Comments on community poems by MendedFences27

• A Mermaids Tale (Neville) A tail of fantasy, breaking through the waves, instilling flight...
  August 18th, 2020 13:56
• Wax Butterflies (Neville) Wax or otherwise, the life of a \"butterfly\" is short, and I read that...
  August 17th, 2020 16:45
• Knocking On (Neville) No need for filters, we know how you feel. \"Rejection\" seems to be the...
  August 16th, 2020 11:54
• Theory of Endurance (Neville) Life is but a series of changes. Nothing is permanent, including time. To...
  August 15th, 2020 12:19
• Autumn-Imbued. (Fay Slimm.) There\'s nothing like a quiet beach on a clear autumn day. Just the Sun,...
  August 15th, 2020 11:59
• Steph at Thirty. (Goldfinch60) A wonderful tribute to a granddaughter of whom you must be most proud....
  August 15th, 2020 11:55
• Remains. (Fay Slimm.) Wow Fay! why so Dark? I have a daughter that is a Ghost Hunter. belongs to...
  August 14th, 2020 14:57
• Maybe Old but Not Daft (Neville) The ocean draws many people to her. My wife and I have both spent our...
  August 14th, 2020 12:55
• Times of Youth. (Goldfinch60) Yeah! and \"Amen!\" \"Glorious times\" indeed. I\'m sure half the world...
  August 14th, 2020 12:42
• It Rained. (Goldfinch60) A river\'s flow is like water under the bridge. Which has absolutely...
  August 13th, 2020 13:54
• Beaten (Neville) Once there was a woman, cheap as a penny whistle, men played her like a...
  August 13th, 2020 13:34
• Who Said ! (Fay Slimm.) I do not want to age like wine, only to be drunk at the end, or cheese...
  August 13th, 2020 13:20
• i’ve come to realize (Jackeggz) You are the standard others must meet, not the other way around. Before...
  August 12th, 2020 10:43
• That Summer. (Fay Slimm.) Summer by the sea is a great romantic setting. Your poem contains some...
  August 12th, 2020 09:53
• Of Kept Men & Their Secrets (Neville) A personification of the ocean? \"She\" draws men to her, \"drives\" them...
  August 12th, 2020 09:46
• Back to School. (Goldfinch60) It makes more sense to send the politicians back to school,- Phil A.
  August 12th, 2020 09:33
• DRAFT FILE CLEAR OUT (2) (Michael Edwards) Music is a stimulant: Energizing the nervous system, exciting the brain,...
  August 12th, 2020 09:30
• Fallen Leaves Behind (Neville) They say you pay a price for beauty, but I doubt they had leaves in mind....
  August 9th, 2020 19:13
• I Spied. (Fay Slimm.) A very delightful scribble, Fay. Some great imagery. Lines of poetic...
  August 9th, 2020 18:59
• Carpéing Diem. (Fay Slimm.) A beautiful poem Fay. It makes one want to walk the shoreline once again....
  August 8th, 2020 11:49
• Sun Drops (Neville) All Moonshine truly is , is reflected Sunshine, but the folklore it\'s...
  August 8th, 2020 11:39
• Nirvana (Sylviasearcher) I hate myself, I hate the things I\'ve done, but I want to live. Sounds...
  August 8th, 2020 11:13
• Something in the Air (Neville) Nicely spoken Nev. No matter where you go these days, you see the effects....
  August 7th, 2020 10:54
• NO LONGER HEARD (Michael Edwards) Just as I clicked to read this I was perusing Emerson\'s \"Threnody.\" I...
  August 5th, 2020 16:54
• Love-Light. (Fay Slimm.) \"Love light\" conquers all, \"ce-la-vie,\" \"no one\'s to blame,\"...
  August 4th, 2020 15:22
• Sidewalk Cracks II (SheWasTheSun) I just finished Part 1 and now I\'m crushed. I hope this is fiction and...
  August 3rd, 2020 22:11
• Sidewalk Cracks (SheWasTheSun) True Love \"lives in the sidewalk cracks,\" between the lines, and many...
  August 3rd, 2020 22:06
• Catzzzzzzz. (Fay Slimm.) Cats - Too mysterious to comprehend. From Lions and Tigers to household...
  July 30th, 2020 09:21
• Chasing the word (Sylviasearcher) Words flatter poetic beauty created. collected, structured, written,...
  July 30th, 2020 09:13
• Imagination and Dreams. (Goldfinch60) Imagination and dreams are different only in the control. We control...
  July 30th, 2020 09:03
• English Weather (Aa Harvey) And don\'t forget the wind. I find that here in New England, there is...
  July 29th, 2020 21:28
• In Transit. (Fay Slimm.) Odes indeed. Raindrops upon window panes, become a song of praise. Poets...
  July 29th, 2020 21:23
• Adonais is Fallen (Kevin Michael Bloor) To lose your father at such a young age is tragedy for sure, but your...
