Comments received on poems by sue.evans
Victim of Abuse
mbird72 said:
Again I\'m amaz d at the quality of poems here. I was that child and my bones went cold when I read that. You captured \"the child\'s pain\" perfectly.
July 1st, 2017 18:00
mbird72 said:
Again I\'m amaz d at the quality of poems here. I was that child and my bones went cold when I read that. You captured \"the child\'s pain\" perfectly.
July 1st, 2017 18:00
Victim of Abuse
sue.evans said:
Glad ( if that is the right word for such a comment) i was able to create that empathy.
July 1st, 2017 15:55
sue.evans said:
Glad ( if that is the right word for such a comment) i was able to create that empathy.
July 1st, 2017 15:55
Victim of Abuse
emotional girl said:
Such a powerful poem. You are a wonderful writer.
July 1st, 2017 15:01
emotional girl said:
Such a powerful poem. You are a wonderful writer.
July 1st, 2017 15:01
Victim of Abuse
P.H.Rose said:
This is just really
So Very good.
I wrote one called..
Born..Raped..Lost..reborn.
If you get a moment please
Read it and let me know
What you think of it.
It\'s about the abuse I had
As a child from my
Step father, though the
Word father should never
Be mentioned in his name.
Loved your poem....
July 1st, 2017 14:02
P.H.Rose said:
This is just really
So Very good.
I wrote one called..
Born..Raped..Lost..reborn.
If you get a moment please
Read it and let me know
What you think of it.
It\'s about the abuse I had
As a child from my
Step father, though the
Word father should never
Be mentioned in his name.
Loved your poem....
July 1st, 2017 14:02
Victim of Abuse
burning-embers said:
Ouch ouch ouch! I\'m so glad i read your note after reading your work. Very, very provocative - my anger grew with each line! Excellent!
July 1st, 2017 13:15
burning-embers said:
Ouch ouch ouch! I\'m so glad i read your note after reading your work. Very, very provocative - my anger grew with each line! Excellent!
July 1st, 2017 13:15
Victim of Abuse
ShannonXx said:
This is such a sad poem but written perfectly. I can feel every word!
July 1st, 2017 09:56
ShannonXx said:
This is such a sad poem but written perfectly. I can feel every word!
July 1st, 2017 09:56
Mother Nature
Fay Slimm. said:
Put in a charming nutshell this view of early-morning Sue - great read.
June 30th, 2017 04:02
Fay Slimm. said:
Put in a charming nutshell this view of early-morning Sue - great read.
June 30th, 2017 04:02
Raindrops
sue.evans said:
Thank you fir the feedback- I will check out your poem- thanks😊
June 29th, 2017 09:53
sue.evans said:
Thank you fir the feedback- I will check out your poem- thanks😊
June 29th, 2017 09:53
Raindrops
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL SUE ~ A lovley constructed poem ~ full of rhythm and an intriguing rhyme pattern ! The pitter patter rhythm complements the subject. I love any mention of the Water Cycle ~ driven emotionally by Brother Sun and is the key to life on Planet Earth ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN lease check my CARDINAL POEM ~ Thanks B
June 29th, 2017 07:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
BEAUTIFUL SUE ~ A lovley constructed poem ~ full of rhythm and an intriguing rhyme pattern ! The pitter patter rhythm complements the subject. I love any mention of the Water Cycle ~ driven emotionally by Brother Sun and is the key to life on Planet Earth ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN lease check my CARDINAL POEM ~ Thanks B
June 29th, 2017 07:57
Words
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sweet words of love fall at your feet,great write
June 28th, 2017 23:59
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sweet words of love fall at your feet,great write
June 28th, 2017 23:59
Words
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Sue for so eloquently reminding us of our responsibility. We are word-smiths, and as such we can create something powerful and good (like your poem), or something hurtful and bad.
June 28th, 2017 19:57
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Sue for so eloquently reminding us of our responsibility. We are word-smiths, and as such we can create something powerful and good (like your poem), or something hurtful and bad.
June 28th, 2017 19:57
Words
Poetic Dan said:
Wow! Sang to every part of me that was, is and forever will be.
Thank you sharing
June 28th, 2017 18:01
Poetic Dan said:
Wow! Sang to every part of me that was, is and forever will be.
Thank you sharing
June 28th, 2017 18:01
Words
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SUE for reminding us of the POWER OF WORDS ~ for both Good & Evil !
\"The moving hand doth write ~ and having writ moves on ~ nor all thy Piety nor Wit can lure it back ~ to cancel half a line ~ nor all thy tears wash out a word of it !\"
Being an ex~Headmistress your poem is not only erudite in SUBJECT ~ but also elegant in STRUCTURE and pulsating with Rhyme & Rhythm ~ the twin elements of good readable and recitable POETRY ~ I am a performance POET.
You wont like the true definition of MODERN POETRY ! MODERN ENGLISH POETRY is just a collection of random WORDS ~ any WORDS in any order ! Modern Poetry requires neither RHYME nor RHYTHM or even REASON ! It breaks all Rules of Grammar and approved Spelling. The famous Poem ANARCHY is an excellent example of a POEM with a TITLE but no WORDS ~ like the White on White Painting which once won the Turner Prize like Tracy Ennims unmade bed. there are some excellent examples of MODERN ENGLISH POETRY on MPS !
Please check my DEJA VU POEM ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
June 28th, 2017 17:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SUE for reminding us of the POWER OF WORDS ~ for both Good & Evil !
\"The moving hand doth write ~ and having writ moves on ~ nor all thy Piety nor Wit can lure it back ~ to cancel half a line ~ nor all thy tears wash out a word of it !\"
Being an ex~Headmistress your poem is not only erudite in SUBJECT ~ but also elegant in STRUCTURE and pulsating with Rhyme & Rhythm ~ the twin elements of good readable and recitable POETRY ~ I am a performance POET.
You wont like the true definition of MODERN POETRY ! MODERN ENGLISH POETRY is just a collection of random WORDS ~ any WORDS in any order ! Modern Poetry requires neither RHYME nor RHYTHM or even REASON ! It breaks all Rules of Grammar and approved Spelling. The famous Poem ANARCHY is an excellent example of a POEM with a TITLE but no WORDS ~ like the White on White Painting which once won the Turner Prize like Tracy Ennims unmade bed. there are some excellent examples of MODERN ENGLISH POETRY on MPS !
Please check my DEJA VU POEM ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
June 28th, 2017 17:55
Nature\'s Timepiece - The Garden
sue.evans said:
Ah thank you very much - glad you enjoyed it.
June 28th, 2017 16:48
sue.evans said:
Ah thank you very much - glad you enjoyed it.
June 28th, 2017 16:48
Opus of Love
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t know what kind of competition that was, but I do know that they missed out on something beautiful. Love your last line!
June 27th, 2017 13:04
FredPeyer said:
I don\'t know what kind of competition that was, but I do know that they missed out on something beautiful. Love your last line!
June 27th, 2017 13:04
Opus of Love
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely expression of Creator\'s great gift to man! Unfortunate that in this puritanical society it would offend anyone. Well done, Sue!
June 27th, 2017 10:17
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely expression of Creator\'s great gift to man! Unfortunate that in this puritanical society it would offend anyone. Well done, Sue!
June 27th, 2017 10:17
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