Comments received on poems by onepauly
chant
Michael Edwards said:
I fuggled with gingling this fortid written and found it to be quite umbly bitten.
July 30th, 2017 23:34
Michael Edwards said:
I fuggled with gingling this fortid written and found it to be quite umbly bitten.
July 30th, 2017 23:34
chant
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I just wrote one under the same title a few weeks ago...Coincidence?
July 30th, 2017 22:57
Gary Edward Geraci said:
I just wrote one under the same title a few weeks ago...Coincidence?
July 30th, 2017 22:57
chant
kevin browne said:
I have here a new and awaiting straight jacket fitting for the insane. is it true, you know the saying. they say madness is a close friend to someone who writes such poems. gagagoo.
July 30th, 2017 20:27
kevin browne said:
I have here a new and awaiting straight jacket fitting for the insane. is it true, you know the saying. they say madness is a close friend to someone who writes such poems. gagagoo.
July 30th, 2017 20:27
ahoy!
Goldfinch60 said:
The light is always there glad you found it before the darkness of the sea closed over you. Good write.
July 30th, 2017 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
The light is always there glad you found it before the darkness of the sea closed over you. Good write.
July 30th, 2017 01:26
ahoy!
FredPeyer said:
One heck of a way to wake up! You described that relieved feeling of waking up from a nightmare perfectly!
July 29th, 2017 12:43
FredPeyer said:
One heck of a way to wake up! You described that relieved feeling of waking up from a nightmare perfectly!
July 29th, 2017 12:43
ahoy!
kevin browne said:
get ya life jackets at the ready onepauly. looks like you\'re having a nightmare.
July 29th, 2017 11:38
kevin browne said:
get ya life jackets at the ready onepauly. looks like you\'re having a nightmare.
July 29th, 2017 11:38
insight
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Pauly,
I am not a psychic, far from it, can never find anything, but I do believe that some people have the gift. Like the expression \'dual democracies\'!
July 28th, 2017 18:41
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Pauly,
I am not a psychic, far from it, can never find anything, but I do believe that some people have the gift. Like the expression \'dual democracies\'!
July 28th, 2017 18:41
our forum
malubotelho said:
Wow Pauly. You nailed it. Such an awesome poem. Like you said; if one wants to do a better job writing, one need to perfect it. You did it. Thank you.
July 27th, 2017 14:41
malubotelho said:
Wow Pauly. You nailed it. Such an awesome poem. Like you said; if one wants to do a better job writing, one need to perfect it. You did it. Thank you.
July 27th, 2017 14:41
our forum
Louis Gibbs said:
It is truly a new, connected world with these brilliant devices all seem to carry and communicate with. Where it might lead and impact our reality will be fascinating to watch. I enjoyed this fine poem, onepauly!
July 27th, 2017 07:58
Louis Gibbs said:
It is truly a new, connected world with these brilliant devices all seem to carry and communicate with. Where it might lead and impact our reality will be fascinating to watch. I enjoyed this fine poem, onepauly!
July 27th, 2017 07:58
our forum
Fay Slimm. said:
A triumph of rhyme contained in this tribute to forum and what it achieves. Good reflections here Paul.
July 27th, 2017 06:24
Fay Slimm. said:
A triumph of rhyme contained in this tribute to forum and what it achieves. Good reflections here Paul.
July 27th, 2017 06:24
our forum
kevin browne said:
\'and to place that cause into effect\' means that you have to keep writing and never give up. when is the next poem ready?
July 27th, 2017 05:14
kevin browne said:
\'and to place that cause into effect\' means that you have to keep writing and never give up. when is the next poem ready?
July 27th, 2017 05:14
our forum
kevin browne said:
\'and to place that cause into effect\' means that you have to keep writing and never give up. when is the next poem ready?
July 27th, 2017 05:14
kevin browne said:
\'and to place that cause into effect\' means that you have to keep writing and never give up. when is the next poem ready?
