Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• Enmeshed (Fay Slimm.) The Spider\'s Web, often the intention of the phrase is indicate a...
  September 27th, 2020 18:49
• Discarded 2 (Neville) What happens to all the thoughts that have been? Some are memorialized in...
  September 27th, 2020 18:41
• SO IT\'S SUNDAY (Michael Edwards) I find this humorous. I may have done this or something similar, like...
  September 27th, 2020 18:25
• Salvation Seasons (Orchidee) Very good, thoroughly enjoyed this poem, Reminded me of \"Turn, Turn....
  September 27th, 2020 18:14
• Compromise (Fay Slimm.) Love\'s renewal, bringing \"bluebirds\" of tomorrow, along with an...
  September 26th, 2020 14:21
• Sleeper (Neville) Self sacrifice for what? A blatant waste of human life. A sad story indeed...
  September 26th, 2020 13:58
• All the Ends of Me (Neville) \"Bruised\" it seems by a shameless lady of \"sailors and serfs n by...
  September 25th, 2020 19:09
• Grown.. (Poetic Dan) Watch out, she will soften your heart. You gotta love it, though. Cute as...
  September 20th, 2020 11:28
• Hippie Am I. (Goldfinch60) I must agree with the sentiment of this poem. Love is surely the answer....
  September 20th, 2020 11:24
• Bruises (Neville) Wow, such deviant love, or abuse, but here seems a mutual endeavor, yet...
  September 20th, 2020 11:13
• Absolutely Stunning! (Goldfinch60) Beautiful, sometimes Nature provides a work of art for us to enjoy. Great...
  September 5th, 2020 12:23
• EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (3) (Michael Edwards) Yeah, my Grandmother had one of those. Also I remember my Father saying...
  September 5th, 2020 12:19
• EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (2) (Michael Edwards) Took a while but it finally dawned on me, the meaning in your drawing. The...
  September 4th, 2020 12:02
• A Fragment (Jarcher54) Symbols abound in this beautiful scene of conquering grief: Roses. leaf,...
  September 3rd, 2020 10:13
• Abundance. (Fay Slimm.) Living here, this is the beginning of what most here call the best time of...
  September 3rd, 2020 10:07
• No Return. (Goldfinch60) How many times to we try returning only to face great disappointment. Like...
  September 3rd, 2020 09:56
• EFFORTLESS WHIMSY (1) (Michael Edwards) Is this not the very definition of the sexes? I truly laughed out loud...
  September 3rd, 2020 09:51
• Decisions & Choices (Neville) The map of life looks more like a spider\'s web than a straight line....
  September 3rd, 2020 09:45
• Over The Hill (Neville) Time to break new ground. Nothing grows on plowed land, except wild...
  August 31st, 2020 16:56
• Simple as That (Neville) Straight forward truth. Can\'t be said any better. - Phil A.
  August 31st, 2020 08:58
• Endsong (Neville) Time just keeps on rolling. Fate, if one chooses to believe in...
  August 30th, 2020 22:09
• New Appetite. (Fay Slimm.) Life is a series of changes. One must keep going through it all. \"And the...
  August 27th, 2020 12:35
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (9-12) (Michael Edwards) A lovely bunch of idioms. \"Cowards,\" are\" tough\" to \"get going.\" ...
  August 27th, 2020 12:21
• Modern Love (Neville) Much better title, it adds to the surprise. Here\'s a take on this with...
  August 27th, 2020 10:56
• Invasion. (Fay Slimm.) Light fascinates. Brings forth all the color our eyes can perceive. Your...
  August 26th, 2020 18:34
• The Day The Carousel Stopped (DesertWords) My first visit here. I kind of like this poem. Assuming it about the day...
  August 26th, 2020 18:29
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (5-8) (Michael Edwards) Someone once told me, \"It was so quiet you could hear a mouse drop.\" I...
  August 26th, 2020 16:09
• Summer’s End (Neville) The end of summer, isolated and alone, with only darkening days to look...
  August 26th, 2020 16:01
• Drop Me off @ the Next Stop (Neville) The Bus driver says Destiny stops for no man. Growing old means you have a...
  August 25th, 2020 10:06
• Bohemian Rhapsody. (Goldfinch60) Too many trips around the Sun, most of my favorites have melted into...
  August 25th, 2020 09:56
• IDIOMS FOR IDIOTS (1-4) (Michael Edwards) Yuk, yuk, chuckle, chuckle. Made me laugh. Thanks for a good start to my...
  August 25th, 2020 09:46
• If. (Fay Slimm.) Well, I simply love this one, not just the emotions it conveys, but the...
  August 25th, 2020 09:42
• Full Spate. (Fay Slimm.) It certainly is true,\" the nearer\" we \"come\" the more intense each day...
