Comments on community poems by Shyam
- Nobody's Perfect (Broken_dreams23)
Nice!
Love that song!!
April 4th, 2011 02:58
- Footprints on the sand of time (Sidz)
Very nice thought!. good work!
April 3rd, 2011 07:21
- Smile (: (Broken_dreams23)
Nice work. nice rhythm.
April 3rd, 2011 07:18
- Is there anyone out there (Meigh)
April 3rd, 2011 04:25
- Is there anyone out there (Meigh)
'help me find a mate' - Mildly Raw and simply honest. Very nice.
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April 3rd, 2011 04:24
- Everytime (Lonelykaren)
Awww....
That is so painful
March 18th, 2011 13:49
- rain walk (Marius)
Interesting!!
March 18th, 2011 06:56
- H1 ’N Then Some (Dead Crow)
Strong!!
March 18th, 2011 06:56
- Reflecting in His Silence (Cheeky Missy)
I love the line:-
"Your silence deafens and speaks volumes"
March 16th, 2011 07:11
- Times (Belinda AMeharry)
Keep it up!
March 16th, 2011 07:05
- Eventually, I hope. (Brennan)
quite determined, I see,
Good!
March 16th, 2011 07:03
- Who took my heart? (SauravRHS)
well done!!
March 14th, 2011 10:51
- Truth of joy. (Lifewellspoken)
That was 'cool'.
Few lines but great and vivid picture.
March 14th, 2011 10:48
- THE HEART OF MY HEART (Sarah)
Oh! boy!.
Excellent!
March 14th, 2011 10:34
- Ah, for Yesterday! (Cheeky Missy)
Interesting!
March 14th, 2011 10:26
- Up (Emi)
very vivid.
March 11th, 2011 19:45
- My Mom...My Best Friend (Cheeky Missy)
oh... That was a cute poem.
March 10th, 2011 12:23
- Not Forgotten (Meigh)
That was brilliant. You managed to bring the details with good rhyming
March 9th, 2011 07:14
- Alone............. (Shyam)
Friends, you can find my other works in my blog...
March 9th, 2011 07:07
- WIND (Sarah)
this is an honest tune of love and care,
Wind, always a messenger for...
March 8th, 2011 10:47