Comments received on poems by sue.evans
😂My Thought Shower😂
Michael Edwards said:
Only one thing for a word shower - an umbrolly well writ Sue
September 5th, 2017 10:33
Michael Edwards said:
Only one thing for a word shower - an umbrolly well writ Sue
September 5th, 2017 10:33
😂My Thought Shower😂
lasergraph said:
I enjoyed your \"shower\" and hope there is no word drought in sight.
September 5th, 2017 08:33
lasergraph said:
I enjoyed your \"shower\" and hope there is no word drought in sight.
September 5th, 2017 08:33
😂My Thought Shower😂
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. May your word showers keep falling on us.
September 5th, 2017 02:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. May your word showers keep falling on us.
September 5th, 2017 02:47
Limericks
dusk arising said:
Good fun stuff.
When asked to write on MPS
Sue.Evans quickly said yes
And as a result, she\'s part of our cult
We\'re the ones who write to relieve stress.
September 4th, 2017 19:25
dusk arising said:
Good fun stuff.
When asked to write on MPS
Sue.Evans quickly said yes
And as a result, she\'s part of our cult
We\'re the ones who write to relieve stress.
September 4th, 2017 19:25
Limericks
myself and me said:
Oh, those light up my day. I did laugh loud when I finish the third.
Thanks.
Very well done.
September 4th, 2017 16:19
myself and me said:
Oh, those light up my day. I did laugh loud when I finish the third.
Thanks.
Very well done.
September 4th, 2017 16:19
Limericks
FredPeyer said:
Sue, forget the practicing! Just keep on writing, they are GOOOOOD!
September 4th, 2017 14:17
FredPeyer said:
Sue, forget the practicing! Just keep on writing, they are GOOOOOD!
September 4th, 2017 14:17
Pause your paws for a short journey- A nonsense poem in the absurdity of the English Language!!!
Mugsdaddy said:
Quite clever and whimsical. I had to borrow my neighbor so I could give you three thumbs up... Two was not enough.
September 4th, 2017 13:23
Mugsdaddy said:
Quite clever and whimsical. I had to borrow my neighbor so I could give you three thumbs up... Two was not enough.
September 4th, 2017 13:23
Limericks
Accidental Poet said:
You did a great job sue.
If this is where you\'ve begun,
I can\'t wait to see twenty-one. ; )
September 4th, 2017 10:29
Accidental Poet said:
You did a great job sue.
If this is where you\'ve begun,
I can\'t wait to see twenty-one. ; )
September 4th, 2017 10:29
Limericks
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Sue, limericks are not easy to get the rhythm right.
September 4th, 2017 07:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Sue, limericks are not easy to get the rhythm right.
September 4th, 2017 07:48
Limericks
Mugsdaddy said:
That was too cute. Hope this smile lasts all day.
September 4th, 2017 07:31
Mugsdaddy said:
That was too cute. Hope this smile lasts all day.
September 4th, 2017 07:31
Opus of Love
BlueDays said:
Ooh I like this one. ❤️ Lots of favourites being added thanks Sue
September 4th, 2017 05:55
BlueDays said:
Ooh I like this one. ❤️ Lots of favourites being added thanks Sue
September 4th, 2017 05:55
A Rant On Behalf of Planet Earth!
BlueDays said:
I love this poem Sue, brilliant message. We are living in a time of such convenience and waste. I am trying desperately to hold on to some of the values and wisdom of the past. The other day whilst on a picnic, my eldest, off of her own back, picked up all the rubbish in the children\'s park because she didn\'t want the animals to get hurt or sick. I was super proud. I hope everyone wakes up to the reality of how we are living and it\'s impacts very soon!
September 4th, 2017 05:46
BlueDays said:
I love this poem Sue, brilliant message. We are living in a time of such convenience and waste. I am trying desperately to hold on to some of the values and wisdom of the past. The other day whilst on a picnic, my eldest, off of her own back, picked up all the rubbish in the children\'s park because she didn\'t want the animals to get hurt or sick. I was super proud. I hope everyone wakes up to the reality of how we are living and it\'s impacts very soon!
September 4th, 2017 05:46
Limericks
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SUE ~ there are strict syllable patterns for LIMERICKS but if you break them IT IS STILL A LIMERICK ! Loved all yours. It is an issue of RHYTHM because Limericks are written NOT to be READ but to be RECITED ! Irish poetry is ORAL not VERBAL.
There was a Young Girl from BELFAST
With a somewhat unsavoury past
But I didn\'t care
She had so much to share
So I knew that our Love Life would last !
Thanks for Limericking ~ more please ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
September 4th, 2017 04:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SUE ~ there are strict syllable patterns for LIMERICKS but if you break them IT IS STILL A LIMERICK ! Loved all yours. It is an issue of RHYTHM because Limericks are written NOT to be READ but to be RECITED ! Irish poetry is ORAL not VERBAL.
