Comments on community poems by MendedFences27
- A Mermaids Tale (Neville)
A tail of fantasy, breaking through the waves, instilling flight...
August 18th, 2020 13:56 - Wax Butterflies (Neville)
Wax or otherwise, the life of a \"butterfly\" is short, and I read that...
August 17th, 2020 16:45 - Knocking On (Neville)
No need for filters, we know how you feel. \"Rejection\" seems to be the...
August 16th, 2020 11:54 - Theory of Endurance (Neville)
Life is but a series of changes. Nothing is permanent, including time.
To...
August 15th, 2020 12:19 - Autumn-Imbued. (Fay Slimm.)
There\'s nothing like a quiet beach on a clear autumn day. Just the Sun,...
August 15th, 2020 11:59 - Steph at Thirty. (Goldfinch60)
A wonderful tribute to a granddaughter of whom you must be most proud....
August 15th, 2020 11:55 - Remains. (Fay Slimm.)
Wow Fay! why so Dark? I have a daughter that is a Ghost Hunter. belongs to...
August 14th, 2020 14:57 - Maybe Old but Not Daft (Neville)
The ocean draws many people to her.
My wife and I have both spent our...
August 14th, 2020 12:55 - Times of Youth. (Goldfinch60)
Yeah! and \"Amen!\" \"Glorious times\" indeed. I\'m sure half the world...
August 14th, 2020 12:42 - It Rained. (Goldfinch60)
A river\'s flow is like water under the bridge. Which has absolutely...
August 13th, 2020 13:54 - Beaten (Neville)
Once there was a woman, cheap as a penny whistle, men played her like a...
August 13th, 2020 13:34 - Who Said ! (Fay Slimm.)
I do not want to age like wine, only to be drunk at the end, or cheese...
August 13th, 2020 13:20 - i’ve come to realize (Jackeggz)
You are the standard others must meet, not the other way around.
Before...
August 12th, 2020 10:43 - That Summer. (Fay Slimm.)
Summer by the sea is a great romantic setting. Your poem contains some...
August 12th, 2020 09:53 - Of Kept Men & Their Secrets (Neville)
A personification of the ocean? \"She\" draws men to her, \"drives\" them...
August 12th, 2020 09:46 - Back to School. (Goldfinch60)
It makes more sense to send the politicians back to school,- Phil A.
August 12th, 2020 09:33 - DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (2) (Michael Edwards)
Music is a stimulant: Energizing the nervous system, exciting the brain,...
August 12th, 2020 09:30 - Fallen Leaves Behind (Neville)
They say you pay a price for beauty, but I doubt they had leaves in mind....
August 9th, 2020 19:13 - I Spied. (Fay Slimm.)
A very delightful scribble, Fay. Some great imagery. Lines of poetic...
August 9th, 2020 18:59 - Carpéing Diem. (Fay Slimm.)
A beautiful poem Fay. It makes one want to walk the shoreline once again....
August 8th, 2020 11:49 - Sun Drops (Neville)
All Moonshine truly is , is reflected Sunshine, but the folklore it\'s...
August 8th, 2020 11:39 - Nirvana (Sylviasearcher)
I hate myself, I hate the things I\'ve done, but I want to live. Sounds...
August 8th, 2020 11:13 - Something in the Air (Neville)
Nicely spoken Nev. No matter where you go these days, you see the effects....
August 7th, 2020 10:54 - NO LONGER HEARD (Michael Edwards)
Just as I clicked to read this I was perusing Emerson\'s \"Threnody.\"
I...
August 5th, 2020 16:54 - Love-Light. (Fay Slimm.)
\"Love light\" conquers all, \"ce-la-vie,\" \"no one\'s to blame,\"...
August 4th, 2020 15:22 - Sidewalk Cracks II (SheWasTheSun)
I just finished Part 1 and now I\'m crushed. I hope this is fiction and...
August 3rd, 2020 22:11 - Sidewalk Cracks (SheWasTheSun)
True Love \"lives in the sidewalk cracks,\" between the lines, and many...
August 3rd, 2020 22:06 - Catzzzzzzz. (Fay Slimm.)
Cats - Too mysterious to comprehend. From Lions and Tigers to household...
July 30th, 2020 09:21 - Chasing the word (Sylviasearcher)
Words flatter
poetic beauty created.
collected, structured, written,...
July 30th, 2020 09:13 - Imagination and Dreams. (Goldfinch60)
Imagination and dreams are different only in the control. We control...
July 30th, 2020 09:03 - English Weather (Aa Harvey)
And don\'t forget the wind. I find that here in New England, there is...
