Comments on community poems by Garry
- Love is a Battlefield (JustABird)
Wow! Really good. Bit scary though.
March 23rd, 2017 04:58 - Dinner in the Dark. (Goldfinch60)
Very Gothic. Enjoyed the story, enjoyed the words you told it with....
March 23rd, 2017 04:56 - A Man of Infinite Leisure. (Goldfinch60)
Great poem. Nearing the age of retirement myself i am quite envious. I...
March 23rd, 2017 04:50 - DO YOU WANT TO GO? (Michael Edwards)
Very funny poem, love the play on words, which I missed on first read....
March 23rd, 2017 04:40 - Forgotten Dreams (Garry)
I\'m away from home at the moment with intermittent internet access , but...
March 23rd, 2017 04:34 - Forgotten Dreams (Garry)
Thank you. Very helpful and reassuring. I do like my poems to have flow...
March 23rd, 2017 04:32 - THREE COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Lovely use of words. It flows beautifully. Nice imagery. Love the painting...
March 22nd, 2017 17:33 - In Transit. (Fay Slimm.)
Beautifully crafted. Really enjoyed it
March 22nd, 2017 17:29 - Demented (Tristan Robert Lange)
Beautifully written. Love the feel of the words. Sadly don\'t really...
March 22nd, 2017 17:25 - The Wood (Tristan Robert Lange)
Despite their calmness and their beauty i often find forests can be a bit...
March 22nd, 2017 17:21 - Pretty Lies (JustABird)
Excellent last stanza.
March 22nd, 2017 17:18 - Girl on a Pedestal (JustABird)
Very good. As always.
March 22nd, 2017 17:16 - Just a Dream (JustABird)
I \'d Love to hear it \'performed\'
I think there is a need for\"loss\"...
March 22nd, 2017 17:15 - Night Moves (JustABird)
Very dark. Really enjoy your writing style
March 22nd, 2017 17:12 - Speak (JustABird)
Beautiful, and uplifting. There is usually light to found in all the dark...
March 22nd, 2017 17:10
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