Comments received on poems by onepauly
communication
FredPeyer said:
\"The greater concepts of goodness and light\"...you write so well!
Enjoyed it, and btw I don\'t want to be left behind either!!!
July 9th, 2017 15:03
FredPeyer said:
\"The greater concepts of goodness and light\"...you write so well!
Enjoyed it, and btw I don\'t want to be left behind either!!!
July 9th, 2017 15:03
communication
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks OP ~ Praise GOD he is still on the THRONE and the PHONE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 10:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks OP ~ Praise GOD he is still on the THRONE and the PHONE ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN
July 9th, 2017 10:11
friends
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Well written, I followed the flow of your words and it led me to the end before I even knew it. Good poem about finding the inspiration to write. Tyfs!
July 8th, 2017 21:07
Cyprian Van Dyke said:
Well written, I followed the flow of your words and it led me to the end before I even knew it. Good poem about finding the inspiration to write. Tyfs!
July 8th, 2017 21:07
friends
malubotelho said:
Thank you. Another nice one. Is it still raining? I nice and inspiring rain to be Cozy inside.
July 8th, 2017 14:50
malubotelho said:
Thank you. Another nice one. Is it still raining? I nice and inspiring rain to be Cozy inside.
July 8th, 2017 14:50
friends
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Paul, it\'s good to have you as a friend. This forum is starting to feel like a home away from home, thanks to you and all the other poets here.
Happy flowing!!!
July 8th, 2017 12:58
FredPeyer said:
Thanks Paul, it\'s good to have you as a friend. This forum is starting to feel like a home away from home, thanks to you and all the other poets here.
Happy flowing!!!
July 8th, 2017 12:58
step to step
malubotelho said:
You overcome yourself everyone you write. Each day is getting better. I\'m glad I can read you.
July 7th, 2017 20:52
malubotelho said:
You overcome yourself everyone you write. Each day is getting better. I\'m glad I can read you.
July 7th, 2017 20:52
step to step
FredPeyer said:
Just a little rhythm you say? I would say you got a whole lot of rhythm in this delightful poem of yours.
July 7th, 2017 15:16
FredPeyer said:
Just a little rhythm you say? I would say you got a whole lot of rhythm in this delightful poem of yours.
July 7th, 2017 15:16
house of words
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, it is always amazing how lost you can get in a book.
July 7th, 2017 02:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, it is always amazing how lost you can get in a book.
July 7th, 2017 02:15
house of words
FredPeyer said:
Never thought of writing a poem about a library visit, but you pulled it off admirably!
July 6th, 2017 21:10
FredPeyer said:
Never thought of writing a poem about a library visit, but you pulled it off admirably!
July 6th, 2017 21:10
outdoors
malubotelho said:
I really like your poem. So sweet talking about nature. I today was outside cleaning the roses from the weed and because I was not doing much work there the weds were tall and a snake was there. I try to respect them but not be afraid. She left as soon as I got closer. They still gives me some chill though.
July 5th, 2017 21:52
malubotelho said:
I really like your poem. So sweet talking about nature. I today was outside cleaning the roses from the weed and because I was not doing much work there the weds were tall and a snake was there. I try to respect them but not be afraid. She left as soon as I got closer. They still gives me some chill though.
July 5th, 2017 21:52
outdoors
FredPeyer said:
Paul, only you could make night fishing that exciting! Now try writing about ice fishing!
July 5th, 2017 20:29
FredPeyer said:
Paul, only you could make night fishing that exciting! Now try writing about ice fishing!
July 5th, 2017 20:29
outdoors
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you for paying respect to the food.
Really enjoyed that, made me miss fishing days for a bit.
July 5th, 2017 15:16
Poetic Dan said:
Thank you for paying respect to the food.
Really enjoyed that, made me miss fishing days for a bit.
July 5th, 2017 15:16
being fit
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. May your well being be forever with you.
July 5th, 2017 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. May your well being be forever with you.
July 5th, 2017 01:15
being fit
FredPeyer said:
As a \"senior\" who feels quite a bit younger inside, your poem really speaks to me. We have to be grateful for every day we can function without pain, without grunts, and without the sound of the ambulance!
Love your poem!
July 4th, 2017 20:42
FredPeyer said:
As a \"senior\" who feels quite a bit younger inside, your poem really speaks to me. We have to be grateful for every day we can function without pain, without grunts, and without the sound of the ambulance!
Love your poem!
July 4th, 2017 20:42
being fit
malubotelho said:
I love you poem. A nice thing when you realize how grateful one can be. It is a sensation of tranquility.
July 4th, 2017 20:26
malubotelho said:
I love you poem. A nice thing when you realize how grateful one can be. It is a sensation of tranquility.
July 4th, 2017 20:26
just dreams
kevin browne said:
maybe we should write some comedy for poetry. it can become a downer reading too many sad stories so thumbs up for this one onepauly.
July 3rd, 2017 23:46
kevin browne said:
maybe we should write some comedy for poetry. it can become a downer reading too many sad stories so thumbs up for this one onepauly.
July 3rd, 2017 23:46
just dreams
FredPeyer said:
You did it again. Had a big smile when reading it. It\'s amazing how many words you could rhyme with \"flows\".
Just the kind of poem I needed today!
July 3rd, 2017 21:28
FredPeyer said:
You did it again. Had a big smile when reading it. It\'s amazing how many words you could rhyme with \"flows\".
Just the kind of poem I needed today!
July 3rd, 2017 21:28
salvation
Goldfinch60 said:
Pleasant things WILL come to pass. Good positive write.
July 3rd, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Pleasant things WILL come to pass. Good positive write.
July 3rd, 2017 01:30
salvation
FredPeyer said:
Paul, a very emotionally charged poem. I do like it, well written. In your last line are you using \"mass\" instead of \"masses\"? Is your meaning at the end of the poem that we should follow our own light and not fall in with the others? At least that\'s how I understood it.
July 2nd, 2017 23:01
FredPeyer said:
Paul, a very emotionally charged poem. I do like it, well written. In your last line are you using \"mass\" instead of \"masses\"? Is your meaning at the end of the poem that we should follow our own light and not fall in with the others? At least that\'s how I understood it.
July 2nd, 2017 23:01
no pain
malubotelho said:
Thanks for your poem Paul. Enjoyed reading it very much.
July 1st, 2017 20:23
malubotelho said:
Thanks for your poem Paul. Enjoyed reading it very much.
July 1st, 2017 20:23
no pain
FredPeyer said:
Paul, I think we all can learn from this poem, both writing and content. This is an eloquent reminder to do everything we can to help the less fortunate.
July 1st, 2017 19:42
FredPeyer said:
Paul, I think we all can learn from this poem, both writing and content. This is an eloquent reminder to do everything we can to help the less fortunate.
July 1st, 2017 19:42
no pain
kevin browne said:
and keep doing so mt dedicated friend. thoughts are always with and comforting the pain.
July 1st, 2017 18:43
kevin browne said:
and keep doing so mt dedicated friend. thoughts are always with and comforting the pain.
July 1st, 2017 18:43
desperate
malubotelho said:
A nice flashback and I\'m happy that you are better now.
June 30th, 2017 22:16
malubotelho said:
A nice flashback and I\'m happy that you are better now.
June 30th, 2017 22:16
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