Comments received on poems by sue.evans
Over 10,000
dusk arising said:
The worldwide figures are of course higher and affect all in just the same way. After all, foreigners ARE human too.
But what, if anything, will we learn from this? What, if anything, will you learn from this?
April 13th, 2020 07:11
dusk arising said:
The worldwide figures are of course higher and affect all in just the same way. After all, foreigners ARE human too.
But what, if anything, will we learn from this? What, if anything, will you learn from this?
April 13th, 2020 07:11
Over 10,000
Fay Slimm. said:
A very clear poetic way of seeing this number and reminding ourselves of lives lose and lives left behind to mourn - a moving write Sue.
April 13th, 2020 05:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A very clear poetic way of seeing this number and reminding ourselves of lives lose and lives left behind to mourn - a moving write Sue.
April 13th, 2020 05:52
Dad - Captured in my heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive write sue.
Andy
April 13th, 2020 04:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful emotive write sue.
Andy
April 13th, 2020 04:13
Delight!
sue.evans said:
Thank you for your lovely words - we certainly are in strange times.
I also wrote this prayer for the time
A prayer for our time
Our NHS, who are in our hearts,
honoured in our minds,Â
Out of retirement some have come,Â
When there is work to be done,Â
on the front line for all of us.Â
We give you this day our daily thanks.Â
And we realise your torment and stress,Â
as we fight this virus
That threatens against us.Â
Don’t lead yourself into temptation,Â
but isolate to help deliver us from this evil.
For ours is the responsibility
and the power, and the duty,Â
To protect the NHS and each other
For the sake of all we hold dear. Amen.
April 5th, 2020 06:27
sue.evans said:
Thank you for your lovely words - we certainly are in strange times.
I also wrote this prayer for the time
A prayer for our time
Our NHS, who are in our hearts,
honoured in our minds,Â
Out of retirement some have come,Â
When there is work to be done,Â
on the front line for all of us.Â
We give you this day our daily thanks.Â
And we realise your torment and stress,Â
as we fight this virus
That threatens against us.Â
Don’t lead yourself into temptation,Â
but isolate to help deliver us from this evil.
For ours is the responsibility
and the power, and the duty,Â
To protect the NHS and each other
For the sake of all we hold dear. Amen.
April 5th, 2020 06:27
Delight!
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Sunday SUE - Angela here (I share this site with my Husband Brian !) Thanks for your uplifting COVID 19 related Poem. Replete with Rhyme Rhythm and more importantly POSITIVITY !
In this time of unprecedented Global Crisis - there is indeed much to DELIGHT in !
The Key Workers - Springtime - Slowing Down (not for Me Im a PHYSIO !) - Empathy with our Neighbours - Volunteers & Kindness - Flushing the Rat Race like the Pied Piper - Focussing on the Basics - Laughter & the Promise of Future Glory in Heaven - DELIGHT - AMEN !
It lifted all our Spirits because we are missing Church & have to rely on TV (Great Service this Morning on BBC) and sharing with our own Fellowship on ZOOM ! Please check our site - Thanks
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
April 5th, 2020 06:00
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Sunday SUE - Angela here (I share this site with my Husband Brian !) Thanks for your uplifting COVID 19 related Poem. Replete with Rhyme Rhythm and more importantly POSITIVITY !
In this time of unprecedented Global Crisis - there is indeed much to DELIGHT in !
The Key Workers - Springtime - Slowing Down (not for Me Im a PHYSIO !) - Empathy with our Neighbours - Volunteers & Kindness - Flushing the Rat Race like the Pied Piper - Focussing on the Basics - Laughter & the Promise of Future Glory in Heaven - DELIGHT - AMEN !
It lifted all our Spirits because we are missing Church & have to rely on TV (Great Service this Morning on BBC) and sharing with our own Fellowship on ZOOM ! Please check our site - Thanks
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
April 5th, 2020 06:00
Delight!
orchidee said:
You said nearly all that twice, I said, You said that nearly....! A fine write Sue.
April 5th, 2020 04:42
orchidee said:
You said nearly all that twice, I said, You said that nearly....! A fine write Sue.
April 5th, 2020 04:42
Delight!
Goldfinch60 said:
Delight is there for us, people are coming together even though they remain apart. I hope that this wonderful way that many people are coming together during this time remains when all is well again.
Your words express the happiness that can be found in trouble.
Andy
April 5th, 2020 04:32
Goldfinch60 said:
Delight is there for us, people are coming together even though they remain apart. I hope that this wonderful way that many people are coming together during this time remains when all is well again.
Your words express the happiness that can be found in trouble.
