Comments received on poems by sue.evans



Relativity - a moral tale!
dusk arising said:

Nicely written and so easily read. You could teach your wisdom to youngsters with this kind of writing. Wise and acccessible

August 23rd, 2017 02:05

Relativity - a moral tale!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, money does not bring happiness, the love of our friends and family is the greatest give we have.

August 23rd, 2017 01:16

Relativity - a moral tale!
Michael Edwards said:

Well written - great message.

August 22nd, 2017 16:20

Relativity - a moral tale!
FredPeyer said:

Beautiful writing, nice rhyming, with a great message.
And while money certainly cannot buy happiness, it is nice to have enough. And that \"enough\" is all relative!

August 22nd, 2017 14:08

Relativity - a moral tale!
Egyptianqt79 said:



August 22nd, 2017 14:02

Relativity - a moral tale!
sue.evans said:

Well like I say it\'s all relative😂
Good luck and enjoy 😊

August 22nd, 2017 13:55

Time
Fay Slimm. said:

Living each moment - this wise piece reminds us to make the days count - thanks for posting it Sue.

August 22nd, 2017 10:30

Lost without you
Fay Slimm. said:

Your words move the depths of my heart Sue - - so sad that dignity is often lost in those who fight the hardest to retain it. A memorable read.

August 22nd, 2017 10:27

Journey
lost-but-not-broken17 said:

Love, love, LOVE!!

August 21st, 2017 18:57

Journey
Accidental Poet said:

Clickerty-clack, clickerty-clack
Excellent write
So welcome back. ; )

August 21st, 2017 18:10

Journey
FredPeyer said:

And your writing continues to be excellent!

August 21st, 2017 16:33

Superstition!
FredPeyer said:

I\'m not superstitious, cross my fingers!

August 21st, 2017 15:26

Superstition!
Candlewitch said:

lol, sue...you have brightened my day!

*hugs, Cat

August 20th, 2017 10:11

Superstition!
burning-embers said:

I guess that damn song on a childrens TV program got to us all. I do the same, Three for a girl four for a boy, five for silver, six for gold, seven for a secret never to be told. Nice one!

August 20th, 2017 02:36

Superstition!
Michael Edwards said:

Well my family think I\'m a tad eccentric so not so far removed - and I\'m not at all superstitious - I think of myself as a realist - well I\'m real - just looked in the mirror - oh no its cracked - great stuff Sue

August 20th, 2017 02:11

Tedious days!!
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good acrostic. Time has that effect sometimes but when we are doing something we enjoy the time just flies away.

August 20th, 2017 00:16

Tedious days!!
Nicholas Browning said:

Get out there and frolic about in the world\'s wonders! Or, sit and write poetry. Either one shall do.

August 19th, 2017 11:52

Tedious days!!
sue.evans said:

😂

August 19th, 2017 05:04

Tedious days!!
Accidental Poet said:

A fine offering of poetry here sue. Taking a walk outside with a camera and pen and note pad as your company.

August 19th, 2017 04:38

Tedious days!!
Michael Edwards said:

Sorry you\'ve had one of these weeks - something which never affects me - in fact quite the opposite - so much I want to achieve and as you get older less time to achieve it in. Just get that pen out Sue. Oh yes it\'s a super poem so you have been doing something LoL

August 19th, 2017 03:35

The shapes of my life!
Goldfinch60 said:

A very good write, our lives can be governed by the different paths we have to tread.

August 19th, 2017 00:07

The shapes of my life!
burning-embers said:

Excellent geometry.... theres one bit you haven\'t mentioned in your lovely piece.... Since divorce i\'ve been flat lining (lol) don\'t go there, i think your geometry is far nicer! Great piece of writing, a pleasure to read, thank you

August 18th, 2017 13:24

The shapes of my life!
Louis Gibbs said:

A fine geometric description of life\'s journey, Sue. Well done!

August 18th, 2017 12:12

The shapes of my life!
lasergraph said:

I loved it. It is amazing how much we reflect on life as time moves forward. We all feel like a mouse in a maze sometimes as we travel each path.

August 18th, 2017 09:44

The shapes of my life!
FredPeyer said:

Sue, your beautiful poem describes domestic life perfectly! Somebody once said that the only difference between a rut and a grave is depth.
Love the geometry metaphors.
All in all, excellent!

August 18th, 2017 03:19

Time
Goldfinch60 said:

Time can be a pain sometimes but it is made up of moments and each moment is special, treasure them. Good write.

August 17th, 2017 07:51

Time
Nicholas Browning said:

Live each day like it\'s your last. Well said.

August 17th, 2017 07:19

Time
FredPeyer said:

Absolutely love \'We are the magicians of our time\', sue. Just great, and a great poem too!

August 17th, 2017 03:26

Lost without you
sue.evans said:

Thank you - yes our memories can be very vivid and can offer comfort.

August 17th, 2017 02:24

Lost without you
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, it can be so hard losing parents but their memory will never fade. I can still visualise my Dad and I talking about music over a glass of wine and he died over twenty years ago.

August 17th, 2017 00:13

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