birds leaving to migrate to better surroundings....
  April 12th, 2019 15:00
• Something Missing. (Goldfinch60) GF60 you\'re making me hungry. Maybe wife and I will hit a breakfast...
  April 12th, 2019 14:50
• Something Missing. (Goldfinch60)
  April 12th, 2019 14:46
• SADNESS (Michael Edwards) Sadness, yes, as a dolphin swims in a polluted sea. No, I don\'t see a...
  April 12th, 2019 14:43
• SOLO-CHILL. (Fay Slimm.) Great write Fay. I loved \"widowed shoreline.\" Very imaginative, and it...
  April 2nd, 2019 11:55
• this last full moon (Jon Nakapalau) A lone shadow is a lonesome shadow. Omens such as these can be...
  March 30th, 2019 16:02
• TROUBLE. (Fay Slimm.) Picture and poem, one and the same, captured in word form just as...
  March 30th, 2019 11:57
• At Peace Once More. (Goldfinch60) Nature provides. As simple as it may seem, having a piece of Nature to...
  March 30th, 2019 11:52
• LAVENDER\'S BLUE (Michael Edwards) Reminds me of \"Lavender Blue\" by Sammy Turner. What the hay is vindaloo?...
  March 30th, 2019 11:47
• LEVELS. (Fay Slimm.) \'When one tugs at a single thing in Nature, he finds it attached to the...
  March 29th, 2019 14:44
• Humour in Life. (Goldfinch60) Oh yeah, life\'s treasured moments. So true GF so true. The best medicine...
  March 29th, 2019 14:28
• sliced pickled radish (Jon Nakapalau) There\'s no place like home, except Grandma\'s. Mine would cook biscuits...
  March 29th, 2019 14:17
• BENEATH (Michael Edwards) Those \"lush green tranquil vales\" seem to be everywhere in England. A...
  March 29th, 2019 14:08
• HAVENS. (Fay Slimm.) What if all the nest raiders could be colored black? We have Bluejays that...
  March 27th, 2019 16:43
• Shadow Across the Sky. (Goldfinch60) Life is a series of changes thrown at us. We have no control over them,...
  March 27th, 2019 16:12
• GRINLOADS OF 575s (1) (Michael Edwards) Three very fine and humorous poems. My favorite is the first. It\'s so...
  March 27th, 2019 16:04
• Stuck (Neville) They say alcohol is good for unsticking things, but I\'ve tried it and it...
  March 26th, 2019 14:49
• COURAGE. (Fay Slimm.) We seem to have an Oceanic wave flowing through this site today. I live...
  March 26th, 2019 14:35
• Instead (Sylviasearcher) Avoid the Ocean it\'s a sea of motion lurking to claim you. Powerful...
  March 26th, 2019 14:25
• Saturday Nights Were Special. (Goldfinch60) So many memories, so many Saturday nights, in reality pretty much the same...
  March 26th, 2019 14:02
• billy told me (Jon Nakapalau) A sad but beautiful tale of unattainable happiness, lost to the horrors of...
  March 26th, 2019 13:55
• MYSTERY. (Fay Slimm.) Empathy for the crab? Truly a poet\'s response. Much so that a poem is...
  March 22nd, 2019 13:33
• that first morning (Jon Nakapalau) Spring is known for loosing Cupid\'s arrows. Your bowman takes on a flight...
  March 22nd, 2019 13:09
• Set Her Free. (Goldfinch60) All feelings such as this whether written or spoken need to be heard or...
  March 22nd, 2019 11:19
• A Life in Grey (Nicholas Browning) Life , death, the Earth, and Mankind, all intertwine in as many ways as...
  March 22nd, 2019 11:12
• DEFINITIONS (4) (Michael Edwards) \"Ultimatum\" is a fact. On \"Novel\" I have a question, \"Has every...
  March 22nd, 2019 10:55
• CLIMBING. (Fay Slimm.) A lost love through betrayal is more injurious than a loss, and your poem...
  March 20th, 2019 13:38
• How Else Would We Know? (Nicholas Browning) Finding the right words aye, that\'s the rub. Is it art, if I change...
  March 19th, 2019 16:11
• WAVERING. (Fay Slimm.) Billions of people in the world, each with their own idea of reality. It...
  March 19th, 2019 15:52
• CAGE AND CREED (Michael Edwards) What do they do for an encore? Your poem says it all. My only question...
  March 19th, 2019 15:43
• Intimidating Senryu. (Goldfinch60) A Senryu for those who have attempted this form. It can be...
  March 19th, 2019 15:35
• Adonais (Jo March) An excellent tribute poem. From what I know of his life and works it seems...
  March 19th, 2019 15:31
• Solemn Revelations (WL Schuett) Wonderful words, indeed, and an inspiring remembrance. \"Intimacy with no...