  August 24th, 2020 12:38
• Sun Shy (Neville) I wonder if she wandered and was tickled by the fella, when he wondrously...
  August 24th, 2020 12:31
• Tosca Acrostic. (Goldfinch60) A very moving write. Opera is a fine blend of dramatic storytelling and...
  August 24th, 2020 11:50
• Sky Hungry (Neville) I was airborne with you on this one. \"hanging on the very edge of...
  August 21st, 2020 14:50
• Best (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful words, Fay. Is love a once in a lifetime event? Or can it...
  August 19th, 2020 17:08
• NO LITTER   (Michael Edwards) Cartoon - A great one-liner. Poem - Has two identical ends, just like the...
  August 19th, 2020 17:00
• Natures Glory. (Goldfinch60) They are red because of the moisture in the air bending the light, and so...
  August 19th, 2020 16:04
• A Mermaids Tale (Neville) A tail of fantasy, breaking through the waves, instilling flight...
  August 18th, 2020 13:56
• Wax Butterflies (Neville) Wax or otherwise, the life of a \"butterfly\" is short, and I read that...
  August 17th, 2020 16:45
• Knocking On (Neville) No need for filters, we know how you feel. \"Rejection\" seems to be the...
  August 16th, 2020 11:54
• Theory of Endurance (Neville) Life is but a series of changes. Nothing is permanent, including time. To...
  August 15th, 2020 12:19
• Autumn-Imbued. (Fay Slimm.) There\'s nothing like a quiet beach on a clear autumn day. Just the Sun,...
  August 15th, 2020 11:59
• Steph at Thirty. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful tribute to a granddaughter of whom you must be most proud....
  August 15th, 2020 11:55
• Remains. (Fay Slimm.) Wow Fay! why so Dark? I have a daughter that is a Ghost Hunter. belongs to...
  August 14th, 2020 14:57
• Maybe Old but Not Daft (Neville) The ocean draws many people to her. My wife and I have both spent our...
  August 14th, 2020 12:55
• Times of Youth. (Goldfinch60) Yeah! and \"Amen!\" \"Glorious times\" indeed. I\'m sure half the world...
  August 14th, 2020 12:42
• It Rained. (Goldfinch60) A river\'s flow is like water under the bridge. Which has absolutely...
  August 13th, 2020 13:54
• Beaten (Neville) Once there was a woman, cheap as a penny whistle, men played her like a...
  August 13th, 2020 13:34
• Who Said ! (Fay Slimm.) I do not want to age like wine, only to be drunk at the end, or cheese...
  August 13th, 2020 13:20
• i’ve come to realize (Jackeggz) You are the standard others must meet, not the other way around. Before...
  August 12th, 2020 10:43
• That Summer. (Fay Slimm.) Summer by the sea is a great romantic setting. Your poem contains some...
  August 12th, 2020 09:53
• Of Kept Men & Their Secrets (Neville) A personification of the ocean? \"She\" draws men to her, \"drives\" them...
  August 12th, 2020 09:46
• Back to School. (Goldfinch60) It makes more sense to send the politicians back to school,- Phil A.
  August 12th, 2020 09:33
• DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (2) (Michael Edwards) Music is a stimulant: Energizing the nervous system, exciting the brain,...
  August 12th, 2020 09:30
• Fallen Leaves Behind (Neville) They say you pay a price for beauty, but I doubt they had leaves in mind....
  August 9th, 2020 19:13
• I Spied. (Fay Slimm.) A very delightful scribble, Fay. Some great imagery. Lines of poetic...
  August 9th, 2020 18:59
• Carpéing Diem. (Fay Slimm.) A beautiful poem Fay. It makes one want to walk the shoreline once again....
  August 8th, 2020 11:49
• Sun Drops (Neville) All Moonshine truly is , is reflected Sunshine, but the folklore it\'s...
  August 8th, 2020 11:39
• Nirvana (Sylviasearcher) I hate myself, I hate the things I\'ve done, but I want to live. Sounds...
  August 8th, 2020 11:13
• Something in the Air (Neville) Nicely spoken Nev. No matter where you go these days, you see the effects....
  August 7th, 2020 10:54
• NO LONGER HEARD (Michael Edwards) Just as I clicked to read this I was perusing Emerson\'s \"Threnody.\" I...
  August 5th, 2020 16:54
• Love-Light. (Fay Slimm.) \"Love light\" conquers all, \"ce-la-vie,\" \"no one\'s to blame,\"...
  August 4th, 2020 15:22
• Sidewalk Cracks II (SheWasTheSun) I just finished Part 1 and now I\'m crushed. I hope this is fiction and...
