Comments received on poems by onepauly



mirror talk
kevin browne said:

unwind yourself by writing like you have here. there is a special certain thing in poetry and it\'s called releasing thoughts onto paper. keep writing my friend because we all hear you and you are never far away from the beauty of having good people listen to you and help you along your worrying ways. this one took me in.

July 23rd, 2017 15:49

mirror talk
FredPeyer said:

Pauly, you are now officially authorized to relax and you will not be prosecuted.

July 23rd, 2017 15:01

LITE
malubotelho said:

Yes, I want to find the enlightment on a linear endeavor. I\'m looking for it all my life. To get enlightment one really needs an alinement without any thoughts to interfere. Very simple thing. Thank you Pauly

July 22nd, 2017 19:19

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FredPeyer said:

A perfect example of something simple that is not simple. Linear endeavor has been achieved admirably.

July 22nd, 2017 14:57

LITE
onepauly said:

just something to write on a Saturday morning

July 22nd, 2017 08:08

LITE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS OP ~ for a very lively Love Poem to brighten Saturday morning ! Love the message and the rhyme & rhythm ~ nice to read ~ nice to recite ~ BRIAN

July 22nd, 2017 02:16

voices
malubotelho said:

When you say: who turned out the light, you mean the light outside, or the light inside? Good morning Pauly.

July 21st, 2017 08:03

voices
FredPeyer said:

\'who turned out the light\", or better yet, who did not turn it on yet? I am a very slow starter in the morning and need my coffee just to start the day.

July 21st, 2017 05:00

voices
Goldfinch60 said:

Those early morning hours can be so inspiring.

July 21st, 2017 03:52

exspand
Goldfinch60 said:

What we know and what we need to know seem to be at the opposite ends of our thought processes. Good write.

July 21st, 2017 00:40

exspand
FredPeyer said:

Pauly, well written! \"Give me what I need to know\".....Input, Input, Input. We do need it to expand, but there is also TMI (too much information).

July 20th, 2017 18:10

exspand
malubotelho said:

I need to find the bar today even though is just Thursday. Need to drink some cognac to clean my allergies. Nice writing Pauly. Thanks for one more.

July 20th, 2017 14:14

exspand
Poetic Dan said:

Fantastic \" ourselves as we truly are and with that there is no bar\"
Love it, to infinity and beyond!!

July 20th, 2017 12:55

focus
malubotelho said:

Another day, another beautiful writing. Thanks

July 19th, 2017 23:14

focus
FredPeyer said:

\'looking into the heart of things\'
isn\'t that what we do here?
Great poem!

July 19th, 2017 12:11

focus
Goldfinch60 said:

Good though provoking write.

July 19th, 2017 08:21

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Fay Slimm. said:

Love the sentiment and the rhythm in this verse Paul - - good feel to the read.

July 19th, 2017 05:21

lofty
kevin browne said:

very often we are pulled down by the under current of our lives. normally we pop back up and start all over and remember your not on your own.

July 18th, 2017 20:15

lofty
Heather T said:

But you stay afloat and here you are! Something about night puts us in reflective moods.

July 18th, 2017 19:01

lofty
malubotelho said:

You are really good Pauly. Keep the flow coming. Don\'t let it sink.

July 18th, 2017 12:03

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FredPeyer said:

Don\'t know why, but your excellent poem conjured up a dream-like feeling. As usual, Pauly, good work!

July 18th, 2017 10:00

lofty
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. May your ship sail on forever.

July 18th, 2017 07:58

time off
FredPeyer said:

And what a fine way to express: Just relax!

July 17th, 2017 18:59

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks Friend for sharing a HAPPY POEM ~ when so so many people in the World are unhappy ! You painted a perfect carefree picture and in my MIND ~ I was there. The WORLD will never end if all days are like that ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN

July 17th, 2017 14:43

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malubotelho said:

I like your sweet way of putting your words together. Enjoy so much reading you. Thanks

July 17th, 2017 10:00

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malubotelho said:

This is the best one ever. You are shining your light throughout your brain. Awesome.

July 16th, 2017 15:59

time off
onepauly said:

right where they grow it.
south America. one thing I\'ve been wanting to \"say\" call it uk instead of England. sorry. you could have told me. but I figured it out. do you like tea instead of coffee. I drank a lot of tea when I was a kid. my mother used to tell our future by reading tea leaves. of course we had to drink it first. ha! ha! soon

July 16th, 2017 06:48

time off
kevin browne said:

nice one onepauly. I\'d love to have a coffee with you. keen coffee write right here,

July 16th, 2017 03:00

time off
Goldfinch60 said:

May your coffee give you the pleasure and relaxation after a days work, it always seems to do the trick.

July 16th, 2017 02:57

good
Goldfinch60 said:

very good and very positive write,

July 16th, 2017 01:38

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