Comments on community poems by Garry
- I hope my Death Comes Unannounced (Garry)
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March 22nd, 2022 09:03 - Pain In The Proverbial. (Goldfinch60)
Me too. But so far (day 2) feel virtually fine.
March 20th, 2022 07:32 - Me to you (Little Duck Man)
Interesting.
March 19th, 2022 11:53 - Peace Like My River. (Goldfinch60)
Impressed that you are still writing a poem a day. I haven\'t been here...
March 19th, 2022 04:41 - The Last Waltz (Garry)
I guess every poet has a love poem. This is mine
March 17th, 2022 09:01 - LIMERICKS 97, 98 and 99 (Michael Edwards)
Very entertaining
March 16th, 2022 07:30 - escape (JustABird)
Great. A nice poem to read after a long Rome away.
February 3rd, 2022 11:56 - THE WIND BLOWS (Michael Edwards)
Very funny
July 4th, 2017 16:33 - Breakfast. (Garry)
Write it cos i had muesli this morning. Normally just have fruit. Still...
June 10th, 2017 03:23 - Treasured lust (Thehippiepoet)
Good one
June 2nd, 2017 12:17 - Tomorrow Will Do (Goldfinch60)
Very good
June 2nd, 2017 10:07 - Voter (Jabberwocky)
Nicely written. Love the underlying message of the stupidity of holding...
May 20th, 2017 14:11 - The Path (Discreation)
Like this some vivid images.
May 17th, 2017 01:14 - Derelict (Jabberwocky)
Very good. Loved these 4 lines t
\"Let\'s grind al.........
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May 17th, 2017 01:11 - Golden Fly (Jabberwocky)
Ouch.
May 17th, 2017 01:08 - That Guy (Jabberwocky)
Good. Love the ending.
May 17th, 2017 01:07 - The Well of Men (Jabberwocky)
Short and powerful.
May 17th, 2017 01:04 - THROUGH THE NIGHT (Michael Edwards)
Very good
May 17th, 2017 00:59 - Two modest haikus (Garry)
I have a very beautiful mirror. What\'s wrong with yours?
May 13th, 2017 13:53 - My World (Swingline)
Great flow and rhythm. Good stuff.
May 13th, 2017 13:39 - Revealing Nothing (Garry)
Dark 30?
May 12th, 2017 01:30 - Revealing Nothing (Garry)
Short is great. I have a very poor atten...
May 11th, 2017 09:48 - Scratching (Jabberwocky)
Nice.
May 8th, 2017 18:12 - Just Don\'t Film It (Garry)
Quite like the friday and weekend verses. Thank you for the input. Really...
May 6th, 2017 16:15 - Just Don\'t Film It (Garry)
He is writing it on Friday. So tense is fine, isn\'t it?
May 6th, 2017 10:59 - All Over (Naeners)
I enjoyed it. Love the ending especially. Short and sweet. Well done.
May 6th, 2017 04:28 - DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards)
I have been inpubs, or restaurants where very well properly dressed people...
May 6th, 2017 01:18 - DINING ETIQUETTE (Michael Edwards)
I have great dress sense and always know when i am dressed. I have never...
May 6th, 2017 01:12 - Follow Me (Baylee)
Very good read. Short and vivid.
May 5th, 2017 14:58 - missing you (Karla)
Very nice.
May 5th, 2017 14:57 - Dancing Eyes (Garry)
Thank you.
May 5th, 2017 10:28 - Darkness Surrounds (JustABird)
Welcome back. Delighted to see your latest offering does not disappoint...
May 4th, 2017 15:23 - Wee Willy (Swingline)
very good.
May 4th, 2017 08:05 - Life\'s fight (Tony36)
short and sweet
May 4th, 2017 08:03 - Other People\'s Voices (Garry)
WBL, possibly.
Or she could know he\'s lying and just be using him...
May 4th, 2017 01:35 - Other People\'s Voices (Garry)
And the lucky winner of todays \"Spot the deliberate mistake\" is Ephraim...
May 3rd, 2017 06:52 - Out of Sight (Naeners)
Another good one. Well done. Yes very creepy indeed.
May 3rd, 2017 03:59 - We\'re Fucked (Naeners)
A bit scary if you ask me.. Like the last few lines; particularly vivid.
May 3rd, 2017 03:58 - I\'m yours (B.rod)
Very nice
May 3rd, 2017 03:55 - Storms , Sailboats and God at Sea (Swingline)
Enjoyed this one. Good job.
May 3rd, 2017 03:53 - Hand in hand (Garry)
Written in response to a twitter feed I follow #horrorprompt.
May 3rd, 2017 03:41 - Hand in hand (Garry)
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May 2nd, 2017 15:12 - overboard (Shayl)
Nice.
May 2nd, 2017 14:58 - You Left Me (Garry)
You do realise that laughing at someone being murdered is so weird. Join...
May 1st, 2017 05:27 - Start With A Cup (WriteBeLight)
Sadly true for me.but Instant black, filter with hot milk.
May 1st, 2017 05:25 - A BIT MORE MIRTH (Michael Edwards)
Veey good.
April 30th, 2017 22:07 - Our Fateful First Kiss (BeckyJo)
lovely. Well written, vivid images
April 30th, 2017 02:57 - Svelte (WriteBeLight)
Very nice
April 27th, 2017 18:43 - The Batter (Tony36)
Very good
April 27th, 2017 18:36 - Day After Long Weekend Blues (WriteBeLight)
Very good, very optimistic
April 24th, 2017 13:47 - Am I Me (Garry)
Thank you.