  March 12th, 2019 19:00
• Living the Day. (Goldfinch60) Inspiring words of wisdom. Optimism with a sense of logic. Words to live...
  March 9th, 2019 12:17
• MARCH 1st 2019 (Michael Edwards) Brilliant and lovely poetry, the real thing. Smoothness, imagery, and...
  March 9th, 2019 12:13
• Searching for Peace (Sunshinefalling) Powerful words. Also frightening. You etch a very sad picture of one\'s...
  March 9th, 2019 12:09
• let me tell you a story (Jon Nakapalau) Love it. Absolute truth. Today everyone has a story, and the word...
  March 9th, 2019 12:02
• Why (Purdy61) I see a lost love here, but I also see some poetic ability. \"Falling...
  March 8th, 2019 11:24
• how many times (Jon Nakapalau) Very thought-provoking. Just what is it that people are seeking when they...
  March 8th, 2019 11:17
• Boudoir (Neville) What a room, what a scene, What a moment in time. Youth squanders many a...
  March 8th, 2019 10:56
• BIRD-TALK.. (Fay Slimm.) We are in the midst of Snowstorms here. I\'ll be lucky to see a Penguin,...
  March 8th, 2019 10:44
• Church Swansong. (Goldfinch60) Nice little song of a swan, GF 60. Looks like he took a swan dive when he...
  March 8th, 2019 10:30
• HER VEINS (Michael Edwards) The cartoon is almost too close to reality. The poem ; I like the...
  March 8th, 2019 10:05
• TOFFEE AND COFFEE (Michael Edwards) I\'m sure you can get Toffee Coffee at Starbucks, without any sogginess....
  March 7th, 2019 22:34
• ARDOUR. (Fay Slimm.) Lusty and bawdy, like rolling in the clover. Oooooh....such anti Victorian...
  March 7th, 2019 22:22
• RICIN\'S NICE (Michael Edwards) To the point, shouldn\'t there be \"Up\" and \"Down\" arrows. At least...
  March 6th, 2019 09:15
• INSIDE ME. (Fay Slimm.) Life hardens us all. Better to be the rock and not the bug, Remember that...
  March 5th, 2019 17:15
• mr. blue man (Jon Nakapalau) \"Blue skies, nothing but blue skies.\" We all get checked on every day,...
  March 5th, 2019 17:06
• Flower. (Goldfinch60) Enjoyed this little uprising of a poem. Interesting interaction between...
  March 5th, 2019 16:53
• YOU DO NOT SEE (Michael Edwards) Bingo, another winner. East vs. West. The fleeing Sun drops for the night,...
  March 5th, 2019 16:45
• TO THE SANDMAN (Fay Slimm.) Most nights my wife does not sleep well, up and down a million times, so I...
  March 4th, 2019 13:22
• I Am That Guy (Neville) Imagination is what makes the poet and the storyteller what they are. All...
  March 4th, 2019 13:08
• MOPPING UP (Michael Edwards) Humor for a Monday, with a cartoon and two funny shorties. Got us laughing...
  March 4th, 2019 12:54
• Paper Cuts (Neville) Faceless, paper dolls are truly dangerous to a man\'s heart. However, with...
  March 3rd, 2019 16:48
• Valley on the Hill. (Goldfinch60) The older, the longer the \"UP\" becomes. Confusing choice of name, \"The...
  March 3rd, 2019 14:12
• A COUPLE MORE (Michael Edwards) Tears of happiness for the sleeping Vicar? Or is it the resignation? ...
  March 3rd, 2019 14:04
• The Last Hurt (Neville) Sooner or later heartbreak finds us all. Love\'s darker side leaves a...
  March 2nd, 2019 21:18
• SOLO. (Fay Slimm.) A look to the sea for the hope of a returning lover, a classic image, that...
  February 27th, 2019 20:31
• Shadow of the Arrow (WL Schuett) We all evaluate our lives at one time or another. Could we have achieved...
  February 27th, 2019 20:15
• Alone (Gigilovesfood) Absolutely painful loneliness expressed here. Very dramatic presentation....
  February 26th, 2019 22:48
• seven years (Laurenroe) They say \"Time heals all\" , it\'s not entirely true, but as time passes...
  February 21st, 2019 20:35
• My Raft (Hpoetry) As I see this analogy: The raft (your heart) you have spent time and labor...
  January 29th, 2019 16:25
• The Tin Man Laments (Jon Nakapalau) He became human. Shortly thereafter, a Tin Lizzy dumped him for an...
  January 29th, 2019 15:50
• sitting on the edge (Jon Nakapalau) Psychologists just released a study saying that frequent visits to the...
  January 29th, 2019 15:42
• everything flies away (Jon Nakapalau) To me, Time is like a raging river carrying us along. It can\'t be stopped...