There was a Young Girl from BELFAST
With a somewhat unsavoury past
But I didn\'t care
She had so much to share
So I knew that our Love Life would last !
Thanks for Limericking ~ more please ~ Yours as ever ~ BRIAN
September 4th, 2017 04:52
Limericks
Michael Edwards said:
Pretty darn good for first attempt Sue enjoyed reading them - I look forward to more.
September 4th, 2017 03:00
Michael Edwards said:
Pretty darn good for first attempt Sue enjoyed reading them - I look forward to more.
September 4th, 2017 03:00
Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
myself and me said:
Like two diamond star shine in the sky.
So beautiful writing.
September 3rd, 2017 13:22
myself and me said:
Like two diamond star shine in the sky.
So beautiful writing.
September 3rd, 2017 13:22
Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
dusk arising said:
Cute, i like that. And wisdom too.
September 3rd, 2017 08:29
dusk arising said:
Cute, i like that. And wisdom too.
September 3rd, 2017 08:29
Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
Mugsdaddy said:
Made me think. Wonderful writing.
September 3rd, 2017 07:15
Mugsdaddy said:
Made me think. Wonderful writing.
September 3rd, 2017 07:15
Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
Frank Prem said:
Geez, beautiful shape. I\'d give eye teeth to be able to write freely and retain control like that. Bravo Sue. Good job.
September 3rd, 2017 03:18
Frank Prem said:
Geez, beautiful shape. I\'d give eye teeth to be able to write freely and retain control like that. Bravo Sue. Good job.
September 3rd, 2017 03:18
Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
Michael Edwards said:
Excellent poem superbly crafted - well done Sue
September 3rd, 2017 02:59
Michael Edwards said:
Excellent poem superbly crafted - well done Sue
September 3rd, 2017 02:59
Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
FredPeyer said:
Sue, this is a very thought provoking poem. Brilliantly penned I might add. What was there first, the egg or the chicken? The rich or big houses, or big houses attracting the rich?
September 3rd, 2017 02:52
FredPeyer said:
Sue, this is a very thought provoking poem. Brilliantly penned I might add. What was there first, the egg or the chicken? The rich or big houses, or big houses attracting the rich?
September 3rd, 2017 02:52
Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
sue.evans said:
Thank you for reading and commenting. This poem came about from a visit to a near by town - I don\'t visit often and whilst waiting for a friend I was people watching ( a favourite pastime 😂) and everybody was walking about with such grey haunted looks - sadness seemed to pour out of the place🙁 It is a poor area - got me thinking about the divide between haves and have nots.
September 3rd, 2017 02:14
sue.evans said:
Thank you for reading and commenting. This poem came about from a visit to a near by town - I don\'t visit often and whilst waiting for a friend I was people watching ( a favourite pastime 😂) and everybody was walking about with such grey haunted looks - sadness seemed to pour out of the place🙁 It is a poor area - got me thinking about the divide between haves and have nots.
September 3rd, 2017 02:14
Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Sue. Yes it mainly depends on money, or lack of same.
September 3rd, 2017 02:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Sue. Yes it mainly depends on money, or lack of same.
September 3rd, 2017 02:09
Life\'s Influences - Another Etheree
lanaevans said:
Yes, i think it all boils down to money and opportunities.
September 3rd, 2017 01:57
lanaevans said:
Yes, i think it all boils down to money and opportunities.
September 3rd, 2017 01:57
Social Media Lives
myself and me said:
Wow, wow, wow. That is all I can say.
September 2nd, 2017 15:52
myself and me said:
Wow, wow, wow. That is all I can say.
September 2nd, 2017 15:52
Social Media Lives
FredPeyer said:
Sue, I like the way it looks, I like the writing, I like the content. It cannot get much better than that.
September 2nd, 2017 13:08
FredPeyer said:
Sue, I like the way it looks, I like the writing, I like the content. It cannot get much better than that.
September 2nd, 2017 13:08
Social Media Lives
poetboy5454 said:
A very pertinent issue expressed in a very good poem.
September 2nd, 2017 11:17
poetboy5454 said:
A very pertinent issue expressed in a very good poem.
September 2nd, 2017 11:17
Social Media Lives
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and well done in using the form.
September 2nd, 2017 04:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write and well done in using the form.
September 2nd, 2017 04:23
Social Media Lives
Fay Slimm. said:
Measuring ourselves too much with others is a product of what this fine poem states as the the internet blight - good and sound points made here Sue. Love the form you used too.
September 2nd, 2017 03:04
Fay Slimm. said:
Measuring ourselves too much with others is a product of what this fine poem states as the the internet blight - good and sound points made here Sue. Love the form you used too.
September 2nd, 2017 03:04
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