July 27th, 2017 05:14
time
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, music is always there that can find something that \'could not be bought\'
July 27th, 2017 03:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, music is always there that can find something that \'could not be bought\'
July 27th, 2017 03:15
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WL Schuett said:
Nicely written Paul we are about the same age I can relate
July 26th, 2017 21:56
WL Schuett said:
Nicely written Paul we are about the same age I can relate
July 26th, 2017 21:56
time
malubotelho said:
Hey Pauly, another good one. Did you started the book yet?
July 26th, 2017 20:23
malubotelho said:
Hey Pauly, another good one. Did you started the book yet?
July 26th, 2017 20:23
time
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nothing wrong with a good LAUGH in public....Fuck what they were thinking....TELL ME YOU DONT GIVE A RIP>>>People are BORING....NEVER HOLD BACK YOUR ANYTHING!
July 26th, 2017 19:44
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nothing wrong with a good LAUGH in public....Fuck what they were thinking....TELL ME YOU DONT GIVE A RIP>>>People are BORING....NEVER HOLD BACK YOUR ANYTHING!
July 26th, 2017 19:44
better places
malubotelho said:
Great writing Pauly. Beautifuly put together. Lovely reading. Thanks for sharing
July 25th, 2017 12:30
malubotelho said:
Great writing Pauly. Beautifuly put together. Lovely reading. Thanks for sharing
July 25th, 2017 12:30
better places
FredPeyer said:
After reading your answer to Kevin, I now understand your poem better. Love that last sentence.
July 25th, 2017 12:20
FredPeyer said:
After reading your answer to Kevin, I now understand your poem better. Love that last sentence.
July 25th, 2017 12:20
better places
kevin browne said:
onepauly, we sacrifice most things in life for immaterial issues and I despise that thought. if ever you get lonely pop down to Somerset and we can get lonely together my friend because I am very lonely also. keep ya spirits high and then get back reading some of my poetry if it helps you in the way you say it does. I really appreciate that. it warms my heart that you have fallen for my work.
July 25th, 2017 07:09
kevin browne said:
onepauly, we sacrifice most things in life for immaterial issues and I despise that thought. if ever you get lonely pop down to Somerset and we can get lonely together my friend because I am very lonely also. keep ya spirits high and then get back reading some of my poetry if it helps you in the way you say it does. I really appreciate that. it warms my heart that you have fallen for my work.
July 25th, 2017 07:09
better places
kevin browne said:
I tried it once and failed miserly but I do get your poem and I do believe its as close to getting married as you can be. a cool write onepauly.
July 25th, 2017 05:10
kevin browne said:
I tried it once and failed miserly but I do get your poem and I do believe its as close to getting married as you can be. a cool write onepauly.
July 25th, 2017 05:10
being me
FredPeyer said:
Like the concept, the rhyming, the conclusion. It made me think. Great work Pauly.
July 24th, 2017 11:46
FredPeyer said:
Like the concept, the rhyming, the conclusion. It made me think. Great work Pauly.
July 24th, 2017 11:46
being me
charlesbarrett said:
Nice piece, Pauly. I loved the rhyming and the sentiments beind it. Learning never ceases. I love how you included creativity into the process of learning. Thanks for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 07:27
charlesbarrett said:
Nice piece, Pauly. I loved the rhyming and the sentiments beind it. Learning never ceases. I love how you included creativity into the process of learning. Thanks for sharing.
July 24th, 2017 07:27
being me
Renzi said:
Nicely worded. We never stop learning. It\'s truely crazyy!!
July 24th, 2017 05:02
Renzi said:
Nicely worded. We never stop learning. It\'s truely crazyy!!
July 24th, 2017 05:02
mirror talk
kevin browne said:
unwind yourself by writing like you have here. there is a special certain thing in poetry and it\'s called releasing thoughts onto paper. keep writing my friend because we all hear you and you are never far away from the beauty of having good people listen to you and help you along your worrying ways. this one took me in.
July 23rd, 2017 15:49
kevin browne said:
unwind yourself by writing like you have here. there is a special certain thing in poetry and it\'s called releasing thoughts onto paper. keep writing my friend because we all hear you and you are never far away from the beauty of having good people listen to you and help you along your worrying ways. this one took me in.
July 23rd, 2017 15:49
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