  July 29th, 2020 21:17
• Struck Down. (Goldfinch60) It just goes to prove that Golf should never be taken seriously.What with...
  July 29th, 2020 19:32
• HALF EMPTY (Michael Edwards) Bottoms up! Make mine a Guiness. Beautiful drawing. Love the comedy of...
  July 29th, 2020 19:17
• In Error. (Fay Slimm.) This world would be a beautiful place if it weren\'t for people. Think of...
  July 28th, 2020 09:20
• LOVE IS MANIFEST (Michael Edwards) A clearly defined image of peace and harmony, of love that lasts through...
  July 28th, 2020 09:03
• Two Weeks in July (Neville) Reminded me of the song, \"We\'ll sing in the Sunshine...........Then...
  July 27th, 2020 11:10
• If Only. (Fay Slimm.) And thus you did. The music of Nature is compelling and poets thrive on...
  July 27th, 2020 10:59
• Thinking Back. (Goldfinch60) Oh so true, GF60. Many things to remember and many to try and...
  July 27th, 2020 10:47
• Time (Justagirl) Write it all down girl. Your thoughts, your dreams, whatever you think...
  July 22nd, 2020 22:38
• NUTS (Michael Edwards) Liked your \"nutty\" bit of humor. Nut allergies are serious business....
  July 22nd, 2020 12:06
• Non-Sound. (Fay Slimm.) Fay, what a very poignant write. The trials and tribulation of love and...
  July 22nd, 2020 11:59
• Refilled. (Goldfinch60) Life is not like a glass in any way, but I agree that a life can be...
  July 22nd, 2020 11:51
• walk away (Dusk arising) They say Home is where the heart is,\" but it\'s not always true. Home...
  July 22nd, 2020 11:45
• Captured. (Fay Slimm.) This is a fine take on one of Nature\'s great forces. We try to harness...
  July 21st, 2020 13:07
• An English Pub (Emptypot) Is this the one in Poynings? I think your poem describes it well, but so...
  July 16th, 2020 21:57
• Mullins Yard (Neville) I read this as aging out or becoming obsolete. Or maybe you just like...
  July 15th, 2020 15:23
• AGEING COUPLETS (6) (Michael Edwards) Well, these two lines are a pair to behold and very alluring since you...
  July 15th, 2020 15:07
• A MAN OF STUBBORN STEEL (Michael Edwards) Maybe you spelled \"Steel\" wrong? With this guy it ought to be...
  July 14th, 2020 13:41
• Ego\'s Down (Neville) In my first introduction to Marmite I spread it on the bread like peanut...
  July 13th, 2020 13:48
• See Success. (Fay Slimm.) One line truly stunned me - \"stand on the edge of seen and unseen.\" A...
  July 13th, 2020 13:30
• A Secret. (Fay Slimm.) The mind receives the message, but the heart interprets it, All those...
  July 12th, 2020 11:28
• AGEING COUPLETS (4 & 5) (Michael Edwards) I see blue skies with some sun peeking through over a mountain range and a...
  July 12th, 2020 11:15
• Such Covert. (Fay Slimm.) Clandestine love affairs leave their mark to be carried through the years....
  July 10th, 2020 14:51
• AGEING COUPLETS (3) (Michael Edwards) The painting and poem do not belong together. It\'s funny (the poem) and...
  July 10th, 2020 14:46
• she (Dusk arising) Homeward bound to where the enchantress eclipses the enchantment. The...
  July 10th, 2020 14:39
• Why I Do It (ForeverJesus7) In every instance ask yourself, \"What would Jesus do?\" - Phil A.
  July 8th, 2020 22:42
• Treasured. (Fay Slimm.) I know it is just \"me,\' but your phrasing of the first two stanzas had...
  July 8th, 2020 13:50
• Untenable. (Fay Slimm.) Love and obsession -They say the greatest sex organ is the brain, so it\'s...
  July 7th, 2020 15:13
• AGEING COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) Both very clever. Clever art, clever humor. If only they had grown onions...
  July 7th, 2020 15:02
• Undisturbed. (Fay Slimm.) A very unique form of expression. A walk in the woods is becomes...
  July 6th, 2020 17:16
• White Violets (Neville) **** \'Four stars\" for this one, \"pearlescent\" or otherwise....
  July 6th, 2020 17:00
• Wonder. (Fay Slimm.) I was just wondering how the beauty of this small gem can speak so loudly...
  June 19th, 2020 21:58
• Another 575 (Michael Edwards) Too many times was I bitten and felt that jolt, which explains a...
  June 19th, 2020 21:49
• Exciting. (Fay Slimm.) So beautiful Fay. Your words are more powerful than the photo. Reading it...
  June 18th, 2020 13:30
• DESERTED NOW (Michael Edwards) Let me add some more praise upon this poem and artwork. \"Fire-light...
