Comments received on poems by onepauly



onward
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Oh, I see. Double entendre, but still a great message given by your father.

November 18th, 2018 12:13

visit
orchidee said:

A good write Pauly.

November 17th, 2018 12:42

visit
Michael Edwards said:

Sitting here with my first freshly brewed coffee of the day -
good write.

November 17th, 2018 02:06

onward
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Words to live by and the Lord, I feel certain, would be proud of the fact you have placed Him above all others. :-)

November 15th, 2018 17:04

onward
orchidee said:

A good write Pauly.

November 15th, 2018 02:44

onward
Michael Edwards said:

Don\'t need to understand it - it\'s the overall message in life - be positive and always keep your glass half full. There is life and hope in tomorrow and thereafter. Super write.

November 15th, 2018 02:13

evolution
w c said:

Very nice, onepauly. I have many fond memories of the ocean.

November 13th, 2018 15:53

evolution
Goldfinch60 said:

That sparkling light will always show us the way.

November 13th, 2018 08:58

evolution
orchidee said:

Good write Pauly.

November 13th, 2018 07:18

forbearing
Goldfinch60 said:

Good positive write.

October 8th, 2018 00:52

forbearing
kevin browne said:

We\'ll work it out tomorrow then???

October 7th, 2018 14:51

forbearing
Christina8 said:

I like your write, some very wise thoughts here!

October 7th, 2018 13:05

forbearing
Michael Edwards said:

Enjoyable read with great promise in the concluding line.

October 7th, 2018 02:53

forbearing
orchidee said:

A fine write pauly.

October 7th, 2018 01:13

brethren
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write, we each have our own ways but we are always better when we come together in agreement.

September 19th, 2018 07:57

brethren
Michael Edwards said:

We are all the same yet different - not sure I can get my head round this - errr....!

September 19th, 2018 06:19

brethren
Nicholas Browning said:

Hahhhhh, you got me there good fellow, yes you did.
Okay. Let\'s talk about it.
Yes. You\'re right. We are all the same. I can\'t deny it. Human nature can be compared to color. Blue is in many ways different from pink, but it is still a color. So yeah, you\'re right.
And I see what you did there, don\'t think I don\'t. It is indeed true that people will try their best to say that a certain demographic is responsible for this, or that: But we all play a vital part in the song.

In the end, It\'s true.
We\'re all lonely people looking for insight.
Whether it\'s pink,
Or sky blue.

Nice one sir. Pulled a fast one on us.

September 19th, 2018 05:20

brethren
kevin browne said:

You hit the nail perfectly with your wording of this poem. Don\'t give up on the loneliness of life because if you search deep enough the fruits of togetherness will bring us back together, Good write, onepauly.

September 19th, 2018 05:13

brethren
orchidee said:

A fine write Pauly.

September 19th, 2018 03:18

preponderance
Michael Edwards said:

One of the dilemmas we face as we grow older - fine work.

September 18th, 2018 15:26

preponderance
Unsub said:

1Paul,

enjoyed the tempo & structure of this sad emotional piece.

Unsub.

September 18th, 2018 10:05

preponderance
Fay Slimm. said:

A well rhymed lament on the loss of old friends - it goes with the flow of life to its end Pauly - - thanks for sharing it.

September 18th, 2018 04:38

preponderance
Goldfinch60 said:

Those old friends will still be with you as you remember them through your life.

September 18th, 2018 03:22

Grace?
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Grace is naturally beautiful; I get it. My wife is in the beauty business - I think she would be able to relate to the sentiment constructed here.

September 15th, 2018 13:58

Grace?
Goldfinch60 said:

At one place where I worked one of my female colleagues, wore a great deal of makeup. One day she came in with no makeup on - we didn\'t recognise her.
(she was a very nice lady though.)

September 14th, 2018 01:06

Grace?
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Nice poem! onepauly
🙂

September 13th, 2018 16:57

Grace?
kevin browne said:

I will indeed, sir onepualy. Pauly rules dude!!


September 13th, 2018 16:24

toying
w c said:

Free to experience the future is good. Very nice poem

September 9th, 2018 21:38

toying
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Great write! onepauly
🙂

September 9th, 2018 20:15

toying
Michael Edwards said:

We sometimes fail to appreciate how lucky we are to be free. - good write.

September 9th, 2018 02:26

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