April 24th, 2017 13:45 - Sketch: Defiance (Jabberwocky)
Very strong 4 liner. Well done
April 24th, 2017 07:52 - Am I Me (Garry)
No, me!
April 23rd, 2017 17:22 - The Beauty of Tea and Scones. A Haiku (Garry)
A good scone needs no jam or cream.
April 22nd, 2017 12:17 - You Were My.. (Felicityjones)
Short and strong. Enjoyed it!
April 22nd, 2017 10:47 - PYRAMIDS FROM SPACE (BRIAN & ANGELA)
April 22nd, 2017 10:43 - THE GIRL NEXT DOOR (Michael Edwards)
A good reworking of an old joke well done.
April 22nd, 2017 03:13 - 4am and All\'s Well. (Garry)
Amazing what you can do at 4 oclock in the morning.
April 21st, 2017 10:10 - Despair (Jabberwocky)
Very bleak. Good.
April 21st, 2017 08:15 - Driven Drive (WriteBeLight)
Wastibg time is a much underated skill.
April 21st, 2017 08:14 - I\'m Screwed (Naeners)
Short, vivid and powerful.
Short is good, i think. Poetry is using the...
April 21st, 2017 03:47 - ALONE (Michael Edwards)
Very cleved and works very well.
April 21st, 2017 02:23 - Roses (Lucy)
A very good haiku. Well done. Paints a vivid image
April 20th, 2017 17:24 - Stop and Look Back. (Goldfinch60)
Like the ideas in this
April 20th, 2017 02:51 - Lost (Cosmicbliss)
Like this. Goid and strong. Unexpected finish. .
April 20th, 2017 02:48 - Salt (Velvetlascivious)
Very rich.
April 20th, 2017 02:46 - Death of Beauty (Naeners)
\"too much is left unsaid\".I think this is a beautiful phrase and...
April 19th, 2017 16:28 - In the Bath (Garry)
Thank you.short is good. As indeed is humerous. But definitely short.
I...
April 19th, 2017 16:12 - Never Got the Chance (K_dovexo)
Short. Vivid. Well done
April 19th, 2017 15:50 - Fate Waits. (Fay Slimm.)
Love the last two lines especially.
Well done.
April 19th, 2017 06:34 - Ghost Town (ElenaGrace)
Very beautiful. Well done
April 19th, 2017 03:42 - Dead. (Stella_Suicide)
Life indeed. I thought some of ny poems were dark. So far i have tended ...
April 18th, 2017 15:31 - Feathers. (Goldfinch60)
Well done. A fine example of the classic 4-liner. A much underated form....
April 18th, 2017 02:32 - TO THE RIGHT OF THE SETTING SUN (Michael Edwards)
Well done.
April 18th, 2017 02:27 - I am sorry my fitness instructor (JamieDayDream)
Very enjoyable.
April 18th, 2017 02:25 - Monsters (Josey_brooks)
Hm. Very good.
April 18th, 2017 02:24 - Growing Love (Gencruz)
Very soothing.
April 17th, 2017 14:24 - Nature (Brycycle)
Sime fine images. Short but vivid. I like it.
April 17th, 2017 14:23 - Lyric-less (WriteBeLight)
Very enhoayble little piece
April 17th, 2017 14:17 - ... as a Friend (Jabberwocky)
Very sad.
I like it a lot
April 17th, 2017 03:27 - Drowning (SadInterior)
Very Gothic. Love the ending.
April 17th, 2017 03:27 - THE MUSIC OF THE SEA (Michael Edwards)
Great write.vivid images. Particularly the last two lines.
April 17th, 2017 03:25 - Thoughts While waiting for Chinese takeaway. (P.H.Rose)
\"i am me\"
Are you sure about that?
April 17th, 2017 03:09 - Control (Being-green)
Well phrased and crafted.
April 16th, 2017 11:44 - April 16 2017 (Elchupacabra)
Very good. The righr words in the right order. Enjoyed it
April 16th, 2017 11:41 - Worry (---mari0)
Like this one very much.
April 16th, 2017 07:30 - Ivy and Jim.... (P.H.Rose)
Very evocative.
April 15th, 2017 10:30 - Rhinestones (Jabberwocky)
Hm. Interesting.
April 15th, 2017 08:32 - Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?) (Garry)
Thank you.
April 15th, 2017 06:58 - Silence is Golden? . . (haiku?) (Garry)
Gross.
April 15th, 2017 03:32 - The Roar of Silence. (Goldfinch60)
Very good.
Have you actually seen it performed.?
Great video.
A truly...
April 15th, 2017 01:51 - To The Moon And Back (BGaleson)
Excellent opening verse.
April 15th, 2017 01:48 - my old friend (Shayl)
Enjoyed it. Well done
April 14th, 2017 14:46 - Lost (Tristan Robert Lange)
Very good.
Everybody seems to be hooked on silence at the moment.
April 14th, 2017 14:45 - Unsung Whispers. (Fay Slimm.)
Very good. More examples of the silence that can say so much.
April 14th, 2017 09:24 - COMICAL COUPLETS (Michael Edwards)
Made me smile. Well done.
April 14th, 2017 09:22 - Words of Love (Garry)
What did that silence say i wonder
April 14th, 2017 05:51 - Heal (Brandon k f)
Very good. Really well done. Reads beautifully and with a powerful...
April 13th, 2017 14:41 - Tell me again (Stephanie Showers)
Some vivid ideas and powerful rythms. Enjoyed. Thank you.
April 13th, 2017 11:43 - In Too Deep (Lanaevans)
Deep and dark. I enjoyed it.
April 13th, 2017 01:53
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