Comments received on poems by onepauly
chant
Michael Edwards said:
I fuggled with gingling this fortid written and found it to be quite umbly bitten.
July 30th, 2017 23:34
Michael Edwards said:
I fuggled with gingling this fortid written and found it to be quite umbly bitten.
July 30th, 2017 23:34
chant
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I just wrote one under the same title a few weeks ago...Coincidence?
July 30th, 2017 22:57
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I just wrote one under the same title a few weeks ago...Coincidence?
July 30th, 2017 22:57
chant
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes it\'s ok to just ramble on and on about nonsense. Sort of a reset button for the funny bone, yes?
July 30th, 2017 20:51
Accidental Poet said:
Sometimes it\'s ok to just ramble on and on about nonsense. Sort of a reset button for the funny bone, yes?
July 30th, 2017 20:51
chant
kevin browne said:
I have here a new and awaiting straight jacket fitting for the insane. is it true, you know the saying. they say madness is a close friend to someone who writes such poems. gagagoo.
July 30th, 2017 20:27
kevin browne said:
I have here a new and awaiting straight jacket fitting for the insane. is it true, you know the saying. they say madness is a close friend to someone who writes such poems. gagagoo.
July 30th, 2017 20:27
ahoy!
Goldfinch60 said:
The light is always there glad you found it before the darkness of the sea closed over you. Good write.
July 30th, 2017 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The light is always there glad you found it before the darkness of the sea closed over you. Good write.
July 30th, 2017 01:26
ahoy!
FredPeyer said:
One heck of a way to wake up! You described that relieved feeling of waking up from a nightmare perfectly!
July 29th, 2017 12:43
FredPeyer said:
One heck of a way to wake up! You described that relieved feeling of waking up from a nightmare perfectly!
July 29th, 2017 12:43
ahoy!
kevin browne said:
get ya life jackets at the ready onepauly. looks like you\'re having a nightmare.
July 29th, 2017 11:38
kevin browne said:
get ya life jackets at the ready onepauly. looks like you\'re having a nightmare.
July 29th, 2017 11:38
insight
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Pauly,
I am not a psychic, far from it, can never find anything, but I do believe that some people have the gift. Like the expression \'dual democracies\'!
July 28th, 2017 18:41
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Pauly,
I am not a psychic, far from it, can never find anything, but I do believe that some people have the gift. Like the expression \'dual democracies\'!
July 28th, 2017 18:41
our forum
malubotelho said:
Wow Pauly. You nailed it. Such an awesome poem. Like you said; if one wants to do a better job writing, one need to perfect it. You did it. Thank you.
July 27th, 2017 14:41
malubotelho said:
Wow Pauly. You nailed it. Such an awesome poem. Like you said; if one wants to do a better job writing, one need to perfect it. You did it. Thank you.
July 27th, 2017 14:41
our forum
Louis Gibbs said:
It is truly a new, connected world with these brilliant devices all seem to carry and communicate with. Where it might lead and impact our reality will be fascinating to watch. I enjoyed this fine poem, onepauly!
July 27th, 2017 07:58
Louis Gibbs said:
It is truly a new, connected world with these brilliant devices all seem to carry and communicate with. Where it might lead and impact our reality will be fascinating to watch. I enjoyed this fine poem, onepauly!
July 27th, 2017 07:58
our forum
Fay Slimm. said:
A triumph of rhyme contained in this tribute to forum and what it achieves. Good reflections here Paul.
July 27th, 2017 06:24
Fay Slimm. said:
A triumph of rhyme contained in this tribute to forum and what it achieves. Good reflections here Paul.
July 27th, 2017 06:24
our forum
kevin browne said:
\'and to place that cause into effect\' means that you have to keep writing and never give up. when is the next poem ready?
July 27th, 2017 05:14
kevin browne said:
\'and to place that cause into effect\' means that you have to keep writing and never give up. when is the next poem ready?
