Comments received on poems by sue.evans
Relativity - a moral tale!
sue.evans said:
Well like I say it\'s all relative๐
Good luck and enjoy ๐
August 22nd, 2017 13:55
sue.evans said:
Well like I say it\'s all relative๐
Good luck and enjoy ๐
August 22nd, 2017 13:55
Time
Fay Slimm. said:
Living each moment - this wise piece reminds us to make the days count - thanks for posting it Sue.
August 22nd, 2017 10:30
Fay Slimm. said:
Living each moment - this wise piece reminds us to make the days count - thanks for posting it Sue.
August 22nd, 2017 10:30
Lost without you
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words move the depths of my heart Sue - - so sad that dignity is often lost in those who fight the hardest to retain it. A memorable read.
August 22nd, 2017 10:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Your words move the depths of my heart Sue - - so sad that dignity is often lost in those who fight the hardest to retain it. A memorable read.
August 22nd, 2017 10:27
Superstition!
burning-embers said:
I guess that damn song on a childrens TV program got to us all. I do the same, Three for a girl four for a boy, five for silver, six for gold, seven for a secret never to be told. Nice one!
August 20th, 2017 02:36
burning-embers said:
I guess that damn song on a childrens TV program got to us all. I do the same, Three for a girl four for a boy, five for silver, six for gold, seven for a secret never to be told. Nice one!
August 20th, 2017 02:36
Superstition!
Michael Edwards said:
Well my family think I\'m a tad eccentric so not so far removed - and I\'m not at all superstitious - I think of myself as a realist - well I\'m real - just looked in the mirror - oh no its cracked - great stuff Sue
August 20th, 2017 02:11
Michael Edwards said:
Well my family think I\'m a tad eccentric so not so far removed - and I\'m not at all superstitious - I think of myself as a realist - well I\'m real - just looked in the mirror - oh no its cracked - great stuff Sue
August 20th, 2017 02:11
Tedious days!!
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good acrostic. Time has that effect sometimes but when we are doing something we enjoy the time just flies away.
August 20th, 2017 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good acrostic. Time has that effect sometimes but when we are doing something we enjoy the time just flies away.
August 20th, 2017 00:16
Tedious days!!
Nicholas Browning said:
Get out there and frolic about in the world\'s wonders! Or, sit and write poetry. Either one shall do.
August 19th, 2017 11:52
Nicholas Browning said:
Get out there and frolic about in the world\'s wonders! Or, sit and write poetry. Either one shall do.
August 19th, 2017 11:52
Tedious days!!
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry you\'ve had one of these weeks - something which never affects me - in fact quite the opposite - so much I want to achieve and as you get older less time to achieve it in. Just get that pen out Sue. Oh yes it\'s a super poem so you have been doing something LoL
August 19th, 2017 03:35
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry you\'ve had one of these weeks - something which never affects me - in fact quite the opposite - so much I want to achieve and as you get older less time to achieve it in. Just get that pen out Sue. Oh yes it\'s a super poem so you have been doing something LoL
August 19th, 2017 03:35
The shapes of my life!
Goldfinch60 said:
A very good write, our lives can be governed by the different paths we have to tread.
August 19th, 2017 00:07
Goldfinch60 said:
A very good write, our lives can be governed by the different paths we have to tread.
August 19th, 2017 00:07
The shapes of my life!
burning-embers said:
Excellent geometry.... theres one bit you haven\'t mentioned in your lovely piece.... Since divorce i\'ve been flat lining (lol) don\'t go there, i think your geometry is far nicer! Great piece of writing, a pleasure to read, thank you
August 18th, 2017 13:24
burning-embers said:
Excellent geometry.... theres one bit you haven\'t mentioned in your lovely piece.... Since divorce i\'ve been flat lining (lol) don\'t go there, i think your geometry is far nicer! Great piece of writing, a pleasure to read, thank you
August 18th, 2017 13:24
The shapes of my life!
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine geometric description of life\'s journey, Sue. Well done!
August 18th, 2017 12:12
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine geometric description of life\'s journey, Sue. Well done!
August 18th, 2017 12:12
The shapes of my life!
lasergraph said:
I loved it. It is amazing how much we reflect on life as time moves forward. We all feel like a mouse in a maze sometimes as we travel each path.