  January 29th, 2019 15:35
• salisbury steak tv dinner (Jon Nakapalau) It\'s never as advertised. Even the lowliest T.V. dinner can breach the...
  January 29th, 2019 15:23
• HOPING. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful. The Natural Cycles: the seasons, life/death - if we make it...
  January 23rd, 2019 19:24
• Dali’s Eyes (Neville) A terrific poem. It speaks the desire of every poet. To take the \"breath...
  January 1st, 2019 20:31
• As white as the winter (Joanna Garrido) Sometimes it takes enormous courage to turn and run. Why do people make...
  December 30th, 2018 18:51
• OLD INTO NEW. (Fay Slimm.) Well chosen wording of Nature\'s changing environs. Always...
  December 30th, 2018 18:45
• Rough Sketched & True (Neville) Whether it becomes a completed painting or not it will leave a vision in...
  December 30th, 2018 18:37
• Free (Jaayx3) This seems very personal, very real. You say all the things one would say...
  December 30th, 2018 17:48
• No Longer (Jaayx3) A friendship that is ending, with no chance of resurrection. Perhaps,...
  December 29th, 2018 19:10
• Secrets of the Field (Neville) A field filled with feelings. A harvest of Love and rape. A history of...
  December 29th, 2018 19:02
• A Cold Kiss on Pont Neuf (Jim Yates) A beautiful reminiscence. I believe we\'ve all felt that \"cold kiss\"...
  August 22nd, 2018 23:11
• NOW-NESS. (Fay Slimm.) LIve in the moment. Make every \"now-ness\" a \"WOW-ness.\" Beautiful and...
  August 18th, 2018 22:57
• A Journey to Forever and Always (HangingbyaHalo) Beautiful! A vivid description of Love for the ages. A \"journey\" as you...
  August 18th, 2018 15:36
• She eyed the world... (Crystal Hope) Terrific, escapism at its best. Imagination in flight, expressed in the...
  August 9th, 2018 16:10
• gospel (Izzi Lynn) Izzi - Wow! what a powerful message. Your writing, your form of...
  August 9th, 2018 16:04
• What is Love? (Goldfinch60) I, too, believe Love is ethereal, not of this world. Science cannot...
  August 6th, 2018 14:52
• SPIRITS NOW ENTWINED (Michael Edwards) Who knows where true love is to be found? Watching a bee-hive seems now,...
  August 6th, 2018 14:43
• half of me (Cheyenneherren) A lost love can be a heartbreak, as if you can no longer exist, but the...
  August 6th, 2018 14:31
• Love Notes (Vela) Great imagery. Loved it. \"My skin still remembers,\" a love from long...
  August 5th, 2018 12:13
• WINTER (Michael Edwards) I like this one. Michael. The passing of Winter into the nether regions....
  June 2nd, 2018 15:16
• My Sails are Luffing (Lorna) Brilliant metaphor! A simple but powerful poem. Life, boats, wind , and...
  April 30th, 2018 11:59
• at home (Onepauly) Just for the fun of it? A great flow of words and rhymes. No particular...
  April 29th, 2018 11:05
• FIRST BALLAD. (Fay Slimm.) I will join the chorus and say that this is a well crafted piece. The link...
  April 7th, 2018 21:53
• Fulfilled. (Fay Slimm.) Great actress, great quote, great poem, \"Love is, self-fulfilled.\" Love...
  January 11th, 2018 16:06
• THIS LAND HE CALLS HIS HOME (Michael Edwards) Excellent write, reminded me the shore I live near. Rocky, misty at times,...
  January 11th, 2018 15:51
• Winter Sounds. (Fay Slimm.) \"Winter sounds saddest.....when seen from behind,\" is a beautiful and...
  January 8th, 2018 16:14
• selfish (Here) It\'s been said (probably by me) that before you can love another, you...
  December 29th, 2017 22:00
• Life (Misplacedpoems) I find a lot of wisdom and understanding in this poem: \"Where none of us...
  December 28th, 2017 18:06
• Inspirational (MaddieJ) I like the fact that this is an \"Inspirational\" poem. In particular the...
  December 23rd, 2017 19:34
• Seduction. (Fay Slimm.) The call of the siren, not to be taken lightly, but with extreme caution,...
  December 7th, 2017 17:20
• Sexual Healing. (Wallace) The world as one big Love-In. If it could only be, would it not be heaven....
  December 7th, 2017 16:59
• NEW RESOLVE (Michael Edwards) Well, he finally won her heart, and putting all the troubles of the past...
  December 7th, 2017 16:54
• “The Stars are Ruthless to Me” (AlinaVanderson) More than just beautiful words, a wonderful expression of love. The...
  December 3rd, 2017 18:45