July 27th, 2017 05:14
our forum
kevin browne said:
\'and to place that cause into effect\' means that you have to keep writing and never give up. when is the next poem ready?
July 27th, 2017 05:14
kevin browne said:
\'and to place that cause into effect\' means that you have to keep writing and never give up. when is the next poem ready?
July 27th, 2017 05:14
time
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, music is always there that can find something that \'could not be bought\'
July 27th, 2017 03:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, music is always there that can find something that \'could not be bought\'
July 27th, 2017 03:15
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WL Schuett said:
Nicely written Paul we are about the same age I can relate
July 26th, 2017 21:56
WL Schuett said:
Nicely written Paul we are about the same age I can relate
July 26th, 2017 21:56
time
malubotelho said:
Hey Pauly, another good one. Did you started the book yet?
July 26th, 2017 20:23
malubotelho said:
Hey Pauly, another good one. Did you started the book yet?
July 26th, 2017 20:23
time
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nothing wrong with a good LAUGH in public....Fuck what they were thinking....TELL ME YOU DONT GIVE A RIP>>>People are BORING....NEVER HOLD BACK YOUR ANYTHING!
July 26th, 2017 19:44
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nothing wrong with a good LAUGH in public....Fuck what they were thinking....TELL ME YOU DONT GIVE A RIP>>>People are BORING....NEVER HOLD BACK YOUR ANYTHING!
July 26th, 2017 19:44
better places
malubotelho said:
Great writing Pauly. Beautifuly put together. Lovely reading. Thanks for sharing
July 25th, 2017 12:30
malubotelho said:
Great writing Pauly. Beautifuly put together. Lovely reading. Thanks for sharing
July 25th, 2017 12:30
better places
FredPeyer said:
After reading your answer to Kevin, I now understand your poem better. Love that last sentence.
July 25th, 2017 12:20
FredPeyer said:
After reading your answer to Kevin, I now understand your poem better. Love that last sentence.
July 25th, 2017 12:20
better places
kevin browne said:
onepauly, we sacrifice most things in life for immaterial issues and I despise that thought. if ever you get lonely pop down to Somerset and we can get lonely together my friend because I am very lonely also. keep ya spirits high and then get back reading some of my poetry if it helps you in the way you say it does. I really appreciate that. it warms my heart that you have fallen for my work.
July 25th, 2017 07:09
kevin browne said:
onepauly, we sacrifice most things in life for immaterial issues and I despise that thought. if ever you get lonely pop down to Somerset and we can get lonely together my friend because I am very lonely also. keep ya spirits high and then get back reading some of my poetry if it helps you in the way you say it does. I really appreciate that. it warms my heart that you have fallen for my work.
July 25th, 2017 07:09
better places
kevin browne said:
I tried it once and failed miserly but I do get your poem and I do believe its as close to getting married as you can be. a cool write onepauly.
July 25th, 2017 05:10
kevin browne said:
I tried it once and failed miserly but I do get your poem and I do believe its as close to getting married as you can be. a cool write onepauly.
July 25th, 2017 05:10
being me
FredPeyer said:
Like the concept, the rhyming, the conclusion. It made me think. Great work Pauly.
July 24th, 2017 11:46
FredPeyer said:
Like the concept, the rhyming, the conclusion. It made me think. Great work Pauly.
July 24th, 2017 11:46
being me
charlesbarrett said:
Nice piece, Pauly. I loved the rhyming and the sentiments beind it. Learning never ceases. I love how you included creativity into the process of learning. Thanks for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 07:27
charlesbarrett said:
Nice piece, Pauly. I loved the rhyming and the sentiments beind it. Learning never ceases. I love how you included creativity into the process of learning. Thanks for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 07:27
being me
Renzi said:
Nicely worded. We never stop learning. It\'s truely crazyy!!
July 24th, 2017 05:02
Renzi said:
Nicely worded. We never stop learning. It\'s truely crazyy!!
July 24th, 2017 05:02
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