Andy
April 5th, 2020 04:32
Mum
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a wonderful list of reasons to value a Mum - - first rate piece of Mother\'s Day prose Sue and thanks very much for sharing your closeness with the dear lady who showed you love. Have a great remains of the day
March 31st, 2019 11:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Such a wonderful list of reasons to value a Mum - - first rate piece of Mother\'s Day prose Sue and thanks very much for sharing your closeness with the dear lady who showed you love. Have a great remains of the day
March 31st, 2019 11:43
Mum
sue.evans said:
Thank you for such lovely comments. Glad you enjoyed my words. X
March 31st, 2019 11:40
sue.evans said:
Thank you for such lovely comments. Glad you enjoyed my words. X
March 31st, 2019 11:40
Mum
Laura🌻 said:
Sue,
A beautifully penned poem dedicated to your mum! Any mum reading your poem will feel the love threaded throughout your awesome write! I certainly have! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 11:37
Laura🌻 said:
Sue,
A beautifully penned poem dedicated to your mum! Any mum reading your poem will feel the love threaded throughout your awesome write! I certainly have! Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
March 31st, 2019 11:37
Fountains Abbey
Neville said:
A well crafted atmospheric and otherwise visually appealing dedication to one of England\'s very finest...... thank you Sue, Neville
December 27th, 2018 10:22
Neville said:
A well crafted atmospheric and otherwise visually appealing dedication to one of England\'s very finest...... thank you Sue, Neville
December 27th, 2018 10:22
Disappointed!
orchidee said:
Ooohh I know! but for me, I need to \'get out more\', as they say. I\'ll get me coat! lol.
December 27th, 2018 07:23
orchidee said:
Ooohh I know! but for me, I need to \'get out more\', as they say. I\'ll get me coat! lol.
December 27th, 2018 07:23
Disappointed!
sue.evans said:
Thank you - exactly the point I was hoping to communicate. Some days it just feels like that!
December 27th, 2018 06:32
sue.evans said:
Thank you - exactly the point I was hoping to communicate. Some days it just feels like that!
December 27th, 2018 06:32
Disappointed!
sylviasearcher said:
What a well composed poem to sum up that feeling of hope and light being worn down until it is finally put out.
December 27th, 2018 06:17
sylviasearcher said:
What a well composed poem to sum up that feeling of hope and light being worn down until it is finally put out.
December 27th, 2018 06:17
Homeless
Neville said:
yes indeed, ragged and real.. just like it is in real time...
December 26th, 2018 23:55
Neville said:
yes indeed, ragged and real.. just like it is in real time...
December 26th, 2018 23:55
Loss
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Sue! Time can be made up, money can be made again, but love.....?
January 23rd, 2018 04:20
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Sue! Time can be made up, money can be made again, but love.....?
January 23rd, 2018 04:20
Loss
Lorna said:
Very touching.... dismisses all the minor things we stress over in life and then cuts to the chase.
January 21st, 2018 10:19
Lorna said:
Very touching.... dismisses all the minor things we stress over in life and then cuts to the chase.
January 21st, 2018 10:19
Superstition!
Caring dove said:
haha lol i love the ending ! \'\' damn magpies- always causing a flap- because i belive your superstitious crap \'\' love this !
January 21st, 2018 09:01
Caring dove said:
haha lol i love the ending ! \'\' damn magpies- always causing a flap- because i belive your superstitious crap \'\' love this !
January 21st, 2018 09:01
😂My Thought Shower😂
Caring dove said:
brilliant piece of writing ! really nice :-) and a good beat to this piece too
January 21st, 2018 08:57
Caring dove said:
brilliant piece of writing ! really nice :-) and a good beat to this piece too
January 21st, 2018 08:57
Fountains Abbey
sue.evans said:
Thank you. Ha - a little town!!! Town of my birth place was Birmingham! Evesham is a beautiful place to visit.
October 5th, 2017 02:01
sue.evans said:
Thank you. Ha - a little town!!! Town of my birth place was Birmingham! Evesham is a beautiful place to visit.
October 5th, 2017 02:01
Fountains Abbey
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Sue. We have been to Fountains Abbey some years ago and it is truly wonderful.
We too have the remains of an Abbey in Evesham, apparently it was so important that one of the villages it used include in its area was some little town called Birmingham.
October 5th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Sue. We have been to Fountains Abbey some years ago and it is truly wonderful.
We too have the remains of an Abbey in Evesham, apparently it was so important that one of the villages it used include in its area was some little town called Birmingham.
October 5th, 2017 00:56
Fountains Abbey
Louis Gibbs said:
A worthy poem ... exquisitely presented, Sue! The attention to form is most impressive. Well done!
October 4th, 2017 10:29
Louis Gibbs said:
A worthy poem ... exquisitely presented, Sue! The attention to form is most impressive. Well done!
October 4th, 2017 10:29
Fountains Abbey
FredPeyer said:
A great poem, Sue, and an important part of history.
October 4th, 2017 10:17
FredPeyer said:
A great poem, Sue, and an important part of history.
October 4th, 2017 10:17
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