Comments received on poems by sue.evans



Limericks
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Sue, limericks are not easy to get the rhythm right.

September 4th, 2017 07:48

Limericks
Mugsdaddy said:

That was too cute. Hope this smile lasts all day.

September 4th, 2017 07:31

Opus of Love
BlueDays said:

Ooh I like this one. ❤️ Lots of favourites being added thanks Sue

September 4th, 2017 05:55

A Rant On Behalf of Planet Earth!
BlueDays said:

I love this poem Sue, brilliant message. We are living in a time of such convenience and waste. I am trying desperately to hold on to some of the values and wisdom of the past. The other day whilst on a picnic, my eldest, off of her own back, picked up all the rubbish in the children\'s park because she didn\'t want the animals to get hurt or sick. I was super proud. I hope everyone wakes up to the reality of how we are living and it\'s impacts very soon!

September 4th, 2017 05:46

Autumn Haiku
BlueDays said:

Yummy poem!

September 4th, 2017 05:34

Limericks
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SUE ~ there are strict syllable patterns for LIMERICKS but if you break them IT IS STILL A LIMERICK ! Loved all yours. It is an issue of RHYTHM because Limericks are written NOT to be READ but to be RECITED ! Irish poetry is ORAL not VERBAL.

There was a Young Girl from BELFAST
With a somewhat unsavoury past
But I didn\'t care
She had so much to share
So I knew that our Love Life would last !

Thanks for Limericking ~ more please ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN


September 4th, 2017 04:52

Limericks
Michael Edwards said:

Pretty darn good for first attempt Sue enjoyed reading them - I look forward to more.

September 4th, 2017 03:00

Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
myself and me said:

Like two diamond star shine in the sky.
So beautiful writing.

September 3rd, 2017 13:22

Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
dusk arising said:

Cute, i like that. And wisdom too.

September 3rd, 2017 08:29

Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
Mugsdaddy said:

Made me think. Wonderful writing.

September 3rd, 2017 07:15

Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
Frank Prem said:

Geez, beautiful shape. I\'d give eye teeth to be able to write freely and retain control like that. Bravo Sue. Good job.

September 3rd, 2017 03:18

Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
Michael Edwards said:

Excellent poem superbly crafted - well done Sue

September 3rd, 2017 02:59

Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
FredPeyer said:

Sue, this is a very thought provoking poem. Brilliantly penned I might add. What was there first, the egg or the chicken? The rich or big houses, or big houses attracting the rich?

September 3rd, 2017 02:52

Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
sue.evans said:

Thank you for reading and commenting. This poem came about from a visit to a near by town - I don\'t visit often and whilst waiting for a friend I was people watching ( a favourite pastime 😂) and everybody was walking about with such grey haunted looks - sadness seemed to pour out of the place🙁 It is a poor area - got me thinking about the divide between haves and have nots.

September 3rd, 2017 02:14

Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Sue. Yes it mainly depends on money, or lack of same.

September 3rd, 2017 02:09

Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
lanaevans said:

Yes, i think it all boils down to money and opportunities.

September 3rd, 2017 01:57

Social Media Lives
myself and me said:

Wow, wow, wow. That is all I can say.

September 2nd, 2017 15:52

Social Media Lives
FredPeyer said:

Sue, I like the way it looks, I like the writing, I like the content. It cannot get much better than that.

September 2nd, 2017 13:08

Social Media Lives
poetboy5454 said:

A very pertinent issue expressed in a very good poem.

September 2nd, 2017 11:17

Social Media Lives
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write and well done in using the form.

September 2nd, 2017 04:23

Social Media Lives
Fay Slimm. said:

Measuring ourselves too much with others is a product of what this fine poem states as the the internet blight - good and sound points made here Sue. Love the form you used too.

September 2nd, 2017 03:04

Social Media Lives
Michael Edwards said:

Well done indeed - think I\'ll return to read again later but some write. I know how difficult it is to write in strict guidelines especially if you seek to maintain meter, word flow etc .

September 2nd, 2017 02:09

Things That Impress Me Most...
dusk arising said:

You\'re a lucky gal aint you..... all those goodies wrapped up in a man and you\'ve got him. Nice to read, i enjoyed this.

September 1st, 2017 21:07

Things That Impress Me Most...
Fay Slimm. said:

A wonderfully comprehensive list of selfless traits we all need to read over again - thank you Sue for this needed reminder.

September 1st, 2017 13:49

Things That Impress Me Most...
myself and me said:

\"Things That Impress Me Most\" today is this poem.
Great writing.

September 1st, 2017 12:26

Things That Impress Me Most...
FredPeyer said:

In that last line, are you talking to me? If yes, there will be one kind of comment, if no, there will be another!

September 1st, 2017 01:54

Things That Impress Me Most...
Michael Edwards said:

And a great list it is too - well expressed Sue

September 1st, 2017 01:16

Experimenting with Cinquain
myself and me said:

Can\'t believe you collect so many in one. It took me several days to write two.
Love them.

August 31st, 2017 14:32

Experimenting with Cinquain
orchidee said:

Good writes Sue.

August 31st, 2017 11:56

Experimenting with Cinquain
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, they are not easy to write.

August 31st, 2017 07:57

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