Comments received on poems by sue.evans



Victim of Abuse
burning-embers said:

Ouch ouch ouch! I\'m so glad i read your note after reading your work. Very, very provocative - my anger grew with each line! Excellent!

July 1st, 2017 13:15

Victim of Abuse
sue.evans said:

That was the aim of the language choice ๐Ÿ˜Š

July 1st, 2017 10:38

Victim of Abuse
ShannonXx said:

This is such a sad poem but written perfectly. I can feel every word!

July 1st, 2017 09:56

Victim of Abuse
sue.evans said:

Thank you

July 1st, 2017 08:50

Mother Nature
Louis Gibbs said:

Lovely four-liner, Sue.

June 30th, 2017 09:32

Mother Nature
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write.

June 30th, 2017 08:08

Mother Nature
Fay Slimm. said:

Put in a charming nutshell this view of early-morning Sue - great read.

June 30th, 2017 04:02

Raindrops
sue.evans said:

Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š

June 30th, 2017 00:35

Raindrops
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write.

June 30th, 2017 00:06

Raindrops
sue.evans said:

Thank you fir the feedback- I will check out your poem- thanks๐Ÿ˜Š

June 29th, 2017 09:53

Raindrops
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

BEAUTIFUL SUE ~ A lovley constructed poem ~ full of rhythm and an intriguing rhyme pattern ! The pitter patter rhythm complements the subject. I love any mention of the Water Cycle ~ driven emotionally by Brother Sun and is the key to life on Planet Earth ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN lease check my CARDINAL POEM ~ Thanks B

June 29th, 2017 07:57

Words
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sweet words of love fall at your feet,great write

June 28th, 2017 23:59

Words
FredPeyer said:

Thank you Sue for so eloquently reminding us of our responsibility. We are word-smiths, and as such we can create something powerful and good (like your poem), or something hurtful and bad.

June 28th, 2017 19:57

Words
Poetic Dan said:

Wow! Sang to every part of me that was, is and forever will be.
Thank you sharing


June 28th, 2017 18:01

Words
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SUE for reminding us of the POWER OF WORDS ~ for both Good & Evil !

\"The moving hand doth write ~ and having writ moves on ~ nor all thy Piety nor Wit can lure it back ~ to cancel half a line ~ nor all thy tears wash out a word of it !\"

Being an ex~Headmistress your poem is not only erudite in SUBJECT ~ but also elegant in STRUCTURE and pulsating with Rhyme & Rhythm ~ the twin elements of good readable and recitable POETRY ~ I am a performance POET.

You wont like the true definition of MODERN POETRY ! MODERN ENGLISH POETRY is just a collection of random WORDS ~ any WORDS in any order ! Modern Poetry requires neither RHYME nor RHYTHM or even REASON ! It breaks all Rules of Grammar and approved Spelling. The famous Poem ANARCHY is an excellent example of a POEM with a TITLE but no WORDS ~ like the White on White Painting which once won the Turner Prize like Tracy Ennims unmade bed. there are some excellent examples of MODERN ENGLISH POETRY on MPS !

Please check my DEJA VU POEM ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)

June 28th, 2017 17:55

Words
sue.evans said:

Thank you very much๐Ÿ‘

June 28th, 2017 17:05

Words
sue.evans said:

Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

June 28th, 2017 16:54

Nature\'s Timepiece - The Garden
sue.evans said:

Ah thank you very much - glad you enjoyed it.

June 28th, 2017 16:48

Teardrops
sue.evans said:

Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

June 28th, 2017 16:47

Opus of Love
sue.evans said:

Thank you

June 27th, 2017 13:06

Opus of Love
FredPeyer said:

I don\'t know what kind of competition that was, but I do know that they missed out on something beautiful. Love your last line!

June 27th, 2017 13:04

Opus of Love
sue.evans said:

Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š

June 27th, 2017 12:17

Opus of Love
Louis Gibbs said:

A lovely expression of Creator\'s great gift to man! Unfortunate that in this puritanical society it would offend anyone. Well done, Sue!

June 27th, 2017 10:17

Opus of Love
sue.evans said:

Thank you

June 27th, 2017 08:25

Opus of Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good passionate write.

June 27th, 2017 07:54

Opus of Love
sue.evans said:

Thank you๐Ÿ˜Š

June 27th, 2017 03:45

Every Day Heroes
Heather T said:

These not so ordinary folks are the lights that make the world go round. Life changers. Wonderful tribute to them.

June 26th, 2017 07:47

Every Day Heroes
P.H.Rose said:

Brilliant Sue...loved it

June 26th, 2017 04:28

Every Day Heroes
sue.evans said:

Thank you

June 26th, 2017 04:22

The Victim
Louis Gibbs said:

A fine commentary on an age old problem ... Bullying. Well done, Sue!

June 25th, 2017 09:59

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