  August 3rd, 2020 22:11
• Sidewalk Cracks (SheWasTheSun) True Love \"lives in the sidewalk cracks,\" between the lines, and many...
  August 3rd, 2020 22:06
• Catzzzzzzz. (Fay Slimm.) Cats - Too mysterious to comprehend. From Lions and Tigers to household...
  July 30th, 2020 09:21
• Chasing the word (Sylviasearcher) Words flatter poetic beauty created. collected, structured, written,...
  July 30th, 2020 09:13
• Imagination and Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Imagination and dreams are different only in the control. We control...
  July 30th, 2020 09:03
• English Weather (Aa Harvey) And don\'t forget the wind. I find that here in New England, there is...
  July 29th, 2020 21:28
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Odes indeed. Raindrops upon window panes, become a song of praise. Poets...
  July 29th, 2020 21:23
• Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor) To lose your father at such a young age is tragedy for sure, but your...
  July 29th, 2020 21:17
• Struck Down. (Goldfinch60) It just goes to prove that Golf should never be taken seriously.What with...
  July 29th, 2020 19:32
• HALF EMPTY (Michael Edwards) Bottoms up! Make mine a Guiness. Beautiful drawing. Love the comedy of...
  July 29th, 2020 19:17
• In Error. (Fay Slimm.) This world would be a beautiful place if it weren\'t for people. Think of...
  July 28th, 2020 09:20
• LOVE IS MANIFEST (Michael Edwards) A clearly defined image of peace and harmony, of love that lasts through...
  July 28th, 2020 09:03
• Two Weeks in July (Neville) Reminded me of the song, \"We\'ll sing in the Sunshine...........Then...
  July 27th, 2020 11:10
• If Only. (Fay Slimm.) And thus you did. The music of Nature is compelling and poets thrive on...
  July 27th, 2020 10:59
• Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60) Oh so true, GF60. Many things to remember and many to try and...
  July 27th, 2020 10:47
• Time (Justagirl) Write it all down girl. Your thoughts, your dreams, whatever you think...
  July 22nd, 2020 22:38
• NUTS (Michael Edwards) Liked your \"nutty\" bit of humor. Nut allergies are serious business....
  July 22nd, 2020 12:06
• Non-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, what a very poignant write. The trials and tribulation of love and...
  July 22nd, 2020 11:59
• Refilled. (Goldfinch60) Life is not like a glass in any way, but I agree that a life can be...
  July 22nd, 2020 11:51
• walk away (Dusk arising) They say Home is where the heart is,\" but it\'s not always true. Home...
  July 22nd, 2020 11:45
• Captured. (Fay Slimm.) This is a fine take on one of Nature\'s great forces. We try to harness...
  July 21st, 2020 13:07
• An English Pub (Emptypot) Is this the one in Poynings? I think your poem describes it well, but so...
  July 16th, 2020 21:57
• Mullins Yard (Neville) I read this as aging out or becoming obsolete. Or maybe you just like...
  July 15th, 2020 15:23
• AGEING COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards) Well, these two lines are a pair to behold and very alluring since you...
  July 15th, 2020 15:07
• A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards) Maybe you spelled \"Steel\" wrong? With this guy it ought to be...
  July 14th, 2020 13:41
• Ego\'s Down (Neville) In my first introduction to Marmite I spread it on the bread like peanut...
  July 13th, 2020 13:48
• See Success. (Fay Slimm.) One line truly stunned me - \"stand on the edge of seen and unseen.\" A...
  July 13th, 2020 13:30
• A Secret. (Fay Slimm.) The mind receives the message, but the heart interprets it, All those...
  July 12th, 2020 11:28
• AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5) (Michael Edwards) I see blue skies with some sun peeking through over a mountain range and a...
  July 12th, 2020 11:15
• Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.) Clandestine love affairs leave their mark to be carried through the years....
  July 10th, 2020 14:51
• AGEING COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) The painting and poem do not belong together. It\'s funny (the poem) and...
  July 10th, 2020 14:46
• she (Dusk arising) Homeward bound to where the enchantress eclipses the enchantment. The...
  July 10th, 2020 14:39
• Why I Do It (ForeverJesus7) In every instance ask yourself, \"What would Jesus do?\" - Phil A.
  July 8th, 2020 22:42
• Treasured. (Fay Slimm.) I know it is just \"me,\' but your phrasing of the first two stanzas had...
  July 8th, 2020 13:50
• Untenable. (Fay Slimm.) Love and obsession -They say the greatest sex organ is the brain, so it\'s...
  July 7th, 2020 15:13
• AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) Both very clever. Clever art, clever humor. If only they had grown onions...
  July 7th, 2020 15:02