July 29th, 2020 21:28 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
Odes indeed. Raindrops upon window panes, become a song of praise. Poets...
July 29th, 2020 21:23 - Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor)
To lose your father at such a young age is tragedy for sure, but your...
July 29th, 2020 21:17 - Struck Down. (Goldfinch60)
It just goes to prove that Golf should never be taken seriously.What with...
July 29th, 2020 19:32 - HALF EMPTY (Michael Edwards)
Bottoms up! Make mine a Guiness. Beautiful drawing. Love the comedy of...
July 29th, 2020 19:17 - In Error. (Fay Slimm.)
This world would be a beautiful place if it weren\'t for people.
Think of...
July 28th, 2020 09:20 - LOVE IS MANIFEST (Michael Edwards)
A clearly defined image of peace and harmony, of love that lasts through...
July 28th, 2020 09:03 - Two Weeks in July (Neville)
Reminded me of the song, \"We\'ll sing in the Sunshine...........Then...
July 27th, 2020 11:10 - If Only. (Fay Slimm.)
And thus you did. The music of Nature is compelling and poets thrive on...
July 27th, 2020 10:59 - Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60)
Oh so true, GF60. Many things to remember and many to try and...
July 27th, 2020 10:47 - Time (Justagirl)
Write it all down girl. Your thoughts, your dreams, whatever you think...
July 22nd, 2020 22:38 - NUTS (Michael Edwards)
Liked your \"nutty\" bit of humor. Nut allergies are serious business....
July 22nd, 2020 12:06 - Non-Sound. (Fay Slimm.)
Fay, what a very poignant write. The trials and tribulation of love and...
July 22nd, 2020 11:59 - Refilled. (Goldfinch60)
Life is not like a glass in any way, but I agree that a life can be...
July 22nd, 2020 11:51 - walk away (Dusk arising)
They say
Home is where the heart is,\" but it\'s not always true. Home...
July 22nd, 2020 11:45 - Captured. (Fay Slimm.)
This is a fine take on one of Nature\'s great forces. We try to harness...
July 21st, 2020 13:07 - An English Pub (Emptypot)
Is this the one in Poynings?
I think your poem describes it well, but so...
July 16th, 2020 21:57 - Mullins Yard (Neville)
I read this as aging out or becoming obsolete. Or maybe you just like...
July 15th, 2020 15:23 - AGEING COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards)
Well, these two lines are a pair to behold
and very alluring since you...
July 15th, 2020 15:07 - A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards)
Maybe you spelled \"Steel\" wrong? With this guy it ought to be...
July 14th, 2020 13:41 - Ego\'s Down (Neville)
In my first introduction to Marmite I spread it on the bread like peanut...
July 13th, 2020 13:48 - See Success. (Fay Slimm.)
One line truly stunned me - \"stand on the edge of seen and unseen.\"
A...
July 13th, 2020 13:30 - A Secret. (Fay Slimm.)
The mind receives the message, but the heart interprets it, All those...
July 12th, 2020 11:28 - AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5) (Michael Edwards)
I see blue skies with some sun peeking through over a mountain range and a...
July 12th, 2020 11:15 - Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.)
Clandestine love affairs leave their mark to be carried through the years....
July 10th, 2020 14:51 - AGEING COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards)
The painting and poem do not belong together. It\'s funny (the poem) and...
July 10th, 2020 14:46 - she (Dusk arising)
Homeward bound to where the enchantress eclipses the enchantment. The...
July 10th, 2020 14:39 - Why I Do It (ForeverJesus7)
In every instance ask yourself, \"What would Jesus do?\" - Phil A.
July 8th, 2020 22:42 - Treasured. (Fay Slimm.)
I know it is just \"me,\' but your phrasing of the first two stanzas had...
July 8th, 2020 13:50 - Untenable. (Fay Slimm.)
Love and obsession -They say the greatest sex organ is the brain, so it\'s...
July 7th, 2020 15:13 - AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Both very clever. Clever art, clever humor. If only they had grown onions...
July 7th, 2020 15:02 - Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.)
A very unique form of expression. A walk in the woods is becomes...
July 6th, 2020 17:16 - White Violets (Neville)
**** \'Four stars\" for this one, \"pearlescent\" or otherwise....
July 6th, 2020 17:00 - Wonder. (Fay Slimm.)
I was just wondering how the beauty of this small gem can speak so loudly...
June 19th, 2020 21:58 - Another 575 (Michael Edwards)
Too many times was I bitten and felt that jolt, which explains a...
June 19th, 2020 21:49 - Exciting. (Fay Slimm.)