August 18th, 2017 09:44
lasergraph said:
I loved it. It is amazing how much we reflect on life as time moves forward. We all feel like a mouse in a maze sometimes as we travel each path.
August 18th, 2017 09:44
The shapes of my life!
FredPeyer said:
Sue, your beautiful poem describes domestic life perfectly! Somebody once said that the only difference between a rut and a grave is depth.
Love the geometry metaphors.
All in all, excellent!
August 18th, 2017 03:19
FredPeyer said:
Sue, your beautiful poem describes domestic life perfectly! Somebody once said that the only difference between a rut and a grave is depth.
Love the geometry metaphors.
All in all, excellent!
August 18th, 2017 03:19
Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Time can be a pain sometimes but it is made up of moments and each moment is special, treasure them. Good write.
August 17th, 2017 07:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Time can be a pain sometimes but it is made up of moments and each moment is special, treasure them. Good write.
August 17th, 2017 07:51
Time
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely love \'We are the magicians of our time\', sue. Just great, and a great poem too!
August 17th, 2017 03:26
FredPeyer said:
Absolutely love \'We are the magicians of our time\', sue. Just great, and a great poem too!
August 17th, 2017 03:26
Lost without you
sue.evans said:
Thank you - yes our memories can be very vivid and can offer comfort.
August 17th, 2017 02:24
sue.evans said:
Thank you - yes our memories can be very vivid and can offer comfort.
August 17th, 2017 02:24
Lost without you
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, it can be so hard losing parents but their memory will never fade. I can still visualise my Dad and I talking about music over a glass of wine and he died over twenty years ago.
August 17th, 2017 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, it can be so hard losing parents but their memory will never fade. I can still visualise my Dad and I talking about music over a glass of wine and he died over twenty years ago.
August 17th, 2017 00:13
Lost without you
FredPeyer said:
Sorry for getting emotional, but sue, you so accurately depicted the last days of my mom. I want to read it again in the future and made it a favorite. Thank you!
August 16th, 2017 10:27
FredPeyer said:
Sorry for getting emotional, but sue, you so accurately depicted the last days of my mom. I want to read it again in the future and made it a favorite. Thank you!
August 16th, 2017 10:27
Lost without you
Mello said:
Awesome writing. Just wow dude. Loved this piece.
August 16th, 2017 08:30
Mello said:
Awesome writing. Just wow dude. Loved this piece.
August 16th, 2017 08:30
Depressed - the definition
myself and me said:
Been there and will be there without knowing when. I am OK at the moment. After experience depression, I realize it is such a blessing to wake up with a light heart. Thank you for sharing and nice writing.
August 15th, 2017 22:18
myself and me said:
Been there and will be there without knowing when. I am OK at the moment. After experience depression, I realize it is such a blessing to wake up with a light heart. Thank you for sharing and nice writing.
August 15th, 2017 22:18
Depressed - the definition
FredPeyer said:
Indeed, what\'s the point? Even though I am not and never have been seriously depressed, my wife has been going through some stages of depression a few times (is better now too!), so I do know about it. You captured it perfectly.
btw, will do the same as James. He is right, there are so many poems every day and just not enough time to hunt through them. So I too will ask you to join my circle of friends, which makes it so much easier to find your poems.
August 15th, 2017 17:09
FredPeyer said:
Indeed, what\'s the point? Even though I am not and never have been seriously depressed, my wife has been going through some stages of depression a few times (is better now too!), so I do know about it. You captured it perfectly.
btw, will do the same as James. He is right, there are so many poems every day and just not enough time to hunt through them. So I too will ask you to join my circle of friends, which makes it so much easier to find your poems.
August 15th, 2017 17:09
Black and Blue ( the colours of a grudge)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Grudges should be over almost as soon as they start as they cannot be any use at all.
August 14th, 2017 08:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Grudges should be over almost as soon as they start as they cannot be any use at all.
August 14th, 2017 08:06
Black and Blue ( the colours of a grudge)
Nicholas Browning said:
Nice. The title was interesting.
August 14th, 2017 06:30
Nicholas Browning said:
Nice. The title was interesting.
August 14th, 2017 06:30
Black and Blue ( the colours of a grudge)
sue.evans said:
Thank you- yes life is far too short to hold onto things that make you unhappy ๐
August 14th, 2017 05:28
sue.evans said:
Thank you- yes life is far too short to hold onto things that make you unhappy ๐
August 14th, 2017 05:28
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