Comments received on poems by sue.evans
Fountains Abbey
orchidee said:
A fine write Sue. We\'ve an Abbey ruins near our town centre too. Not as much of it left as this one. Ours dates from 1121. It\'s thought Henry I is buried there (Reading, Berkshire).
October 4th, 2017 08:25
orchidee said:
A fine write Sue. We\'ve an Abbey ruins near our town centre too. Not as much of it left as this one. Ours dates from 1121. It\'s thought Henry I is buried there (Reading, Berkshire).
October 4th, 2017 08:25
Homeless
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write about an increasing problem in our towns and cities.
October 3rd, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write about an increasing problem in our towns and cities.
October 3rd, 2017 01:30
Homeless
FredPeyer said:
Sue, this is so well written, I could feel the anguish, loneliness and fear. It is a real problem here too. Too many people are only one paycheck away from having to live on the streets. So good of you to address this sad state of affairs with your poem.
October 2nd, 2017 17:45
FredPeyer said:
Sue, this is so well written, I could feel the anguish, loneliness and fear. It is a real problem here too. Too many people are only one paycheck away from having to live on the streets. So good of you to address this sad state of affairs with your poem.
October 2nd, 2017 17:45
Homeless
Mugsdaddy said:
I was homeless for a while it happened very fast and seemed impossibility slow to fix. So few shelters living off soups and sandwiches whatever you can scrounge not a fun way to live.
Good write just wish it were a true work of fiction.
Mugsdaddy
October 2nd, 2017 17:13
Mugsdaddy said:
I was homeless for a while it happened very fast and seemed impossibility slow to fix. So few shelters living off soups and sandwiches whatever you can scrounge not a fun way to live.
Good write just wish it were a true work of fiction.
Mugsdaddy
October 2nd, 2017 17:13
Homeless
Louis Gibbs said:
A finely written stark depiction of an all too common scene, Sue. Well done!
October 2nd, 2017 17:08
Louis Gibbs said:
A finely written stark depiction of an all too common scene, Sue. Well done!
October 2nd, 2017 17:08
Homeless
malubotelho said:
Sue, I love your poem. Sad and real. I don\'t know where you got inspiration to write this but you pictured it so perfect. Congrats on your poem.
October 2nd, 2017 16:40
malubotelho said:
Sue, I love your poem. Sad and real. I don\'t know where you got inspiration to write this but you pictured it so perfect. Congrats on your poem.
October 2nd, 2017 16:40
Autumn (Sedoka)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good sedoka Sue, nature has many guises.
September 11th, 2017 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good sedoka Sue, nature has many guises.
September 11th, 2017 01:09
Drunk!
dusk arising said:
Booze can be like that can\'t it. It\'s enjoyable in small measure but somehow its real easy to overdo it without realising. No body wants the awful result which is a hang-over so that proves the point. I think your piece conveys this very well.
September 10th, 2017 19:53
dusk arising said:
Booze can be like that can\'t it. It\'s enjoyable in small measure but somehow its real easy to overdo it without realising. No body wants the awful result which is a hang-over so that proves the point. I think your piece conveys this very well.
September 10th, 2017 19:53
Autumn (Sedoka)
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s a great form and done full justice here - super stuff Sue
September 10th, 2017 16:54
Michael Edwards said:
It\'s a great form and done full justice here - super stuff Sue
September 10th, 2017 16:54
Drunk!
Mugsdaddy said:
I was a drunk many years ago, I can truly relate to most every line. Excellent work
September 10th, 2017 01:59
Mugsdaddy said:
I was a drunk many years ago, I can truly relate to most every line. Excellent work
September 10th, 2017 01:59
Drunk!
Michael Edwards said:
I love the way this is penned Sue- great read.
September 9th, 2017 23:26
Michael Edwards said:
I love the way this is penned Sue- great read.
September 9th, 2017 23:26
Drunk!
lasergraph said:
I was drinking a beer while I reading this, but I wasn\'t drunk.
September 9th, 2017 16:44
lasergraph said:
I was drinking a beer while I reading this, but I wasn\'t drunk.
September 9th, 2017 16:44
Limericks - a bit more practice!!!
myself and me said:
Thank you for giving me a happy weekend.
Well done.