  June 17th, 2020 18:25
• Caught. (Fay Slimm.) This is brilliant Fay. I\'ve never looked at bubbles in this way. Surely...
  June 15th, 2020 21:23
• Glorious Din. (Fay Slimm.) Beautiful poem Fay. I love poems of nature. This one rings true, as we...
  June 12th, 2020 18:24
• Voiceless. (Fay Slimm.) Of course there is silent-speak. Its a raising of an eyebrow, a roll of...
  June 11th, 2020 15:48
• How do I....... (Suresh) Many questions that we all think about during the course of a...
  June 10th, 2020 16:16
• Welcome to my head at times (Paris Margaret) The best of times, the worst of times. The paradox of humanity. Each life...
  June 10th, 2020 12:18
• Destined. (Fay Slimm.) Revealing a sad loss, yet ever so sweetly. Your poem cries for the oft...
  June 10th, 2020 10:54
• Dreamscape. (Fay Slimm.) Dreams - are they just imagination functioning while we are sleeping,...
  June 9th, 2020 22:34
• in a place he wants to be (Dusk arising) A great message for Vets of any era. Will their spirit live on in future...
  June 9th, 2020 22:24
• Unbecoming (SheWasTheSun) Before we can love anyone or anything we must first love ourselves.Once we...
  June 9th, 2020 22:18
• Climax (Neville) This kind of behavior will kill you! You also know it\'s habit forming or...
  June 9th, 2020 22:10
• Upon the Morrow (Neville) Though subtle, I find this sad, but with a sense of hope. If that hope is...
  June 6th, 2020 17:21
• The Sorriest of Words (Neville) \"Sorry\" is just another word, but so are \"sincere\" and...
  June 4th, 2020 18:58
• Skien (Neville) Well, technically it\'s still Spring, or maybe for some unknown reason...
  May 31st, 2020 18:01
• I am He (Kevin Michael Bloor) One and only true love, A rare and precious thing. Bound to last forever....
  April 29th, 2020 18:55
• Closeness. (Fay Slimm.) O.M.G. Love, Music, and the Afterlife. Interwoven into this short question...
  April 29th, 2020 18:49
• Wishing for More. (Goldfinch60) Somewhere in your poem is the sense of hope. It seems we are born with it...
  April 29th, 2020 18:38
• COMICAL COUPLETS (2) (Michael Edwards) Penguins actually do surf. Poor Willy has to get his waves right. Maybe he...
  April 29th, 2020 18:32
• escape (JustABird) \"she rocks back and forth,\" I see an older woman, perhaps beset with...
  April 28th, 2020 17:42
• After the Clapping (Sylviasearcher) I think they deserve a round of applause; putting their lives on the line...
  April 28th, 2020 16:30
• Battle. (Fay Slimm.) The daily \"battle\" of Night vs. Day and the glamorous skies that result....
  April 28th, 2020 16:15
• Pot of Gold. (Goldfinch60) A very deep thought; Life\'s reflection as the final reward. You have...
  April 28th, 2020 16:09
• COMICAL COUPLETS (1) (Michael Edwards) Time for a shot of November third. I think your penguins have more common...
  April 28th, 2020 16:02
• No Pot of Gold (Neville) He who seeks gold at the end of a rainbow treks a very long journey. When...
  April 27th, 2020 19:46
• NEVER HAVE I (Michael Edwards) A good bit of fun, this. What with helmets, parrots, and eggs on one\'s...
  April 11th, 2020 13:19
• Ache (SerenWise) I like this poem. The metaphors and similes are creative and relate to one...
  April 6th, 2020 22:24
• Cliff (Hedy) It is a dangerous edge upon which an artist such as yourself must walk. A...
  April 6th, 2020 22:13
• Take Me. (Fay Slimm.) Stay strong, Fay. \"And this too will pass.\" Sleep can sometimes carry...
  April 6th, 2020 22:01
• Hello! (Goldfinch60) Hello! Hello! Hello! My god why would you name you dog that? She must get...
  April 6th, 2020 21:53
• STIFF ZIP (Michael Edwards) This magical anointment is readily available at your local alipterium or...
  April 6th, 2020 21:47
• Loose Leafed and Fancy Free (Neville) A story well spoken. The book of love is like a novel written in pain and...
  April 6th, 2020 19:45
• oh, my darling (Queer-with-a-pen) This poem may be short, but it says a lot. It exudes the melancholy/sorrow...
  April 4th, 2020 16:22
• THIS SENTENCE - A SELECTION OF MONOSUCHS (Michael Edwards) I began at the end and came to the conclusion that the end begins where...
  April 4th, 2020 15:55
• Apprehension. (Fay Slimm.) This moment of onsetting worry, as she traveled homeward in dread of the...
  April 2nd, 2020 15:26