Comments received on poems by sue.evans



Homeless
Mugsdaddy said:

I was homeless for a while it happened very fast and seemed impossibility slow to fix. So few shelters living off soups and sandwiches whatever you can scrounge not a fun way to live.
Good write just wish it were a true work of fiction.
Mugsdaddy

October 2nd, 2017 17:13

Homeless
Louis Gibbs said:

A finely written stark depiction of an all too common scene, Sue. Well done!

October 2nd, 2017 17:08

Homeless
malubotelho said:

Sue, I love your poem. Sad and real. I don\'t know where you got inspiration to write this but you pictured it so perfect. Congrats on your poem.

October 2nd, 2017 16:40

Autumn (Sedoka)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good sedoka Sue, nature has many guises.

September 11th, 2017 01:09

Drunk!
dusk arising said:

Booze can be like that can\'t it. It\'s enjoyable in small measure but somehow its real easy to overdo it without realising. No body wants the awful result which is a hang-over so that proves the point. I think your piece conveys this very well.

September 10th, 2017 19:53

Autumn (Sedoka)
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s a great form and done full justice here - super stuff Sue

September 10th, 2017 16:54

Autumn (Sedoka)
orchidee said:

Good write Sue.

September 10th, 2017 14:00

Autumn (Sedoka)
Candlewitch said:

a great personification of Mother Nature!

*hugs, Cat

September 10th, 2017 12:53

Drunk!
Mugsdaddy said:

I was a drunk many years ago, I can truly relate to most every line. Excellent work

September 10th, 2017 01:59

Drunk!
Michael Edwards said:

I love the way this is penned Sue- great read.

September 9th, 2017 23:26

Drunk!
lasergraph said:

I was drinking a beer while I reading this, but I wasn\'t drunk.

September 9th, 2017 16:44

Limericks - a bit more practice!!!
myself and me said:

Thank you for giving me a happy weekend.
Well done.

September 8th, 2017 20:49

Limericks - a bit more practice!!!
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 8th, 2017 10:33

Limericks - a bit more practice!!!
Mugsdaddy said:

I know where to go when I need to smile. You work better than saying \"Cheese\"
M

September 8th, 2017 09:33

Limericks - a bit more practice!!!
Christina8 said:

Very good job! These were really cute and made me smile!

September 8th, 2017 08:47

Limericks - a bit more practice!!!
Accidental Poet said:

I\'d say that nut is well cracked. Great write sue. ; )

September 8th, 2017 03:43

A collection of acrostics!
FredPeyer said:

Very cleverly written, sue! I like them a lot!

September 7th, 2017 19:33

A collection of acrostics!
myself and me said:

You did them so well.
\"Addiction is a condition!\" I agree.

September 7th, 2017 13:05

A collection of acrostics!
Michael Edwards said:

Great writes Sue - love them. Must try myself - it\'s a long time since I did my last one.

September 7th, 2017 11:31

A collection of acrostics!
Candlewitch said:

dear sue,

acrostics designed to make a person think, good work! but what have you done to your face/avatar??? LOL!

*hugs, Cat

September 7th, 2017 11:04

A collection of acrostics!
lasergraph said:

Sometimes even sounds we like become noise if we are concentrating on something else. I like it.

September 7th, 2017 08:28

A collection of acrostics!
orchidee said:

A fine write Sue.

September 7th, 2017 08:10

Awakening
myself and me said:

When I read this, I try to hold my breath, so that I wouldn\'t disturb the quiet beauty here.
So wonderful.

September 6th, 2017 18:37

Awakening
FredPeyer said:

Sue, you tried to capture that early morning stillness...well, you succeeded admirably!
Actually, you more than succeeded, you created a work of art.

September 6th, 2017 10:45

Awakening
orchidee said:

Good old Dawn! She appears every day. She\'s very old know, you know - probably!

September 6th, 2017 08:48

Awakening
Fay Slimm. said:

A first class expression of gifts a quiet morning can bring Sue - a favourite with me for sure,.

September 6th, 2017 05:00

😂My Thought Shower😂
myself and me said:

\"The word shower has been much fun
I believe my work here is now done!\"
On the opposite, your work just start.
I could save this shower for tomorrow morning.


September 5th, 2017 21:40

😂My Thought Shower😂
WriteBeLight said:

I feel so refreshed! Very clever and great work!

September 5th, 2017 15:49

😂My Thought Shower😂
BlueDays said:

Awesome, this is fun. I liked the bomp a dee bomp rhythm and rhyming 😃

September 5th, 2017 15:16

😂My Thought Shower😂
Simple-Man87 said:

Oh, I loved this. Very well done.

September 5th, 2017 14:24

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