September 8th, 2017 20:49
myself and me said:
Thank you for giving me a happy weekend.
Well done.
September 8th, 2017 20:49
Limericks - a bit more practice!!!
Mugsdaddy said:
I know where to go when I need to smile. You work better than saying \"Cheese\"
M
September 8th, 2017 09:33
Mugsdaddy said:
I know where to go when I need to smile. You work better than saying \"Cheese\"
M
September 8th, 2017 09:33
Limericks - a bit more practice!!!
Christina8 said:
Very good job! These were really cute and made me smile!
September 8th, 2017 08:47
Christina8 said:
Very good job! These were really cute and made me smile!
September 8th, 2017 08:47
Limericks - a bit more practice!!!
Accidental Poet said:
I\'d say that nut is well cracked. Great write sue. ; )
September 8th, 2017 03:43
Accidental Poet said:
I\'d say that nut is well cracked. Great write sue. ; )
September 8th, 2017 03:43
A collection of acrostics!
FredPeyer said:
Very cleverly written, sue! I like them a lot!
September 7th, 2017 19:33
FredPeyer said:
Very cleverly written, sue! I like them a lot!
September 7th, 2017 19:33
A collection of acrostics!
myself and me said:
You did them so well.
\"Addiction is a condition!\" I agree.
September 7th, 2017 13:05
myself and me said:
You did them so well.
\"Addiction is a condition!\" I agree.
September 7th, 2017 13:05
A collection of acrostics!
Michael Edwards said:
Great writes Sue - love them. Must try myself - it\'s a long time since I did my last one.
September 7th, 2017 11:31
Michael Edwards said:
Great writes Sue - love them. Must try myself - it\'s a long time since I did my last one.
September 7th, 2017 11:31
A collection of acrostics!
lasergraph said:
Sometimes even sounds we like become noise if we are concentrating on something else. I like it.
September 7th, 2017 08:28
lasergraph said:
Sometimes even sounds we like become noise if we are concentrating on something else. I like it.
September 7th, 2017 08:28
Awakening
myself and me said:
When I read this, I try to hold my breath, so that I wouldn\'t disturb the quiet beauty here.
So wonderful.
September 6th, 2017 18:37
myself and me said:
When I read this, I try to hold my breath, so that I wouldn\'t disturb the quiet beauty here.
So wonderful.
September 6th, 2017 18:37
Awakening
FredPeyer said:
Sue, you tried to capture that early morning stillness...well, you succeeded admirably!
Actually, you more than succeeded, you created a work of art.
September 6th, 2017 10:45
FredPeyer said:
Sue, you tried to capture that early morning stillness...well, you succeeded admirably!
Actually, you more than succeeded, you created a work of art.
September 6th, 2017 10:45
Awakening
orchidee said:
Good old Dawn! She appears every day. She\'s very old know, you know - probably!
September 6th, 2017 08:48
orchidee said:
Good old Dawn! She appears every day. She\'s very old know, you know - probably!
September 6th, 2017 08:48
Awakening
Fay Slimm. said:
A first class expression of gifts a quiet morning can bring Sue - a favourite with me for sure,.
September 6th, 2017 05:00
Fay Slimm. said:
A first class expression of gifts a quiet morning can bring Sue - a favourite with me for sure,.
September 6th, 2017 05:00
😂My Thought Shower😂
myself and me said:
\"The word shower has been much fun
I believe my work here is now done!\"
On the opposite, your work just start.
I could save this shower for tomorrow morning.
September 5th, 2017 21:40
myself and me said:
\"The word shower has been much fun
I believe my work here is now done!\"
On the opposite, your work just start.
I could save this shower for tomorrow morning.
September 5th, 2017 21:40
😂My Thought Shower😂
WriteBeLight said:
I feel so refreshed! Very clever and great work!
September 5th, 2017 15:49
WriteBeLight said:
I feel so refreshed! Very clever and great work!
September 5th, 2017 15:49
😂My Thought Shower😂
BlueDays said:
Awesome, this is fun. I liked the bomp a dee bomp rhythm and rhyming 😃
September 5th, 2017 15:16
BlueDays said:
Awesome, this is fun. I liked the bomp a dee bomp rhythm and rhyming 😃
September 5th, 2017 15:16
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