Comments on community poems by Shyam
- Nobody's Perfect (Broken_dreams23)
Nice!
Love that song!!
April 4th, 2011 02:58 - Footprints on the sand of time (Sidz)
Very nice thought!. good work!
April 3rd, 2011 07:21 - Smile (: (Broken_dreams23)
Nice work. nice rhythm.
April 3rd, 2011 07:18 - Is there anyone out there (Meigh)
April 3rd, 2011 04:25 - Is there anyone out there (Meigh)
'help me find a mate' - Mildly Raw and simply honest. Very nice.
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April 3rd, 2011 04:24 - Everytime (Lonelykaren)
Awww....
That is so painful
March 18th, 2011 13:49 - rain walk (Marius)
Interesting!!
March 18th, 2011 06:56 - H1 ’N Then Some (Dead Crow)
Strong!!
March 18th, 2011 06:56 - Reflecting in His Silence (Cheeky Missy)
I love the line:-
"Your silence deafens and speaks volumes"
March 16th, 2011 07:11 - Times (Belinda AMeharry)
Keep it up!
March 16th, 2011 07:05 - Eventually, I hope. (Brennan)
quite determined, I see,
Good!
March 16th, 2011 07:03 - Who took my heart? (SauravRHS)
well done!!
March 14th, 2011 10:51 - Truth of joy. (Lifewellspoken)
That was 'cool'.
Few lines but great and vivid picture.
March 14th, 2011 10:48 - THE HEART OF MY HEART (Sarah)
Oh! boy!.
Excellent!
March 14th, 2011 10:34 - Ah, for Yesterday! (Cheeky Missy)
Interesting!
March 14th, 2011 10:26
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