So beautiful Fay. Your words are more powerful than the photo. Reading it...
June 18th, 2020 13:30 - DESERTED NOW (Michael Edwards)
Let me add some more praise upon this poem and artwork. \"Fire-light...
June 17th, 2020 18:25 - Caught. (Fay Slimm.)
This is brilliant Fay. I\'ve never looked at bubbles in this way. Surely...
June 15th, 2020 21:23 - Glorious Din. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautiful poem Fay. I love poems of nature. This one rings true, as we...
June 12th, 2020 18:24 - Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.)
Of course there is silent-speak. Its a raising of an eyebrow, a roll of...
June 11th, 2020 15:48 - How do I....... (Suresh)
Many questions that we all think about during the course of a...
June 10th, 2020 16:16 - Welcome to my head at times (Paris Margaret)
The best of times, the worst of times. The paradox of humanity. Each life...
June 10th, 2020 12:18 - Destined. (Fay Slimm.)
Revealing a sad loss, yet ever so sweetly. Your poem cries for the oft...
June 10th, 2020 10:54 - Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.)
Dreams - are they just imagination functioning while we are sleeping,...
June 9th, 2020 22:34 - in a place he wants to be (Dusk arising)
A great message for Vets of any era. Will their spirit live on in future...
June 9th, 2020 22:24 - Unbecoming (SheWasTheSun)
Before we can love anyone or anything we must first love ourselves.Once we...
June 9th, 2020 22:18 - Climax (Neville)
This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or...
June 9th, 2020 22:10 - Upon the Morrow (Neville)
Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is...
June 6th, 2020 17:21 - The Sorriest of Words (Neville)
\"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and...
June 4th, 2020 18:58 - Skien (Neville)
Well, technically it\'s still Spring, or maybe for some unknown reason...
May 31st, 2020 18:01 - I am He (Kevin Michael Bloor)
One and only true love, A rare and precious thing. Bound to last forever....
April 29th, 2020 18:55 - Closeness. (Fay Slimm.)
O.M.G. Love, Music, and the Afterlife. Interwoven into this short question...
April 29th, 2020 18:49 - Wishing for More. (Goldfinch60)
Somewhere in your poem is the sense of hope. It seems we are born with it...
April 29th, 2020 18:38 - COMICAL COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards)
Penguins actually do surf. Poor Willy has to get his waves right. Maybe he...
April 29th, 2020 18:32 - escape (JustABird)
\"she rocks back and forth,\" I see an older woman, perhaps beset with...
April 28th, 2020 17:42 - After the Clapping (Sylviasearcher)
I think they deserve a round of applause; putting their lives on the line...
April 28th, 2020 16:30 - Battle. (Fay Slimm.)
The daily \"battle\" of Night vs. Day and the glamorous skies that result....
April 28th, 2020 16:15 - Pot of Gold. (Goldfinch60)
A very deep thought; Life\'s reflection as the final reward. You have...
April 28th, 2020 16:09 - COMICAL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards)
Time for a shot of November third. I think your penguins have more common...
April 28th, 2020 16:02 - No Pot of Gold (Neville)
He who seeks gold at the end of a rainbow treks a very long journey.
When...
April 27th, 2020 19:46 - NEVER HAVE I (Michael Edwards)
A good bit of fun, this. What with helmets, parrots, and eggs on one\'s...
April 11th, 2020 13:19 - Ache (SerenWise)
I like this poem. The metaphors and similes are creative and relate to one...
April 6th, 2020 22:24 - Cliff (Hedy)
It is a dangerous edge upon which an artist such as yourself must walk. A...
April 6th, 2020 22:13 - Take Me. (Fay Slimm.)
Stay strong, Fay. \"And this too will pass.\" Sleep can sometimes carry...
April 6th, 2020 22:01 - Hello! (Goldfinch60)
Hello! Hello! Hello!
My god why would you name you dog that? She must get...
April 6th, 2020 21:53 - STIFF ZIP (Michael Edwards)
This magical anointment is readily available at your local alipterium or...
April 6th, 2020 21:47 - Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville)
A story well spoken. The book of love is like a novel written in pain and...
April 6th, 2020 19:45 - oh, my darling (Queer-with-a-pen)
This poem may be short, but it says a lot. It exudes the melancholy/sorrow...
April 4th, 2020 16:22 - THIS SENTENCE - A SELECTION OF MONOSUCHS (Michael Edwards)
I began at the end and came to the conclusion that the end begins where...
April 4th, 2020 15:55 - Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.)
This moment of onsetting worry, as she traveled homeward in dread of the...
April 2nd, 2020 15:26
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