Comments received on poems by sue.evans



A late summer\'s evening - a potent spell!
FredPeyer said:

Sue, I am floored, or maybe I should have said I am bbq\'d. This is a beautifully rhymed poem about one of summer\'s most enjoyable past-times: family bbqs. Great job!

August 27th, 2017 02:43

A late summer\'s evening - a potent spell!
Michael Edwards said:

Some write Sue and we also went to a barbecue at my daughters last night - well actually all afternoon into evening - all the family gathered - yes memories are made of events like this .

August 27th, 2017 01:36

A late summer\'s evening - a potent spell!
orchidee said:

A fine write Sue. Yet we don\'t know what weather we will get. A couple of years ago it went to 90F at the end of September in a freak mini-heatwave!

August 27th, 2017 01:27

Celebrate 🎉
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Sue.
Cheers.

August 27th, 2017 00:47

Celebrate 🎉
myself and me said:

Yes. That\'s why we party here everyday, to celebrate our good and bad, happy and sad, up and down.
40 congratulations from me.

August 26th, 2017 20:46

Celebrate 🎉
dusk arising said:

Raise a glass indeed (hic!) one for every poet (hic!). Nice words. But who\'s counting.... each days a challenge to write for and look at the next big number coming your way. 50 now THATS a biggy . I bet you\'re going to find yourself saving up something outrageous for that one. Your work is a pleasure to read.

August 26th, 2017 12:41

Celebrate 🎉
Michael Edwards said:

Congrats - years more to go to write and bake - here\'s to the future. love the write

August 26th, 2017 04:40

Celebrate 🎉
FredPeyer said:

Congratulations, Sue!
Now I would like to see your very own 40th poem celebration cake!

August 26th, 2017 03:58

True Love!
myself and me said:

I think it is furry. Hahaha.
Funny piece, that make my weekend.
Thank you.

August 25th, 2017 21:43

True Love!
FredPeyer said:

I read your comment first, so knew when I started to read the poem that most likely you were not talking about another human being. Thought of maybe a cat, or dog. When I got to the glassy eyes I knew it had to be an inanimate object, unless of course it was somebody totally drunk. Did not figure on a teddy bear though, so the surprise stayed intact.
Great poem!

August 25th, 2017 12:25

True Love!
dusk arising said:

Quite quite delicious. Superbly, lovingly written.

August 25th, 2017 09:15

True Love!
lasergraph said:

I loved it. I liked the ending. Made it all fun.

August 25th, 2017 07:55

True Love!
Goldfinch60 said:

Certainly not what I thought.

August 25th, 2017 07:44

All in the mix!
sue.evans said:

Think you have to give commitment to anything worth doing- it shows in the end result. Thanks for reading and commenting. 😊

August 25th, 2017 02:25

All in the mix!
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Sue. I especially like the line \"Add a little commitment and care\" I cook and I too add commitment and love to my cooking.

August 25th, 2017 00:45

All in the mix!
ron parrish aka wordman said:

beautiful thoughts

August 24th, 2017 20:52

All in the mix!
dusk arising said:

Last time i read a piece about a cake i was at a wedding and it ended in tiers. (old joke - sorry) Nice writing, esp the last verse.

August 24th, 2017 19:28

All in the mix!
myself and me said:

You are not baking a cake, you are baking a new world. You must have a giant flour mix.

The cake is absolutely gorgeous. In stead eating it, I would rather display it.

Love the poem, love the cake more.


August 24th, 2017 18:58

All in the mix!
Accidental Poet said:

I like how you relate the baking a cake idea to life and friendships. All ingredients added with care and love. ; )

August 24th, 2017 18:41

All in the mix!
FredPeyer said:

Thank you so much Sue! Now I finally know where the expression \"one in the oven\" to describe a pregnant woman comes from. We are all baked! :-)

Beautiful cake by the way. As is the other one with the shoe and handbag! Are you doing this professionally? They do look it!!!

August 24th, 2017 18:22

All in the mix!
sue.evans said:

Thanks for reading and commenting - I know verse 3 is rose tinted spectacles but we have to hope! I will check out your poems 😊

August 24th, 2017 15:17

All in the mix!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SUE for another Special Poem and Perfect Picture. My MUM was a Confectioner so always baking and decorating cakes ~ she taught me to cook & bake ~ useful when you\'re single ! From ingredients to cake is a perfect example of the maxim \"The whole is always much greater than the sum of the parts\" Verses 1 & 2 illustrate that maxim perfectly ! Verse three then applies it to Society ~ IF ONLY ! Society is so so divided today and now we have to break away from Europe and even the UK is in danger of fragmentation if Nicola has her way ! Under TRUMP America is in danger of disintegrating and the proud cry of EX PLURIBUS UNAM is now an even greater Myth ! At least you succeed with your beautiful cakes ! A very beautifully confectured poem Rhyme ~ Rhythm ~ Octets ~ Super Subject all blended into a perfect ODE ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my PYRAMID POEM and FUSIONS on pastimes and games ~ Thanks B.

August 24th, 2017 15:14

Where has summer gone?
myself and me said:

Who upset this summer and make it cry? Let me know, I will kick his/her ass.

Please forgive my language. Lovely poem.

August 23rd, 2017 15:40

Where has summer gone?
WL Schuett said:

Well done made me smile

August 23rd, 2017 14:16

Where has summer gone?
lasergraph said:

I can identify with this. August has been cooler and much wetter than normal here where it is usually not the case. It rang so true for me.

August 23rd, 2017 13:08

Where has summer gone?
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 23rd, 2017 11:20

Where has summer gone?
FredPeyer said:

Nice little poem, sue! I really feel for you (and all you UK people). Don\'t want to brag, but I cannot complain :-)

August 23rd, 2017 10:02

Where has summer gone?
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write but I am one of those people who do not feel the cold so I am more amenable without the high temperatures.

August 23rd, 2017 08:04

Where has summer gone?
Fay Slimm. said:

This sums up the August fiasco so well Sue - - let us hope September in the U.K. behaves itself better.

August 23rd, 2017 05:59

Where has summer gone?
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s sure been a bit miserable I must admit although we had a great June - love the little poem .

August 23rd, 2017 05:51

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